#uhh here are their races if you're interested
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Let Em’ Know
Sam Golbach x Fem!reader
Summary: Sam had been gone on a trip, but when he got back to surprise you and saw a guy flirting with you, he does take it lightly…
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Word count: 1.2k
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Warnings: blowjob,fluff, sam being overprotective
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It feels like an eternity since you last laid eyes on Sam. The ache in your heart grows stronger with each passing day, as you long for his presence.
Thoughts of him consume your mind, wondering if he misses you in return or if he even thinks of you amidst his busy work trip.
The emptiness you feel without him is crazy, and you yearn for the day when he'll return and fill your world with his warmth and love.
“Hey girl, you’ve been staring at that wall for quite a while. What’s so interesting about it?” Stas, your best friend since forever, asks, grinning mischievously as if she’s about to poke fun at you. “Uhh, nothing. I guess I’m just overthinking,” you say, glancing down at your hands.
Stas knows how much you’re hurting, how deeply you miss your boyfriend Sam, but all she can do is offer her support. “Well, that sucks. Let’s go to a party!” She announces suddenly, and you simply nod. You need to get your mind off things you almost look depressed.
You dressed up, feeling a bit unsure but determined to look cute. Sighing, you made your way to the living room and slipped on your heels. The dress you chose hugged your waist and accentuated your curves, making you feel confident and sexy. If Sam were here, he would have been drooling over how good you look. As you glanced at yourself in the mirror, a smile crept onto your face, knowing you were going to turn heads tonight.
You wondered where Stas was, but when she emerged from her room, you were taken aback by her beauty. It almost made you question your own preferences. "WOAH," you exclaimed. She grinned and approached you, showering you with compliments. "You look amazing, girl, ughhh," she exclaimed as she hugged you tightly. After the hug, she stepped back, eyeing you appreciatively, and playfully slapped your hand. "Thank youuu, but look at youuuuu, I could literally eat you," you said, giggling.
Stas chuckled, flipping her hair dramatically. "Oh, please, you're the one who's going to stop traffic tonight, not me."
You smirked, playfully rolling your eyes. "Stop it, you're making me blush. But seriously, though, we're going to be the hottest duo out there."
"Damn right we are," Stas agreed, grabbing her purse. "Let's show them how it's done."
As you both headed out, you couldn't help but feel a surge of confidence, knowing you had a friend as fabulous as Stas by your side.
As you and Stas entered the party, the music thumping and the crowd alive with energy, you couldn't help but feel a thrill run through you. However, your excitement went down a bit as a guy approached you, clearly interested.
"Hey there, beautiful," he said, flashing a smile.
You forced a polite smile, not wanting to be rude. "Hi."
"I'm Alex. Haven't seen you around here before. Are you new in town?" he asked, leaning in a little too close for comfort.
Before you could respond, a familiar voice cut in. "Hey, babe, sorry I'm late," Sam said, appearing beside you, a surprised expression on his face as he noticed Alex. "Am I interrupting something?"
"Sam?" Your heart raced at the sight of him. He looked so good, and the way you missed him hit you all at once, making your legs feel like jelly. You couldn't help but think, "Wow, he's here!"
You shook your head, relieved to see him. "No, not at all. Sam, this is Alex. Alex, this is my boyfriend, Sam."
Sam extended his hand, a friendly smile on his face. "Nice to meet you, Alex. Sorry, but I'm going to steal her away for a bit."
As Alex excused himself, Sam turned to you, his expression serious. "Who was that?"
You smiled, trying to ease his tension. "Just someone I met here. No big deal."
Sam's gaze hardened, a hint of jealousy creeping in. "Well, just so he knows, you're mine," he said, his tone firm. "I'm coming back for good, so let them all know what's mine."
You could sense Sam's jealousy, and you decided to play along, enjoying the attention. "Of course, babe. Everyone will know," you said, giving him a playful wink.
Sam's attitude softened, and he pulled you closer. "Good. Because I don't like the idea of other guys talking to you," he admitted, his grip tightening around you.
You chuckled, feeling a surge of affection for him. "Don't worry, you're the only one I'm interested in," you reassured him, feeling grateful to have him by your side.
“Is that so?” he murmured, his eyes filled with a primal hunger. “Yes, it is, baby,” you replied, your voice barely above a whisper, filled with seductive promise.
His smile was predatory as he pulled you close, his strong hands gripping your waist possessively. With a firm touch, he tilted your chin up, his lips crashing down on yours in a fierce, devouring kiss that ignited a fiery passion between you, quickly escalating into an intense make-out session.
After the intense make-out session, his hands roamed eagerly over your body, igniting a burning desire within you. With a hungry urgency, he guided you down to your knees, his eyes locked on yours, filled with lustful anticipation. You knew what he wanted, and you were more than willing to fulfill his desires.
Slowly, you unzipped his pants, freeing his throbbing member. You looked up at him, seeing the raw desire in his eyes.
Without hesitation, you took him into your mouth, savoring his taste and the sounds of his pleasure. He moaned softly, his hands tangling in your hair, guiding you as you pleasured him with expert skill, bringing him to the edge of ecstasy.
As he approached the peak of ecstasy, his grip tightened in your hair, his breathing growing ragged. With a deep, guttural groan, he released himself, his hot essence spilling over your face.
You closed your eyes, feeling the warm, sticky sensation against your skin, the intensity of the moment overwhelming your senses.
Breathless and flushed with desire, he sank to his knees before you, cupping your face gently in his hands.
He looked into your eyes, his gaze filled with a mixture of satisfaction and adoration. “You’re incredible,” he whispered, leaning in to kiss you softly, a silent promise of more to come.
With a devilish grin, Sam pulled you back up to your feet, his desire for you not yet sated. His hands roamed over your body, igniting a new wave of passion between you.
“I can’t get enough of you,” he murmured, his voice husky with desire.
You melted into his touch, eager for more. “Then don’t stop,” you whispered, your voice filled with longing.
With renewed intensity, he pressed you against the wall, his lips finding yours in a hungry kiss. The fire between you burned hotter, driving you both to new heights of pleasure as you lost yourselves in each other once again.
You're thrilled that he's back, filled with anticipation at the thought of enjoying his company once more. The return of his presence brings you immense joy, knowing you can now savor every moment with him.
Ty @gloryaiis
Masterlist
#colby brock#colby brock x reader#sam and colby#colby brock smut#sam golbach#sam golbach x reader#jay from the kubz scouts#kubz scouts x reader#qsmp quackity#quackity x reader smut#Spotify
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what if they were human?
kay kay kay so i was thinking what would the bugs loook like if they we in a human form or like in a disguse similar to scrabby and this is what i got:
I was also thinking hmm.... well beetles are one of the most diverse species in the world and literally I watched a video talking about how they collected beetles for a sample in the wild and out of those beetles they discovered 7 new species. Soooooo I was like what if they were different races instead?
honestly, I'd be so funny bc of how Scrabby is ginger and he just starts singing the Animaniacs song if someone asks his race
its literally just this lol
also I did as much research as I could ofc :p
Also one with the pink/green eyes (Popstar) belongs to @chaosaliien and the one with purple eyes (Stella) belongs to @liqu3d
#uhh here are their races if you're interested#moonfly is black#Jacob is Brazillian#Frost is middle eastern#Node is asian with curly hair from Prism#Stella is light skinned#like damn she in the mood#iv'e never seen men become so zesty in my entire life the way they act when ice spice comes on#stella ice spice FR LMAO#IVE TESTED MY HYPOTHESIS#THEORY? CONFIRMED.#god damn Jacob the definition of testosterone#when i tell you how clever i felt making Jacobs cracks as scars on his face#i might've done a bad job but jacob has bleached hair thats overgrownnnn so yeahhh#honestly i love chracters with vililigo they're actually so pretty#they have constellations on their face what is more mystical than that?#WHEN I TELL YOU I HAD 👏 TO 👏 TRUST 👏 THE 👏 PROCESS 👏 WITH 👏 THE 👏 VITILIGO 👏#white pen ink is very tasty i def recommend /j#diffrent face shapes lessss goooooooooooooooooooooo#ain't no way somebody reading all this shiii#ok ik ik ill stop writing becoming president of yappersville rn#lawful joke fanart#lawful joke#lawful joke fankids
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A New Driver
Paring: Sergio Perez X Flora Castellanos (OC)
While Sergio and Max are talking about the season along with stuff, A new driver then goes to the 2 red bull drivers which made Sergio Checo Perez Mendoza change his love life.
Warning: Fluff
His mind was thinking about so much, The race, His marriage wasn't working out for him and his wife,. He was looking for a new love but that was never working, "Hey, Uhh Checo, You good man," Max asked as Sergio got back in reality and nodded, "Uhh you sure cause-" he cut himself off as his eyes got wide, he couldn't believe it, He had been talking about this for so long and he had never seen his friend so upset. He looked up to see Max's eyes were wide as well, his mind had gotten away from him, Max looked like he was going to cry, but he didn't, and instead, Sergio smiled and said,
"I'm sorry Max, I didn't mean to upset you, it's just I have a lot to deal with right now, and my marriage isn't going so well."
Max smiled as he looked at him in a brotherly way. "I know"
Who would want to be with a 31-year-old divorced man? He thought to himself as he looked into the distance. He saw Max's girlfriend Kelly in the distance talking to a .. New driver?
Sergio thought to himself "Hey Max, Who is that kelly's talking to?" Sergio looked at the blond female driver "Oh, that's the new driver, ". She was short and cute and her hair was in a dutch braid bun which made Sergio find someone. She then looked at Sergio who was looking at him also. She then smiled and walked at the two men.
Oh shit, she's coming.
Sergio started to get flustered but acted cool as the women started to walk up to them. "Hey, are you the driver?" she asked Sergio with a smile on her face.
"Yes we are, I'm Sergio Perez and my partner here is Max Verstappen."
She then came closer to him and put her hand out, "Hi I'm Flora Castellanos."
"Nice to meet you, Flora, I'm Sergio and this is my best friend Max."
The woman smiled as she took his hand in hers and shook it, "Well hi there, Nice to meet you guys as well." Her hands felt soft and warm, and her grip was firm. She then let go of his hand and smiled, "So what brings you to our team?"
Max asked Flora. "Well, Your boss christain horner, and I talked because he said that I have what it takes to join the team," said Flora. "What does that mean?" Max asked curiously.
Flora then replied to Max, "You know how Red Bull always wins the races, well your boss told me to come over here and get my chance, He said that there is an opening now and I should grab it."
Max smiled, "That's great news Flora, but why do you think you can make it?"
