Little Rabbit and the Big Bad Leopard - By Sadam (7.5/10)
Assassin families can be a fun concept. In this case it's mixed with werebeasts. Pheromones, possessiveness and blood are in almost every chapter of this. The gimmick at the beginning is cute, but the biggest flaw in this story is the characters.
Vivi is a failure. She is a were-rabbit that cannot transform. She comes from a powerful family with alot of $. It's also an ambitious and abusive family. Vivi can quite literally do nothing. She is a very small rabbit that cannot talk.
Her family decides to abandon her in black panther territory. The Panthers are famous for being...crazy basically. The big cats kill trespassers and they like to eat interesting prey. If the Panthers don't kill Vivi the wilderness will. It's a brilliant assassination tactic. Even if Vivi escapes she cannot talk. They don't have to take responsibility for her death. Nobody has a close relationship with Vivi as well. Except her parents who want her gone.
Ahin finds her. He's a powerful Duke with pet Panthers.
Ahin becomes enamored...with the rabbit. It is funny. Really it is. He takes the rabbit to the ball. He is overly attached to the rabbit. Everybody comments on it. He thinks her smell is weird. He's attracted to her oddly. Her smell calms him down, even though he's usually a violent guy.
Ahin's relative, Lady Valence, feels the same way. Assassins are sent again to murder Vivi. The wolves lose because the Panthers are literally the strongest. They accidentally gave Vivi to loyal protectors. Lady Valence beheads the wolf that tried to steal Vivi.
Vivi has strong pheromones, but she can't control her rabbit form. Why? First, we think she's special. We find out that she has healing powers. At first it's a good thing. Vivi uses them to heal a Panther, but something is wrong.
Ahin recognizes Vivi. Her smell is enough. He realizes that the odd feelings in him are some kind of instinct. He's really attracted to her and he quickly falls in love. She is also of course beautiful and special, but Ahin is suspicious by nature. Miracles don't exist. A mere rabbit shouldn't have pheromones that strong.
The pheromones make her forms unstable. Ahin has to kiss her to keep her healthy, because they make her sick. Pheromones are kinda like magic here. Vivi's cause her alot of discomfort.
Ahin is a murderous yandere who orders dozens of assassinations for Vivi. He is a little bland though, but he is sincere in his love. There is no fiance character or other woman here. Vivi and Ahin are basically married but not really...you get it...he thinks it's obvious that she's his. However, Vivi doesn't fully trust him because he's violent.
Vivi makes some friends. She loves having a human form, but why is her body so abnormal? Well, her mother drugged her. She's not a super special healer. Her mother gave her drugs to MAKE her a super special healer. She condemned her daughter to a life of suffering. When her daughter/experiment didn't work Vivi was thrown out like trash.
This is Vivi's mother. I regard her as the ultimate villain. Another one may appear, but it doesn't matter. This is Vivi's challenge. She wants to be loved by this woman, but now she has friends and a loving husband (?). She asks the right questions. Her mother cracks. Vivi's mother wants her back, because thanks to Ahin Vivi is a functional healer. Vivi knows everything though. If she didn't meet Ahin she would still be a rabbit with painful pheromone headaches.
She doesn't forgive her mother.
She moves on.
(The plot is ok, but everyone in this is too bland.)
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Can you do headcannons and a short scenario(at the end) with Ahin Grace x little sister reader, I can just imagine him being that kind of brother who teases you so much(imagine if you had a crush💀) but is also sweet and caring at the same time and spoils you A LOT
Its okay if you dont want to do it that's understandable and dont feel pressured too I know the feeling of those seemingly unending homeworks I just finished my projects and we have exams in 2 days helpp😭😭
A/N: Sameee we had 11 pages of Spanish homework and then my teacher gave us a POP QUIZ LIKE PLEASE GIVE ME A BRRAK 😭
Ahin Grace x younger sister!reader is now reading the PLATONIC FLUFF ballroom…
SYPNOSIS: General Ahin Grace with a younger sister headcannons and imagine
CONTENT WARNINGS: Ahin Grace
Good luck having him as a brother
Hee care for you everyday, making sure you’re healthy no one’s bothering you BUT
HE TEASES YOU EVER DAY OMG
Like something you did years ago, “Hey remeber that one thing you did 3 years ago?”
He also interrogated your crushes, like background searches- seeing if they could support and love you
SPEAKING ANOUT CRUSHES
you know those people in school who say they’ll tell on you and raise their hand, and when the teacher calls on them they say they want to go to the bathroom
YEAH HES THE SAME BUT WITH YOURE CRUSH
Like, oh I’m gonna tell (crushes name) you like them, and when he goes and talks to your crush he’s like- the weathers nice isn’t it????
