#came a few times writing his dialogue Ngl
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TAPE FOUR : BOOTY BANDIT !
Staring … Trafalgar D. Water Law 📸
SET SCRIPT : “hii! congrats on 100 followers. could i request a burglar!law x f!reader with dacryphilia or sadism? thank uuuu 🫶”
MATURE RATING(S) : ! NONCON ! SOMNOPHILIA , stalking, sadism (he slaps and spanks you here and there), dacryphilia, degredation, reader is called ‘bunny’ occasionally, unprotected sex, mentions of getting you pregnant, afab!fem reader, ooc law, overall this is very NSFW & be advised before interacting.
DIRECTORS CUT : for thee Trafalgar Law enthusiast @hesmything , sorry this came out so .. dark and disgusting. My first time writing dark content, & thank you for requesting <3
It’d been a week. A week of him watching you go in and out of your house without closing your blinds or properly locking your door. All he really wanted was some shitty belongings to pawn off you, but… you ended up being a favorite part of his day.
The way you dress yourself, how you undress yourself, and he’s particularly fond of the window in your bathroom that gives him a view of your nightly ritual. The way you lather yourself in expensive lotions so carefully… he needs it to be his hands that cascade down your naked curves, reaching places you can’t seem to. A man only has so much restraint, and with you? His patience is wearing thin.
Especially after tonight, he watched as your fingers rammed in and out of your aching cunt, how you couldn’t seem to make yourself cum no matter how hard you tried. Humping your little cunny on your pillow wasn’t cutting it either. That’s why he decided; if he wants something, he’ll simply take it.
It’s the late hours of the night, maybe even the early hours of the morning, but for all he cares you’re fast asleep. Draped in your bedding like the princess you are, bare legs shining against the light of the moon. Law could already feel himself getting hard, your tank top did little to cover your exposed chest. Underwear showcasing a damp spot from how you worked yourself up earlier.
No worries, he’ll take care of it and you. You’re beautiful he thinks, he’ll rob more from you than just some petty belongings. He didn’t even notice how his hand had involuntary began palming himself as he watched you in your own room, need clouding his judgement as soft whines fell from your lips. Tits jostling around as you tossed and turned. He walks over to your side of the bed, kneading your breast and then tugging at your nipple as you lean into his touch. They harden at his ministrations and he groans.
“Naughty girl… having wet dreams are we?” You’re so soft and pliant in his hands, breasts warm as he plays with you. He grins to himself when he pulls a meek mewl from your plush lips. “Bet you feel good baby,” he says as if he knows anything about you. His spare hand finds his own rock hard member. Unbuckling his pants as his appendage traverses down your torso. He has you flat on your back, helping spread your legs while inching his form between them slowly. Following the inhale and exhale of your form as he arranges himself.
He’s pleasantly surprised you haven’t woken up just yet, something sick in his head makes him want to fuck you so good you’ll be begging him to make you squirt. Your body will tell him exactly what he needs to know, evident by how much wetter you’re getting already. “Made me so horny all week, it’s your fault y’know. I’m just takin what’s owed to me…” that’s what he tells himself, but he knows it’s wrong. That’s partly what’s making it so tantalizing for him.
He towers over you, almost not wanting to move and spoil his own splendor, you look so beautiful like this. So comfortable in your sleep, but another thought tells him to fuck that sweet face off of you, to give you something to cry about.
Your arms are splayed on either side of you as he kneels between your legs, putting two fingers on your clothed slit. It makes him even harder feeling the dampness accumulating, but you stir and he pulls his hand away. “Shhh, still,” he says as if you could hear him. Instead he begins to pull your panties down your thighs, eyeing the string of slick that connects you to your underwear. He almost moans at the sight, “fuckkk, what am I gonna do with you.”
Unlucky for you that you live alone right now, but it’s very lucky for him. He can’t bear the thought of waiting to fuck your hole any longer. It’s been gnawing at him all week— now that he’s face to face with it— he can’t help himself. Law wishes he had more control than this, more time to savor your innocent form but the ache in his cock says he needs to act now.
He knows it’ll wake you up, and he knows you’ll be scared; but he’ll prove to you he knows what he’s doing. “Dumb slut gettin wet in your sleep, look at ya drippin all over your own sheets.” Law tugs his shirt between his teeth as he pumps his leaking tip, reminding himself to inch inside you delicately instead of all at once.
He loses it, the second your cute cunt wraps around his tip he fucks you to the hilt. You wake up wincing trying to figure out what the hell was going on and he immediately grabs your wrists, pinning them above your head. “Calm down, shhh hey hey, I’ll only get as rough as I need to be.” He felt the way you clenched around him as he slid in, you must like pain.
Oh and don’t even get him started on that look you’re giving him, like a deer in headlights as you babble about how you’ll give him anything he wants if he stops. “I just want you,” your body goes limp when he says this; can’t even free your hands as he starts to fuck his length in and out of your abused and defiled cunt.
He can’t stand to see you sad, he’ll just have to make you feel good enough to stop yammering on about things that don’t matter right now. That’s why he lets go of your wrists, pulling your knees up to his shoulders as he splits you in two. Tears of frustration and embarrassment cascading down your pretty face. “Awww, don’t cry. It’ll just make me fuck you even harder bunny.”
You’ll never forget those eyes, the ones that glow gold as he kisses the inside of your thighs, possessively marking what isn’t his. You can’t help the way that you moan as the tip of his cock reaches your cervix with each repetition of his hips.
“See, knew you’d like it. You’re squeezing me so tight,” he spits out between his own grunts. You can’t stand the fact he’s proving himself right. His cock shouldn’t be making you so submissive so you turn your head away from him.
He slaps you for being defiant, but his strokes into your drooling warmth never letting up. “Look at me, tell me you love it.” And yet again you clench around him like a little painslut, he adores it.
When you don’t answer him he leans over you, angling his hips deeper into your body as he fucks you up the bed. Your tummy bulging from each rough thrust as your eyes begin to roll back. “I said, tell me you fucking love it whore,” another slap to your other face. Causing your cheeks to heat up from the contact.
You can’t even begin to think clearly; whether it be from fear, from how you’re getting fucked stupid by a man you didn’t know, or from how turned on you are. It’s sick and disgusting and all you can do is cry and profess, “love it, I- I love it.”
“Atta girl,” his large hand wraps around your throat as he drills you harder, hips rolling in and out of your pussy as you grow wetter and wetter. “My hole to fuck,” he tells you, dangerously pressing down even further on your neck as your legs begin to wrap around his torso.
“Fu— fuck gonna,” you rasp out, but he can already tell. His eyes transfixed on your tiny pussy that’s currently clinging to his cock like you need him more than oxygen.
He slaps the back of your thigh, sliding two of his fingers in your mouth to prevent you from screaming any further. “Cum for me bunny, go on,” and there’s that shit eating grin of his. The one that lets him know he’s won as you moan and swirl your tongue around his fingers like a trained pet. “Look at you creamin’ for me. What a good girl.”
Your chest is heaving, face sticky with tears that can’t seem to stop. Vision blurring in and out as this man continues to fuck you senseless. Your body simply limp as he moves you according to his will.
He flips you over, not caring if you have time to come down or adjust before he’s sliding himself back in you as if he belongs there. “Cry for me painslut, cmon.”
He berates your backside in swings of his large palm against your sensitive skin. Causing you to scream into the bedding as your mind shatters into pieces. The only reason you haven’t collapsed into the sheets is because he’s the one holding you up like you weigh nothing to him, ushering the full reality of what’s happening.
You’re nothing but a slick and warm hole to be used, he makes sure to remind you of that as he presses the back of your neck deeper into the plush blankets. “Gonna fuck you full bunny, don’t waste any of it or I’ll have to come back and fill you again.”
Your body jostles in accordance with his punctuated thrusts, carving your walls to fit his cock. You’re a whining, sticky, drooling mess and your dumb cunt only continue to flutter around him. “You want that? Want me to fuck a baby in you?” He presses his body weight into you, spreading your legs apart with his knees as he grinds into your cunt. It’s sick, he’s mocking you, his body moves like he’s making love to you and that’s not what this is at all.
But, he feels so fucking good and with the way he’s degrading you. That deep voice of his, it only makes you want him more.
You feel disgusting and humiliated by him and all he does is coo at you like you’re a helpless little bunny. “Shh, just take it.“ He has your hair in his hands as he forces himself inside you. Each and every inch of his fat length ripping you apart. You feel yourself cumming around him again as you whine and claw at the sheets desperately trying to run as he fucks you stupid.
“Oh fuck— you’re so dirty, cummin’ all ahh- over me,” you’re so warm and tight it’s making him lose it. Watching you could never compare to fucking you raw. He bites and licks at your neck to silence himself as his balls start to constrict, “pussy’s milking me. Fuck you’re so good.” His words should make you feel good as he praises you, but it’s nothing but filth as you feel him release his hot load. Bucking his hips faster and faster to fill you full to the brim. He bites hard enough to draw blood as a reminder that he can and will come back to take exactly from you what he desires.
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#pls good GOD check the warnings b4 reading#came a few times writing his dialogue Ngl#sooooooo ooc but it’s ok he’s flexible#law smut#trafalgar law smut#law x reader#trafalgar law x reader#law x y/n#law x you#trafalgar law x y/n#law#trafalgar d. water law#one piece x reader#one piece x you#one piece thirsts#one piece smut#op smut
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OKAY BEAR WITH ME Y’ALL. I HAVEN’T PLAYED THE GAME SO I’M JUST GOING OFF OF SOME TIRED OLD MAN TROPES.
FRANCIS MOSES x READER
also, i haven’t written down any of my rules, but i don’t have any limits! i’ll write whatever requests people send me! whatever your dark mind can think of will be my pleasure to create!
i don’t mind if you’re not 18+, since, if i ever do make smut i’ll just label it as 18+ and TRUST that 18+ ONLY will read. you all have probably seen, but i’ve just written about my thoughts of different fandoms so far so there’s no 18+ posts YET. (maybe i’ll make this account SFW and do another for NSFW? idk, i normally post on other platforms but randomly decided to give tumblr a try lol)
as a NM/trans man myself, i TRY to keep my readers gender neutral by not really describing the characters features. hard on TRY bc i know the last blurb fic i made of dead plate was Rody x Male Reader lol, oopsies! anywhooo, enjoy~!
WARNINGS! doppleganger mention, possible unconsciousness, possible death, possible unfunny dialogue (bc sometimes i’m the only one who finds me hilarious lmfao), you’re kinda a baddie ngl, you and Francis are besties, Francis is a cat lover?! Francis is a tired old man who hates technology. phone mentioned despite the first wireless phone being made 23 years after the story takes place (use your imagination) uhhh, anything else i forget? comment below!
