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tofuwhale · 3 years

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Genshin Impact Boy Headcanons!! [Kaeya, Childe, Zhongli, Xiao & Diluc]

Me and my friend (Tofu) decided to make a bunch of headcanons while we were hyped up about the boys!!!! Please excuse our fangirling lol they’re mainly SFW with a little NSFW mentions in some

I might write one-shots based on these headcanons in the future lol, we’re also open to more headcanon prompts/characters so please leave us an ask!

Enjoy <3

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Type of Tiktok boys they would be

Kaeya

Kaeya would own a roleplaying account with the subtitles and shit where it’s like ‘POV: you’re on a date with me’

Smooth asf, actually makes you blush when you watch his tiktoks

Diluc

He would have an account where he’s just mixing cocktails and showing off his skills as a bartender in front of a window

Zhongli

Fashion icon asf

Mainly formal fashion like suits and shit

He’s confused by the comments because they all say “rail me” and Childe thinks it’s hilarious so he just doesn’t tell Zhongli what it means

Childe

WHITE BOY

STRAIGHT TIKTOK

he probably dances like noah beck

Xiao

Bitch doesn't know tiktok

OR he’s the anonymous type, he uses his mask to hide his identity and shows his hands only

Comments are horny

You bake a chocolate cake for your best boy!

Kaeya

So sweet would appreciate the cake

Tells you to close your eyes to spoon feed you asf

You start blushing and he laughs at you for being flustered so easily

Ends up plugging ur air holes with the cake bc he smashed it to your face

Runs off laughing as you run after him

Diluc

Just thanks you and eats the cake

If it turns out bad, he would ask to help you next time OR he just wouldn't say anything and smile at you painfully as he eats it

Offers to get a cook to make you something as well like a true gentleman but you refuse

Zhongli

Confused by the concept of chocolate cake, but tries it anyways to make you happy

Don’t get too happy, he’ll criticise your baking so hard till you have tears spewing out your eyes

Childe

LAUGHS AND SMILES His smile is so bright it blinds you

HEAD PATS!!!!!

Calls you a ‘good girl’

“Let’s eat it together, okay?”

Xiao

Says to you he doesn’t like chocolate when you give him it, but eats it when you leave anyways

Asks you to make more, not directly but hints it out later like

“I’m in the mood for some cake rn”

A total tsundere

What they’d be like if they’re jealous over you, or if they would even get jealous at all

Kaeya

He’d tease you about it but probably be hurt on the inside

“Woooow, is this your new boyfriend? Personally I think you could do much better,” and then winks at you

You’d pay for it in bed ;)

Diluc and Zhongli

They’d pretend not to be bothered, having trust in you and the relationship but would also secretly maybe ask around the city about who the dude you’re talking to is

Childe

SUPER JEALOUS!!! He’d make sure to let the other guy know that you’re his by hugging you really close and kissing you while the other guy is around

Maybe a little bit overbearing at times but he’s yours and you’re his so it doesn’t matter <3

Xiao

Wouldn’t know the concept of jealousy since he’s been alone all his life but he’d feel uncomfy seeing you talk to another person

He’d probably furrow his brows, pout and walk back to his balcony

Being a sad puppy, arms crossed and resting on the rails waiting for you to come back

What they would do if you got a cold and had to stay in bed

Kaeya

Teases you calling you stupid and laughs at you when you say it’s because you tried to pet a cryo slime

But he makes sure to take care of your commissions and work at the Knights’ while you’re sick

Diluc

Would personally see to it that you’re taken well care of at the winery

Would walk into the bedroom while he thinks you’re asleep and pet your head and tell you cute stories about his day so that you have good dreams

Zhongli

Silently makes you soup but fails immensely

you drink it anyways to be nice

Would crawl into the sheets with you while you're asleep to cuddle and then catch your cold

Childe

Holds your hands while you’re in bed and makes sure you get enough sleep, is actually concerned as hell and won’t make any jokes about it

Won’t be able to do any work or anything, he’d be worrying if you’re ok or not

SOOOOo happy when you’re feeling better but gives you a whole lecture about not staying out so late when it’s cold

Xiao

HE’D MAKE YOU ALMOND TOFU with soup on the side perhaps

Tells you to be more careful

Runs his hands through your hair when you’re about to sleep

First “I love you”

Kaeya

He’d teasingly say “i love you”

But he says it all the time so you can’t tell whether he’s being serious or not

Would let you suffer alone trying to figure out his intentions when he definitely knows he loves you

Diluc

He’d say it while you’re bedridden with your cold, thinking you’re asleep

It’s because he’s too afraid that one day he’ll eventually lose you

Zhongli

He never actually says it but shows it through his actions, like buying you plushies and sweets when you’re sad

He uses your mora to buy the plushies and sweets but you don’t really care anyways because it’s the gesture that counts!!

You know he loves you anyways so he never has to say it <3

Childe

He’d just say it out of nowhere dead serious while you two are goofing around during a pillow fight

You’re really shocked but before you can say anything back he throws another pillow at your face while laughing

‘Pretends’ it never happened after but gets soft when you finally say it back

Xiao

He’d confess during the lantern festival

You’d both be watching the lantern’s

While you’re watching, Xiao would turn to you to see your reaction

Smiles slightly before whispering “i love you”

WOULD REACH FOR YOUR HAND AFTER THAT and squeeze it bc he doesn’t want to lose you either by him dying or you leaving him

The perfect date

Kaeya

Sex. period.

Just a lot of sex like a sex marathon because he loves seeing you being pleasured by him

TONS OF CUDDLING AFTER!!! And sleeping!!! Aftercare yes.

Diluc

FIGHTING TOGETHER

He’d think doing things you both love together is best date anyone could do

Y’all have each others backs

Power couple

Zhongli

Shopping. Duh. Mister spends all his mora or wtv buying anything and everything he sees because he’s thinking of you while he buys them

When he runs out he asks for you to pay even though they’re gifts for you

He’s hilarious

Childe

Would be a fun date

Going to the beach to swim or an amusement park with a ferris wheel

The day would end with the two of you sitting on a bench eating ice cream together and he laughs when you get ice cream on your nose

Xiao

Would rather stay at home/hotel room and not get disturbed by anyone

Probably sleeping in because he’s always tired for having to fight nearby enemies

BREAKFAST IN BED!! The two of you eat almond tofu until you’re sick of it

You drag him out of bed because you want to try to make almond tofu for fun

It tastes bad but you two have fun making it together and that’s what counts!!!!!

(Angst) What an argument with him is like/ What he’s like when you two are fighting or mad at each other

Kaeya

Annoyed and passive aggressive as hell, probably makes a couple low blows while you’re fighting

He’d click his tongue while you’re running your mouth and leaves the room to let out some steam

Either by drinking and talking to Diluc (who doesnt listen)

Or he goes and fights some slimes

Diluc

He would ignore you until things reach a boiling point where one of you snaps and starts yelling

Busting your lungs out at each other screaming and yelling, you’re crying and both of you blame each other

After you two get all your emotions out, you start crying and the both of you are emotionally vulnerable af

While you’re both in this state you have a conversation about what bothers each other in the relationship

Zhongli

Both of you are stubborn as hell, and would refuse to apologize to each other despite knowing that you’re the one in the wrong

Childe has to be the one to get you two to talk to each other constructively about your issues

Childe

You’d ignore each other for a bit but unlike Zhongli, Childe would probably apologise first because he feels bad and he’s too smart to lose you over a petty argument

The two of you would go over the argument again to sort it out properly and resolve the issue maturely

Xiao

Silent while you yell at him, just stares at you with an indecipherable emotion on his face

He just nods and accepts everything you have to say, knowing you need to get it off your chest

Feels like he messed up big time since this is his first real relationship, and goes to the inn’s balcony to think about it

After you yell at him you feel awful and go to apologize

#genshin impact #fanfic #reader-insert #genshin kaeya #genshin zhongli #genshin childe #genshin xiao #genshin diluc #kaeya #zhongli #childe #xiao #tartaglia #diluc #headcanons

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lideria · 4 years

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Rosebud. | Johnny

Request: Hi, could you maybe do an imagine of jaehyun or johnny on a reality show with the reader or “y/n” as their spouse and the audience sees how well they treat their child and how smart the child is for speaking multiple languages

Author’s Note: I’ve never ever written something like this before and it is way out of my usual writing style, so please excuse me if it feels a bit strange- it’s on me heheh

Important for the sake of the piece: I try to write my pieces as gender neutrally as possible, so I pulled a quick headcanon when it came to the parent title. Basically, Johnny calls his spouse rose, and his daughter is naturally called rosebud, because the rosebud is dependent on the rose to grow. By the nature of their relationship, the parent title for the reader essentially becomes rose.

Warnings: None? I think? Please let me know if there is any? English is my second language, so there might be errors!

Word Count: 1719 I’m sorry it’s so short hhhhh

Genre: Pure fluff and nothing else.

Hope you all enjoy! Have a great morning/day/evening/night!! 💚

Out of all the things you would have thought parenthood would bring you, appearing on TV with your child and husband was never one of them.

Maybe, and probably, it should have felt like a given considering your husband was a well known person around the country— the whole world, really. That fact loses its significance once you decide to have a child together. The tours and recordings do not feel like a big deal anymore, because after years of being in a relationship you have already got them down, and being a family; welcoming a child into the world makes its way into the center of all the priorities. Then comes raising the child, spending time with them, getting to experience things with them for the first time.

This is one of them. And it feels all the more exciting since this is the first proper time your daughter would be experiencing something from her father’s world— the world all of you had been distanced from for a good while.

Plus, she seems to like it when you make your way into the set as they start recording, and the studio fills with applause after the hosts announce your names as guests. Johnny and you grab her hands from either side as you walk and lift her up a little, making her giggle.

The audience seems to adore the youngling, because you can see the fond smile on their faces. Left and right, women and men, young and old.

You make your way to the designated seats with your daughter in the middle with Johnny and you sitting on either side of her. The two of you hold the not-so-flimsy looking chair in place just in case because your daughter loves climbing on things, and her falling down and having a crying fit was not something you would want to happen.

“Look who we have here, everyone,” One of the hosts start. “It’s the Suh family!” He applauds, causing another wave of applause to ripple through the studio.

“We haven’t seen Johnny in a long time,” The other host states, prompting a smile from Johnny. After her statement, the first half of the hosts agrees to her words. “That’s true, we haven’t seen him in a studio for a long time now.” Your daughter seems to be lost in the conversation even though both Johnny and you had taken turns explaining her what would happen a few days ago. There are small signals of her starting to shy away a little from all the crowd around you, so you hold her hand and wink at her. This makes her smile a little, and you smile back.

