Wings of Sorrow
Author: Yolanda Sfetsos
Rating: 4/10 ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Goodreads: 3.6/5
Date Read: April 2024
"These walls had a way of manipulating their surroundings and thoughts, making impossible things appear real. It had a way of making dreams and nightmares feel as real as being awake."
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Plot Summary: Newly wed couple, Thera and Hector become entangled in an ancient mystery the second they set foot in the abandoned house left behind by Thera's deceased aunt. Thera's past in the house is shrouded by lost memories and a general unease that settles in her mind while walking through the hallways. Being back in the forbidding setting stirs unfamiliar and unwelcome thoughts about her history and her possible future. Hector thinks the gothic architecture of the house will inspire him to write the masterpiece of a story that he's been dying to create. What he doesn't know is that the dark walls hold secrets that he could never imagine himself. The two of them together will be dragged to their destiny's. Whether they want it or not.
TL:DR: While the premise of the story is intriguing the writing itself struggles with fluidity and pacing. At times the dialogue does not flow well and the characters insist on overexplaining everything that is happening internally and externally. A lack of focused description of the environment and setting leaves a lackluster atmosphere that this story really needed. At the end of the day it's a fine short horror story with an interesting premise and it's a quick read.
Thoughts and Feelings: I really liked the description of this book, the premise of the story and the cover. All of which described a very atmospheric story of a woman turning into a monster. Unfortunately the story itself did not deliver on the creepy setting and there were some major issues with the characterization and pacing that threw the entire book off. There is very minimal description of the house and the surroundings, besides the instances where it is directly mentioned to be 'creepy' or 'dreary' or 'dark'. I also did not connect with the characters as much as I wanted because both of them were serving their own independent desires and didn't do very well communicating with each other despite the fact that they are supposed to be wildly in love. The dialogue in general throughout the book was stilted and didn't flow well which contributed to what felt like a lack of connection between the characters. My biggest gripe is that both Thera and Hector are written to be completely oblivious. There are very strange events going on with both of them going to sleep and waking up in random locations, but neither of them are willing to address things and they literally have to be handed information about what is going on in order to accept that something strange is going on until the very end of the book. And once they did start to figure things out the resolution of the drama happens very quickly. I think it would have been more impactful if the characters themselves found their own way to information starting much earlier in the story. Ultimately, I had some major problems with the writing and the characters, but the underlying story was interesting. It's a short book that doesn't overstay it's welcome so if you're interested in a unique horror story exploring family history in gothic settings it's worth giving it a try.
Thank you to Netgalley and DarkLit Books publisher for the ARC and the opportunity to read this author's creepy tale in exchange for an honest review.
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April 12, 2024: A Small Psalm, Catherine Wing
A Small Psalm
Catherine Wing
Sorrow be gone, be a goner, be forsooth un-sooth, make like a
suit and beat it, vamoose from the heavy heavy, be out from
under the night's crawlspace, call not for another stone, more
weight more weight, be extinguished, extinguish, the dark,
that which is deep and hollow, that which presses from all
sides, that which squeezes your heart into an artichoke-heart
jar and forbids it breathe, that which is measured by an
unbalanced scale, banish the broken, the unfixable, the
shattered, the cried-over, the cursed, the cursers, the curses—
curse them, the stone from the stone fruit, let it be fruit, the
pit from the pitted, the pock from the pocked, the rot from the
rotten, tarry not at the door, jam not the door's jamb, don't
look back, throw nothing over your shoulder, not a word, not
a word's edge, vowel, consonant, but run out, run out like the
end of a cold wind, end of season, and in me be replaced
with a breath of light, a jack-o'-lantern, a flood lamp or fuse
box, a simple match or I would even take a turn signal, traffic
light, if it would beat beat and flash flood like the moon at
high tide, let it, let it, let it flare like the firefly, let it spark and
flash, kindle and smoke, let it twilight and sunlight, and
sunlight and moonlight, and when it is done with its lighting
let it fly, will'-o-the-wisp, to heaven.