"Because I'm a fast driver," Flora answered confidently. "I've won all sorts of races before and I'm very good at driving and being quick but I don't think of myself as a winner cause, hah you know."
"Yeah, I know, It's hard to win these days, but I'm sure you will make it." Sergio said happily. "Thanks, Sergio, I appreciate it."
Max was chuckling "Hey, I think my Mexican mate has a little-"
"No, I don't" Sergio started to laugh at him
"But hey Flora, if you're interested, maybe we could go out sometime and get some food or something."
"Sure, I'd love to," said Flora.
As Flora was getting ready to leave, Sergio suddenly remembered something and asked her, "By the way Flora, where did you use to drive?"
"Like anyone from Formula 4 to F2," said Flora.
"And then?" Max asked.
"I drove for some teams through my Formula Racing Career," Flora answered. "Can't remember since it's been a long time," she chuckled. "Yeah, I'm glad that Christian chose you as an official 3rd driver. Your Really Cu- I mean" Sergio was about to say something but "You're really fun to hang out with" He started to get flustered by looking at her. "Oh. Thank you, you too,"
she giggled. Flora started to notice how he was feeling so she started to let her hand down close to his. He started to feel her hand next to his, To tease her his fingers started to grab her pinkie and that's when Flora started to blush a little. Sergio looked at Flora's hand on his before his hand moved to her whole hand and started to hold onto her hand.
That's when Flora started to look at Sergio. "Oh sorry, just got a little too comfortable," he said before letting go scratching his head. "Nah it's okay" Both chuckled and laughed looking at each other. "Oh uhm, speaking of what you just did, do you have a wife or something?" Asked flora. "I used to but we're now divorced," He said
"Wait why?"
"Some problems," he said. "Damn, how you feelin now?" asked Flora, "Free" being honestly true," he smiled. "That's cool, So you wanna like get to know each other before getting on that Bahrain track?" Asked Flora.
"Of course, I can Amiga"
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Bride of Discord Rewritten Chapter 16: Heart Made of Ground
The air held still as if it were threatened. Thick and calloused with every breath, if one were to fan smoke into the room, it would simply sit. It was the aftermath of russian roulette, silent and unstirring, capped with light breaths and crouching figures.
Fluttershy spoke first, standing tall and comfortable.
"Oh dear, did you hear the whole thing?"
"it's not like he couldn't've, we was practically yellin'!"
Twilight gave Applejack a gentle whap to the back while looking forward with her goofy nervous smile.
"oh no! she's right in every way! I heard it all!...well the parts loud enough to hear anyways."
Fluttershy cringed as her friends spread out over the expanse of the dance floor, now playing nothing to the tune of their anxious murmuring. How could she have let this happen?! Discord could've heard every word her friends said about him, the ones that stung like wasps! He would say that he was right and that she was with them, or maybe he'll break the contract! or start a war! or-
Fluttershy near hyperventilated as her thoughts raced for their positions in the front of her mind. Discord simply raised a claw and smirked. she hated it. The sly grin that said he was planning something so heinous and with little thought behind it.
"oh dear fluttershy, I thought nothing of it! however, your friends and I have something to discuss! does the contract ring a bell? it should! after all, we insisted we bring them here to rework it!"
The other mares dropped their shoulders and withers towards the earth. Geez, when he said it like that it seemed even more cruel to say what they did. Rarity spoke first, followed by Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash.
"Oh dear me, I should apologize to you directly for saying such things. Even if your decorum is dreadfully gauche, and you spied on us for years and you tried to take over Equestria-"
"Rarity, I think you forgot your point. That's okay though! I can finish! We should know you before we say anything mean, cuz, uhh-"
"get to the point Pinkie!"
"no no, I've got it: Discord... you don't need our approval to marry her, but you should know that you have it. and I... we want to know you like Fluttershy does. Ponyville is all about equality, and we should practice what we preach." rarity spoke with grace and dignity, despite being scared out of her gourd.
Discord spoke nothing, but yawned and floated on a small yellow cloud. like a flying cumulous of sorts. He pulled up a written copy of the contract, Tapping it gently, and tearing a hole through the parchment as it burst into pink flames! The ponies gasped as the smoke consumed the words and the history of their agreement was scorched.
"You understand the implications of what you just did. I hope you do, anyways." Twilight seethed.
"Implications shrimplications! I no longer want any part in this deal! nada! Nikto! None! nix! It simply no longer suits my interest."
Spike raised a brow. "what would that mean?"
Discord flopped onto his side and shrugged.
"what good is a deal like this to a being of chaos? putting limits on chaos? gag me with a spoon! If you ponies think you have the authority to tame eldritch being then perhaps your hubris has gone unchecked for far too long! that's not to say that i'll claim my throne in Equestria, no. I just want nothing to do with you ponies ever again."
Fluttershy felt her throat get tight and sting.
"that.. that's- you can't possibly mean that, there's got to be more to it! that's it!? you're leaving everything here because you think it's boring??" she spluttered rapidly. Fluttershy would not take this explanation. it was bare and dry!
"oh of course you want something more from me! but I am bare! I am unapologetically something more than comprehension!"
Discord swished his tail away to and fro, sending the ponies back and away from him. Pinkie packed everything from her cannon tight into a box, as Rainbow guided spike and her mare away from it all.
"you're lying to me! there's something more at play, I know it! you can talk to me I promise, Discord!"
Discord snarled and whipped his tail to the ground, in an instant the cobblestone tiles crackled and swiped the ponies outside the house from below their feet. fluttershy hovered above the moving rocks.
"As a matter of fact there might be... suppose chaos is contained, then it ceases to be. Id rather live for eternity to take my throne than cease to be because of one, MEASLY friend. You and your Infernal Lown Posse are temporary obstacles for which I couldn't be bothered with."
Fluttershy grasps his paw with both hooves and stutters out the only thing she can possibly say without her heart collapsing.
"you're throwing it all away for this?"
Fluttershy was pushed away by a force from his wings out into the forest.
Fluttershy was evacuated from the premises, and the roaring wind hailed her away from the murky trees, where her friends waited for her return in a manner reminiscent of foals that knew they were in trouble.
Applejack rested her hoof on Fluttershy's crest and back, as the rest followed. Twilight stroked her mane and whispered gentle, so as to not rouse her aching, breaking heart.
Fluttershy sat silent and abased, clutching her face in her hooves. freedom, at the end of her heel, back in Ponyville in an instant. dissociated, stuck in the cavernous flesh of her mind. There should have been more, she deserved more, he deserved more. The voices around her became muffled, silenced by a ringing tone.
As Fluttershy's empty stare was uncovered, (gosh, when was I blindfolded?) a flash of candy, lights, confetti, and party decorations assaulted her senses. A large banner blanketed the town hall building, and her eyes followed every letter, every curve and dot until she was met with the message:
"Welcome Back To Your Home Fluttershy!"
#listen to “love love love” by the mountain goats at the end. or “your new home” from tadc.#fluttercord#fluttershy#pinkie pie#twilight sparkle#rainbow dash#rarity#mane 6#applejack#bride of discord rewritten#chapter 16#fanfiction#mlpfim#mlp fim#my little pony friendship is magic#took way to long for me to start writing again#angst#disassociation#dissociation tw
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6 (or 8. I find 6 intriguing but I want a spoiler however you're most comfortable) 14, 17 (😄), 18, 25, 29, 32, 44, 58, 66 for eternity's embrace, 79
Just a couple of questions for the fanfiction writing asks. I promise I tried not to ask too many but I couldn't help it ^-^
6/8. What’s the last line you wrote?/Post an out-of-context spoiler from a wip.
These are functionally the same thing right now, so:
How like a saint she stood, back to the glass mural of the Martyr Sabrine, wings spread in holy dignity which did appear to sprout from the shoulders of the asari princess. From on high was the light brought down to shine upon her alone. So like an angel painted upon the sky did she stand, resplendent in the rainbow streaks of sun caught in the stained glass of the cathedral windows. Cast across her scales in prismatic patterns she was as otherworldly - as ethereal - as any who in Heaven’s Halls did walk.
14. What is your favorite location and position to write in?
Scrunched up in bed or sprawled out, I struggle to focus if I'm sitting up or at a table I have to be able to lounge. Gotta have my legs bent funny or I simply can't write.
18. Do you enjoy research? Which fic of yours required the most research?
A little bit, but I find it easy to get overwhelmed by things. None of my fics have really required *research* more just double checking things.
My novel however requires massive amounts of research even if almost none of it pays off. I am a genius who decided to write a book about street racing and cars when I myself can not drive and know nothing about cars. I spent a week doing so much research about cars just so I could make up fake sci-fi parts and manufacturers. I wanted to get stuff right even though it's all sci-fi and made up, yknow?
25. What’s your favorite part of the writing process (worldbuilding, brainstorming/outlining, writing, editing, etc)?
Writing for sure! Outlining is a pain, I do worldbuilding mostly as it's needed off a rough outline, and I never edit. If it's a one-shot there's no planning at all. So even though I take damage whenever I write it's still the most enjoyable part of the process because a lot of the time it's the only part of the process for me. Where's that defunctland tweet about the only thing worse than doing [creative pursuit] is not doing it. That's how I feel about writing a lot of the time.
29. What’s something about your writing that you’re proud of?
Including this one is an act of psychological warfare.
I am proud that I do it. I'm proud that despite how much doubt and loathing I feel about my writing I still do it. Even though I think I could sit here for hours trying to pick something, trying to lie and pick out something other people tell me I'm good at but I don't believe, I still write, and I still want to write. I can't say I'm good at it, or that I think I do anything particularly well, but I write, and I'm proud that I do. I might never be in a place were I like my writing or can pick something I'm good at. I'll also never be in a place where I stop writing for good.
32. Do you take fic requests? Why or why not?
Nebulously, yes! I ask for requests and simply never get a response from people, so I stopped saying I take requests uhh about a year ago. There just isn't enough interest I guess. I wish I was someone who could take writing commissions but even for free people don't want it 😅
44. What is your favorite genre to write?
Fantasy, easy. My writing works best for fantasy I find, something I didn't give much thought until I was writing a sci-fi novel and realised how strange my prose are in that context. I don't even particularly like fantasy, on balance I like sci-fantasy, and in media I prefer sci-fi, but fantasy has always just been where my writing goes, and what my prose seem to match.
58. Do you have a favorite piece of figurative language you’ve written?
Any of the scenes in The Reconciliation of Oberon and Titania that allude to the specific art pieces. The Great Wave Off Kanagawa and The Birth of Venus sections in particular, which I'll include here for the sake of the question.