Francis let out a long sigh of relief, taking his cap off with one hand, using the other to dab away at his sweaty forehead with a handkerchief. Upon seeing the exhausted man, you can’t help but smile softly, shaking your head as you get ready to scold him, once again. You cross your arms, looking at him through the window with a playful disappointed glare.
“mhm mhm, what do we have here? you really should be getting more sleep, mr. milkman, your eyes are starting to sport their own eye bags.”
with this comment, Francis shakes his head but is unable to stop the small, yet tired smile on his face. he bends down to place the crate of milk jugs onto the floor before handing over his ID card. you hum, narrowing your eyes when Francis doesn’t give into your whims. you eye his card, glancing at it a few times before slipping it back to him with a chuckle.
Francis’s eyebrow raises in confusion at your reaction but ends up shaking his head, rolling his eyes playfully and sighing softly. he places his cap back on his head and huffs, deeming your reaction as a go ahead inside.
“now… what if i was a doppelganger? you aren’t even going to call my room to check if someone is there? such a reliable doorman we have.”
despite Francis’s playful tone, your grin slips into a frown as you study Francis from behind the glass. this causes him to tense up, suddenly feeling nervous, like he did something wrong. you hum, tilting your head into your palm as you seemingly analyze Francis for a little while before deciding to speak.
“what’s up brother?”
Francis blinks a few times in surprise, his head tilting in confusion at your question. His eyes narrow as he thinks about the question you asked.
“what’s… up… brother…?”
Francis looks up at the ceiling, taking your question to heart. upon seeing nothing on the ceiling, Francis can only shake his head and sigh at your antics.
“are you done with your tomfoolery, (Y/n)? i’m quite exhausted and would like to go up to my room and rest.”
you can only shake your head, clasping your hands together like a disappointed father getting ready to discuss their kids grades at the dinner table. you begin to explain.
“when Francis first walks in here, he always forgets one of three things… his keys, his hate or the crate of milk. you came in here, although exhausted, you seemed put together, unlike Francis, who is clearly going through a midlife crisis. Francis will then ask me about my cat, well, because he’s a cat person, though he insists no one knows. oh, and, Francis’s home phone has been broken for the past few days and is actually at the store, right now. so, Francis being here so soon, isn’t possible. that, and, well, Francis never understands my references, but indulges me anyway… anything else i forgot, doppelganger?”
you bat your eyelashes, smirking from behind the window like you just cracked down the traitor in your group. with each statement, Francis’s doppelgänger’s face becomes visibly more and more angry until the doppelganger begins to completely change: black eyes with white pupils, a wide and eerie black mouth, adorned with long and sharp claws on the end of the doppleganger’s elongated limbs.
“you… you’ll regret this… i will get in one day and get my feast, starting with you. i’ll gut you, keep you alive so you can watch your organs fall out of your body and your blood splatter against-! *CLANK! BAM! PLINK!*”
before the doppelganger could finish his fantasy, much to your amusement, the doppleganger’s body tenses upon being struck before crumpling to the floor after becoming unconscious. you look up from the doppleganger’s body to see the real Francis hovering above the possibly dead doppelganger. you shrug, knowing that you wouldn’t have to call DDD services to take care of the mess, now you just have to clean up the body.
“mmm… tuesday… tuesday…? did i get that right?”
you hold back a chuckle at Francis’s response to your last question. you can only nod, letting Francis have the win this time. pinching the bridge of your nose and sighing, a loud laugh bubbles up from your throat as the two of you realized what Francis had hit the doppelganger with.
“ngh… i just bought this phone, damnit… his hard head must have broken it.”
#tnmn#tnmn milkman#tnmn fanfic#tnmn francis mosses#tnmn x reader#tnmn x male reader#that’s not my neighbor x male reader#that’s not my neighbor x reader#francis mosses x male reader#francis mosses x reader#doppleganger#d.d.d
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HELLOOOOO would love to know about human incarnate. AND history's flowers. AND 13 for the fic writer questions. goodbye
OKAY OKAY OKAY IM SO EXCITED I LOVE THESE FUCK ASS THINGS!!!!! let me divide them….
13) your strengths as an author
i love writing prose. imagery my betrothed. connecting tiny threads into one useless piece is my bit on the side. basic dialogue when ik what theyre gonna talk about, but making it SOUND like them is a wholeeeeee other ordeal. so yeah, i'd say Prose. i like those, and people have said i use good word :)
history’s flowers
so you know the song bouquet by itchiko aoba ? well a good chunk of the song is mainly flowers, so ended up a fic like “crowley and aziraphale through history, but a flower that is mentioned in the song is present in an encounter we see”. like ‘plumeria’—its a ficlet in the garden and a bush of plumerias happens to be nearby or part of the scene ! its mostly chrono, but i tried to keep it as close as possible. not too much has been written yet other than the garden of eden example i gave you, and there’s a lot of flowers, but im gonna dew it all 😌
human incarnate (under cut due 2 length)
okay THIS one’s a bit more complex and infinitely longer. its a reincarnation story ! but of course, not exactly what you might have seen before. now, bit of context, i’ve mever really liked human aus—they are some amazing works out there and i’ve read a good chunk dont get me wrong, but its not exactly something i seek out—im there for the mystical, the immortal dance, etc etc. but one day this story just came up, and i COULDNT let it go. so: human aziraphale and crowley trying to stop the apocalypse but theyre actually an angel/demon duo but reincarnating every few decades. so one day they died (this if ofc plot relevant but if i explain it its ANOTHER long ass paragraph, so lets just say it involves fire and one of my favorite historical events *not alexandria*), and they started incarnating together, some lives never meeting and others meeting once or others changing them entirely, only to eventually truly converge in the present day (like 2008) in time for heaven and hell to realize the trick and the apocalypse on the brink of beginning. easy no memory shtick and stuff, and the appeal is 1) trying to stop armageddon without their respective powers/knowledge, and 2) relearning their love story one life at a time. its the exact balance of Supernatural and Human i would love to read, but never have seen. there might be fic like that out there (and i’d love to read it) but this is hopefully something I can execute nicely. some highlights:
- raising warlock is a such a funnier ordeal becayse they dont have powers to help them out. its a DISASTER
- them figuring out their miracles and their limitations when their powers slowly start tricking back (they're not yet where they're supposed to be, but after heaven and hell's first contact, they arent exactly human anymore, are they?) like warlock's birthday ! its just funny to me..
- crowley and aziraphale's limited contact before armageddon is about. its just a neighborhood crush, nothing more, but then it escalates like THAT ? imagine the guy who curates your flower bouquets you bring to your grandpa's grave (he's not related to you) (and he also happens to be you) and looks kinda pretty ngl is actually your immortal enemy you've been locked in a homoerotic relationship with since the beginning of time. and is a DEMON. of HELL. woah
- hell and heaven don’t really frighten aziraphale and crowley most of the narrative, until the plot ramps up. at first, theyre just Fuckin Weird to them, and seeing a few chapters of them just ridiculing their HEAD OFFICES without knowing just how powerful they can be makes me crack up
- crowley's tattoos (including the snake, which he has NO IDEA where it came from)
- aziraphale's bible and prophecy collection (inherited from his grandpa) (whom he is not related to) (who is also him)
- theyre both trans. one cool thing about this is that aziraphale intentionally chose his name based on the angel who guarded eden, which is HIM. for some odd reason, his name never did fade from the bible editions, and he is still known to this day. Cough Cough Crowley Cough Cough anyway also he and crowley both cycled through some other names before reaching their final ones, which are all names they’ve had in past lices :) because while their past lives have been connected to their old identities in some ways, it wasnt until 2008 where it really became similar. its almost like they knew things were coming…..
- (this trans fact is revealed during the six hours of drinking after adam is delivered <3)
- the bookshop fire
- holding hands at the end of the world
- no stars to run to, because crowley doesnt even know he built that one. but he still fucking loved astronomy anyway!!! he used to want to be an astronaut, you know. before the world tore him down
- aziraphale, on the other hand, never knew what he wanted to be. Good, that he knew, but Good at what?
- all of the fcuking.... scenes.... hittinf anathema, tadfield manor, I JUST!!!!
- some of their cliched past lives being the following: pirate/naval captain, bodysnatcher/cemetery caretaker, brandy spy/allied bookseller, 17th century witches, fugitive/aristocrat, and ofc, present day: struggling florist/bookseller who doesnt really sell any books and lives off of his grandpa's fortunes (again, not related) (who is also him)
- crowley growing up on the velvet underground and aziraphale growing up UNDER A ROCK. queen plagues them both...
and yeah ! its gonna be pretty long, i think. thanks 4 the ask, and happy timezone 💗
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20 Questions for Fic Writers!
Thanks so much for the tag gracelesslady23!! ♡
1. How many works do you have on AO3?
28 (14 in English and 14 in Finnish)
2. What's your total AO3 word count?
106,723
3. What fandoms do you write for?
I mainly write for the Harry Potter fandom, though I did write one Star Wars fic (dipped my toes into Obikin). I’ll post it in English some day.
4. Top 5 fics by kudos?
These are all Prongsfoot.
Bathe with me (4k, Explicit)
What are best friends for (2k, Explicit)
A lesson in love (6k, Mature)
First day of work (730, Mature/Explicit)
One of these days (388, Gen)
5. Do you respond to comments?
Absolutely!! If someone has taken the time to leave a comment I will happily respond.
6. What's the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
I don’t know if I have any angsty endings in my fics but probably By my side is one of the angstiest stories I’ve posted on AO3. Just your average Midsummer fic with some necromancy and raising someone from the dead.
7. What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
They all have happy endings, but probably A lesson in love, which has a feel good ending, or Specialised in you where they get to a happy ending through some initial angst and drama. Feels even happier then, doesn’t it?
8. Do you get hate on fics?
None so far. Fingers crossed it stays that way. Nobody should have to deal with it.
9. Do you write smut?
Yesss. Whatever they end up doing, there’s usually an emotional connection there because that’s how I prefer to write intimate scenes. But ngl, half the time I'm pushing myself to get the words out because I still think "oh no, is this really awkward" but then I remember the post I saw here on Tumblr where an actual published novel had the cringiest smut I've ever seen, and I'm fine again. We've all got this!
10. Do you write crossovers?
No.
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I’m aware of.
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
I translate my own fics.
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
Years ago I wrote a few HP crack fics together with others.
14. What's your all-time favourite ship?
James/Sirius. (To quote Snape: Always. 💀) Almost from the start. Sometime before the fifth book came out I was completely into Prongsfoot. Not counting years.
15. What's a WIP you want to finish but doubt you will?
I don’t post anything until I finish it first, so I have no hanging WIPs on AO3. But I have plenty in my WIP folder. I like to remain hopeful that I’ll end up writing them eventually. Not going to stress about anything.