“Actually, correction, we haven’t seen this couple in a long time,” The female host states with a warm smile on her face, her gaze directed at you. “Last time we saw you, you two were newlyweds.”

You nod your head. “Everything happened so quickly. It feels like 5 years have gone past in just a blink of my eyes.”

Johnny agrees in a heartbeat. “Exactly. After we had our daughter and especially after we went back to work it’s like we haven’t even gone through much time, but she’s so grown already.”

“Speaking of, how old is she exactly?” The male host asks, and when Johnny nods his head towards your daughter with a small smile, he smoothly turns to her instead. “How old are you, little lady?”

She takes her hand out of your grasp, and holds up four fingers. “I’m four years old!” Unlike who she had been looking, her answer is rather confident. You quickly add “International,” after she speaks, and the hosts nod in understanding, sounds of amazement leaving their mouths as they widen their eyes. “She’s almost in school!”

“I’m not sure if she’s excited for that yet,” You chuckle. “What do you mean?” A host asks, and before you can even speak, Johnny says the answer. “She’s been experiencing a lot of separation anxiety with kindergarten so we expect her to be less than eager with a full day at school.”

The hosts nod in understanding and give encouraging words to your daughter right after, making her laugh with the over exaggerated gestures and sweet mimics. Conversations are cut rather short after that point as the hosts get ready to reveal the real reason why you are on the show, and soon, Johnny’s Instagram stories come up to the big screen showing the three of you in front of a mirror, all in your pajamas.

“Ooh, look at us,” Johnny starts in English when he starts recording, showing off the pajamas. Your daughter seems to be distracted with whatever it is outside of the bathroom, where the mirror is, and where she is sitting on the countertop beside the sink. Johnny bumps her belly with his finger, making you chuckle. “Hey, rosebud, look here.” He points to the mirror and your daughter turns her head to look in the mirror with such an oblivious look on her face, it makes Johnny laugh at her cuteness. He turns his head to look at her, which she also does to look back at him, and he smiles. “What do we say before we go to sleep?”

“We say good night, and we say I love you, and we say goodbye to today, and we say thanks to today for making us happy,” She rambles, in English. The words get quieter as the sentence goes on, thanks to her running out of breath as she speaks. “And we say sleep tight.”

The shiniest, prettiest smile spreads across Johnny’s face at your daughter’s little grammar mistakes. He leans in to kiss her cheek, which is when the camera shuffles slightly. Steadying the camera immediately, he points at you, who is stood smiling at the ordeal. “Now what do we say to our rose before we go to bed?”

Your daughter looks at you, smiling wide. “We love you,” She says in a giddy voice, speaking in your mother language with a slight accent. Her arms hug your waist as tightly as they can muster before she mumbles.“Thanks for the new toys and the kisses. And the bedtime stories.”

And she continues to ramble and thank you for more things, in your opinion, completely sleep driven. Ice creams, delicious food, hugs, playing with her, and more. It makes you laugh fondly when she thanks you for not getting a kitten because now she wants a puppy, and you lift her up so she can lay her head on your shoulder before waving at the camera. “This little one needs sleep now, so good night everyone.”

The video ends right then. The coos of the audience had been clearly audible throughout the screening as they read the subtitles. “So she speaks 2 languages other than Korean?” The videos had gone viral, maybe because Johnny had not made an appearance on a social media platform for a rather long time, maybe because you knew the fans adored your daughter, or maybe really because of the talent she had shown.

Or, maybe all of the three.

“She does,” You confirm. “How did that work out with her being this young?” The female host asks, curiosity washing over her voice. Taking a deep breath, you answer.

“Both Johnny and I knew we wanted to raise her as bilingual, so we were using a mix of Korean and English at home— we still do,”

While you speak, one of the hosts come up to your daughter and offer her a small collection of snacks— some banana milk and a couple of chocolate mushrooms, before going back to his seat. She gasps at her favorite snack and gets to trying to open the bottle, which she fails at, and hands it to Johnny. He peels the cover off and puts the straw in before handing her the milk back, securing it in her hands.

“In my free time I spoke to her in my mother language, which is not much since we all tend to be at home at the same time, and I didn't want to sit her down and teach a language since she might get bored. But last year we visited my home country and relatives for the holidays, and I observed that she would respond to what they say with her actions but not words. So I realized she has a talent with languages, and started speaking to her more with my first language. Now I’d say she can speak around the same amount of words for all 3 languages, right?” You turn your head to Johnny for confirmation. He nods. “I think so too.”

“That is incredible,” The host claims in surprise. “She is so smart, your rosebud.”

At first your daughter seems to get embarrassed by the compliment, but then she grabs the couple of chocolate mushrooms she has and makes her way to the hosts, offering them the snacks. “For us?” The male host asks as if he was not the one that handed her the chocolates just moments ago, and she nods. “I want to share.”

The audience coos once again, and even the hosts hold onto their hearts briefly before they take the snacks out of her hand and thank her.

If there is one thing that embarrasses your daughter more than anything it is getting thanked for something, so it is not surprising when she skips to Johnny for refuge. He picks her up and makes her sit on his lap where she will have the opportunity to bury her face into the crook of his neck to hide, prompting lighthearted laughter from the audience.

“I don’t want to embarrass her further,” The female host whispers. “But she’s also really well-behaved. I think you two make great parents.”

Both Johnny and you turn your heads to look at each other, and he holds out the hand that is not supporting your daughter’s back. You bump your fist into his, not caring about the reaction from the audience or the hosts because wow, this was a compliment you always wanted to get and it felt good to finally get it from someone.

This experience would definitely be a memorable one after all. “Thank you.”

#nct imagines #nct scenarios #johnny imagines #nct 127 #nct johnny #johnny suh #johnny #this was so hard for me to write #bc i'm awkward with children #and i never really want to be a parent #so i was like #how do they operate #plus writing a bilingual/multilingual character is a bit difficult #so i didn't know how to make this piece longer with that kind of a character #especially since it's a child as well #UM YEAH THANKS FOR PUTTING UP WITH THIS #i truly hope you like this anon

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hauntedbubblewriter · 4 years

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Just a second longer... Part 4

Summary: “What If we would date for 24 hours? No awkwardness just a perfect day without any worries”

Pairing: Jung Wooyoung x Reader

Words: 1,987

Genre: Fluff

Chapter: 4/4

Previous Chapter: Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3

A 24 hour relationship brought more than just a 24 hour heartbreak. The feeling of missing something stayed very strong with him from day to day.

He knew it from the point he closed his eyes that he didn't want her to leave, how frightened he was to open his eyes and finding no one in front of him. He should have told her to ignore the idea he had at the start. It was idiotic, he never expected to get so close to someone in just 24 hour, just the mere thought was ridiculous, he had the idea because he was bored of the stupid small talk, the awkward dates. He wanted to try something new something dumb, honestly he didn't even believe someone would even do something like that and The 20$ he got from San for his win on their bet about it didn't cheer him up either. San of course saw right through him as he gave him the 20$. It wasn't like he tried to hide it in the first place. Wooyoung sat down next to him on their usual spot in college with a light smile and the simple question "Where are my 20$?" In disbelief he pulled out his wallet "You found someone crazy enough? On a speed dating Event? Those people really must e desperate wow."

Just that simple comment broke that fake smile of Wooyoungs face. "she wasn't crazy" he mumbled, defeated he took the 20$ and slumped down on the bench. "oh I expected more triumph here? What happened?" San knew more assumpations wouldn't help this situation so rather than making it worse he would just let him talk. He hasn't seen Wooyoung this disappointed in a long time. "Just as planned, it worked out perfectly as planned" the statement itself would have sounded positive if his voice didn't sound like he had ust lost something very dear to him. "I had the best 24 hours I could have wished for, she was everything I didn't know I wanted and then the 24 hours ended...." he stopped himself when the memory repeated itself in front of his mental eye. "and she left?" San added his voice was careful, well trained with former events of an emotional Wooyoung. He was sensetive way more sensitive than most people expect him to be and in this state he snapped easily, saying words he didn't mean. So San stayed careful with his words , but there was no explosiv outburst, no train of tears nor shouts, just a weak "yeah". Wooyoungs head hung low mustering the floor beneath him. In his eyes was no hate, no saddnes nor anger just emptieness and San hated it. There was nothing worse than seeing his best friend so defeated. He couldn't bare it. Before he had formed a thought his arms were already around Wooyoung to give him some kind of reassurance. They stayed like this for a while till San had the idea to cheer him up with a movie night with his favorite movie to be exact.That should distract him at least. If San were capable of finding her he would do that but both of them knew he couldn't so at least he should try and make him feel better.

Wooyoung was happy to have a friend like San so when they collected the Popcorn and ordered Pizza while setting up the movie he felt bad that he couldn't put on a smile and act like everything is fine. He was never good at controlling his emotions. So the last thing he wanted was to destroy the mood, but the memories of her stayed vividly in his mind with a simple subtitle below. "You lost her" and that knowledge would haunt him till the end of his days.

A 24 hour relationship brought more than just a 24 hour heartbreak. The feeling of missing something stayed very strong with her from day to day. She had cried the day she had left him but that was about it. She wasn't containusely desperate and depressed, she just felt empty. On the next Monday she simply fell back into her routine, but even in the middle of all the stress the picture of him, simply standing there, his eyes anxiously closed. She liked to believe that what happened was what he wanted, what she wanted, but every time her head pushed the memory back into her mind, she couldn't help but feel dumb. The person she left standing there didn't look like someone who was happy about the departur, herself was desperate to stay, but she didn't and she couldn't stop looking back and regretting it so badly.

She couldn't change it now tho. No matter how badly she wanted to go back, time doesn't play by her rules. So Weeks over week went by and no signs of Wooyoung were found. Her Subconscious brought her back to the restaurant they first met, in the end he was no where to be seen somehow she was glad about that, scared to find him in the Speed Dating event again, that he already was happily talking to someone, prettier than herself, maybe funnier. Just a better version of a girlfriend that would bring him the happiness he deserves. It wasn't rare that those thoughts filled her mind. Reminding her that she had no knowledge about his feelings or what he was doing now. Hell she barley even knew anything about him. Did he study? Could he be at this campus? What are his hobbies? There was so much more to discover for her and she had messed up that opportunity. She had messed up the chance to wake up to a loving smile.

She didn't want to give up that easily, so when she had a bit of spare time she would go through social media. Looking for "Wooyoung" just to realize she didn't even know his last name. The search brought her no where. The results stayed the same occasionally adding a new profile or removing one. It was hopeless and even then she tried to check as regularly as possible.

