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shirecorn · 2 months

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Sunburst's cloak doesn't fully cover his wings...

#shire draws #shire draws mlp #sunburst #mlp sunburst #sunburst redesign #alicorn sunburst #skyscraper gods #mlp fim #Giving yall a taste on sunburt's story!#what happens!#why does he hide his wings!#how did he get them!#what is he the god of!#so many mysteries for you :3 #tw misgendering #tw self harm

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dyssonant-skyline · 4 months

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"because its hell" doesn't hold up.

When you create a setting from scratch, you have total control over it. You get to make the rules. You can't excuse a flaw in writing or presentation with "it is hell, it has to be this way!"

Here is one paraphrased example from Hazbin Hotel I've heard recently in response to a critique of calling the main characters too reliant on pinks/reds:

"All the characters have red in their color schemes because they are from the Pride ring and the rings are color coordinated."

While this gives an in-character/in-lore explanation for the color schemes, what it doesn't do is change the fact Hazbin Hotel's characters having a hard time standing out from the background. An in-character/in-lore justification should NOT be prioritized over the overall quality of a project.

As a writer, you have control over the constraints of your story. If you write yourself into a corner, you can't just throw up your hands and give up. You have to be willing to rework your lore and stories to make them stronger.

If excessive cursing is grating and making certain moments within your story less impactful, you should reel it in because it makes the presentation stronger. If your color based lore is causing the visuals of your project to suffer, it is time to reassess the lore.

Just because something is logically consistent within a world, doesn't make it a good writing/art choice.

A setting's rules should serve stories and characters, not the other way around.

#please... stop using that as an excuse. it is an admission that the writers could have fixed the issue by thinking through the-#worldbuilding/lore more... but they didnt. Anyway #that's my personal take/rant on how stories should be written.#hazbin critical #hazbin hotel criticism #vivziepop criticism #hazbin hotel critique #hazbin hotel redesign #helluva boss redesign #vivziepop critical #helluva boss critical #hazbin hotel critical #Dys rants

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3lmtree · 7 months

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Miraculous redesign because I believe we are missing out on a true friendship dynamic here. Just scrap the whole series and start again I say.

And yes I will sprinkle in some sexualities.

And please god forbid give them some better outfits….

#miraculous ladybug #miraculous tales of ladybug and chat noir #miraculous fanart #miraculous redesign #marinette dupain cheng #chloe bourgeois #alya cesaire #redesign #lesbian Chloe bourgeois #bisexual marinette #bisexual alya #but… what if Adrian was actually a woman and we had a beautiful sapphic love story instead???#chloe redemption

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u3pxx · 4 months

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can i show you guys an old oc of mine her name is reina (she/he) and he is a retired villain and also he loves her superhero wife a lot

#butch woman save me ... butch woman pl #i dont really make ocs bc i get bored making stories of my own (thats really sad i know dfghdj) but i do LOVEEE designing characters #she used to be a boy oc but now i just transed her gender god bless ASKSKS #the thing was he's like this robotics expert supervillian whatever #and her wife (rosie) is the superhero who always tries to stop her #i never really knew what their story would be about bc i was just here for the character concepts lollll #i also drew rosie with this one but i wasnt satisfied with how her design looks :^(#ill share her here if i redesign her in a way that i think looks good in the future asksksk <3 #sunnysidedraws #den's ocs tag #described #id in alt text #ocs #original character

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ai-kan1 · 11 months

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✦Alice and White Rabbit✦

Thing im doing for fun but i dont know yet if I do more than heartslabyul :3c

#twst #twisted wonderland #ツイステ #disney twisted wonderland #disney twst #ツイステッドワンダーランド #ace trappola #twst ace #deuce spade #twst deuce #heartslabyul #I have picked roles for every character already but its rly up to if my brain can come up as many designs #I guess this is an au but im not rly planning to make any story for it just design for fun #we see how fast I redesign something because I am in fact indecisive.#[✧˖Art˖✧]

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medicalunprofessional · 4 months

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d’amor

#trainofthought #einstellung #original character #I miss drawing her shes so cool. So i redesigned her #Story context? Ah she just kind appeared and she thinks shes allowed to kill people because she had a mark on her forehead #*has. Arghh

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keeper-of-the-dimension · 5 months

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2023-12-24

MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE Y’ALL

(Lemme know if any of you are from my friend’s fic :3)

#digital art #art #fan art #illustration #persona 5 #persona 5 royal #persona 5 royal fanart #goro akechi #sumire yoshizawa #p5 #p5r #p5 fanart #p5 akechi #p5 sumire #I did some redesigns because I honestly think a lot of them could use some better visual story telling #violet persona 5 #crow persona 5 #Fic title in the comments!

