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#broken whumpee
jordanstrophe · 3 months
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Their defiant whumpee finally breaks down and cries, but instead of mocking them, whumper wipes their tears and chirps "Aww you poor thing, finally broke did we?"
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abhainnwhump · 6 months
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Putting your characters in a kidnapping scenario is a great way to practice characterization because there are just so many ways you can take being kidnapped. Are they terrified and crying? Or calm and determined? Screaming and yelling curses or making jokes? How about begging for mercy? Immediately getting violent?
And when/if they break, how does their behavior change? You can have a character start calm and collected and turn paranoid after weeks or months in captivity. Iconically, take your defiant and cocky character and make them scared and meek. Take the sweet innocent character and turn them into a monster. How would your OC develop if they were in a problem like this?
My closing statement is, test your characters. Like a geode, you need to break it to see the gems inside.
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jump-in-the-whump · 3 months
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Whumpee feels Caretaker stroking their face, comforting them. It's no big deal, Caretaker says. I'll fix it, Caretaker repeats. I didn't even like that vase, Caretaker chuckles.
Whumpee doesn't know what to say, they can't form any sentence. They know Caretaker should be angry at them, but they are so gentle and Whumpee can't stand it.
Whumpee wants to push Caretaker away and yell at them to punish them. Whumpee wants Caretaker to kick them and punch them and scream at them.
Because Whumpee deserves just that.
Or, better to say, because Whumper taught Whumpee they deserve that. And Whumpee believes Whumper unconditionally.
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cpt-winters · 9 months
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Heyo, got anymore team leader whump up your sleeve? I’m a sucker for selfless whumpees
←~(o `▽´ )oΨ
Heh, do I. Hope you enjoy (:
Team Captivity Whump - Leader Whumpee Part 2 (part 1)
Right Hand's eyes snapped up as the door to the dingy cell swung open. The string of profanities they'd prepared to hurl at their captor caught in their throat the second Whumper stepped in.
Earning a gasp from Medic, Whumper dragged Leader's battered, bloodied and near limp form in tow. His boots scuffed against the cement ground in feeble protest.
"You fucking bastard!" Right Hand yelled, muscles straining against their restraints.
"Thank you-" Whumper carelessly tossed Leader forward, allowing him to crumple to the floor in a heap. "-for your cooperation."
Ignoring the animalistic growl rumbling from one of the teammates, Whumper shoved their boot into Leader's ribs for good measure. Barely receiving a reaction, they took their leave without even chaining him back up.
"Sh-shit." Right Hand's eyes soaked in the deep gashes and burns riddling Leader's flesh. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry. It was meant to be me." At that moment, they were glad Youngest wasn't here to see this. At least they had evaded capture.
Face still buried in the floor, Leader gave a weak groan of a refusal. "'t's m...my job."
"What did..Whumper want?" Medic cut in, chains keeping them from offering Leader any support as he began peeling himself off the floor.
"Are you okay?" they tried again as he pulled himself toward the wall, sagging against it.
Leader's gaze dropped down to the heavy scarlet spray dappling his torso, and Medic cursed themselves for the foolish question.
"It's not-" His breath hitched as he smeared the red spatter on his face with the back of his hand. "Not all mine."
"Boss-" Right Hand started, at a loss for words for his leader's unrecognizable state. "What'd they do to you?"
Leader's clouded eyes lost their focus as a tremor travelled through his lower lip.
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whump-queen · 11 months
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whumper pretending to be mad just to see whumpee squirming and groveling and apologizing within a second because they don’t know what they did wrong but fuck they’re so so sorry and they’ll do anything to make it better—
“sir please—please let me make it up to you—I promise I’ll be better I swear—just please—”
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hurtmyfavsthanks · 5 months
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Content warning: pet whump mention
I’m thinking about a captive, broken whumpee. One who has entirely given up on escape, accepting their new life and every humiliation that comes with it. One that doesn’t even try to pretend they’re not someone’s pet.
And I want them to be shown off to Caretaker. Maybe Caretaker’s supposed to be undercover, maybe they’ve bought Whumpee to save them. Whatever the case, I want Caretaker to see Whumpee at their lowest point, submissively at the feet of their master.
For the first time in months, maybe years, shame burns in Whumpee’s throat. They can see the dashed hope in Caretaker’s eyes, see the pity. Whumpee is suddenly painfully aware of their position at Whumper’s feet, of the thin, lacey collar around their neck that’s there for show more than anything else.
They can’t tear their eyes from Caretaker’s shocked, horrified face. Thoughts of escape are distant in their mind, overwhelmed by the sickening shame Whumpee feels. They want nothing more than to hide their weakness, to put on a show of defiance, to hide the reality that they’d shattered under the pressure and submitted. The gentle tightness around their throat stops them.