The Great Wave Off Kanagawa
In blue silks she splayed upon the floor of her own gallery. White-capped waves upon the crashing seas of bunched silk was her flesh, and her body pulled upwards, upwards, yearning, needing, craving the touch of her sickening unseen moon.
With sexual need and the heat of a churning sea, she tipped the boat of Marika’s hand, pushing and pulling her with the force of a storm beyond tides and nightly whims. She screamed with a siren pitch. She moaned with muffled pleasure, head under her own waves as she was conjured tempest-like into howling climax.
The great wave crashed and with it came her hips upon the silks and her cry of pleasure into the cream night.
The Birth of Venus
Like Venus exalted in newborn ecstasy upon her scalloped bed, Marika arched for her and laid her naked body before her in the wanting of a child. She cried out like she was experiencing the pleasure of touch upon her body for the first time, new virginity pried from between her pearl-dropped salt-slicked thighs, split open upon her birth. An opening of her own shell, a spreading of her downy dove wings, the blooming of her tear-stained red rose, before she would be spoilt and numbed to pleasure through her own lust for it ever onward.
66. What’s a fun fact about Eternity's Embrace?
Besides the two earlier versions of it I've talked about before and the working title it had when I was drafting it, the version of Eternity's Embrace that got posted started life as a hybrid Breath of the Wild AU for Liara x Femshep that got heavily reworked. Tali took the place of Urbosa hence her remaining a close ally of Liara's in Eternity's Embrace despite there maybe not being a huuuge amount of justification for that in canon (they are best friends in my imagination)
79. Do you have any writing advice you want to share?
I suck so bad at writing advice! I just write and that's the honest truth, I have no tips, I have no advice, except don't listen to anyone purple your prose if that's how you want to write please I'm begging you. And read more, and not just fic. Read books, and read lots of them, and make sure they're varied! But that's really it, read more and write exactly how you want, if someone says no write more like this. kill them.
tysm bestie <3
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SSR Ortho Shroud Union Gear Personal Story: Part 3
"Happy Birthday"
(Part 1) Part 2 (Part 3)
[Ignihyde Dorm – Birthday Party Venue]
Cater: Next question～
Cater: “If you were to join any dorm other than Ignihyde, which dorm would you choose?”
Ortho: Hmm, I have to only pick one…? If I got the chance, I'd like to go to all of the dorms.
Ortho: I'm pretty fascinated by Savanaclaw's climate, and Octavinelle's ocean environment…
Ortho: Hmmm… It's really hard to decide, but if I had to choose one, I guess it would have to be Pomefiore.
Cater: Oooh. So you're saying that Pomefiore has something that interests you more than the stuff you just said about the other dorms?
Ortho: Well, that's because Pomefiore is the dormitory with the oldest history. In addition to learning about the school's history, I'd like to study that dorm if I can too.
Cater: If you're looking to study the school's history, I don't think you have to go to Pomefiore to learn, right? There're books in the library on that subject.
Ortho: It's something that Trein-sensei said before in magical history class…
Ortho: In order to learn history, it's important to not only learn from documents, but to also visit the places where historical events occurred.
Ortho: It's a research technique widely used in historical fields called field work.
Cater: Aah, it's that thing that Trein-sensei talked about before with a furrowed brow, saying, "If only I had a little more stamina…"
Ortho: I thought I had downloaded all of the data pertaining to the history of this school before I enrolled, but,
Ortho: After listening to the professor's lectures, I've started to think that there's still so much I don't know.
Ortho: If I'm going to do field work on campus, I can't avoid the school's oldest dorm, Pomefiore!
Cater: So you're considering Pomefiore as a historical landmark, huh. That's a cool way to look at it.
Ortho: When it comes to research there… I want to learn more about Rook Hunt-san.
Cater: Rook-kun? Why?
Ortho: Well, actually, I once almost collided with Rook-san while I was taking my Athletic Gear for a maintenance run.
Ortho: Of course, I was able to stop at a safe distance.
Ortho: But, because I was worried I may have startled him, I asked him to let me check his vitals, just in case.
Ortho: And when I did… Rook-san's pulse wasn't racing at all.
Ortho: I don't know if he was shocked but was able to calm it down immediately, or if it didn't waver at all… I have to admit, I'm a little curious.
Cater: …It sure would be interesting if researching Rook-kun ended up more difficult to do than studying the school's history…
Cater: OK, and with that, the interview's over. Next is the main event we've all been waiting for―
Ortho: The presentation of the "gift of good fortune"! I've been really looking forward to this―!
Cater: Ortho-chan, it's great that you're super pumped up～♪ Hey, let's take an awesome video of the event too.
Cater: Uhh, I'll set the tripod around here, and point the smartphone here… Yep, that looks good.
Ortho: If you're going to do it from this angle, I'd recommend taking two steps back and throw from there.
Cater: It's kinda weird to get advice from the one who'll be on the receiving end of the gift… So I should stand about here?
Ortho: Yeah, perfect!
Cater: Okay, here I go…
Cater: Ortho-chan, Happy Birthday!
(Part 1) Part 2 (Part 3)
#twisted wonderland#twst#ortho shroud#cater diamond#twst ortho#twst cater#twst translation#twst birthday#mention: rook#mention: trein
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"For you to be saying this, you might be as strong as my Master... Unfortunately, she is away in the dragons lands for a secret mission." Aurora raised an eyebrow at Stella, "This council seems balanced and fair. But who are these members?" Putting on her vest, she gave a sly nod at the duo, "Let me introduce myself again: I'm senior lieutenant Aurora Radiant of the imperial army, Glad to have you both here with me. I will, uhh... update this profile thing later." Pausing a little to look at Tumblr, she nodded at Sol, giving a serious look ,"I bet you are laughing at this, but I tell only the truth... the monsters came from the sky through a magic gate, from the seas, the corruption of ponies kind. The day of reckoning. You could say we are the 'Enforcers' here, in a sense."
"Perhaps... I don't like publicly telling ponies what I'm capable of, past or present, so you're kinda lucky."
"... You realize this is a Tumblr blog, right? Pretty public."
"... Shit."
Stella and Sol looked at each other when asked about the members of the Council.
"Well... Mostly well-respected rulers of entire universes. As far as I know, anyway. I only recently became an Agent, so I'm not as familiar with that stuff yet."
"No, you got it right. The Council is primarily made up of leadership from individual universes that are high up in importance. Whether they're important for providing the technology they and the Agents use, or for founding the Council in the first place, they'll usually have at least a couple seats there. There's many of them, and uh... I don't think I can really say their names. It's kept secret, y'know?"
The two of them didn't seem entirely surprised by the reveal that Aurora was high-ranking military. In fact, Sol smirked.
"Very interesting..." He decided to bow, as was custom in his land. "It's an honor, ma'am." As he stood straight again, he lightly bumped Stella.
"Huh? Oh, right. It's nice to meet you." She received a look from Sol, but she ignored it, continuing to listen to Aurora speak of the monsters. "I don't see why we'd laugh at that, honestly. If you think that's weird, you should see some of the stuff that happens here. I mean, we have cars with pony heads on them. That can talk. They're not even native to this universe, I just brought one over one time, and things just kinda... happened. Now I have a Devil Z with a pony head, the first car I brought over is a Skyline now, and one of the competitors in my racing league has a car with a mechanical pony head." She blinked. "There's also that weird corporation underground... Maybe I should check in with them sometime."
#Equestria Cross#EqX: AuroraVerse 1#Ask#The Starry Traveller#Stellar Spirit#Solar Ray#Lore#Lots of Lore#Car pones are cute#This universe is weird
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Intro and rules
So uhh, i've had a blog before but I decided to make a fresh start because I felt like I needed something.. new? Idfk but here's my into + rules!!
My name is Oliver, but I also like to go by Star bc why not. I will not be stating my age, as I do not feel comfortable, but know that I am a minor. I would prefer that only other minors request smut because I am willing to write it, but I do not feel comfortable with adults asking me. If you don't realize I won't get mad. Also just scroll if you're not comfortable with reading a minor's smut, don't harrass me because I assure you, you will feel much better if you just talk to your therapist about it if it affects you so much. I am mentally ill myself, and cannot deal with harrassment. Just keep it between you and your therapist if you feel affected by it, please. (I don't even mean that to be rude, for the sake of both of our mental health, please just move on)
That was kind of a rant and I apologize so uhhh, I use any pronouns and I'm genderfluid, abrosexual (it means my sexuality is fluid and changes over time) demisexual/romantic, and polyamorous!
I have trouble with tone so please be patient with me, as I am autistic.
Alright, that was a lot to write, moving on!
RULES!!
First off, here are fandoms I will write for.
Genshin impact
Pokemon
Hunter x Hunter
Madoka Magica
Ride the Cyclone because yes
Thats all for now because thats the main stuff I'm interested in at the moment, but I guarrantee you it will change
FEEL FREE TO REQUEST ANY FANDOMS, I WILL TELL YOU IF I KNOW ENOUGH ABOUT IT OR NOT!!
Alright heres what I know I will write
Fluff
Smut
Angst
literally any type of fanfic
Alright, now here's what I will not write under any circumstances
anything with rape or non-con. specifically explicit fics about it where it's romanticizing it in a sense. I will write it in a way that it simply mentions it, but does not focus on it
Most yandere stuff and anything like it. Just not really my thing
The majority of kinks are allowed, except for age and race play, as they both make me uncomfortable
I will write all angst even if it's extremely dark, although in the rare case im uncomfortable with whatever you're requesting I will let you know'
Yeah I think thats all! I may add more eventually but here's the start!
Thanks for reading and please request pls pls pls I love when I get requests
Have a great day!!
#introductory post#genshin impact#genshin#gi#genshin x reader#pokemon#pokemon x reader#hxh#hunter x hunter#hxh x reader#hunter x hunter x reader#madoka magica#madoka magica x reader#pmmm#puella magi madoka magica#rtc#ride the cyclone#rtc x reader#ride the cyclone x reader#x reader#fanfic#oneshots#headcanons
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Do you take requests? If so, would you be willing to do headcanons (or maybe a full fic idk) of poly!elmax and poly!lumax getting ready for a school dance (like prom) and going to the dance?
(sorry idrk how to deliver on the poly part so here's an elmax ficlet I hope that's close enough)
"Ready for the unveiling?"
A muffled "Yes" comes through the bathroom door.
"Ok, let's see it."
And the knob turns and "OHgeez-" Max's eyes go wide at the sight.
Her mind races while El waits for her reaction.
Responses do come to mind, lots of them, just not the kind she can say to El. She goes easier on her than anyone else, because she isn't like anyone else. There's just no way to put a gentle spin on girl, your face looks like an entire circus.