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starrysharks · 8 months

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hotel manager

#zeno's art #i'm not sure if i should tag the show itself as i'm not a fan but i guess its “fan”art so i will #hazbin hotel #charlie hazbin hotel #vivziepop #i was bored and wanted to draw something #my main goal here was to create a design that looked distinct and could (potentially) be moderately easy to animate #of course based on charlie's character i added as many angel images as possible through the hair and bowtie #(i know white on white is a character design sin but i wanted to show the angel wing detail ;w;)#also to express the personality and juxtaposition of a sweet devil her horns are supposed to curve into a heart shape #of course the garterbelts are upside-down/st peters crosses because of her satanic themes #i also tried to go harder into the goat theme but its still subtle i think #i actually think the goat theme is really interesting because of the story of the sheep and the goats in the bible #but i cant remember if it was actually something intended in her original design #i'm not going to draw anyone else so dont even anticipate that #this was basically a cooldown? ok i think i'm rambling now #goodbye #ok edit to say it clearly: i am not a fan of vivziepop or her work. i just wanted to redesign charlie as a cooldown/exercise for fun #because i used to be a fan of the character before i wised up about what vivzie had and has done #and before i matured and noticed the cracks and fundamental flaws in her works #so yea i dont support her at all and this redesign is critical i guess #also the reason why the tag “vivziepop” is there in the first place is so that anyone who has that tag silenced can scroll past #without seeing anything related to her work. in case that clears anything up #its the same reason why i tag “long post” and “food” and the like

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bunnieswithknives · 1 year

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I have no idea whats going on in Amanda the Adventurer lore wise but I keep seeing her monster design in thumbnails and its so bad it pisses me off so have some foeart about it (like fanart but angry) + some process doodles

#As I said I have no clue whats going on story wise so for all I know its great #no hate to anyone who likes this game #but her monster design..... why.....#amanda the adventurer #redesign #doodles #theres so much they could have done with her but she's just so generic!!! why!!#it looks like they slapped human hair onto a rat. and she does look like a weird rat #they have so much sheep themeing they could have incorperated at least some of that #not to mention they ditched her entire color pallet?? there are ways to make a character look sickly without making them stark white #the way they did the eyes makes it look like she has rocks on her face. they dont even read as eyes because they didn't give her pupils #wont try to claim this is necessarily a better design but at least its recognizable as Amanda

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freaky-flawless · 1 month

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Headless Headmistress Bloodgood redesign!

I've been wanting to redesign her for a while, in a way that would marry the aspects from each of her designs that I like. I'm pretty happy with how she turned out!

At some point I would like to design some more Monster High teachers and staff, because no matter what gen, that school is struggling.

#monster high #monster high fanart #headless headmistress bloodgood #nora bloodgood #monster high redesign #i feel like i should have drawn her with her head off but i quite frankly couldn't be bothered #no way in hell im drawing that damn horse either #anyway you guys know that fairytale about the girl who has to wear a ribbon around her neck otherwise her head falls off and she dies?#i think that's bloodgoods mother #ive seen that story called so many things im not sure what the official name is #the velevet ribbon? the green ribbon? the red ribbon? idk #my first exposure to that story was through the wolf among us <--great game #i wanna design a vice principal but figuring out a good monster type is hard so if yall have any suggestions im open to them #also...ive looked at this drawing on three different screens and the colors look different on each one #im on my macbook right now and i think it looks the best #id in alt #my art #sabz art

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aubeezz · 25 days

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Erm . what the flip

#my art #oc #Caspian #Nicolas #they got a redesign >:] and a story change !!

