#and my gf is on the wrong side of the planet
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roadtrip (c.s)
pairing: bf!san x gf!reader
preview: idk it's a long roadtrip and san needs to let out some pent up energy
tags/warnings: fem reader, oral (m.receiving), kinda subby san idk there's not a lot of dialogue, road head can i get a wahoo, head while driving (don't do that), he's wearing grey sweatpants (yes that's a tag), you take your seatbelt off to give him head (WEAR YOUR SEATBELT), dacryphilia, pet names (baby, pretty girl), cum eating
trigger warnings: n/a
wc: 833
song recs for this fic: let's! by hoppipola
a/n: dedicated to one of the biggest san stans i know (you know who you are)
you look up to check the clock on the car display and groan. 4:00pm. you’ve been on the road for at least 4 hours now. you know your destination is far but there’s only so much gazing out the window that one person can do.
at least you have the best view on the planet sitting next to you. your boyfriend, san, always looks so much more attractive while he’s driving. one hand on the wheel and one hand gripping the plush skin of your thigh. his eyes are stuck on the road, his head swaying from side to side to the beat of the music filling the otherwise silent car.
you rest your head on the window, debating dozing off. that is, until you hear the sound of san’s clothes shuffling around on his seat. you turn your head to find that he’s adjusting his hips in his seat, seeming uncomfortable.
“you okay, sannie?” you ask, feeling concerned. could he have a stomach ache? was a pit stop imminent? he nods, catching his bottom lip between his teeth. you can tell from his facial expression that it’s an empty motion.
“just tell me what’s wrong. if you need to stop we can-” you cut yourself off once your eyes finally travel down to his lap. you finally spot his…. problem. it’s clear to you now why he was shifting around in his seat.
“oh, that’s what’s wrong,” you cross your ankles together, debating how to go about it. you’re about to suggest pulling over but when you look at him, you think you might explode if you don’t do something immediately. he looks at you with wide, teary eyes that beg you to touch him.
“aww sannie, do you want my help?” you lean towards him and you can tell he’s really struggling to keep his eyes on the road. “please, baby. it hurts,” he takes his hand off your thigh to pull at his grey sweatpants. you can’t help but lick your lips in anticipation.
“eyes on the road or i’ll stop,” you instruct as you help him shimmy his pants and underwear halfway down his thighs. he’s harder than you think you’ve ever seen him in your entire relationship. what could have even had him like this?
you unlock your seatbelt to lay your torso over the center console. not the most comfortable position but you could not care less right now. you keep your arms free so you can wrap your hands around his cock. you pump him a few times, using his pre-cum as lube.
you shoot one glance up at him to make sure he’s looking at the road. his cute face is scrunched, trying to keep from looking down at his pretty girlfriend. you can see tears slowly streaming down his face out of desperation.
you finally wrap your lips around his tip, swirling your tongue around it. a small squeak comes from your boyfriend at finally getting what he wanted. san grips the steering wheel so hard his knuckles turn white. you bob your head up and down, doing your best to not accidentally knock into his arm.
his hips buck up slightly, his tip jabbing the back of your throat. you gag, saliva pouring out of your mouth. he takes one hand off the wheel and tangles his fingers in your hair. his other hand still holds a death grip on the steering wheel.
“pretty girl,” san says, his hips continuing to rock up. he sniffles before adding to his sentence. “let me use your mouth, i need it,” he pleads, his voice cracking. you can’t help but feel like his crying is only spurring you on.
you pull your mouth off him only to respond. “go ahead, just make sure you keep driving,” you assure him before taking him back into your mouth. he strengthens his grip on your hair before guiding your head manually.
you place your hand on his thigh, digging your nails into it to try and ignore your gag reflex. you can’t help but gag though, considering the sheer size. shoving the whole thing down your throat is guaranteed to trigger your reflexes.
“oh my pretty girl, i’m gonna cum,” he announces, shoving your head all the way down and holding you there. all your muscles tense as you hold your breath, waiting for him to fill your throat. in only a mere few seconds, your throat is full of his cum.
he finally lets go of your hair and lets you come up for air. some of his release slips out of your mouth and your fingers scramble to shove it back in. you swallow it all to the best of your abilities.
you wipe the tears off his face and look at him lovingly. “feel better, sannie?” you ask and he nods. you can tell he means it this time. “i do, but i’m pulling the fuck over because i can’t leave you high and dry.”
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꒰ა☆໒꒱ 𝒫𝓊𝒷𝓁𝒾𝒸 𝒮𝑒𝓍 𝒲/ 𝐸𝓃-𝐻𝓎𝓊𝓃𝑔 𝐿𝒾𝓃𝑒
🙈 pairing: Enha!bf x Reader!gf | 🙈wc: 4k | approx. 1k wc per member
🙈summary: Public sex scenarios w/ your Enhypen boyfriend
🙈 cw: 🔞MDNI!!... it's smut so just be prepared
희승|Heeseung|wc~1k|🛍️ Sex at the Mall
You and Heeseung were at the mall shopping for a new dress. You were attending a family dinner with your boyfriend’s parents tomorrow night! And you had been procrastinating for a week already. Now you were in panic mode.
“Ugh!” You groaned as you took off the third dress you’d tried on in the last 30 minutes. “Babe, relax. It’s just my parents. You’ve already met them anyway. Just think of this as a normal event ok. No stress.”
You heard your boyfriend, Heeseung, say in a gentle voice. He knew how much pressure you were putting on yourself about this dinner. It’s true, you’ve met his parents about 3 times now and there really was nothing to worry about. But you wanted to look your best and all of the dresses you’ve tried on so far have made you feel like the ugliest girl on planet Earth.
You looked at your body in the mirror. You pointed out every flaw which made you hate your body even more. You plopped down on the bench in the small dressing room and started to cry.
“Babe? Are you okay?” Heeseung asked from the other side of the door. “Yea, I’m fine. Can you just go away for a little bit. Sorry…” you sighed. The last thing you wanted was for your boyfriend to see you crying over something as silly as this.
“Yea…sure,” he replied. You listened as his footsteps walked away from the dressing room. You broke down and cried more.
*Why the hell am I even here right now?* you thought to yourself. *Just forget it. I’m gonna put my clothes on and get the hell out of here.*
The thoughts in your head made you cry even more. Your insecurities had taken control of your emotions and all you could think about was going home to cry. Maybe you could fake being sick to skip out on the torture.
Heeseung walked into the dressing room, startling you. “What’s wrong baby?” He asked as he sat down next to you on the bench. “Nothing,” you lied. “Don’t lie. I know something is wrong. It’s about this stupid dinner isn’t it?” He had got it right on the first try, but there was more to it than that. You just looked down as he pulled you in for a side hug.
“I don’t even wanna go anymore,” you pouted. “Really? But you were so excited about it,” he was quiet for a moment as you layed in his chest. “Is it your body?” “I don’t want to talk about it ok! I’m not going.” “You know I think you’re the most beautiful girl in the world right? I don’t care how many times I have to tell you,” Heeseung smiled before placing a kiss on your forehead.
He pulled you onto his lap and wipes the tears from your eyes and cheeks. “I love you my beautiful girl,” Heeseung said kissing your cheek.
Overwhelmed by your love for Heeseung and the passion of his actions, you succumbed to your heart’s desire. You kissed your boyfriend on the lips and felt as the kiss deepened by the motions of your tongue and lips connecting.
You started to slightly grind against him. At this point all you were wearing was your oversized tee, your bra, and your panties. You heard Heeseung groan at your movements before whispering in your ear, “If you wanna play we gotta be quick.”
His breathy voice made your heart flutter. You braced yourself against Heeseung’s shoulders as he pulled out his throbbing cock. He used the wetness oozing from your pussy to glide between your lips.
You he stimulated your clit with the tip of his dick. He slowly pushed himself through your tight opening, causing you to slightly flinch at the pain. He gently thrusted his hips, pushing deeper into your throbbing pussy. “Fuck,” he winced. “You’re so fucking wet.”
Heeseung wrapped his hands around your ass, pulling you directly on top of his lap. He guided your hips back and forth before you eventually caught on to the rhythm. The two of you were rolling your hips against each other. You watched as he would occasionally throw his head back, holding back his moans, which turned you on even more.
You leaned in to kiss and suck on his neck while he continued to pump his dick into you. The sensation of your lips on his neck caused him to let out a little moan. “Fuck baby. You’re making it hard to stay quiet,” he smiled with his lustful doe eyes.
Heeseung looked over to see the clock on the wall. You guys had already been fucking for 8 minutes…it definitely didn’t feel that long. “Hmm we gotta speed this up beautiful,” Heeseung said with a cheeky and seductive look on his face. He started to slam himself into you faster. Your eyes widened as you gasped. The feeling of him pumping this hard and fast into your pussy accompanied with the devilish smirk on his face was enough to make you cum right there.
Heeseung grabbed your head and shoved it into his shoulder, lining your ear up with his lips. “I wanna hear my beautiful girl moan for me while I fuck her pretty little pussy,” he whispered as he gripped his hands around your waist. You couldn’t hold it back anymore. “That’s it baby. You’re so close,” Heeseung said breathlessly as your walls clenched around him.
The feeling of his breath on your neck and his sexy groans caused you to moan as you came all over him. You covered your mouth with your hand to muffle your sounds. As soon as you finished cumming, you felt Heeseung slam himself into you 5 more times before you felt his hot load coat your insides.
The two of you sat there for a moment, breathless. He loosened his grip on your waist as he kissed your shoulder. “Fifteen minutes,” you smiled shyly. “Quick enough,” he chuckled.
“I think you should wear the black dress. It’s sexy and classy. But you’ll look beautiful no matter what,” he smiled.
You stood up to see his cum running down your leg. “We’ll get you cleaned up at home,” Heeseung said, noticing his sticky residue. He took his two fingers to swipe it up and put them in your mouth. “I love you,” he smiled. “I love you too.”
제이|Jay|wc-1k|🎸Sex at a Concert
You and Jay had been planning this concert date for the past few weeks. You were going to see one of your favorite bands preform live this weekend.
Jay bought two front row tickets to give you guys the best view AND an opportunity to maybe even interact with the artists.
The two of you arrived at the venue around 6pm, but the concert didn’t officially start until 10, so you had a little time to look around the area.
“Hey. Do you wanna grab something to eat?” Jay asked as he spotted a food stand. “Yea sure,” you replied. You hadn’t eaten anything except a piece of toast and an apple since breakfast this morning around 11. It’s only because you didn’t want to be late. You had already expected to take over an hour to get dressed. Which is exactly what ended up happening.
Jay held your hand and walked to the food stand to place your order. “Hello, lovelies. What can I get for y’all today?” The girl behind the counter said in a chipper tone. “Hello. Can I have one con of street corn, a jumbo salted pretzel, and one large snowball?” “Okay, perfect. And what flavor would you like for the snowball?” “Half Tigers Blood and half banana with a scoop of ice cream in the middle.” “Alright. Is there anything else I can do for you?” “Yea one more thing. Can you put a couple shots of rum in that snowball too?” “Of course I can. Your order will be ready in about 10 minutes,” the girl scribbled your order down on a notepad.
You and Jay walked over to the shaded table not too far from the shack. You watched as the girl passed the order off to her coworker who started to prepare the food.
“I’ve never had Tigers Blood before. What would that even taste like,” you asked Jay. “It’s kinda like strawberry and watermelon. I know it sounds weird, but trust me you’ll love it,” he smiled.
A few minutes later the girl carried out a tray with your order on it. "I gave y'all two spoons cuz I figure you're gonna share this," she chuckled before returning back to the register. Jay scooped up a spoon of the snowball, making sure to gather a little bit of everything in one bite.
"Open up," he said moving the spoon to your lips. You obediently opened your mouth as he put the cold spoon against your tongue. The taste was better than you imagined, especially with the ice cream, and the rum was added a nice touch.
"What do you think," he smirked. Judging by the expression on your face he could already tell that you liked it. "It's really good," you mumbled before taking another scoop. "Haha, I knew you'd like it," Jay smiled, taking a bite of his corn.
Not to your surprise, you had eaten more than half of the snowball by yourself and you were starting to feel the effects of the rum. You and Jay walked around for a little while longer before the concert.
"Hey the concert's starting in 15 minutes, let's get to our spots," Jay said as you walked in the direction of the concert stage.
The two of you managed to secure some pretty good spots and even took a few pics, but you had something else on your mind. Alcohol had a tendency to make you extremely horny sometimes, and this was one of those times.
You were standing in front of the gated border of the concert when you got the idea to move closer to your boyfriend. He watched as you shuffled in front of him. He responded by wrapping his arms around you, which you used as an opportunity to rub your ass against him.