Another thing that was a regular part of her life was the small cafe her friend worked at she always stayed there with a hot tea while working through her notes and trying to get her schedule fixed of the next week.Today was another one of those rather stressful day. It was the last finals week. Her auto pilot for learning had set in while she went over the most important notes. Despite her looks she was actually very good at her studies she might have not been the best of her course but surely on the top half of it. So when her mind didn't desperatel clutch onto the memories of the best day of her life it worked, its all she knew that kept her of thinking about him, to function through the day all she did was work on her studies.

So y/n was mindlessly reading over her behaviorism notes when a familiar voice returned to her "Do you mind if I sit here?" Her head was stuck in her auto pilot so taking in the info that someone would like to sit at her messy table full of notes what made no sense to her, so instead of whispering out a mindless "sure" she actually averted her eyes from the paper in front of her and towards the voice that triggered too familiar memories at once. There he was, simply standing there with a shy smile on his lips, the whole confident energy he had was coated in a veil of uncertainty. For the first few seconds she was sure that John B. Watson bored her to sleep and she was dreaming, Wooyoung standing there waiting for an answer. Before anything could stop her she was standing and wrapping her arms around him, finally feeling the soft sweater under her skin, feeling his breath on her neck and she almost asked if he was really here.

Wooyoung was so overwhelmed when he saw her, he almost run over to her, but then he stopped himself as a wave of hestiation stopped him. Not even close to being strong enough to stopping him from going to her completly, but with calm mature steps. As calm and mature it was to leave San and Yeosang on the counter with his americano order. Then everything happened so quickly his mouth was already asking for the spot next to her when their eyes locked onto each other. Her bored eyes turned into a glossy glimmer of happiness and her lips peeked up right away.

If you would ask how San had interpreted that moment he would have described it as "two deers caught in a lovelight"

When she hugged him all the weight of those weeks without her dissappeared as if he wasn't trying to find her for the last 26 day he couldn't help but holding her as close as possible.He wouldn't want to let her go ever again. He wanted to stay in that protective space and protect it at the same time. "You have no idea how much I missed you" her voice cracked a little as if she still cound't believe what was happening at the moment. "I missed you as well. You have no idea how much I actually missed you. I" he started rambling but she couldn't help but laugh at him, maybe out of disbelief, maybe it was her bodys way of trying to handle how overwhelmed she was feeling. "Yahh Don't laugh at me now" he complained playfully and that just made her laugh even more. Wooyoung himself couldn't stop that big smile on his face honestly he didn't want to, he wanted to feel the complete wave of joy that he actually managed to find her again. Maybe it was destiny or just luck. Whoever he had to thank for this he would write the biggest "Thank you" Letter in the whole universe.

"Maybe your interested in another 24h date but let's add an + afterwards so it's an infinite 24 hours" his suggestion was idiotic but so idiotic it became cute again, but instead of answering she just looked into his eyes with a bright smile and kissed him. The hesitation of the last few weeks was gone and everything filled this moment full of passion and love Wooyoung returned the kiss so natrually but he just couldn't stop smiling into the kiss with pure happiness

"is that answer enough" she asked after she pulled away to look at him again just to actually be sure she didn't mistook him for the wrong person.

Wooyoung just nooded before he returned to kissing her and no more words were needed.

DUCKING HAPPY END

HELL YEAH

here some small bonus stuff:

Sans first instinct was to yell at him that he tried to get away with paying again even tho he invited him and Yeosang here, but when he saw where Wooyoung was going he understood an instead of asked the waitress if they had popcorn, while pulling out his phone and recording that event that was about to happen.

Meanwhile Yeosan was utterly confused.

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"Maybe your interested in another 24h date but let's add an + afterwards so it's an infinite 24 hours" his suggestion was idiotic but so idiotic it became cute again, but instead of answering she just looked into his eyes with a bright smile and kissed him. The hesitation of the last few weeks was gone and everything filled this moment full of passion and love Wooyoung returned the kiss so natrually but he couldn't just stop smiling into the kiss with pure happiness"

y/n: he is talking bullshit again what should I do Brain: Kiss him y/n: okay

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Did I forget to upload the final chapter?

Defiently

Am I sorry?

Ohh of course I am

Did anyone care

Nope

#Wooyoung #Ateez #ateez wooyoung #ateez imagine #ateez writing #Jung Wooyoung #Kpop #original fiction #original writing #Reader #Fluff

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trrriple-rrr · 4 years

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Today we say goodbye to Martyn. Time flew with him. I hope you enjoyed the story of him and his Christmas Romance. Tomorrow I will post the link to the place where you can find all parts of the story at once and then it will be Claude Becker’s turn to lead us to the holidays in the next 8 days...

Chris Marshall Advent (01.-08.12.)

09.12.* 10.12. * 11.12. * 12.12. * 13.12. *14.12. * 15.12.

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16.12.

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You feel awful when you hear the knock on your apartment door the next morning. You look worse when you see yourself in the mirror. With dark bags under your eyes, looking pale, weak and unhappy.

Your friend is standing in front of you, holding up a bag filled with groceries. “Breakfast.” She smiles and walks straight into your kitchen.

You watch her and sit down at the table while she starts to do her magic. Soon your apartment is filled with delicious smells.

“Did you get some sleep?” She asks and gives you a once over. “You did not. Did a lot of thinking, hm? I did too.” She shrugs.

You just look at her and wait what she has to say. “I just…I can’t help but think you were a bit harsh to him. Yes, he acted like an arsehole!” She adds quickly when she sees the betrayed look in your eyes. “Yes, he should have told you that he got your messages right away when he saw you instead of acting creepy… but…” She shrugs again and starts to load some eggs, bacon and toast onto two plates.

You are still waiting what she wanted to say in his defence but she decided to feed you first and you really felt hungry now.

“It’s just…he changed so much. In my life. Being with him. He listened. He made me cook again, for fun…for him.”

“And that’s definitely a good thing he did.” She says quietly and carefully and watches you eat.

“I…I also got you a newspaper.” She puts it down next to your plate. “I…I think you should read it.”

She smiles and gets up to load your dish washer.

You frown at the large headline and shake your head. You never read the newspaper and only check the news online. Didn’t everyone?

There is nothing on the front page you want to read right now, reading about politics would only make you feel sick all over again.

You turn the page. Once. Twice.

There!

Next to an article about a successful photography exhibition that opened last night you can suddenly see your name.

“A Message for You.” Is the subtitle.

Your stomach clenches and your heart beats faster. “An article by Martyn Fleming.” You whisper.

“Yes! He wrote an article about you!” Your colleague can’t help but gasp.

But you almost can’t hear her as your eyes are already flying over every word he has written.

It is an apology letter to you. In the only way he knows how to write it. Exposing his own intimate thoughts and feelings like he made you feel exposed.

“I met you. And for the first time I felt connected to someone in this way. Love is difficult, it’s messy, it drives you crazy and makes you do incredibly stupid things. It’s laughing in a bar and dancing in the middle of the park, it’s watching a ballet and sitting in a small kitchen eating amazing food. I know that now. Only because of you. Because you put your heart into my hands. Where, instead of being safe, I held it too tightly. Hurt it, with the need to hold you close, achieving the opposite of what I wanted: I lost you. And maybe I will never see you, my heart, again. Or maybe, just maybe, you will give love another chance. Tonight, at the same time, the same place where I fell in love with you.”

You swallow hard and clear your throat. It’s not that easy. He can’t just write this and expect you to forgive him and to give him a second chance....

You rub your eyes and wrap your arms around yourself.

It would be easier to stay mad at him if you did not miss him that much. You heard his voice when you read the article as if he read the words to you. You saw his fingers flying over the keyboard of his laptop. You saw him scratch his neck thinking about finding the right words. You saw his red rimmed eyes when he looked at you the last time.

My heart.

You press your own palm over your heart. It belonged to someone else and it shattered into so many pieces when you lost him. Then it got put together again by Martyn. Who has a shattered heart himself. Who dared to trust again. To love again. You felt his heartbeat under your palms. Strong and skipping a beat when you touched him.

My heart.

You look at your friend and she gives you a slight nod. “No matter what you decide to do…I’ll support you.”

You smile at her and take a deep breath. “Thank you. For everything.”

Then you get up to help her clean the kitchen. You don’t have to make a decision right now after all…

But time keeps ticking and you keep checking your watch. The same time and place where he fell in love with you?

You bite your lip and find yourself thinking about it every minute of the day.

When the sun is going down you put on your green coat and all your courage. You’re putting your heart on the line here after all.

It’s beating quicker and quicker the closer you come to the opera house. You walk up the steps and look around.

But he’s not there.

You check your watch and decide to walk to the subway station.

But he’s not there.

Is he playing with you again?

You really want to find him now. To slap him more than to kiss him though.

The park is lit up with Christmas lights but he’s not there.

The bar is your next stop. And you can’t see him anywhere.

You curse and stop a taxi.

He has to be at the next place!

The taxi stops in front of the food truck where he invited you to dinner.

Your fingers are trembling when you walk along the path leading up to it. You don’t know what you’ll do if he isn’t there. And you don’t know what to do if he’s there.

One step after the other.

Look around.

Many people are walking around.

But there is one lonely person sitting on the low wall off to the side. His elbows on his knees. His face hidden in his hands, his shoulders slumped in defeat.

He looks up when he hears someone approaching. As soon as he sees you he sits up straight.

You look at him. See the spark in his eyes, the tiny feathery thing called hope growing in his heart.

You just look at him and throw your hands up in exasperation: “How am I supposed to know when and where you fell in love with me?!?”

He lets out a sudden noise, caught between a laugh and sob, and then he’s just right there. In front of you. His heart in his eyes.

“I’m sorry.” He says and holds your gaze.

You want to reply that he can’t ever hurt you again but then the words won’t come out of your mouth. You know he can’t promise you that. But his gaze tells you that he will try his best not to do it again.

So you nod and take his hand. “What do you think about getting a new phone for Christmas?”

He starts to smile and holds on tightly as he leans down to kiss you.

Again and again.

