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smaragaide · 1 year
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Hi.
I just read House of Green and Black and holy shit, this is so good. It took me a couple days to bust through it but damn. I'm in love! It's everything that I love in a story. Dark gothic vibes, dark and complicated romance, the hero is not your typical beefy gorgeous male character. I think this is why I like Petyr Baelish so much cuz he can be so much more and you've taken that to the moon and back. I love how you write him and keep him complicated.
Sansa. My poor baby. She's been through hell and it isn't over. The kids.
I'm thinking of all these dreams she's having and wonder how they play out. It seems like she's seeing the future or maybe I'm reading it all wrong. I like how you keep to specific pov's so you see everything play out in their pov even though you know other shit is going on. Really great way to build suspense. Just because Sansa doesn't know, then you see what Petyr is up to and vice versa. It's a really cool switch where he's in control early on and now he's the one wondering wtf happened.
Bruh, I really hope you finish this. I think I might have an idea of where it's going. There's a lot of real world vs fantasy and what is real or if the characters know what's real or if maybe they're going crazy and you don't know which one is losing it?
Of if the fairies, kinda like the fates are in control or know this is what has to happen. I really want a happy ending but I honestly don't care at this point. If I have to cry my eyes out, I will do so and still be happy.
This should be published. It's that effing good. You are an amazing writer and I'm a firm believer that there are better stories and writers doing fan fiction that shit I've paid money for in the bookstore.
I don't even care it's Game of Thrones based. This plot is excellent all by itself. It's rare that I feel like I'm completely immersed in a character and story where I can't stop reading.
I really hope you consider finishing this story. It's honestly one of the best pieces of gothic fantasy fiction I've read in years. This would make a killer movie.
Oh wow. I don't know what to say but a humble thank you for that.
Ironically, I'm actually debating whether I should finish this story as it is (fanfiction) or completely re-write for an original novel. I have the most awesome person on the planet willing to help me and I better make a decision soon.
You're on the right track but I won't say on which points you've made. It would spoil the entire ending.
I spent a lot of time with foreshadowing, leaving red herrings (which come into play in ways the reader might not expect). There is quite a bit on my playing with Irish folklore but keeping it vague enough to work with my plot.
Sansa has questioned her sanity already and gone through the ringer and now in a way, it's Petyr's turn. You're right. He is usually in control and to have that taken away from him, rather eats him alive.
There is emphasis on fate and choices as a theme to the very end.
There are actually a LOT of hints along the way that will make complete sense at the end when the reader and two character finally figure things out. I hope I've laid enough down that when a big reveal comes it shocks everyone. There is quite a twist near the end that I don't think anyone knows, except my sweet, loving beta editor.
She has been cursed with all my crazy ass notes and outlining. But it's different than actually READING it play out.
It's weird because when I write, I see a movie play out. I want to see, feel, touch, smell everything. I like using the 3rd Person Limited POV. The character can be an unreliable narrator and the reader only finds out when the character does. The only way this plot works is to use both Sansa and Petyr's POV due to the complexity of the story.
I don't like 3rd Person Omniscient because it rather ruins the suspense with that 'all knowing' narrator. I really wanted the reader to feel like they're in the story.
I really need to get off my ass and finish it. I think by then if anyone thinks it's worth publishing, I'll go through and change the necessary things to make it wholly original (character names, places, etc). I've actually loosely based this on GOT, meaning I used a few characters to use their traits and relationships more than a true fanfiction that resembles canon.
I suppose if readers want that, I have plenty of stories that are more canon related. I guess my modern PxS fic is super loose on the GOT stuff too but oh well.
Lord, I'm sorry. I can go on forever.
I really appreciate that you binged that monster and it didn't bore you.
Again, I'm very humbled by your kind words.
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starspilli · 2 months
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one for sorrow
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dragondreamers · 5 months
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RHAENICENT + EYES
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giallo4ver · 2 years
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Yes.
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I‘M SICK
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princessofmarvel · 2 months
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Petition for all team Black and team Green fans to not be at each other's throats this upcoming season, and instead, we all just root for our favorite war criminals in peace? And normalize liking characters from each team and just have a preference on teams? Because that sounds like a fun time to me, thank you 🫶
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stileslittlebanshee · 2 months
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HOTD fandom: Hotd is not really about picking sides, it's about how power corrupts and all the characters are morally gr-
HBO promo: pICK A SIDE NOW
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soyboywenzie · 2 months
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aemond: my uncle is a challenge i welcome, if he dares face me—
everyone, literally everyone, team green enthusiast and haters, team black enthusiast and haters, rhaenyra stans and antis, aegon stans and antis, alicent stans and antis, daemon stans and antis, team neutrals, team ‘I like pretty people and want to fuck them all’, team ‘yall are missing the point’, helaena lovers, and AEMONDWIVES AND HATERS:
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ophelieverse · 2 months
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because where tf is him HBO?!?!?
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theboleyngirlx · 2 months
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the real definition of serving cunt in a depressed way
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daenerysies · 2 months
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smaragaide · 1 year
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Will we be seeing the house of green and black updated ever again? It’s my favourite story by you!
I'm not sure how to answer. I love this story. It's the first fic I've written that I actually felt like was my own creation (after deleting all GOT references).
It still has a definite ending. One I think is really good with a big twist. I have notes upon notes and more notes outlining this entire plot. I think about it a lot.
Unfortunately, I don't feel like I have the competence to do it justice. Confidence in any abilities to write is in a deficit sotospeak. I think I've created a story so big and complicated that is above my skill set.
Thank you. I figured no one was reading my works anymore. I noticed I get a comment about once a year, so I just assumed people have moved on. Which is fine. I'm not bothered. I figured no one was going to read a story that hasn't been updated in almost 4 years.
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irlplasticlamb · 2 months
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then the storm broke, and the dragons danced.
prints + merch
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gotham-at-nightfall · 15 days
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Dragons and Riders
By Ra Horakhty art
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sunfyredefender77 · 30 days
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SCREAMING
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very-straight-blog · 20 days
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Credits: CrazyTom0712 (Twitter)
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