16. What are your writing strengths?
I think I can come up with some nice plot ideas, funny and tense scenarios and good banter between J and S.
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
My ability to finish fics and focus on one fic at a time has felt difficult lately. I don’t know why I seem to run out of steam when I have the last third left. Also descriptions are hard for me, partly because while I love how they set the mood and make the text more vivid, I’m always eager to just write what the characters are doing and saying to each other. Descriptions in English are especially hard because it’s my second language and I’m always guessing if what I write has the right nuance and tone etc.
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language?
Sure, why not if it fits the story. I added a very minimal amount of French flavour to Fashion and hoped that no one would get too pissed off about it (mostly because of my poor attempt to write French English accent, not the actual French in there).
19. First fandom you wrote for?
Harry Potter. The first fic I ever posted as a teenager was a humour fic where Harry and his friends time travelled into the past and for some reason all the guys had to take part in a beauty competition (Mr Hogsmeade ’76) hahaha. This fic does not exist anywhere online anymore.
20. Favourite fic you've ever written?
Specialised in you is dear to me because it was not supposed to become at all what it is but James Potter took over the plot and I was a mere scribe at that point. Also I have a 20k Prongsfoot fic in Finnish that I haven’t translated into English yet but it’s the apple of my eye. I did a lot of research and put so much time and effort and all my Prongsfoot feels into it. It’s loosely inspired by the film Velvet Goldmine i.e. glam rock, glitter and S pining for J.
Tagging @fiendishfyre @siriuslystarbucks @solitaire-sol @adiha @prongsfootloves
No pressure. <3
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1, 4, 6, 10 for Heart in Your Hands and/or Catch and Release?
Ooh thank you!!!
Answers under the cut for space :D
1: What inspired you to write the fic this way?
HIYH: We're really just getting started so that's hard to answer at the moment... I guess I wanted to play with perspectives a little more, contrasting Lars' modern and scientific worldview with Jimmy's more historic but curious perspective. And I wanted to take a few tropes, like the "true love's kiss" trope, and revamp them in a way that I found more appealing.
C&R: Hm... I think my main goal in this one was themes of grief and family, which I think I accomplished, but I also wanted to play around with this grief-stricken, somewhat guarded antihero character since that was a perspective I hadn't touched quite as much with my other characters. And I had just seen No Way Home three times in theaters and I wanted desperately to try and fit my own character into that world to the point that people would start to forget she wasn't really there in the movie.
4: What’s your favorite line of dialogue?
HIYH: Again, not much of a pool to pick from yet, but... this interaction was one of the first that popped into my head, and I just think it's so funny:
“You’re… shockingly normal.” Lars blurted, unable to help himself.
“You’re shockingly British.” the spirit responded, baring him another of those little half-smiles, “Where’ve you taken me, stranger?”
C&R: Oooh, there are a lot of lines to pick from here, I really love Olly's sharp wit. I could write a whole essay on her entrance into the battle with Charybdis, but instead I'm gonna go with this line from the fight on Lady Liberty:
“You like hip-hop? Or is jazz more your style?” Max taunted, lifting his hands. Argonaut kept her eyes on his palms, waiting for a spark. Even as she did, her mouth was running.
“I prefer tango.” she said calmly, the only warning before her actuators came flying out at him. One claw slammed him mercilessly into the scaffolding, the resulting screech of metal on metal almost enough to make her wince. With two claws still anchoring her, the fourth and final spiraled outwards, reaching for the reactor glued to his chest. Argonaut grinned. “You had it coming.”
It's the combination of her mouth running on its own, automatically firing off these sharp quips about fighting-as-dancing and all that, while inwardly she's distracted by Peter's good-luck kiss and promise to take her to a Broadway show when everything's over (the "you had it coming" is a reference to the Cell Block Tango from Chicago)
6: What makes this fic special or different from all your other fics?
HIYH: It's got a lighter overall tone than my other fics, and it's going to stay there. The darkest this one will get is the canon events in Frozen Empire, and even that's brief. Currently Heartstrings is a little fluffier than this one overall, but Heartstrings is gonna have some killer angst once we get to it.
C&R: It's the closest I get to a crossover fic. Usually I stick to one canon or universe, and I am still sticking to the general world of Spider-Man in this one, but we get surprise appearances from Hobie, references to Spiderverse's LYLA, and of course all the multiverse-jumping in No Way Home itself. I have to say, it's a BEAST to keep track of, but I think it's paid off.
10: Why did you choose this pairing for this particular story?
HIYH: I knew I wanted to write for Lars since he seemed like a really neat character (and he's kinda cute ngl), and while his sexuality isn't ever stated or even hinted at in the movie as far as I could tell, I think his character works well as a gay man and I really wanted to explore the dynamic between his modern view on queerness compared to Jimmy's hidden-in-life/brave-in-death approach.
C&R: I've been a longtime fan of Andrew Garfield's Peter Parker, and I wanted to look at this, like... "two ships passing in the night" sort of romance as brought on by the multiverse. And he's super super bi, so I wanted to give him a partner who is equally bi and have them both be open about those past relationships.
In general, I tend to build my OCs to complement the canon characters, so I can explore some really neat character dynamics and relationships. That's also why I like writing OC x Canon rather than fully canon-character or fully OC ships most of the time, it allows me to build one character as a tool to explore whatever dynamic I want to capture with the other, like an extended character study. It's the challenge of keeping the canon character(s) reasonably accurate to their source material, while putting them into situations where they're interacting with someone completely new.
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You know, I went into it thinking ‘if the gays made it through this in 2005, I can get through it in 2023’ and now I’m finished with the finale but at what cost? To quote Brian after they shut down Babylon ‘my heart’s broken…my soul crushed!’ I have so many thoughts and feelings and opinions. I mean, I immediately knew this show will make an impact on me in more ways than one but holy shit, this is gonna hurt for a while. Britin deciding not to get married (although I’m not really eh about that because it makes sense) and I love that little moment in bed they had were they realized that neither want the other or themselves to give things up. (Although that freak out from Justin over cuddling was so fucking cringe..sir he cuddled you after Ethan dumped you and you came home to Brian waiting for you) but when they called off the wedding, that hurt in a way not gonna lie, although Debbie immediately made it funny. I gotta say as a sidenote, I actually really hated the whole ‘let’s run to Canada where they love us’ from Mel and Linds, like horrible things happen everywhere and there’s homophobia everywhere..Would kind of expect Mel to know that but whatever. Brian’s goodbye to Linds and Gus killed me! (Also side note: I actually really hated the ambush from Linds and Mel about Justin, i get it, it’s for the plot, but it felt like ‘oh we’re going away and gonna be happy, why don’t we meddle one more time to ruin Brian’s happiness’). And then the break up. Well not really but yeah, that one hurt. I bawled my eyes out. He kept the rings! The ‘it’s only time’ (btw that speech made me think of something completely else that i noticed but i also don’t wanna ramble bc I’m already doing too much) THE KISS! That felt like they were holding on to the last piece of a floating board after a ship went down, desperate to get last few breaths of air before they sunk. And that entire sex scene?? I GASPED! When i realized what was being shown over them. The first time and the last. It made me cry so fucking hard. It was just so beautiful. And when Brian, hugged him at the end and snuggled up? Only for the fade out to happen? IM SUING THEM ALL! (That actually angered me because Justin deserved much much much more! And so did Brian! But the heartbreak is still there) and then when they show Brian in the apartment alone? Fuck. I hate it! I actually wish they would’ve ended it at the fade out ngl. Because the whole scene afterwards with Michael was kind of dumb. It just felt like Brian was trying to let Michael know, he’s changed in some ways and done with certain parts of his life and yet the person who spent an entire season angry about him being that person, now suddenly wants him to go back to being Brian Kinney for fucks sake! Anyway, i sobbed my eyes out especially because Brian was all alone dancing in the end, just felt like a knife to the heart. Because why would you give the self hated, depressed, abused character a happy ending? Ughhh i have so many more thoughts but im already doing too much with this.
Hey anon!
I don't think the gays made it through in 2005 either, tbh 😭
Pretty much everything you're feeling is kind of the universal opinion, so welcome to the 'heartbroken by S5 club' *hands you a badge*
The entire dialogue with the cuddling was just so badly written and so over the top by Justin. Overall the writing across this season was so weak. Mel and Linds ending was very rushed shipping them off to Canada, and absolutely did not appreciate their meddling into britin's relationship but again for the plot!
THE KISS! That felt like they were holding on to the last piece of a floating board after a ship went down, desperate to get last few breaths of air before they sunk. - what a beautiful description ❤
I never can watch the scene of Brian on the podium with Proud playing because I well up instantly. I'm forever mad that was Justin's last scene he deserved to be there at Babylon. Brian's arc ending like that was cruel, because he gave so much to everyone over the five years, and to end up essentially back at square one but worse losing all the love he collected was not it.
Also I'm so glad you experienced the show with the original soundtrack!
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how abouuut 9 and/or 10 for all fics (since some don't have dialogue, or just pic one fic randomly if that's too many haha)?
13 and 15 for comfortable truths? :D
Ohey! I can do #9 and #10 for all fics! 'Cuz why the heck not. (:3<
From the Fanfic Ask Meme:
9. Favorite line(s) of dialogue?
10. Favorite line(s) of prose?
Man, that parenthetical “s” is dangerous...
From "Pancita"—There are actually a bunch I'm proud of, but anyway:
dialogue: “I- I have my querida hermana mayor to thank for it, don’t I? Well, todos. Our family, I mean. But I feel like you’ve worked the hardest of all, Juli.” There’s an unmistakable tenderness in his voice. “To make sure I got this gut.” — Bruno, you adorkable doof. I wrote this line relatively early... it just went through a few tweaks to make it sound more like him.
prose: Bruno had given a cautious nod, color dawning across his face as they stood by a table in the church’s small kitchen; puppy eyes flicking about the space and hands fidgeting, while his sister peered at the entire state of him, paused to brush her fingertips across the front of his shirt, against his belly. — Sue me, I like long sentences 🥲
From "Comfortable Truths":
dialogue prose: Although he has no intention of retiring his ruana, whose faithful—obscuring, bulking, securing—service he’s employed nearly his entire life, Bruno might even be okay with, someday… maybe, trying to walk into town without slouching beneath it. Just let it enfold him without overthinking how it’s going to outline the discernible soft roundedness of his middle. — Oh, Bruno...
prose: Not that anything would ever stop Pepa from hoisting him into the air. — Hehe. True though.