Whumpee can only bow their head and sob.
“Oh my,” Whumper’s voice is thick with humor, cutting through their false disapproving tone. “Now look at what you’ve done. You’ve upset them.”
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whumpshaped · 7 months
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tw captivity, broken whumpee, dehumanisation
"I give up," Whumpee said softly. "There's nothing I can do at this point. I, I tried fighting back, I tried outwitting you, I tried pretending... you're... one step ahead of me. Every single time. I give up."
Whumper tilted their head to the side, expression neutral. They didn't seem pleased with this development, and it was starting to make Whumpee nervous.
"What use do I have for you, then?"
Whumpee shivered. "What– what use? I thought– I thought you wanted me to break for you, wasn't that–"
"Who wants a broken toy that won't squeak and bounce?" Whumper crouched down in front of them and grabbed them by the hair. For once in their life, they looked dead serious. "You can give up, of course. But before you do, I'll give you a little hint: I don't keep boring, broken things around."
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astrowhump · 1 year
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Guilty
Whumper holds whumpee in a chokehold, loosely, just to keep his head still. The purpose isn’t to keep him from breathing, but whumpee still doesn’t find it in himself to breath. The access to air is right there, but his lungs seem to have forgotten how to open up. He just stays there in the arms gripping his neck and sobs silently. His tears blend in with the blood on his face as he cries.
“Watch, pet. This is the result of your actions.” Whumper whispers into his ear while he watches with wide-eyed terror as his lover’s head is repeatedly bashed into the edge of a metal table. Their body looks life-less, falling limply, hanging from the hand holding their hair; the hand brutally slamming their head to the surface over and over and over again.
“Remember this the next time you try to defy me; this is the consequence of your disobedience.”
Whumpee begs and pleads in whumper’s grip and miserably fails at trying to break free.
“P- please- you don’t have to hurt him please he- he has done nothing wrong”
Whumpee should’ve listened, he should’ve obeyed and played nice, he should’ve fallen to his knees and weeped at whumper’s feet while he still could.
Instead he decided to act bold. He let his ego and fury keep him from realizing how helpless he really is now. He consciously made the decision to challenge whumper to ‘make his worst nightmares come true’. He did this. He brought this upon his lover.
“I- I- I’m sorry I’m so sorry…sir…please stop- h-hurt me instead I’m so-“
“It’s too late for that darling.” Whumper says with a smile.
“I’ll behave! I will- I’ll, I’ll do anything. Just please…pleasepleaseplease don’t hurt them.”
He screams as he sees their deformed face lifted up and smashed against that table again by one of whumper’s henchmen.
“…master!” he cries out.
“Say it. Say you’re just a toy for my enjoyment, ready to serve and please.”
“I- I’m a toy…for you and I’ll s-serve and please.” He sounds small, shameful…guilty.
“You were born to be a pet, to beg and bleed for me.”
Whumpee starts whining and opens his mouth to plead again.
“Shhhh, shush. Say it.” whumper cooes.
“I w-was born to be a pet, to beg and bleed”
Whumper motions for the man to stop and drag the bleeding unconcious body out.
He lets go of the grip around whumpee’s head and he falls to his knees with a thud, choking on his tears.
“Do you realize now, sweetheart? Who do you belong to?”
“You, master.” he says, monotone.
“That’s right. I trust you will not forget that now, will you?”
“No, master.”
Whumper crouches to pet him on the head.
“Good boy.”
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whumpbees · 8 months
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Hopeless whumpees <3 Whumpees so beaten down, so terrified, that even when presented with an obvious escape, they won't take it. Can't. Can't bring themselves to have hope again, because there's none Left
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whumpasaurus101 · 8 months
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“What do you have to say?”
Whumpee bit their lip to hold in their cries but it was no use. Its too late, they had broken. And with that thought, they burst into tears,
“‘m so-sorry sir…”
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unforgivenn · 2 months
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"You thought you were invincible, didn't you?" Hero chuckled relishing at how Villain flinched at every sound, every movement. How the eyes that not so long ago were filled with a certain fire in them now looking lifeless. How they were curled in on themselves, a desperate attempt to protect themselves.
"You thought you were sooo clever.." Hero kicked Villain one more time grinning at how the other groaned and whimpered, scared to even meet their eyes. "But you're nothing but a coward when faced with your own pain."
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abhainnwhump · 2 months
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Pet Whumpee is given a chew toy by Whumper. At first, they obviously don't want it, they're not an animal. But as Whumper conditions and tortures Whumpee, they find comfort in the toy and cling to it. It takes another few weeks, but they even carry it in their mouth like Whumper asks.
