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#I like that MCs presence is helping him change into a better person.
maddymoreau · 1 year
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Thinking about how Diavolo’s feelings transcend time and how in the Nightbringer UR+ card Demon Lord’s Castle Tour this conversation happens.
When asked, “Do you wish to see your father?”
Diavolo responds:
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“I suppose I do . . .” isn’t the typical reaction to how a child would feel about wanting to see their parent. Especially when said parent has essentially been in a coma for a year.
Along with how Diavolo describe his father.
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It makes more sense why when you learn in Lesson 56 how Diavolo was treated by him growing up.
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Diavolo can tell when others are lying but is unable to understand his father’s intentions.
Diavolo mentions that he lived a very sheltered life growing up. That from a young age his father never allowed him a chance to talk to anyone outside the castle.
His childhood friend was Mephistopheles. A demon literally RAISED to be his friend. Putting a barrier between the two because Mephistopheles would put Diavolo on a pedestal.
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The isolating childhood he experienced riddled with his strict father constantly scolding him.
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Despite everything MC is so important to him he wants to see his father again so we can meet.
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temis-de-leon · 5 days
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Shy gn!reader confesses to the Dateables
Characters: Diavolo, Barbatos, Solomon and Simeon (x reader, separately)
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Anon request: Could I request headcanons for Diavolo, Barbatos, Solomon, and Simeon react to shy gn crush confessing to him nervously?
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A/N: I made this so the Dateables were already crushing on the reader for a while, but it's the reader who confesses. Once again, Simeon gave me no inspiration and yet his section was the one I enjoyed the most
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Diavolo
He’s used to loneliness and sacrifices, dedicating his limited free time to a small inner circle that he’s unable to expand. The rest of his devotions goes to his dreams and his duties, and that includes, above many other things, the student exchange program.
The only human he personally knows is Solomon and everybody is aware of the sorcerer’s peculiar personality, so he’s quick to accept that you’re going to be different from everything he’s ever known.
He just didn’t know how much.
You build a friendship with him, treating him without inhibitions while still respecting him. You accept and join his childish whims, ask for his advice in more serious matters and speak your mind without fear.
You make him feel normal, helping his love for you grow slow but steady over a strong foundation.
But then your behaviour around him changes and he feels completely lost. There’s a sort of restraint he’s never seen in you, your recent silence and your avoidance to look at him in the eye making him wonder in hurt if you finally know enough about him to be afraid.
Diavolo feels his heart sink when you ask to speak to him in private and he’s willing to accept he has lost you.
How wrong he is.
Your confession leaves him speechless, but the more you talk with a stammer while twisting your fingers, the more he feels his cheeks blush.
He doesn’t confess back. He directly asks you out on a date.
Barbatos
His duty to the Young Master doesn’t feel like a sacrifice to him. It’s an honour he’s glad to act in, so, although he likes to keep some free time for his private life, Barbatos is more than happy to set Lord Diavolo above everything else.
He doesn’t pay you much attention at first, given that there’s little to no connexion between you two. In fact, the first few times you hang out together outside official matters it’s always organized by someone else, mainly Luke.
The young angel enjoys baking and even his prejudices decrease upon the demon’s talents in the kitchen.
He also enjoys spending time with MC.
So he combines both of those things. That’s how Barbatos gets to know you better.
He revels in the discovery of your resilience and your kindness despite what surrounds you. Your smile while measuring ingredients with Luke, your attentiveness at his teaching.
He knows Lord Diavolo appreciates him and thanks his presence, but you’re the first one to treat him so… highly? You admire him, you hear him, you seek him.
His busy mind and busy schedule give him almost no time to ruminate his feelings, but he can’t run away for much longer.
It’s around the same time he finally accepts his need to be with you that you start to fidget around him. He sees you looking at him under your lashes, timidly smiling and looking at him when you think he isn’t paying attention.
Your feelings are obvious to him, but he lets himself enjoy the situation for as long as possible. It’s too adorable to let go.
When you finally gather the courage you need to confess and it’s his turn to be sincere, his words are worth more than a hundred romance books.
Solomon
At the beginning, his interest in you is entirely academic. A regular human living amongst the most powerful demons of the Devildom? Now, that is something worth his while!
Witnessing first-hand how your humanity is put to the test on the daily is fun at first, but then again… You still have humanity. Once lost, it wouldn’t come back.
He ultimately decides to side with you. It makes him feel a little better too.
Although you both have a cordial relationship, barely a friendship, he isn’t your priority. To be fair, you aren’t his either, so he can’t complain.
But then time passes and his infatuation starts to grow.
You remind him of better things. Those he lost long time ago and those he knows he’s incapable of reaching. You make him want to be better, to try and to be someone that you could be prouder of.
He uses his vast knowledge to compete for your attention. His stories and his studies, his vulnerability slowly showing to you. It’s difficult, but you’re worth it.
He knows it’s working when you go out of your way to spend time with him, a difficult task when half of your roommates, if not all of them, don’t trust him at all. That makes him elated, but insecure at the same time.
He doesn’t know how to move things forward without spoiling them, so he waits until you make the first move. When the moment comes, he forces himself to memorize every second of it.
Solomon doesn’t want to forget your timid expression or the way you can’t decide what to say to put your feelings on display. He doesn’t want to forget the wide smile you show when he reciprocates your affections.
Simeon
He cares for you since the beginning, even before forming a friendship. It’s in his nature to be kind and caring and he can’t help but to act on it with you.
Your personality immediately draws him closer. How positive you are despite your situation as well as your determination to keep going forward, proving the demons wrong.
Simeon feels a strange satisfaction whenever Lucifer’s brow twitches at your misdeeds.
It’s thanks to Luke, who wants to keep two of his favourite people close, that he gets the chance to know you better.
He enjoys every occasion you visit Purgatory Hall. Sometimes you’re invited by Luke to help him cook, study or even make puzzles; and other times is Simeon himself who asks you to spend time with them.
The evenings you manage to have dinner with them are the most fulfilling for him.
He’s never felt a love so strong before, but he’s a world renounced writer and a romantic at heart, so the only thing he’s capable of doing in this situation is to pour his affections and hope for you to accept his heart.
The conclusion reaches an end when he manages to reset his DDD yet again.
Luke, although irritated at him, manages to call you before going to the castle to hung out with Barbatos, but Simeon doesn’t mind. More than that, he prefers it.
The sole idea of being alone with you brings warmth to his heart, after all.
He knows you feel the same too. Seeing the light in your eyes, the curve of your smile and the tenderness in your shy-filled whispers is enough for him to know.
You don’t even have time to confess on your own.
Simeon asks with a sweet voice if his interpretations of your feelings are correct. If they are, bless his heart, he feels the very same.
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kitsune-oji · 10 months
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Can we pls have a married to satan hc like the mammon and dia ones?
Married to Satan
Of course! I haven't written Satan often yet so I hope this is good ':) sorry for how long this took
Satan x gn! Mc (you/yours)
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I imagine married life with Satan would be very domestic, though not a lot would change from when you were "just" partners
Parallel play is a big one with him. He's reading while you do your own thing, which may also be reading or drawing, playing games (quietly), crocheting? Whatever hobby you have that can be done inside, quietly, by his side
He likes to do little things to make you happy, like surprising you with latte art or taking you out on a little date (you know the cat café is his go to but if another place is your favorite, that's alright too)
If you want to, he would consider moving out of the HoL with you. Finally he'd be far away from Lucifer and have you all to himself. Though, if you two do end up moving together, he has to admit that despite how irritating it always was, he sort of misses the chaos his brothers brought with them. It's so quiet without them in the same house
If you do stay at the HoL however, Satan is quick to use the "they're MY spouse" card whenever he wants your time (or to smile smugly at Lucifer when he says it, reminding him that Satan won your heart and not he)
Your presence during any sort of meeting or gathering - be it casual like the Anti Lucifer League or something more formal like a Banquet where his Connections™ show up - is more than welcome
If you have any ambitions to perhaps publish a book or start a business, maybe open a store, Satan has the demon for you and introduces you without hesitation. You can't find anyone more supportive of your endavours than him, surely
Everyone knows you as Satan's spouse, someone who he's so smitten with that you could very well be a cat. Yes, someone actually asked you that before and looked even more confused when you had to tell them that no, you're not actually a cat with shape-shifting powers, thank you very much
It was sort of funny at first but it got old pretty quickly
Sometimes, demons would come to you with a gift, hoping to get into Satan's good graces. If you indulge them or not is on you. Satan's opinion on the matter is quite clear: He doesn't care for people who only want to use as a means to an end. If the can't even see how wonderful you are, they're not worth his time anyway
Walking through the devildom streets has never been so safe. Satan doesn't really have any big enemies and those that didn't get along with him weren't dumb enough to try to get you involved. After all, nobody could save them from his wrath if you got hurt
On the other hand, you're the first person anyone tries to contact whenever he does lose his temper. You're a surefire way to get him to calm down, like a joker card. Your presence soothes him and talking out all his troubles with you helps him regulate his emotions better. That is, assuming you don't get angry at whatever he got angry at too
Sometimes, you'll catch him playing with the ring on your finger, putting his own next to it and just looking at it with the softest expression. If you ask him what he's thinking about, his gaze will go to you and he will just tell you that he loves you and that he's happy you're with him, before kissing you gently
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bite-sized-devil · 1 year
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Piggy Back Rides
You've had a particularly long hard day at RAD. Exhausted and dreading the walk home, you ask your favourite demon brother for a little favour.
Was going to do these in groups, but they just kept getting longer and longer. Apologies my fellow simps, please enjoy them one at a time starting with the eldest and finishing with the youngest.
TW: none it’s pure fluff. GN! MC
Leviathan
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Whenever Levi decided to grace RAD with his presence you always made sure you were by his side the entire day. You knew how nervous he was to be amongst his peers, so why not make it easier for him by being his buffer? The only downside was that you were often mentally and physically drained by the end of the day. Luckily for you however, Levi always seemed to know when you reached your limit.
You had just intercepted another lower level demon from encroaching on his personal space and he saw how your shoulders sagged slightly and your voice lost some of it's normal sweetness.
You tried to hide it as you turned back to him, plastering a smile back on your face and giving him a thumbs up. But he knew you to well, he'd made it his own personal mission to uncover everything about you.
It made his chest ache, you clearly cared about him, he could still see your eyes light up when he returned your thumbs up. You were always trying to make him feel better, and do things for him.
He didn't understand why you constantly chose him over his brothers, why it was his face you looked for first whenever you entered a room. How you'd make a beeline straight for him whenever you saw him, smiling like you just won a boss level on one of his games.
His brothers might think he was clueless about others emotions and feelings but he wasn't when it came to you. His sweet, caring, funny, and beautiful player 2. He knew everything about you, including your little crush on him.
Naturally, he was in love with you but you were so perfect! It made him nervous, what if you suddenly realised what a loser he was? And decided you wanted someone who wasn't holed up in their room 24/7. He will admit you had managed to take him to a few cool places when you mentioned you needed some fresh air.
You had been so happy when he'd said he was coming with you, he thought it was cute how adamant you were that he didn't have to if he didn't want to. Blushing like a tomato when he'd taken your hand and dragged you out of his room saying you'd better hurry before he changed his mind.
He hears you quietly sigh when you sit down beside him at your desk. Maybe you need a shoulder to lean your head on, he can help you with that. Reaching out he grabs the side of your chair and drags it towards him.
"Levi!" You squeal making him chuckle softly.
"Lol sorry MC, I just wanted you closer." He says as he wraps his arm around your shoulders. You're so cute the way you try to cover up the blush that is blossoming on your cheeks by putting your hand over your face.
"Do you want to skip out on our last class?" He says to you as he pulls your hands away from your face by grabbing them and holding them in his own bigger one. He's not letting you hide that beautiful blush that is just for him.
