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wikiangela · 4 months

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seven sentence sunday

tagged by @diazsdimples @theotherbuckley @hippolotamus @daffi-990 💖💖

after waaay too long - the alive shannon fic is baaaack! my beloved <3 finally got through a scene I was stuck at (more or less, it'll get improved when I edit lol) and made quite a bit of progress! so here's a few sentences from the ladder truck bombing! (Buck's POV has been fighting me so hard, Eddie's is always easier bc he just takes over and does his thing, and Buck apparently doesn't wanna cooperate with me lol) this is very rough and needs lots of editing - but at least I'm finally making progress so here it is 🤣

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It all happens so quickly he barely remembers the actual explosion. But he knows that there’s a split second, somewhere between sitting in the ladder truck, and lying on the ground, covered in blood, ears ringing, in excruciating pain and unable to move his leg – there’s a second between all that where he genuinely thinks he’s going to die. That’s it, the end, without so much as a chance to say goodbye to Maddie, to Bobby, to Hen and Chim, to- to Eddie and Christopher. To anyone he loves. For a second he’s convinced he’ll never get to talk to any of them again, that he won’t get to talk to Bobby, eat his delicious cooking during a family dinner, that he won’t get teased by Hen and Chim for something dumb he does for a hundredth time in a week. That he won’t get to see his sister heal and find happiness and love again, that he won’t get to see Chimney treating her like she deserves, like Buck knows he will. He’s scared he won’t get to hang out with Eddie, the best friend he’s ever had, that the short time they had together was all he’ll ever get. That he won’t get the privilege Eddie’s already granting him of watching Christopher grow up, of being there for him whenever he’d need him. A split second, and he thinks his life is ending, that’s it for Evan Buckley, leaving this world forever, not even leaving a mark behind, probably getting forgotten by everyone but his family, sooner or later even them. For a second he thinks, maybe it’s okay, maybe it’s better that it’s him than anyone else.

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#the alive shannon fic #seven sentence sunday #shannon diaz #buddie wip #buddie fic #wikiangela writes #my writing #fic snippet #my wips #took me like 2 months to get back on track with this fic lmao #left a half finished scene and multiple half finished paragraphs with so many notes and highlights #and it was painful to look at how disorganized it was 🤣#shes back tho 😍#ngl im never as nervous to post snippets as with this fic 🤣 and also never as excited haha

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brainworms-all-night-long · 1 month

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I swear I'm going to develop a habit of just writing words halfway so I can catch up to my train of thought before it fizzles out and after I'm done go back to fill in the blanks

#thinks up seven beautifully eloquent paragraphs only to forget them the second I start writing them down #just hold on a second let me write you!!! stop forgetting!!!#sigh i wish writing could be like. telepathic yn #just thinking up words and their automatically put on the page #obviously it would than take hours of editing but thats easier than coming up with new text!!!

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waywardstation · 9 months

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I was just thinking how nice a little snippet of one of your works would be...

That snippet hit like a train. This whole part will be such an agonizing experience to read. I'm usually someone who is able to stomach much but this somehow hits hard... Also even on the brink of dying Ingo still remains as polite as possible. oh this makes me tear up even in his state he remains himself.

Either way a big SUPER BRAVO for this nice new WIP

Also please make sure to rest and drink plenty. Get better before you plan anything. And WIP "Wednesday" doesn't always have to be Wednesday anyway. If you got a WIP ready post it whenever you feel like it and feel good enough! Health comes first! Don't overwork your cab!

In regards to my recent WIP from IWLYB

Haha yeah apologies for that, last weeks WIP was lighter so I went a little tougher with this one. These aren’t even the toughest parts I don’t think, I’m not going to put those parts into WIP Wednesdays. But I don’t know; I’m entirely indifferent to angst when I’m the one writing it, and I know everyone handles things differently ^^;

And yes Ingo is trying his best for Akari’s sake. It won’t be able to hold up forever, but until then he really does try his best ;(

THANK YOU ANON both for the praises and for the reminders!! I often find segments I like to save for WIP Wednesdays I just forgot entirely this time and combed through the doc last night to find something that wasn’t too spoilery haha.

