What's wrong with lesson 16 (everything)
A list by yours truly, who is about to collapse if she doesn't vent about it (TW: opinion lmao)
⍣ ೋ The time-travel shit
LITERALLY WHY
It creates so many problems and plot holes that could easily be avoided for no reason.
We leave everyone behind and it's never even addressed?? THEY'RE WAITING FOR US???
Barbatos, supposedly the one that cares about balance and timelines, just goes "well you're stuck here and I literally erased the other MC, good ending :D"
He told her "don't run into anyone" and she decides FIRST THING to head where all the noise is coming from, not trying to hide at all
⍣ ೋ No consequences whatsoever
It's awesome to know no one cared about MC dying
Sure, she's "alive" now, but everyone moved on so quickly??? Even Mammon, who was in the verge of a meltdown.
And it's all because we're Lilith's descendant how convenient
Even Belphie, our murderer who has hated humans for MILLENNIA, had a major switch up at this
Also, the brothers begin to completely disregard MC by treating her like Lilith
Look I understand, it's your dead sister and you miss her, BUT MC IS NOT HER. SHE IS HER OWN GODDAMN PERSON
But the worst part is... MC IS SO DAMN CHILL ABOUT IT
Even if she technically isn't the one who died, you'd expect some kind of uneasiness coming from her, SPECIALLY AROUND BELPHIE
Words can't express how much I hate it
⍣ ೋ Solution
I'm gonna make the devs a favor and fix their game
REVIVAL
MC JUST REVIVES FOR WHATEVER REASON (Lilith's will, the last remnants of her powers, Barbatos' precautions...)
Now you don't have to worry about too many plot holes, focusing on just one timeline
Also this allows her to remember her death, making her trauma more intense and veridical
I know it sounds crazy but if they could pull off lesson 16, they can pull this off
Make the brothers indecisive
They got their little brother back, but at what cost?
Everything is fine now, right? But it's not. MC is not "fine"
Make them conflicted between taking MC's side and comforting her but also welcoming Belphie and make up
MAKE MC UNCOMFORTABLE
I can't stress enough how important this part is
Give her TIME to evolve, develop as a character, and understand her feelings
She wouldn't want to be around Belphie, at all
She might not even wanna be around the others, seeing as they treat her like nothing happened
Make her upset, confused, feel like she doesn't belong, ANYTHING
MAKE HER GO THROUGH THE STAGES OF GRIEF
In fact, if you want to make her relationship with Belphie nourish, you can do that too by not just hey lol I killed you but I'm good now
Make her have nightmares
That's it
Make Belphie notice the dark circles under her eyes and the way she avoids him, then discover she has nightmares
The "now" Belphie could feel guilty
He might try to comfort her, only for her to shy away in response
Seeing as his apologies don't work this early into the trauma, he could enter her dreams and chase those nightmares away, every night, sacrificing his own sleep
THAT is a dynamic I want to see, personally
This could have been done with or without the time-travel, btw
In the time-travel, though, I was also missing some grieving from MC
Remember when I said to make the brothers conflicted? Make MC suffer more too
She wants to go back to her time, her universe, her family. They're waiting for her
But she also doesn't want to leave behind these demons, which have just found peace and happiness after a long time
Here's the catch, No matter what she chooses, she's forced to live her life regretting whatever decision she makes, since she can't make everyone happy and one side must suffer inevitably
An MC going through a heavy trauma and eventually (and slowly) overcoming it would just click with so many players
⍣ ೋ Conclusion
To me, the game didn't fully explore the feelings that going through that experience would bring for everyone, even if the idea itself was interesting. No, more like it didn't WANT to. Making MC go through all that would mean a lot of character development for a big amount of characters and little romance, which is what the game is about.
However, if you can't make that sacrifice, don't settle your game in a world rich in lore. And honestly, with all the explanations and back stories, I don't think obey me! is lacking on that. More so that, even if they were fully capable, they didn't want to go through all the trouble. Remember we're coming from an already fucked up scenario that took a lot of chapters.