You're playing with his fingers, clearly enjoying how his feel interlocked with yours. You look up at him with a smile that makes his head feel dizzy, your pretty eyes so wide staring up at him. He can hear your heart rate increase, it always did when he touched you. He originally thought you had a heart defect, but then came to realise it only increased around him.
"If you want to we can, I'm kind of tired anyway. Do you think, maybe....." You say before trailing off and looking down at your hands intertwined with his.
He removes his hand that's holding yours, taking note of the sudden pout of your lips as he does. He'll remember that late at night, wondering what it would feel like to have them against his own. He grasps your chin tilting your head, making you look up at him again.
"Maybe what MC?" He says, silently hoping you'd ask him to kiss you, even though that's a long shot. He knows how shy you are, one can dream though!
You start to squirm in his grasp, making him grip your chin tighter. You furrow your eyebrows in obvious frustration, you look like an angry kitten. Sometimes he wonders how you haven't been eaten yet? He might have to keep a even closer eye on you from now on. Or maybe he'll just never leave your side.
"I just... Wanted... T'know... You could... G'me.... Piggy back ride?" Your eyes meet his when the words 'piggy back' leave your lips. You look so nervous, like a deer in headlights. He's never said no to you before, but you had never asked for anything like this before either. How could he possibly refuse! You would be pressed against his back... Your arms wrapped around his neck... His hands grasping the backs of your thighs...
He stands up suddenly before he can stop himself. Startling you so much that an adorable little squeak is forced out of you. He needs those things to happen right now, not wanting to wonder anymore about how you would feel clinging to him the whole way home.
"Yes!" He says way to loudly, not that it matters he's already caused a scene in class. Your answering giggle has him reaching to pull you from your seat. This is happening now, no more waiting. He's going to be your knight in shining armour, maybe you would reward your hero with a sweet kiss at the end of his quest. If not, he might take a play from one of those cool anime guys and just steal one.
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softxsuki · 1 year
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Hey there!!
I just discovered your blog while looking for some comfort fics and I immediately loved your newest Hawks fic and I will definitely be checking out your Yona fics now!🥹🥹
I have an urgent request too actually but pls don't feel pressured or anything if you are busy!! I'm just having a really bad BPD episode at the moment and I have the urge to cut everyone I love off because I feel unloved by them and like such a burden to everyone and I feel like I can't handle the pain anymore..
Sooo therefore I'd like to request Drabbles/Oneshots (honestly fully up to you) for Hawks, Gojo and Lucifer (only if that's okay for you ofc!!🩷) with a reader who acts all cold and becomes more and more distant in their relationship and when they confront her about it she breaks down and admits that she did it out of fear that they were going to abandon her anyway and bcs she felt like they deserved better..?
I know it's very specific and I am kind of embarrassed to ask for it but honestly my fav characters are my only source of comfort rn and I saw that you do mental health requests/comfort fics and I thought it's the sweetest and most thoughtful thing ever!!🥲
So even if you won't write this for or can't do it "immediately" I wanna thank you for doing this for the mentally ill folks who get their comfort from fictional characters. You are a lovely person! 🥹
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Hawks, Gojo, and Lucifer (Separate) with Reader Who Tries To Cut Them Out of Her Life
Pairings: Hawks x Fem!Reader, Gojo x Fem!Reader, Lucifer x Fem!MC
Warnings: mentions of feeling like a burden, wanting to cut loved ones out of your life, unedited (excuse any mistakes)
Genre: comfort
Post-Type: headcanons
Word Count: 1.07k
Summary: In which you try and distance yourself from them and they realize and try to talk it out with you (Yeah ik I'm still bad at writing these summaries, I'm sorry 😢 😂 )
[A/N: HEY! Thank you so much for your sweet words! I'm blessed that I'm able to write things for people that provide them with comfort. I'm so sorry for the long wait, life has been crazy, but I managed to find the motivation to get this done today! I hope it helps. I know you were looking for oneshots or drabbles, but I only write headcanons when someone wants a request for multiple people, so I hope that's okay! Enjoy! I hope it provides you with a little bit of comfort if anything :) <3 Take care!]
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Hawks:
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He gets very petty and if you decide to avoid him, he won’t make the effort to force you to be in his presence, but ofc it does sadden him, he loves you and having you push him away and not reach out to him less and less, hurts
Until one day he grows impatient with your silence
What did he do to have you shut him out? Why were you doing this? 
He needed answers and he needed them now, so get ready for him banging at your door and inviting himself in as soon as you open it a crack
Hawks is gentle with the way he approaches the issue, honestly he might think that he may have accidentally done or said something without realizing it that possibly hurt your feelings
So he begins with an apology and just asks what you need him to do for you to forgive him for whatever he’s done
You mean the world to him, so having you slowly push him away from you without any kind of warning makes him nervous…he can’t lose you
“I know I’m out frequently doing hero work, and I sometimes have to leave our dates if I’m called for an emergency. I’m sorry if you’ve felt like I don’t care about you because of these things. But I want you to know right here and now that I love you so much and nothing will ever change that. So please, let me into your heart, don’t push me away anymore Y/N…”
Once you tell him that you’ve just been feeling like a burden to him, he moves quickly to wipe those thoughts out of your head
Never once has he thought you were a burden and his love for you just seems to grow as the days pass
Moving forward, he tries his best to verbally express his feelings for you more often, as well as trying to find time to see you again if he ever has to leave for a hero emergency
From now on, you’ll never doubt his love for you–and please, just mention whenever you feel this way again to him, he’d love to talk it out with you instead of just having you push him away
Gojo:
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This man gets so pouty when you decide to ignore him
But it doesn’t affect how much he sees you on a daily basis
He refuses to let you avoid him and will continue to stick by your side
He’ll annoy you with his presence everyday, until you lash out in desperation because as much as you tried to slowly avoid him he was always there
But he remains unphased through it all and continues to act like this idiot he is
He does however, decide to get a little serious and hear you out as to why you are attempting to push him away, when you already know you’re stuck with him for life
Gojo isn’t stupid, as much as he tries to avoid serious conversations, once you actually open up to him, he knows that it’s time to listen to you and be there for you.
So when he hears that you’ve been feeling like a burden to him, he patiently listens to you the whole time
“Well, you don’t have to worry about that. If anything I’m probably the one who’s a burden on you. I know I can be too much sometimes, but I just want to make sure you’re always happy. I’m sorry for not realizing your feelings sooner, Y/N. I don’t know exactly what's going on in that head of yours, and even though I joke around too much you can always open up to me about all those complicated feelings in your heart.”
A rare, empathetic Gojo moment that you out of everyone else in his life gets to see, so it’s truly an honor
Be he wipes an insecurities you may be feeling away and gets to joking around again in hope that it helps lift your mood
He’d probably put his phone on silent from all the elder higher-ups trying to contact him and spend the day with you–after all you are the most important person in his life, he’d do anything for you
Lucifer:
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Out of everyone else on this list, Lucifer definitely knows what’s up even by the slightest change in your mood or actions towards him
I picture him not caring that you’re pushing him away, he's still going to go see you every morning and wish you goodnight every night
Stubbornness doesn’t work on him. He’s been alive for too long to have things go over his head so he already can kinda guess what’s going on with you after avoiding him just once
Literally, he sense something is off so fast, and his pride won’t allow him to just leave you be so you hear him knocking at your bedroom door so fast; you didn’t even get a chance to properly try and avoid him NFJENAKF
So he gets down to business very quickly, asking you what’s been going on and what he can do to help you feel better
Don’t even try to play dumb and act like nothing's wrong by trying to persuade him that you’re completely fine–he will see right through all your attempts
Once he is aware of how you’ve been feeling, he’s almost offended
“Have I done anything to prove that I do not care for you anymore MC? I invite you to my room each night, I treat you with respect and as much love as I possibly can. I know I’m not always as open with my feelings in public, but we both know that if I didn’t care for you, I wouldn't give you my time of day. That would never happen though, I’m already in too deep for you and nothing can change that…not even if Diavolo himself commanded it.”
He’s a passionate man, and knowing that you felt like he didn’t love you anymore really bruised his pride.
Expect many romantic advances after this; private dinners at Ristorante Six (he’ll rent out the whole place for you), going to see plays together, late night walks in the devildom away from his chaotic brothers who won’t leave you alone, and much more
He’ll make sure you know he loves you at the end of every night, so be prepared!
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REQUESTS ARE OPEN :D
Posted: 4/26/2023
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someone-named-adel · 13 days
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I swear to God I don't want to have children-
I swear... 😭
Anyways, The title of this is:
“For every action you take, there will be a consequence.”
This is, What I would say, one of the fluffiest things I've ever done
(This writing contains only Donatello x Reader, this takes place before the first writing)
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Donatello let out an annoyed groan, his brow furrowed and he crossed his arms, looking like he was about to throw a tantrum.
He barely knew how to deal with his emotions in his normal state, but now that he was a baby, he felt like he was like a time bomb that would explode at the slightest mishap.
It didn't help that he couldn't be as productive as before.
Not with MC and Abril monitoring him and his brothers.
He let out a sigh, and began to mentally recite solutions to cope with his situation.
Some steps that he knew very well began to be heard from the distance, slowly, the person who owned those steps stood next to Donatello, looking at him with, what he could assume, It was worry and a little suspicion.
"Is something wrong, little Don?"
It was MC who, while they was asking him, they crouching down a little so they could see the face of Baby Donatello from a better angle.
Baby Donatello looked at they with a pout, his face twitching a little more at the innocent question.
The last thing he wanted was to explode in front of MC.
Even though MC asked him if there was something wrong, he didn't answer, preferring to simply turn around and start walking in the direction of his lab.
MC, not wanting to let Baby Donatello lock himself in his lab for hours like he did the last time he was frustrated about something, they walked behind him, three paces away to keep a distance from him.
Baby Donatello, knowing that MC was going to be insistent, and already having the idea stuck in his head that it was going to be a long day, abruptly stopped his gait, causing MC to stop their steps too, obviously keeping their distance, and turned his body to face MC.
"Oh, seriusly!?"
"Stop following me!" Baby Donatello shouted in frustration, clenching his hands into fists.
MC stared at him for a few seconds, his calm expression contrasting with Baby Donatello's frustrated and angry expression.
Without changing their expression, MC said in a straightforward manner "No."
Obviously their answer made Baby Donatello's mood worse.
Turning around in frustration, Baby Donatello continued walking, only this time, more faster than before.
As soon as he reached the laboratory, he wanted to close the doors quickly to prevent MC from entering.
Unfortunately, MC already knew what Baby Donatello was going to do (since it was not the first time that as a baby and in his normal state, Donatello would close the door of his laboratory without letting anyone in for quite a while), and was faster than him, entering before the doors closed.
Despite that detail, Baby Donatello ignored MC and went straight to a corner, which contained a couple of blankets, pillows and a small mattress, big enough for a child no older than 10 years old.
With heaviness, Baby Donatello walked straight to that place, and just threw himself on the mattress, rolling a little and covering himself like a burrito with the blankets lying on the spot.
With light, almost silent steps, MC approached the small makeshift resting space they had set up on the third day of the four turtle brothers' transformation into babies.
With a quiet sigh, MC sat down on the ground at a moderate distance from that specific spot, not wishing to disturb Baby Donatello so much with his presence.
"Get out" Baby Donatello said as he buried himself a little deeper into the blankets.
Silently, MC got up, but, instead of leaving, they simply walked to the side of the mattress, moved one or another carelessly thrown cable coming from the many machines of the lab belonging to the turtle in purple, and plugged in a small lamp, which had a pattern of stars and moons on it, there was even one or another rocket.
"Get out" Donatello repeat.
"please..."
"..." MC pretended not to hear him beg for them to leave., and continued with their own things.
The light from the lamp was soft, not bright enough to clearly illuminate the entire room, but not dim enough to illuminate nothing but itself.