"What are you doing?" Jay grunted, but instead of replying you kept grinding your ass against his hardening member. "Ugh! Y-Y/N," he stammered. You were relentless, the feeling of him getting hard coupled with your intense lustful thoughts was turning you into a cock-hungry succubus.
He quickly turned you around to face him. "Jay," you whined seductively. You knew his weakness was hearing you moan his name which is why you weren't surprised when he immediately grabbed your hand, leading you through the crowd of sweaty bodies.
Jay took you to an empty booth not too far from the concert. You could still hear the music faintly. You started to get down on your knees to suck his dick when he lifted you up and bent you over the counter. "Uh uh, I'm gonna fuck you in the same position you were teasing me in," Jay smirked before smacking his hand across your ass. He pulled his dick out and slid the latex condom over his stiff member.
"You're such a needy girl for me," Jay continued, pulling down your shorts. "If you didn't have to put these back on, I would've ripped these right off," Jay groaned, gliding his dick across your ass before sliding it between your thighs, grazing your throbbing pussy through your panties. He pulled your panties down and inserted himself into your needy hole. You moaned at the sharp pain that came before the pleasure.
You moaned his name as he fucked you hard and fast while pulling your hair. He didn't finish and fucked your pussy raw for the rest of the concert. "Jay," you panted. "The concert's almost over," you continued. "I can't take anymore," you whimpered. Your legs were shaking from cumming so many times, but he still stood behind you as strong as he started.
"Okay, baby. Just hold on for a little bit longer," he whispered before spitting on your pussy and inserting himself back into your pussy. He started to rub your clit in circles as he grinded against your g-spot before cumming in your pussy. You laid over the counter completely drained as Jay came behind you to readjust your clothes before carrying you back to the car.
제이크|Jake|wc-1k|🏖️ Sex on the Beach
You and Jake were at the Carnival Pier in your city. It had opened up about a week ago and you were just finally getting the opportunity to go.
"This is so exciting, don't ya think?" Jake smiled as he parked his white pickup truck. "Yea! I can't wait to ride the bumper cars," you replied, unbuckling your seatbelt and tossing your backpack over your shoulder as you climbed out of the truck. "No way! I didn't know they were doing the bumper cars this year! We gotta do that first," he laughed as he slammed the door and locked his truck. He ran around to lift you onto his back as he ran to the entrance of the carnival.
“Jake! Put me down,” you giggled. “We gotta move fast so we can be in the front of the line,” Jake huffed.
“Excuse me. Where are the bumper cars?” Jake panted. “Oh, there to the left as soon as you pass through these gates,” the Ticketmaster responded. “Thank you,” Jake said before running off.
“Okay, okay. You can put me down now,” you laughed as you slid down Jake’s back to the ground. He didn’t waste a second as he grabbed your hand and ran to get in line. “Yes! We’re next,” he cheered.
After the third round of bumper cars, Jake was ready to try something new. Mainly because the line was starting to get really long. You bounced around to a few different rides before Jake was ready to play some games. "Hey, I wanna win you something okay," Jake smiled as he looked around for a game with a prize he deemed worthy of his time.
"Over there," he exclaimed, pointing to a giant Pikachu plush. "Aww he's so cute," you smiled. "I know right. And I'm gonna get it for you," Jake said before walking over to play the basketball game. The objective was to throw each of the 5 balls in without missing. However, you knew Jake wasn't very good at basketball so you tried to encourage him to play something else.
"How about we go for that panda plush instead? He's cute too. Plus it's a game that is super easy," you suggested. "Nah, I want a challenge and I'm confident that I'll be able to do it," he smiled. "Are you sure?" "Yea, babe. I got this." Jake walked up to the basketball stand and paid for his first of eight consecutive failed attempts.
"Hey, man. How about you just take one of our smaller prizes since you've already spent like 40 bucks on this game," the boy running the booth said to Jake. "No way. I got this," Jake said paying for his ninth round of basketball. The first 4 went in perfectly, but on the last shot, the ball rolled around the rim before falling in. Jake laughed and jumped in the air before handing you the giant Pikachu plush. "I told you I got it," he smiled.
It was getting late so you and Jake rode the Ferris wheel one time before heading down to the beach. He drove his truck down there and the two of you lay on your makeshift bed in the trunk looking up at the stars.
"Jake! What are you doing," you asked as he pulled his shirt over his head. "Swimming," he laughed, as he hopped off the back of the truck. "Hey, wait for me," you said before stripping down to your bra and panties. The two of you ran into the water and splashed around for a bit before Jake tackled you into the warm, salty water. You tried to get him back, but he was much stronger than you and you ended up wrapped in his arms listening to the sound of his heart thumping in his chest.
He pulled back to look into your eyes before gently kissing your lips. "I love you," he smiled as he leaned in you kiss you again. "I love you too."
Jake pulled you in for another kiss as he caressed your body. You felt as his hands traveled from your waist to your ass, but his lips never left yours. You wrapped your legs around him and started to grind against him before he put you down and walked you back to his truck.
You laid on your back as Jake straddled you, his figure highlighted by the light of the moon. He pulled your panties to the side before moving between your legs to stimulate your clit with his tongue while fingering you. He spread your pussy with his fingers before spitting on your opening. Then he pulled out his dick before pushing it into your throbbing cunt. You felt as he took long slow strokes to help your pussy adjust to his size, before picking up the pace. Jake liked to fuck you passionately sometimes, and romantic pleasure was just as good as aggressive pleasure.
Jake worked his dick up inside you pulling out just a bit to give attention to your g-spot. He could feel your walls clenching up and tightening around him as he stimulated you more by rubbing your clit. You were reaching your high and started to move your hips with his stroking pattern. "Fuck me harder," you whispered, causing Jake to pick up the speed. At that point, you could barely keep up as your body began to jerk around. The feeling of you pulsating around the length of his dick and your soft, sweet moans caused Jake to get off at the same time as you. You felt his hot cum fill your pussy up as he thrusted himself inside of you.
He rolled over to the side of you before kissing your forehead and cradling you in his arms. The two of you ended up falling asleep together under the soft blanket in the back of his truck.
성훈|Sunghoon|wc-900|🎥 Sex at the Cinema
“Are you sure you wanna watch this movie?” Sunghoon asked before purchasing the tickets. The two of you were going to watch a horror movie from last year. This week the cinema was playing throwback horror movies for Halloween.
“Of course I am, I’m not scared,” you huffed. “Right,” Sunghoon chuckled. He knew that you were terrified of horror movies, but he wasn’t gonna try and change your mind. He knew that you were just as stubborn as him, so it was pointless to try to convince you otherwise.
“Two tickets please,” Sunghoon said to the box office attendant. “Alright. Here ya go. Enjoy the movie,” the boy smiled.
The movie wasn’t starting yet and the two of you had to wait another 35 minutes before entering. “Hey I’m gonna go get us some snacks. You can wait here if you want,” Sunghoon said as you sat down at one of the round red tables in the food court. “Okay,” you replied before he walked away to place the order.
“Excuse me,” a voice said from behind you. You turned to see an attractive brown skinned guy with curly hair. He looked to be about a year or two older than you and the scent of his cologne coupled with the way he looked in the tight fitting white tee that showed off his muscular body was enough to get your attention.
“Sorry to bother you, but do you know if this theater has a gift shop?” “Uhh…no, but they do have a good stand.” “Yea, well that’s kinda hard to miss,” he chuckled. *wow he has a really nice smile* you thought to yourself.
“Sorry I couldn’t help you,” you shrugged. “It’s all good. Thanks anyway. Hold on, don’t move,” he said, reaching his hand toward your face. He gently rubbed his thumb across your cheekbone. “Did you cut yourself?” “Huh?” “You have a scar on your face.”
You pulled out your phone to see for yourself and sure enough there was a red mark on your face. “Ohhh, yea that was probably from the curling iron this morning,” you chuckled. “Clumsy and cute,” he said under his breath. “What?” You asked even though you knew exactly what he said. “You’re really beautiful. My name’s Christian, but you can just call me Chris. What’s your name?” “Thanks. I’m—“
“Ahem,” Sunghoon cut you off. “I hope I wasn’t interrupting anything. Hi, I’m Sunghoon, her boyfriend.” “Kay, and?” Chris sneered. “You might wanna stop hitting on my girlfriend before I knock your teeth out.” “Heh, right. First of all, she was hitting on me—“
“WHAT?!” You cut him off. “Oh don’t act all innocent. I could tell you wanted me by the way you were looking me up and down.”
“From what I saw you were cheesing all up in her face.” “Man, whatever. Fuck both of y’all,” Chris threw his hands in the air and walked off.
“Sunghoon, I—“ “I don’t wanna hear it. Let’s just go watch the movie,” he said before the two of you walked into the theater. You two sat at the top row in the seats farthest to the back since you had wasted so much time those were the best ones available.
The energy was stale and tense. You were honestly more scared of Sunghoon than the movie. What was he thinking? Was he mad at you?
“Sunghoon?” “Hmm?” His eyes were glued to the screen as he responded to you. “Are you okay?” Instead of replying he stayed quiet. “Sunghoon, please say something,” you pleaded. He turned to face you with a numb expression. “What?” “Are you okay?” “Go ask your other boyfriend,” he mumbled before turning back to face the screen. “Sunghoon, nothing happened back there.” “Right, so you’re telling me you didn’t just let some stranger touch all over you?” “What?” “Don’t play fucking dumb. I saw the whole thing.” “He was just—nothing. Nevermind. Forget it,” you huffed.
“No, go ahead and finish what you were saying about your new boyfriend.” “Ugh!” You grunted in frustration. “Fuck this,” you said, crossing your arms.
Sunghoon grabbed you by the throat and kissed you. “S—“ he cut you off by kissing you again. He grabbed your arm and pulled you onto his lap. You could feel his hard dick against your ass as he reached to rip your panties off. Before you could even react he had already started thrusting himself into your pussy and covered your mouth with his hand to keep you from making too much noise.
Your pussy was dripping with your own fluids that coated his dick and he fucked you harder and faster to the point you felt sick as he constantly pounded your cervix. You were quickly reaching your climax as Sunghoon squeezed on your lower stomach.
“Next time I see you flirting with a guy I’ll fuck you just like this right in front of him,” he whispered as he released the grip on your shaking body.
You dozed off shortly after that and didn't wake up until the end credits came on. "Did you like the movie?" he asked in a soothing voice. "Mhm," you nodded, still half asleep. "I love you," he said kissing your shoulder, which made you smile. Then he wrapped his arm around you as the two of you left the theater and walked to his car.
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tashi duncan, my poor villainized girl i love you so😭😭😭 everyone wants to write patrick n art WHERE ARE THE TASHI STANS… so i present to you, tashi duncan as your gf, wife, and a small nsfw bit because im in love with her
Tashi Duncan as your Wife
- when you meet tashi, you’re smitten immediately
- shes charismatic, she’s beautiful, she has kind eyes, and an ambitious personality
- talking to her makes you feel on top of the world
- you start out as friends, and while you have feelings for her, you don’t want to be the asshole who befriended her just to fuck
- you’re content listening to her rants about her games, the latest sponsorship deal that has her face slapped on it, and any other tidbits she has to share
- you two are chilling at her dorm one day, cuddled up in bed like always
- you want her and it’s obvious but out of respect, you stay in the same position as always and don’t dare mess up your friendship with your feelings
- she turns to you with a serious look on her face and you worry, this is when she’ll tell you that she’s sick of your obvious feelings
- instead, she looks strangely vulnerable
- she asks you if you’re only here because of her status
- you’re confused and she immediately tells you that nearly all of the people she hangs out with are only there because she’s good at tennis
- before you could even tell her how wrong she is, she backtracks and says nevermind
- you reassure her that tennis could disappear tomorrow and you’d still be at her side forever
- you’re not a tennis player and you couldn’t really care less about the sport, you’re only there for tashi
- when the injury happens, you stay true to your word
- the first few months of recovery are hard but you two are glued at the hip
- you play with her sometimes and you know it makes her feel better because she beats you every time
- makes her feel like she’s not a loser just because she can’t play professionally anymore
- you start dating soon after, it only felt right
- an amazing girlfriend
- very direct and if she has a problem with the way things are going or your behavior, she’ll set it straight immediately
- she’s not trying to lose you so she’ll ground her teeth through uncomfortable conversations if it means you’re stronger together at the end of it
- enjoys romantic gestures, both receiving it and giving it
- staunch believer of the tashi duncan words of affirmation agenda
- absolute queen with her words, she makes you feel like the most loved person on planet earth
- she proposes to you the very night you planned to propose to her
- you exchange rings and immediately plan a small wedding
- having an intimate wedding is the best thing in the world for her
- spending the day surrounded by the people who truly love her and not what she can do for them
- values privacy and despite how famous she still is, she’ll never put you in the public eye unless you’re 100% down
- excited to announce that she got married to you, she’s so very cute
NSFW
- praise QUEEN
- you do anything n she’s praising you for it
- likes to be dominant but if you really work for it, she’ll let you take over
- your arguments are very rare but on days where you’re both being really petty, yall just fuck it out
- you’re too exhausted at the end of it to even remember why you were arguing
- founder of munch nation
- she just likes making you feel good
- complete tease when she’s feeling particularly dominant
- makes you work for it and if you work enough, you’ll be rewarded real good
- aftercare with her consists of a very good shower where she washes your hair, puts good smelling lotion on you, and cuddles you to oblivion
- after you guys change the sheets ofc, she’s not sleeping in that mess
- isn’t really into quickies, she prefers taking her time with you
#challengers#challengers headcanon#challengers fic#challengers imagine#tashi duncan#tashi duncan x reader#tashi duncan imagine#tashi duncan headcanon#artydonsgf
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your toxic könig is so perfect and the more recent posts made me think about a similar kind of au but with gromsko. like god i need this man to """force""" me into being his perfect little wife i swear.