BUT THANK YOU!! I’ve still got that 3k Phione Akari AU snippet to post. I meant to get it out last week, but decided to squeeze in another request I recently got and it’s now 5k+ haha. It’ll be out soon but I’m definitely taking my time with finishing it until I feel a little bit better, and my mind isn’t so foggy anymore. ^^

#wayward’s asks #i won’t leave you behind #my issue is I keep thinking I only have a few more sentences to add #and then I read through it again and decide I want to rewrite like seven paragraphs from scratch #cause it’s all so bloated and I can really condense the info down #or write something clearer visually #and being sick that’s really hard to do the way I want #but don’t worry I’m going at my own pace

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whump-queen · 2 years

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oh look it’s sad anime boy hours again

WIP of my oc Seven

More art

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kagejima · 2 years

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dear brain, you are not going to describe things as well as other writers do. you're just not. describing is not your strong suit and you know this. no two writing styles are the same and you have GOT tO STOP BEATING YOURSELF UP ABOUT NOT BEING ABLE TO DESCRIBE THINGS WELL because then nothing gets written and that's why you haven't put out a goddamn thing since fucking September OHMYGOD just write and have fun what IS WRONG WITH YOUUUUUUU

#im literally having a fucking crisis because instead of just writing my dumbass brain is like #'oh this paragraph isn't seven fucking sentences of description after the dialogue'#like GIRL CALM DOWN WE DON'T EVEN GET PAID FOR THIS #sometimes im like ....... hiatus sounds nicer and nicer every day #i literally want to cry every time I scroll past a fic that has like 500 or 1k notes I am not doing well #pms-ing? maybe! who knows!?#🎤: rae is in the vocal booth

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deadlittledogs · 1 year

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NOOOO

No way… u and that other artist aren’t friends anymore??????

I’m crying like a goddamn child of divorce rn 😢😭😭

HOW DO U THINK I FEEL, BRO…… I TRIED SO HARD, MAN…. I TRIED WITH EVERY FIBER OF MY BEING, I tried until I was literally sobbing and puking in the toilet and screaming and pulling out my hair but it changed nothing and I was still abandoned and eventually it hurt so bad I fell out of love :3 ‘Tis the life of Bear <3

#someone asked for an explanation on what happened and I ended up sperging out and writing like 6 paragraphs worth #I was Like…. I probably shouldn’t air my dirty laundry like this 😭#I’m just so hurt and angry the need to scream about what a rancid person she is is too strong #I AM TRYING TO BE A GROWNUP THOUGH…….#but also how do u cope after being a lapdog for seven years and then booted to the pound so u can go be a boring normie #lol #like I did all that for you….. WHY?!??#THIS IS THE THANKS I GET….. GO FUCK YOURSELF…….

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anaalnathrakhs · 1 year

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Heute ich habe gegessen eine Schokolade der Morgen, Mittagessen war mcdonald’s medium Pommes da mein Lehrer ist gegangen dort und ich und meine Mitschülerin geteilt, und das Abendessen war eingefroren Pommes und vegetarier Nuggets, da ich versuche mein Fleisch Verbrauch reduzieren. Ich zudem habe zwei Brot Stücken gegessen und ein Ice Tea getrinken.

#two birds with one stone: i register what i ate for the sake of mental health and i improve my german skillz #i barely even register as an A1 so feel free to correct the mistakes you see #but i'll show this to my teacher to fix the obvious grammar issues and all #i don't feel like i'm improving a lot using her methods #which are like. throwing us a german paragraph and asking us to pick up the crumbs of meaning we can find #she explains things in german and then never like. translates them. or writes them/spells them out?#which i mean. we are supposed to be speedrunning seven years of classes in two but yknow. i dont UNDERSTAND the mechanic behind the language #so i'm doing some duolingo on the side and now this i guess #what would work for me (i think based on the way i learned english) is blind idiot translation under every sentence #to get the hang of the grammar and vocabulary #cuz i'm shit at categorizing grammar in every language but i'm fairly good at instinctively using it so familiarizing myself is my best bet #but i don't know how to go about finding that except asking someone to prechew it for me #and since my teacher is all ''never even look at google translate or a dictionary or anything just ✨start from the french word✨''...#yeah #broadcasting my misery

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katnissgirlsmakedo · 1 year

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the need to invent a paper that i can actually write.