From "Nothing, & Everything" (Julieta and Bruno):
dialogue: “It already is, Juli.” — *sighs* *cries* This whole drabble/Julieta and Bruno's exchange was an early idea.
prose: Her brother, who appears more pinched and thinner than ever; who looks at her with a heart-clenching mix of unabated love and unfathomable sorrow, out of eyes that still contain a spark of fire in their depths. — 🥺
From "Telling, & Time" (Bruno and Antonio):
dialogue: “…Can you tell me a story, Tío?” Bruno cocks his head at that, eyes softening further. “‘Course, kiddo.” — I love them.
prose: The diminutive, recently minted six-year-old giggles from where he’s latched onto Bruno’s side. As his laughter trails off, he begins to shuffle in place a little, swishing the ruana he has grasped in his hands. I get that, kid, Bruno can’t help but think over the next several seconds of quiet fidgeting. — Shy li'l Antonio 🥺 Goes with (before) the dialogue I chose.
From "Rise, & Fall" (Bruno and Alma):
dialogue prose: Because one more desperate glance, a word, and he knows he would have caved—would have spilled, like so much sand, what he’d seen; allowed a little girl to fall when it always should have been him. — *distress face*
prose: His mamá’s eyes have aged, and her body is chilled from the night air and the jewel-toned river. When she hugs him, it is every part of himself splintering, mending, in a single instant. — Me crying while writing this entire ficlet...
From "Full Hearts, & Full Belly" (Dolores and Bruno)—Ngl, this fic is one of my faves; I felt like punching the air when I finished it:
dialogue: “So then eat, Tío Bruno,” she whispers, not at all unkindly. “Because I don’t ever want to hear you going hungry again.” — I really like all the dialogue in this one, tbh...
prose: It’s the sixth he’s received in the past two hours. (The first had been given to him by Mirabel, innocent enough. Then came two from Julieta, who sat with him until he finished everything; one from Agustín, with a warm, if slightly shrewd, smile; while the last one was delivered by an apologetic Luisa, the package looking deceptively modest in her hand.) — Alright, Julieta’s being a tad sneaky, haha. Still above board, though! Bruno 100% knows what she and family are trying to do.
From "Good, & True" (Bruno and Julieta):
dialogue prose: Suddenly, Julieta is holding Bruno’s face and bombarding it with kisses: mushing her lips against the concerning little juts of his cheekbones and the persistent squishes of flesh below them that make him appear younger than he is, interspersing these smooches with pecks to his forehead and the nose that her babies had all loved to grab. — Squishy cheeks :3
prose: But here are the pinpoints of pressure on his skin, steadying; so familiar and loving that they bring him through the flash of panic. — I’m so weak for these two siblings.
From “Whatever You Knead”:
dialogue prose: So the larger man starts to press his own fingers into Bruno’s love handles, beneath his shirt, nudging out little crescent patterns with his thumbs. — It’s the “little crescent patterns” bit. Like, can’t ya just picture/feel it (hopefully, if I’ve done my job)...
prose: When he receives a gentle suck on his lower lip, Emilio slowly works his way inward, pinching at the softer padded flesh of his partner’s tummy. Bruno’s hands splay for a moment against Emilio’s broad chest before lifting up to cradle the sides of his jaw, drawing their mouths even closer together as the baker continues to mold and shape his belly. — Choosing this chunk of text that is 1/4 of the whole story really makes me appreciate how short it is, haha.
The next two questions are for "Comfortable Truths":
13. How many drafts did the work go through?
I didn’t keep track exactly... I felt like one long, continuous draft, though! I had a pretty good idea of what I wanted to write and how it should feel, so a lot of it did just flow once I started writing. You, @seanettlles, saw one of the drafts! :D The part where Bruno’s thinking about how he might go into town one day with a bit more confidence was a late(r) addition; I’m glad I put it in.
15. What were you most worried about during the composition?
Probably just my usual fears... I felt really nervous posting the AO3 link on Tumblr! ...At one point, I think I did sort of wonder whether I should post it at all... That maybe it was too... indulgent?
I always tend to worry about “grounding” my stories, which is kind of subjective? Things have to at least come from weighted (not a pun) and rooted foundation, like the emotions and all. ...Sounds serious, but it’s not really supposed to be ;;; I’m waffling at this point. Anyway. I like how “Comfortable Truths” came out. Exploring Bruno’s, well, comfort with his recovery and where the weight has settled was really satisfying. I doubt he feels this way all the time, ‘cuz he’s still very much on a journey and also sensitive (the voice I gave him in the fic has that touch of self-deprecation)... but I also wanted to give him a moment of peace with himself. He deserves to rest and feel good about the journey, and himself!
Feel free to send me a number for the Fanfic Ask Meme! All of my fics are fair game!
#asks#ask game#encanto#my writing#stuff i've posted#fic: pancita#fic: comfortable truths#fic: nothing & everything#fic: telling & time#fic: rise & fall#fic: full hearts & full belly#fic: good & true#collection: seeing & being seen#fic: whatever you knead#oh balls i really do write long sentences
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ok chapter 9 of stars!
first of all i want to say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR KEEPING TECHNO IN THE STORY AS MUCH AS PLANNED! I agree that it feels like erasure not to, and his character still existing in our imaginations and fanworks is something that brings me a lot of comfort. On that note,
BEDROCK BROS!!! I know it's in a situation that is a little tense but still! Bedrock bros!
and the library scene was immaculate. Philza's revelation that he knows Wilbur is half-siren, and the fast, cold drop of the smile to give the blunt advice-that-could-be-construed-as-an-ultimatum in the last few lines of the chapter were just *chef's kiss* bees.
is there anything important/symbolic about the daggers that wil, tommy, and ranboo choose? or are they just aesthetic choices (i do that all the time in my own stories)
last thing, are there any small details that are either important and may have been skimmed over, or that you are particularly proud of?
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awww thank you crow anon!! yes i'm happy with my choice to keep techno in and i'm glad it's bringing you guys comfort <33 and thank you so much the library scene was literally something i'd been looking forward to writing for ages so i'm very happy to hear it came out how i wanted it to. it's just such a fun scene in terms of power dynamics and power plays with dialogue
ngl there's no symbolism tied to the daggers. it would've been a cool idea and i regret not tying some symbolism to it but alas it was literally just for aesthetic purposes. I thought it would be nice for wilbur and tommy to have contrasting daggers, with tommy's being a black onyx-esque blade and wilbur's being a white opal-esque blade but otherwise there was no further symbolism than that
in this chapter there's not a ton of tiny details that I added in, but I would say the dialogue between phil and wilbur is always something I think so so hard about when I write the two of them interacting in this fic. like the kicked puppy line and the you're not stupid line I actually switched around. the original way I wrote it was "stop acting like a kicked fucking puppy. you're young, not stupid" or something like that and it didn't sound right to me so I switched the lines around. much happier with the end result <3
also, I suppose a tiny detail in general is the way I have the characters refer to each other. techno so far still uses their titles, calling both the boys prince orpheus and prince theseus. phil has forgone using wilbur's title a few times now, just calling him orpheus and dropping the 'prince', but he's not so disrespectful as to try and call him wilbur. also, if you've noticed, whenever I write something referring to a character not in dialogue like "technoblade said-" or "philza stood-" I use technoblade and philza, not techno and phil. this is intentional. our narration is limited to wilbur's pov, which is why you don't see it being shortened to techno or phil unless it's someone else close to them calling them that in lines of dialogue. just a fun fact :)
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Rhubarb and/ or sunset!! For the fic ask meme
a favorite snippet of dialogue
I have many, so one from my most recent completed fic and one that I haven't published yet, how about?
from Rise to the Tops of the Trees:
Grian snorted. "No, best get it done soon before I chicken out, right?"
Jimmy fell silent for a long moment.
"...Tim?" Grian ventured.
"Was..." Jimmy made a small strangled noise, "was that a bird pun?"
Pearl burst out laughing as Grian spluttered indignantly. "Not intentionally, you lunatic! Go! Drive safe! Get off my phone!"
And for the unpublished one... there's nothing that actually goes with this, it just came to me wholecloth and I had to write it down.
"Statement of GoodTimesWithScar, on an encounter with a pyromaniac. Statement Begins."
"So now can I tell you about it?"
"Don't you sound so exasperated, you're the one who didn't think it was potentially supernatural that someone attacked you by setting themselves on fire and survived it."
"Listen, weird things happen! I'm not going to judge someone based on their ability to survive self-immigration!"
"Oh my god."
a chunk of description that I’m proud of
So... I tend to write dialogue more than I write memorable descriptions, so idk if this is so much description as just narration/prose that I'm pleased with, but this part in raised by wolves and voices is just still very delightful to me:
Nobody in their cohort liked Lambert.
They brought him a few weeks after Julian made a decision in the dandelion patch. He shouted and screamed and had bitten two full-grown witchers and cussed like he was a grown up (a really rude one), not like an 8-year-old. He snarled at the other boys and tried to kick the door open after they'd been put in the dormitories for the night with the door locked so he couldn't get out and get in trouble, like they did with a lot of the new boys, and he basically disrupted everything for half a week until their minders had given up and put him in a private room, where he'd at least be less likely to disturb people.
Julian thought he was the best.
Aaaaand ngl I'm a sucker for the opening of Rise to the Tops of the Trees, I'm just very pleased with it.
When he was 16, Grian fell in with a bad crowd.
Well, that wasn't really fair. Really what happened was that when he was 16, his best friend got caught up with a sadistic murderer in the body of a teenaged boy named Sam and Grian got caught up in their wake. For a few months, Grian's life stopped making sense, and by the time it was over he had scars, a disability, an arrest record, an expulsion, and enough trauma to fill years of therapy, if he ever went.
He did not go to therapy, incidentally, but at least he was self-aware enough to admit he probably should.
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Hi! Rose here! 🥺🌹
Oh god this is so late, SG gp was so exhausting, had to sleep right after it (but hey C^2 double podium! I missed those)
Gonna be live-asking for kinktober day 2, so SPOILERS after the rose line (even tho i'm very very late to the party)!!
🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹
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Respect so much for saying fuck u to canon
omega!max my beloved - the nests he'd have would be so full of redbull merch and hoodies stolen from older drivers, but really the best would be his hugs; yeah baby, youre an omega that can still win
“Are you always going to brood when you lose to an omega?” Max asks, “Because if so, the next few years will be hard.” <- OH!!! Love the confidence baby
“Some things are about me. And possibly us.” <- I really am loving the confidence and just going out there to claim what he wants
“What is it that’s stopping you from chasing something you want when you could chase a title a whole season long. Or did you give up on that too? Did you get so close by accident?” <- the dialogues really are WOW
Omega being in control in bed with an alpha! i support this so much
HANDS ON THIGHS!! Lewis' hands on Max's thighs <- it just looks perfect
"Max has a lot to say about that — he doesn’t need permission from anyone to come, but the words are his undoing as he’s pushed over the edge of pleasure and everything is white, the last thing on his mind telling Lewis off." <- hehe, bc at the end of the day, no matter the confidence, the brattiness, we're all just living in Lewis' world
I loved this!! I mean, I haven't read a good 4433 in a while, might go through ao3 to binge read some more. love LOVE the characterisations ( i really loved omega!max if u can't tell). “Oh baby, you come so prettily,” Lewis praises, “But we aren’t done yet.” this last line?! this killed me because then suddenly, after humoring the omega 'in charge' we know that in the next rouunds, it'll be him in charge and max would be just submitting
Using your emoji system, 🚔
As always, roses for you:
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-Rose 🥺🌹
Rose sweety!! Hi! Hope you're doing well. And yes, let's just say that a C2 double podium is one of the few good things that came from yesterday's race because what a mess. It was sad that I had to drive bc otherwise I would've fully been able to get drunk. And don't worry, the party will continue to go on a month long so you'll be never late!!
canon is just a suggestion anyways
honestly. confident but bratty 2016 omega max was the only way I could write him but can you imagine that version of max as meek and submissive?? especially to an alpha like lewis? never. at least not until he's like two orgasms in.
Thank you!! I used to write fics with barely any dialogue but it's so much fun to add dialogue in porn
omega's on top!! the agenda i will continue into the neverending world
Tbh I was about to post that fic and that made me realize I hadn't posted any 4433 in a hot minute and when I checked, the last time was July. Whew, wild. Ngl the ship is dying a bit but that can't be that surprising when the bar was 2021 which had me running on anxiety, like, continuously.
Tbh, Lewis is still going to fight to be able to take over from Max. His nest his rules, remember? ehehe.
Thank you for the flowers sweetheart <33
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First Kiss -- JJ Maybank
Summary - During the guessing game, a past lie comes out and exposes a few secrets.
Word Count - 1.9k
Warnings - None really, lots of kissing. This shit is cute I'm ngl.
SEND ME JJ REQUESTS!! If you look up 'prompts' or 'dialogue' in my search bar it can give you some ideas!! I need some :)
The guessing game was something we pogues often played when we were bored at John B's house. So it was no surprise that a joint was being passed around at 2 am as Kiera cut out some smaller strips of paper. JJ took his hat off and sacrificed it to the game. So here's how the guessing game works.
We all take turns being the holder of the hat, and we get a question ready. You ask the question to the group and then everyone secretly writes down their answer and folds the paper. They then put it in the hat and the hat holder takes one out and reads it aloud. They then guess who the answer belongs to. If they are right then the person they guessed correctly for is the new hat holder. If they get it wrong it continues moving clockwise. And in the unlikely event that 2 people have the same answer and they guess one of them is right, the two who had the same answer have to rock paper scissors and whoever loses is the hat holder.
"Who wants to be hat holder first?" Kie asked as she gave us all papers and pens.
"I'll go first I guess." I shrugged, taking JJ's hat from his hand. I thought for a second about a question. "Okay, let's start with an easy one. What is your love language? It doesn't have to be part of the designated 5." Everyone nodded and began writing, Sarah was the first to put her paper in, the rest following not too long after. I shook the hat to mix them up and grabbed a random one.
"Making fun of them." I laughed, it was obvious who's this was. "This is JJ's." I laughed, handing him his hat, he frowned in defeat, taking the hat.
"Okay, uhhhh, what is your biggest pet peeve?" I wrote loud chewing on my paper and threw it into the hat. Soon JJ was plucking a piece of paper out. "Real funny guys, it says JJ." His eyebrows knit together as we all began to laugh. He rolled his eyes at us. "John B?" JJ asked, which sent Pope into another laughing fit, rolling on his back.
"No way! I put JJ too!" He was nearly in tears, making John B laugh harder as well. They played rock paper scissors and Pope won, the hat was then passed to John B. He caught his breath from all the giggling, JJ looking less than enthused.
"Who was your first kiss?" Now there's the invasive question I was expecting from *JJ*.
"What age are we counting first kisses at, because I kissed people in elementary school." Sarah asked seriously.
"Let's say 6th grade and on." John B replied, some erasing their answers. I wrote mine and was the last to plop it into the hat. John B shook the hat and took a parcel out. "JJ Maybank?" He said with confusion. JJ's eyes widened, trying to avoid my eyes and not give me away. I remained with a poker face. "Y/n?"
"Uh, yeah." I laughed, taking the hat from his hands. Kie looked at me very confused, I had *not* told her that, not anyone really.
"You liar!" JJ pointed at me. "I wasn't your *first* kiss!" He announced with a raised brow.
"Yes, you were." I said, focusing on throwing away the remaining used papers.
"*No*, you told me, right before I kissed you that you kissed that kid Elliott. So you could teach me how to kiss." He quieted down a bit after that, revealing that he wanted *me* to teach him how to kiss when we were younger.
"What!" Kie yelled, laughing. "I was never told about this!"
"Do we actually have to talk about this?" JJ groaned, his hands placed over his face, I assume to hide a blush.
"Yes!" They yelled.
"Alright fine, I'll tell the story because clearly, JJ isn't going to. It was our 7th-grade year, some time in the fall."
*JJ and I laid side by side on the empty football field. We came here sometimes just to talk, it was usually after JJ's dad was being a dick and he needed to talk to someone about it. He always wanted to talk to me.*
*But this particular night he just wanted to talk, that's what he said. I was currently pointing out some constellations to him.*
*"That is the Big Dipper, and that's the little one." I moved my hands around in front of us, tilting his head in certain ways so he was actually looking at the right thing.*
*"Can I ask you a weird question Y/n?" He asked, turning his head to me.*
*"Yeah what's up?" I turned to him as well.*
*"Do you think it's weird that I haven't kissed a girl by now?" His face looked pained at the question, I could barely see the blush on his cheeks in the dim light. It had my heart pumping 100 miles an hour.*
*"No, of course not JJ. It's not that big of a deal." I shrugged nonchalantly.*
*"I feel like I don't even know **how** to kids a girl." He sighed, looking back up at the sky. And I don't know what was running through my veins, adrenaline probably, that made me able to say this.*
*"Well I could teach you if you want." I said slowly, trying not to sound eager because most of me wanted him to say no. Because I hadn't kissed anyone **either.**
*"Really? You would do that for me?" He asked so gratefully.*
*"Yeah why not? I know how to kiss." No, you do **not** bitch.*
*"You've kissed people?"*
"*Yeah! Elliott." He was a boy in our class, one who had liked me before. But I certainly hadn't kissed him, or anyone. *
*"Okay, teach me then." JJ sat us both up looking at me eagerly. I nodded nervously, grabbing his one hand and placing it on my shoulder and the other on my cheek. I placed both hands on his face.*
*"Now close your eyes and lean in while tilting your head to the right just a little bit so our noses don't bump. And then you'll just feel it." Or that's what I read at least...*
*He did just that, and he wasn't a bad kisser. Not that I had anything to compare it to, but it seemed right. He pulled away with a smile.*
*"How was that?" He asked giddily. Pulling his hands back to his lap. I was a little dazed by it, nodding enthusiastically.*
*"That was great, you wanna try again?" I asked cautiously.*
*"Yeah why not." He shrugged and kissed me again, just as well. And that's when I knew.*
*I liked this idiot, a lot.*
I left out the parts where I was nervous, and the way I actually felt about him. That would have been a little too much information.
"So you didn't kiss Elliott?! And you said you would teach me! With no experience!"
"That's because I wanted to kiss you that bad dumbass." I laughed, immediately regretting that as it spilled from my mouth. Kie widened her eyes at me, knowing about my not-so-itty bitty crush on JJ.
"Oh, so you wanted to kiss me huh?" He winked with a smirk.
"I mean yeah, in 7th grade." I shrugged it off. He nodded with a smile, letting me continue the game.
The game lasted about 30 minutes longer until we were all tired of it, deciding it was probably best to go to bed. Though I wasn't so tired.
Sarah and John B went to his room, Kie was asleep on the couch next to me and Pope was asleep in the recliner. I knew JJ was in the guest room probably not sleeping so I got up quietly, tip-toeing to his room. I cracked open the door to see a shirtless JJ sat upon his bed, leaning over his phone.
"You still awake?" I whispered. His head turned to me, nodding a little. He patted the bed next to him. I came inside, closing the door behind me so we didn't wake up the other Pogues.
"Can't sleep?" He asked laying back with his arms behind his head.
"Nope, Kie was snoring. And I took a nap today so, not gonna get much sleep." JJ outstretched his arms with squinted eyes.
"Will cuddling help you sleep?" He asked tiredly, it wasn't uncommon for us to cuddle.
"Maybe." I shrugged, laying down. I put my head on JJ's chest, my arm slung around him. His arm hung around my waist, keeping me in place. I traced little figures and shapes on his chest lightly, knowing how ticklish he was. His hand moved up and down slowly on my waist.
"So, did you think I was a good kisser? You never clarified in the story." He laughed through his whispered question.
"For your first time? I think yeah it was amazing." I laughed, a little more ballsy how that I was exhausted.
"Do you think I'm still a good kisser?" He asked quietly. I looked up at him to see he was already staring at me.
"I don't know, we'll have to test it." I replied, trying to keep my voice steady. He smiled a little, putting a finger under my chin to tilt up my face. My hand lightly touched his cheek as he kissed me. He sat up, holding onto me and not disconnecting our lips.
One hand went to my neck and the other slowly slid from my shoulder to my hip. My hands were on his neck and in his hair, tugging at it a little. I slowly opened my mouth, his tongue sliding in as he pushed a piece of hair away from my face. His other hand slid under my shirt slightly, rubbing slow circles onto the skin of my side with his calloused fingers.
I pulled away from him slowly, pushing his chest lightly. He blinked a few times, swallowing hard.
"Did I do something wrong?" He asked quietly.
"No! No, that was just, really good. You're still good." I gave him a thumbs up and he laughed, leaning his head onto my shoulder.
"How long did you wanna kiss me before you did on that football field." He asked, kissing my shoulder lightly.
"Like a few months." I replied as he kissed down my collar bone and up my neck.
"And you still wanted to kiss me now? Damn, I've got you wrapped around my finger huh?" He smiled cheekily, kissing my cheeks. I grabbed his face with my hands, forcing him to look me in the eyes.
"I could say the same about you to me though, couldn't I?" I tilted my head, challenging him. But I should have known JJ had no shame.
"Oh yeah, you do." He laughed, lightly tackling me and kissing me all over my face. I wrapped my arms around his neck.
"So is this gonna be a thing now?" I pointed in between us.
"Is that okay with you?"
"Yep, has been for a long time."
"Then yes, this is a thing now, as long as I can kiss you whenever I want." He announced, pecking my lips again. I nodded with a smile, giggling as he peppered my face with kisses again.