With every move MC made, Baby Donatello buried himself slightly deeper and deeper into his blankets, as if he wanted to simply disappear into them.
Still in silence, and trying to make as little noise as possible, MC took out a small box of matches, which they had recently bought, in their pocket to replace the empty one in the kitchen, and lit a lavender-scented incense.
They made sure that it was at a considerable distance so that the smell would not be too strong for little Donatello.
Resting the incense on one of the lab's machines, and making sure that the machine's material was not flammable, MC returned to their original place near the small corner where Baby Donatello seemed to want to disappear.
"Will you still not tell me anything?" MC asked in a whisper, leaning their back against the wall, legs together and resting one of their elbows on their knee.
"..." Baby Donatello stayed silent
A few minutes passed in complete silence before MC spoke again.
"It's okay, you don't have to tell me what's going on if you don't want to" they mentioned in a sympathetic voice, as if they knew that no matter how hard they tried to push Baby Donatello, they wasn't going to get anywhere.
Seconds passed, and slowly a movement was felt within the blankets in which Baby Donatello was wrapped.
Small hiccups were heard, and slowly a small green and purple figure was glimpsed beneath the blankets.
"MC?" Baby Donatello called they, in a broken whisper, as if he was afraid to break the silence of the place with his voice.
"Yes?" MC replied calmly.
"Why... Why are you still here?" That question caught MC a little off guard, who leaned slightly closer to the, still, lump under the blankets.
"Please, could you explain yourself better, Don?" MC said in a soft voice.
"Why... Why don't you leave when my brothers.... When I demand you to leave?"
"..." MC didn't know what to answer.
"Why do you insist on staying?" Donatello muttered.
"Because I want to, it's my duty" replied MC, who didn't really understand that the question didn't refer to whatever MC was thinking at that moment.
"Scoff... You're only here because it's your duty?" Donatello Said in a faintly frustrated tone, feeling unsatisfied with the answer.
"Yeah, when April introduced me to you and your family, I knew it was my duty, as your new friend, to, at least be there for you when you feel you're about to fall" MC, hesitantly, crawled over, slowly, to the lump under the blankets.
"About to fall?" Baby Donatello asked, not understanding MC's words.
"Yes, when you fall into an abyss," MC started to recite "what you want, is at least one helping hand to help you not to be swallowed up completely" MC, slowly, reached out their hand until their fingertips touched the edge of the small mattress.
Seeing a small green three-fingered hand slowly creeping closer to their own hand, MC, very carefully, and slowly, continued speaking.
"I'm not a warrior, I'm not strong, I don't know about medicine, I don't know about advanced sciences, I don't know how to comfort someone, or even listen to them in the most appropriate way, but, I do the best I can."
When the two hands finally touched the other, MC turned their hand over, and, with their other hand, brought them together, making Baby Donatello's hand between theirs.
Slowly, Donatello came out of the blankets, sitting down in front of MC, his mask was soaked and somewhat wrinkled, a sign that he had, indeed, been crying.
And the tears weren't going to stop, they were just going to come out more slowly.
"I can't promise to always be with you, but I can promise that no matter what happens, I will always be there, for you" MC raised one of their hands to wipe away the tears running down Donatello's face.
"Can I take your mask off?" MC asked, "if you don't want to, it's okay" they added softly, trying not to push the, very emotional, little boy in front of them.
In a way, seeing Donatello so vulnerable, reminded they of when they themselves cried and silently turned away from the other people when they're young.
Donatello, though hesitant, nodded slowly at MC's request.
MC gently pulled away the hand that was still holding Donatello's, and, calmly, untied the knot of Donatello's mask, setting it aside on the mattress.
"You promise..."
"Yes?"
"Promise to stay, with us?" Donatello looked into their eyes, his tears that were getting thinner and thinner, came out thicker again, as if it hurt him to even ask that.
"Sure, why wouldn't it?" MC replied, stroking one of Donatello's tear-soaked cheeks.
"There are a thousand reasons of why you should leave" Donatello said, in a whisper.
"(One of those is that you're not safe with us)" Donatello thought briefly.
"And yet I haven't" MC said, as they continued to caress Donatello's cheek.
"..."
"..."
Donatello looked at MC, his eyes were red from crying, his gaze was a little dull, perhaps due to mental exhaustion and the accumulated stress of the last few days.
In the most innocent tone one could expect from a small child, Donatello, feeling a little more vulnerable than normal (as if he weren't already), asked with a hint of innocent hope.
"Will you stay?"
MC, who couldn't really imagine how tormented and exhausted Donatello was at that very moment to make such a request, responded firmly: "Yes."
Despite MC's almost immediate response, Donatello couldn't help but remain doubtful.
"Even though we're considered monsters?"
"Yes."
"Even though we're not normal?"
"Oh, dear Donatello, no one is normal, it's just that some are unwilling to accept it."
"That doesn't answer my question" Baby Donatello pouted, tears again, they were falling slower and slower.
A small snort left MC's lips at Baby Donatello's comment.
"Yes, I'd stay with you even if it means I'll have to sacrifice my already almost non-existent hours of sleep" MC tried to joke to lighten the mood, which they felt they was able to accomplish when they heard a "snort" from Donatello.
"Don't let your words be forgotten today" Baby Donatello said in a warning tone , sounding serious about it, as if he feared MC would regret in the future, or right then and there, their words.
"Oh dear, I will not forget my words" MC said with a smile slowly growing on their face.
They extended one of their pinkies in front of Baby Donatello.
Donatello looked at they, a little confused.
"With this, I promise not to regret my words, no matter how hard the future may be, and in return, you promise to be more open with your feelings towards others, deal?"
Donatello, slowly recovering from that explosion of emotions, nodded slightly, and, cautiously, entangled, what would be his pinky, with that of MC
"Pinky promise" MC said, their smile barely contained.
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Phew, My eyes hurt from editing this so much.
Anyways, I think, with this my mind is going to be dry for a few days, all my inspiration Was sucked.
Bye 🐢
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deviljesterlamb · 11 months
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Ahhh...I feel I could of done better with this but just tried my best to get my thoughts and idea out. ;;
So I've been thinking about how MC would react to learning what truly happened to Asmo the night he made his first pact with Solomon...Like personally, I would be (and was and still am) furious at Solomon for what he did to Asmo. Like demon or not, Asmo deserved better. As well just very heartbroken for Asmo...
Then I just think about if or how will MC even talk to Asmo about this if/when they get back to their original timeline...Knowing Asmo...Even if MC tries their best to talk about it...Asmo might not want to hear it...or want to believe it.
Warnings: Arguing, angst, mentions of Asmo being intoxicated. Implied nonconsensual acts towards Asmo...If you know all the details over Solomon and Asmo night together from both sides now. Then you'll know to go into this with caution okay. If you need the details. Here ya go.
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It'll be late at night, you couldn't sleep well ever since coming back home. There was a lot to process, understand...Then there was the fact you couldn't stand to see how close and lovingly Asmo was with Solomon again. Especially when knowing the truth now...
Before Asmo spoke so lovely about his night with Solomon and when they made their pact. But now knowing Solomon's side of that night, and how Solomon really felt about Asmo and all...It just made you more upset and angry...
...
...You were nervous. Your heart was racing with a sudden fear now. What if he didn't want to hear you out, or believe you? You knew it was a risk...But you had to do try. This was for Asmo after all...and you couldn't bear to see him be lied to any longer.
Yet here you were at his door, inches away from knocking on it but frozen now...That is until the door suddenly opened and Asmo looked at you with a confused gaze, and he looked as if he just woke up too.
"MC? What's wrong? I felt your presence at my door for the last few minutes...I started to get worried and came over to see what was going on..." Asmo gave a soft smile and gently took your hand in his. "Come on in. You can cuddle with me tonight if you're having trouble sleeping, or need to talk about anything? I'm sure you're still dealing with a lot in that cute little head of yours~." he giggled as he guided you inside his room. Then you got hit by the smell of calming floral aromas in his room...It helped you relax a little instantly.
Though as calming as those fragrances were...It didn't erase your nervousness completely over what you came to do, as you let your hand go from Asmo.
"...MC?" Asmo looked heartbroken from that action from you, but was more worried, especially with how you looked. "Hon? What's wrong? Please tell me what upset you so much."
"...I want to but you might not believe me or hate me..." Your words trembled but Asmo gently cupped your face in his hands and gave you a reassuring smile.
"MC...My love. Whatever it is you have to tell me. I'll listen, and tell you how I feel afterwards okay? But I won't hate you, no matter what you say to me." His words gave you some reassurance you needed, but a little doubt and fear still lingered on inside you...
And so you sat down with Asmo at his bed. You were scared, nervous, but at your own pace, you spoke about what Solomon told you about him...about their night together.
At first Asmo listened on calmly. Then the more you went on on the details, his expression started to change...Eyes widened, his smile faded, and the aura he gave off was a mix of anger and sorrow. Though he didn't say anything until you finished talking...
"...Asmo...I...I'm so sorry..." Your final added words might of been of what set Asmo off. For what he will say to you will make him regret his words later...and over the damage he done between the two of you.
"Sorry? For what? For clearly lying and making that up?" He said with a widened serious gaze that sent chills down your spine.
"I'm not lying! I swear!"
"If what you say is so true. Then why? Why didn't Solomon come to me first about this? Huh? It'd only be right he would right? Unless...He doesn't feel bad about what he did to me...No...Haha. No...Also why would he tell YOU all of this so casually, huh? Unless you...AH...Oh MC..." Suddenly there was a shift in his gaze and tone. "Oh, darling~. You're jealous over us. That's what this is about huh?~"
"WHAT?! NO! I'm not jealous over you two! That isn't what thi--"
"SHHH." He'll gently put a finger against your lips to shush you. Though his touch felt cold and his gaze was devoid of any love and affection for you. "It's okay~. I know it can be painful to know Solomon was first to make a pact with me before you. Though you couldn't do anything about that? I mean he was there first, and you weren't even BORN yet! Also I'm guessing our long history might of been a thorn in your little heart too. It's so cute...But cruel too..."
"...Asmo...I swear I..."
"MC...I'm so disappointed in you. You've hurt me so much you know that?"
"But I didn--"
"MC, ENOUGH! Enough...Now please leave okay? I'm tired and need my beauty sleep."
"Asmo...Please just list--"
No more words could get through Asmo now with the intense enraged glare he gave you. You felt your heart shatter at that moment, and over come with fear too over the idea he could actually hurt you. So with no more words shared, but tears falling before him, you ran out of the room and left Asmo alone.
It'll be a few moments later when Mammon will peek inside Asmo's room, since his door was open still, checking to see what was going on.
"Hey? The hell is going on and why did I see MC running out of your room? I swear if you did something too--"
"OH MY GOSH CAN YOU JUST SHUT UP AND LEAVE ME ALONE!"
"...The hell?! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! I WAS JUST ASKING IF MC IS OKAY!"
"MC IS FINE! MORE THAN FINE IF THEY CAN LIE SO EASILY LIKE THAT! UGH! I DON'T WANT TO TALK ABOUT THIS ANYMORE! LEAVE ME ALONE!" Asmo marched over and slammed his door shut before Mammon. Leaving the Avatar of Greed to yell and curse at him more behind it, not even getting answers from Asmo over what he meant before about you. Until finally he had enough and marched off...By the sounds of it to the direction to your room maybe to get some answers from you...
"...It's a lie...MC just lied...Solomon wouldn't have...No..." Asmo muttered more to himself as he walked back to his bed and tried to sleep. Though his mind was racing with thoughts now, and trying to think back to that night...Though he could only remember so much...For the rest was either a blur or just darkness...Though the gut feeling that MC might of been right...Was eating him alive from the inside...
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It'll be another long night of doing work in his office, but Lucifer stayed awake well. All thanks to the coffee you made for him before you went off to bed.