#this is a reflection on my own fucking experiences that draws quotes from things i've read. you'd think it wouldn't be this hard.#and yet. i have been struggling to write this shot all week.#it's 4:30am i'm sooo tired but i literally will not be able to write any of this tomorrow so i NEED to finish it before i fall asleep #or it straight up won't get done.#the thing that's really killing me tho is that it has to be 7 pages. and this professor has really stressed how much he wants it to be 7 pa #pages. like he's said that as long as we meet the page requirement we'll be fine. but here is the thing!!! i am so bad at meeting page requ #requirements. i have like. 4 1/2 pages. and two more paragraphs to write.#like SEVEN pages???? man come on please.....

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overlyimmersed · 1 year

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Repetitive Conversations

I just kinda got a little writing bug. Tried to summarize several hours worth of daydreaming dialog and kinda didn't do great, but here's this anyway.

"Well, you're not a coward." Maranwe states, the newest vain of the unpleasant conversation they've been having for the past two hours. It started the way this conversation usually does, with her crying and admitting to the part she played in the human incident seven hundred years ago. Trying to take the blame for it. She always does. Taking all the blame and wholly absolving him, Helbram, siting her rank as Bard to the Fairy King as the reason she has responsibility and He doesn't. Repeating how she should have listened to her own instincts, insisting she just couldn't stand to burst his bubble, and begging for forgiveness he's given a thousand times. Even though he doesn't even blame her to begin with.

From there it'd gone a little tangential, as conversations with Maranwe always do. With Helbram trying to shoulder at least some of the burden by siting his violent response to the incident as a reason mistakes should be forgivable, since she insists on hand-waving that as well.

"You have no problem owning up to the mistakes you've made." She offers sympathetically

"And you have no problem taking credit for thing you didn't do." Helbram shoots back, and immediately sees the reflexive hurt flash in her eyes. As she tries to break her eyes away from his, he grabs her shoulder to hold her attention.

His grip is as gentle as any of his other touches, but the adamance of his emotions makes it feel bruising. She tries to focus on his words.

"But only when it's something bad." a quick correction, and steadfast.

She believes him and meets his eyes again.

He stares into them for a moment, trying to read the raw emotions. He so wishes he was as good at this as she is. His own gaze softens and he moves his hand from her shoulder to her cheek.

His touch is still abrasive to her, but she's not blind to the love in it so she leans into his hand all the same willing it to be comforting.

"I wish you could forgive yourself as easily as I do…" he speaks quietly, caressing her cheek bone with his thumb. She doesn't respond. There's nothing she can say that she hasn't already.

#seven deadly sins #7ds #sds #nanatsu no taizai #nnt #7ds oc #nnt oc #7ds Helbram #nnt Helbram #Maranwe has a lot of emotional problems #she did have to sit alone with her thoughts for 700 years directly following a heavily traumatic incident #kinda internalized a lot of stuff #Those last two sentences are remain in that paragraph on purpose #those aren't Maranwe's thoughts #it's still Helbram just understanding why she's quiet so the perspective didn't change #This is like the bulk of how things happen in my AU #just little moments in my head that are mostly dialog and I rarely write them down #that's why most of the information is in the form of that big-ass timeline I have #I really don't consider myself a writer and am better at like overviews and outlines then actual fics

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gagmebucky · 2 years

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she (me) is in fact posting today 🥳 i have one fic already finished but i really wanna post the pt2 bad boy!bucky instead 👉🏼👈🏼 im superrr close to finishing it

#i was like six or seven paragraphs ready to finish it but… u ever get a last minute idea to add to a writing piece #and you’re like fuck. if I don’t add it it won’t hit the same 😔#it’s funny tho because the extra bit was mildly inspired by the livestream drabble I was fucking around with yesterday 🧍‍♂️#cockwarming and overstimulation makes me 😵‍💫😵‍💫 but intensified voyeur/exhibitionism also makes me 💥🔫😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫#(<- me shooting someone out of horniness)#god I miss doing fic fridays #FIC FRIDAYS I LIKE THAT BETTER THAN FILTHY FRIDAYS #wait… filthy fic fridays…?#but my fics are inherently filthy….#i love alliteration #NO EDITING BC PERFECTION DOES NOT EXIST AND I WILL NOT BE BAITED INTO THE YIPS AGAIN

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birgittesilverbae · 1 year

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au where I don't have to hold the hand of everyone on this group project.