The cute banner was made by the cute @once-upon-a-mystrade

#rupert graves #martyn fleming #advent calendar stories #rupert #drabble #fiction #fantasy #pg rated #reader insert #advent calendar

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rktingyan-blog · 5 years

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the video starts off quiet, the only thing in sight being tingyan's desk, the camera picking up fragments of the decorations around her apartment. in walks the girl, waving a small hi to the camera. the whole thing looks authentic, but tingyan's been practicing this intro for nearly an hour. she was a meticulous kind of natural, someone who attempted to look effortless, but spent hours making sure things looked perfect. she's even tried a new makeup look today - something a little lighter than what she was used to; faint raspberry eyeshadow and a lip tint accenting her features. the biggest difference, though? there's one thing she couldn't perfect, however - her nerves. she had to admit, she was certainly a little apprehensive to perform a skill she wasn't all that confident in for the cameras. but, it'd be good for practice and she's happy with what she'd came up with. so, letting out a sigh, she turns into the tingyan most know her as and beamed at the camera. "hi everyone! tingan here, today i'll be performing an...interesting rendition of she's a baby! i hope you all enjoy."

disclaimer!! two things - first off, i haven't made a youtube graphic for tingyan yet but you can assume this would be one of her videos after it's created! second, i made the new lyrics, and they are in english, korean, and chinese. while i'm fluent in the first and studying the second, i have very little practice in chinese and still struggle with korean, so there's bound to be a lot of mistakes!! of course, luckily tingyan isn't fluent in korean so that helps with the narrative, but some things may not work or look funny if you do know the languages! you can also assume subtitles were put in the same fashion the lyrics are shown in this solo! this was more for fun than anything, and in no way do i claim them to be perfect! i don't even know if anyone's gonna read this, but, just to be sure lol!! anyways, sorry for the interruption, and enjoy!~

readying herself, she approached further to the microphone, which she'd bought with her own paycheck in preparation for this and future videos. "so, to be honest this is a little different..." she started, staring off to the side where the lyrics lie. "basically, i'll be doing a remix! but not in the way you'd expect. i'm going to do a song to the tune of she's a baby, but i'm using my own lyrics in korean, english, and chinese." nerves are evident in her face, not knowing quite what people would think of it. she still wasn't as confident in english and korean as she'd like to be, but saw this as her chance to practice and experiment with pronunciation. and if that didn't work? she could say she was working on improving her singing.

"all right...i'll start now! fighting," she announces, clasping her hands together as she decides on jumping right into it rather than waiting. she had vowed to give the song a different twist - and this was about as different as it got. closing her eyes, she allowed the track to start, and began to sing along.

믿을 수가 없어 난생처음인 걸 이만큼 쏟아부었던 적 퉁명스러운 말투 숨겨놓은 그 마음을 도전들으로 눈치챘어

the lyrics don't seem to be so different yet, the only phrase replaced being "just one challenge" than "just one kiss". romance just didn't fit into the equation for these lyrics. the words spoken are true to her heart however, and just as the song implies, she's found it difficult to gather the courage to write such personal lyrics. the song itself, though in third person, was a direct relation to her life. however, she felt that by speaking from an outside perspective it'd be easier to share with others and that it wouldn't feel quite as pitiful to sing as she felt writing it.

행복해, 불안해? 그녀는 혼란스럽다 all day It’s 오케이, she’ll be 오케이 그녀는 강한 소녀해

the first words are spoken with exaggerated confusion, tingyan putting her aegyo to work with some puzzled looks, followed by a laugh of embarrassment. consequently, her voice falters at the second verse, but steadies once she's gained her composure. the lyrics "she'll be okay" and "she's a strong girl" are more of a hopeful assurance to herself than anything, and it shows in the way tingyan nods along to the song, her hands to her heart. they show that, although she has doubts, she's still sure of herself and the fact that things will be alright.

(정말) she’s a baby 아주 예쁜 애기 말씀하시면 she’ll say “안돼요!” 그렇지-그렇지 그렇지만 그녀는 상냥해 비밀이에요 (shh)

the chorus is where she really starts to have fun, beaming as she begins to sway with the beat. at the first line she points to herself, showing off a childish grin before moving on. at the second line, it's a bit of flattery to herself, evident in the way she teasingly flips her hair at the self-directed compliment. at the third, however she wrinkles her nose at “안돼요!”, waving off the camera as if proving her denial of the former statement. she's having a lot more fun than she's expected, really letting loose instead of being so concerned with her appearance as she usually is. it's surprising, especially since people might judge her the most on a platform like this. but in the moment she's herself, which is essential for a personal song such as this, and may be the reason she decided to upload this version opposed to the more structured one she'd prepared. at the last line, she puts her fingers over her lips, eyebrow upturned as she flashes a mischevious grin to the screen. classic tingyan.

라타타타, 라타타타 라타타타, 라타타타 라타타타, 라타타타

the melody is spent causally, preparing herself for the upcoming rap. she wasn't ready in the slightest. singing was one thing - though she wasn't the best in it, she was fairly average and felt she could do well for the video. rapping, however? she'd struggle through it.

애기 이름은 팅기안이 많은 매력 is her specialty 我是中国人我来自上海但我说 “你好, 안녕하세요, hi!”

surprisingly, the verse goes well, putting her chin in the v her hands had formed below her when her name is announced. the second verse is a little difficult to spit out with the rhythm of the song given the difficulty of the english pronunciation, and though she falters a bit she uses her charms the song describes to make up for her hiccups. she recovers quickly when the lyrics unexpectedly revert to her native tongue, the chinese rolling off her lips much more naturally and proving it to be her most relaxed language spoken. the mention of shanghai causes her to grin, cupping her hands over her mouth as if she's yelling to all her friends still there. speaking the language of home, she pauses for a moment, a brief second of nostalgia washing over her before she travels to the next verse. truthfully, tingyan wondered who would be watching - if her friends from home would see this, or the dreaded idea of her mother judging her through the lens. she has to wash those negative thoughts away, however, and quickly she starts switching from chinese, to korean, to english. the line is meant to show her duality, and she feels it works, the girl not able to help but let out a small celebratory yes! after she's successfully completed the sentence.

야 tingyan babe, 오늘 뭐해? 찡그려 친구 없어, 어떻게요? 울지 마-세, 서울’s 오케이! 시간이 걸립니다 babe

since the song's aimed at her, she speaks the first verse to the side of her as if she's another individual talking to herself informally. her tongue gets tied at the second line, however, the phrases sounding so similar she has difficulty articulating them properly. these lines are spoken with sincerity, the lines still applying to her nowadays as she'd faced new difficulties in seoul. at the last part, 시간이 걸립니다, she has a hint of uncertainty, as if the saying is something she'd like to believe but isn't too sure of anymore. things take time, of course, but it's been two years and tingyan still feels completely lost. but once again, there's no time for moping, because another line is just seconds away.

she’s a baby 아주 예쁜 애기 나 보살핌을 원해 all day “help me! help me!” 말하고 싶어 나는 못해, yeah

tingyan decided to skip two verses of the song, in an effort to both keep the video short and limit the amount of struggling she'd have to do when writing. the last verse brings the viewers to the end of the song, the familiar ring of the chorus back in swing. the words change at the last three lines, however, the confession of the third certainly shocking, even to tingyan. the female wasn't one to express her emotions, or innermost needs, so for her to admit she needed care it was clear the song meant a lot to her. it felt easier, though, with the 3rd person dialogue being on her sided, but once she reaches the end she has to face the reality. "help me! help me!" she sings, a hint of humor in her voice as she mimics a damsel in distress. but the humor soon leaves at the last line, the one she'd chosen to write in first person. saying "i want to say [help me] but i can't" makes her feel like the wind is taken out of her, just as the audio comes to a stop. for a minute, tingyan stays still, blowing air out as she grasps that she really did that. of course, that portion is edited out, and the next thing viewers see is the smiling girl bowing to the camera. "thank you for watching my video! please support my future ones, and tell me what you'd think...down below!" she points down, to where she's edited in the words comment, please! in chinese, english, and korean. "and don't forget to like!" then, a gif of ryan from kakao displaying hearts appears to the side of her face, edited in afterward. "until then, tingle tingle little stars, goodnight!" the outro's awfully cheesy and she has a feeling she'll change it later, but regardless, she laughs it off and waves one last time before the screen fades to black.

#❝ solos. ❞#rkcreativity #this took me way too long uGH #wc:1758

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Skam España, S1 episode 1 reaction

Aka how to troll the part of your audience that’s seen this story seven times.

Sorry this is late, but it took me longer to write this because there were a lot of changes, and that means more to talk about! Skam España surprised me at how much it diverged from the source material. It’s hitting the same beats, of course, but it felt much more like a remix of the original than a remake, if you follow me.

Thanks to everyone who subs and uploads clips and other content for the non-Spanish audience! You are the best for taking the time to do that for the fandom.

Episode 1

Intro

So this wasn’t in a clip, but it was included at the beginning of the full episode. We get the iconic intro speech, except this time it’s from Eva. And not Eva reading Jonas’ words, it seems, but Eva herself talking about teenagers presenting a happy appearance that masks their insecurities and loneliness. It’s very fitting for her character and taps into some areas that directly affect her, such as wanting to be liked but not knowing how, struggling with her studies, and not knowing who she is. I’m glad she got to give this speech.

And actually, I think it’s important that she didn’t give this speech within a clip itself, to an audience of her boyfriend. It’s like she’s talking to us and only us, the audience, and no one in her life knows what she’s thinking or the full extent of her insecurities.

Clip 1 - And now for something completely different

Spanish Jonas (Jorge) doesn’t get his opening monologue but he does get the first words, though they’re very casual, about diving in the pool.

There’s some obvious framing here with Eva and Jorge sitting together on one side across from Lucas on his own, setting up their third wheel dynamic.

Jorge and Lucas tease Eva, like in the original, but it’s very much a good-natured thing, not something that makes her uncomfortable or feel bad. However, I do think you can read into the dialogue - Eva not knowing how to dive in head first is like her lacking confidence or not being able to take initiative.

We get a focus on Lucas’ uncomfortable face as loud smacking kissy sounds play. I’m always mixed on when the remakes focus a lot of the Isak’s discomfort with Eva/Jonas, because it seems to give too much away. A longing look is OK, maybe, but a moment that wouldn’t be noted from Eva’s POV seems too much. Still, that was a nice way to shoot it, and Lucas gets in some nice facial expressions. And at least there’s ambiguity as to why Lucas is not here for it. At this stage it doesn’t mean he likes Jorge; he could like Eva, or he could just feel bored with his friends making out or lonely that they’re paired off, without having romantic feelings for either of them.

Random detail but I love all the dirt and grass on Jorge’s pants when he gets up.

This is a cute bit of dialogue between Eva and Jorge with him predicting her future. I don’t think this is the case but I would loooove if Spanish P-Chris was Jorge’s height and had curly hair, just for his prediction to happen, just not in the way Jorge means.

I would also love if the money and house on the beach ended up being references to the school trip.

Eva’s future dog being named Nymeria is a reference to Arya’s direwolf from Game of Thrones/A Song of Ice and Fire.

This closing image is VERY different. In the other versions of the opening clip Eva ends up alone, setting up her isolation and loneliness. In this one, we close on her and Jorge together, kissing and being intimate, after he’s told her that he’ll be there for her.

Actually, I want to talk about what all the changes in the opening could mean for the season. Hopefully the show takes these changes into account and goes somewhere with them, rather than developing relationships and clips differently but ending up in the same place just because, you know?