He'll be focused hard on filling out a form for RAD until his attention was broken from the sudden knock at his door.
"Enter." Lucifer said as he stared at the door slowly open and saw Asmo peek his head inside. He was smiling, but his eyes looked puffy from crying, and dried tears were clearly visible on his cheeks.
"Lucifer. Sorry for interrupting you but..."
"Asmodeus? What's wrong? What happened?" He no longer was sitting at his desk as his main focus and concern was his little brother now.
"Lucifer...I...I think I was wrong about Solomon...I think...You were right after all...I should of listened...I..." No more words could come out from Asmo in the moment as he lunged forward to hug Lucifer and sob uncontrollably into his chest.
"Asmodeus...It's alright...It'll be alright...Just let it out..." Lucifer will wrap his arms around Asmo, giving him a needed comforting hug.
Lucifer will spend the whole night comforting Asmo, letting him vent and rant his thoughts and feelings out to him. Let him explain to him what was going on, what happened...Lucifer listened on but same time he couldn't hold back his angered expression and feelings. Though as well...he already suspected all this had happened from the beginning...So sadly, he wasn't surprised by hearing this all. Yet it didn't destroy the hurt knowing his brother experienced this all...and he was being hit by the realization of what might of truly happened to him...
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Flash back to the past...
It'll be the next day, the night after Asmo spent the night with Solomon and they made their pact together.
"ASMODEUS! Where were you?!" Lucifer had his arms folded, his angered stern tone was accompanied by his clear furious expression.
"Aaaaah. Hi Lucifer~! Haha sorry for being back home late...I had a very long wild night you see~." Asmo giggled while rubbing his head. Trying to soothe is own headache from his hangover...Though same time was riding through some high from his night with Solomon. Even though he couldn't remember too much of what happened between them after a couple drinks and all...
"Well? Where were you--"
"OH! You have to hear this! I met this cute charming guy in the tavern I went to~! He was so sweet~. He listened to me so lovingly and caringly when I spilled my heart out to him and cried~. Ah you don't have to know why though. It's fine now! Anyway. Then like...We started drinking...Talking...Laughing..." Asmo sighs out dreamingly. "It was a magical night...Even though I can't remember too much after we had those drinks and all...But I guess it was a very magical night because when I woke up. I learned we kinda made a pact together~!"
"...YOU WHAT?!" Lucifer's eyes widened to this news, his heart skipped a beat in shock.
"I KNOW! I KNOW! I shouldn't haaave...but...It was a spur of the moment I'm sure! You know? Anyway. I'm very tired and need a long bath. Sorry for being late, Lucifer! Won't happen again~! Promise~!" Asmo quickly skipped off to his room, leaving Lucifer alone, with mixed emotions and thoughts...He was so shocked by this all he couldn't even give out a proper response in the moment to Asmo. Even though he knew he wanted to yell at him over what happened.
But what stopped Lucifer from properly responding though...Was how Asmo spoke so highly and positively about this man he just met and made a pact with on the same night...Lucifer couldn't shake away this sick sinking feeling in his stomach over what might of happened to Asmodeus...
He's angry just by the ideas of what might of happened between the two of them. Angry that Asmodeus wasn't more careful and just came back home on time like he was suppose to, to avoid such things. Angry at that man for clearly taking advantage of his brother in such a vulnerable state...
Though most of all...Lucifer was angry at himself, for not being there to prevent it all from happening and keeping his little brother safe...Once again...He felt he failed at keeping his family safe...
It won't be long after Lucifer will learn of the name of the man who made a pact with Asmodeus. As well, just the type of person he was...
Then on top of things, Lucifer will make some new strict rules around the house and for his brothers. Curfews on when to get back home now, how long they can stay out, etc...This especially went high for Asmo the most.
Lucifer will be keeping a more close watchful eye on him, and was clearly more protective of him now too...Even if it annoyed Asmodeus lots since that meant less going out to party freely and all...Lucifer felt this was the least he could do now to make up for his own failure. His failure on preventing this mess from happening in the first place...As well for failing to protect his little brother...
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juni-ravenhall · 5 months
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the new intro quests are a lot better than that random doyles abbey runestone quest they added years ago. that shit needed to be replaced really badly, so thats great, and the new version of it makes more sense.
that said, it was still really meh. its fine! its not horrible! but the writing is still really flat and the storytelling is just okay but nothing more. i cant say that i read that and feel like "oh someone who is a writer as their main thing wrote this".
it also bothered me why maya asks us to name the horse when she *just* said that its some rich persons horse thats staying there to be sold or whatever (idc what it was exactly) with no explanation as to why it doesnt already have a name and why we would be naming it now. just small storytelling things that bring the quality down.
it felt random that the soul riders are all ganging up on mc to be instant friends. i needed more context and buildup for that. it was okay, i repeat - not horrible. just not more than okay. i would have written it differently and introduced the soulriders more slowly, maybe starting with just lisa (and maya) until we're ready to leave moorland, then introduce alex, maybe maya wants to ride with us to go pick up something in fort pinta and we meet alex at the bus stop, or she was with james in fp, or something.
i havent ever liked those triangle runestones because they seem so blatantly magical compared to the ones we had before, which makes me ask "what do the normal jorvegians think of these?" which we havent had explained afaik. you could tell us, "normies cant see the pink lights" or some shit at least, but even then those carefully balanced triangle rocks are weird. (in sweden we have normal runestones around similar to the old ones in sso. so the old sso ones are easy to accept, aside from the pink glow, which can be explained in the story. upside down triangles balancing, not so much.)
justin now seemed to have even less presence than he already had, which is bad if they arent changing the story parts including him. the story as it was until now already felt really rushed and empty when it comes to getting to know both the soul riders and justin. justin leaving would have much more impact if we actually felt like we know him, and ofc same for the disappearance of the soul riders and all that.
they might be completely rewriting more of the story and that might be good! but the quality i saw in this was not worth applauding just yet. again, just okay. nothing more. "better than before" doesnt really help much if the current "better but not that good" is going to stick around for the next few years. thats why it feels disappointing.
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BlackStar ~Theater Starless translation
Season 1 – Episode 8:
Chapter 3– Which side are you on?
(Kasumi, Hari, Kokuyou , MC, Mokuren)
Kasumi- Ah, MC, excuse me~.
MC - Kyaah!
Kasumi- Ah, I'm sorry to have surprised you. I have little presence, so I have a high [chance of surprising people].
Kasumi- Anyway, MC, I have a favour to ask of you.
Kasumi- I wonder if it would be okay if Hari had a tour for today's W's lesson.
Hari- Thank you for your support.
MC- It doesn't matter. But why bother asking?
Kasumi- Well it seemed like Mokuren kicked him out of the lesson the other day.
Kasumi- I think if he is with you, it'll probably be fine.
Hari- I apologies for the inconvenience.
MC - Ah, yes. Well, shall we go?
Kokuyou - That's enough, Mokuren.
Mokuren- That's my line. You're the one who is doing whatever he wants.
Kasumi- What's wrong, you two? Was there an argument or something?
Mokuren- Kokuyou isn't doing it as planned. He is too forceful.
Kokuyou - Get it together. No matter how you think about the scene, it is better for me to come forward. [this is for a dance layout].
Kokuyou - One more time, Akira, Sin, Kasumi, come too, we will do it at Takami's place.
Kasumi- Ah~, things are getting heated up, so I would like to watch from around the corner.
Kokuyou - Hurry up, Kasumi!
Kasumi- Yes, yes, I'm coming now.
MC- It's kind of difficult....
Hari- Isn't it interesting? Let's watch quietly.
Kokuyou - Mokuren, are you kidding me? I told you 'I'd match you'.
Mokuren- You say strange things. The other day, I told you not to change the arrangement.
Kokuyou - That time was then, now is now. Besides, who is the one at the top?
Mokuren- Interesting. I'll break the top guy's nose right here and now.
Kokuyou - That's great, come on over.
Kasumi- Ahh~~~ Both of you calm down! Don't fight!
I have to stop this!
Hari- Do you want to stop it? If so, then I will help you.
MC - Eh? You will?
Hari- Both of you, please keep your distance. If I intervene, I will mutually hit both of you.
Kokuyou - Ah? Who the heck are you? MC, is this a joke?
MC- Eh, oh, well, well! I guess, that's what it feels like!
Mokuren- Shut up, Bonbon [This is referring to Hari]. This has nothing to do with you.
Hari- Emotional outbursts will not solve the problem. Why not ask for opinions from an outside perspective?
Kasumi- That's right! The opinions of those who have seen this performances are valuable~.
Kokuyou - ........Ahh, you're a groupie of Mokuren.
Hari- To correct you, I am not a Mokuren fanboy. I am a person who wishes to become his apprentice.
Kokuyou - That's the same thing. It's a waste of time to be lectured by Mokuren's ally.
Hari- Is that so? I agree with Kokuyou's plan. If the center is one step ahead, the impact increases.
Mokuren- What did you say?
Hari- Don't get mad, Mokuren. I just thought about it with logic.
Hari- Right now, for the current W, Kokuyou's plan is more appealing. That's Kokuyou's speciality.
Hari- If the center was Mokuren or Takami, I would have preferred Mokuren's plan.
Kasumi- I see~ that's true. You're looking at it in detail, as expected.
Kokuyou - I don't get it, I think Mokuren's fanboy is a bit confusing.
Hari- This is the most 'correct' now. Logic is everything.
Mokuren- ........Isn't that interesting.
Hari- Besides I'm not a fanboy of Mokuren, I want to be his disciple.
Kasumi- Well, well, let's resume the lesson! Please take your time to observe the both of them!
MC- Umm...thank you very much. For stalling the two of them from arguing.
Hari- No, it's nothing. It's just something like a silly, stubborn rivalry.
Hari- If you take a bird's eye view of things with objectivity, everyone will understand.
Hari- Otherwise people will not move. I will definetely become a person who can move people.
MC - That's amazing, Hari. I feel like you're in control of yourself.
Hari- ....It's normal.
To be continued.....
DISCLAIMER – This is not an accurate translation! Please do not steal. Please let me know of any corrections and what I translated wrong- I may have just written what I think works best, but if you think otherwise, let me know. :)
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party-in-eldarya · 1 year
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Playing ane ep 7 p2
Episode 7. Gardienne stalked on HH and Ewelein kissing/shagging in public place, got caught, is horny, wants to take shower.
2 maana spent on my familiar, fair, he was only mentioned but honestly, Beemoov? We already knew Gardienne was going to take shower, no need to mention she has to get up and not to wake up her pet.
Naked Lance. I was prepared, Gardienne wasn't. What was the point? Showing that Lance, just like Valkyon are totally ok with physical aspects of sex? It worked for Valkyon, was a bit of a novelty for Beemoov's games, but with Lance there are more important issues. Like talking about him murdering his own brother and trying to kill Gardienne. At least one of those things wasn't properly discussed in 16 episodes of ANE. Also, either crop his body, or show us his junk. That censorship looks silly. I like that choices they gave us vary, sometimes Beemoov goes like ( A. I trust you HH and you are my fav person ever. B. I trust you HH and I admire you so much, you can do no wrong! C. (I better stay quiet. I trust HH and she is so smart and wonderful!)). However, the positive one ("I couldn't stop staring") is eh. Anyway, Lance uses showers because usually no one is here at that time of day. Night. It could be that hint that Lance is a pariah in Eel because of what he has done, or at least he feels the need to hide. I really appreaciate that we got a choice here not to be a creep, unlike in HH's case.
We are wasting some sweet sweet maana on Erika thinking how she needed a shower... and then thinking how on mission they only had time for very basic and quick cleaning. Umm... gross? Unnecessary? You play silly fantasy games to escape from reality, we don't need to be reminded that people can stink. 10 maanas.
4 maana wasted on familiar. Brasilian players, french players- is that thing popular on your servers? Enough to justify its constant presence? Erika wakes up, go for a breakfast, do I read a v cliche fanfiction? Nah, that's fine, but those episodes are long, and superficial, and I really think that that maana could be better spent.