AND IM SO SORRY but being slavic also makes this even more feral for me because i imagine the second his gf shows a bit too much independence/DARES to talk over him (yeah it's an achievement to be able to talk over him, the mf is LOUD)/etc he just. goes feral like he sees it as a challenge and he needs to show her what a slavic woman is actually supposed to be like.
but slavic or not he'll keep holding the fact that he "tamed" you over your head even when he's fucking you. talks about how this is your place, this is where you belong and how he's going to make sure you remember by breeding you full.
Omg Gromsko OMG
I'm so normal about him yes yes it's just your ask that made me this way ^^ I'm blaming you my dear anon 💕
CW: Protective & possessive behavior, implied sexism
So, Gromsko. Your car broke down in the middle of the road and this absolute bear of a Pole pulls over to help you. He has a charming smile, sure, but he's also obnoxiously bold. That casual masculine bravado makes you feel weaker than it should; there's this aura of shameless pride about him, and you can't quite decide if it's annoying or sexy.
You try to tell him you can handle it, that the repair guy is already on his way. But Gromsko? Hah. He just bypasses that shit. Pops up the hood and gets to work. The car is fixed in no time, and the next thing you know is that you just said yes when "Sobieslaw Kościuszko, pleasure to meet you, miss," asked if he could take you out to dinner this evening.
And it's true that he's loud. Like, why does he have to talk by half shouting...? (Probably because he has to make it known that he's the strongest, most virile male in the area.)
Sobieslaw always sits with a wide spread, with a broad, tall chest, with a confidence that seems to come naturally to him. He never tries to make himself smaller, no matter how crammed a space is. Everyone except the elderly has to move aside when he walks because he's not going to dodge or sidestep. You're not the only one who fears he will eventually break one of those dainty little chairs in the fine dining place he brought you to; the waiter side eyes this man like he's some beast that somehow got in and should be caged, not fed.
Despite all that brass, Gromsko is a proper gentleman. Always opens the doors for you, always pays at a restaurant. And always grabs your waist and draws you closer if there are other men around. Guy looks like he's ready to get into a fist fight for you if it comes to that.
It's kind of hair-raising how he laughs at the very concept of independent woman. His woman should never have to be "independent." It would be an insult to him as a man if his wife had to go to work.
He tells you how beautiful you are with intensity and passion that seems to come from another age. That boundless adoration makes you feel drunk, and Gromsko doesn't seem to notice anyone else but you – it's like all other women have disappeared from this planet.
He lays siege to you like crusaders of old laid siege to a city. You never have to fear whether you're coming off as too interested or eager or that you'll "scare" him away: this man is always more interested and eager than you. Still, you fear that everything will come to an end once you give this man what he wants – namely, sex.
You couldn't be more wrong! He's not fucking around, and he's not dating for the sake of getting laid. He's looking for a wife and a mother for his kids.
An infuriatingly sexy, uneven smile spreads across his face everytime you meet. He's checking you out, and he's utterly shameless about it. You're being rated like cattle, and it should not send butterflies to your stomach when you notice he seems to more than just approve of your hips and breasts. Little do you know Sobieslaw Kościuszko has already decided you're to be his wife.
When you finally spread your legs for this man, you expect him to fuck you with the urgency and attentiveness of a 20-year old hockey player. But Gromsko is actually a skilled lover! You don't know why and you don't know how, but he seems to decode you and all your weaknesses in record time. Hot kisses and intense love making are his bravura. Gromsko is so attuned to you and your pussy that it should be illegal.
It's like the gods made this man to breed women and spread his seed because he has the biggest balls you've ever seen. He doesn't grow all too soft after climaxing, and continues to fuck you even after you both just came. With sloppy patience, sure, because you're practically begging for mercy under him… but the point is that he just won't stop. He continues to pump you with strong hips and infinite stamina, and groans how perfect you are as you approach your second orgasm.
He places so much trust on his cock that, perhaps surprisingly, you're the first woman he has ever put his mouth on. It's the only thing that makes that eternal shield of pride tilt aside a bit, because he hates it when he doesn't know what he's doing… but neither is he a man who backs down when faced with a challenge!
He doesn't know what he's doing, which means he takes a mental note of every single thing that makes you shiver and sigh. This Polish bear learns to please you and just you, examines how you respond to slow licks and fast laps, sucks on your nub until you cry, and when he sees how much you enjoy his treatment, this man goes crazy.
"You like that, kochanie?" He pants between your legs, drunk on your pussy, swearing in Polish and giving lewd comments about how wet you are. He only ups the pace with his tongue when you cum. You're an overstimulated mess, but he's not done. He crawls on top of you and gets down to business with his thick cock, those heavy balls start to slap against your soaked flesh until you feel like you have no brains left.
"It's easier to just stop fighting, kotku," he seems to approve of your wet, moaning state more than anything. But it's the wickedly pleased gruff of "Let's get married, Słoneczko," that sends you spiraling into another overstimulated, glorious orgasm.
You don't even know that he's already told his whole family about you. You don't yet know that his grandmother already loves you. But it starts to dawn on you that you got more than you bargained for when Gromsko informs you that he'll take you to Poland but only as his wife.
Perhaps that's where this man's charm lies! Gromsko simply knows what he wants: a good loyal wife and a nice, large family. If you can give them to him, he's not wasting any time getting you pregnant. You're knocked up before you even know it, there's a ring on your finger before you get to say Na Zdrowie. You're his little wife now, and there's nothing you can do about it ❤️
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Hello hello!!! I heard you were taking request so...
May I please have some HCs about how GR Freddy and the rest of the gang would be as S/Os? 👉👈
i could use a love of some kind
↳ ft. the glamrocks + sun/sunnydrop, and moon/moondrop
「 gn! reader, romantic relationship <3 」
author's note: the song iz just.... so sweet ^_^ i thought it would b nice 2 listen 2 while writing this, so i added it so u can listen while u read!!!! if u wanna!!!!! ty anon 4 tha fun req, and i apologize 4 not writing it sooner luv <3 also he/it moondrop my fav ever.....
GLAMROCK CHICA headcanons:
▸ she's your best friend before anything else. the minute she met you, she couldn't help but get attached
▸ ultra energetic whenever you're with her. your presence really refreshes her. can't help but be buzzed with energy when she's with you
▸ chica is beyond sappy. you two are an adorable duo, it's undeniable- but man do roxy and monty tease you so much. this does Not Stop chica at all
▸ enjoys being physically close. you don't even have to be actually touching- even like. sitting near her makes her happy
▸ adores you. chica is the best hype girl ever and will b ur cheerleader when u need it!!! gives you that extra bit of motivation when you need it.
▸ she may not be all that threatening, which is expected, since she's sweet as sugar and incredibly friendly- but swears she would throw hands for you.
▸ likes receiving gifts! even if it's something small and simple like a trinket, giving her something tells her you were thinking of her. small gestures like that mean the world to her
more hcs under the cut !!
GLAMROCK FREDDY headcanons:
▸ in my head, the healthiest relationships you could have are with chica and freddy. i think it's mainly because these two aren't so emotionally constipated- for lack of better term (´꒳｀;)
▸ so completely genuine and honest. willing to communicate when there's something wrong and is very gentle w/ u
▸ that being said, maybe he's just a little. tiny bit. protective. not incredibly or overwhelmingly, but definitely needs to know that you're doing well for his peace of mind.
▸ pays attention to you. remembers the little things you tell him about yourself. he especially likes hearing about what type of music you enjoy! if there's anyone who knows your music taste as well as you- it's him
▸ likes dancing with you!!! idk why i just feel like this is a thing. if you insist you can't dance- he'll try to teach you!!!! (he wants 2 spend more time with you so badly (*꒦ິ꒳꒦ີ) freddy's rly trying <;/3)
▸ incredibly patient with you. if you're in emotional distress of some sort, always willing to comfort you first.
▸ secretly gets very nervous around you. he has this natural ability to have good conversational skills, doesn't have trouble getting along with others, and is generally likeable- he doubts ALL OF THAT around you. just a little. he seems to falter or get flustered very easily. freddy gets a little shy around u aw ^_^
ROXANNE WOLF headcanons:
▸ her insecurities can sometimes turn into jealousy- roxy just needs that extra bit of reassurance when it happens, she just wants to be good enough for you </3
▸ it's a little hard for her to let her pride down and actually express her emotions for you. her "i love you"s are often in the form of gestures and not verbal
▸ only ever really shows her soft side to you. it takes some time but she really does seem to melt around you. she's scared of being overly vulnerable with you- but give her time and you'll be the first person she opens up to when she needs some comfort
▸ WOOO SCARY ROBOT WOLF GF PRIVILEGES!!! if you ever feel in danger or uncomfortable in a situation, roxy 2 tha rescue!!!!! :] if someone's messing with you, they're gonna have to deal with her.
▸ she just thinks you're the cutest thing to ever be on the face of planet earth. likes watching your face light up when you tell her about things that you're passionate about- even likes how expressive you get when talking about things you despise. a good listener when you need one.
▸ compliments. so many. just casually. she wants to appreciate you like you appreciate her. she's a little bad at giving them at the start but give it time. they're from a place of sincerity.
▸ misses you very easily when you're not around. you could be gone for a day and the next time she sees you, she'll act like you've been away for decades.
MONTGOMERY GATOR headcanons:
▸ ough boy i write for this silly guy so so much. i am runnin outta monty juice but oh babey!!!! u two are just tha perf pair
▸ actually starting the relationship was the hardest part..... he's kind of emotionally guarded. slowly but surely he learns that he can trust you
▸ it might not be easy at the start- like, actually trying to get to know him. he's got some issues with anger and is very short tempered. little things throughout the day irritate him so much and he takes his anger out by thrashing his room and on people who don't deserve it.
▸ if he ever gets mean to you becuz of this anger tho?? oh man. he'll struggle through a million apologies just to make you feel better again. he wants to be nice 2 u, really. he's not bad. just a little troubled :(
▸ once he trusts you, you're one of the only people he's really soft for. you really just melt him into a sappy puddle. but also. still wants 2 b cool in ur eyes. so tries to hide it. (it does not work!!!!! he cannot hide how much he adores u)
▸ you get a million names and are always called them. like. always. so much so that like the entire pizzaplex probably thinks ur lil nickname from him is ur legal name. he likes recieving sweet little nicknames too :] however. he loves to hear your voice saying his name most.
▸ bonus: when talkin abt when u first saw each other, he's all like "it was love at first sight ;]" and ur like "...u looked like u wanted 2 kill me the first time we met." he recalls being absolutely head over heels. you recall how he stared intensely as you walked past, wondering what you had done to make him glare daggers ur way. (he remembers that heart eyes were practically forming under his shades. perhaps thats for him 2 know.)
SUNDROP headcanons:
▸ ok so he's fully and completely in love. his words, not mine. probably because that was one of the first things he said when meeting you. kidding! i think. but it's certainly no secret sunny liked you the minute you met. and how couldn't he?
▸ he tried so hard just to be friends with you. drew you a million drawings of you and him holding hands just to get the message across. guess it worked eventually!! and better than he thought it would <3
▸he puts so much effort into the relationship you two have- he secretly fears being replaced for someone better but shh its not the main reason he does all this- because he's never had this type of thing with anyone. he make sures to cherish you and give you all the attention and care you need. you will never go neglected by sun.
▸ you will however, have to be there for him too. he can get a little erratic and he needs someone to get him to calm down. offering him some patience and time is really all he asks for when he's being a little much.