So here’s what’s different in the first clip:

Jorge doesn’t have any of that air of condescension that Jonas did, and he and Lucas banter with Eva in a friendly way without any serious insults. (I mean I guess she could be really bothered by them poking fun at her lack of diving ability but lmao, that’s not the same as poking fun at her grades or intelligence.)

We haven’t seen Ingrid or Sara yet and don’t get a hint as to the friction between Eva and them. We do learn that Eva worries about the first day of school but like … there could be literally any reason for that at this point.

We didn’t hear anything about Jorge hanging out or going to Elias’ and there’s no clip later that night where he’s being shady about his whereabouts.

Jorge is extremely kind and supportive, telling Eva that he’ll be with her if there are any problems. But we know that he won’t be able to fulfill this promise, so it’ll feel like an extra slap in the face when he disappoints.

Clip 2 - First day of school

Eva is alone this time… and a lot of people walking into the school are in pairs, including two girls swinging their hands together. Sure is a great reminder of how you lost your BFF.

We do get the Ingrid slow-mo death glare in this clip. “Jungle” by X Ambassadors and Jamie N Commons is a good song choice, on the nose, but Eva does feel like she’s heading into the jungle. High school as dangerous terrain is a common but well-deserved trope, like in Mean Girls with the wildlife comparisons played for humor.

Lol and Jorge notices Ingrid (Inés) and her pals, too, then goes back to kissing Eva.

So Lucas interrupts them making out, but he’s with some other boys! Are they setting up the boy squad this early? Is one of them supposed to be Elias? They seem like kind of a cute, doofy squad.

You can tell Eva feels increasingly left out as the boys are wrapped up in a discussion that doesn’t involve her, they’re talking more to Jorge than her and mostly not even looking at her when they tell the story. Although not gonna lie, the story the boys are telling seems kind of inoffensive, not isolating or uncomfortable in itself. I think it’s mostly that she doesn’t have a squad like this herself and has to hang around her boyfriend’s.

And Lucas goes over to her to talk and specifically asks her to the show on Friday, awwww. Unless you think he did it to stir up shit since Jorge forgot to tell her about the show.

Because Jorge forgot to tell her about it, Eva probably won’t be able to get a ticket. So it’s not that Eva invites him somewhere first (like in the original), it’s that he’s already got a thing and that she’s excluded from it. She says she’s cool with it but of course it’s just another small way she’s left out.

Eva ends up outside of the conversation, literally. The boys turn away from her and get engrossed in their own stuff. I was wondering how this was going to go because in the first clip, Jorge was so supportive and she and Lucas seemed tight, and it made a point of showing her together and not being alone. But lmao, teenage boys are maybe not great at living up to their promises.

There was another post about this, but there was a weird zoom on Eva at the end of this clip that felt like someone’s finger slipped on the camera or something. Felt like it needed another take. I hope it was a weird but intentional choice rather than sloppiness.

Clip 3 - Mystery girl

Eva is sitting alone and SHIT, we see the Sana character walk by! Hajar Brown, her actress, is awesome. She features in her own Skam homage, please watch (this version has English subtitles). I’m really happy that she can be part of this project.

It seems that Spanish Sana (Amira) is wearing hijab for the first time, which was mentioned in the show synopsis. The other girl says Amira didn’t wear it last year. It’ll be interesting if we hear more from Amira herself on this development.

Also, did we ever hear people openly talking badly like this about Sana so early in the show? Because obviously we had Vilde running her mouth, and similarly ignorant comments from people like the biology teacher, but until S4 I don’t think we ever witnessed random students gossiping about her like this. I might just be blanking on some of the OG moments, but here we get to see Amira react directly to random hurtful comments.

And of course there’s Lara.

I was really thrown by this clip because it seems very soon to introduce the Noora. As we all know, she makes a more dramatic entrance later on. And yet they have this character wearing Noora’s signature red lipstick, in an extremely Noora-ish outfit, come in and sit next to Eva in a scene very similar to Noora and Eva in episode 3 of OG S1 (and most of the remakes). Except … this character says she’s Lara. From the press release, Skam España’s Noora is supposed to be called, well … Nora. I was so confused. I clearly heard her introduce herself as “Lara” but I figured I was just hearing wrong and somehow she said Nora?

Anyway, Skam Spain fucked with everyone’s expectations by introducing a Noora expy, with the same personal style, with a scene similar to one of Noora’s first, only not to make her the Noora … just to throw everyone off? Because honestly, I applaud them if this is the case. Keeping everyone on their toes.

My guess so far is that she might be Sara, or a Sara equivalent. She might befriend Inés and end up shunning Eva because she hears all about what a bad friend Eva is.

Anyway, Lara makes an impression right away for Eva, talking a lot about herself. She’s certainly not shy, and she’s got an interest in theater and photography. She seems a bit humble-braggy, like her GPA is so good that she can do whatever she wants! She seems to have the confidence Eva lacks. If she’s unsure of herself, it’s because she wants too much.

And then Lucas comes in to talk about school elections, setting us up for the Vilde and the russ equivalent of this show. He doesn’t get her name right but he clearly means Viri. Viri is the only one running for president so better just hand off the position to the person who wants it.

Eva checks out Lara, like all Evas do with Nooras, but lmao, this ain’t Noora.

Clip 4 - Eva at home

Eva is doing homework when she gets the urge to check Instagram and ends up scrolling through Inés’ pics wistfully.

Eva’s mom says she’s going to the hospital so I assume she’s a doctor/nurse/medical professional? If she’s working shifts that conflict with Eva’s schedule, that makes sense as to how Eva could be left alone and have a distant relationship with her mom.

Eva gets a little smile on her face when she views Lara’s profile.

Did Eva actually hit the follow button for Lara or not? I couldn’t tell.

Tbh it’s pretty interesting to see the difference in the Evas’ rooms across remakes. For instance, Spanish Eva has pretty light and sparkles and the word LOVE suspended above her bed, whereas in the Dutch remake, Dutch Eva sleeps under the word FUCK.

So this is clearly taking on Eva’s friending Noora saga, but Lara ain’t Noora, so again, what’s going on? What if Lara’s IG reveals her as a huge weirdo and Eva realizes she doesn’t want to be friends with her?

Skam Spain is trolling everyone and I love it.

Clip 5 - Hello Viri and ALEJANDROOOOOO

Eva is sitting alone in front of the windowsill and skimming through Instagram when Lara shows up! She’s happy to see Eva because she doesn’t know where her next class is. Eva is obviously overjoyed to see her and volunteers to show her where the classroom is. Eva is positively beaming at her. Like she’s in loooooove. But Eva barely gets a second of Lara’s attention before Elvira, aka Viri, aka Spanish Vilde runs up and introduces herself as the class president.

Lara’s outfit seems noticeably less Noora-ish this time around.

Lara shoots Eva a look when Viri is talking, and I don’t know what to make of it. Annoyed at Viri’s attitude? Annoyed that Viri interrupted her moment with Eva? Not annoyed, just trying to check out Eva? IDK, man.

Viri is super grateful that she’s been elected (even though everyone just voted for her because she wanted the job) and is eager to get activities rolling and to get people involved. Lara semi-cuts Viri off from her excited ramble.

We pull back on Viri and get a wide shot … I don’t really know why.

Viri says she’s new, so I guess she doesn’t know Cris that well, which is a big change. Vilde and Chris have always been friends, Chris is the one who’s been her friend all along, but Cris isn’t tagging along with Viri on her quest to recruit more people as in the other versions of this scene. I wonder how they met?

Viri calls Cris “the pretty one” and while I think Ina/original Chris is beautiful, Chris has never been framed as an attractive character in canon so I’m wondering what they’re going to do with this. Cris is also surrounded by people so she seems like a popular, well-liked person. It makes you wonder how she got roped into hanging with the weird girls in school.

Lara says she’s in if Eva is, and Eva agrees. WHAT ARE YOU DOING SKAM SPAIN. You got your Noora in my Lara??? Except Noora only agreed to go to the russ meeting when Sana did. For Lara, it’s Eva she needs to also go. On that note, Lara sure seems into Eva. And Eva agrees because she wants to spend time with Lara...

Viri’s mom is having a meeting, or “meeting,” so maybe they’re going with the same backstory for her as Vilde.

She cuts herself off as she notices William - Alejandro - through the window, and like, if they had named this character Alejandro but not played Lady Gaga’s “Alejandro” at some point, I would have felt cheated. I feel like they could have timed or edited the scene better to make it funnier, but I did still appreciate the effort.

I saw people upset that this William looks like an embryo but I’m fine with it. I can completely get why he would be considered a cute boy on campus among these 16/17-year-olds.

Please note Viri’s facial expressions as she takes him in. It looks like she’s glitching.

She’s so turned on by Alejandro that she’s grabbing Eva’s leg.

LOL at Alejandro looking straight at the camera just to smolder. Wow. I’m imagining that this is just a thing he does on purpose, walk around Blue Steeling into invisible cameras.

Is it just me or does he look a bit like Mikael from the original show? Just … floppier?

Clip 6 - Damn, Inés

I think that’s Amira walking across the screen out of focus at the start.

Eva walks up to see Inés hanging out with some girls, the reluctance on her face. And then she sees Lara with them, and the despair crosses her face. Fuuuuuck, this budding friendship is over before it really started. (WAS I RIGHT? I knewwwww it! Lara is going to get turned off by hearing Inés tell her side of the story, and she won’t want to be Eva’s friend. Then the girl squad will step up.)

Getting mild Darlene from Mr. Robot vibes from Inés. Except less unkempt.

Eva going up and talking to Inés in broad daylight, at school, totally sober? Brave, very brave.

We get a closeup of Inés’ face when Eva talks to her so it can sink in that whatever happened with them didn’t hurt only Eva - it’s Eva who seems to be at fault. It’s POV breakage that we maybe didn’t need consider the rest of the scene also establishes that Inés is really hurt by what Eva did, but it did help show Inés as more vulnerable.

Ouch. Inés is right to be pissed (as we know her reasons) but she’s ice cold to Eva, especially with making her repeat that Eva will never be around her again. That is really harsh, worse than any “your eye makeup makes you look like a slut” comments.

Clip 7 - Interrupted by dancing dudes

Cris is seen leaving the school ahead of Eva and Jorge. I like that they’re planting the major characters around the school, casually showing them going about their lives. I mean maybe they were just filming other scenes that day and used all of the actors they had on set, lmao, but it feels realistic.

Jorge meets Eva and seems supportive, she’s not alone walking out of school this time. But she spies Inés again outside, there’s eye contact, and Eva is clearly upset over what happened earlier. Even Jorge notices.

She doesn’t want to open up to him, he keeps asking her to open up, and just when it seems like she might tell him, he gets a notification of his friends being goofballs and watches them on his phone.