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It's another 2 maana spent on familiar. It is really not that interesting, and I think that mentioning it once per episode is enough. Familiars, contrary to what Erika has said to Edgar, are very much like animals. I love animals and familiars, but unless they are really important to plot (yes, I know our super animal will protect us from wild turkeys), they better added just once in a time, not in every conversation. We have spent 8 maana in this part of episode, and the plot wouldn't change at all, if that pest didn't exist. What's the point? Fill it with sentences that make a point, explore world, situation, help us get to know MC or characters.
Anyways, Karuto took care of that familiar when we were on a mission, and it could be translation, but it seems like Erika is a bit surprised by this fact. So, she has left that small baby creature and hoped it will be ok somehow?
"We just chatted for couple minutes".
THIS. This is a thing I hate most in Beemoov new way of writing. It happened in LL, UL and it is happening in ANE. This "we talked for hours about everything and nothing" is just a bad writing! Instead of wasting maana on familiar, how about you write a light conversation, so we could get to know Karuto better?
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14 maana wasted on familiar. Earlier, Erika spends my maana on wondering what she should do. Possibilities are endless- shopping, reading a book, talking to someone! Sounds like my day off. A game of adventure and romance, they said.
Listen, this will be a bit cruel but just because you know words doesn't mean you are a good writer.
Erika goes to library, meets Nevra there<-remember you can meet him now. There is option to improve your LoM with him by being v v quiet. There is a moment about Nevra's (and vampires') powers. It's so far the best part of episode, it is really nice, but Erika doesn't dwell on it.
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This is one of the reasons I dislike Erika as MC. She is almost never interested in learning about world she claims she loves so much. This could be a chance to improve her as a guardian. She could ask Nevra to pick up a book about Genkaku, kitsunes' powers- having it fresh in memories she could actually LEARN something. Here she has huge library, full of books, a person who even quasi-offered his help and she is "Nah, any YA novel would do".This fixed trait of our MC makes her less blans, it's is something, but something I cannot enjoy.
Another choice, they spoil us! Basically
Mathieu and Koori
Ask him if he enjoys reading books
Ask him if he is glad we "distracted him".
I know it's the way Beemoov now do their games- we have to focus on one boy (basing mostly on his looks because Beemoov doesn't let us get to know them) and grind LoM till we die, because there are so few choices later in game. Gone are HSL days where we could switch dates between LIs every episode. I play on Leiftan's route so I am not interested in Nevra, for various reasons. On the other hand, if we want illustrations we have to have high LoM with almost EVERY character, so... Yes, I picked the cheeky option, because my LoM with Nevra is ridic (+20). It's him not me, he really is spiteful towards Leif.
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A pitying smile, according to his sprites.
Ok, they FLIRT a bit. And it's nice. It would be even more natural, if Erika wasn't in love with Leiftan, and didn't rediscovered her feelings for him just few days ago. Beemoov doesn't write separated scenes for Players on Nevra's route and on routes on different LI's and it shows.
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See? It's not top writing, but it's fresh and funny. It doesn't work with the story that Beemoov allowed me to pick (a relationship with Leitan, with whom I am still in love with) tho. They still from time to time give us those adorable scenes. Beemoov really should have left Erika in Crystal and let us pick new MC. It could even be Koori, since they love her so much. It would make sense why she is so flirty with everyone.
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Gardienne has spend a year in Eel and she didn't noticed that shops closed around siesta time? Beemoov, New MC when?
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+40 maana spent on familiar. Not sure if it counts, because it was a device to meet Jamon. You decide. I have spent 40 maana on talking about/to my familiar, but I got a chance to meet Jamon.
+10 maana spent on talking about familiar with Jamon. The ogre was taking care of it while we were at genkaku. Erika:
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You know, as a proud mother of two cats I have huge problems with any vacations, trips or hollidays. There are catsitters in my town (expensive but what can you do), and I have wonderful best friend who offers to feed them/search for treasures in litter box. Any trip requires lots of planning tho. Erika is something.
+12 maana spent on talking about familiar with Jamon. However. We asked Jamon about mission that was mentioned in earlier episode. Point for Beemoov!
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Wild Lore appears! Jade lands lies south of Eel.
+6 maana spent on familiar, just because.
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Given how Jamon is only midly surprised by this idea... there is a possibility there are many species of unknown faeries.
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I wanted to check if Jamon is in Light Guard because if yes, then HH SHOULD inform him about portals and what she thinks is going to happen... but there is no info about it. Surely, he is in Light Guard? And has no idea of portals?
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Random thought: for half of TO I was hoping that Jamon will be someone like Kentin. The "don't judge book by its cover" case, who will show us his handome form, and grant those who were kind to him with new route. Why? See, he is ginger, I thought that Beemoov would like to milk Kastiel's fans.
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That's one way of saying it. Jamon asks about our sword he has made for us and CHOICE. I pick a positive one (knowing that we have such a good sword boosted our morale) and I am rewarded with this:
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Baby boy. Precious boy. A monsterfucker in my is glad.
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Good. Someone tries to understand him. Choice that is really not choice:
It's not difficult.
He exaggerates, it can be controled.
Jamon simply states that Erika should be careful. Oh, I just learnt that Leiftan is in hospital (remember, the fever). Niiiice that I have an option to visit him. And Erika didn't even thought about visiting him, while she wondering what should she do with her free time. Rooooomance!
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Look, I understand that she should not be crazy about her LI, but to me most of the times she seems indifferent. The other times are when she is horny.
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I imagine that players who dislike Leiftan are seething now. You have to forgive Lance, you have to forgive Leiftan... A game where your choices matter, remember!
Oooh, so it seems that Jamon didn't talk with HH yet. All good, so they will discuss that portals thing.
We got CHOICE. About our pet.
+6 maana for this blasted creature.
Purriry talks shit about my clothes. Which is funny because canon- she gave them to me few eps ago. But my Gardienne wears this:
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which IMO is pretty neat. I still like those eyes.
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Oh? AU of my Imogene being sugarbaby to Leiftan where?
Listen, I cannot take things seriously with Strong, Aengelic Warrior Erika who cannot utter those simple words: Purriry, I haven't ordered an outfit from anyone, you included. What outfit you are talking about and for what ocassion? (4 maana). This girl has spine of earthworm.
+4 maana spent on familiar. But I have been rewarded, I can go talk to Leiftan. Perhaps we should discuss this sugarbaby thing.
Shite, no Leiftan, no Ewelein, I have met Karenn. CHOICE (they are spoiling us in this episode, right?)
yell at her for jump scare
lie that we always knew she was standing behind doors
go "well done, point for Gryffindor but what was the point?" <- ME
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In broken english, but well said, Erika. I hate hate hate jump scares in real life, and Karenn would end up with laxatives in her morning tea. Karenn was much softer in TO, right? More like pixie energy, not a maniac pixie...
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Karenn. Our best friend (one of our best friends). So supportive. I still remember her reaction when we were shocked by Lance. Basically, her life motto is "live so you won't bother us, accept everything that life throws at you and you MIIIIGHT be my friend".
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... and I do not care". Look, that's fine. Some characters will be bitchy, or just don't like others. That's fine. I just dont like that I will have to be excited for Karenn's wedding, that I probably won't be give the choice of doing fat MEH. But her cool demeanor towards the traitor makes sense, Chrome after all too betrayed the Guard.
And we go to eat something. Discussion on horses that appeared on Eldarya, and how Karenn got hurt during mission. She has met a sylph:
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We learn that Karenn doesn't follow rules too strictly. Perhaps that's why HH picked her boo, Chrome to be a leader of Shadows.
We tell Karenn about our glorious mission. She asks us about our White Princess (she is top form!). And she goes on how horrible it was to be stucked on a boat with BOYSSS. Leiftan- the useless one, Nevra, the bossy one, Lance- the sulking one, Mathieu the simp. Erika is having great time. Me, not so much. What's this message about? The mission was a fiasco, but not because of boys. They did mostly well. The failure came from HH who prepared and planned that mission and Koori who shouldn't be there. If there was no Koori, Tenjin would be less antagonistic. If Koori did throw away those magical stones, she would not use her illusions, or they wouldn't caused so much chaos. WTF Beemoov?
Choice to pick the illustration you want. Nevra's is the best, and that's why they are using it to advertise this romance game, but I cannot multihoe when Leif is around. Erika starts thinking about her LI:
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there must be some reason, right? She is worried about him.
And you know what? So far I like this episode. I know I complain, but we could talk to Nevra and that was nice, flirty-ish chit chat. We had a really bonding moment with familiar Jamon, Karenn was also ok (no, I do not like her but it was an ok scene that annoyed me just because this strange " toxic feministists" vibe). And now even Erika shows some interest in her LI!
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IT IS HAPPENING.
Also, Karenn of all faeries realised that this coma must have been hard for Erika and her love life.
Erika admits that Beemoov forgot about romance in otome game and that she didn't talk about love with Leiftan. But also mentions special bond between them. Props for this dialogue being exclusive for his route because on others' whole soulmates is awkward as hell.
Chrome and Karenn' scene was sweet. Erika is sulking thinking how they support each other, take care of each other, make each other laugh... Hey, how about you look for Leiftan? She woke up early, didn't have to do anything and yet had only few minutes to visit him just before lunch. Be glad that he has bonded to you for life Rika, because you are no girlfriend goal, that's for sure.
So because she is craving for same companionship that Chrome and Karenn have, what does Erika do?
Decides to bring meal to Leiftan, who is recovering from cold
Go look for him to discuss their bonds or simply talk to him
It's time for some sword training, everyone!
And if you haven't guessed it's number 3 you clearly don't know Beemoov and Erika.
Until next time :)
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insurrection-if · 2 years
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May we know what the ROs' first thought/s when they first met or saw the MC? If possible the minor ROs as well? If it's a spoiler then feel free to ignore this ask! :D
That would be very dependent on a few factors, though I could perhaps give a general / baseline impression that would've been made. I should disclose that the MC doesn't meet the HAWKS in the best of circumstances, and Fyodor's first encounter with the MC is not one they will have an awareness towards.
ROs
Akil: Life is about to change for you. May your misguidance end here.- Disappointment. To have captured them here causes his mind to leap from one assumption to the next, each less favorable than the last. It doesn't spell well for the adjustment to take place in the weeks to come.
He worries over the potential headache in his near future.
Kamiko: I cannot kill them, but how much force will this one require? - Wariness keeps up her guard. This person could kill her at a moment's notice. Could hurt any one in her team the moment she tears her eyes off them. She won't allow them the chance.
She will not allow her vigilance to fall in their presence.
Sigmund: You better not bite. - Frustration and a wish to defend them. He has a bit of a bleeding heart when it comes to the defenseless, yet it is one he has learned to suppress beneath the CARDINALS and HAWKS alike. It would be a tightrope for him between wanting to defend them from the HAWKS and defending the HAWKS from them. It's a mild waiting game to see which side wins out over the other.
The sooner this person vanishes from his life, the better.
Imka: Run, please. You should never have come here. - Pity. Her heart aches upon the sight of them. Fear for them urges her nails to prick against her arms as she tries to hold back the tears that threaten to spill forth. This person did not deserve this.
She bears regrets on their behalf, and feels helpless in their presence.
Elouan: Let's hope this one's a good pick. Not too much trouble, not too much lack of trouble . . . - Amusement. This is too familiar a scene for him to be overly invested. Perhaps he will not see this Gifted again after this. Perhaps this stranger will turn fixture in his life. Either way, an issue (or the absence of an issue) for a future time. For now, he takes mild satisfaction in the chaos around them and the misfortune embodied in a single, ravenous soul.
As long as they do not cause trouble for him, he will entertain this fragile interest and let it guide him as it may.