Finally, this is just my opinion based on my experience. Of course, you don't have to agree with me in any way.
I have to say, that was relaxing lmaoo
Anyways, since I really like this idea and I've seen several people do it, I'm gonna make my own fanfic exploring how I think lesson 16 would have turned out realistically, hope you stay tuned!
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💚🎙️Hunted🎙️💚
~Reader x Human!Alastor🪓
Part 1 𖦹 Part 2 𖦹 Part 3 𖦹 Part 4 𖦹 Part 5
Summary: Alastor waits for you to return... But after a while he begins to feel... Urges. Ones he must get out.
Warnings/Promises: 16+, slow burn, abusive relationship, alcohol, physical and sexual abuse, murder, suggested noncon, forced pregnancy, miscarriage/abortion.
It's another week before you show back up again. Alastor had expected you to stay away a while, but he was beginning to feel worried, and he didn't like it. It made him feel weak. If you were gone for much longer he had decided he would come find you instead. But luckily for you, that same day you reappeared.
That might, Mimzy gives Alastor a look and he turns towards the door a little too quickly, seeing you standing there, an ashamed look on your face. He looks at you with a mixture of surprise and concern, crossing the bar quickly and taking your hands in his. "My dear, are you alright?" He asks, his voice soft and comforting.
You look up at him, surprised yourself. "You're not angry with me?" You ask quietly.
"Angry?" He laughs, a gentle and sincere sound. "Why would I be angry with you? You did nothing wrong."
"I ran off and didn't come back for a week after yelling at you..." You say, the shame returning.
He squeezes your hands and raises them to his lips, placing a gentle kiss on each. "I understand," he says kindly. "You were upset. I'm only glad you have returned."
You blush and pull your hands back, tightening your shawl around your shoulders. Alastor watches you with concern in his eyes, but keeps his distance. He doesn't want to make you uncomfortable. Instead, he offers you his arm gently after a moment of silence. "Come, let's sit and talk." He says softly.
You take his arm and as Alastor leads you to your regular booth; helping you sit before taking his own seat across from you. He smiles warmly and leans forward, resting his forearms on the table.
"So tell me, what made you return?"
"You were right, and I'm sorry," you say with a slight tremble in your voice.
He raises an eyebrow, surprised by your apology. "I'm surprised to hear you say that," he admits, his voice remaining kind and calm despite his surprise. "But I'll admit, it's nice to hear." He gives you a gentle smile, hoping to reassure you. "And would it be presumptuous of me to assume the reason you're wearing the shawl again...?"
You take a deep breath before lowering the shawl and exposing your arms. The bruises there are the same as last time, only more yellow now, older. Alastor's expression darkens as he notices them. He curses himself silently for not being there when you needed him, but that's not what truly catches his attention. Once your shawl is off he realizes you're also wearing a scarf. Carefully, he reaches over and gently touches the scarf around your neck.
"May I?" He asks quietly, seeking permission to remove it.
You take a moment, chewing on your lip before nodding.
He takes a calculated breath before carefully removing the scarf, exposing new bruises on your neck. His eyes narrow as he takes in the sight, and a deep, burning anger rises up inside of him.
"It's not as bad as it looks," You begin to say, but he interrupts you.
"Don't lie to me, and don't make excuses for him," he growls, his voice laced with anger. "No one is allowed to hurt you like this." He takes your hand in his, giving it a gentle squeeze. "These look like handprints. Did he strangle you? Did he do this to you?"
You look down at the table and nod, sadly, an ashamed look on your face.
"Don't be ashamed," he says softly, raising your chin so that he can meet your gaze. "You didn't do anything wrong. You don't deserve this. And I swear, that man will pay for laying his hands on you." He said in a low, threatening tone.
"No!" You say quickly, gripping his arm.
He looks down at your hands on him, surprised at your reaction. He sees the desperation and fear in your eyes, and the anger inside him begins to fade a little. "Why shouldn't I? Any man who would do this to you, doesn't deserve to live."
"I never told you who my husband is, did I...?" You ask quietly.