Like me personally I wouldn’t let it slide
During arguments he’s really petty, like when you try to talk to him- “I think I hear a fly? I’ll have to call Evelyn to send it away.”
Keeps 6 feet distance, but then Vivis like you shouldn’t be a bad example
So he hesitantly comes and works out a solution
Imagine if you’re sick- Like hed be extra nice with you, have you seen him with russel???
That doesn’t mean he wouldn’t tease you or anything 💀
“Imagine getting sick,”, “I didn’t know I had such a weak sister, I feel so bad!”, “Seeing my sister in pain- is so heart breaking…”
If he isn’t there to protect you then he definetly sends Evelyn or ash to be with you- he isn’t underestimating your strengths but it’s better safe than sorry
If you speak with rune a lot that you start having runes ‘stench’ he’ll literally turn the world upside down- and if he ever sees you guys speaking a lot to the point where you ‘have left this poor black panther in the dust’ his words youll be able to feel his eyes burning in the back of your head while you speak to rune
I feel like he would spoil you a lot, cute accessories dresses- swords if you like that, books anything you want. If he sees you staring or talking about something for a long time and you don’t have it- then don’t worry he’ll buy it in bulk just for you
Teasing aside he’s really sweet and caring- especially if he sees you crying or in distress. Like he’ll give you advice and if you don’t want to hear anything from him and just want him to be there with you then don’t worry he’ll stay with you the entire time. Gently stroking you head.
And if anyone even dared to make you cry- then you know this man will ruin them. Either wipe them from the face of that planet or just tarnish them and their family name.
But if you’re moody because it’s that time of the month- then I don’t know what to tell you. I feel like he’s know about it, but not too much about it. Better fetch Vivi or someone else for this job, but kudos to him for trying!!!!!
Insults are thrown every day
“Vivi are you sure you want Ahin? He’s kinda…”
“[name],should we go to the salon? Though I doubt they’d able to fix that..”
“I thought this party was only for good looking people? You stuck out like a sore thumb Ahin.”
“Why are you investigating my crush????”, “because I they need to know what mess they’re getting with.”
“Do you think they’ll like my dress?”, “if they can ignore youre odd behavior then they surely won’t mind how you look like.”
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Being favored by Ahin Grace publically was a great feat, everyone knew how much he cared for you. Sending you luxury goods, having guards to protect you- caring for you himself when you were sick. Only a blind fool wouldn’t know how he held his dear sister closely.
So when people heard you had a crush, an abundance of variety of theories on how Ahin was gonna react arose and somewhat dominated the newspaper, theories about his reaction almost always rose up to the gossip talks of the ladies.
Some ideas was that he was gonna accept your crush without a care in mind, another was that he was gonna wipe said crush from the face of the planet and last but not least was that he was gonna not wipe your crush from the planet but he was instead going to humiliate them and the crushes family.
What Ahin did was a mixture of the first most popular theories, accept your crush and wipe him from the face of the planet.
He accepted your crush without hesitation to the public eye, but behind the scenes was a completely different thing. He looked at how your crush was, if he found a devastating fault he would surely inform you.
But he didn’t, with a sigh of relief that escaped his throat. But he knew if your crush weeks before you even informed him, he is an observer after all.
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“Have you seen that brooch? It’s spectacular!” You murmured, and not even a second later Ahin snapped his hands it seemed that at that moment vendors of all sorts of places came and offered brooch’s for you to look at.
You stood there wide-eyes, although this has happened a few times it never failed to surprise you. He always cared for you even throwing a few teasing remarks your way. Whether you were sick or the healthiest person in the world, he always protected you not sparing even a single worry for his dear sister.
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Ahin and you are a bit strange to the naked eye, constantly belittling each other but when someone else belittles either of you. Things start to go downhill for however insulted you or Ahin.
You were sitting down as one of your maids did your hair, Ahin and you bickering like always. “Get out, I have to get my hair done!” You held a brooch by your drawer with a death grip, as Ahin kept doing Ahin things. “That poor maid will have a lot to do if you want that hair to be somewhat decent.” You swore you could feel a vein pop out of your head.
You and Ahin heard the new maid snicker, “I agree, I thought the young mistress was supposed to be pretty as the rumors say.” Long story short, the maid disappeared. :D
I’m not sure how to feel about the imagine or the headcannons so if you want me to change something please tell me 😭
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