Jae: Ah, you've drawn the short straw! How much bad luck can one person get? - The scene around them acts to distract her focus, but she likes what she sees thus far. If this unlucky fish in the net joins her company then she will not shirk the entertainment it will promise. It is about time someone helped to further stir the staleness of the HAWKS. Whatever sorriness she feels for them is fleeting, but genuine all the same.
She has her fingers crossed to reunite with them soon.
Niccolò: What is this? What did they find? Move, let me see! What will they turn out to be?- Excited curiosity hums from his being as he peers closer at this novel creature. Questions stir behind his grin, yet he metaphorically swallows them to avoid a scolding.
He hopes to become reacquainted with them soon after all this is done.
Mutya: Don't cause any fucking trouble, for your own damn sake. - Worry buried under apathy. She refuses to insult them with her pity, and thus she instead hardens herself towards their reality. If she can find some excuse to transfer her emotions around all this into anger, she will.
She fears for you, and wishes you'd just escape so she can breathe again.
Fyodor: It is dying . . . Should I help it? - Mild concern, wonder, and longing. He can sense it, this kinship in their souls. One that is reflective and warped, broken into an inherited shard. He wants to approach, but Gabriel restrains him with a look alone. And Mishka . . . he watches with curious worry as he awaits the right moment when his presence may remain unknown. He trusts Curadora entirely, as well as the renowned Retriever by extension and reputation. They will right the wrong that has occurred.
He wishes this supposed enemy the best in the events to come.
Minor ROs
Dearil
Law Enforcement MC: An annoyance that he wishes to be rid of.
Homemaker MC: An inconvenience that may prove to have some use for him.
Otherwise: Whatever this creature is, it is beneath him.
Curadora
She's stricken by fear, and then horror at what has occurred. And then, insatiable curiosity for this mystery that has come to a bloody fate before her. Her heart will start as tender for what she sees as a victim of her own faults.
Retriever
Medic MC: Though he tries to focus on the needs of the man he's brought to receive care, he can't help his appreciation of the MC in more ways than one. Actually, though I associate the song far more with certain elements of Curadora's love life, it vaguely reminds me of Enfermera by Los Hermanos Flores, haha!
Rancher MC: Upon their first handshake, he couldn't help but check out the MC with as much subtly as he could muster. He makes note to keep an eye on them during his temporary stay at the ranch, though he won't gather the courage to approach until his final night of residence.
Otherwise: Instinct and paranoia in the current situation leads him to conclude that the MC is a hostile threat, and the consequences of this assessment will haunt his nights to come.
Lempo
Artist MC: Having accumulated an admiration for the work of this local artist already, her admiration is cemented upon witnessing them in the flesh.
Thespian MC: She adores what she has thus far seen, and makes no attempt to hide her starstruck nature.
Otherwise: Oh, yet another HAWK? She appraises what she can glimpse, and it pleases her so. She would love to host their company somewhere a bit more private.
Bones
There had been an immediate pulse of hostility the moment he sensed their shared nature. Hostility, and cold annoyance towards the kid starting at him. Both these sentiments coated his buried spike of shame as he continued to eat his garbage-fetched meal.
He considered throwing a rock at them, and other tactics to scare / shoo them away. Something about them seemed like trouble in the making, and that was an additional trouble he didn’t need. Not when he generated enough of that on his own.
Mishka
It would be best to kill the inconvenience before them, yet they have had the misfortune of being paired with the more soft-hearted of these false kin. It would be so simple. Practical, really, considering the thorn they may further prove to be down the road.
And yet no one ever listens to what they have to say . . .
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ruhorih4ra · 2 years
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We go back to past! So much angst, I love it. ( ˘ ³˘)♥
This fic contains:
The same things that the previous parts.
Grammar mistakes (╥﹏╥)
Gn!Mc
"Black🐑" and "👿Red" JAJAJA
Chapter 4. ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ
Chapter 5 [Past]
"The voice from the Attic"
"How long has it been?"
You hummed while drinking a black coffee. Something in your demeanor had change, you felt more...angry? You kept repeating Belphegor's attempt to murder you and everytime, you would break something, a pen, a mug, whatever was on your hand at the moment.
Someone knocked the door but you didn’t answer, you merely waited for the person to walk away.
"Mc?"
You remained silent. Lately, you could recall every single bad memory of the brothers, Lucifer was not an exception.
"Hypocrite bastard"
He broke the lock, entering with a confused face.
"Why didn't you answer? What's wrong with you?"
"...I didn't hear you."
"Are you... Is everything alright?"
"I should be the one asking that."
"We... Yes, the situation is controlled."
You smiled. "Liar"
"My brothers are preparing everything on the house of lamentation. Are you ready?" He said, offering his hand.
You stayed still looking to his hand.
"Do you remember that time when you nearly broke my hand while we were dancing?" You asked, still watching Lucifer's hand. "It hurt for days."
Lucifer tensed, confused and ashamed.
"...you're angry. I understand you wanted to help but we couldn't possible put you on danger."
You laughed.
"Do you remember it? It happened, you know. You have quite the talent of forgetting."
Lucifer frowned and was about to say something when Lord Diavolo walked through the door, your gaze still on Lucifer.
"Mc!! It's been some time! How are you?!"
"Perfectly fine! How about you, my lord?"
"Mc, you don't have to be so formal. We're great! Let's go, everyone is waiting."
He offered you his arm and you took it, knowing that Lucifer would notice. You wanted him to suffer in any way but what is better than continually hurting his pride.
"I feel better now, Diavolo."
You said in a overly shy tone.
***
"Surprise!!"
A collective scream was heard, it was nothing too fancy and, truth be told, everyone looked tired. You smiled, it was comforting to see how screwed they were, how utterly weak and...
"Mc!! I'm back too!!"
A young and very happy angel said, hugging you and sending a chill all over your body, as if you were allergic to his presence. You felt a heavy weight leaving your chest, regainig some control.
"Luke!! Oh, I missed you!!"
You hugged him back, smiling.
"Oh! That's not fair!! Is it because my skin?! Why didn't you hugged me like that?" Asmo pouted.
"I just arrived, Asmo. Come here."
You said, hugging him and putting a quick kiss on his forehead.
"I missed you guys, I apreciate your effort doing this welcoming but you look tired. You should rest."
Beelzebub gave you a bear hug, murmuring a quiet 'thank you'.
"You are welcome, Beel." You said, laughing.
"Mc, let's take a nap together..."
Your blood froze and you could feel rage fogging your mind. The youngest of them all was clinging to you, half asleep.
"Kill him, he deserves it."
You reached for a strand of hair, carefully taking one from the bunch between your fingers. You were ready to pull as hard as you could when Mammon took your hand.
"Hey! Don't get too close with him! You should stay with me instead! I'm on charge of taking care of ya!"
You felt a gaze, Satan was looking at you with confusion.
"Are you tired, Mc?"
The room grew silent until you sighed.
"Uh, yes. I'm kind of sick, I didn't want to worry you!"
"Mc, you should have told me! We should do an anime maraton, I-I can take care of you like you know a..."
"Levi, you look incredibly tired, we'll probably fall asleep as we watch it."
"I guess you're right."
He said, visibly disappointed. You took his hand, smiling.
"But we can give it a try."
"YES!"
"Hey! I'm joining!"
"Shut up, Mammon, we're all joinning" Satan said.
"Hahaha! Happy as ever, don’t they? Then We'll be taking our leave. Have a nice night, Mc."
"Thank you, Diavolo."
Barbatos looked at you with a stern glance, you couldn't decide if It was worry or anger, maybe a mix of both, something was clear, he was confused.
"Mc, we’re leaving too! Don't Let those demons take advantage of you!"
"I won't Luke, thanks for coming!"
"You can count on us, Mc, always."
Simeon said and Solomon nodded gesturing a ‘good night’.
"I know guys, thank you. Good night!"
You saw the brothers from some distance, apparently trying to get Lucifer to watch anime too. You remembered what you said before and felt remorse.
"Where was this feeling before, uh?"
The more you thought about it, the more guilty you felt. To be fair you didn't say anything false, he never acknowledge the things he did but you're closer now and maybe that was too blunt of you.
"Maybe don't befriend those who try to kill you, they feast on your kindness"
Lately your thoughts don´t feel like your own. You walked straight to Lucifer, taking his arm.
"I-I'm sorry for what I said before... I don't know why I brought out that but please forgive me!" You said without meeting his eyes.
You heard him sigh, he took your chin and lifted it up so you could see his eyes.
"We'll talk about that later. Now, let's rest..." Everyone looked at him with puppy eyes. "Watching some...ugh, Anime."
***
You couldn't sleep, everyone was peaceful sleeping but you. Mammon was clinging to your waist as well as Levi, you removed their grip as careful as you could.
"Someone…anyone, please…"
You tensed immediately, it was Belphegor's voice but he was sleeping, you saw him laying next to Beel and his mouth was firmly shut.
"Come…this way, Mc."
You knew what was happening but you followed the voice anyway, you walked in silent avoiding the utterly tired brothers, you went up the stairs until you arrived to the attic.
"I knew you were the one person who’d be able to find me."
Your fist conversation was playing again, you gulped.
"I’m a human, just like you."
"You are Belphegor, the Avatar of sloth, you're a demon."
"Right, you caught me."
"You lied to me."
"I didn't lie when I told you that I want to fix things with Lucifer."
"Oh but you did lie. Why?! I just wanted to help!!"
"You're so naive, come on, open the door and give me a hug. You know what comes next..."
"No..."
But it was futile, the door opened and you entered the attic, standing in front of him.
"Oh Mc, you’ve set me free! You’ve released me from this prison!"
"No, please... stop this, I can’t."
Belphegor opened his arms to hug you.
"What, you don’t want to hug?"
You felt sicker and sicker with each passing minute. You were shaking and air was hard to breathe.
"Hehe, well…that’s not very friendly of you."
Belphegor's moved fast enough to cage you, his hands choking your neck, taking the air from you.
"Does it hurt? Finding it hard to breath? I’m sure it must be very unpleasant."
"Are you gonna let him do that... Again?" Astazath spoke. The pale demon had a serious expression and his eyes were glowing with hatred. "How many times are you willing to die?"
"Not ever again." you said.
You felt your arms strengthen with power, you took away one of the the hands holding your neck and threw a fist to the demon face. You saw Belphegor's face turn to one of surprise and horror. You punched him again without him putting resistance, and when he was laying in the floor you took his neck with both hands, squeezing as hard as you could. Your nails digging into his skin and spilling blood in your fingers.
"Mc..." Belphegor tried to speak.
"Kill him, human. Before he kills you."
"MC, STOP!!!!!!"
You felt someone pushing you away.
"Belphie?! Belphie!!"
Belphegor coughed, trying to ease the pain in his throat. And just as he did that you finally understood, it wasn't an ilusion, you... You tried to kill Belphegor. Your eyes grow wide, still on the floor you backed until your back was hitting the wall.
"I'm fine, Beel, don't worry."
You quickly got up and ran to the exit, Beel was too shocked and confused to do anything but as you were rushing to your room Mammon appeared, blocking your way.
"Mc? I heard Beel screaming... What's wrong?" His gaze fell down to your fingers covered in blood, but he was quick to recognize that it wasn't yours.
"I-I don't know... I just..."
"Mc calm down, okay? Come here."
You were afraid, afraid of them and you. The sensation of Belphie's neck on your hands, you were so close to finishing him off.
"Mc? S-stop smiling like that..."
"What? I wasn't."
"MC!" The Avatar of sloth screamed, trying to reach you.
"NO!! STAY AWAY FROM ME!"
The pact did its work and Belphegor stopped in his tracks. One by one the brothers appeared, Lucifer was the last.
"What's happening here?" The eldest questioned.
You were afraid, ashamed, intoxicated.
"Mc had a nightmare. They accidentally hit me."