#jj obx#jj maybank fic#jj maybank imagine#jj maybank#jj outer banks#outer banks#obx#jj maybank fluff#jj maybank has my heart
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thoughts on collar x malice no one asked for
(in order of play):
okazaki:
my ride or die (literally)
very sweet
lovely cgs
i still got genuinely mad on my second play through when ichika realizes he wants to die for her, even after i knew it was coming 😭
second play through made everything he said and did make way more sense, and the whole time i was like… this mf….. YOU CANT FOOL ME
and then he promptly did, because i am a simp and the writing makes him very lovable
the whole “do you even know how angry I am rn” in the park after ichika leaves still made me 😳… very sweet moment
he was my first route accidentally when i initially played, so i didn’t really notice, but on the second time through after playing everyone’s route, i realized how isolated his route felt. which makes sense given the mandates of the situation
probably my favorite route of all, so im glad he was my first :)
enomoto:
he is genuinely such a fun character
i love his contrast to the other members, and the fact that you just become one half of a whole idiot in his route is very refreshing
his ending was a little weird? some of the pacing felt off, but i liked his character so much i didn’t rlly care
love my fake eyepatch boy
sasazuka:
this bitch
i love him and i hate it
which i think is probably the general consensus on him
his dialogue is seriously so funny sometimes
he’s just frustrating in general, but i can’t bring myself to hate him bc i know he’s good at heart
i also know this mf would deep dive my online history and clown me for an eternity
when he does the smile and eyebrow raise thing…. Yeah…..
shiraishi:
was NOT looking forward to his route
found myself genuinely enjoying it, surprisingly
and then he ruins everything :|
but then he fixes it :)
then ruins it again :|
continues ruining it
and then fixes it for good :)
honestly started liking him when i found out he played with stray cats…. Like he can’t be ALL bad, right…..
partially correct. but even now, still unsure how much of his interaction was real and how much was fake
which i guess is kinda the point bc it doesn’t really matter. what’s important was that he was doing it, not why (or so yanagi says 🤨)
anyway came to enjoy him and really feel for him in the ending ♥️💔
yanagi:
ngl i bought this game solely for yanagi initially
saw him in the trailer, was like DAMN, and then pressed purchase. dilf detector was off the charts
come to find out i had to do the rest of the routes first😑
but it really did make for a better playing experience, so i can respect it. loved having all my boys in the ending
knew i would like him, and was correct
just a comforting presence through and through
optimal malewife
was srsly hurt when he said “🙂time to shut you down completely🙂”
but it was short-lived, so the dilf is forgiven
when he ROLLS HIS R’s at the BAR WHEN YOU GET DRUNK??????? good lord, man. i needed a minute
was also feeling super embarrassed during that whole interaction. mega awkward and made me scrunch up when ichika leans her head on his shoulder and he is like?? you’re THAT drunk??? i mega cringed, but not in a bad way. just in the extremely embarrassed way😭
was happy to finally learn about his tragic past and all
his patience and kindness towards ichika is just….. so sweet…. ;; and when the kid comes crying to him in the park i went 😔yeah
his ending was very sweet. definitely in my top two
overall i fell in love with the way ichika’s character shifts depending on the route, and i was very happy to see it created tangible difference in her interactions with others and her decisions
the way ichika reacts to sasazuka while in yanagi’s route is different than the way she reacts when in sasazuka’s route, same with enomoto, etc.
ngl…. the intro about outro are kinda misses for me, but i appreciate them nonetheless😭
cgs are just. fantastic
at first when buying i thought $40 seemed kinda high, and even after a few routes (upon returning to the game months later) i still sort of felt that way, but now after doing all the routes and with everything wrapped up i can say it was well worth the money :)
which is precisely why i bought and am going to start collar x malice unlimited exactly rn 💀
♥️💔
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SnK Episode 71 Poll Results (for Manga Readers)
The poll closed with 176 responses. Thank you to everyone who participated!
Please note that these are the results for the Manga Readers’ poll. If you wish to see the results for the Anime Only Watchers’ poll, click here.
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RATE THE EPISODE
172 responses
This week’s episode keeps up the high mark of the previous episodes, with 98.8% of respondents giving the episode a score of 3 or higher (overwhelmingly 4s and 5s). Nice!
It was aight.
It's cool
8.5/10
great!
Very rocky imo in terms of animation, as the cracks are beginning to show but overall look like the backgrounds and music choices were top tier.
Really good episode, I was disappointed in the jacket scene but it’s not the end of the world
loved it
It was overall a great episode I loved it.
🔥🔥🔥
WHICH OF THE FOLLOWING MOMENTS WAS YOUR FAVORITE?
174 responses
46.6% of respondents overall were most excited to see Eren meeting up with Floch and the others, with 23.6% of those respondents favoring the scene of Eren putting on his jacket specifically. 12.1% most enjoyed seeing the angry citizens shouting out the Survey Corps motto. 9.8% were thrilled to see Zackley’s death animated. 8% were psyched to see Pieck in disguise at the end, and 6.9% most enjoyed the moment where Hitch caught Armin red-handed trying to touch Annie’s crystal.
YOUR REACTION TO EREN PUTTING ON HIS JACKET?
171 responses
Eren putting on his jacket was a scene many obsessed over when it first appeared on page and many looked forward to seeing it animated. Most of the response choices were focused on various forms of swooning over Eren and his abs. Some (13.5%) stated that they didn’t really understand the dramatism and some others (another 13.5%) simply stated that they did not see much in Eren outright. We’ve gotten a lot of write-ins about comparisons to the pre-animated trailer shot of said scene. More on that in a later question.
i mean i understand the thirst, but eh
Prefer manga :/
The trailer did it better
Meh. Better in the trailer and the manga.
TF was that? Well it's still good in its own way.
YES! YES! YES! YES! Y E S!
both "HOOOOOLYYYYYY 😳" and "so dramatic and for what?"
Trailer/Manga shot was way better
Manga shot/trailer version are way better. Dissapointed
Trailer looked better :(
Mappa only made Reiner thicc, why Eren is so frain he has 1,85! He is so strong in the manga
I don't care
Manbun.........👀
He can have my babies anytime 😌💅🏻
Not as sexy as advertised; that’s okay, though.
That scene looked weird af ngl. It looked better in the trailer 😔
Me after THAT eren scene: 🤰🏻🤰🏻🤰🏻
Eren makes my dick rise
ON A SCALE OF 1-5, HOW HAPPY ARE YOU NOW THAT WE APPEAR TO BE GOING BACK TO LEVI AND ZEKE’S PERSPECTIVE NEXT WEEK FOR A BIT?
171 responses
Levi and Zeke’s chemistry has been the subject of praise for many, so it’s no wonder that 87.1% of respondents are rather excited to get back to seeing Levi and Zeke again. Wow!
ARE ARMIN’S FEELINGS FOR ANNIE GENUINELY HIS OWN?
173 responses
Armin’s feelings for Annie have been looked at under a microscope for a variety of reasons, which is why we’re asking if you believe that his feelings for her are genuine. A plurality, 49.1% think that they’re a mixture of his feelings for her, as well Bertolt’s. Slightly less (30.6%) believe that Armin’s feelings for her existed since before any of the recent developments. Only a select few believe that he either became interested in her post-timeskip or that his feelings are solely influenced by Bertolt. One person doesn’t think Armin has any feelings for Annie at all. And a few others just don’t care.
Bertmin simping for Annie and that apparently being enough for her to start considering him as boyfriend material is the fucking worst. I hate this shit. It's made me like both characters considerably less.
Uhh Armin where ya reaching?!
He was interested with her even before it was revealed she was the Female Titan and now that he has Bertholdt's memories, he sympathizes with her too and wants to understand her more so maybe Bert's memories intensified his feelings
His feelings for Annie are mostly his own. Bert's feelings might be in there a little, but the feelings are still Armin's.
CONTINUITY ALERT! EREN HAS HIS HAIR UP IN A BUN IN YELENA’S FLASHBACK. THOUGHTS?
173 responses
Uh-oh, Eren’s hairstyle moment. It would appear that there might be a continuity error with Yelena’s flashback and whatever that means for the timeline. A slight plurality (37%) didn’t seem to care about this, actually. But 33.5% appeared to believe that it was a mistake on MAPPA’s part that might get fixed in the BluRay version of the episode. 16.8% also believe that it was a mistake, but don’t believe it’ll get fixed. 9.8% think that it’s actually a retcon and that Eren’ll have the man bun when Chapter 123 gets adapted in Final Season Part 2.
I hope it gets fixed because it's bugging me.
I really wish it was like how it was in the manga. Eren looks good with his hair down in his 16-17-year-old phase. Despite the error, it wasn't a deal breaker for the episode.
He looks totally gorgeous with his hair up in a bun, please let this mistake be
Honestly I don’t mind it. It looks great either way.
Eren in a manbun is a total win for me!
WHICH PIECES OF INFORMATION MISSING FROM YELENA’S ADMISSION IN THE MANGA DO YOU WISH WOULD HAVE BEEN INCLUDED IN THE ADAPTATION?
163 responses
As with almost all dialogue-heavy chapters in this series, there are cuts. In this episode, these cuts mostly affected the conversation between Yelena and Pixis. The most yearned for cut material was Yelena never telling Eren to go along with the plan and Yelena saying that she used Floch as a “go-between” between her and Eren. Others also noted missing lines about Yelena wanting Eren to stand up for himself, Yelena stating that Zeke gave the volunteers a hopeful future and the idea that her and Eren came to quick agreement. The plurality (31.9%) however, didn’t seem to mind any cuts.
WHAT ARE YOU OVERALL FEELINGS ABOUT SOME OR ALL OF THE AFOREMENTIONED DETAILS BEING CUT?
161 responses
There is often a sort of expectation to have everything (or almost every) line from the manga adapted in the anime, so it’s interesting to see how people react to that sort of stuff. An almost 50% of respondents stated that they didn’t really care about the cuts, whereas smaller handfuls of respondents stated that the cuts either took away from the characterization of the conversation, or from the context and timeline-building purposes.
I'm not thrilled about the cuts, but I understand MAPPA can only fit so much in on each episode, so I'm okay with it
the yelena/volunteers plot has always been wonky and hard to follow
I don’t think it’s a problem, they need to cut certain things.
i literally never notice but i agree that it makes it harder to piece things together
Meh
It might seem for anime watchers that Yelena didnt do much, and Floch and Zeke that did the most part, in their own plans. Floch to betray and Zeke in predicting Eren wouldnt be on his side in some way. Yelena helped Zeke a lot to where he arrived in the rumbling
All of the above
ZACKLEY WALKS OVER TO HIS TORTURE MACHINE IN THE ANIME BEFORE MIKASA ASKS WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO EREN, RATHER THAN GLANCE OVER AT IT AFTER HER QUESTION. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT THE CHANGE?