She's big on El making her own choices, but letting her do her own makeup for the dance was a huge mistake.
Hopeful doe eyes look at her through lashes so heavy with mascara that they're sticking together when she blinks. And the rouge. It's just... two red circles. Like from a Twister mat.
"Uhh." Briefly, Max considers slapping on a fake grin and a thumbs up and finding one positive thing to say. Which would be what? That... she guesses the hair is.... potentially salvageable...
No. There'll be plenty of bold looks at the dance, but this is something else, and she can easily picture it getting El a kind of attention that might ruin her fun tonight.
No answer is answer enough.
"Not good?"
"It's just..." Max follows her back into the bathroom, where she coughs at the smell of 1,000 gallons of perfume and burnt hair, "a lot."
The counter is littered with bottles and brushes and rouges and eyeshadows and magazines open to photos that have contributed parts to the fashion Frankenstein in the mirror. El's fingertips touch the glossy title on a page of pictures of Julia Roberts for that new movie Pretty Woman, frowning like what could have gone wrong.
Max fails to hold back a snort, and El looks up.
"What?" she asks, looking confused throughout the momentary giggling hug that Max can't help giving her.
"You're cute," she answers. "El, you're pretty, I just can't even see you through all that stuff."
She could keep going. It'd be some real romantic shit to tell El she's already the most beautiful girl on the planet, but that isn't the issue. Max knows that any concern she has about the way she looks tonight has more to do with fitting in as a normal high school girl than whether anybody finds her attractive.
Looks don't seem to have much to do with El's interest in anyone; compliments on that subject do nothing for her, and she basically never gives them out. It doesn't bother Max. And she gets it. It's not like El being pretty is the main thing she likes about her, either.
"Look, dressing up is fun but you're supposed to still look like you. And this," Max plops the magazine aside, "might not reeeally be the look you want to go for, like... in public."
"It is kind of.. different." El considers her reflection, left eye stuck half-shut. "Do over?"
"Maybe so." Max 's eyes catch a paintbrush on the counter, and she frowns, picking it up. Like, a full-on big art brush, with paint flecks on the handle and everything, its bristles loaded with makeup. "Is.... is this Will's?"
"Yes. He has lots."
Max smirks, picturing him in the bedroom across the hall, searching the floor around his easel. She rubs a thumb over the makeup caking the other girl's cheek. "Wonder if he has some turpentine, too."
"What are those?"
"It's..." Max sighs, grabbing her a scrunchie, "nothing. Here."
"El," Will's voice comes down the hall, like they've conjured him. "You didn't put the iron somewhere weird, did you?" he leans in the doorway. "Mom can't find it. Hey, Max."
"Hey."
"I didn't move it," El answers.
"'Kay." He slides out of the doorway, but his hand shoots back to grab the door frame and he pulls himself abruptly back in, looking aghast from El's face, to Max, to the brush in Max's hand.
"What'd you do to her?" he gapes.
"No, no-"
"Oh, Will," El asks, gathering back her hair, "Do you have turp and tine?"
His face grows one notch more bewildered. "Girls use turpen-"
"No," Max interrupts, shoving the paintbrush into his hand and making get out eyes. "We don't. Here. Don't worry about it."
Will grabs Max's wrist and pulls her one step beyond the doorway, whispering, "You know she has trouble fitting in, do you know what people are gonna-"
"I! Didn't! Do that!" she hisses, pointing. "I'm working on it."
He grimaces, sniffing the air, "Are you sure about the iron?" and she gives him a shove.
El is buried in the sink, scrubbing away. The eventual sight of her actual face makes Max smile. "Take two?"
"You do it."
Max clears a space on the counter with her forearm, sending a lipstick tube rolling into the sink, and pats it for El to sit.
A soft knock on the door frame and Will is back.
"I have... finer ones," he steps forward and lays an assorted handful of paintbrushes on the counter like an uncertain offering. "I thought.. like, for details..." he shrugs.
"Thanks, Will," El smiles cheerfully at him as he backs out again.
"Don't know what I'm gonna do with either one of you," Max mutters, smirking. "Okay. So. The eyeshadow. Maybe let's narrow it down to one color?"
"You will be looking at me. I won't." El shrugs. "Make me look how you like to look at."
She knows what El means, but she still has to pause.
"This is how I like to look at you," she gestures at all of her - bare face, comfy t-shirt, fraying cutoffs.
"But." El gestures at the makeup and the dresses hanging on the closet door. "We bought all this stuff."
"We'll wear the stuff. I'm just saying. I like you however. Just, you looking like you. You know that, right?"
El smiles softly, nodding.
Max gets to work. And while she works, her canvas is staring back at her, wheels clearly turning.
"What're you thinking about?" she finally has to ask.
"Trying to think how you would look if you looked different." El squints slightly. "But then.. you would look like someone else. And I would miss your face."
"No you wouldn't, 'cause then I never woulda had this face," Max answers, choosing a pinky gloss and starting to apply it to El's lips.
"Ohh.. yeah.." she whispers thoughtfully. "Then. I -"
"Hold still."
"Max."
"Shut up," she laughs, "you're making me mess it up. Don't smile."
But she is, all teeth, and now Max can't keep her hand steady, and it's impossible.
El reaches up and runs a finger along Max's eyebrow, and Max's laugh fades.
"I would like whatever face had you in it," El says, looking at each of her features and then the whole. "But I'm glad you are in my favorite one."
Max smiles, and El smiles at her smile and stretches up, wanting to kiss it.
"Wait, you're gonna-" Max holds up the gloss.
El twists around to look in the mirror. "You already messed it up."
"I??"
"You," she tugs on Max's shirt, bringing a laughing little kiss into reach.
"Oh, hey," Max looks at her lips, "strawberry."
#they'd be seniors in 89 and that movie came out in 90 so this is almost not an anachronism#sorry this took so long i had to stop in the middle of it and do a dissertation on what pretty means to el#elmax#ficlet#this forced me to actually consider what elmax dynamics would be and its come to my attention that I get aro vibes from both of them#so I can only picture them as like BFFs with one drop too much romance#fic#mine
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status update? for the curious
*squints* uhh
boy howdy I guess it's been a hot minute since i was like, active here
....how about I. uhh
ok so mostly what ive been doing is playing The Doctor in D&D. kinda.
lemme just, ,, context?
ok so there's this dnd kinda homebrew thing called Toonkind which basically introduces cartoon races which can do wild and wacky things that your average human/teifling/elf whatever can't, and they're extremely super cool
and there's this discord for like, playing dnd games that center around this Toonkind homebrew that take place (mostly) in a particular world where Toons live and it's like living in a cartoon there, literally one of the locations is called Toontown i adore it
and I joined up like a year ago and started playing an expy (short for "exported character") or "bootleg version" of the Doctor from Doctor Who because miraculously nobody had claimed them yet
so! yeah! I've been playing "The Professor" for nearly a year now, with a bunch of cool and awesome new friends and fellow players, and that's part of the reason I've been on tumblr less. can only split my time so many ways, yanno?
and the thing is,, we record all our sessions,,, sooo,, if you wanna hear me play a bootleg Doctor (based primarily on Four), you're welcome to listen in here!! on the playlist! there are some truly awesome stories, seriously, so if you are interested in an actual play podcast (of sorts--it's not a podcast lol it's just recorded sessions on yt) involving ME,, this is it!!
imma reblog the toonkind masterlist in a minute too, if you wanna check out the other stuff the server makes (here is a link as well)
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Decided to write a bio thing because I'm bored + I wanna establish some boundaries here so uhh- here's some stuff about me Cartoon Buffoon aswell as other things if you wanna know!
Who am I?
Hello! I'm Cartoon Buffoon and I write stuff and like cartoons, there's a chance you've could of read my stuff if you read one shots on AO3 that feature Oswald The Lucky Rabbit since I have a tendency to write fluffy content relating to him, and angst on occasion (some of my stories are 18+ tho yet more on that later). I'm simply a buffoon for cartoons is all. I love old animation from the 1920s-60s yet I also do indulge in more modern stuff as well.
Identity
I'm bisexual🩷💜💙(leaning towards men) and aromantic 💚🤍🖤.
My gender is uhh... Complicated? I don't know what I am although I currently identify as gender fluid although I do refer to myself as trans as well🏳️⚧️.
Pronouns are He/She/They/anything else really! Toon is usually the nickname I'm most comfortable with online.
One last thing I should note about myself is my horrid mental health and terrible anxiety, I do struggle with emotions and such so I have a tendency to be vulgar and "edgy" although I always try to be polite to anyone I meet. I suffer from a cataclysm of other issues mentally as well although I still try to be nice and funny to make up for this.
Things I'm into/fandoms I'm in.
My interests lie in old cartoons however I do dabble in other stuff, my interest and hyperfixations go in the following order:
—In The Dark comics/Skitzo the 1920s killer bear
—Oswald the lucky rabbit
—Felix the cat
—Rubberhose animation in general
—the furry fandom
—Trevor Henderson's creations
—FNAF
—FNF/Newgrounds and it's culture in general
—Sonic The Hedgehog
and some other stuff although I can't really think of more currently yet those are my TOP interests
Hobbies
Although I'm horrible at all these things I do enjoy the following activities
—Writing fanfiction
—Drawing
—collecting plushies
—over analyzing media
DNI LIST
Gonna make a DNI list because I don't wanna interact with weirdos. Pretty basic list as well, if you're any of the following please kindly leave me alone.
—pr*shippers
—Z**philes, p*dophiles, anything of the sorts
—people who promote hate speech like N*zis, homophobic people, transphobic people, anybody who in general hates anybody for their sexuality gender orientation, race, etc (I'm apart of the LGBTQ+ community and I'm not white at all, this shouldn't have to be said that I don't wanna interact with someone who hates me)
Final Things
I suffer from a lot of stuff as such I use fiction to cope, quite a few of my writings are a bit self indulgent in the angst sad to say. One such thing I suffer from is hypersexuality and I do write 18+ fanfiction involving my favorite characters to cope (I write smut, to put it bluntly) although I do try to be a genuine writer and a few of my works demonstrate some sort of semblance of competency. For obvious reasons I'm not gonna talk about my non-respectable NSFW works on here although they do exist on my AO3 and I feel like I should at least acknowledge them. In my writings I also like to capture the magic of old cartoons in their humor so if you read my stuff you'll notice a trend of me trying to write or mimic rubberhose gags through words and detail.