#I've done the analysis and written 8/13 pages of that research paper the other three of you can get your shit together and finish it #like sure write one paragraph of the methodology and make seven separate comments on it of stupid questions to ask me #go on girl give me n o t h i n g #shut up em

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17yearcicada · 1 year

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okay goodnight.

#i was told to write 3-4 paragraphs for this assignment but i wrote like seven. oopsie.#both stressed about how late it is and not comprehending the time at all #not a fun emotion. would not recommend. anyway going 2 bed soon #listen 2 jcs & frankenstein 4 me. love u all okay goodnight #.txt

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elympios · 2 years

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you’d think after the sixth time of explaining the kresnik bros to people i would have figured out how to be more concise about it but you’d be wrong

for guys who have maybe thirty minutes total of actually sharing screentime these dumbass fools have SO MUCH GOING ON

#i am pleasantly surprised tho that people do listen to me ramble and then validate me on my life choices #i think x2 bros would be very compelling if it wasn't a FUCKING PAIN to explain them to people #also if the story didn't suck #i got to explaining the thing about fds and took a paragraph to be like 'yeah they basically advocate for genocide but dont think about it #or you'll get mad and write a whole fix it fic in sheer rage'#i need to make that powerpoint already #the title is gonna be 'what the fuck has v been vagueposting about for seven months'#v #x2

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neonsbian · 1 year

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rereading the vegetarian by han kang and i mentioned how this translation felt kinda weird and my prof was like i put up an article that critically examines the translation and literally i was getting angrier w each sentence reading that

#another reason i cant sleep btw #like i was giving her the benefit of thr doubt until i found out the translator was a white british woman who said #'i have no connection to korean culture. ive never even met a korean person before'#and that she was learning korean as she was translating this #and that she cut out seven paragraphs from p2 for no reason #the audacity of white women is truly astounding #i have more to say but ig ill save it for class/an essay i have to write for that class #vinnie talks

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thatwritergirlsblog · 1 year

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10 worst ways to start a book

1. An irrelevant point of view

It's extremely frustrating as a reader to read the opening scene of a novel, get invested in the story and start rooting for the POV character, only to have that character never show up again or show up as an unimportant character.

Your readers will feel betrayed. Why did they get emotionally invested in this character? Why did they care?

One of the most important functions of your first scene or chapter is introducing your main character and getting the reader to root for them.

Don’t waste that crucial moment on an unimportant POV.

2. Too many characters

Starting to read a new book is usually a bit confusing. You have to get to know new characters, a new world, a new writing style etc.

Don’t add to that confusion by introducing two dozen characters in the opening scene. Readers won’t remember their names or care about them; they’ll just feel overwhelmed and confused.

Additionally, readers will also struggle to root for the main character, because there are too many other people crowding the scene.

3. Telling

My name is Lisa. I’m a short, feisty brunette who loves horse riding. I have two best friends called Anna and Daniel, and we carpool to college every day. I have a crush on Josh, one of my tutors, but he’s twenty-seven and isn’t interested in me.

Telling is boring. It has its place, but the start of your novel is not it. The above paragraph could have been an interesting scene in which you showed the reader all the information via action and dialogue.

Unless you’re using subversion to surprise the reader, e.g., My name is Lisa and I’m a class-three demon, don’t start with telling.

Immerse the reader in the story through action, dialogue and the senses. Show us who the main character is, don’t just tell us.

4. Description

Please don’t start your book with a page-long description of the setting. In fact, I would recommend not starting with description at all.