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whump-or-whatever · 1 year
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Got any random whump prompts for stoic whumpees? I can never get enough of this trope 😂
Let me give it a go!
The steely glare whumpee gives whumper
Whumper getting mad cause whumpee almost looks bored when they’re being tortured
Whumper trying for days on end to get whumpee to make even the slightest noise of pain, to no avail
Whumpee who would bite their own tongue off before giving whumper the satisfaction of hearing them scream
Alternatively, Whumpee who will scream in pain, but they somehow remain dignified and controlled through it
Caretaker asking how whumpee is and whumpee insisting they’re fine no matter what, as if they’re tired of people asking
Whumpee who absolutely refuses to talk about what happened to them because they refuse to entertain the idea that it could have negatively affected them in any way
Whumpee who sacrifices themself in place of another person, cause they know they can handle it better
Nobody knowing anything is wrong with whumpee until they drop like a stone, injured or exhausted or what have you
Whumpee downplaying every injury they have, telling people to stop fussing
Whumpee never wanting anyone’s help, sneaking away to tend to their own wounds
Caretaker being amazed that whumpee is still standing when they finally get a look at their injuries
Whumpee returning home after an ordeal and passing out before they can treat their injuries, which makes it much worse in the morning
That first little crack in the facade, when whumpee slips up and lets out a whimper or a cry or a tear, and Whumper’s face just lights up
Whumper slowly breaking down those walls bit by bit
Whumpee slowly giving in, losing themself, realizing there’s no use in holding on to who they were because it only ever gets them more pain
Whumpee becoming all too willing to scream, cry, beg, whatever, because they know whumper likes it and maybe they’ll have mercy if they’re in a good mood
When caretaker finally sees whumpee again after a long stint with whumper and is just shocked at how different they are
Caretaker having no idea how even begin relating to whumpee anymore after all they’ve been through cause whumpee was always the strong one
A truly broken whumpee, previously fearless and now terrified of their own shadow
Feel free to add others!
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whump-queen · 2 years
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A whumpee who was only captured because whumper thought they were pretty
Treating their captive like a dress up doll— dressing them up to compliment their outfit and wearing them on their arm like a pretty little accessory.
Whumper dragging them to fancy events with other whumpers and showing them off.
Whumpee is forced to wear a collar that shocks them every time they try to speak, so they’re a perfect little silent thing whenever whumper wants to show them off to their friends or take them to a party.
Maybe whumper let’s their friends fawn over their pet, and even touch the pretty thing’s face—
and whumpee has to stand still and strain to keep their expression pleasant and pliant while the strangers crowd around them, while fingers extend to grip their jaw and tilt their head this way and that, while too many unfamiliar hands run over their face and through their hair.
And the strangers compliment whumper about whumpee’s appearance— ‘how pretty those eyes are,’ and ‘how did they manage to find such a beautiful thing?’
And whumpee’s face is red with embarrassment—at being crowded and poked and prodded and talked about as if they’re not even there—at being treated like some kind of decoration. And whumper and their friends only laugh and coo over how cute they look when they’re blushing.
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Whumper never hits their face, leaves scars or permanent damage—they want to keep them looking nice after all.
Electricity is their preferred weapon, and the shock collar works wonders for conditioning.
And after weeks and months of getting brutally shocked for every little misstep, every perceived ounce of resistance, for anything other than absolute perfect compliance—
Eventually, whumpee’s will crumbles completely—and they’re plaint, docile, and desperate to obey to avoid the agonizing pain that the voltage brings.
Completely mentally broken— a perfect little decoration.
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Just dehumanize the hell out of a pretty boy and make him your accessory ✨
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whump-blog · 9 months
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Prompt 50
Whumper has owned his pet Whumpee for as long as Caretaker has known him, and while Caretaker has often considered taking Whumpee with him, he has never been able to do so.
Today, when Caretaker arrives at Whumper's house, he notices how bad Whumpee's condition is. Seeing the opportunity, Caretaker offers Whumper a juicy sum of money in exchange for Whumpee.
Whumper hesitates for a moment, but Caretaker tries to convince him by explaining how broken Whumpee is, how useless he has become over time, how his beauty has faded, and how Whumpee has become nothing but a burden to Whumper. Yet, Caretaker expresses his sincere interest in taking Whumpee off his hands and freeing him from the problem.
Whumper, without thinking much more about it, accepts. And Caretaker takes Whumpee home.
But, how will Caretaker get Whumpee to trust his good intentions after hearing all the horrible things Caretaker has said about him?
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hurtthemgently · 2 years
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Whumpee sitting alone in their cell, curled up and sobbing quietly
Or
Whumpee sitting alone in their cell, resigned, staring at the wall blankly
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