He raises an eyebrow, a feeling of realization washing over him. "No... I don't believe you have," he says slowly. "but I don't need to be told his name to know that he is a monster." He grips your hand, giving it a reassuring squeeze.
"Richard Tully. Of the sugar barons. he's... untouchable. If you tried to go against him he... he could ruin you, your career. I couldn't let you do that for me." You say in a quiet voice. "Not for my sake.”
His expression falls at the mention of Richard's name. He knows all too well the type of power the man holds. "You think I am unaware of what I would be up against?" he says, almost bitterly. "But it would be worth it, if it protected you."
"Please. Even my own family has tried. He has family in the police force. There's... there's nothing to be done. They won't stop him." You look utterly defeated.
He listens intently, his anger turning into concern for you. "This... this is why I hate men like him. They use their power and influence to crush those who are weaker than them." He pulls you into a hug, trying to offer comfort. "You should just divorce him."
At first, you sink into the hug, your calm returning, if a little shocked he's touching you so intimately tonight. Outside of dancing he'd never touched you more than with just his hands and even then it was only ever in explicitly appropriate places. But when you hear him mention divorce, your anxiety spikes again.
"Divorce?" You ask, pulling back and looking up at him.
He looks down at you, his eyes warm and full of concern. "Yes. Why not? You don't deserve to be treated like this." He reaches up to brush a loose strand of hair out of your face. "If you need help..."
"I'd need more than help," you say, astonished. "I'm thirty. How do you expect a thirty year old, divorced woman to survive? I couldn't work, I can't have a bank account. I don't think I can even own land." You begin to spiral a little.
He listens to you patiently, letting you get all your worries out. "Well, you could stay with me," he says softly, as if he's just realized he's going to propose something rather drastic. “I have the room.”
You stop, looking up at him with wide eyes. "Alastor..." You say in a quiet but serious voice. "Are... are you asking me to divorce my husband and... live with you?"
You see him hesitating for a moment, but then he steadies himself. "Well, I can't just stand here and watch you being beaten," he says. "You deserve a life with someone who loves and cares for you, and that someone could be me." He takes a deep breath again.
"You... care for me?" You ask.
He looks down at you, his expression serious as he speaks slowly. "I care about you more than I'd ever thought possible. I've never been in love before, but with you... It's easy to envision myself spending the rest of my life with you by my side," he says.
"But Mimzy said you weren't interested in girls." You say, and it's like a knife to the back.
His expression hardens. "Mimzy speaks out of turn," he says coolly and clearly annoyed. "She has her own interests at heart, and not always my needs or feelings." He pauses for a moment. "But when I say I think I could love you, it's the truth."
Tears begin to well in your eyes. He extends his hand cautiously, ready to wipe them away.
"Why are you crying?" he asks, a hint of concern in his voice. Alastor might be charming and handsome, but he isn't exactly the emotional type.
"I... I think I feel... hopeful? For the first time in my life," you answer with a small laugh despite the tears still flowing.
He lets out a sigh of relief when he realizes they are not ones of sadness, but of joy. Alastor smiles softly at you before stepping closer to wrap an arm around your shoulder. "You deserve all the happiness in this world," he says, giving you a gentle squeeze.
You smile and you believe him. "Then... I will. I'll leave," you say with an excited smile. "It might take a few days to gather my things, what little things I'd want to take with me, but I'll tell him the minute I'm ready to walk out the door and... and I'll meet you here.”
His smile only grows wider at your words. "I'll be waiting," he says softly before leaning in closer to place a gentle kiss on your cheek, leaving a blush as receipt. "Go and take care of yourself, I'll see you soon." And with that, he watches you move to leave, a hopeful look in your eyes.
Three months pass with no word.
Alastor stands under the same street lamp, watching the wind blow the leaves around. He had been waiting for you, his heart filled with the hope that you would come, but three months had passed and still, he had no word from you. He sighs and draws his coat tightly around him.