▸ physically affectionate!!! so much!!!! he's not very shy about wanting a hug 24/7 or holding your hand- but if you aren't a very touchy person, he understands!! looming over your shoulder like a terrifying shadow works for him too. he just wants u there with him.
▸ knows every little detail about your likes and dislikes! keeps a list probably. just like. a t-chart with one side that says "good! fun!" and the other that says "ick! not enjoyed >:[ !!" stuff like favorite colour, genres of music you listen to, movies you love are there, yeah- but there's also like. specifics. incredibly niche details about yourself you've mentioned once or twice which he will keep and remember! the list was just for sun to keep track of what could be good conversation starters to talk to you when you two first met aw
▸ can get a little protective. again, he's a bit worried he's too much for you, or that you'll find someone better. he doesn't get jealous in a possessive sense but he def needs a bit of reassurance. he'd hate to be something replacable in your eyes. this is the first time someone has cared for him like this- losing you would hurt more than anything in the world.
MOONDROP headcanons:
▸ BASTARD WHO STICKS HIS COLD METAL HANDS ON THE BACK OF UR NECK. it's his way of showing affection. or bothering u. same thing when it comes to moon /hj
▸ i don't know how you managed. but hey congrats. you're stuck with it now! and moon fully intends to let you know that. clingy, yes- but not in the way sunny is. ok. kind of like how sun is. but more of the "looming-over-your-shoulder-like-a-terrifying-shadow" sense rather than the cuddles and handholding.
▸yes, when the lights are out, he will be following you around. he likes being in your presence. he doesn't undestand what draws him to you at first, but finds himself trailing your footsteps often. (this is. very anxiety inducing for you, who probably hadn't even talked to him at this point. like?? where are those weird bell noises coming from?? are those... eyes in the distance or- oh no wait it's gone in a blur wtf)
▸ though very reluctant to talk to anyone, you two somehow become close. it likes the fact you never really gave up on it- despite the fact it can be a bit offputting and unnerving.
▸ likes picking you up. greeting ritual where moon just kinda- hoists you into the air on sight. he decends down on his wire when he sees you enter and just. swoop.
"hi."
▸ will fight and kill and murder and bite and slaughter for you- just. your dynamic:
moon: why do you think i don’t like you? i do. i would kill for you.
moon: ask me to kill for you.
you: ...first of all, calm down-
^^THATZ U TWO. ITS CANON NOW. so like... yeah his chill is. very low. moon just tends to be very intense in every way possible and it shows. he's got the right intentions (for the most part) with all his fervour. he puts all that energy into showing you and letting you know you are loved and safe with him :] no one will hurt you. no one can.
#security breach headcanons#fnaf security breach headcanons#fnaf security breach#montgomery gator#roxanne wolf#glamrock chica#glamrock freddy#fnaf sundrop#fnaf moondrop#glamrock chica headcanons#glamrock freddy headcanons#montgomery gator headcanons#roxanne wolf headcanons#sunnydrop headcanons#moondrop headcanons#glamrock chica x reader#glamrock freddy x reader#montgomery gator x reader#roxanne wolf x reader#sunnydrop x reader#moondrop x reader#no thoughts just bastard moon#sunny is JUST as chaotic and intense as moon but kinda keeps it on the downlow letz b real#umm umm itz been 4ever since i wrote i hope u like it
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When I imagine a FF7 fanfiction that I would write, I always think about that one AC Cloud line.
and I am like, mmmh, why should I not make Cloud love every body like they are all his children ●-● ?
This is a reason why I find hard to see a cloud with human emotions as contradictory as it sounds.
There is just something unnatural about him.
So thank you for the ask! But ngl, I didn’t completely track what you meant, so I’m gonna try and fill in blanks and you’ll just have to correct me if I assumed wrong lol. I’m assuming you mean the “there’s nothing I don’t cherish” line which is, yknow, iconic for every Sefikura angst writer out there, quick shoutout, we eating good in my hood
If that’s what you’re talking about, then I personally disagree with the last two bits, but that’s because I think AC can get interpreted differently depending on what you’re looking at
I think it’s a given that in AC, Cloud’s depressed. No tip toeing around that, dude is depressed as shit. What I don’t think people realize is that deep depressions affect some people in the way that they struggle to show emotions. When you don’t have the energy to mask it, it can feel like you’re a walking rag doll with your face stuck in place
Cloud DOES care. Very much, actually, enough to feel an absolutely stupid amount of guilt. I always think of the convo with Tifa, where he’s like “I’m not fit to help anyone. Not my family. Not my friends.”etc etc.
So until the end of AC where he’s fighting Sephiroth, he’s doing everything on a sort of autopilot. That’s how it always is when you’re depressed. If you have the energy to do anything at all, it’s monotonous and half hearted. I think that summarizes Cloud’s overall attitude. He knows he has to do these things, but his guilt and depression is eating him up so bad he can’t do them at full capacity.
It’s because of that that I really enjoy the Bahamut fight scene. It’s ultimately Cloud that kills Bahamut, but it’s the others that give him a lift up so he can face it head on. Definitely a double meaning in that.
(He has something inherently unnatural about him too because um bro’s mind shattered and then his gf was in the lifeblood of the planet with him putting his memories together I’m pretty sure that’s got some side effects)
This might not even be what you’re talking about, in which case, ignore me lol. I’m fascinated by Cloud’s character overall since his identity itself is fractured because of the story, so looking at how he acts and interacts is so fun to pick apart
#ff7#final fantasy 7#cloud strife#ffvii#advent children#ff7 advent children#ff7ac#ff7 cloud#final fantasy vii#liddle’s asks#liddle theories
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sup bitches im back
and I KNOW it's been a long time since I've written but it's been busy with school life and then also I've been hanging out with my gf more and my friends so I'm just trying to balance everything. This week and next week are finals week for school and then after that I'm on summer break (and I'll be writing a ton during summer)
but anywhoo I've brought today a clone wars fic for yall (since there's an absence of tickle content in the star wars fandom, especially clones)
So yeah enjoy!!
Echo sat on the edge of his metal bunk, staring down at the floor.
It was one of those days where the adrenaline didn't really kick in before you get geared up and head out with your squad or legion before you fly to whatever planet you were supposed to fight on.
Days like this the weight of all that had happened with the war and how many people he'd lost bore down upon his like an unmovable weight that he had to drag with him wherever he went.
His thoughts started spiraling to back when he was a shiny, to his first mission with the other domino's, to becoming an ARC tropper with fives and not the rest of his squad. It should have been the others. It should have been their medal and their award because of how brave they were and everything they did. And how did he let them die? Along with so many other good men. He should have done something in the moment to help maybe stop them from meeting their fate.
He shook his head to get rid of the dizziness as an, oh so familiar voice shook him out of his trance.
"Echooo," Fives called out in a sing-song voice, that he did because he knew it annoyed Echo.
"What." He replied dryly as Fives pranced into their barracks.
"Ooh, grumpy much?" Fives raised an eyebrow as he walked twords him. "What's wrong this time, your blacks just a little too tight?" He teased.
"Shut it." Echo eyerolled. "You seem a little too happy, what did you do?"
"Hid the Gereral's lightsaber under one of the shinies bunks." Fives grinned. "So when he questions us we can just blame the shiny's."
"I am not taking the blame for something you did again." Echo grumbled. Fives' jaw dropped. "You get me in trouble too much."
"Since when do you mind getting in trouble? And why are you so grumpy?" Fives question, hands on his hips.
"Since you decided to annoy me!" Echo shouted back. "Will you just kriff off!?"
Fives dramatically put a hand to his chest. "Oh, you wound me Echo!"
"What?" Echo watched as Fives sunk to the ground, laying down by Echo's feet.
"How could you say such a thing to me! Not kriff! I don't know if I'll ever recover!"
"You're so dramatic." Echo eyerolled again. Fives liked to tell him when they were younger that if he kept eyerolling his eyes would pop out eventually. "Get up." Echo kicked Fives' side.
Fives lay there unmoving with his hand still on his chest, eyes closed. Echo stated at him for a good few seconds before Fives lunged over and grabbed Echo's ankle, sharply tugging him to the ground with a loud yelp and a thud.
"What are you doing?!" Echo yelled as Fives made short work of crawling on top of him and sitting on his legs, starting to grapple with his hands. Fives only cackled and continued to wrestle with Echo.
Echo managed to hook his leg onto Fives' shoulder and pull him to the ground, jumping on top of him. It didn't take long for Fives to do the same to him though. They went back and forth till Fives had Echo pinned to the floor, arms held against the ground by Fives.
"You are far too grumpy for someone who is about to go into a battle here in an hour." Fives panted.
"An hour?! Fives we don't have time to goof around, we have to go get suited up!" Echo exclaimed. It was Fives' turn to eyeroll.
"I'm sure we have time for this. It's an emergency case scenario!" Fives grinned. Echo started squirming underneath him more and more, starting to catch on.
"I'm not even grumpy! Will you let me up so I can go put my armour on!?" Echo pushed against Fives' grip on his wrists.
"Since Kix isn't around to help you, I guess it's up to me." Echo groaned at that. "I know just how to help you Echo!"
"L-listen, Fives! We can talk about this! I'll help you prank anyone you want- waIT FIVES!" Fives laughed at Echo's quickly reddening face.
"You'll be fine, this is good for you!" Fives grinned. He quickly dropped Echo's wrist and dove his hand into Echo's stomach, forming his hand into a claw and digging into his lower stomach. Echo burst out cackling, throwing his body any which way to try and escape. He immediately grabbed Fives' hand that was currently torturing him but was unable to pull the ARC tropper's hand away from his belly.
"Fihihives, STAHAP!!" Echo threw his head back, not feeling the pain as his head hit the metal floor.
"Don't hurt yourself!" Fives laughed, moving his hand to dig into Echo's ribs, evoking more squirming out of the latter.
This wasn't an irregular occurrence for these two. This happened at least one every 3-4 battles, Fives almost always instigating the fights for this exact reason. Echo was being "too uptight" or "he needed help getting that stick out of his ass". But regardless, it was always something that got Echo into this situation.
Echo kicked his legs against the ground, the unrelenting tickles becoming increasingly hard to deal with.
"I-hahaha-hate you sohoho much!" Echo arched his back but that just caused Fives to poke his stomach till he un-arched.
"Oh no, you don't hate me you hate this." Fives leaned forward, sticking his face in the crook of Echo's neck and rubbed his scruffy goatee against it. Echo yelled, scrunching his neck to get rid of the sensations overriding his system.
"NOAHAHA!! Fives!!" Echo was completely powerless to do anything to stop Fives besides scream his lungs out and squirm with all his might. Other than that he could just sit there and take it.
"Aww, what's wrong?" Fives whispered in his ear, something he knew Echo despised. "The big bad ARC tropper Echo can't take some tickles?"
"You can't take them either!" Echo argued back.
Fives retaliated by letting go of Echo's hands and digging his hands into his underarms. Echo jumped than burst out laughing, hands reaching to grab Fives'.
"I'm sohohorry!! Please, Fives!!"
Fives chose to ignore him and continue as if he hadn't heard him. Fives felt Echo's body shake with laughter underneath of him, legs flailing, arms pushing Five's hands and head away from him. Echo's laughter was so loud he didn't hear Rex ask to come inside or walk up behind him.
Fives jumped back off Echo with a yelp after being jabbed in his sides by Rex. Echo rolled away from Fives, still panting.
"Oh, hey Rex." Fives grinned. Echo glared at his other domino but said nothing.
"You two were supposed to be in gear up room ten minutes ago." Rex answered. "You wanna explain what you two were doing during that time and why General Skywalker's lightsaber was found underneath a shiny's bed?"
The two twins glanced and each other and shrugged. Rex sighed and rubbed his temples. "Go get geared up. Be ready and with the rest of the 501st in thirty minutes. Any later and I'm reporting you two, again."
They both stood up and noded with a "yes, sir" before running off talking to themselves.
In the distance, Rex could hear them talking faintly. "I told you we were gonna get in trouble!" "Nah, it's finee. He didn't even seem that mad..."
He sighed again. Those two were gonna be the death of him.