Yes, a few lines of description later in the opening scene is fine. But the reader needs to care first.

No matter how beautiful your writing is, readers won’t be sucked in by a five-paragraph description of a field.

5. Worldbuilding info dump

Please don’t start your book with an explanation of your world’s climate, politics, history, magic system etc.

Once again, the reader needs to care first.

There needs to be action and conflict and a compelling plot. The world exists as a backdrop for the story and the characters – it’s not the protagonist and it shouldn’t take up the opening scene.

6. The dream sequence

The main reason that this is a bad way to start your book is that it’s been done way too many times.

But that’s not the only reason.

It also feels like a betrayal to the reader, because they got invested in the story and the character and the events, and then you tell them it was never real.

And oftentimes the storyline and world of the dream is much more interesting than the actual story, which makes the latter look very boring in comparison.

7. Looking in a mirror

Once again, it’s just been done too much: A character looking in a mirror and describing their physical appearance to the reader.

Firstly, no one describes their appearance in detail when they look in the mirror.

Secondly, the reader doesn’t even know who this person is. We don’t know if we’re interested in the character yet. We don’t know why we should care. So, we don’t want a detailed description of the character’s appearance right off the bat.

Show us interesting aspects of your main character’s personality, hobbies and life. Weave in physical description as it becomes relevant. It’s not important enough for the very first paragraph.

8. Starting way too early

Yes, most books don’t start with the inciting incident (although I recommend that they do), but the start of your book shouldn’t be too far away from your inciting incident.

So, don’t start with a long scene describing the main character’s everyday life. The readers want the thing to happen.

Providing context and introducing the main character is fine, but don’t leave the reader hanging for too long before you get to the good stuff.

9. Trying too hard

“Your first line has to be amazing and hook the reader. It needs to be something no one has ever read before.”

I bet you’ve heard that piece of advice hundreds of times. It’s not bad advice, but taken to the extreme, it creates an opening that is disjointed, conflated and confusing.

Your first scene should introduce your character, story and voice. So, don’t write a single line of profound purple prose that has very little to do with your actual story as a first line.

Focus on writing a good story. Introduce the reader to the book and make the main character intriguing. You don’t need a mind-blowing first line.

10. The lesson

Most books have a theme or something the author wants to say. Oftentimes, that takes the form of a life lesson.

This is good, but the lesson needs to be subtly woven into the story.

It should not be forced down the reader’s throat in the very first scene.

Don’t tell me what I’m going to learn, show me the lesson through the story.

If you’d like to read a Fantasy Adventure novel that does not have any of these opening mistakes, check out my debut To Wear A Crown.

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ruggiezz · 8 months

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— TWST CHARACTERS PLAYING ROBLOX : twisted wonderland

[synopsis] twisted wonderland characters play roblox and some of them fail miserably

[characters] heartslabyul, octavinelle, and scarabia

[extra] play roblox, is very entertaining, especially apeirophobia, 10/10 would reccomend. adeuce is a package deal you can't separate them. i may or may not have gotten carried away writing these

★﹕RIDDLE ROSEHEARTS — word bomb

He didn't even want to try it at first. That's a game for kids, right? He's occupied with his studies. Then you introduced him to Word Bomb, a game where he could show off the fact that he read an entire encyclopedia when he was a kid. He destroys people in the game; like, ok, you're supposed to write a word with the letters they give you, but how did Riddle come up with the word "uvulopalatopharyngoplasty"?

Now he plays in his free time, but he does it like his family's honor is at risk. He only lost once since he started playing, and he took it personally.

★﹕TREY CLOVER — bloxy bingo

One of the two who decided to pick a chill game. Trey is just trying to take a break; why are people insulting him in seven different languages because he won once? This game feels like he is in a retirement home playing with old people, except the old people are beefing with each other and buying like six different sheets to fill and have more chances to win. A kid even wrote him a whole paragraph in a language he couldn't even read; the only thing he knew was that they insulted his entire bloodline. At the end Trey got frustrated, but not to the point of fighting kids on Roblox.