Mimzy walks out of the bar with a sullen look on her face. "Dearie, it's almost sun up. I gotta close. She's not coming today," the woman says in a sweet voice. Their relationship was typically full of jest and jabs at one another, but lately she couldn't bring herself to be mean, even if playfully so.
Alastor turns and approaches her, his smile forced as he sees the disappointment in her eyes.
"One has to keep the hope alive." He uses his key to lock the front door before walking towards the city instead of the direction of his home within the woods.
"Going hunting tonight while you still have time?" Mimzy asks.
Alastor stops but doesn't turn, his gaze focused on the path ahead. "Still a few hours before daybreak," he finally says, "Thought I could blow off some steam."
"Well, I heard there's some hoodlums what been snatching purses over by rainwood Blvd. maybe start there."
Alastor's eyes narrow, and he turns to fully face her. "Sounds as though they deserve a fitting punishment." The hint of a smile touches his lips, revealing he is warming up to your suggestion. He had always been dark, but now it seems to be more... malicious.
"Just be careful out there, I'm not doing your radio show for you." With that quiz, Mimzy walks to her car to leave.
Alastor chuckles and nods at her quip. "I will ensure I don't get hurt, even if it means breaking a few bones." The smile drops from his face as he watches her drive away.
Alastor stalks the streets of New Orleans like the predator he is, eyes sharp for prey. He blends in with the night, dressed in an all brown suit that makes him almost invisible against the brick walls. He slips into buildings and alleys, his ears sharp and eyes keener than a regular human's. It is not long before he spots a group of young men sneaking up on a woman. The men corner her, one snags her bag and sprinting off while the other grabs her and pins her to the alley wall.
Anger flares in Alastor as the young man's hand covers the woman's mouth, stifling her whimpers. With measured steps, he emerges from the shadows, eyes fixed on the two assailants.
"Is this how you treat a lady?"
The man screams as Alastor brings the back end of an axe down into his head, knocking him out cold. When he comes to, he has taken him back to his home in the woods, chained to a table in his large backyard shed.
Alastor's eyes gleam manically in the dim light as he locks the door of his shed behind him, confirming the man's wrists and ankles are shackled securely. He then approaches him with his axe, pressing it against his throat.
"Please!" the man begs, shaking. "Please!"
Alastor laughs, a chilling sound that sends icy shivers down the man's spine. "Oh, I do love a bit of begging." He leans closer to the trembling man, axe still pressed to his skin. "It excites me."
The shed is silent except for the fearful whimpers of the man and the clanging of chains. The room echoes with the sounds. Satisfied with the terror he has instilled. Alastor scrutinizes him a moment before setting the axe aside and retrieving a bag nearby. "It's time to teach you a little lesson about human decency."
"No, no please..." he begs, pulling at his restraints.
Alastor's eyes flash ominously as the man struggles against his restraints, futile attempts that only serve to heighten Alastor's amusement. "Ah, such a pitiful sight." He cackles wickedly, pulling several tools from the bag, each more menacing than the last. "But I think it's time to silence you."
Alastor leaves his job at the radio station and heads for the bar. It's a gloomy, rainy night, the lights already on in the street. As he approaches the doors, he sees the shambling form of a woman walking into the alley beside the establishment. He follows her slowly, the blood rushing through his veins, his instincts sharpening, his hunting instinct suddenly activated.
As he gets closer the figure turns and he can see it more clearly. The woman is wearing a nightgown, it looks as though it used to be blue, though it's now stained a deep red over the majority of her abdomen. But that's not what sends a dagger into his heart. As he steps closer he sees that the woman is you, stumbling forward and reaching out for him before tripping.
Alastor's whole body freezes. He rushes to your side, trying to hold you up. Blood splatters on his shirt as he embraces you, but he doesn't care. Fear fills his expression.
"What... what happened to you?"
You look up at him with a weak smile. "Alastor...? I found you..."
"Who did this to you?" Alastor's heart races. He cradles your head in his hands, trying to search for the source of the blood as you seem to be growing paler by the second. A deep rage flares up inside of him as he sees just how grave a condition you're in.
You look down at yourself and back up to him. "Not... not all mine..."