I'm also a multishipper and a giant simp for fictional cartoon characters and technical self-shipper. I'm making note of this as some people are uncomfortable with this for some reason? The characters I simp for also align with my interest in rubberhose characters like: Skitzo the 1920s Killer Bear, Oswald The Lucky Rabbit, Felix the Cat, The Cartoon Cat, The Cartoon Dog. Anything that's black and white and has that asthetic is something I'm interested in, and each of my interest holds a character I'm attracted to like FNF/newgrounds having the Tankmen, or Super Sonic from Fleetway's run of Sonic comics.
The ships I like are usually gay in nature but I do like straight ships too, I'm also a big fan of crack ships aka characters that wouldn't logically be together although I look at canon and say "nuh-uh, I can make this cute". I ship Oswald with any and nearly every toon (expect for Mickey for obvious reasons) and I'm the proud captain of the SkitWald ship aka Skitzo the killer bear and Oswald.
To sum myself up: I'm mainly a lover of the obscure or forgotten while trying to create works or content to bring attention to my favorite things while also just trying to keep myself together physically and mentally.
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I dread the day I forget to click the little "Ask anonymously" box. If that ever happens then please don't answer the ask I wanna be an anonymous little Star- Ahem. Anyway.
The art I meant is uhhh. Guys. I dunno I just like art of guys they look so good. And the reason I checked out your blog was actually the synesthesia thing! I remember years ago I was low-key obsessed with it for a while after reading a book that mentioned it (I can tell you about some related stuff from back then if you want those rambles? It's nothing too interesting but y'know)
Also since you add like. The perfect amount of line breaks I wouldn't mind any lectures or tangents or rambles y'know? Line yes give me a lecture about human experiments. I am interested. I could get invested. I wouldn't mind at all as long as you don't. Keep telling me about things that interest you so I can listen to an online stranger going by Reece, like how I am an online stranger going by Star, and you listen to me- what was I saying again?
Anyway uhh if you wanna hear more about that stuff I mentioned (or really anything I mention) let me know, especially since I'm finally at my pc now so I can type way faster and better
...Also I just reread your likes and uh. Bunnies, huh? Go on? (I love bunnies so stupidly much sagbkvhjab please show me some favorites if you can I will beg if you want--)
Okay byeee
- Star 💫
ofc ofc dw!!! I will simply pretend I do not see it. I'm not here to expose my darling anons :3
art of guys??? 😭😭 LMAO sick well. well well well. I will try to rb more art, I've been off my game abt rbing it recently. I should fix that smh.... gotta support the artists on here
oh really??? that's so cool!! I can't believe my silly little ask game encouraged you to say hi. I'm pretty grateful for it actually lololol. and wow. you read a book on it??? can you tell me about it, if you're up for it? I'd love to learn more ( ╹▽╹ )
HAHAHAHA LMAO GOOD TO KNOW GOOD TO KNOW!!! teehee, very pleased that I've lured you in w my synesthesia and my line breaks. I consider this an epic win 😎 and I will totally be rambling (with ample line breaks ofc!) for you, my Star!!!! I love it so much, I could yipyap for days abt my silly little interests LMAO
and damnnnn look at you go! speed race typing, I see you!!!!!! mwah. your dedication to the cause is impressive and endearing.
OFLKGLSJDJF BUNNIES!!!! OMG OKAY SO SO SO THEY'VE BEEN MY FAV ANIMAL SINCE I WAS A TODDLER!!!!!!
they mean so much to me yk??? like yk how some ppl have animals they feel drawn/connected to??? that's me with bunnies. always have done.
fun fact! once when I was about 4 I was chatting to one of my mother's friends about bunnies and I described my dream bunny in so much detail and how I'd look after it that she thought I actually had it as a pet 😭🩷
I also have some Miffy stuff!!! I love Miffy so much, she's so cute. I have a couple of jellycat bunny plushies as well as a HUGE white rabbit plush on my bed. so comfy and squishy kfldlskfkfd
I also wanna get a little Peter Rabbit tattooed on my ankle one day!!! I really do love them. all bunnies are good bunnies, but I have such a soft spot for long haired bunnies and for lop eared ones :(
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Terato Book Review: The Scorpion's Mate (Iriduan Test Subjects #1)
I picked this one up because it was the only monster romance novel I could easily find which had an almost entirely insectoid love interest. The first half has vague spoilers, such as descriptions of sex and if there was a happy end or not. Under the cut you’ll find a longer review with detailed spoilers. Here we go!
The Scorpion's Mate (Iriduan Test Subjects #1) by Susan Trombley. Claire gets randomly abducted while UFO hunting with friends and finds herself naked in a clinical, empty room which reminds her of a bug box. She soon meets Thrax, a half-insect-half-elfish-alien mutant who really, really wants to break open that box. Claire learns she's meant to be Thrax's mate so that the Iriduans can breed a race of super mutant soldiers.
This book is 30+ chapters of... varied length, and its plot was more shallow than the summary makes it out to be.
PROS ★ ★ ★
Thrax is pretty darn monstrous/alien! He has two venomous stingers, a hidden scorpion's mouth, and chitinous plates all over his body. Except Claire is disgusted by his arthropod mouth -.-'
There is smut and I found it to be inciting, save for the occasional unsexy word. Note the sex is relatively vanilla itself.
Breeding kink, aphrodisiacs, pheromones, and a uhh... creative reason to suck dick.
Competent enough to sit down and enjoy without needing a lot of mental energy.
A happy ending and no major character death.
CONS ★ ★ ★
The dialogue is generic and while the underlying plot had potential for a grand adventured, it actually is quite shallow.
It tries to be self aware at the beginning but then simply falls into the cliches it made fun of anyway.
The ending was rushed all to Hell. There are large time skips that feel unnatural and something just absurd for the last chapter.
Caricature-like villains made parts of the story feel cartoonish in an unfun way.
Trombley is more masterful at writing pure passion than she is at writing love and long-term romance.
Personally, I just don't think first person perspective works with smutty romance novels. It makes it awkward. Someone else may disagree.
★ ★ ★ WOULD I RECOMMEND THIS BOOK TO TERATO FANS?
Sure! It has good sex scenes and an interesting alien love interest. While I do think The Scorpion's Mate's writing is watery, this was written in 2018 and I have hope that more modern works by Trombley have improved. So, I think I will check out some of her more recent writing and see how it compares. However, I will not be reading more of the Iriduan Test Subjects series because the first book did not capture me enough to want to continue with this universe or these characters. It might capture you, though, and the 2nd book features a kraken alien as a love interest.
★ ★ ★ FINAL RATINGS:
Monsterousness: 8/10
Eroticism: 8/10
Story: 5/10
Characters: 5/10
MY FINAL SCORE: 6/10 (Generic romance novel with non-generic alien)
Spoiler time! Let's start with the writing and the good things.
This is the book that pops into your brain when someone talks about cheesy romance novels. Something generic, a little amateur, with a hot body builder hunk and a Hallmark movie plot. Some people enjoy that kind of thing, and if you're looking for a book not very complicated that relies heavily on smut you may really like The Scorpion's Mate! You can even just ignore the "plot" parts if you don't care for them. I did find the sex scenes to be enjoyable, and Trombley writes passion well.
That said, The Scorpion's Mate tries to make fun of the cheesy romance genre from chapter 1, quote: "I dog-eared the page I was on and tossed it into the back. 'These romance novels are all the same.'"
Unfortunately, self-awareness does not a better novel make. It makes fun of romance novels and the idea of falling into the lap of someone that should be big and strong and mean but who just so happens to like the main character, then love ensues. And then it does just that! The self-awareness then becomes second hand embarrassment.
Additionally, it uses first person perspective (I/me), which I personal find to be awkward in a smutty romance novel. This is because first person is great for journals, friends telling you stories, and interviews. So when a smutty romance novel is first person it feels like some girl you never met is gabbing to you about her very explicit sex life, or like you're reading a stranger's smutty diary. Someone else may feel differently, though, and this may actually be a plus for them.
The characters were... hmmm...
Speaking of Hallmark, while Claire's traits do not automatically make her a bad character, the way Trombley presents them gives her traits the impression of "not like other girls, but like so totally humble about it." (See my notes at the very end for more details)
All the characters have this shallow layer of characterization to them. Traits are tacked on, but rarely anything is actually done with them. Most traits and histories are left as a sentence or two; a lot of telling but not showing. For example, there's maybe two or three sentences tops about her father's death, but at the very end she says: "I’d already lost my father, and that had broken something inside me that it took falling in love with an alien to fix." Except... Claire was never sad in this book? "Broken?" Girl, where?
Instead, time is spent towards kindling the budding relationship between Claire and Thrax, if you could call it that. Their relationship boils down to Thrax protecting Claire and fucking her. By the end Trombley calls this love but I didn't see any love, just passion and sex. They don't have anything in common, never talk about things. A surface level relationship built upon pheromones, circumstance, and sudden time skips. There is no meat to their relationship but I did find the sex scenes hot.
Except for the alien dick cheese eating.
That bit was sorta weird, not gonna lie. A major plot point is Claire won't eat eels out of a sewer so Thrax concocts food for her like a mama bird that can only be excreted through his dick hole. Which when she eats, gets her super horny. I love the sex pollen trope, but in this case it came off as Trombley just not knowing how to get her characters to fuck without mind altering substances. So she makes her eat dick cheese for weeks. And then, when they are rescued, SHE STILL EATS DICK CHEESE! Girl has a homestead and fresh cooked meals but she still gobbles that alien dick cheese down like a starved animal! Sorry but 🤢
Aaand the plot
Scenes felt out of order as if Trombley mixed up her outline, characters make unintuitive decisions so Trombley can insert her fav fanfic tropes, and the last chapter was absurd. Literally soap opera absurd. The majority of the book is spent fucking around in a sewer doing nothing significant.
After the characters escape into the sewer... Thrax just stops running to fish for eels living in the water. Then they fuck. In the sewer. Nobody has come after them yet, either. Then they find a house janitors' used to live in (in the sewer) and then stay there for weeks fucking and eating dick cheese (sewer house) because Trombley wanted to use the "locked in a room" (locked in a sewer house) trope. Again, nobody ever comes after them and they are in the literal sewer right beneath the research facility. They had the option to escape too, but decided to piddle about for weeks. Claire even remarked: "If the Iriduans were still searching for us, they weren’t doing a very good job." This is stupid and makes their captors look super incompetent.
Some boring stuff happens and then, at the very end after Claire pops a baby out of her, her friend Ava who was there for like 2 seconds in 1 chapter at the start is suddenly there in the hospital room! Wearing a spacesuit and talking about destiny! WHAT! Where on Earth did that come from?? My notes describe my reaction best:
Some last goofy points and quotes:
Claire has 100k followers on YouTube for her dancing, is a super popular cosplay designer, gets hate online, sympathizes with insects while her friends scream at them, she's goth, "He didn’t really want me. Not the woman I am, with all my flaws," etc.