Hope you liked! (kinda a rushed ending but school night so)
#star wars#the clone wars#arc trooper echo#arc trooper fives#tickling#tickle fics#captain rex#once again i did not check for spelling errors#forgive me 😔
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whats ur thoughts on toh? out of pure curiosity
aaaaaaalright so. the short of it is that s1 was mid, s2 was pretty great imo, and s3 SUCKED.
the long of it is that when i found out Dana Terrace was making a cartoon, I was excited. I admired her work on GF (which changed my life when I first saw it), and was looking forward to the Owl House.
when I started watching it, I figured it just wasn't my style. I had graduated high school found that i wasn't really into the 'school' element of stories anymore (which I remember hearing that Dana herself not being too interested in as well, but execs forced the crews hand). I also just don't care about witches very much. Luz didn't move me in any particular direction, nor did Eda. The animation was cute at points. I would say the best ting about the first season was the fight scenes, specifically the ones between Eda and Lilith. other than that the show was just fine.
season two. I loved season two. I thought it got a million times better. they introduced Hunter, who was probably my favourite character in the show, the stakes got higher, as did the quality of the storylines and arcs. I don't know! the show just became so exciting to watch. I had to drag myself through the first season but I was locked in on season 2 and very excited whenever new episodes were coming out.
so natch this is when disney decides to cut their legs out from under them.
look a huge part of me feels horrible for the cast and crew of the owl house. they had a decently popular narrative show that was being talked about WEEKLY and that still wasn't enough to save them from the axe.
so unfortunately I was watching rise of the teenage mutant ninja turtles at around the same time I was watching the owl house. these shows were both canceled before they really got to end their narratives, and were given a shorter season/tv movie to wrap things up. I might've been 100x more forgiving to the owl house if rottmnt didn't EXCEL. granted, they're very different kinds of show, but rise really used what it had and made a heartfelt ending that insinuated the continuing adventures of the turtles. It really fucking worked (i love rise, everybody go watch rise)
so owl house gets three forty minute episodes to end its story, and the crew promised that just because they were short on time doesn't mean the show would be any worse. and I believed them.
the problem was, everything they chose to focus on in these episodes felt like the wrong choice.
so, context. the villain of the show since season one has been Emperor Belos. he's this big, creepy looking fascist dictator who wants everybody to be learning ONE kind of magic. he gives people special tattoos on the inside of their forearms to make sure they can't use more than one (which draws some uncomfortable parrallels to the holocaust considering we learn that belos wants to commit genocide against the witches)
so that's our villain but at the end of season two a new villain is introduced. a little creepy jester God Baby (heretofore known as GodBaby.) GodBaby wants to play. GodBaby destroys belos in one fell swoop and literally kills all the tension of the season two finally with a twitch of his finger, then GodBaby enslaves the planet as his playthings. Luz and her friends escape to the human world, but find they can't return.
When they DO return to the human world, they literally just explain to GodBaby that you have to ASK if people want to play with you and GodBaby immediately stops being the villain. The villain is now, again, Belos, who has been crawling around as a rather pathetic piles of deer shaped goo. There's your narrative context.
I found this was a huge waste of tension. they destroyed their villain, taking away all his credibility, his power, everything that makes him threatening to introduce this NEW guy, the new guy is convinced to the good side in a four minute conversation, all so you can bring this entirely non-threatening guy back for five seconds. this might have been alright if it didn't take place over the course of two and a half episodes. it wasnt DRAMATIC nor was it SATISFYING.
so that's the villains, now for the protagonists. Willow and Gus, our two side characters of colour, are underfocused on (as they have been throughout the entire show). Hunter, my favourite character, has basically the entire first episode dedicated to his suffering. i guess im biased cause I love that kid, but forty minutes of him getting infected with UncleGoop, slowly becoming paranoid and losing his mind, and then turning into some kinda (POORLY DESIGNED) deer beast, and then trying to KILL HIMSELF and THEN his first friend and beloved pet bird sacrificing itself to save his life..... hoooooooooooo. it was farrrrr too fucking much in my opinion. my man just wanted to cosplay. but i guess that's more of a personal thing.
Luz is in her depression era. she's upset because she thinks that everything is her fault, completely understandable. was i moved by it at all? noooooo.
amityyyyy. exists to be a good girlfriend. and that's OKAY. i'd probably like her way more if they hadn't turned the cunt beam down. she used to be a real bitch and that's when she was at her most interesting TO ME. IMO.
the most egregious thing to me is episode 2. that episode focused HEAVILY on side characters and stories I have no interest in when the stakes were supposed to be at their highest. they give boscha (fucking boscha?) a redemption arc when I was moe worried about hunter killing his uncle and luz freeing all the puppeteered slaves. and why are you INTRODUCING STORYLINES WHEN YOU HAVE LESS THAN SIXTY MINUTES OF SHOW LEFT???? it was very veryyy fucking frustrating.
last episode. i barely rememeber it. luz has he depression healed by the power of becoming a kaiju. hunter can now use magic because he ate his magic bird to survive. i was yawning.
when i talk shit about the owl house its because I was so fucking let down by its conclusion. I understand that the team had less to work with, but so did the crew on Rise, and they made an excellent conclusion to their series. because 2/3 seasons in that show were mid (TO ME!!! IN MYYYY OPINION!!!) i don't value it as much as I value shows like gravity falls or infinity train or rottmnt. if you or anybody reading this liked it, that's okay! live your truth. i did Not fuck with it though.
#she speaks#hater tag#asks#ty for asking i love asks!#long post#cartoonists listen to me TAKE STORY STRUCTURE CLASSES#omg and i just remembered it was like a carbon copy of the amphibia finale which released like three months before it#THAT was crazy
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My oopsies make me sad
If I do mean things, most of the time they aren't on purpose. I'm just stupid and I struggle with changing habits.
If I meet someone and sometime after we’ve already gotten comfortable they come out as trans I probably will mess up their pronouns on accident, because I have. I said the wrong one, flipped to the opposite end of the gender spectrum as a reflex, then screamed in frustration before finally referring to them as the them they are. They just laughed it off because I did it on accident and I got it in the end so no harm no foul I suppose but I still feel guilty about it, and this happened like a year or two ago now. I don't want to make anyone feel dysphoric just because my brain is too small that once something is set in stone its just stuck there forever even if I'm actively trying to take it out. Like half of my friend group has come out as some form of not cis and I love them for being their true and honest selves but there's so many of them and sometimes they change preferred pronouns a second time because they're still figuring it out but I get overwhelmed in large calls or groups so I don't hear the new ones said out loud often enough to realize there even is a new one until I forget who in the server is named “The big cement mixer” And go to check and realize that them p-nouns in the bio are different so now I have to fix that in my brain immediately even though we haven't spoken one on one on a call for several months and will probably not speak for several more months but if I don't get that fixed now then I cant refer to them in my head by those pronouns and if I don't change the ones in my head then how am I supposed to change the ones I say out loud? My brain is the size of a kernel of corn, I am one big empty balloon with a single piece of glitter stuck to the side, all the empty space in my brain is filled up with remembering Pokémon names, sea shanties, and at what time I need to get up to talk to my gf as soon as she's home from school, I try so hard to get it right but I'm the big dumb stupid and sometimes I fuck up and I don't want anyone else to suffer from my mistakes. Its gotten to the point where I have to convince myself that the inauthentic birth-aligned version of my friends are dead now, they've been gutted and split in twain and what has emerged from the flesh cocoon, free of whatever arbitrary standards were weighing down the original, is my actual friend, my real friend being their happiest selves and living their best lives being who they were always meant to be. That process is the only reliable way to get the old pronouns out of my brain. It wasn't that hard with Pluto. I grew up with Pluto the planet, but when I was told it was actually a dwarf planet the whole time I just accepted it and referred to it as a dwarf planet from that moment on, why is it so much more difficult with people whos emotions are on the line? Pluto wont feel dysphoria if I call it a planet on accident, why is that one my free pass? Let me say the right words god damn it. thank you for coming to my ted talk.
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anyways delete this entire day from 10:45 am until now
#many things are wrong#sportsgame is wrong#theatreshow is wro g#bread wont rise#internet is dead#i cant finish helping my bro w his homework online submit bc intermet is dead#it is hot and sticky#and my gf is on the wrong side of the planet#fuck this shit im out#tree.txt
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Astrovations #7
DISCLAIMER
● Please remember that everything matters. Thus, planets aspecting definitely play a role on how certain things may play out in life
● Debilitations upon planets happen! (Definitely know this upon personal experience and my mothers chart)
Thank you, now enjoy you beautiful strangers ❤
🍄 If someones venus sign is the same sign as your rising, then there's a good chance they will be attracted to you. Whether it be appearance, personality, mannerisms, aura etc
🍄 North node conjunct ascendant in synastry has said to be seen as a "soulmate" aspect 😊
🍄 Mars conjunct south node in synastry can indicate a past life passionate/sexual couple or a partnership with arguements often, mostly caused by the mars person
🍄 North nodes conjunct in synastry are strong soulmate/karmic bond aspects (My 2 closest friends in my life have our north nodes tightly conjunct! And with one of them we grew up together since kindergarten and are still best friends 🥺)
🍄 10th house stelliums don't always mean a successful or prosperous career. I've seen charts with 1 or 2 weak planets in the 10th totally make the effects challenging. This goes for any house tbh. The 10th was just what I decided to look into 😔
🍄 If asteroid Nessus or Nemesis touch or are tightly conjunct the north node in synastry then please beware and stay safe of the other person (or if it's your nessus or nemesis then 🤚💀). I've heard a big betrayal can be an effect of this as well sometimes
🍄 I can confirm that Libra moons are very fair in families. If siblings fight then the libra moon will step in and not take anyones side, telling both siblings why they are wrong or right in the situation and to part ways. Making peace
🍄 Ngl someone in my family has a Gemini moon and has a bipolar disorder. Just putting that out there if it means anything with that stereotypical double sided gemini 🤚😭
🍄 Undeveloped Cancer moons can be chaos when undeveloped or in bad tides. Extremely moody very often, clingy towards people and wanting love and attention all the time but not giving any in return unless they feel like it in the moment. They can also be very manipulative and petty if things don't turn out a certain way
🍄 I read up online and saw a celeb with a leo moon and cancer sun and just- wow 😩
🍄 I've seen virgo ascendants sometimes be petite tbh. There's a majority that are short at least from what I've seen 🙂
🍄 Lilith in the 7th could have a lot of their partners throughout their lives obsessed with them, clingy, or just emit lilith qualities
🍄 If you have a planet in a zodiac sign (EX - Scorpio) on that signs degree (EX - 8°) then that planet oozes that zodiac signs qualities sooo much (EX - Venus in Scorpio at 8° probably really resonates with the meaning of a scorpio venus
(🌟immensely🌟)
🍄 Pluto conjunct moon in synastry is like a tug of war between dominating one another in emotions or power in the relationship (like getting the last say in an argument is a small example lmao) and the people obessesing over eachother. Meaning thinking about eachother often or wondering what the other is doing, how they are etc
🍄 I've only seen a grand cross once and it almost made a pentacle shape! It was so interesting 😃
🍄 North node/Rahu in the 7th people can get into a relationship quickly and be into it for about a few months or whenever and then suddenly one day not feel anything for their bf/gf, no love at all. Or they slowly just fall out of love rather than abruptly. This is because the north node/rahu never gets enough. Always wanting more and more and trying different things. This placement tends to calm down after some time as they grow up. It's good for these people to get into many relationships before marriage so that this placement can calm down!
🍄 Wherever pluto is placed in a natal chart, it wants power 🤺
🍄 Pisces/Neptune in the 3rd has an enchanting voice. I saw someones chart online with this and singing was a hobby to them
🍄 Mars in the 5th can be great dancers if they wanted to
🍄 Lilith conjunct the ascendant emit lilith qualities in their aura or in the way they dress
🍄 I've noticed a lot of air signs afraid of heights but a lot of fire signs don't mind doing things like riding a helicopter, bungee jumping, risky height shi- 🤚💀 like why?
🍄 Polar opposite Sun and Moon signs in one persons chart can be challenging at times and balanced at others. The wave lengths go through different things from time to time
🍄 Water dominants probably sleep/nap/listen to music while laying down in order to escape from reality at times
🍄 A debilitated moon or pluto in the 4th can indicate a not-so-great or helpful mother in certain ways. If neptune aspects these then it can create a barrier of awareness so the kid might not even understand this. Also neptune is escapism or distance which ill get into next
🍄 Neptune in the 4th has a spychic or intuitive mother, she probably had strange occurrences. She was distant or used some form of escapism, smoking, alcohol, marijuana, etc.