You see the disgust, rage and confusion in Alastor's eyes. Something dark forms in his heart, fueled by his overwhelming desire to protect you and the need for revenge. "Whose?" He demands, more determined than ever to hunt down the monster who did this. "And you say not all? So some is?"
You reach down to your abdomen and Alastor's hands tremble as he recognizes a stab wound there. He knows how much pain you must be in, but he also sees the sheer will in your eyes. Holding you gently, he looks into your eyes.
"We need to get you to a hospital."
"No!" You cry out loudly, clutching desperately at his shirt.
Alastor recoils at your outburst. He looks deep into your eyes, trying to understand just why you would refuse medical treatment. "My dear, you can't die like this," he says, his voice filled with desperation."
"They'll try to save it, they won't care what I want, they'll try to save it..." You clutch at your stomach. "I want it dead. I want it gone. They'll save it. Please, no... no hospital..." You manage to push out before losing consciousness.
Alastor watches in horror as you collapse in his arms. He knows just how important this decision is to you, and he's torn between his desire to get you to safety and his desire to help you get what you want. He quickly makes up his mind.
"I won't let you die," he says firmly, lifting you and making his way towards the woods. He has enough knowledge of the human body to likely be able to stitch you up. And you'll be safer at his home than anywhere else.
When you finally awaken you look around groggily, attempting to sit up. You find yourself lying on a surprisingly comfortable bed. Alastor appears in front of you, dressed in casual clothes and looking much more approachable than he did when you first met. He's holding a glass of water and painkillers.
You take the medicine and down it quickly, trusting him implicitly, to which Alastor raises an eyebrow. He's perplexed at the sudden trust you seem to have placed in him, but he decides not to comment on it. Instead, he focuses on the task at hand. He brings the glass of water closer to your lips, helping you drink in case you have difficulty moving.
You accept the water, drinking almost the whole glass before letting him take it away. You try to sit up and suck in a sharp breath as it hurts your abdomen. You look down to see that you're in unfamiliar clothes and bandaged.
"Don't sit up. You needed tending to," Alastor explains briefly as you give a startled look at the bandages. "I had to take your clothes off to stitch you up," he adds with a smirk, somewhat enjoying your discomfort.
You look up at him. "Thank you..." You say softly, smiling.
Alastor hesitates briefly at your words, taken aback by the sincerity in your expression. He stares at you for a moment before clearing his throat and looking away.
"It's nothing," he mutters, his voice softer than usual. as he turns back to you, his gaze hardens. "I believe you owe me an explanation."
You look down, slightly ashamed. "You mean about why I was stumbling around in an alleyway covered in blood with a hole in my stomach?"
Alastor raises an eyebrow at your question, smirking at the absurdity of the situation. "Yes, that would be the event that triggered my mild concern," he replies flatly, leaning back in his chair with his arms crossed over his chest. "As well as where you disappeared to for the last few months."
Your eyes widen. "You waited for me..." You say softly.
Alastor looks away as you speak, a rare hint of vulnerability in his expression. "I did..." he mutters, avoiding eye contact. He clears his throat and takes a deep breath before looking back at you and speaking more firmly. "You didn't come back."
"I listened to your radio show every night. I think..." You blush, looking away, "I think it's the only thing that kept me sane."
Alastor's gaze softens as he listens to your words, his expression almost tender. "I'm glad," he says quietly, his voice genuinely warm for once. He leans forward, resting his hand on your leg. "But I must ask why you needed it...? What happened?"
You take a deep breath. "I fully intended to leave and meet you within the week. I returned home that night with full confidence that I could gather my things, tell Richard it was over, and that we could settle the divorce at a later date. But... when I returned home he was waiting for me..." You say softly.
Alastor's expression darkens as he listens to your story. He narrows his eyes, a dangerous glint reflecting in them. "Did he hurt you?" he asks, his voice low and menacing. His hand grips your leg tighter, his grip almost painful.