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cyborgknight · 12 days

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GUYS NEW AU ALERT HELP ME I LOVE MEGOP MEGOP IS WHAT KEEPS ME ALIVE I LOVE THEM

Y'all can ask any questions about this au in the ask box lmao I think I'm gonna stick to this au more on this account ;)

This is an au after the war!

The decepticons were a group of mostly lower class bots that started a revolution against the higher classes, demanding equality and better treatment. The autobots were a group of higher class bots that supported the decepticon cause but believed in peaceful protest instead of violence. Both factions fought against Cybertron's leaders, the original primes.

After the conflict ended, the autobots and decepticons joined to rebuild Cybertron and Megatron ended the decepticons and Optimus passed the matrix down. And they decided to raise a kid :D

(in my au, sparklings are created when both partners donate a piece of their spark and forge it together, creating a new and small spark. The sparkling's body is either created with spare parts or the spark (don't ask how lmao idk) "scans" both the parents and creates a body based on both the parents' features)

Optimus became the "stay at home dad" while Megs got a job at an office (which he says is absolute t0rture), quite the opposite of his former jobs lmao 💀

#art #au #digital art #photoshop #character design #decepticons #autobots #redesign #original design #megatron #optimus #megop #oc #megatron x optimus prime #story building #transformers #I've decided to stick to this au instead of the other one i was working on in this account because the other one is too dark in my opinion #im sry lmao i just didnt rly like the idea of Megs hurting Optimus since i rly like Megop #as for the kid he's an oc of mine and I'd say he's around 4 years old in Cybertronian years

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animalsalvationassociation · 2 months

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[ DO NOT REPOST, ALL ART & CONCEPTS WERE MADE BY ME ]

Illustration Time: 14hr 56m

Apparently this was a much needed addition to the fandom. I said I would so here you go. It’s literally 11:56pm I have been at this all day. My eyes are literally burning, but at least it is finished.

(Are there phones in the ocean??? No? Well boo! He has one just to call his girlfriend! It’s a kids show! You can’t get mad at me because it’s cartoon logic! Also it matches his new cast! 😂🥺💙)

@karmel-queen @bunniincognito @thalassic-p4rk

[ This is an Octonauts AU, in no way is this canon to the OG storyline. ]

(It has literally been a week and I have tried to fix this post about TWENTY TIMES AND IT STILL—HOW DID I LEAVE OUT THE ART STAMP FOR A WEEK??? ALL YOU COULD SEE WAS THE DINKY LITTLE SYMBOL I ALWAYS SMACK ONTO IT, NOW ANYONE WHO’S SAVED MY PICTURES WON’T REMEMBER MY NAMEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I fixed it but I am still so upset . . . 😭)

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alioks-blog · 4 months

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Our attempts at (re)designing characters from "Wish" based on the official concept art. We and @mafik-sun (who also suggested her ideas for these redesigns) are still figuring out our version of the story, but what we do know, is that we want Asha to have long curly hair in a loose ponytail, and for her outfit to be crimson. She's gonna have another outfit, but we haven't drawn it yet. (Also, ignore that Valentino design, we're gonna make a better one)

And of course we and Mafik are gonna have Starboy in our version, and we'll call him Ester (since we associate the popular name "Aster" with another character we know 😅😅).

#disney wish #wish rewrite #wish redesign #Asha #Starboy #alioks_art #(The name of our version of the story is still in the works)#Btw we don't think the movie is straight up awful #It's mostly fine but some important things are done poorly

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mooreaux · 4 months

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who could have guessed that I'd be redesigning Winter Rose AGAIN

#my oc #bg3 #durge #dark urge #winter rose #hellebore #I just kinda wanted to make her a little goth and scarier #SORT of a really sad desaturated pink hue??#but nowhere near as bright and lively as she used to be #reminiscent of a body left a little too long before brought back #been feeling really disconnected w her story! trying to figure out why #so #redesign to try and figure it out I guess

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salemisdying · 5 months

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me when i come up with ideas and then realize that im really bad at writing

#danny phantom #art #danny phantom the novel #redesign #sam manson #tucker foley #danny fenton #story ideas i have but will never write

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