--
Also:
+ you can’t be a star in the sky without holy fire, Frank X. Gaspar
+ Untitled [I closed the book and changed my life], Bruce Smith
Today in:
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2022: Miss you. Would like to take a walk with you., Gabrielle Calvocoressi
2021: I saw Emmett Till this week at the grocery store, Eve L. Ewing
2020: Day Beginning with Seeing the International Space Station And a Full Moon Over the Gulf of Mexico and All its Invisible Fishes, Jane Hirshfield
2019: Flores Woman, Tracy K. Smith
2018: The Universe as Primal Scream, Tracy K. Smith
2017: Soul, David Ferry
2016: Turkeys, Galway Kinnell
2015: He Said Turn Here, Dean Young
2014: I Don’t Miss It, Tracy K. Smith
2013: Hotel Orpheus, Jason Myers
2012: Emily Dickinson’s To-Do List, Andrea Carlisle
2011: Now That I Am in Madrid and Can Think, Frank O’Hara
2010: The Impossible Marriage, Donald Hall
2009: The Rider, Naomi Shihab Nye
2008: from Homage to Mistress Bradstreet, John Berryman
2007: This Heavy Craft, P.K. Page
2006: Late Ripeness, Czeslaw Milosz
2005: A Martian Sends A Postcard Home, Craig Raine
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Well, anyways, I was bored and made a list with book characters that I like from A to Z (couldn't come up with something for Q)
Book Characters List
A
Aemmory Percyval Taxus
Aelin Galathynius
Andarna
Amara Maroni
Alpha Villanova
Abraxos
Annaleigh Thaumas
Aedion Ashryver
Alexis
Asterin Blackbeak
Aaron Warner
Apollion
Aidas
Ansel of Briarcliff
Ash
Addie LaRue
Avery Kylie Grambs
Ash Maddox
Alex Volkov
Ava Chen
Alessandra Davenport
B
Bryce Quinlan
Bryaxis
Bone Carver
Brie
Barney Fitz-Amobi
Bel Price
Bridget Van Ascheberg
C
Corvina Clemm
Cassius
Cardan Greenbriar
Chloe Green
Camila Dunne
Cinnamon Hotpepper
Cormac Donnall
Catherine Pinkerton
Cara Ward
Cal
Carter Price
Chrstian Harper
D
Danika Fendyr
Dante Maroni
Donatella Dragna
Declan Emmett
Dorian Havilliard
Dante Russo
Dominic Davenport
E
Elide Lochan
Evangeline Fox
Emilia DiCarlo
Envy
Evelyn Hugo
Ember Quinlan
Elspeth Spindle
Evangelina Sage
Elm Rowan
F
Feyre Archeron
Fenrys Moonbeam
Fallon
Felix
Fleetfoot
G
Gavriel
H
Hunt Athalar
Helion
Hannah Rooney
I
Imogen
Iris Winnow
Ione Hawthorne
Isabella Valencia
J
Jacks
Juliette Ferrars
Jude Duarte
Jesiba Roga
Jurian
Jest
Jack Brunswick
Jespyr Yew
Josh Chen
Jules Ambrose
K
Kenji Kishimoto
Kaltain Rompier
Kai Young
L
Lilith
Lyla
Lorcan Salvaterre
Lidia Cervos
Legend
Lysandra
Lehabah
Liam Mairi
Luc
Luna Caine
Libby
M
Manon Blackbeak
Morrigan
Morana Vitalio
Meghan Chase
N
Nesryn Faliq
Nazeera Ibrahim
Nash Hawthorne
Naomi Ward
Nightmare
O
Oraya
Oak Greenbriar
P
Pippa Fitz-Amobi
Purrcival
Q
R
Rhysand
Raihn
Ruhn Danaan
Rogan
Rowan Whitethorn
Randall Silago
Rhiannon Matthias
Razor
Ravi Singh
Ravyn Yew
Renelm Yew
Roman Kitt
Rachel Price
Rhys Larsen
S
Shara Wheeler
Scarlett Dragna
Stryga
Suriel
Sartaq
Syrinx
Sgaeyl
Sal Singh
Stanley Forbes
Stella Alonso
Sloane Kensington
T
Tristan Caine
Tristan Flynn
Thea Delion
Tairn
Thimble
Tandri
Trystan Maverine
U
Usha
V
Violet Sorrengail
Vale
Vincent
Vittoria di Carlo
Viv
Vivian Lau-Russo
W
Wrath
Wren
X
Xaden Riorson
Y
Yrene Towers
Z
Zephyr Villanova
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Grey Wing would be a nice cat and great character if he actually GREW while he was away from Clear Sky. He has moments where you think that's going to happen, but it doesn't. If he had helped Bumble, instead of sending her Back maybe Turtle Tail would have stayed. If he had actually stood up against his brother's beliefs and behavior, maybe the clans wouldn't be as vicious as they are. He is nice in cannon but because he doesn't grow character wise, he doesn't change, still defending Clear Sky's actions. It's like the Erins picked Clear Sky as their favorite and as such chose to destroy any chance for Grey to grow. Clear Sky could slaughter all of Grey's kits and the Erin's would find someway to make it seem like it was the kits fault. Idk it irritates me, as I like Grey--he's definitely a good character compared to most of the others, but...dude just drop your brother seriously.
It's like they picked from the very beginning,
"Gray Wing is correct and Clear Sky is a redeemable person"
And stuck to it doggedly. Gray Wing can't be wrong so he can't grow. Clear Sky can't be too far gone no matter what he does.
I feel like they actually have both of them as favorites, and it prevents them from being the full characters they could be.
Side note I hate how this book has cover art of them both being on two sides of a chasm, but then you open up the book and it's Gray Wing going "I miss my brotber... hes a good man... how did this happen... u dint understand hes a good guy..... hes doing what he thinks is best......." for the entire thing
What the hell kind of a divide is it if he's not MUTUALLY MAD? COME ON. Give me brother violence.
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Bloom of Sorrow episode spoilers
Fine, beautiful man they finally meet the sus sauce w/o knowing it, altho he was sus when he tried to force Vyn n rosa to investigate it
Oh my GOD marius the only crumbs of NXX cute interactions that have nothing to do with fighting over Rosa. I wish they’d give us more of it in personal stories or cards.
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