You watched Belphegor nonchalantly lie. Beelzebub was looking at you with caution, a mix of sadness and confusion.
"Those marks in your neck are more than a hit."Satan said.
"They were sleepwalking."
Everyone looked at you, waiting for an explanation.
"I… I heard Belphie's voice, like the first time... And I..."
"Like the first time?" Asmodeus softly asked.
"I tried to kill him because he kill me before and I am too weak to forgive him" that's what you wanted to say but couldn't bring yourself to.
"I understand, Mc."
Belphie said, tears forming in his eyes.
"You don't." You yelled. "You don't because I didn't succeed."
"Why? Why did I said that?", "Because it's the truth."
You ran to your room and nobody chased after you, not knowing what to do or say.
Next part. ʕ·ᴥ·ʔ
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solasan · 1 year
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HI HI HI HIH I HI :) for the infamous mc asks can i get uhhhhh full circle, beginnings, fans, voice, storybeats, and seven. i will stop now. <3 <3
infamous MC questions
TYSM CARLY ILY <3333
Full circle: What is the first song they ever wrote? Played? What’s the most recent? 
i think the first song she wrote is probably a song that eventually became eggshells, which is a rly angry/kinda devastating song on their most recent EP (glass houses). mommy issues core. it went through a lot of transformation over the years — from angsty teenage metaphors to kinda blisteringly painful adult ones — and the first time she ever sang it for the band, her hands shook the whole fuckin time. (seven was the only person to hear it before that). it’s pretty well-loved bc it’s got a lot of raw, emotional vocals, backed up by a pretty sick beat and some of rowan’s best work.
the most recent song would probs be forecast fires, which is actually hornet’s nest’s audition song for botb!! it’s about seven LOL. very angry and kind of tragic/ever-so-slightly wistful if u actually listen to the lyrics, but it’s upbeat and the kind of song u can’t help dancing to.
Beginnings: When and how did they know they wanted to be a professional musician? Was there a deciding factor?  
marnie’s always been into music; she grew up singing along to her dad’s old fleetwood mac & joan jett records and started taking guitar lessons young (mostly as an excuse for her parents to get her out of the house lol). she started writing when she was about 11 (not long before she met seven) and used to mess around with putting some of her songs to music, but she wasn’t super serious about a career in music for a while.
it was seven that first planted the idea in her head, but once planted, it rly took root. he was always the one pushing her, telling her that her music was good, that they could do this, and she only half-believed him until the very first time that their fans sang along to their music at a gig. then she was kind of like this is what i’m made for; giving people something to dance and sing to.
when seven left, though, she got a lot more serious about it. it kind of became a thing of i don’t need you, we don’t need you, we’re gonna make it after that, mostly out of spite and hurt but also because the fans loving her voice on its own was kind of a novelty for her. now she knows she wants to be singing to people until the day she drops dead LOL.
Fans: How is their relationship with their fans? Do they go out of their way to interact? 
oh marnie looooves her fans lol. she especially loves the kinds of fans that everyone else gets embarrassed over; the gushy ones, like maya. they make her feel loved, bro, and as someone with huuuuge abandonment issues, that’s better than crack. but even if ur not gushing over her, she’s probably rly excited to be seeing u, bc she just loves that people listen to her.
she’s a very sociable rockstar lol. she’ll hug fans, she’ll make a real effort to get them involved at their gigs — getting them to sing, talking to them, generally being a great stage presence — and she’s always happy to stop for a picture or autograph at the grocery store. it just thrills her bro!! she’s probably so pro-vespids (👉👈 maya came up with that n marnie ADORES it) that orion’s had to take her socials away from her sometimes bc she can’t stop tweeting back to people n they do not have the time, ross, you were supposed to be at rehearsals a half hour ago!
Voice: What does their singing voice sound like? Do you have voiceclaims(s) for them? 
throaty & husky; pretty sensual. she sounds a lot like grace vanderwaal i think (this is a good example) so her voice is very raspy and distinctive. pretty recognisable. i know, like, literally fuck all about singing, but after a lil googling i’d say her voice type is contralto, so she’s on the lower end of the vocal range.
Storybeats: If you could design one scene to happen in the story, what would it be? How would it change your character? What would make it so satisfying for the character arc? 
oof. probably some kind of confrontation with her parents? a lot of marnie’s motivations can be boiled down to “i can make it on my own, i can prove it” and essentially trying to show how capable/independent/good she is, so getting some kind of closure with her Very First Abandonment would probably be huge. i don’t picture them making up, really; more just some kind of moment that makes marnie realise oh, i don’t have to prove shit to these bastards. i think the closure would at first be pretty painful for her and she’d fuck off to go get high and block out the world, but if she could get over that, i think she’d come out the other side feeling a lot more secure in herself and who she is. probably a lot less desperate for acceptance & love, too.
im gonna try to keep this a bit briefer but i also think some kind of acknowledgement about her unhealthy relationship with party drugs would b very helpful to her. she’s not high all the time by any means, because she actually takes her career pretty seriously, but she definitely uses parties & coke to get out of her head when she doesn’t want to be there and it’s caused some problems that have made orion rip his hair out.
Seven: Do you have headcanons about their friendship and/or romantic relationship (past or future)? What do you imagine some of their best memories are? What do you think some of Seven’s favourite things about your MC were/are?
oof seven meant everything to marnie lol :) for a very long time, he was her first constant, her greatest constant, because her parents wanted nothing to do with her and she was just… so lonely. and then he was there, warm and funny and a little dry, and he was taking her to his mom’s place and understanding her music and commiserating with her over the yawning black emptiness both of them felt at times. how could she not fall in love, u know?
they pined for each other for most of their teens before finally getting together when they were abt 20. probably the first time they wrote a song together was marnie’s first Oh I’m In Love moment lol, but her fav memories are all the times they hung out drunk as shit on the roof of her parents’ place as teens, sharing a blanket and pointing at the stars n making each other laugh.
another good memory: marnie dumped her crappy boyfriend just before prom when they were seniors, so her and seven skipped prom night and drove to vero beach to drink beer and have an impromptu bonfire, and marnie ended up out in the water in her fucking dress jumping waves with him, and it was just… very soft n sweet. she misses those days.
i think seven always liked marnie’s sense of humour (she’s very sarcastic but in a warm kind of way?) and how blunt she was; there’s not a conniving bone in her body (which is what made The Vote so painful for him, among other things) and he always appreciated that. her loyalty, too. on the smaller side of things, he always thought her laugh was the greatest thing about her, because it’s loud and snorting and always so genuine. he misses it sometimes
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could you do obey me boys with a professional volleyball player mc? 💁🏻‍♀️ like they enter at RAD's volleyball team and are absolutely SLAYING or smth like that! i also imagine mc having a very fit body and getting home late bc of the training
Professional Sports Player Mc
I made it a bit more general, changing volleyball to sports because really these hcs could be read with volleyball in mind or another sport entirely. I hope that's ok!
Since you didn't specify, I just went with the brothers for this
Gn! Mc (you/yours)
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Lucifer
Lucifer admires the discipline and strength it takes to professionally do sports and honestly, he finds it attractive too
Definitely tries to take the time to go to any matches you have to support you and to watch you in your element
If he sees you winning - against Demons no less - he's so incredibly proud of you and wants everyone to know
Sort of looks like a proud father standing next to you but the way he looks at you reveals his adoration for you very clearly
Makes you lunches to take with you when you train, making sure they are balanced and contain enough protein and fiber to aid you
The only downside he sees is that he has so little time with you. When you come home late, you're very exhausted from your day after all and he's already a busy man himself, so it's quite difficult to get some quality time together
Just means you both need to make a bit more of an effort!
Mammon
Mammon has always been your hype man no. 1 and it's no different in this case
Making you lunches just means peanut butter sandwiches but if you like that (and aren't allergic to peanuts), it's still nice!
He's there for every match you have and watches your training sometimes too if you're ok with it - if not, he wants to pick you up at least though
When you win, Mammon is so loud but his cheers are really cute so you know... He wants you to run into his arms so he can spin you around, please
Shows people videos and pictures of you from one of your matches and gets mad if the person watching it doesn't find you as amazing as Mammon himself does
(they also shouldn't find you too amazing though because then he'll tell them how way out of your league they are and how the Great Mammon is by your side and nobody else-)
Having you coming home late is torture for Mammon but he's either distracting himself by doing things he shouldn't (gambling, scamming, stealing from his brothers, etc) or he's finding ways to be in your presence anyway - aka watch you when you train
Leviathan
He's the very best stan, thank you very much!
For you, he even braves going into the hell that is sports obsessed normies to watch your matches
Cheering you on is an art form and Leviathan has perfected it. He wears your or your teams colors, has your name written on his face, has a chant, a sign, a- you know the drill
Makes you the cutest bento lunches with encouraging notes and a lot of love in them
He gets so insecure and thus jealous of anyone trying to get close, especially if they're not just a fan but someone who plays the same sport as you. "What if having the same passion makes you like them better than some shut in weirdo like him?" his brain tries to tell him
Levi idealises you a bit too much but we knew that already. It's just maybe a bit more obvious that you're basically one of his idols that he actually gets close enough to to touch
Having you come home late sometimes makes his thoughts run wild, even if he knows you have training that day - he just can't help it but distracting himself until you come home works most of the time when he isn't so immersed in his game or show that he forgets the time anyway
Satan
Sports aren't really his thing but... You're doing it, so it's still interesting to him
Wants to know everything about your sport and even tries to give you advice. You may have to stop him right there because you are a professional... Unless maybe he does actually have one or two good points. Maybe he'd be worth listening to at least?
Second place for cute lunches, usually cat themed in some way but definitely nutritious too! He wants to aid you where he can
Of course he's there for your matches, how could he not? His cheers are a bit more quiet but he won't let you question how much he supports you and your passion
Seeing you happy and panting from exertion does something to him, to his heart. It takes him a while to realise that it's love for you that he feels
The fact that you come home late makes him sad sometimes but he knows that your training is important and he tries to suggest some things to do together that don't take a lot of energy - like reading aloud for you to listen to while you lay your head on his lap
Asmodeus
Asmodeus loves how fit you are because of your profession and he makes it abundantly clear as well
Next to outright telling you how hot he finds it how passionate you are, the way he takes the time out of his day to watch you practice (if you allow it) says lore than enough
Your teammates tease you about how obviously interested Asmodeus is in you, though there are also those that are jealous of you... Oh well
Asmo likes to doll himself up in a cheerleader outfit and do a little dance to cheer you on in matches. While he does take away a lot of attention from the actual game, he is very cute
Don't let him make lunches for you. The demon manages to blow the kitchen up trying to make bread, who knows what will happen if he tries to make you a lunch box?
In days when he can't watch you train or if you don't let him, Asmo has no qualms letting you know how lonely he was without you. Clinging to you and whining and telling you that you have to make it up to him
He's pretty easy to appease though, so it's not too bad
Beelzebub
Beelzebub is so happy to have someone else there who also loves to do sports. You may not do the same sport but you can still train your bodies together, if you want to
Going to the gym with Beel is nice, all in all. You get a nice view if you're into that and Beel will help you if you've never been to the gym before
Even if you have, you can still help each other, correct the other's form or spot each other
He will make sure to attend each and every one of your matches and is right there when you cheer because you won or need some comfort because you lost. Beel also asks you to come watch his matches as well
Beel is an amazing cook, so lunches from him are very nice... If he manages to make one, that is. Either way he wants to eat together with you
Having you come home late can make Beel upset sometimes because he misses your company but he's pretty good at keeping himself busy until you're back. If he's a bit more clingy than usual...well, who's gonna complain?