Jorge promises to be all Eva’s tomorrow, and lol somehow I think it’s a promise made to be broken.

Clip 8 - Sad blue-tinted lonely Friday clip

Eva is hanging out in her kitchen heating up food in her not-leaving-the-house attire, alone, not doing anything on Friday night. She gets a text from Jorge and looks at all the fun her boyfriend and his friends are having at their concert.

She watches it fondly and sends him some texts back, then goes back to that solitary microwave life.

Viri sends a message asking if someone can host the end of the year trip meeting. Eva goes back to munching. But we know what she’s really hungry for ... is friendship. 😎

Clip 9 - Goddammit Jorge

Eva is on the sidelines watching Jorge play football. You know, not that you can’t support your significant other, but being a teenage girl and watching your boyfriend be active while you sit there watching is maybe not the most fun activity? Let’s be honest, would a lot of these teenage boys sit and watch their girlfriends play a game together, one that wasn’t like an “official” game for school or anything, and cheer them on while not participating themselves? Girls are expected to support their boyfriends’ activities in a way that frankly is not reciprocal.

Lucas comes up behind the bleachers, wearing sunglasses and doing this face that would probably be meme-worthy if it were more in focus. Like he actually does that peer over the top of the sunglasses look. And I was like, lmao, why is the fuck is he doing that, but then I realized he was probably checking out Jorge.

Jorge comes up to Eva all drenched with water and sweat so you know Lucas is taking advantage of his sunglasses to peep that manly sight.

It sure didn’t take long for Jorge to go back on his promise. Jorge makes a comment about wanting to go home and sleep, Eva says they were supposed to hang out today, he’s like “well I’m going to play video games with the boys, but you can come if you want.” Lmao this is uncharitable but I’m imagining he means “you can come and watch” not “you can come and participate.”

She suggests they go out together and he’s like, nah, do that shit yourself. Wow, so supportive. And yet a realistic depiction of dating high school boys. He tells her she’ll make a bunch of friends soon and forget all about him, which is sweet, except if you think that later, in the tradition of past Jonases, he’s going to get all miffed about the school trip and be passive-aggressive to Eva about her activities and friends? Less sweet.

I just want to mention that Lucas is oh so casually lying there and soaking in all of this dialogue. Noticing that Jorge is ditching Eva. Not saying a word, but you know. Absorbing this information, in case it’s pertinent.

Jorge asks Lucas if Eva is a good catch, for reassurance, and he pauses before commenting on her hat. Well, he can’t exactly say he doesn’t know, can he?

Jorge and Eva kiss before Jorge gets called back to his game, and Lucas asks Eva what Jorge tastes like, L O L. She answers sweat. We see Eva, deflated now that Jorge has bailed (like “I came to watch you and put on this hat and now you don’t even want to hang out?”) while right beside her, Lucas has … a look. That sweat comment will fuel his fantasies, don’t lie.

I mean I’m going to be honest, my attention was focused on Lucas instead of Eva at the end, since I was trying to see if he had a ~meaningful look.

Clip 10 - Class trip meeting

This is pretty easily inferred since Eva is desperate to be social but she volunteered her house off screen via text message.

Viri is super hyped about this meeting even though it’s apparently only going to be her, Eva, Cris, and Cris’ friend. She thinks more people will want to come to their meetings once their project gets off the ground. I think she is concerned about popularity, but not gonna lie, I’m getting less “social climber” vibes from her and more “type-A overachiever.” But I guess she could be both!

Ding dong! Who’s at the door? Why it’s Cris, and she brought Amira! Good God, the way the smile drops off Viri’s face when she sees a Muslim is in her presence. She greets Amira and all, but Viri looks like she’s been told her puppy got run over.

She backtracks from Mallorca, and when Amira asks why, Viri’s like, well it’s all beach. Holy shit, Viri, have you never seen Muslims on a beach? Cris is “just like wear a burkini,” Amira says she’ll get one, and even Cris seems to have a moment where she has to backtrack. It’s like she mentioned the burkini as a joke but didn’t take it seriously. Amira clearly is a bit exasperated by this turn of conversation. Like it’s othering to her, she has to hold these people’s hands.

See I’m really curious about the nature of this trip, because when you say “school trip” I’m coming from my own experience, and I think of like a trip with adult chaperones, guided activities and tours, strict supervision. Partying and sex do happen, but it’s not a free-for-all where the students are running around on their own. What Viri is describing seems more like a casual beach trip? How much independence would the students have? Obviously this is a different culture than my own (and a lot of the strict chaperoning on US school trips comes from wanting to curb underage drinking, which wouldn’t be a problem here) and I’m not familiar with how Spanish schools operate these kinds of excursions, but I’m trying to figure out what are Viri’s plans for this trip.

@skammovistarplus explains some context behind the trip in this post.

Viri gets happy about her trip again and starts talking about it, and she very obviously looks back and forth from Cris to Eva as she talks about it, not making eye contact with Amira. The camera in this part of the scene is pulled back so we can see just how excluded and distant Amira is from this conversation, almost like we’re in her shoes.

Amira talks a lot of sense and says more people should get involved in trip planning. I mean, yeah, otherwise just plan a trip among yourselves and leave the school out of it? Seems easier.

The doorbell rings again, Eva thinks it’s Lara, but when she opens the door it’s …. Nora! Also wearing red lipstick.

Amira gave Nora the address so they’re already acquainted. That’s a change, Nora joining the group because of Amira. Noora said she wanted to get to know Sana better, but Eva was also the one who got her acquainted with the other girls.

This clip cuts off right at Nora’s introduction, and I can’t help but laugh at the context? It’s kind of dramatic, though less in the full episode. Like if I knew nothing about this show, I’d be like … is this supposed to be some twin shenanigans??? Is one of them the good twin and the other the bad twin? Lara and Nora? But I guess this moment is for the existing Skam fans. It’s …. Nora! The one you thought was Nora was emphatically not Nora! Plot twist!

This was the least gay Noora introduction, though.

Clip 11 - More meeting

There was a post about the clips and problems with the length and timing and I completely agree that posting multiple shorter clips is not good. If they keep doing this, it will minimize emotional investment - we won’t be able to sink into a scene without them cutting it off at a certain point. I guess Viri and Amira have been arguing for like an hour which I’m sure was enjoyable to witness for the other girls.

Viri is getting cringy, like I thought she did an OK job of Tracy Flicking it up but she’s getting OTT in a theater kid kind of way. Stress will do that to you.

So I guess a Mr Wonderful notebook is just a brand of notebook with cheesy motivational sayings, and Viri talks like that earnestly, lmao.

Amira thinks they need cool girls to be at the meeting, like Inés. Eva is affected by this. Nora seems to notice.

Nora is from Madison, Wisconsin, holy shit. As a Midwesterner I am rolling on the floor.

I have been to Madison, Wisconsin. It’s a very nice city! I love Wisconsin! I recommend visiting the cheese castle! But it’s just funny that Nora the cool girl is from a place that’s as mundane as Wisconsin. Like there’s that storyline from Love Actually where the awkward guy thinks he can get laid in America just by having a British accent, so he books a ticket to America, to a “fantastic place” called Wisconsin. That’s the joke. It’s supposed to be funny because it’s Wisconsin.

Hajar Brown does a good job as Amira, I like her. She points out that they’re all losers who have nothing better to do on Saturday so they’re at this meeting. Viri says they’re not weird, they’re unique, and Cris asks what about twins, and Nora seems to laugh at herself. SEE WHAT I MEAN ABOUT HER AND LARA BEING TWINS… the secret will come out.

Why is Cris here, anyway? I get why the other four would be weirdos and hanging out together - Eva has been shunned, Viri is a racist Hermione, Amira is Muslim, and Nora is the new girl in town - but Cris seems, frankly, not a lot like original Chris and appeared to have some other friends in our first glimpse of her. What’s her deal?

Nora asks why the cool girls would want to come to them and Amira’s like, well, you’re very pretty, Nora. Eva, you could be pretty if you wore some makeup. L M A O. I think Amira was saying that to fuck with Viri, since she gave her a considering look before moving on to Eva, and Viri looked offended, but lol, as if the four who are supposed to flirt aren’t all pretty, skinny, conventionally attractive girls. (I mean, I hate debates over which characters are the best looking, I just don’t give a shit, but if you ask me, Nora is not noticeably prettier than the other girls. Tbh I kinda didn’t like that they changed it to Nora from Eva since, if they follow the rest of the show, Noora was so singled out for being special and attractive among the girls anyway.)

Viri is beside herself with rage at how this meeting turned out.

Lara never showed so presumably she heard all about Eva’s history from Inés. She also leaves the trip group chat later.

Clip 12 - Eva spies Jorge

Eva is guiding Nora to her bus an hour later. Nora questions whether there will be another meeting and Eva says she supposes not because they don’t have anything in common. Nora says nay, they’re the weirdos at school. It’s cute.

I was about to ask what was the point of this scene since, other than a moment between Eva and Nora, it’s not adding much, but then “Jungle” kicks in again, a bus goes by, and Eva sees Jorge on that bus. Looking like he is talking to a girl. Who may be Inés. Eva realizes she’s been duped! Dramaaaaaa!

That does appear to be the same shiny backpack that Inés had earlier in the episode.

General Comments:

Regardless of execution, in a lot of ways this is what I want from a Skam remake? If I can’t have brand new stories and characters, I’d like to see remixes of the scenes with new dialogue and focus. Very little of the dialogue was taken straight from Skam, iconic moments were left out, new plot elements were introduced. So it makes me want to keep watching to see what else they do.

Unless Skam Spain has a different contract than the other remakes, so far it’s ripping holes in the idea that the remakes were required to be exactly the same as the original.

They sure crammed three episodes into one. I will give them credit, though, it didn’t feel rushed for the most part. I think the girls’ meeting suffered the most since we basically had to meet a bunch of characters at once (only Viri had really been introduced), whereas in the original we’d gotten a solid scene with all of the girls by the time of the meeting and had an inkling as to their personalities. However, the Jorge stuff and Inés and the other elements felt fine, pacing-wise. I love S1′s beginning episodes and things like the cabin episode, but they can easily be condensed if needed.

There was controversy over Chris being skinny in this version, and just to go over that - this isn’t the first version of Skam that’s had a thinner Chris, Druck and Skam Austin had Chrises who weren’t fat, Skam NL does too. I think Skam España got the most flack for this because the Chrises in Druck and Skam Austin were WOC, and while race and body size are two different areas of representation, those characters were still members of an underrepresented group. Skam NL has a thinner white Chris, but it also has the first Noora who’s a WOC so the girl squad has additional diversity besides the Sana character. So I think it’s a combo of everyone being thin + everyone other than Amira being white that made Skam España get criticism in particular.