🍄 Neptune in the 4th can also create random experienced of ghosts or spirits in the home. Random invisible beings whom enter the home, positive or negative. In childhood things probably somehow ended up missing for some reason only to be found again later
🍄 5th house ruler/lord in the 4th house people do a lot of their hobbies at home. They get random ideas or creative sparks when they are home
🍄 1st house ruler in the 12th can be seen as enigmas very often or people can get suspicious of them. They are also seen as aloof or sometimes even loners
🍄 Uranus in 12th can have bizarre dreams
🍄 Pluto in the 2nd love money and have most likely experienced what it's like to not have much and to have a good amount at some points in their life
🍄 I've seen Uranus in the 5th house commonly in the charts of gamers. And it def makes sense since Uranus can mean technology and the online world. Both my brothers have this and play video games almost every day as their hobby ^
🍄 Jupiter in the 12th house doesn't always make someone philosophical or into spiritual things, I've seen it do the total opposite and create a disinterest. Probably because some peoples Jupiters are probably shrouded in more fogs of darkness or something while they're hidden in the 12th 🤷♀️🙂
🍄 The 12th house holds hidden talents. It's just talents that are challenging to master since they are in the karmic house (meaning ya gonna have to deal with the karmic challenges to try and capture/grasp their full potential) but once they are mastered as someone grows, they have amazing potential! Look to where the planets zodiac rulers are in the chart to get a better understanding of what the talents are 🌟
🍄 Houses at 0 or 29 degrees are gonna be fully felt and are important (EX - A Leo rising at 0° in the 1st house probably looks like a stereotypical Leo rising appearance and acts like one)
🍄 Whatever planets are in the 12th house and whatever house those planets zodiac sign rules probably feels hard to grasp or it can feel like a house that has given a negative impact in some areas of life when someones younger
🍄 Chiron in the 3rd most likely got bullied by people at school or siblings. Whether on purpose or not. This may not resonate with everyone but it's a common thing with this placement
🍄 I heard a twin flame natal chart has a lot of placements that are exactly the opposite??? Idk but I read about it and it seems interesting, just thought I'd let you guys know if you wanna search up more on it 😯
🍄 7th house ruler in the 1st probably attract people who are similar to themeselves or the rising signs traits, positive or negative of course
🍄 7th house ruler or zodiac sign of the same ruler in the 12th can have secret admirers, and they probably notice 🤫
🍄 Juno tightly conjunct Eros have the traits about themselves they normally desire when looking for a potential spouse. They typically look for or find men/women attractive that are similar. I heard this placement can also dictate possibly accomplishing this and getting their desired personality/appearance of their spouse
🍄 Chiron in the 3rd house were probably talked down to about their intelligence at some point, by siblings, at school, etc. I forgot if I wrote this on another post but just in case, it's here 😂
🍄 As stereotypical as it may sound, I've noticed capricorn dominants be pretty traditional in their approach to religion
🍄 Venus in the 1st house are very serious about their appearance. These are the kinds of people to possibly go out of their way and go on a strict diet just to fit their own standards
🍄 Neptune in the 1st house has popped up in the charts of actors besides models. This shows a knack for putting up an illusion and masking themeselves which can help fit a new character or role. This is especially a strong aspect if Pisces is in the 3rd/5th/10th
Putting zodiac signs into harry potter houses in my opinion 🤷♀️ (just for fun) 🔮
Sun - what you truly are
Moon - what you act like
Rising - what others see you as
Gryffindor - Aries, Leo, Libra
Ravenclaw - Virgo, Sagittarius, Gemini
Slytherin - Aquarius, Scorpio, Capricorn
Hufflepuff - Taurus, Pisces, Cancer
Have an amazing day! 🍓
Now 😡
Or I will take away your birthchart 😃
#astro notes#air signs#astrology observations#astro observations#all zodiac signs#zodiac#astrology placements#astrology#cancer zodiac#leo zodiac#libra zodiac#gemini zodiac#astrovations#astrovation
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Hey i love your writing can i reqest hc of how mcyts would react to a demon s/o she/her prounouns also can you make it nsfw if you want to ofc- :) anon
Writing c! DTeam (Individually) since the request didn't include which c's!
Incorporated this into my 3 A.M thoughts because I wrote some at the end, for Sapnap. Hope anon doesn't mind!
Contents: A small blurb thingy at the end that also contains the seggs. F! Reader
𝐃𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐦𝐖𝐚𝐬𝐓𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐧
Dream probably met you through one of his friends, the friend being Sapnap. You were both from the Nether. However, you both weren't physically alike. One of your notable features were the horns that stook out of your head. They reminded him, instantly, of Bad. He was probably hesitant about approaching you at first, given that while Bad may be one of his friends, he's a demon he's[Dream] known for years. But when Sapnap had reassured him that you weren't like the other hostile creatures of the Nether, he agreed to let you roam the lands of Dream smp.
He probably ends up catching feelings when he sees you sparring with Sapnap, almost losing until you managed to strike Sapnap's sword out of his hand. He sees that you have a good potential for fighting alongside him. So when he asked you to join his side, you agreed and battled along him. While he caught feelings, he felt guilty, he didn't want to come between you and Sapnap, but when Sapnap had reassured him that you and him were just really good friends, and he didn't see you that way, he felt confidence course through his veins.
When he askes you out, and you say yes, he swears there's no other man on the planet who's as happy as he is.
- nsfw -
Yeah, you're the demon, but damn is Dream one in bed. He's got you dumb, feeling so incredibly vulnerable. His fingers dig into your skin, leaving scratches that, iinstead of hurting, drive your pleasure up. He's got you fucked and numb<3.
𝐆𝐞𝐨𝐫𝐠𝐞𝐍𝐨𝐭𝐅𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝
He's probably afraid of you from the beginning, you never felt offended, it wasn't everyday that you see a demon from hell above on the surface(except for Bad). He comes around when Dream had invited you to the lands of the Dream smp, usually he's[George] never around but when he is, you two converse and make friends.
He mainly asks about you, considering that he's a normal guy, he thinks it's really interesting that your body can handle immense temperatures of boiling heat. If you're a demon with wings, he might ask to touch them, sometimes poking at your horns. You're so different and interesting, whatever insecurities you have about yourself turns out to be things George is absolutely siked with. You're probably the first to start having feelings, you'd never felt accepted the way you did with him, he made you feel so many different things at once. When he begins to reciprocate these feelings, it's when he realizes the reason why he shows up around the lands more. He's usually asleep, or just away.
You might confess your feelings for him at a flower field, sitting a top a hill. You'd felt incredibly nervous, the feeling digged in your stomach. George didn't seem like the type to be interestes in dating, so it really was a shocker when you found out he also shared these feelings with you.
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Lazy sex with George is common, he might be fucking lazily into you, it may not sound good but he'd make sure to prove that wrong, or you're the one riding him. Might pull at your wings, more likely if they are sensitive. Considering that your a literal demon, things may get pretty heated, high stamina for you, you could be riding this man for hours. Having him underneath you, so sensitive and moaning. He'd look so pretty<3.
𝐒𝐚𝐩𝐧𝐚𝐩
You and Sapnap have known each other for a long time, having both been born in the same hell. You weren't entirely the same, since he was more human, but when you had met he grew infatuated with your differences. The pointy horns at the top of your head, the scaly wings, long tail. Everything about you had entranced him. Nowadays, you two were in a tight and strong relationship. Usually causing, harmless, havoc across the nations. Running before you would get into trouble.
When you two would spar, as a way to build skill, he would sometimes flirt as a way to get you distracted. Which would end up working, since his words would have you flustered.
- nsfw -
Sex with Sapnap in the nether? Yes. You can bet that this man will pull at your tail, a thing that is especially to happen if it's sensitive. Imagine how regular sex is with him, high rising heat even just when it's on the smp. But when he's fucking you in a place that's 10 times hotter, it probably increases his stamina, my mans literally said he was born in lava, he can take it. And if he, a human, can take it, he knows you, a demon, can.
Some Thoughts about Sapnap with his demon gf.
About the 'fucking in the nether' thing, how does that not sound inducing? Imagine Sapnap has you in a pool of lava, and he's just railing you, you're arms rest against the netherrack, Sapnap's just buried inches deep inside of you. The boiling lava added to the feeling of Sapnap's treatment. By the end of it, you're completely wasted on sex. When you get out, all you feel is a dribbling line of hot cum running down your thighs. Sapnap had on that agitating grin, you didn't feel bothered enough to say something about it though. You just wanted to get home and rest in his arms.
#dream smp smut#dream smp x reader smut#georgenotfound smut#GeorgeNotFound x Reader Smut#Dream Smut#Dream x Reader Smut#DWT Smut#dwt x reader smut#Sapnap Smut#Sapnap x Reader Smut#dsmp smut#Raven's 3 A.M Thoughts
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hey bestie! i love gamora and you probably don’t get a lot of requests with r x gamora, soooo i’m doing it <3
may i request a fluff blurb f!r x gamora, where gamora shows R (her gf) off to the guardians?
Pairing: Gamora x reader
Warnings: none
quick a/n: thank you for giving me a chance to write for Gamora, i adore her. also i don't like peter quill so sorry not sorry for how i portrayed him lol.
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Gamora shot you a reassuring smile as she walked with you towards the ship that housed her friends...no, scratch that. Her family. You and Gamora had met when the Guardians stopped by Earth to go over some business with Nick Fury. Gamora took a wrong turn when looking for the bathroom and found herself accidentally walking into your bedroom. The two of you locked eyes and it was as if Gamora’s world had stopped. She never envisioned herself falling in love. Peter had mentioned some “unspoken thing” between the two of them, but she knew what love felt like, and she felt none of it for him. But you? You were different.
You shot her a warm smile and introduced yourself.
“Hi, I’m Y/N. You must be Gamora, I’ve heard so much about you! You’re such a badass!” You had excitedly exclaimed.
That voice had to have been her new favorite sound in the entire galaxy.
And then you giggled when she told you she had been looking for the bathroom, and she decided your laugh was even better.
After months of contacting each other via an intergalactic device that Tony had given each of the Guardians to stay in contact with the Avengers as they travelled the galaxy, Gamora knew you were the one. And when she told you that on a call one night, she was ecstatic to hear that you felt the exact same way.
It was hard, though. Long distance within earth is one thing, but when two beings in love are on entirely different planets? It got lonely. The two of you wanted nothing more than to be in each other’s arms, since you hadn’t been able to see each other since you had first met, 9 months ago.
So now, here you were, finally with your girlfriend. Gamora had insisted that the Guardians make a stop on earth, as she had someone to introduce them to. Although, she almost didn’t want to. It wasn’t that she didn’t want her family to meet you, not at all. It was more selfish than that. She had finally gotten you in her arms, and now she would have to share you? Not her cup of tea.
But she was willing to do it for you, since you had requested it.
The door of the ship opened to reveal the cast of characters you had heard so much about.
The only human of the crew, Peter, you assumed, approached you with furrowed brows.
“Gamora, who’s this? You brought us all the way back to Earth to meet a friend?”
A raccoon then pushed Peter to the side. Rocket.
“Calm down, Star Munch, let the woman talk.”
A few more beings gathered around you, and you identified them as Groot, Drax, and Mantis.
Gamora glared at the two, more specifically at Peter, before speaking.
“She’s not a friend. She’s my girlfriend. Everyone, meet Y/N, she’s an Avenger here on earth.”
Everyone’s eyes widened.
“Is there something wrong?” You said anxiously.
“I am Groot.”
Rocket nodded. “Yeah, Groot says he never thought miss scary green lady over here would fall in love, and I can’t help but agree.”
“Or if she did, we all thought it would be with me,” Peter said, half-cocky, half-jealous.
The ship went silent. Gamora wrapped an arm around your waist defensively.
Just as Gamora was about to yell at Peter, a loud belly laugh from none other than Drax broke the silence.
“Speak for yourself, Quill!” he said. “I personally think this earthling is much more her style.”
You smiled at him, feeling your anxiety slowly trickle away.
Mantis then approached. “May I touch you?”
“Uh...sure?”
She placed a hand on your head, closing her eyes. She then pulled away, smiling. “She feels romantic love.”
You blushed, and Gamora smiled at you, pulling you into her side. “I feel it too,” she whispered for your ears only. Your smile widened.
The group of you sat around and chatted for a few hours before Gamora pulled you aside.
“Okay, now you’ve met them, sharing time is up. Now can I have you all to myself?” Gamora said impatiently.
You laughed at her antics before pulling her into a soft kiss. “Of course, love. Let’s go.”
As the two of you walked off towards your room in the Avengers Compound, hand in hand, you couldn’t help but be grateful that Gamora’s family (save for Peter) had accepted you with open arms, paws, and branches.
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burn me to the ground
(1)gentle lover (2)burn me to the ground
Movie/Game/Show: Thor: Ragnarok
Dynamic: Loki Laufeyson/Reader
Warnings: ragnarok spoilers?, passing description of you as toned/muscular cuz loki with gf who could crush him >>>, i give more time gap to thor's arrival cuz :), fem pronouns
Summary: He’s never been one for such sentiment, maybe that’s why her influence is so terrifying to him.
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“You wanted me to meet someone?”