170 responses
There was a partially comedic insinuation in the manga that Zackley thought about strapping Eren to his “art piece”. The insinuation is possibly still there in the anime, but in a different form. So we asked how you felt about it. Slightly below a half (48.8%) stated that they thought the subtlety was still there. 18.8% thought the subtlety was lost with the small change and 8.8% believed the change made Zackley seem less unhinged. 21.8% really didn’t care at all.
Why is this a question?
The glance was funny as fuck in the manga, but might have been awkward to pull of in the animation
They're blown up tho, does it even matter?
DID EREN KNOW ABOUT THE BOMB?
170 responses
Whether Eren truly knew about the bomb is a bit unclear to this day and with how it endangered Armin and Mikasa. A plurality (40%) believe he knew about the bomb, but did not know about his childhood friends meeting Zackley. Slightly less (30.6%) think that Eren did not know about either the bomb or AM meeting the Artist. A minority (7.1%) does believe that Eren knew about both the bomb and meeting and 21.8% simply aren’t sure!
Even if he didn’t know, he obviously doesn’t care either way.
THERE IS SOME DEBATE ABOUT WHETHER EREN’S JACKET SCENE WAS BETTER ANIMATED IN THE PROMOTIONAL VIDEO OR IN THE EPISODE ITSELF. WHICH DO YOU CHOOSE?
170 responses
Here we go… The elephant in the room… Which Eren abs scene did you prefer? The Promotional video or the actual episode? A somewhat slight majority (57.1%) seemed to like the version seen in the promotional video more than the episode itself versus the ones who preferred the episode’s style (42.9%).
THE EPISODE MARKS THE BEGINNING OF FLOCH’S ACTIONS AS THE VOICE OF THE YEAGERISTS. HOW ARE YOU FEELING ABOUT IT?
170 responses
Floch has always been a controversial character and the developments seen post-time skip have not been any less debatable. You may floching love him or floching hate, but he’s here and he’s staying for a while. A plurality (48.8%) notes that although they may not personally be a fan of the character, they truly do appreciate the nuance his appearance gives to the story. Just over a quarter (25.3%) stated that as big fans of the character, they’re looking forward to all the screentime the Flochster will receive. In contrast, 20.6% despise the man and his questionable haircut and are also dreading the showcase he’ll soon receive.
I hate Floch and will cheer again when he dies, but I enjoy his character.
I detest Floch but I'm not dreading all the screen time he'll take up.
Since he died in the manga, my hatred for him has cooled down somewhat now that I'm watching the anime.
I am once again asking for you to shut the fuck up, Floch.
WE KNOW NOW THAT EREN DID CONSPIRE WITH FLOCH TO BETRAY ZEKE TO ENACT THE RUMBLING. STILL, DO YOU BELIEVE HE DID IT BECAUSE HE HAS THE SAME BELIEFS AS FLOCH, OR WAS HE JUST USING FLOCH AND THE YEAGERISTS AS A MEANS TO AN END?
161 responses
An overwhelming amount of respondents (87.6%) stated that they believe Eren never truly saw eye to eye with Floch and his ideology and that Eren was simply using Floch as a means to an end. In contrast, 9.3% truly do think that Eren was ideologically similar to Floch and the “New Eldian Empire”. A select few thought you couldn’t just say one way or another.
They both wanted to protect Paradis
DO YOU THINK IF THE YEAGERISTS, BESIDES FLOCH, KNEW ABOUT THE FULL SCALE RUMBLING BEFOREHAND THAT THEY WOULD WILLINGLY FOLLOW EREN?
167 responses
The majority (53.3%) feel that the Yeagerists would see a divide if they knew beforehand that Eren wanted to initiate the rumbling, with some sticking around for the cause and others possibly leaving because it’s too extreme. 25.1% believe that they all would have fully supported the rumbling in the name of their own survival. 15% believe that every Yeagerist already knew about the plan to commence the rumbling, and only 6% feel that they would most certainly have betrayed the Yeager brothers (and Floch) if they had known.
I don’t know, this is a loaded question and I’m tired.
DO YOU THINK THAT, IF THE STORY ENDS PEACEFULLY, MIKASA WILL HAVE A ROLE TO PLAY IN HIZURU?
170 responses
While this plotline may not be going anywhere in the manga (or so it seems), the reminder of its existence is brought to light again as we revisit these older moments from the manga. 32.4% feel that Mikasa wouldn’t leave Paradis behind to start a life on Hizuru. 23.5% think that she wouldn’t leave Paradis behind, necessarily, but will still have a role to play in Hizuru. 21.2% think it doesn’t matter because Isayama has completely discarded (or forgotten) about this plotline. 12.4% don’t know what to predict (if anything) and only 8.2% believe that her future lies in Hizuru beyond the main storyline.
The last two options plus me not caring. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
hizuru is already rumbled, gone, but she will continue the azumabito clan in paradis
Is no one else gonna question Kiyomi's hair being sucked into her skull??? HELLO MA'AM???
Hizuru is likely flattened
WHICH SCENE FROM THE PREVIEW ARE YOU MOST LOOKING FORWARD TO?
171 responses
Episode 72 has already broadcasted as of the completion of this poll. For scenes that were most anticipated, 35.7% were most looking forward to seeing Levi and Zeke’s interaction in the forest. 33.3% most looked forward to Niccolo leaning straight from Gabi’s mouth that she is Sasha’s killer. 18.7% highly anticipated the Blouses learning about Gabi killing Sasha, and 9.4% were looking forward to Gabi/Falco and the Blouses gathering at Niccolo’s restaurant. Only a small amount were looking forward to Niccolo protecting Jean and Connie from drinking the wine.
ADDITIONAL THOUGHTS ON THE EPISODE?
Man the animation was gonky
no levi </3
So many faces of Niles are weirds !
Let hange aloneeeeeeee and happy, please
I have no word for this, but I feeling good
Shit is getting really real now!
Everyone talking about Eren’s abs and I just wanna say the music in that scene was amazing!
I loved how it was all neatly put together and fast moving
Armin looked so good. Homie walked from point A to B and i SCREAMED. Thank you.
i wish they included eren's warhammer escape from the prison, besides that solid episode all around, the people chanting 'dedicate your hearts' gave me chills
I can't stand Hitch at all but MAPPA made her really pretty.
Re: The jacket scene
The trailer version was pretty much identical to the manga panel. But I liked the version that made it into the final episode too. People have been so ridiculous about MAPPA ""ruining everything"" this season, they should stop watching if that's how they feel. I thought Eren looked great and found the sun shining on his abs funny. The scenery was better in the episode, imo.
I hope they don't cut Jean's line about booze not caring about what race you are. Lmao
Meh. It's not bad of course, I just find the rythm weird and I don't really feel many emotions watching the episodes.
And I was so thirsty for the jacket scene, and it turned out weird too.
Mappa pls stop drawing eren like shit he is gorgeous in the manga
MMGH SOON!! LET'S GOOOOOOO
You friccin moron, you just got zooked!
i miss eremin </3
Wish they had shown how eren used his titan powers to escape.
I'm so not looking forward to the controversy that's gonna be reignited during the EMA talk scene. I'm actually dreading it, but we'll finally get the Levi vs Beast Titan scene so I'll be fine
112 will destroy ships
I felt the animation was flawless as usual but the script was kinda boring, I expected more of these aspects:
-Yelena, it was bland with the cuts
-Hange, they cut something I cant figure what in this Yeagerists coup act that turned her scenes a little bit lacking? Idk something
-Again the soundtrack in the episodes is so silent. The only episode so far I liked the ost beyond the Opening and Closing themes is Reiner episode. I miss the melodrama of Witstudio osts
Eren putting his jacket on in slow-speed whilst talking at regular speed is fucking trippy
Just happy to see Hitch!
It was slow and mainly plot driven. I enjoyed it despite the changes.
goddamn is that a hella well-animated explosion
more abs please
Great episode. Really ridiculous how many people overreacted about the jacket scene. It's ok to perfer the way the trailer did it but to those who say Mappa is ruining the adaptation because of minor things like this, calm down.
I wish the jacket scene was better
But over all the ep is pretty good
Boring, but then again so was this phase in the manga.
I really like the VA they chose for Onyankopon! His voice is very warm and genuine, which suits his character well
The sunset was so aesthetically pleasing
yoooo just read ch. 138 and im crying in da club :(
These MAPPA episodes have been a low point for me. I’m trying to enjoy them because I love this story but it feels like a chore.
WHERE DO YOU PRIMARILY DISCUSS THE SERIES?
161 responses
Thanks again to everyone who participated!
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aaaaaa i finally read EHALOJ aaaaaa puchaaaaaaa
seungmin had those pogi typings going on lmao i love it v much huhu he was really an ass at the start but i still could bring myself to hate him 👁💧👄💧👁 idk if its automatic bc hes my bias or wut xd
moving on i honestly dont know who to ship y/n with :”> im debating on hyunjin and lee know. and yeji my queen uGh 🤨☹️😠😐 but whatever, INTEOTW yeji has my full heart. hyunjin is oblivious af but i still cant say much since i wouldnt really also believe if someone dearly close to me is a bitch irl even if the signs are 13628 inch by 28251 inch big, colored red with christmas lights.
aaaaa lee know and y/n has those history going on tHat makes me kilig ehe ehe but the typical and cliche ‘main character changed bad boy’ is 🥵 BTCH IDK WHO TO 🚢 ANYMORE 😠 sorry felix but ur bromance with jisung is more than fine already.
anyways the focus is BARELY on seungmin but i keep thinking about him ugh ✨ biaz tingz ✨ thankfully your seungmin smau already started xd
omg you re so good at antagonising people wtf 🤩 like literally all your works have the most detestable characters bc of how hurtful and toxic their dialogue sounds 😎 ur so very super duper amazing x9999 at writing, believe me 😭 you always incorporate the right amount of crack and dark thrilling shit in your stories uWu
BTW I THINK the dates. chapter link is broken on the masterlist and the next button on ch 19. i accidentally skipped ch 20 but thankfully i noticed it bc i got confused since lee know stated on ch 21 that y/n didnt answer him when he asked her on a date wHEN i didnt read anything abt him making a move. i got to the dates. chapter, ch 20, by clicking previous on chapter 21 though. hOPEFULLY U GOT WHAT I EXPLAINED 😭
im soooo excited for the next chapters huhu you did so well like di ako mapakali aYAN GANDANG GANDA AKO NAPA TAGALOG 💀 rly good job 👏
so i checked the playlist you shared and all the songs there are exactly my vibes 😭 they are the singers i listen to and i agree 100% that it hits home. OMG ZACKS VOICE IN BINIBINI SOUNDS SOOO SIMILAR TO HYUNJIN SHXHWHXHWHDHWHS IDK WHY BUT I THOUGHT ABT IT AND I CANT GET IT OUT OF MY HEAD HUHUHU 😭😭😭😭
huhuhu neways its 11 pm here, i might read a few more fics before heading to bed. hows ur day btw?