...At the end she teaches a few aliens industrial dance and after a week the entire galactic internet is doing her dance and asking her to make them Earth clothes. The entire. Galactic. Internet. But you know, its like, no biggie. Cause Claire is just, like, a flawed nobody, ya know?
Overuse of cheesy sci-fi words, particular "the before-times" and "now-times." Very Star Trek TOS episode language but less endearing.
Cartoony government villain scientists who think humans are inferior but feel the need to explain everything about their plan to one of those inferior humans anyway. Inconsistent characterization, because at the end the main villain even says: “I’m disappointed in you. I thought you were better than that.” At no point did the villains ever express the idea that they believed humans were capable of anything -.-
From my notes: "apparently she shaved her puss as soon as they got rescued?? ok. priorities"
Chapter 18 was super long and smutty, but chapter 19 was a useless transition where they just talked about eating for… at most 500 words? Weird decision.
Thrax had to think really hard to remember what a tongue was when referring to Claire's anatomy even though... he himself had a tongue.
Claire demanded to know how many women Thrax had been with and was jealous, but when he asks her the same she gets angry and says its none of his business. Ah, true love.
Trombley gave us a story about an insectoid with a hidden arthropod mouth and then had Claire be disgusted by it the entire book. Even the scene where she looks at it up close doesn't quell her continued disgust. Lame u.u
Thrax has two venomous tails that he can inject pleasurable venom with to make the victim feel good and happy, but even after talking about using it on Claire twice Trombley never delivers on that threat. Basically she wiggled a secondary aphrodisiac kink over our heads and never used it.
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We have derived Caranthir liking the Dwarves (and vice versa) because apparently, Finrod succeeds in every field Caranthir fails, and at this point it's clear this derives from the in-universe writer of the Silm and his own biases. Think about it: "Dark Finwë" , a grumpy, prejudiced lordling, and "Hair Champion", most handsome, noble king, have met with the same people!! Yet the king of the first secret kingdom is everyone's friend, but the prince that trades with them regularly is not... seems sus.
Hence, Caranthir is friends with the Dwarves. (But that is just an interpretation, so you're free to think what you wish, I just have several opinions on in-universe prejudice and the almighty narrative.)
I think that 'we' might actually have been Dawn Felagund years ago. Maybe this reading existed even before that, but I doubt that-- she's been very influential in silm fandom and was long before tumblr was much of a thing. https://dawnfelagund.com/caranthir-the-slandered
I wouldn't say it's 'clear' that what amounts to Caranthir's entire documented personality derives from the bias of the in-universe narrator, though as you can see from Dawn's writing it's a reading you can argue for. There are a number of different approaches you can take to the Silm and its biases anyway. One of the few times when it's absolutely clear the text isn't telling the entire story is when it talks about the Easterlings. I've posted about this before but the recorded names are, uhh.... the ones to betray the elves are unlikely to actually have been named things like 'ugly lord' and 'ugly beard.' 'Dark Finwe' on the other hand is a documented reference to his haircolour being dark like Finwe's own; hardly a negative judgement!
I personally think Caranthir can be exactly as ill-tempered and prejudiced as the Silm paints him without becoming an unsympathetic character. If a writer cannot make a moody, deeply prejudiced man an interesting character that is a failure as a writer; there are after all enough books who manage exactly that. That is not to say choosing not to write him that way is a failure (obviously not), but it's not necessary in order to make a reader feel for him at all.
Just going by the text, I think it actually might make for a more interesting narrative to explore in fic to me. Because he does change his mind about something, and at a very specific moment; when he meets the Haladin. That is much less dramatic if he secretly been as nice and popular as Finrod, and got along with everyone all the time already. He's been raised by Fëanor, who said things like 'No other race shall oust us!' and rallied the Noldor not motivated enough by vengeance for Finwë alone by playing on their deep-seated fear of being replaced by the Secondborn. Very unlikely that had no impact. At best it has made him uninterested in humans in his area (while they're not much of a threat to ruling instead of the elves anyway). The text says they paid them no heed.
And yet! Caranthir sees how brave Haleth and her people are. He 'does her great honour.' He changes his mind and offers them lands. His tragedy to me is not that of a slandered figure, but of this deeply, deeply prejudiced person raised to distrust the motivations of human beings -- who overcomes those beliefs, offers friendship, is rejected! then extends that same trust to the Easterlings anyway... and it's those specific Easterlings, not the ones who ally with his brothers-- who betray them all. And cause the disastrous ending of the Nirnaeth. It's the 'to evil end shall all things turn that they begin well' part of the curse hitting him in the least fair way possible. Someone finally changes for the better, and the outcome is treason and destruction.
That is a very good character arc to me, actually. His aesthetics-based scorn for the Dwarves is reprehensible but strikes me as deeply Elvish, and part of his prejudices. Naugrim is too unflattering a name for them for it not to be common. His temper-- well why can't he have one? Sure there's only one recorded instance -- but that's imo because there are hardly any conversations in the Silm! Anyway I like some people with tempers well enough. Personally I think people are missing out on opiniated grouches.
Obviously the biased anti-Feanorian Pengolodh reading is a nice one, and I have enjoyed a lot of stories written based it. But it's not at all a reading that is necessary for me to read Caranthir as a flawed but sympathetic character. He can have serious faults and still, ultimately, be someone I feel for.
What I was asking though was if I overlooked any canon evidence of Caranthir being particularly, personally fond of the Dwarves; and it seems I did not. Also; there is room for Caranthir growing to like the Dwarves over centuries without an anti-Feanorian bias reading this strong, there is simply no evidence for friendship in the rather barebones narrative (I'm not interested atm because it's wildly overdone to me & I like variety).
That said, in my opinion making Caranthir the hidden, slandered Feanorian Finrod equivalent with a dash of Curufin's Dwarf affection is not as enjoyable as simply working with what little canon character is actually there. Because there is one (and it's not the greedy tax collector of some fanon depictions either imo)
1. To start with, wrt Caranthir as the anti-Finrod, I don't think it works that well. Sure sure dark/light, open/prejudiced, repressed/shouty, but different motivations, different locations, plus they meet very different peoples even if both are Edain-- besides, Caranthir's own older brothers do successfully ally with the Easterlings without betrayal, while Curufin (much more so than Finrod! no Khuzdul for Finrod!) is the Dwarves' Friend(tm). Also, a flawed Finrod already exists. That's just the regular edition. He has his own faults and (very different) tragic arc.
If Finrod never seems to have strong prejudices to overcome, and if he's not confrontational (which... look he's a diplomat. Make of that what you will. Pretty awkward there in Doriath, buddy!) he does have trouble facing his own complicity (he wanted to sail those ships despite the murders) until Sauron beats him to death with it. He leaves Valinor with the idea of ruling but he has to give up the crown. He's ambitious, he seems emotionally repressed, he's.. possibly paying the greater Dwarves to drive the Petty Dwarves out of their ancestral home to build a city? Oops. Depending on the version you go with in that case, of course; there's also ones where he's free of the blame of that one. Not of wanting to sail those ships and being uneasy with the guilt wrt wanting to do so despite their being stolen and murdered for though. No he doesn't kill; but he wants to use the result of it anyway, and to make it worse he is actually half Telerin.
There's also (to be fair, only for sure after the disaster of the Sudden Flame because that's the recorded instance) his guards killing random innocent trespassers to keep his kingdom hidden -- yes, that's right there in Silm, yes he's still King at the time. Beren has to wave that ring. People just seem to miss that he'd be killed without it somehow.
I think it's just too easy to reduce him to the golden perfect opposite of Caranthir. Yes he's described more positively; he's also just mentioned more because unlike Caranthir he rules an actual kingdom, the greatest and richest in Beleriand in fact; and does things that have a lot of very longterm effects, like helping B&L steal a Silmaril. They don't 'meet the same people' anyway -- the Haladin have a different culture from the Beorians which contributes to their reaction to Caranthir (and iirc their later fate).
Sidenote: Dawn's essay attributes the Green Elves helping the Feanorians at Amon Ereb to Caranthir's diplomatic skills; but why not to those of Amras or Amrod? This is the quote; 'Caranthir fled and joined the remnant of his people to the scattered folk of the hunters, Amrod and Amras, and they retreated and passed Ramdal in the south. Upon Amon Ereb they maintained a watch and some strength of war, and they had aid of the Green-elves' -- nothing here indicates it was Caranthir who got them that aid. In fact A&A are the hunters, i.e. more likely to have roamed in various forests where they would have encountered Green Elves, imo.
There's also the very desperate times to consider in which this aid takes place. This is just post Sudden Flame, and even if the Green Elves didn't like Caranthir they probably liked him better than Morgoth. Also, speaking of cosmopolitans, Maedhros allies with, yes, Dwarves (Azaghal), Grey elves, Easterlings (and you might say: Fingolfinians); even part of the remaining people of Dorthonion rally to Himring post sudden flame (that means Edain and Arafinwean followers in Himring, at least for a time), and he manages to be friendly with Felagund despite calling him a badger. ;)
Finrod is not the only other leader to forge diverse alliances, and though B&L ends happily his people mostly do not. Caranthir's not much like Finrod in any way. Not in motivations, temperament, tragic arc. That's fine. No hidden kingdom for a dragon to eat either. Finrod could probably do with being a little less like Finrod sometimes, though he's well-intentioned and likable. Caranthir loves to shout and isn't sneaky. Good for him.
2. Curufin also already exists. His love for Dwarves is one of his defining and redeeming characteristics and boy does he need them. He's daddy's favourite, a sneaky overambitious bitchy bastard who is also a talented smith and linguist, and truly considered a Dwarf friend, which is apparently exceptional. He's quite flawed; tries to help Celegorm force a political marriage, laughs with a bruised mouth, seeming to lose his mind while attempting and failing murder after first losing his own stronghold and then the city he tried to take from his cousin. He's just... a personality. Mostly a bad one! You can feel for him though, because he seems like an utter mess. Many 'i would love to study you' feelings on my part. Would hate for him to be real but also I'd pay to be his therapist.
3. And then finally there's Canon Caranthir. A difficult, prejudiced person who despite that (which doesn't at all have to mean there is no despite, the despite is what makes it juicy)
- seems to be responsible for re-establishing (large scale?) trade with the Dwarves, whatever he might think of them (and they of him) to their mutual benefit. I don't think he's greedy either. It seems like a mutually profitable situation. Access to Dwarvish goods seems pretty vital to Beleriand, and facilitating trade is a real service.