"Not at first... He... started as he usually does. He told me he was worried, asked why I kept running away like this. He would always make it out that he was this wonderful, worried husband whose wife regularly disappeared to do debaucherous things. He would ask if I intended to ruin our family's reputation..."
Alastor's grip on your leg tightens even more, his fingers digging into your skin. A low growl emanates from him, his anger growing with every word. He leans in closer to you, whispering in a dangerous tone, "Did he hurt you?"
The moment you nod, Alastor's demeanor changes. He pulls you into a tight embrace, holding you close as if he could protect you from any harm. He murmurs soft words of comfort into your ear, his voice filled with rage towards the man who caused you pain.
You blush, not expecting this reaction. "Alastor..." You sigh his name, relaxing into his embrace.
He leans his head against yours for a moment, breathing in your scent to calm himself. He knows he needs to stay calm for your sake. "What else happened? How did you respond?"
"I told him that was ridiculous. That I was sick of this treatment and that I wanted out. That I was leaving."
A predatory smile spreads across Alastor's face, as he hears your words. "And what did he say?" he purrs, his grip on you tightening once more.
"He became violent," you say darkly. "He grabbed me and began to strike me before dragging me to our room. I... I hadn't realized that he'd been preparing something..."
Hearing your words, a low growl rumbles in Alastor's chest. He "What did he do?"
"He told me that if I intended to leave, that I needed to fulfill my obligations to the family first," you say with a dark expression. You look at his hand, avoiding eye contact.
He leans his head forward, taking care to tilt your chin up to force eye contact. "What are these obligations you speak of?" he demands, his voice full of gravel and hard edge as a cold stare. He holds your face with a gentle, firm hold, as he waits for your answer.
"An..." You voice quivers. "An heir..."
A snarl twists his lips, and he drops your chin as an angry expression flares.
“An heir!?” He growls. "Did he expect you to bear a child like some common broodmare?" he asks, his voice teeming with rage. He takes a breath, trying to calm himself for your sake. "And he expected you to just agree?"
"No... that's what I mean when I say he'd been preparing... he... he chained me to the bed..." You reach down to your ankles, Alastor quickly realizing that must be where the bruising he'd found there while tending to you came from.
He curses silently. And then he looks back at you, the disgust in his face growing. "He expected you to bear him a child? While he keeps you chained to the bed like some animal?"
You nod. "That's when... when he started..." You close your eyes tightly.
He reaches out to place a hand on your shoulder, offering soft comfort. "Go on," he says, his voice softer now. Curiosity driving him to find out more of this man's true nature. "What did he start doing?"
"He started... trying to get me pregnant..." You say darkly.
A look of disgust crosses his face. "He... what?” The rage simmered behind his eyes, and Alastor squeezes his hand tighter to keep himself in check. He wanted to hurt him, and badly. "You don't mean..?" he urges you, needing to hear more.
You nod, the implication apparent.
Alastor curses loudly. "You're telling me that this man, your supposed 'husband', has been raping you? This... this is his way of... getting from you what he wanted?" His voice dripping with disgust and venom as he fights the urge to find this man and tear him apart limb from limb.
You nod again, shame filling your face as hot tears begin to roll down my cheeks. "Every day after he returned from work," I explain. "If I made it too difficult... I wasn't allowed dinner."
"You don't have to explain any further," Alastor says softly, his tone full of sympathy. Without hesitation, he wraps his arms around you in a comforting embrace. He could feel your pain, and it tore him apart inside.
You hold him tightly, he can feel you trembling in his embrace. It only makes him hold you tighter, wishing he could take away the pain and fear. He whispers soothing words into your ear, his voice filled with reassurance.
"It's alright, you're safe now." He promises with conviction. Once you seem to calm, he pulls back again. "I must ask, the state I found you in was quite... gruesome... what led to that?"
You look down at your hands. "One day, a doctor came to see me. Richard unchained me and threatened to destroy my radio if I tried anything while he was there..." You begin.
Alastor listens quietly as you continue your story, his rage simmering just beneath the surface. He takes slow measured breaths, trying to control the anger welling up inside him. "Did this doctor... examine you?"