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uy omg ok 👁
POGI TYPINGS PLS 💀. true, we can never hate seungmin 😤.
and yes hehe, the ships are ALL OVER THE PLACE one’s going to antartica while one’s going to florida or smth idk. but my goal is to just pull on everyone’s strings with that one since i don’t really plan to focus on the romance that much, it’s really more of a slice of life story with shitty people in the mix or smth. but there wILL be an endgoal boy. the key is that even i don’t know who it is 🥴❓ makes it more unpredictable, no? but it probably won’t be until long. i plan on focusing on every character and give them beautiful developments so that’s how many arcs(?) 😀, probs overambitious here but i’m excited to try and make a longer smau after rushing my previous ones + i have a lot of notes for EHALOJ from when i started planning it a long time ago so i already have a basis for season 2 once i start it in the VERY DISTANT FUTURE.
i made INTEOTW yeji the way she is to make up for the fact that she’s one of the antagonists in this story :,). that’s kind of like my own pattern, i want balance. also hyunjin being gaslit by his own sister 😔💔💔💔.
minho ship looking promising for you huh 🥴. felix kinda came out of left field but isn’t he such a cutie. literally everyone’s rooting for yongbokie but i don’t blame em, he’s not like INTEOTW felix huhu.
SECRETARY KIM is a busy man 😤 let him do his job. kim seungmin smau is indeed out and it’s a new character trope!! no more tsundere, confident, and/or snarky seungmin 😌 i’m moving out of the stereotypes here.
and also thank you!!! that means a lot. ngl, i feel like i overdo it(??) like, i want villains to be “real people” and not outright “people made to be villains” ifykwim, i don’t want them to be hated because “hey i’m obviously a shitty person!!!” but because they’re complex and not some 2d bond villain. but idk, maybe i didn’t really have a choice with EHALOJ yeji because SHE IS just like that 🤔. hyunjin is in mental turmoil even. probably my favorite “antagonist” moment would have to be dark seungmin in the earliest chapters. but thank you for the compliments, i love writing dialogue, even my editor irl (for my non-tumblr works) always compliments my dialogue dynamic writing so that’s why i stuck to smaus, it’s just dialogue all the time 🤪. i was a bit afraid the EHALOJ might be a bit too dark to garner any attention (bc nobody wants to see their faves antagonized, valid) but i’m glad i took the risk, it was hard to get through but it’s honestly one of my hate-favorite works and i’m glad others seem to enjoy the twists and turns too despite the obvious lack of focus in the romance.
AND YES I FIXED THE LINKS. SOMEBODY ELSE POINTED IT OUT. HOW EMBARRASSING. MY QUALITY CONTROL IS GETTING BAD 😭💔
and tHANK YOU huhu, i swear it’s finished na, just all queued up hehe, not gonna dump it no no no 👆👇👆, i will follow a fixed schedule of uploading every three days. i think there’s five chapters left in the good ol basement. one of my irks too is that i don’t want smau chapters to be released in succession bc i don’t want people to just see smaus when they scroll through my feed so like, if i already have a lot of buffer posts in between like asks or self updates then i might update early. if not, then imma post other randoms in between.
HWANG HYUNJIN AS FRAT BOY NA TAGA BGC SUPERIORITY. medyo napa 🤨🤨🤨 ako sa exbattallion, that group is such a meme (i remember when socmed was tRASHING pauwi nako for being cringe) but i just respect the vibes and listened to everything 😤. AND SEEEEEEEE. THEIR VOICES ARE SIMILAR OMFG I CANNOT.
my day went great! celebrated my mom’s birthday. out to get tattoos once again. hope you have a good sleep, i’ll always be making fics for you to read 😌♥️ how’s ur day.
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tagged by @storybookprincess!! (thank you!!) here are some of my fave fics I’ve written! tbh this was kinda difficult; I am very aware that nothing I write is neither perfect nor very polished (it wouldn’t be even remotely fun for me if I tried to do that), but mostly everything I’ve written I’ve written for the sole audience members of me myself and I (and also sometimes a friend :3), so these are some of my more recent faves. under a cut because this got kinda long, whoopsie!
tagging! @superish, @dodici12, and @owletstarlet! <3
Letters from Heaven: haikyuu!!, kagehina, 60k
this fic was written for last year’s kghn big bang and it was so fun! It’s the longest thing I’ve written yet, and boy oh boy it was such a challenge to juggle a bunch of different things that I hadn’t done on this kind of scale before, like longer character arcs and, especially given that this is a violet evergarden AU, describing things in a way that fits with kyoani’s style and VibeTM. My last longer fic, thy kingdom come, was about half this length and almost made the list simply because of how bonkers it was (like I hadn’t written at all that year and suddenly signed up for a big bang and then had to take a month long break in the middle because of school stuff, and then boom I ended up writing the latter half of it a few days before the deadline LOL), but anyway. It’s not perfect (nothing is!) but it’s chock full of recurring metaphors and long-winded descriptions about the sky and pining out the wazoo (basically: all wildly self-indulgent things catered to me and me alone) and I love it all the same. (also bajillion thanks to janine for this one heh she is to blame for most of my kghn madness)
over the edge (of all our knowings): hunter x hunter, killugon, 13k
okay this one almost went to my other killugon fic again bc everything I write is so self-indulgent but!! this fic is probably one of the few fics that I set out to write very intentionally? that sounds weird, hmm how to explain. I tend to write fic mostly to let out Emotions but tbh it’s so much easier and way more fun for me to do that through reading other people’s works--less work for me to read abt my faves than to write them, after all! so most of what’s on my profile before this fic is exactly that: I sat down at like one in the morning with my notebook and fever-dream scribbled out a oneshot that I spent maybe the next two or three days typing up, reading over once, and then yeeting it up onto the archive. but not with this fic! I had already written my Vent fic for the boys in question, but my goals with this fic were more deliberately geared towards examining and changing up my approach to writing: 1) I really wanted to explore gon after the world tree and what his healing might look like, but gon is Really Hard for me to write (the boy is so!! ARGHSLKDFJ). So: deeply inhabiting unfamiliar character pov practice. Asking myself, after every single line of dialogue and event and inner monologue, how this character would react and why. How will this impact their next action? How will it impact their relationship with this other character? How about this? and this? and so on and so forth 2) I wanted to find a balance with my metaphors on both a sentence by sentence and an overarching basis (I tend to just go for the first--I can’t help it I love purple-y prose jslkdfj). 3) Time!! I also went a lot slower with this one. Every night for over a month, writing a little bit at a time in my notebook. And I found that going slower...is actually really nice? Takes a lot of the stress away. tldr; this fic was basically one long exercise in me examining my writing (also ngl my creative writing professor’s feedback on my work for class really kickstarted this LOL) and boy oh boy was it satisfying to see it posted when I finished. I learned a lot! Also I got some of the kindest comments that made me tear up, which was so wonderful. god this got long okay moving on.
your heart, bright heart: natsume yuujinchou, tanunatsu & gen, 7k
after over a year of quarantine I’ve read more fic than I ever have in my LIFE and I have figured some stuff out about what makes me go absolutely bonkers, writing-wise. this fic was an attempt, after several months of reading literally hundreds of fics across dozens of fandoms and relationships and pairings (like geeze! hxh, run with the wind, hq, yuri on ice, the great pretender, ouran highschool host club, snk, mdzs, final fantasy xv, and yes natsuyuu too LOL), an attempt at making myself go bonkers, if you will. and I still can’t quite put my finger on what it IS but I know it has something to do with the naming of things. like an author will Name a Thing, very specifically, whether it is an action or a character thought or something very simple about the environment--and that something speaks volumes about the character and their relationships and the core themes of the series and it’s like. it’s like there’s a moment of understanding between that character and the reader, an oh! I know what that means. it’s wonderful and I’m butchering the explanation here but anyway. I still have no idea how to do this myself yet but goddammit I’m gonna get there one day. This fic was my first attempt in the Naming of Things. idk if there are any oh! moments in it myself, but natsuyuu is the perfect series for the kind of quiet that I think you need for those small moments.
holy SHIT this got long uh. if you’ve made it this far--thank you?? this was also useful for me to articulate what the hell I’m doing in hamsterland. Recently a visiting poet came to one of my classes at university and talked about language-making as a physical art. Language has a physical existence, she said; it leaves the body and enters another and causes a physical reaction in both speaker and listener. She talked about how writers are creators of physical things, and how writing is mostly thinking before the creating. The physicality of language. To say it made me lose my marbles is an understatement!! tldr; there’s so much inspiration everywhere, and I wanna write more!!! So I’m gonna!!
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🗣 Share your favorite dialogue exchange.
“Baz...you’re wearing jeans!” I manage to splutter out, immediately cursing myself for letting that thought escape.
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☂️ Share your favorite description of an object.
The room wasn’t huge, but it was spacious, with big windows and, to Daisy’s delight, a window seat. The single bed was made up with a quilt, and there was an old wooden cupboard standing on the soft rug. Light beige curtains, and a door leading into a small bathroom.
-> well it counts because it’s from an ongoinng wip... also literally only because it’s so aesthetic. 😂
😂 Share your funniest line (or dialogue exchange).
He raises a long thin eyebrow in the way he knows annoys me the most. “Yes? You are aware that at least two thirds of the planet do as well, I trust?”
I blink, closing my mouth quickly. “But you never wear jeans.”
“It’s called undercover for a reason, Snow.” he smirks, and he seems to be enjoying this, the tosser.
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“No, just hang on a moment.” Daisy replied, winking. “THE LAST HOPE IS SHIT!” she yelled as loudly as possible, causing quite a few people to look around and laugh.
Not two seconds later, there was a shout from several meters to her left. “Oi! Who said that? I swear, I’ll - “
The group came bursting out from behind some other people, stopping when they saw Daisy, who was laughing hysterically by this point, along with Elena.
Hunter threw up his hands dramatically. “Oh, seriously, again?”
“Every time,” Lincoln joined in, shaking his head mournfully.
Daisy’s giggles finally subsided and she remembered why she’d called them in the first place. “Guys, this is Elena. Elena, this is everyone. That’s Jem, her brother Hunter, Big Guy, Fitzy, Lemons, Trevor, Bob and Pikachu.” she affectionately introduced her friends.
-> ...okay none of my wips at the moment are really funny as such, ngl everything is angsty, but I laughed a bit while writing both of these. I mean the second one -
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