As someone pointed out in the replies, the Silm does mention Dwarvish companies travelling east to Nan Elmoth and menegroth various times, but quote wrt Caranthir says 'Caranthir’s people came upon the Dwarves, who after the onslaught of Morgoth and the coming of the Noldor had ceased their traffic into Beleriand' and 'when the Dwarves began again to journey into Beleriand.'
They stopped at some point and Caranthir's people made it happen again.
- which means he's practical. He seems like he's good at organising, and setting his own feelings aside if necessary despite his prejudice and temper (which is an achievement it wouldn't be without his, hm, everything). Also he and his people as well as the Dwarves work together well because ''either people loved skill and were eager to learn,' despite their (initial?) mutual dislike. Those aren't bad characteristics; seems like it was an exchange of skill as well as goods and possibly providing safe travel opportunities.
I don't like the 'greedy Caranthir' fanon and don't think it is even that easy support entirely with canon. 'They had of it great profit,' the text says-- both Caranthir and the Dwarves. They exchanged skills and knowledge and Caranthir seems to have helped them start trading in Beleriand again. That's hardly Scrooge Mcduck.
- Another thing we can say about canonthir (lol) is that he apparently attaches a lot of value to aesthetics (was he a visual artist? is a he a sculptor like Nerdanel? WORSE: AN ART CRITIC?! Feanorian art critic is truly nightmare fuel) and that's why he dislikes Dwarves (of all things...). Either way points to 'aesthetics' as something apparently important to Caranthir. Which makes sense given who his parents are. What is interesting to me is that this apparently DOESN'T matter to Curufin, who is a lot like Feanor in most things. That's interesting!
I've never, never seen this but I think it would be very funny to attribute his aesthetic prejudices to Nerdanel. I love her; but why should her opinions be perfect? I know she wasn't considered beautiful herself, but she's an artist. She's got to have had some strong opinions on aesthetics anyway. I doubt it's the beards; Mahtan had one as well. And 'stunted'...at least some of this comes down to the Elvish obsession with height yet again. Hm.
- eventually Caranthir overcomes what have to be some very deeply held beliefs about human beings and their place in the world, and offers what for all intents and purposes looks like real friendship, not the ruling over Men Feanor seems to have had in mind at best. He's capable of real change!
Anyway his character works just fine to me from canon, and what he achieves and the ways in which he fails are more interesting that way rather-- neither slandered Feanorian Finrod 2.0 nor Curufin 'Dwarf Fan' Feanorion without the sneakiness and murder attempts pack the same punch as a stupidly prejudiced grouchy man doing his best anyway for centuries in this stupid ugly cursed land, eventually changing for the better, opening up-- and being brutally punished for it by the Doom.
Dammit. I hope there's therapy in the Everlasting Darkness.
hm a bit long but that's what I get for trying to gather my thoughts wrt why after considering it a bit transferring Curufin's love for Dwarves to Caranthir is a bit boring to me personally. Though there are still stories that still do it very well.
#no one asked including me but there you go anyway#that's what you get when i wake up at nearly 3 in the morning and thnk. FUCK i can't sleep#caranthir
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winning!Ranmaru Kageyama x Reader: What Have You Done?!
a/n: i just finished the most recent installment in yttd andn holy fuck,,,,,,winner! ranmaru just. holy shit! i love him so much. (also i guess you sort of take saras place? like shes there but youre ranmarus buddy instead and uhh hc that she got joe’s doll for a partner because i love thme) hgnghgh)\
also please leave requests!!! please!!!! for almost any character from almst any fandom!!!!!! please!!!!!!
also this is....a long one. probably gonna be a two parter! <3
“I’ll hold him back, just go! Reko...she....she’s-”
Watching with the others in the classroom as Kurumada held Ranmaru to the ground by his head, you looked down at Ranmaru’s pleading expression.
Before you could reach for him though, you were quickly ushered out by your panicked friends and allies.
Ranmaru....what did you...
◤...three hours prior to this...◢
“Keiji! I’m here! Please come out, everyone is so worried!”
“y/n....”
“Are you...there Keiji?”
A hand that clamped around your shoulder sent you into shock as you sprawled forward to the ground. “Waugh!!! Wh-who!?!?” You whipped yourself around to face a concerned looking Ranmaru.
“Heya y/n.” He said with a smirk and a wave. “Gah! Ranmaru, you scared me...!”
“Clearly.” He smiled as he offered a hand out to you. You gave him a pleased smile as you took his hand. “So....Keiji was a no-show, huh?”
“I mean, Sara was too worried to go alone so I offered to go in her place...but it looks like we should have followed Keiji’s instructions, huh?” You laughed dejectedly, as the missing friendly policeman’s absence was beginning to create a deep worry in the back of your mind.
The expression on your face seemed to clearly resemble your disappointment of not finding him, as a pair of fingers snapped out in front of you.
“Heeey? Earth to y/n, I asked you a question. You alright?”
You gave a curt, polite nod. “Sorry, yeah, what did you say again?”
Ranmaru sighed as he patted your back, “Man, you’re a mess today, eh? I asked....ᶦᶠ ʸᵒᵘ ᵍᵃᵛᵉ ᵃⁿʸ ᵗʰᵒᵘᵍʰᵗ ᵗᵒ ʷʰᵃᵗ ᴹᵃᵖˡᵉ ˢᵃᶦᵈ....” The last part was quietly spoken, but you heard what he said, and you knew what he meant.
“What!? You mean about what she about....winning?” Ranmaru’s uneasy expression meant that was exactly what he was talking about.
“We can’t! E-everyone has been...working so hard together, and with you all as our new allies-” “They’re not all your allies. We were made to get rid of you humans, but Maple told me something the rest of them don’t know. Why won’t you let me act on it?! I can save us, save you!”
“That’s enough! I can’t...hear you say that. Not you, Ranmaru, please.”
“You wouldn’t have to do anything, y/n, I swore I’d protect you. Reko, Sara, Keiji, everyone! I’ll kill them, and I’ll get you out of this horrible game!”
As if the idea of winning crossing Ranmaru’s mind at all hadn’t hurt enough to hear about, here was your partner for this entire floor’s length of horrors telling you he’d kill all your allies to save the both of you.
Ranmaru wasn’t wrong. You were tired. You wanted to go home. You missed your friends, and your regular old life. You adored Ranmaru, and even without knowing what to do after this could end, you wanted to have him by your side.
What am I thinking?!
“Ranmaru! I don’t want you to protect me. I want us to all escape together, and I could never ask you to betray our allies!”
Something about the way you delivered that line stuck with Ranmaru though. You couldn’t ask him? Then you didn’t have to. He’d help you, and he’d take all the responsibility too. All the guilt, the hardships, the terror? He could handle it...if it was for you. You and him were going to win, and you were going to live. And after all his efforts, maybe, just maybe, you could be his.
And with the seeds sown, Ranmaru’s mind began racing with ways to get every single human and doll eliminated before they could realize what was going on.
And that would begin with the lovely, unknowing Ms. Reko.
◤...present time...◢
“Oh...no....” Sara uttered, her breath entirely taken away from the sight before us.
The magnetic trap mechanism in the locker room had been activated while Reko was in it. “Reko, please, no...holy shit...” Q-taro mourned. Her grotesquely snapped neck was just barely holding her entirely hanging body to the ceiling by her collar.
Everyone was whispering their words of loss and grief. You couldn’t speak though. You instantly made the connection between Kuramada tackling Ranmaru and what he had said about getting here quickly. This was preventable. And actually....
This was your fault.
Ranmaru wanted you to win, and he wanted you to take him with you. You didn’t chastise him enough to stop this, and now Reko’s blood and tears were on your hands.
The quiet stip-step of shoes tapping on the concrete floor sprung you from your remorseful daze. “y-y/n...I swear...I didn’t-”
A louder, heavier pair of feet could be heard hitting the solid ground harshly.
“Bastard! You’ll pay for what you’ve done!! My trust, their trust, you’ve ruined everything!” Kurumada went in for a swing as Ranmaru barely dodged him, bumping his backside into your front.
“NO! It wasn’t me! I wasn’t even anywhere near this room, I was with y/n!”
“That was a whole goddamn hour ago, you lying piece a’ shit! You woulda been in the control room well after that!”
“Why would I kill Reko?! I had no motive to kill the humans, our tasks were erased and our connections were cut! I would never-”
“Bullshit. No motive? What was all that crap about winning for, then?”
Ranmaru fell silent.
“You...you thought I was dead. And you thought you could leave the transceiver on and cheer yourself on for winning the game, huh?!”
Ranmaru’s silence persisted, your stomach dropping further than you thought possible.
He took a slow inhale...
“Yeah. I did think you were dead, but now I see you’re just as big of an obstacle as ever. All you damn dolls. I’ll get rid of you all, and y/n and I are gonna win.”
“Ranmaru...”
“I didn’t think I’d get caught on the first try, I mean geez! I really hoped it’d be easier than this, that I could be stealthy, but apparently not...”
It was like his entire demeanor changed. His usual hesitance to speak, his more crouched and small frame, and his kind meekness were all completely stripped away, replaced by this malicious, devious darkness that seemed to emanate off his body.
“Well, well! Somethin’ fun’s happening in here, amirite?!”
“M-Midori!?” You cried out as his arm creepily slung around your shoulder. You backed away as Ranmaru stayed staring him down. “Ohh, what perfect timing. Midori...I have a deal for you, something to keep this game interesting.” Ranmaru sounded like a perfect copy of Midori, it was beginning to frighten you. Reko’s body still left all the survivors in shock, no one but the three dolls who were as lively as ever being able to speak.
“ ᴿᵃⁿᵐᵃʳᵘ...ᵖˡᵉᵃˢᵉ, ᵈᵒⁿ'ᵗ...“ You finally uttered.
“What might this deal be, my pathetic doll?” Scoffing at his comment, Ranmaru pleads with him, “If you could just please...kill the dolls. Leave me as the sole doll and I swear I’ll give you a show you’ll never forget.” You weren’t sure what made you sicker, the grin that was spread across both Ranmaru’s and Midori’s faces, or the dark tone Ranmaru suddenly took, his genuineness shining through. He would kill every survivor. You might really win, and you still didn’t know what to think about it.
The tension in the room was so thick you could slice through it with a knife. Everyone's eyes were trained on you, Ranmaru, and Midori. You felt sick, the energy of the room suffocating you slowly.
"I think I could do something like that."
As if it couldn't drop any lower, your organs practically just disappeared from inside you. "H-hey, you're not...serious, are ya?" Q-taro finally spoke up, the first of the survivors to actually something.
