💞what's the most important part of a story for you? the plot, the characters, the worldbuilding, the technical stuff (grammar etc), the figurative language
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KILI!!
sdfhsdoihsdf, I JUST ANSWERED THIS INDEPTH!
I EVEN MENTIONED OUR FAVORITE DWARVES!
Anyway, I won't go into a FULL explanation like I did before, but characterization is the most important factor for me in a story. If you don't have characters who you actually care about, nothing else really matters.
How many romance novels have we dissed because the characters are just so...bad? You can't root for them if you don't care if they live beyond the next page or not.
But, if you want my full blown answer on this, you can check out this answer.
And don't worry, I literally posted it probably around the same time you sent the ask...so I will let it slide this time.
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A lot of us with ADHD are familiar with the concept of time blindness, but for anyone who isn't: it's a neurological inability to have a consistent sense of the passage of time. If you put me in an empty room, gave me a button and told me to press it when I think it's been 15 minutes, I might press it after..... idk, anywhere between 3 minutes and 2 hours? And if we repeated it the next day the result would probably be wildly different!
But something I've only seen mentioned in one (1) Reddit post, which took some extensive digging to find, is the same effect extending to ALL things measured in numbers. Distance, weight, length, height, amount, space, volume, percentage... For me, small numbers are a bit easier, I could approximate a centimetre probably, but a metre would be much harder and 10 or 100 would likely miss the mark by a lot. Also, anything that can't be easily measured with a ruler or a measuring tape (like weight or volume) is even harder since I don't encounter reference points (like a 1kg hand weight) for those as frequently as I see visual representations of specific lengths.
It's not dyscalculia or anything like that, I'm decent at math (and the OP of the Reddit post was a math major) and I have no other difficulties with numbers, it's just a disconnect in translating real life experiences like sensory input into numbers (and possibly also inconsistent processing of sensory input? Like how the same sound volume is okay one day but hurts my ears the next?), which I think is basically the same thing as what happens with time blindness. For now I've been calling it "measurement blindness" since I've never seen a name for it anywhere, but maybe "quantity blindness" could also work?
I've talked to other people with time blindness to see if they experience this too, but so far none of them have known what I'm talking about. I'd really like to know how many of us are out there and if anyone knows literally anything actually scientific about this very inconvenient phenomenon!
Tl;dr: bc I am wordy:
It's like time blindness but for all things measured in numbers
Not dyscalculia or caused by it
Pretty much never seen it talked about anywhere
Please tell me if it sounds familiar and/or you know something about it, thank
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That viral post that's going around about how people who write "book quality" mlm fic are too "normal" to publish and have real jobs so only "weird" people publish their "shitty" fanfic is so completely out of touch with reality and I am giving a massive side eye to everyone reblogging it.
Not only is it completely, easily verifiably untrue (you cannot enter any professional writing space without tripping over a dozen grizzled scifi writers who got their start by filing off the serial numbers and publishing their Star Trek fanfic even going back decades ago??? it's a whole thing?? plus how can you look at the mlm category on Amazon right now and say with a straight face that people aren't publishing shitty Spirk and Stucky fanfic??? Oh, honey...) it's also the perfect example of this kind of sneering elitism that true artists would never sully themselves by seeking profit, they do it only for the purity of the thing that always somehow leads back to, "no one should be paid to make art, actually."
The only reason you're seeing more published fanfic right now has nothing to do with the idealistic purity of your hypothetical government employee written smut of the past vs the debased scribbles of those awful straights of today and everything to do with the fact that a) self-publishing has created a voracious readership that wants a ton of content so it's become a viable, flexible income stream for many, especially disabled people b) anyone can publish now with self-publishing tools so there are less gatekeepers and c) lockdown got a lot of people into fandom and therefore writing who never tried it before.
And if you really think there's no "shitty" published mlm and no "book-quality" m/f writing out there that started as fanfic, then you are clearly not a reader so why are you even talking about this?
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💞what's the most important part of a story for you? the plot, the characters, the worldbuilding, the technical stuff (grammar etc), the figurative language
Hi I love your blog and your writing is chef kiss 😘👌, I love how you wrote the characters and how you set the scene you always make me scream XD Other than that I hope your doing ok 💗
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Thank you for your kind words! I strive to create stories that tell gripping stories and characters who pull you in. When you scream at scenes, I hope that you don't wake anyone up! Not that I have done that...cough...
For your ask, the most important part of a story are the characters. You can have a scene that is full of drama and action, life and death situations, and make things really great...but if you care nothing for the characters, what use is all that other work?
Take Lord of the Rings for example (the movies), we watched all those characters through three movies and we rooted for them, cheered them on, cried for them. In Helm's Deep, we cared about the main characters.
When Haldir dies...well, I didn't feel too close to that character, but I felt the anguish of Aragorn losing a friend. I felt the loss of someone who had expected to live for much longer than that battle, who had expected to sail to the undying lands.
Then you have the Hobbit movies--hard stop, I understand the issues that Peter Jackson went through with the movie, and for the shit show he was given, he did a decent job, especially when he was thrown into the thick of it, shooting had started and he had no script.
Fili and Kili were my favorite characters before the movie, so when they became the "hot dwarves" (let's face it, Thorin was a looker for a Dwarf, too), I knew what would happen to them. I cried for them in the books. I lamented their sacrifice and the fact that they were the only ones besides Thorin who perished.
I really did not give a damn about their deaths in the movies. At all. The jailbird love scene? Cringe. If I could have disappeared into my seat at the theater, I would have. The movies played too much on action sequences, fighting, romance, and not enough on actual character building.
So, after a VERY convoluted answer, my point is, without characters you fall in love with, cheer for, hate, and many other emotions, the whole story just falls flat.
Thank you for the ask, and I hope you enjoy the other stories I post!
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HELLOOOO!!!!💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 Michael's birthday is February 22?!?!?! It's my birthday too OMGGGGGGGG 😭😭😭😭 I love you, Michael, I can't wait to continue accompanying you on this vn, thanks to the team and of course to the creator 💜🍄
Omg I'm sorry for the confusion but Feb 22nd is Mushroom Oasis' birthday! Mychael's meta-birthday (the date I started designing him based on this gamejam timeline) is Feb 15th!
But no worries, you could honestly say Mushroom Oasis is a birthday gift to you haha! 🎂 So quick clarification:
Mychael's birthday: Feb 15!
Mushroom Oasis' anniversary: Feb 22!
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How would Starlo's family react to this new monster kid that is a cross between a fox, bird, and whatever Starlo is? Cause I'm just saying, Clover does share his tail, side head things, and yellow spots with Starlo, so it's safe to assume that Clover related to Starlo, from their perspective at least.
Or do they already know about the whole situation?
Either way, I'm imagining Starlo's parents looking at Clover and thinking "this is probably the closest we'll get to grandkids" and just start doting him.
IM SO GLAD U ASKED ABOUT THEM BC I WAS THINKING HOW SWEET THEY WOULD BE!!!! and then i got to draw it >:]
they are so smitten with clover after they get introduced by starlo. they kind of met with clover in the underground and after starlo told them all what happened, they respected clover a lot and saw the change they made to ceroba and star. so once theyre back they’re like welp. new grandchild!
orion (i think thats his name?) is like the older cousin u have that just thinks the younger kids are cringe. he cares but does not show it at all. crestina is NOT letting starlo say anything bad to clover. solomon big fun grandpa :]
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