“Right! Right, right, right,” the Grandmaster waves his hand in a gesture for Topaz to guide his chair through the room, “He was all mumble-y and murmur-ey and I heard your name, so I was thinking maybe you could tell me what this guy’s all about!”
Upon seeing the man in reference, your eyes widen and you nearly stumble back.
The man, however, immediately tilts his head and practically hisses out, “You.”
Well, no point in pretending to not know him now when he reacts like that. Sighing and tossing up your hands as if to show relief, you gush out an awfully whiny, “Aw, prince! Thank goodness you’re okay! I was so worried when we got separated!”
“So, how do you two know each other?” the Grandmaster’s smile is broad, if not slightly threatening, as he waggles a finger between the two people in front of him.
“I’m a sort of guard to your royal asshat.”
Loki doesn’t get the chance to speak up as the Grandmaster claps in response to you, “Well, I’m sure he’ll be happy to know your track record here doesn’t show any signs of slacking!”
“Certainly, yes,” Loki nods curtly, not pleased at the prospect of a Midgardian - this Midgardian - having to watch over him again, “Reassuring to have her here.”
“I would be, look at her- " reaching over, the Grandmaster squeezes at your bicep, “So strong, she’s a great contender!”
“Contender…?” Loki murmurs to the woman, a brow quirked.
Smacking the prince’s arm, you shake your head before turning back to the Grandmaster, “Loki wouldn’t be a very good contender, he’s pretty frail and weak. Lame, too.”
“Aw,” wagging a finger as one would to a pestering child, the Grandmaster’s broad grin falls into a tight-lipped smile before he speaks, “Loyal guard trying to protect her prince, how sweet.”
“What can I say?” Loki notices the way you seem more on edge now, breath shakier, but you manage to mask it as light laughter, “Duties never rest.”
Nodding, the elderly man turns to Topaz, whispering in her ear before dismissing you both back to your quarters.
It’s as the door to the room shuts that Loki is greeted with the first hint of aggression he’s ever seen from you - not even in his time on Earth had he seen malice slip from you like he does now. The door slams and you wring your hands in your hair, nearly shouting as you turn to the God,
“You moron, why’d you have to go and say that? As if you know me? You could’ve gotten us killed.”
“But I do know you,” Loki held his hands up, pausing your rampant pacing, “Was I not supposed to try and find solace in the fact that I was on a new, strange planet with the one person I recognize?”
“You’re such an ass,” it’s a deflated insult, sighed out while you stomp over to the one bed in the room and slump down on it, “Just hope that nutjob believed me about you being weak.”
“Which, I believe we should have a talk about, by the way,” Loki’s brows furrow, “Why do that? I don’t need any protection nor defense, especially by the likes of you.”
“Unless you want to go as a gladiator and potentially be ripped in half by people twice your size, I would just take the label of weakling socialite and run with it. Hope you get on the Grandmaster’s good side like I have and eventually he maybe stops looking at you like a starving man to steak.”
“Haven’t quite gotten to that last bit, I imagine.”
“No, unfortunately not. It’s a little terrifying.”
It’s quiet as you rub at your aching temples and think over the situation. Loki turns and begins assessing the room - a room he hopes to not be stuck in.
“Are we to share this?”
“Probably,” yet another exhausted sigh slips from your lips, “I wouldn’t bother bringing it up to the old man, you might get vaporized.”
There’s a beat of silence before Loki chuckles, it’s forced and tight.
“Oh,” nodding, you lean back until you’re fully reclined on the bed, “you think I’m joking.”
The God’s eyes widen at that, turning to face you in alarm, “Are you not?”
Suddenly sitting up to untie your boots, you mutter, “I’m trying a slow coup. I was gonna do it on my own, but now you’re here so that’s minorly reassuring.”
“Coup?”
“Accident comes to the Grandmaster, we move up. I say we, but if you try and overthrow me for the throne, I will have to duel you. Duel at best, but at worst…”
Another pregnant silence flows through the room, Loki tilting his head, “You do realize how alarming that is when you don’t finish that sentence, right?”
“Good.”
It was an unlucky arrangement. Trapped on a trash planet, literally, with a Midgardian worm - whom he either has to share a bed with or rest on a loveseat for the nights. None of which is even mentioning the Grandmaster.
The Grandmaster.
On the surface he’s light. Bubbly. Fun. And then someone drops a glass too close to his favorite new shoes and suddenly they’ve been pardoned from the land of the living and the stench of wretched toast permeates through the room.
It’s that memory that has Loki tuning out of the story of the man across from him. His hands fall to his thighs and begin rubbing away the sweat of nervousness that gathers there. The movements don’t go unseen, and the woman who assigned herself as his personal guard reaches down and takes his hand. Uncaring if the rest of the party sees as they cling to one another.
You aren’t Loki’s first choice of partnership but maybe that’s where he’d be wrong - because your grip is strong and it won’t let go unless it’s commanded. It’s comforting and reassuring and Loki can’t remember the last time someone held him like that as he breaks down. It isn’t just the hand holding at parties, it’s in the late nights when neither of you can sleep and your heads are too full of countless worries of each’s own home. It’s the way you hold him and don’t say a word of it the next day. Barely acknowledging it unless he brings it up first, not wanting to make him uncomfortable or pressured.
It’s kindness and genuinity and he thinks he wants to have you around all the time. After the Grandmaster. After Hela. Whenever and wherever that dust happens to settle, he knows he wants this comfort all the time.
Storytime comes around to Loki. His fingers curl tighter around your hand as he speaks, occasionally taking a break to sip at his neon drink when there’s a hearty whisper-shout of both your names,
“Over here!”
God of Thunder, you notice. Thor of Asgard. You two excuse yourselves from the couch of socialites to cross the room to Thor.
“Thor? You’re alive?” you begin, eyes wide.
“Of course, I’m alive, what’re you two doing? Why aren’t you stuck in a chair? Where’s your chairs?”
“We didn’t get one,” Loki shakes his head.
“Get me out,” Thor urges, still thoroughly confused over the presence of his brother and old friend.
“We can’t,” you whisper.
Nodding, Loki continues, “We’ve gotten in favor with the Grandmaster. In his higher courts.”
“Like friends but scary,” you pitch in, “We’ve been here a few weeks. Maybe a month.”
“A month?" Thor repeats in utter disbelief, "I just got here.”
“What’re you guys whispering about?” the Grandmaster himself juts into the conversation with a giggle, “Time works different around these parts. On any other world I’d be like millions of years old, but on Sakaar…” he stops and looks between the trio with a teasing grin before shaking his head, “In any case, you two know this… what’d you call yourself - Lord of Thunder…?”
“God of Thunder,” Thor corrects with a forced chuckle.
“I’ve never met this man in my life,” Loki immediately denies.
“He’s my brother.”
Rolling your eyes at the brothers, you’re quick to gesture to Loki, “Adopted.”
The Grandmaster nods, “He any kind of a fighter?”
“You take this thing out of my neck and I’ll show you.”
That’s how they find out that - at the very least, Thor’s alive. Not well, but certainly alive.
The night after that party is mostly quiet in the room. Presently, both people are getting ready for bed but inside their minds is such fueled turmoil that neither truly believes they’re getting rest that night. Upon finishing his state of dress, Loki makes his way out to the balcony.
Air on Sakaar isn’t particularly fresh or clean, nor are the stars incredibly visible with all the city lights, but it felt better out there than being trapped in a room. He’s soon joined by another body at the railing, hands barely brushing together on the roughened metal.
It’s Loki that makes the first move, slowly sliding his hand across the rail until his entwined with yours. Your fingers weave together and Loki can’t help but balance his gaze between your conjoined hands and your eyes. He remembers a time where he used to look into those eyes and see an enemy - now, he can’t imagine a time where he would’ve ever wanted to hurt someone such as you. Can't believe there was a time where he wanted to hurt you. Your care is expressed in tender touches and loyalty. In quiet moments of trust and earnest adoration. In honesty. It's that silent care that speaks the loudest.
It’s your voice that breaks him from his own thoughts, “When this whole thing is over and Sakaar is ruined and Thor will have the throne, where will you go?”
Loki falls silent at that question, he brushes a thumb over your knuckles, pursing his lips and tilting his head as he thinks over what response would fit best. Then he comes to the realization that it wouldn’t matter where he lies as long as he has comfort that lies with him. Comfort that sleeps inside the woman beside him is what he wants.
And so, he mumbles out, “Where will you want me?”
There’s a laugh pulled from you as your head shakes, “You wouldn’t want to go to Earth. Unless you’d like the Avengers up your ass.”
There’s a shared laugh as Loki relents, speaking before laying a kiss to your knuckles, “I wouldn’t be fond of that… but for you, my dear, I’d tear the universe apart.”
“That sounds like exactly why they wouldn’t want you. Sorry to say they’re not fond of universe-tearing.”
A sarcastic huff falls from the prince, “I’m charming and romantic and this is how I’m repaid?”
“However, I can’t say that’s not excellent bargaining to keep you on a leash,” you grin.
“Like a dog?”
“Well, now,” looking away, your lip is tucked between your teeth to muffle possible laughter.
Loki doesn’t follow your example, instead he studies the planes of your face. The curve of your cheek and the way your eyes are lit up by the stars and lights that flow in this city. You’re beautiful. That, he knows. And despite being trapped on Sakaar, he also knows he’s grateful to have someone like you. To have you.
Strong, both in emotional resolve and psychical capability. It’s nice to have someone who can stay level-header and offer support. It makes him want to care and provide for you as well, and that’s what scares him.
You make him want to return sentiment when all he’s cared for before was letting things burn.
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Thanks for the kind comment on my art of Suli, Kalibak, and my OC!
I kinda want to do more character designs in the same vein in the future. I might do Orion, Barda and Scott next, although for Scott I'd have to figure out how New Genesis folks would look in that style, and right now I don't really have a lot of ideas. Maybe they're more glowy / less crusty looking / have shiny scales.
I like the more alien looking design Snyder cut went with for Steppenwolf and Desaad (there's also concept art of Darkseid with the same traits - the extra fingers and the legs and chin spikes, you can find it on artstation) but I definitely miss the more colorful original Kirby designs.
Also like, I hope someone at some point discovers Suli and does something with her as a character, I just think she's really neat and deserves more development beyond "dead gf for sad backstory". Like, would Darkseid still become what he did if she stayed alive? Would she leave him if it were the case? How'd Kalibak fare in such a scenario?
Hello! I'm sorry I didn't reply asap bc this gave me a lot of Thoughts & Ideas racing in my head all day. I haven't read all of the new gods comics, basically take all of this with a grain of salt.
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Yes yes yes please do designs for Scott, Barda and Orion. Visually, it would be good to have Scott and Orion looking out of place since neither of them are on their home planet.
Personally I hc New Genesis gods as being vain and all about appearances. They'd likely have a glow/shimmer to them, pleasing to the senses etc. I say this based on how Orion acts about his "true face", which could easily be seen as a dead give away of where he came from/his heritage.
It would be so interesting if Suli were still alive, there's so many possibilities! Like Darkseid obviously loved her and his mom Heggra didn't like that bc she felt like Suli made him soft. I can still see her forcing Darkseid to have a kid with Tiggra, who Darkseid never loved and vice versa. I can even see her disowning Kalibak altogether and rejecting him as Darkseid's heir bc of Suli.
NOW, imagine if Queen Heggra still tried to poison Suli and she lived? Imagine Suli turning the tables on Heggra and having her killed instead, leading Darkseid to rule and her son to take his rightful place as Darkseid's heir. I want Suli to still be kind, but also sharp and capable of defending herself. She's a scientist and sorceress, I refuse to believe she would have died by poison.
Does no harm and takes no shit, shouldn't be underestimated bc of her "soft" nature etc. Suli can be frighteningly cold and calculative towards those who wrong her and those she love. Hmm…. I imagine Suli and Tiggra would know of each other bc of Heggra. They wouldn't be friends, buuuuuuuuuuuuuut i can see Suli ensuring Tiggra is healthy since she's carrying Darkseid's son (moreso bc Suli loves Darkseid than anything)
Once Darkseid takes over, Suli would likely prefer staying out of the spotlight. I like to believe that she (like other scientists/ sorcerers and sorceresses) is highly respected for her work in Apokolips. While she isn't a ferocious warrior like Tiggra, Suli uses her mind for the improvement of Apokolips. Brains over Brawn.
The Pact could still happen, Darkseid using Orion instead of Kalibak. Suli would probably hear of this after the fact and try to comfort Tiggra, who would likely drive her away in anger. I imagine Kalibak and Darkseid's relationship would be better if Suli were alive. I mean, I also headcanon that Kalibak had gotten his kindness (however little and fleeting) from Suli. The first thing that came to mind was how Kalibak let that little girl live, something that would clearly be frowned upon.