"Why wouldn't I be? This deal is of great benefit to me....and y/n it seems." Midori's tucked in smile sent shivers down your spine as he stared at you with his widened eyes.
"First though...the banquet has to happen."
The reminder brought the most sincere relief you'd ever felt in your life. You still had time to convince Ranmaru not to go through with his ridiculous sabotage plan.
The room calmed as everyone slowly and hesitantly made their way back to the graveyard. How was anyone supposed to work together after something like that...?
◤...to be continued (eventually)...◢
I HAD TO END THIS BECAUSE I WAS SLOWLY FORGETTING WHERE I WAS GOING WITh thIS SO ILL START WITH THE BANQUET IN THE NEXT PART TY FOR READING PLEASE REQUESTS MWAH ILY BYE BYE<3
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Seeing you for the first time pt.2 (ft. Albedo, Xingqiu, Venti, and Razor)
summary: how they react when seeing you for the first time
G/N reader
warning(s): misspellings, grammar mistakes (?), some scenes from windblume festival in Venti's and some from Razor's lore and a little angst ig
fluff!
(A/N: hey there, I'm back..this time I wrote for the other characters, i hope you enjoyed it)
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Albedo:
You met this boy at Dragonspine
That boy literally spent 24/7 of his life in that place ._.
He was at Starglow Cavern, painting cave structures and some hilichurls
You entered the cave and continued your adventure there (finding the history about the place)
Suddenly, a bunch of hilichurls started to attacked you..
There he saw how calm you are in that position, just swaying your sword back and forth elegantly
He just stands there and didn't realise that you've finished fighting the hilichurls and stared at him
"You know..it's not nice to just stand there and do nothing" you joke
"Oh..uhh sorry, I kinda zoned out.." he blurts
"ahaha, it's alright..i can see it on your face" you said
Albedo is literally stunned by your appearance, your figure, your eyes, everything
"I'm y/n, are you always go to this place?" you asked him
"Oh uhh, yes actually..i always do some research on this place..I'm Albedo btw" he respond
"Ahh I see.." you said, after that you accidentally saw his paintings
There was a painting of hilichurls and sketches of..you fighting?
"uhh are those your drawings?" you asked him
His face flushed because he got caught sketching a portrait of you
"Uh..yeah, you were an interesting...'view' let's just say..so I decided to draw you" he confess
You actually find his drawings beautiful yet pleasing to look at
"Wow..these are beautiful" you speak
The boy is literally out of words ngl, he's used to get some compliments from other people, but somehow..compliments from you made him flustered
"a-ah..w-why thank you.." he said
"Uhm..maybe you could come and join me next time..maybe pickup some materials or sightseeing areas of Dragonspine" he adds
"Of course, I'll go with you" you said
You two always spend time together at the mountains, well.. even though you don't go there everyday..lol
You always helped Albedo on his 'unusual' experiments or even tell him your stories of your adventures
The boy loves your eyes, he literally could get lost in those beautiful pairs..
Even though he painted it or sketches it..the feel is still different compared to looking at it directly
The feel just makes his heart race..<3
"𝘠𝘰𝘶 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸, 𝘺𝘰𝘶'𝘳𝘦 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘣𝘢𝘣𝘭𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘰𝘴𝘵 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘰𝘯 𝘐'𝘷𝘦 𝘴𝘦𝘦𝘯 𝘴𝘰 𝘧𝘢𝘳 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘐'𝘮 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘐 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘭𝘪𝘬𝘦 𝘺𝘰𝘶.."
Xingqiu:
Like Albedo, he always spent most of his time at a certain place, for him..the place is the library
So... you obviously met him there
He was looking for a book that he wants to read since the last couple of months
The book was actually rare that not many people knew or read it..so he's looking for it
You actually borrowed the book from the library and you wanted to returned it
He currently asking the librarian when you suddenly walk to the counter and returned it
"I heard that you want to borrow this book?" you asked
"Oh..yes, I've been wanting to read it for sometime now" he answered
"It's quite rare that people actually read this book though and yet it actually caught your attention" he added
You nodded and smile at him "Yes actually, I was reading a few pages and then I was so in to the book, i have to borrow it"
You both laughed as you leave the library
"My name is Xingqiu btw, may I ask yours?" he asked
"I'm y/n, nice to meet you Xingqiu"
There, you two talked for archons know for how long
You two sometimes switched books from your collections or maybe go out and find some interesting books
Other than reading, Xingqiu enjoys going on adventures with you
Seeing the nature around him makes him feel lighter
He really loves to read books though, but he tries to make you comfortable as much as possible around him
Maybe he'll try to take you out on a stroll around Liyue Harbor or maybe eat at Wanmin Restaurant, depending your mood
Sometimes you guys planning to pull another prank on Chongyun LMAO
He wants to make sure that you're comfortable around him and feel happy around him
All in all, he wants to see you enjoyed his company
"𝘏𝘦𝘺, 𝘸𝘢𝘯𝘯𝘢 𝘨𝘰 𝘦𝘢𝘵 𝘢𝘵 𝘟𝘪𝘢𝘯𝘨𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨'𝘴 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘦? 𝘐 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦'𝘴 𝘢 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘤𝘪𝘢𝘭 𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘶 𝘵𝘰𝘥𝘢𝘺, 𝘐'𝘭𝘭 𝘵𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶.. 𝘮𝘢𝘺𝘣𝘦 𝘢𝘧𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘦𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘸𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘨𝘰 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘯𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘳𝘣𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘣𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘦..𝘺𝘰𝘶𝘳 𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘪𝘤𝘦"
Venti:
You met him at The Windblume Festival
It was your first windblume, so you're still confused about the traditions that happening around
He was in front of the Cathedral finding students for his poetry class
When he saw you, he waved at you and you approached him
"Hey there! New to the festival?" he asked
"Oh yes, I've lived in the city for awhile but i never experienced this festival before.." you answered
"Ehe, allow me to explain it. The Windblume Festival is a Festival in Mondstadt celebrating the thousand winds. Usually, the people of Mondstadt offers windblume to the anemo archon and to their special loved ones" he explains
"The people actually have to take their matters into their own hands, so they don't really have anything to get helped with" he added
"Is that why when I asked if anyone needs help, they say they don't need one?" you asked again
"Hehe, that's right" he says, "Oh, I haven't introduced my self haven't I? ehe, my name is Venti, the most popular bard in town!" he adds
"Your that bard, I've heard great things about you, my name is y/n, I'm just a regular adventurer.." you replied
He shrugged and acts a little nervous when you said that
"So uh.. want me to take you around town and see what people are doing?" he offered
"Sure, that would be nice.." you said
With that you two took a stroll around the town
Seeing people prepare gifts for their loved ones, the atmosphere feels so wholesome
You guys even took a little trip to Windrise, and he even play you a tune or two
You really enjoyed his company and he’s enjoying it too
During the festival, you guys grew closer together, and maybe you guys would perform together in front of the Cathedral
You were really happy that you have someone to enjoy the festival with
Even Venti feels a lot of joy hanging out with you
He wonders that he could be with you for a long time..
Well, whatever he is feeling, he wants to grow more closer to you :3
"𝘠𝘰𝘶 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸.. 𝘪 𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘦𝘯𝘫𝘰𝘺𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘺𝘦𝘢𝘳'𝘴 𝘧𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘷𝘢𝘭 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘺𝘰𝘶, 𝘪 𝘶𝘴𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘴𝘱𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘧𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘷𝘢𝘭 𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰��𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘳𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘪𝘵𝘺 𝘢𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘦..𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘯��𝘸 𝘺𝘰𝘶'𝘳𝘦 𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘬 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵. 𝘞𝘢𝘯𝘯𝘢 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘚𝘵𝘢𝘳𝘴𝘯𝘢𝘵𝘤𝘩 𝘊𝘭𝘪𝘧𝘧 𝘵𝘰 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘤𝘩 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘶𝘯𝘳𝘪𝘴𝘦? 𝘦𝘩𝘦"
Razor:
Bless this wolf boy :")
You two met at his habitat, Wolvendom
You were currently adventuring at that place
When you're peacefully strolling around the place, you saw a bunch of wolves dead..
So you rushed to see where it was coming from
There, you saw a boy fighting against an abyss mage, boi... that thing really do like to cause trouble
The boy looked really angry despite the mage killed his wolf packs
You determined to help him and so you did..
After you two defeated the mage..he turned to look at you, "thank you... lupical, dead.." he said
This baby almost cried because he couldn't save all of them, only a few of them that are safe..
"I tried to protect them...but I failed...", he said in a sad tone
You looked at him sympathetically, "aww..it's alright..you tried your best, it's not your fault.." you said to him
He looked really sad and disappointed, but at the same time he felt kinda relieved that someone was there to help him
"Why did you come here..?" he asked, "Oh, I was just adventuring and then I suddenly found you..." you said
"My name is y/n.." you added, "I'm Razor"
"Do you come from here Razor?" you asked again, "yes..I was raised by wolves, Razor has no human family" he said
You were shocked that there's actually someone who is raised by wolves
"I see..." you said, "I think some of your wolf friends got hurt..may i help?" you offered him
Razor nodded and help you as much as he could
"There, that should do it.. they can't move that much for awhile, but they'll be alright.." you said to him
Razor was very grateful that he could find you, maybe he would be doomed if you hadn't come..
"You're strong...can Razor learn from you..?" he asked shyly :")
"Of course, I would be happy to teach you" you say
Razor smiled a little, he wanted to learn from you so that he could protect his lupical if something bad like this would happen
The next day, you came back to Wolvendom and train him
He picked up the lesson pretty quickly, and he now learnt how to use his Vision
You even teach the boy how to write and read loll v:
You came to Wolvendom couple of times, and besides train him, you helped him hunt some meats to eat
You never really force him to come and live at the city, but if he wants to visit it once or twice..you bring him there
Razor is really happy now that he learned new things from you and also has a friend that helped him..
Sometimes he wonders if he could protect you from danger too
He just didn't want to lose you like he loses his other wolf friends
Razor silently swore to him self that he will protect you from any danger that you encounter
Overall, you guys cared about each other and wanted to protect one and other, he just wishes that you'll be saver around him <3
"𝘛𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘬 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘩𝘦𝘭𝘱𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘙𝘢𝘻𝘰𝘳... 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘰𝘭𝘷𝘦𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘸 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺'𝘳𝘦 𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘺. 𝘈𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘭𝘴𝘰..𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘬 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘮𝘦 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘣𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘧𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘯𝘥, 𝘥𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘧𝘰𝘳𝘨𝘦𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘷𝘪𝘴𝘪𝘵 𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯..."
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(A/N: AHHH this is not like I wanted in my head...I hope you liked it, leave me some suggestions what I should write next, I still have some couple of ideas, but requests are open...so yeah ANYWAYS- thank you and good day :D)
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