★﹕CATER DIAMOND — 3008

Cater is not as nice as Trey; he actually does fight kids on Roblox. No, 'Progamerkiller1234', you cannot stay at his fort; it took him three days in the game to make it aesthetically pleasing; no, he doesn't care that the employees are chasing you and that you're about to die; that sounds like a you problem. People have tried to steal his place from him before, and he won't take the risk again. At this point, Cater doesn't even care about the SCP aspect of the game; he's just there to do a whole mansion with the furniture and to show off his pretty avatar. Now, if you ask him to let you stay at his place, he will let you, since you aren't a random person trying to rob him. But please help with collecting food while he's building.

★﹕ACE AND DEUCE — apeirophobia

It started with Ace saying something along the lines of "let's play this game just to laugh at how dumb it is", and somehow progressed into Deuce screaming because a Smiler scared him, Ace screaming because Deuce startled him, and you having to carry them through the game. The backrooms suddenly aren't funny anymore, but Ace doesn't want to quit because he "can't lose to a kid's game". So now the three of you keep replaying and replaying the game, dying in the most stupid ways possible. A Doppelganger killed you, the Titan Smiler caught Deuce because he got stuck, and a Skin Stealer kept killing Ace. You even had to spend 2 hours replaying the funrooms level, and when you thought the horrors were over, you lost the next level.

Please free Deuce from this suffering. It's 4 am and some random entity is chasing him, his throat will be sore tomorrow from how much he screamed. And never mention ever again that Ace screamed because he got startled when Trey knocked on his door.

★﹕AZUL ASHENGROTTO — work at a pizza place

The second Azul started playing, he overthrew the manager and took their position. There's a problem though: nobody works in this game; Azul has to do everything, and I mean everything. He's the cashier, the chef, the delivery guy, and the supplier; he's running around doing all the work. If he could name himself the employee of the month he would, but he's the manager, so the game doesn't allow him. This game got him stressed, and they didn't even pay him well.

Did that teach him to pay his Mostro Lounge employees better? No, the only thing he learned is that he shouldn't play Roblox again because, clearly, nobody there takes having a business seriously.

★﹕JADE LEECH — murder mistery 2

If you don't know what the game is about, it's a game where you're assigned a role every round: citizen, murderer, or sheriff; guess which one is his favorite role. Jade is having a blast; he acts like a pro in the game, and he always wins whenever he is the murderer. The worst thing is that nobody suspects he's good at playing because he has the basic Roblox skin; he refuses to change it because it's useful when playing. He is passively aggressive in the chat whenever someone provokes him, either that or he's just making fun of some random kid who got angry at him.

★﹕FLOYD LEECH — ragdoll engine

The only thing you do in that game is make your character suffer; Floyd likes that very much. The first thing he did was throw himself down the stairs, and then he just couldn't stop. Throwing himself off the highest stairs he could find, down a building, launching himself from a cannon—he just finds it extremely funny to see his character suffer. But his favorite thing is pushing other players. He's a menace; you can be doing your own thing, then he randomly approaches you and starts pushing you around, and he won't leave you alone. I mean, at least he isn't pushing people down the stairs in real life.

★﹕KALIM AL-ASIM — bee swarm simulator

The other one who chose a chill game. It's repetitive, yes, but Kalim is having the time of his life. You caught his interest the second you mentioned the cute bees; they all had cute faces and everything. He got emotionally attached to his bees, so now he plays every time he can. You know those types of players that you see and they make you think they have been playing for years? That's Kalim, except he has only been playing for a month; he has already spent a ridiculous amount of money on the game and on his avatar. He will show you his bees as if they were his kids.

★﹕JAMIL VIPER — natural disaster survival

Stressed, really stressed. Tell him why his character fell off a building because of a tsunami, or why he blew up, or why a meteorite fell on him. WHAT HAPPENED TO HIS LIMB? DID IT FLY AWAY WITH THE TORNADO?? There's so much going on, he's confused and can barely keep up. He has to admit that it's funny when your character dies for some random reason though, you're receiving the same treatment the game gave him.

"WHERE DID MY HAIR GO? WHY AM I BALD??" Jami said a few seconds before a tornado sent him flying.

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