I do think it is disappointing that all the main girls appear to be thin, because overall I think the various Skams have done a decent job of showing girls with a variety of shapes - not just in terms of skinny or fat, but even the “thin” characters often have different body types than are often seen on TV. And I hope there are more POC in the cast later. That’s all I really want to say about it at the time.

I mentioned this in my Skam NL recap, too, but I think so many characters are called Lucas because it’s a religious name that can be used for symbolism, like Isak.

I feel like some of the more technical aspects are off, like camerawork/editing, and the acting overall is mixed, but it does feel like a down-to-earth low-budget production that cast actual teenagers and that’s my jam, so I am very willing to cut it some slack in this regard.

Some highlights of social media: Lucas posting a shit-stirring #TBT post with him, Eva, and Inés, that’s pretty cold, dude. Eva and Lucas taking turns third wheeling in it group photos.

@skammovistarplus is writing some awesome posts detailing some of the cultural aspects in the clips, go check it out!

I’m not Spanish so if I misunderstand something, feel free to let me know!

Thank you for reading!

#skam españa reactions #skam spain reactions

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peaches-of-1 · 6 years

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Training: Comeback Headcanons

So, I was thinking, (Y/N) in my Training series is pretty involved with the boys and has probably heard all the songs and stuff. Here are just a few things that have happened while I haven’t been updating.

During writing/coming up with everything

Nearly every day they’re asking you “what do you think about this?”

Usually it’s songs and lyrics

Other times it’s outfits and stuff

They want you to be on set with them

You nearly cry at their crying concept pictures

Ok, you totally cry

They have to take you aside for a bit to calm you down

“I know it’s just makeup, but I just don’t like seeing you sad.” You sniffle

All of them go “Awww” in unison and give you hugs before they have to get back to work

You’re surprised when they say you can’t come to the filming of “First Love”

Which is ok because you still like being in suspense with the rest of ARMY

The number of blowjobs go up because they’re busy, but fucking helps writing block

Jungkook teasingly sings “Euphoria” when he cums on your face

When “Singularity” Drops

You find Taehyung immediately and start hitting his chest

“Who gave you the right to be so sexy?”

He thinks it’s cute

You had been there to help reassure him after filming

He giggles, “You really like it?”

You nod. “The lyrics are so good too!”

The smile on Tae’s face is huge and Namjoon texts the groupchat

>>Glad you like it

Even though you want to ask, “WHAT DOES IT MEAN” you decide not to and start reading fan theories

He doesn’t let you leave, though

He asks if you want to fuck to it

It’s a baby making song, so of course you say yes

One of the hottest quickies you’ve ever had

Watching Teaser #1

You’re watching it on the living room TV

Jimin comes into the room asking something

You shush him immediately

At first he’s offended because he didn’t do anything, then smiles when he sees what you’re watching

He watches it with you

When Jungkook opens the door with the key, you’re grabbing his arm eyes still glued to the TV

You gasp when the clothes change, “Wait, didn’t he just--what is this?”

The second question happens when you see the coat hangers

Jimin giggles

He’s watching you while you watch the screen

You’re about to pause, but it’s not the end yet, so he stops your hand

The way your eyes widen at the sample at the end

Your mouth hangs open

“Holy shit. Jimin holy shit!” You finally look at him and shake his arm

“WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT? WHAT DOES IT MEAN?”

You couldn’t help yourself this time

You needed to know

He thinks and then licks his lip, “If we 69 and I come first, then I’ll tell you”

You came first

Those fucking lips bruh

After Teaser #2

They weren’t there when you watched it

All seven walk back into the dorm after a fitting

“What the fuck was that?”

Them: I am confusion

“30 seconds? Less than 30 seconds? That’s it?”

They laugh

Yoongi: It’s coming out in a few days

Your whiny voice comes out and you say that you can’t

You beg them for a sneak peak of the video, and like really beg

They don’t show you, and you’re horny all night now

But they’re tired and need to finish packing, so you take care of it yourself

Comeback V Live

You literally fucked 30 minutes ago

Makeup artists are pissed cuz they have to fix Suga’s makeup

He was nervous before the quickie and now he wasn’t, you’re welcome ARMY

You were not wearing any underwear, but you were wearing shorts and fishnets

Jin wanted you to be his personal slut today

This meant you had a vibrator in all day, and he turned it on during the stream using his phone

You covered your mouth and tried not to fall on the floor

They acted as if everything was normal

The American crew that was working with them was confused

As soon as the stream was over, Jin changed back into his street clothes

Namjoon asked how you were doing, and you tried not to moan

You were begging to be toughed

He lifted up your chin, and you shivered

Jin smacked his hand, “She’s mine today!”

You fucked on the car ride to the hotel and also in the hotel

But you stayed awake for the drop of the “Fake Love” MV

MV Drops

Jimin is mid orgasm in the middle of the watch party, but it’s 5 minutes til it comes out

So you finish him off quickly and wash your hands

You keep refreshing the page and they aren’t allowed to kiss up on you

Jungkook pouts, but you promise to play with him after

When it comes out, you squeal and they all come out of their rooms to watch the video with you

They set up a video camera and everything

Since it’s a casual thing, BigHit doesn’t mind you being in this video

You just couldn’t show anything other than platonic affection

This was fine for you because you were invested in the video

You nearly jumped out of your seat when you saw Tae in the harness

When Suga smirked in the face of fire, you gave him a “Wtf what that?” look and he smiles

“I was thinking about how hot you are during this scene.” He joked

You said “Holy shit” a lot

Jin scolded you every time

After it was over, you watched it with subtitles after shaking for 10 whole minutes and rambling about how proud you were

Then the camera went off and you guys had a celebratory orgy

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dracodormit-blog · 6 years

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drarry prompt: harry proposing to draco, but because of draco’s serious lack of self esteem he thinks that harry’s proposal is a joke. once harry confirms that he really does want to spend the rest of his life with draco, draco breaks down crying because he thinks that he’s a death eater and doesnt deserve love. draco ends up saying yes after much hesitation and they spend the rest of the day cuddling. (idk something ive been thinking of for awhile)

I must say that I enjoyed writing with this prompt, so thank you @dj-enderz! I hope I managed to write it in the way you wanted. Also as I started writing this while listening to a song that inspired the subtitles, I dare you to figure out whose song it is. The first one who answers this correctly gets mentioned in the post with the third part of Silver Eyes.

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Step With Me

Step 1 – Come a Little Closer

It’s a cold Saturday morning and Draco has convinced Harry to play chess with him. That’s how they ended up sitting on the floor, in front of a lit-up fireplace, playing a game and having fun. It’s Draco’s turn and while he tries to decide what his next move will be, Harry observes him. He notices how Draco’s eyebrows are furrowed and the way he bites his bottom lip. The nose that Harry has always been just a bit obsessed with is slightly scrunched up and as he notices these things, his heart swells up with love for the boy in front of him. They’ve been together for quite a while now and more than once Harry had imagined them being together forever. And this moment is one of those as well. Harry’s mind fills up with images of them growing old together, raising children or just spending quiet time next to each other.

Overwhelmed with these thoughts, Harry suddenly jumps up and runs to their shared bedroom. He hears Draco’s surprised yell behind him as he asks where Harry is going. But Harry ignores him and pulls open the bottom drawer of his nightstand. Taking a small box out, he slowly returns back to the living room.

Draco looks up and tilts his head. “Where’d you go?”

Harry runs his hands through his hair looks down. “Can you come a little closer?” he asks and meets Draco’s eyes. Draco looks at him in suspicion but stands up and steps closer to Harry.

Step 2 – Rest Upon my Shoulder

Harry takes Draco’s hand in his and pulls him even closer. Draco stumbles slightly and Harry chuckles. Draco shots him an angry look that causes Harry to laugh even more.

“I still don’t know what’s going on here,” Draco huffs and Harry gives him a gentle smile.

“You know I love you, right?”

Draco flushes red and mumbles something under his breath. It isn’t the first time Harry has said these words so casually but Draco still acts all surprised and embarrassed when he hears them. “I know you do, and I love you too, you dork.”

Harry chuckles again and kisses Draco. The kiss is gentle and slow at first but soon turns a bit more rough and passionate. Draco pulls back after a while, his cheeks still flushed red, and looks into Harry’s green eyes. Warmth spreads inside Draco and those green eyes brighten just for him. Harry hugs him and Draco leans his head upon Harry’s shoulder. Draco inhales the familiar scent of Harry’s that he has grown to love over the months. Everything seems perfect to Draco as he has those strong arms wrapped around him and tears start forming in his eyes. He blinks them away and takes a deep breath to calm down. Draco always finds himself being emotional when Harry showers him with gentle touches and affection. He closes his eyes and just listens to the light sounds the burning wood makes in the fireplace.

Step 3 – I’m Calling You Baby

Harry tightens his arms around Draco for a second and then releases him from the hug. Draco quickly feels cold but doesn’t comment on it.

“Draco…” Harry starts and Draco meets his eyes in an instant.

“Harry…” Draco teases him lightly, trying to make the atmosphere a bit lighter.

“Listen, baby. I’ve got to ask you something.”

Draco tenses at that. Harry rarely calls him ‘baby’ and usually only when he wants to discuss something serious concerning their relationship. And the way Harry fumbles with something in his hands and tries to avoid eye contact every few seconds, makes Draco even mores uspicious and concerned.

“What is it?” Draco asks with a tone so cold that he immediately feels bad about. Harry looks at him with a hurt expression but quickly hides it.

“It’s just… I’ve been thinking…” Harry starts nervously.

“Go on,” Draco encourages him to continue even though dread settles in his stomach.

“Well…” Harry gulps and slowly lowers himself down onto one knee.

Step 4 – We Can Get Married

Draco’s heart stops beating when Harry opens a small black box and a simple, silver ring appears in front of Draco’s eyes.

“Will you marry me, Draco?”

Everything stops for a moment and Draco is lost at words. But then his anxiety and insecurities kick in. “You’re joking, aren’t you? This is just a way to get me to break it off with you, isn’t it?

Hurt flashes through Harry’s face and he stands up. He once again takes Draco’s hand into his and squeezes it reassuringly. “I love you, Draco. And I can assure you that I’m completely serious about this. I’ve been thinking of it for a while now, and I realized that you’re the only one I can imagine spending the rest of my life with.”

Draco lowers his head as tears gather in his eyes. “Why would you want me? A Death Eater?” His voice breaks and his legs give out as tears start overflowing. Harry gathers him into his arms and holds him tights as Draco sobs heavily. “I don’t deserve love and I definitely don’t deserve you, Harry.” He manages to say through his sobs and shivers.