Belphegor
You do a sport? What, professionally even? Damn, he could never
But we knew that already. Belphie yawns at the mere mention of such physical activity and he admires the way you and Beel do so much of it and enjoy it too
Sure he will come to your matches too. Though he may not be able to pay attention the whole time, he still makes an effort to be there to show his support
More importantly, Belphie makes sure that you don't overdo it and helps you get the rest you need to start the next day fit as a daisy
When you're gone for a long time, Belphie either doesn't notice because he had been sleeping or he wakes up and notices and then he gets cranky
You know how he gets... Demanding your attention and being unhappy over the fact you weren't there when he woke up. A little bit of affection and an apology is enough to make him forget his bad mood though
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Jukebox reviews part 13! For context, see my post “A Project”   under  this same tag. If you want to see a full list of his EMCSA   stories,  they can be found here, sorted alphabetically.And if you want to see some of his drabbles, check out his blog at @jukeboxemcsa
Can’t Buy Me Love
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1/16/2010                                     mc ff
This is another story that I have complicated feelings about. It's *technically* consensual, but only under duress. And, well, the last line... Elsie's husband deserves *better* from her, if indeed Marissa kept to her work about Elsie having her free will entirely back, which the reader has no reason to doubt. If she wants to return, she should just tell him that and not leave him wondering, doubting. If she loves him - if she *ever* loved him - then she needs to do the hard work to communicate with him.The actual control is ... subtle, and I wonder how much of the "blossoming" Marissa speaks of is Elsie's own desires, vs how much are the ring is pulling away her inhibitions and making her like it. Either way, the two likely feed into each other, but it's definitely more magical than I prefer again. I'd rather more of a view on inside of Elsie's head, rather than this distant narration, too. 5/10 spirals
  Don’t You Want Me
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1/30/2010                                     mc mf md hu
This story is a good reminder of why I tend not to like humiliation stories, even as it isn't as far into humiliation as many stories I've seen. Adam is coldly cruel in a way that turns me off super fast; it would have cost him *nothing* to tell her that she would serve him best by being a test subject for how long the Synaptic Recalibrator's effects last without continual reinforcement of his presence. Even if he knows, *she* doesn't know he knows. But it just never occurs to him - not even that upsetting her too much might make a scene that would draw attention he didn't want. That said, by humiliation tag stories this one isn't a bad one, just not my taste. Seeing the process of the Synaptic Rcalibratior was fun, at least. 5/10 spirals
  Black Velvet
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2/6/2010                                       mc ff
Ah, this story is such an interesting contrast to "One Way or Another" even though they both have a similar mind controlling character - the fortune teller as hypnotist. I like this one much more, even if Mona is a little - or a lot - over the line into questionable ethics here. Ah well, Alma Mae doesn't seem to mind none, and it doesn't feel like Mona conditioned her then, in any way that would have made Alma Mae change her opinion on what Mona did anyway. I do wish we could see the surprise that Mona has, though I have a guess that it's a certain art teacher - I hope it is, anyway. 7/10 spirals
  Heat of the Moment
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2/13/2010                                     mc mf ff
I adore the dynamic between Margo and Tom at the start of this story. The clear love, the flirtation, but also the way Margo just *respects* that his job - his PASSION - will have him away from her, and she takes that in stride. She takes a lot of things in stride, as it happens, and I'm unsure if some of what she takes in stride is her own desire, just her being that sort of person, or the magic of the ring. I'm just glad that they so clearly love each other, regardless of everything that the ring causes.This story doesn't actually hit *any* of my erotic buttons, though. If you like magically compelled sex, folk just being overwhelmed with lust, it's likely more up your alley than mine, but that did nothing for me. So 6/10 spirals on the strength of the characters alone.
  Small Town
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2/20/2010                                     mc ff
Huh, I didn't realize that places down south still had supper clubs! I thought those were mostly only found in Wisconsin and thereabouts these days! But also, clearly Willow hasn't learned that it's the quiet, often shy ones who sometimes have the kinkiest streaks. Hell, *I* still blush at some overt sex things, and I used to help run a kink con! I enjoy the induction here, the lingering on the word "obey" - such a very good word! - and I just like it, even with it being super unethical in so many ways. 7/10 spirals.
  The Final Countdown
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2/27/2010                                     mc mf md
... I can't enjoy a story that has someone so simply begging to be left alone, begging for her ability to just *be.* If you enjoy the darker side of hypnotic control (which doesn't even work like this but whatever), you'll likely enjoy this, but I can't. Her terror feels too real to me. 0/10 spirals.
  My Best Friend’s Girl
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3/6/2010                                       mc ff
On the one hand, I *really* don't like serial recruitment stories. And this one is a serial recruitment story, mostly. But it's sufficiently not a main focus that I'm happy enough to overlook it. And robots also aren't really A Thing for me. HOWEVER. Girls(tm) have hypnotic eyes. And I *am* a fan of hypnotic, enthralling eyes that just capture someone's focus and inevitably draw them into trance, leaving them open and suggestible and controlled. And the strawberry-scented lube entertain me rather a lot, because I have a story about hypnotic strawberries of my own. So I have more of a soft spot for the Girls(tm) than I would otherwise. And this story really highlights that trait about them, which means it hits a number of my buttons it might not have otherwise. 8/10 spirals.
  Unforgettable
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3/13/2010                                     mc ff
And this, ladies and gentlemen, is a wonderful example of the law of unintenteded consequences, and why checking in with partners after play is a *really good idea.* Thankfully, it looks like things will work out for Ursula and Chandra, but so much of Ursula's stress that happened off camera could have been avoided if Chandra had just checked in and owned up to being a bit ... impulsive. That all aside, I really like this story. Yeah, Chandra crossed a BUNCH of lines, but since Ursula isn't upset by it, mostly, it's easy for me to overlook that and just appreciate how good of a hypnotist she is. The moment everything clicks, and Ursula remembers.. it's a really good moment, and I love seeing how she responds. 9/10 spirals
  Hot Blooded
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3/20/2010                                     mc mf md ma
Diane and Jack! And Kiki! Yay! I do hope Traci was given a sense of what to expect, because gosh that would be a lot to walk in on if she didn't know what sorts of shenanigans Jack gets up to with Diane's subconscious help. I'll admit to being curious about what, exactly, the trigger is designed to do. Does it crank up Diane's arousal so that she's more likely to fantasize? Or does it make her fantasize, leading to her being aroused? Something else? I suppose it doesn't really matter, but it does make me wonder. But I always enjoy the shenanigans that these two get up to, with or without their friends being around, so it's no surprise that I enjoy this story too. 8/10 spirals.
  Don’t Speak
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3/28/2010                                     mc mf md
Given the site this story is posted on, this story ends the only way it possibly could. The control feels... forced, though. Maybe that's just because I would have demanded he stop tapping, too, were I in Lori's position, as the noise would drive me up a wall. So just that moment, that Lori doesn't think anything about Derek's continuing tapping, throws me out of the story a little. That's very much a me thing, of course, but still. Once I'm thrown out of it, it's harder to get back in due to the tone in play, so I overall like this less than I might have without my particular sensory quirks. But the way Derek gets in her head is still solid, and I have grown to adore a sense of surrender being inevitable, which helps balance that out a little. 5/10 spirals.
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I kind of disagree with u, it's not just them bickering but also how they handle situations that are unplanned. Haechan reacts and acts better in situations where he has no idea what was happening. As for hyuck being  lose to dreamies, I can tell u that he's close to both jisung and change who are being abused in the fandom for making fun of hyuck being tan, they're friends and they know what is ok. These three are usually together at chenles house and are close enough to spend time together.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fnllum1xFGk&ab_channel=qzhcl
In the hyungline in dreamies, I seriously believe hyuck is closer to jeno now then he is to mark. Maybe it's my opinion but look at jeno with hyuck, hes more accepting and also more playful with him. Mark not letting huuck call him mark is an issue still, I agree with u that hyuvk hates not ring allowed to not call Mark hyucg as he's allowed the other 2000 line to. Sometimes we all forget that we need to give a lot of ourselves in friendships too, and it seems like mark doesn't have the time and hyuck has found hyungs in 127 how treat him like one of them
Haechan and jisung are sibling like, he makes jisung work for him like doyoung does with him. Chenle is close to jisung so he comes along to everything, and haechan feels comfortable enough to stay at his house and play with his dog while chenle isn't there. Hyuckil is very much I believe for the camera, they're not as close as they act on screen, yuta and haechan understand eachother but aren't close the same with jungwoo and haechan. p.S. if haechan had issues with being tanner then the rest he would have done what kai and taemin did an got injections to make themselves less tanned. so i dont get why fans have to argue abt friends making fun of eo
Thank you for the overview on Dreamies.
We evidently have different definition for "mature".
Doyoung not being able to work quickly when he is taken by surprise is a side effect of his psychotype. It doesn't happen all the time, by the way, only when feelings take over (Jaehyun interrupting Do's IG live). He is a great MC and a variety host exactly because he can read the situation, think on the go and improvise. Remember Hyuk in the presence of his idol Taemin, the boy also was lost.
As for Tae. He has many childish tendencies, he wants to be a child, but when the time calls he takes on the leader's responsibilities. One of the good examples was when Jaehyun was attacked in the chat by knets, and Doyoung had troubles collecting himself and MCing. Taeyong was the one to help to move the live, safe the situation.
One thing I can agree on is Hyuk being more mature at his current age than Doyoung was at that age. As well as Haechan not letting his age hinder him. Doyoung doesn't think that he is old enough to "make it his way", he indoctrinated the Korean age hierarchial system. He is 26 but appeals to the older men as a maknae. Haechan doesn't care about it, so he is able to "want" things right here right now (like song producing) and insist to stand on the same footing as his hyungs, playnig the maknae card when it suits him, but not living up to it.
However, when it comes to responsibility, future planning, allocating time to thing that progress his career (like learning Japanese), reigning in his own emotions for the sake of work and others - Doyoung is very mature. I think we are so used to the current ever-patient and obliging Doyoung, that many tend to forget at what cost he does all of it. He is a very reactive and sassy person, used to overpowering others with words, but he leaves it for Gongmyung.
For me "being mature" is the ability to play the role of The adult when it's needed, take responsibility and not blame the circumstances or others. A person can be as childish and as playful when there is freedom to do so. And, of course, everyone have their weak points. With Do it's his proclivity to taking offence and keeping grudges.
About Haechan's darker skin. You know well fans tend to pick at anything, they want a reason to be overprotective. Doyoung also jokes about Hyuk's skin, but Hyuk understands it's a joke because the same Doyoung also praises his skin a lot. I'd assume it's the same with Jisung and Chenle.
It's not like Mark doesn't have the time at all. He does have time for Jungwoo afterall. I remember in 2018 Hyuk was talking about watching movies together with Mark, but nowadays it's hard to see MarkHyuk spending time in waiting rooms together. Mark seemingly just finds Woo more compatible, someone he doesn't need to fight with, who finds his humour funny, and such. When neos are asked about 1 vs 5 Haechans, all of them reply "5 y.o.". Hyuk is too much, even with hyungs he goes from one to another (Do->Taeil->Jae). Mark is a maknae but wants to be a hyung, his habit of calling everyone "cute" and constantly "petting" others is one of the signs. He would be that "I'm the head of the house" husband (with a sly manipulative wife that turns the head? haha).
I don't think HyukIl is for the camera, they do go out to eat together, created a song, work well as co-MCs, Taeil says only positive things about Hyuk in interviews. Taeil doesn't get too close to anyone in 127, however. He is there to be a nice hyung, but he doesn't invest emotionally. And you said it yourself, Hyuk wants lots of love. Not to be taken in a wrong way, but Taeil is a bit self-centered, he is a chill person, but what he wants matters most. He'd rather learn to play (his new hobby) pool than go with others to walk streets in America. He'd also cook the same kind of meat as long as he wants, not paying attention to "let's try something else, hyung" demands from Woo. He isn't a care-taker, neos even joke about him as a leader and as a fake maknae.
Doyoung, on the other hand, gives in to Hyuk even when he is annoyed or distracted with something else.
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