You nod. "He congratulated us..."
"Congratulated...?" Alastor can feel his blood boiling at the thought.
"Yes..." You say in an almost silent voice.
Alastor's eyes widened at your words, his rage reaching new levels. He could hardly contain his anger as he spoke through gritted teeth, "And did he... harm you again?"
"No... once he knew I was pregnant he stopped visiting as often. Two maids who he trusted began attending to me instead... then one day the younger one smuggled me a knife."
Alastor's expression hardens as he listens to your story, his eyes burning with a dark intensity. "And what happened after that?" he asks, his voice low and menacing. "Did you... use the knife?" He pauses, his gaze locked on yours as he awaits your response.
"I waited until he visited again. When he came close I sat up and..." Your breath catches in your throat, "and I began to stab him..." You push out, your voice thick with tears.
A primal satisfaction washes over Alastor as he hears the anguish in your voice, knowing that you had taken matters into your own hands, that you had given him as much hell as he'd given you.
"Well done," he says proudly, a cruel smile twisting his lips as he attempts to create the moment in his mind. "Tell me... did he scream?"
You nod, a thousand yard stare on your face. "He screamed and bled. I kept stabbing until he went silent, and then I searched his pockets for the keys to the chains so I could get to you… so I could escape..."
"Good girl," Alastor praised, his voice filled with an almost paternal pride. "You took your freedom and escaped a monster's grasp... I am impressed. You have suffered greatly, but you have also shown immense strength." He pauses for a moment, studying you intently. "But... how did you become wounded?" he asks. "Did he stab you as well?"
"No. I did it."
Alastor's eyebrows shoot up in surprise at your confession. "You wounded yourself?" he repeats, his voice filled with skepticism. "But... why?" He narrows his eyes, suspicion clouding his features. "Were you trying to make it look like he had attacked you?"
"No... I couldn't let that... thing grow inside me. I had to kill it." He remembers how you hadn't wanted to go to the hospital. How you'd said 'they'll try to save it, I want it dead.'
Alastor's eyes widened in realization as he comprehended what you were saying. You were right. If he'd taken you to a hospital they would surely have attempted to save the child. A slow, impressed smile spreads across his face.
"You... killed it?" he repeats, disbelief tinging his voice. "You... you destroyed the seed of the monster growing inside you."
You look up at him, eyes wide with fear. "I don't know... did I? Is it gone?" You ask.
Alastor stares down at you, his expression unreadable. He reaches out tentatively, as if to touch your stomach where that man had implanted himself, but hesitates.
"Yes," he says, hoping to calm you. "Your aim was true. When I stitched you up I could see the damage. There's no way it could have survived.”
You let your face fall into his chest, the relief making you almost lightheaded. Alastor's arms instinctively wrap around your shoulders, pulling you closer. His fingers gently stroking your hair as he holds you against him, trying to comfort you. A strange feeling, but not an distasteful one.
"He's dead..." You say into his chest. "I killed him and left. I just left him on the floor and walked the twelve blocks to the bar. I didn't know if you'd still want me... but I didn't know where else to go..."
Alastor's heart clenches as he hears the fear and desperation in your voice. He slowly runs his fingers through your hair, trying to soothe you while trying to push back the anger that is slowly rising within him. "Don't think that. I will always want you here.”
"Thank you..." You whisper, on the verge of collapse again.
Alastor gently guided back down onto the bed, kneeling down beside you and holding your quivering hand in his own.
"Shhh...it's all over now," he whispers, brushing back your sweat-soaked hair. "He can't hurt you anymore."
Alastor remains kneeling beside you, his fingers wrapped protectively around your own until he was certain you were asleep. He watches your finally relaxed face as you rest.
*Mine.* He thinks to himself. You are his prey and his alone. He will allow no other predator to touch you, vowing silently to protect you from anyone who ever dares try to hurt you again.
"Sleep safe little doe."
Things got... Bloody. But I don't think our sweet little Alastor will mind. If anything it's a plus! But don't think she's out of the woods just yet, actions have consequences...
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