Step 5 – Top it with a Cherry

Harry rubs Draco’s back as he guides him to the sofa. They sit down and Draco slowly calms down.

“Draco,” Harry starts and tilts Draco’s chin up with his finger. “You’re an amazing person and the actions of your past, which weren’t even something you chose to do, are not important to me and they shouldn’t be important to anyone.They don’t define you for who you really are.”

Draco opens his mouth to say something but Harry shushes him gently. “I’m not finished yet. The thing is, Draco, I know who you really are. You’re someone who does anything to make me smile even when the cases at work are horrible and I’m feeling down because of that. You’re the one who holds me tight when nightmares keep me awake at night. And you’re the one who is meant for me, I just know it. So please, don’t doubt my love for you. I truly do love you and I want nothing more than to marry you.”

Tears gather in Draco’s eyes again but this time they’re not sad tears. He pulls Harry into a long and passionate kiss, then mutters a “yes” before kissing him again.

Step 6 – As Good as it Gets

Harry is happy, he really is. And so is Draco. They spend the rest of their day on the sofa, cuddling and talking about everything and nothing at the same time. Draco admires the simple engagement ring that now proudly rests on his left ring finger. Harry pulls Draco closer whenever for some reason they find themselves more apart than they want and kisses are obviously a must during that time. Everything seems as good as it could get after such an emotional day. And not even noticing the time and place around them, they slowly drift to sleep in each other’s arms.

#draco malfoy #drarry fics #drarry af #drarry fandom #drarry #my work #my writing #ask prompt #ask #prompt #harry x draco #draco x harry #harry potter #established couple #proposal #insecure

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mrjcb · 7 years

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My Best Friend’s Sister (Part 5)

Adult Content. 18+. Start this story from Part 1 here.

Part 5:

So I was on a mission to see Eva again...

... and I told David we should hang out. Now, David and Eva lived right next to a pool hall, and David suggested we go shoot pool before ordering pizza or something back at his house. Sounded good to me. We agreed to meet at the pool hall.

I headed out a bit early and got to the pool hall first, okay?

I was taking the pool balls to the pool table that I had reserved when, in the corner of my eye, I see something moving towards me quickly. By the time I turn around I get the biggest fucking slap on my ass that I’ve ever received.

You must be wondering, “What the fuck is this? Did I just accidentally stumble into some other random-ass story?”

But nope. It was Eva.

She laughed her little ass off and backpedaled away from me, I guess anticipating that I was going to chase her. She was right.

I rushed over to the table that I reserved, put all the pool balls I was carrying down, and took off after her.

This place was probably half-full. Maybe 15 or 20 people were in there watching us acting like children.

I ran after her while apologizing to all the people I was passing by at each table, and caught up to her & grabbed one of her hands. She tried to get away and I wrapped my arms around her in that position that you use to help someone when they are choking. I’m not even going to try and spell that shit. It starts with an “H” though right? I think you know what I’m talking about.

Anyway. I locked her down and immobilized her from behind. She was laughing uncontrollably, and I said something to her, I forgot what, and she turned to me and kissed me on the cheek. I told her she was going to pay for that, but I really don’t remember this part of the conversation too well to be honest so I’ll just move on. Just young-love banter. You know the kind. *wink*.

David was still getting stuff from his car or parking or something, maybe he let Eva off so he could find parking, I don’t know. But it turns out that Eva was hanging out with one of her cousins at her house. When she heard that David was gonna shoot pool with me, she invited herself and her cousin to come along. God, I love how delightfully manipulative and committed Eva was to making sure she saw me. Ladies, take notes.

Anyway, so Eva invited herself and her cousin to come along -- her female cousin, to be specific. I forgot her name. Let me think. Oh, I remember it now -- but I really shouldn’t use it here in public writing, so... uh... we’ll call her... You know what, it doesn’t matter. Let’s call her “Cousin” because she barely matters.

So the four of us -- Me, David, Eva, and Cousin-who-doesn’t-have-a-name-because-she-isn’t-important -- are there playing pool.

At a certain point in time me and Cousin were alone by ourselves, and Cousin said to me, “You guys have to be careful” while shaking her head with a smile.

I said to myself, “Motherfucker. It’s already starting.” You know? Like, I just know it’s a matter of time before this whole fucking thing blows up in my face and David finds out that my sperm is playing motherfucking “Marco Polo” inside his sister’s body.

Anyway. We finished playing pool and went to their house. David suggested I crash at his place since it was getting so late (this was the best evidence to me, at the time, that he had no idea what was going on because... I mean, what kind of person knowingly invites their friend over to their house to fuck their sister? Am I right?)

So I said, “Sure, I’ll sleep over, buddy.” And about an hour or two later David said he was going to bed, so I went over to Eva’s bedroom to “go to sleep” but got on my phone to text Eva, who was already in her mom’s bedroom.

It went something like this:

Me: Sleeping?

Her: No I’m waiting for you

Me: Wait.

It was something like that. I may have said, “Soon.” instead of “Wait.”

I stayed in Eva’s bedroom for about 10 more minutes and went into the bathroom for a second, and then went back out & pulled Eva’s bedroom door shut (do you see how sneaky I was being? I put some real thought into that. Please be proud of me.), and then slowly & silently went over to her mom’s bedroom. There was a light shining from inside that I could see underneath the door.

When I got in there, Eva was laying down on her back on her mom’s bed and...

Her underwear was pulled down around her thighs and she was playing with herself.

Good God. I got so fucking hard so fucking quick. But I just stayed there watching her.

She had left the closet light on and left the door ajar so the light reached the bed, illuminating her body so I could see what she was doing. What a good girl.

Eva was on her back with a pillow behind her head. Her knees were bent slightly and her feet were flat on the bed.

I kept watching her as my cock became desperate to escape my pants. Eventually I think she said, “Show me your cock. I want to see your cock.” or something similar to that, I don’t think that’s exactly what she said. But whatever she did say, she mumbled it very lightly during her little sexy moans. She said it a few times until I understood what she meant.

I pulled my underwear down and took my cock out -- my very hard cock -- and held it in my hand, and began to stroke it really, really slowly while watching this dirty girl pleasure herself.

She moaned loudly and her body shook for a second. Her knees jerked upwards for a split second, her feet quickly coming off the bed and then returned back onto it. Eva let out a gasp. It was such a beautiful little gasp. Subtle, you know? Easy to miss. Then, a very long, light, satisfied moan came next as she tilted her head backwards, extending her petite neck towards the ceiling.

Seeing my little sex-kitten orgasm in front of me almost made me explode. I walked over to the side of the bed and took off my underwear while standing in front of her. She was laying down on her side, close to the edge of the bed, her head resting sideways, looking in my direction. I grabbed my cock and rubbed it slightly on her cheek, making a trail towards her mouth. I slid my cock between her soft lips and she took it in. She sucked it slowly as I stood above her, watching her, and then I started to thrust in her mouth.

Eva put one of her hands on my cock and she sat up and began taking more control. and started sucking my cock vigorously while jerking me off. Her hair felt so good pushed against my stomach.

I was already leaking precum and was on the edge of climax. My legs started to shake and my body jerked away from her as an involuntary physical response, but she leaned forward with me and kept her mouth wrapped around my volcanic cock. This behavior told me she wanted my cum in her mouth badly. She kept sucking me deeply.

I started to moan and groan and the first shot of cum came out, going straight into her mouth. Her tongue swirled on my cock, encouraging it to keep spurting out the juice that she so badly wanted. I kept splurting my cum on her tongue inside her mouth and put my hands on her head while leaning forward.

My legs and my ass jiggled as the last couple drops of semen dribbled into her mouth. She pulled her lips slowly away from my cock and some cum dripped down from her lips onto her chin. I wiped it away with my finger and kissed her

I layed down next to Eva and kind of on top of her, and she snuggled up next to me really closely and we fell asleep.

The next day we got up early because Eva had to go out with her mom if I recall correctly. I went home almost right away. As soon as David got up I headed out of there and drove home.

The following week I didn’t see Eva at all because I was busy with work stuff (I was working in a family business at the time), and I was still going out most nights with Larry.

But Kitten and I texted throughout the week and spoke on the phone. I wasn’t hanging out with David that much (honestly, it was weird. After I started sleeping with Eva, every time I hung out with David it became an “I’m just waiting to see Eva” game. You know? I couldn’t hang out with David without going absolutely crazy thinking about Eva.)

So I wasn’t hanging out with David that much, but Eva wanted to see me. And I wanted to see her (duh), so finally I invited her over to my house to watch a movie.

We decided to watch “The Orphanage.” It was kind of a good movie but I had to read English subtitles since I don’t understand Spanish. It’s a horror film.

Anyway, we were laying down in my bed watching it. When we finished we were laying next to each other just talking, saying sweet things. I told her how beautiful she was, and how much my mom loved her (seriously, my mom kept telling me that I needed to marry her, lol).

I was playing with Eva��s hair and started to kiss her.

I sat up and had my legs forward, and she sat on my lap, with her thighs on either side of my body and her arms wrapped around my neck. Not sure if I’m painting a clear picture, but we’re face-to-face. Kind of like she was giving me a lap dance. Straddling me in the cow-girl position, except I’m sitting up-right with my face in her boobs.

I looked up slightly to look into her eyes, and I started to kiss her deeply.

She kissed me a little but then stopped. I kept kissing her, and she started to laugh.

I was wondering what she was laughing about so I pulled back to look at her and then I noticed... she wasn’t laughing.

She was crying.

A lot.

I looked at her and she started crying even more.

“Hey, hey -- what’s wrong?” I asked softly. But she didn’t answer.

I pulled her towards me and held her in my arms, and she squeezed me tightly with her arms around my neck.

I put one of my hands behind her head and the other around her back, cradling her, and started to rock her left and right gently. She cried into my shoulder.

I told her everything was going to be okay. I told her she was special, and that I was there with her.

I didn’t know what was wrong -- if anything even was wrong. But I realized in that moment that, my job for the evening -- my responsibility -- wasn’t to seduce her or to fuck her or to make her have an orgasm, or even to “fix” what was wrong. My job was simply to hold her. To make her feel safe. To let her know that I wouldn’t let anything happen to her. That she was never, ever alone. Ever.

I spoke softly into her ear, “It’s okay to cry. It’s okay. I’m here. I’m here. I’m here with you. Cry with me. Cry with me. Cry with me, Kitten.”

I didn’t ask her what was wrong again. I just held her, and hugged her, and told her that I was there for her. I held my precious, precious girl in my arms the whole night.

And with everything we had been through up until that point -- the sex, the fucking, all the talking -- all of that stuff was great and amazing and everything.... but, really, it was that night -- the night where she was crying, the night where I held her in my arms -- it was that night that I felt like our souls really met each other. And it was beautiful.

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