Suli.... might leave Darkseid in the end or as he delves deeper and deeper in his pursuit for the Anti-Life equation. But I could also see her standing at his side to the end. Either way, I wouldn't want Suli to die.
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Hypothetically Rewriting Assault’s Story + Some General Assault Opinions
There’s a game my husband and I like to play when we watch a movie, play a game, or read a book that has a story that we don’t really enjoy or we enjoy certain parts of but not others. We look at things we’d keep and things we’d change and we build a story from there-- sort of like an AU but we don’t really go into the writing part, we just stick to theorizing and mapping a general story.
I decided to play that game with Star Fox. Not because I think Star Fox has a bad story but because sometimes I think the stories could have been handled better. Note: for the rewrite game, I only really look at story, even for video games, I don’t really look at gameplay mechanics, but I do understand those have a lot to do with story potential so I do take it in as a factor... I just don’t bother to “rewrite” the mechanics, if that makes any sense at all. Some of my list today will include boss encounters but I wouldn’t necessarily say those are mechanic-related... more like “event-related”.
I’ve mused a bit in the past about rewriting Adventures and Command and I do have plans to do a mock up of an Adventures remake eventually. However, today I was thinking about how I would go about handling an Assault re-write in particular. Much like Command and Adventures, I don’t have any beef with the core story but I do think there’s a few things that could’ve been better about Assault’s storyline-- like they had good ideas rolling but they didn’t quite refine them.
Under the cut because SUPER long.
My basic feelings on Assault are pretty positive. I think the game is generally just fun and I like that it feels like the natural progression from SF64. I liked getting to see planets we haven’t seen since the N64 era in better graphics and I liked seeing Star Wolf return. I also just thought the aparoids were neat enemies.
Generally speaking, though, when it comes to Assault, I think it suffers from the thing it tries to push the most-- the story. I think a lot of people get caught up in thinking the story is better than it is because it’s the first game since SF64 that really follows the same Star Fox vibe without retelling the Lylat Wars. Don’t get me wrong, the overall plot is great but the execution and pacing are... wonky. Certain characterizations also take a hit in some regards but no one really talks about that when Command exists. That’s something we’ll talk about later on with this post.
That being said, Assault really does have a lot good going for it. An absolute banger of a soundtrack, some great dialogue, a neat story synopsis, the introduction of cool characters like Panther and Beltino (who existed but was always off-screen), and just good levels.
So, here’s what I would add, I suppose, if I were to somehow have the ability to rewrite Assault. Originally I had this in paragraph form, but I’ve made it into more of a list under topic segments with main points bolded for your viewing pleasure. Some of these points might be considered nitpicky and while I do understand that yes, this is a game about space animals, I do hold the developers in high enough regard to make a game with a continuity that makes sense.
The Story Changes
- Reduce Pigma’s storyline in Assault. This is the biggest one for me because a bulk of the plotline feels like a giant chase to just get at Pigma and it feels like it derails from the actual plot with the aparoids. We only go to Sargasso because of Pigma. We only go to Fichina and then back to Meteo again, because of Pigma. That’s 3 levels in a 10 level game devoted to just tracking down Pigma and chasing him. While it makes the build up to fighting Pigma kind of nice, I personally feel like the plot could be reduced to 2 levels. If Assault overall was a longer game, I could see them making it 3 levels. Overall, though, in its current state, I feel like the side plot overstays its welcome and the aparoids promptly get shoved to the side in favor of “Oh no, we gotta get to Pigma!” And I get the main motive here is to show how the aparoids affect people and because of the build up, it does a good job at showing how utterly terrifying the aparoids are. But it’s still too long given the length of Assault’s story. The only alternative to this is make Assault longer, which... honestly, it should be.
- Revise the scene with Tricky. I’m obviously not well-versed in dinosaur biology but I’m pretty sure dinos didn’t grow that fast from what studying I HAVE done. And why is he suddenly king now? Did his parents die? He seems not affected by this at all? Like it’s a funny scene with him, Fox, and Krystal, but it’s odd if you really look at it. Give us, as players, more context because I’m still not even sure what happened to make Tricky suddenly the leader and... big. As a note, you’re gonna hear me gripe a lot about the Sauria level in this post.
- The Star Wolf + Peppy sacrifice is a low effort way to raise tension/stakes and then cop out. Oldest trick in the book, imo, is to act like you’re going to kill off important characters only for them to be alive miraculously. And let’s face it, as an audience we all know they aren’t going to kill those characters because it’s Nintendo and those characters are too beloved. I would’ve forgiven them for only doing this with Peppy or Star Wolf, but when you tack them both together and throw in the fact they make it seem like you’re going to have to kill General Pepper too... yeah, it’s just a bit much of the same trope over and over again. I wanted to put a note in here about how I’m fine with the Great Fox being “sacrificed” but overall, it needed to return to the series because of it’s icon status, but I think that’s more of a gripe at Command instead of Assault.
- Keep Pigma alive. This will conflict with a point I have later on about the game consistently having characters cheat death for easy drama points but with Pigma, I would’ve kept him fully alive... but maybe with some physical damage from the aparoids. I understand he’s semi-alive in Command and tbh I don’t know where I stand on that. Why keep Pigma alive, you might ask? I feel like his character has a lot more potential than being “just the greedy guy”. Like he’s got good potential future villain material for future games and... if I’m honest? I just don’t see Nintendo wanting to keep Pigma dead so why even bother killing him off? They couldn’t even commit to him being dead in Command anyways so it seems very moot.
- Bring Bill and Katt back. Assault is acts a bit like a big reunion of all of our SF64 favorites but our two favorite side characters are suspiciously missing. Wouldn’t Bill be out on the front lines fighting against Andrew in the beginning? Or maybe back in Katina? And wouldn’t Katt inevitably show up in the midst of the invasion, maybe to pointedly check in on Falco?
- Bring Andrew back for the final fight. I think Andrew being defeated early into the game is fine overall but I think bringing him back in for a reunion final fight against the aparoids would serve to really solidify that it’s really everyone vs the invading aparoid force. It would show that not only is Star Wolf willing to put aside their differences but so is basically everyone in the Lylat System in the name of survival. Imagine the Venomians and Cornerians working together against an aparoid fleet, giving Star Fox and Star Wolf time to attack the queen? I just think it’d be neat and it’d open up the potential for some fun banter mid-mission. I do understand that quite a few people consider Andrew canonically dead after Assault but personally, I feel that his defeat left his fate questionable (I’m a staunch believer that unless there’s a body, they’re probably alive, especially for Nintendo games because, again, they never like to kill people off) so him returning in Command never really bothered me.
- In general, reconsider some of the character portrayals. Unfortunately, when a series has a different studio for each game, character portrayals will inevitably have inconsistencies. While I give Namco a lot of credit for putting in oodles and oodles of detail into the game (particularly the levels), I think they failed in their portrayal of Fox, at the least, and Wolf is a considerable offender as well. While it’s obvious that Fox in Adventures was effectively modeled off of Sabre even in terms of personality, Rareware was at least able to justify Fox’s newfound jaded attitude with the passing of many years and a distinct lack of steady income, resulting in the team being in disarray. Assault’s Fox is a stark contrast to his cynical interpretation with seemingly no explanation other than maybe “Oh, I have more money and a gf, maybe I should behave myself”. As if the sudden change in personality wasn’t random, Fox also just seems very blah, like a blank slate stereotypical shooter game protagonist dude with little to no emotion. Wolf is less obvious but gets slated into a mentor-like role midway through the game and ends up in a respectful rivalry with Fox... which there’s nothing inherently wrong with that except for it happening abruptly (and, I mean, Peppy is right there). But I take less issue with this and more of an issue with the fact that there’s an entire level establishing that Wolf now runs a crime den with effectively what seems to be an army and no one bats an eye at this. He doesn’t even call on them to help with the aparoids. Did they all die when the aparoids attacked Meteo? Are they safe somewhere else? Where do they go? How was Sargasso able to operate without the CDF being on their doorstep with warrants for arrests?
- Don’t kill all the dinosaurs. A bit of a dramatic statement but the ending screen that showed all the damage to Sauria really bothered me. While I understand that the dinosaurs had less of a chance against the aparoids than a more technology-focused society like Corneria, I was a bit disappointed that the decision was made to just state that a lot of tribes had been wiped out. I know this could easily be retconned in a future game and I feel like it should be. “But why, Amalia? Why are you disappointed by that?” 1) It’s a little too grimdark for my tastes. 2) The fact it all happened off-screen felt very hand-wavy. And 3) It brings into question the entire point of Adventures. Why did we bother to save this planet if it was going to be reduced to rubble and ash 1 year later? Where were the Krazoa in all of this? Why did they not make an appearance at all to try to stop the invasion with their alleged powers? It just raises too many weird questions and I feel like Namco didn’t think it through too much. Which I mean, sure. Family, kiddo game. I’m not asking for bigbrain plot and lore but I’m squinting at this bit because it does feel very contrary to the lore from the previous game.
- Make the aparoids more relevant. As nice as it is to have a random bad guy from another galaxy, I feel like there was more that could be done with the aparoids in terms of their origins. Tiny things, mind you, not huge revelations. Off the top of my head, they could have been tied into Krystal’s backstory to help alleviate some of the complaints that she was too random to be added to the series’ main cast. Alternatively, they could have been a product of Andross or even a weapon prototype from Corneria that fled the lab (I actually thought the game was leaning in that direction for a bit then just Nothing Happened). I get that the vagueness of their origins leaves room for people to speculate and speculation is nice but... when you leave too many things unknown, it starts to feel less like giving fans room to interpret and more like just doing random things for the sake of it. I think a lore tidbit here or there would work wonders for the aparoids instead of leaving them as just borg/zerg clones.
Level-Based Changes
- Add either Aparoid RedEye or Aparoid General Scales as a boss to Sauria. Given that this level mysteriously lacks a boss, which is just weird compared to the other levels, I think that they had the opportunity to add something cool to go along with the cinematic feel they were going for with Assault. Assault’s cutscenes do play in a movie-like fashion and it’s clear they’re trying to make the game as epic as possible. It’s a shame they had so much fodder for a great boss here but they failed to go through with it. Alternatively: Add a Krazoa-Aparoid fusion. Why? Because Star Fox is about cool epic sci-fi and that would be cool epic sci-fi incarnate.
- Add a boss to the Aparoid Homeworld Level, aka the penultimate level. Another one I felt was personally weird that there was no “final defense system” to challenge the team. Would be cool to do an aerial battle over the aparoid planet with some giant flying aparoid.
- Be kinder to Sauria. The level had some good homages but overall was incredibly small and incredibly short. It felt like a bone tossed to Adventures fans but was not entirely true to the setting built by Rareware. I’m... not even sure where the Sauria level is supposed to take place? I presume it’s Walled City but it doesn’t really have the same color scheme or aesthetic? Also where is my revised Adventures music? Why do all the other levels get it but Sauria doesn’t?
- Put some of those funky items from the multiplayer into the main campaign. I don’t know why some of these things, items especially, were omitted unless it was purely due to time constraints. I remember having missile launchers and jetpacks in the multiplayer and was a bit sad that they were not in the main campaign. Retuning the levels and adding those in would be a nice breath of fresh air for the more tedious on-foot missions.
- More levels. Self-explanatory. Still sad we didn’t get the Zoness or Titania levels in the single-player mode.
I think all of the above changes would improve the game, though I recognize all of this is being said 16 years later after lots of time to contemplate Assault’s weaker points. I’m not entirely certain how long Star Fox Assault took to develop but given that there’s obviously quite a bit scrapped from the game (an entire arcade mode was scrapped as well), I’m going to assume that the studio felt pressured to shove the game out the door and into the hands of customers. It’s a shame, really, because I think a little bit longer in the oven would have done a lot of good. Still, the product we got was good in its own right and a game that many people look back on fondly. I haven’t gotten to replay it in years but I hope to quite soon.
You might wonder why I bothered typing this all out and I guess my point was this-- Assault was great but it wasn’t perfect, and while a lot of other games fall under a crushing amount of scrutiny, Assault seems to dodge it. And don’t get me wrong-- I adore Assault. But given that not many takes exist out there about rewriting it, I decided to give it a shot. For variety’s sake.
I do want to a mock up of a revised Assault story, which I think I will get to work on after completing this while all my ideas are still fresh in mind. So stay tuned for that sometime in the near future. I will also be doing my Adventures mock up at some point but probably not for a little bit as I do wanna focus some of my free time on actual fic-writing.
Anyways, if you stuck around this long, thank you for reading! Have any changes you’d like to see to Assault if you could time machine your way back to the early 2000s? Feel free to post in the comments, I’d love to read your ideas!
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