Hiya! I'm a bit of a newbie to writing billdip and I struggle the most with dialogue and generally Bills character. I really admire your writing and was wondering if you have any pieces of advice for writing Bill.
I am highly unqualified to give advice on this subject! But here's a few things that come to mind when I think of how I write Bill!
Bill kinda has three main settings: Disinterested, Excited, and Angry. Think of them like levels on a sound mixer, while also being very Impulsive and having an Easily Shifting Mood.
Bored but willing to keep up a conversation because it *could* get interesting. Engaged in the talk he's having, but annoyed enough to insult the person he's talking to at any chance. Furious and excited enough to start making really creative threats!
Dialogue-wise, he's either dismissive, upbeat, or pissed off. He loves mocking people, displaying his superiority, and implication and wordplay. If there's a way to slide in a jab he'll often take it! Puns are not off the table, especially if they'll get a disgusted look or groan. And if he's making a metaphor or comparison he'll often reach for something obscure or downright bizarre.
He's also very manipulative, and convincing. He's got charm to him and can use it - but he also tends to throw in double-talk while he's doing it. (think the 'All I want is a puppet!' scene from the show)
Another point: Talking directly about himself (unless it's to brag) is basically Not A Thing. He might drop hints, but you need a heavy-duty crowbar to drag out anything even slightly beyond surface level.
And that guy's never going to admit when he's having a negative emotion that isn't anger! The best you can manage - if you know him well - is to realize when he's projecting like a motherfucker.
I have also violated all of these vague rules multiple times and will again! So take my suggestions with several grains of salt.
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Absurd how someone might hold the time I reacted very poorly two years ago when someone who's been overly friendly and supportive to me blocked me out of blue against me, as an "evidence" that I am evil dangerous monster who is off to harm when I don't get my way (not exagerration, their hateful claims exactly as they are)
But then the same type of people will hear someone who slipped up a similar way go "shit sorry my [insert diagnosis] be damned" and act all supportive and understanding and willing to let this person struggle to do better. Shit like this is why I still stand on my ground that ableism will never, ever, EVER go away. There is just inherent hatred and hostility towards neurodivergent people, even from those with the same neurodivergency often. And people only put in effort to show empathy and compassion when they're given a concrete term/diagnosis/whatever. So, they won't show mercy unless restricted with the fear of being accused of ableism, and this is a BAD sign. You are not supposed to only show understanding and patience to "be a good ally" in the eyes of the public, you are supposed to do it because it is the RIGHT thing to do.
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If Percival and Nadine was to have a contemporary ya romance name (the typical of non-fantasy, non-myth retelling, non-spec novels, I mean), it would have to be something involving a metaphor of light.
That dark neo-noir radio drama starring David Morrissey (it IS really dark. The lengths I'll go to just hear the interpretative power of his voice. Anyways), called Don't Hold Back the Light keeps coming to mind again and again. The imagery of dawn and sunrise keeps coming to me, in part through the songs I feel fit the story in partial ways (Keane's Bend and Break, Rick Astley's Rise Up, James Blunt's Bonfire Heart, even the melody of Lionel Ritchie's Stuck on You), but also because it feels thematically pertinent.
Both find themselves in night, not only in the despair, and tiredness, and hurt and brokenness, but on the idea that they had their day in the Sun, as life is metaphorically a day, and that it is over, and yet they linger. BUT where they are at the beginning, the idea of a new day sounds scary. And exhausting. There's a sliver of hope deep, deep down, like a candle on a window in a faraway house in the middle of nowhere. But for the most part, they'd like to hold it back if they could. And yet that feels wrong to them.
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“The Other Side” (Touchstarved OC Rewrite)
So I made a parody of "The Other Side" from The Greatest Showman with my Touchstarved Hound OC, Alon. Here, she's trying to partner up with Mhin to — as thieves are wont to do — pull off a Senobium caper, but it takes a bit of back and forth with someone who's so used to being on their own.
Alon: Right here, right now, I put the offer out.
I don't wanna chase you down but I know you see it.
We form a team and we will find the key
To all the answers we both know we’re seekin'.
So trade that tragical for somethin' magical (Mhin: Tragical’s not a word.)
And if it's crazy, live a little crazy!
You can try the same old schtick and hope that something finally clicks.
Or change the game and schtick with me…
Alon: Don't you wanna get away
From this Lowtown part you gotta play?
Then I got what you need, so come with me, we’ll pull a heist!
It’ll take you to the other side!
'Cause you can do like you do or you can run with me.
Stay in the dark or you finally take a leap.
Oh, damn! Suddenly you're free to fly!
We’ll get us to the other side!
Mhin: Okay, my friend, you want to count me in.
Well, I hate to tell you but it just won't happen.
So thanks, but no. I think I'm good to go.
‘Cause I quite like the dark you say I'm trapped in.
I’ll say it’s bold of you, this crazy plot you brewed.
That nerve is something, really, it's something.
But I work best alone, and your plan sounds like a joke at most —
We can’t afford to play the fools.
Mhin: Don't you know that I'm okay
With this Lowtown part I have to play?
'Cause I take what I need and I don't need a ride-or-die.
I will take myself to the other side.
So go and do as you do. Run off and leave me be.
No need for change, you can go on and keep your key.
Oh, damn, can't you see I'm doing fine?
I don’t need your help to save my life.
Alon: Now is this really how you plan to get past those gates?
‘Nother vine, ‘nother try to carry all of the weight?
Mhin: If I join up with you,
Someone is bound to get hurt.
We could die, be confined, try choosing which one is worse!
Alon: Or we could finally win a little, finally breathe a little.
We could take back our freedom to dream
And it’ll clear a path to cure our achin'.
Take our curses, start 'em breakin'.
Now that's a change that seems worth embracin’!
But I guess I'll leave that up to you…?
Mhin: …Fine, you’ve intrigued me, but my services are costly.
So how much actual coin would you be offering?
Alon: Fair enough, you want insurance for the action.
Seven gold, come on, let’s shake and make it happen!
Mhin: I wasn't born this morning, eighteen would be just fine.
Alon: Ack! Why not just ditch the heist and try to bribe your way inside?
Mhin: Fifteen.
Alon: I'd do eight!
Mhin: Twelve.
Alon: Maybe nine.
Mhin: Ten.
Both: Don't you wanna get away
To a whole new part you're gonna play?
Then I got what you need, so come with me, we’ll take the ride
To the other side!
So you can do like you do or you can run with me.
Forget the gates 'cause we’re going to take the leap!
Oh, damn, suddenly we're free to fly.
We're going to the other side!
Mhin: So if you do like I do (Alon: To the other side)
So if you do like me (Alon: We're goin' to the other side)
Both: 'Cause if we do, we're going to the other side.
We're going to the other side!
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