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Tales of New Star, chapter 1 page 5
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transformers synergized sneak peak
page 13, no context
#criticism welcome#sparkplug#spike witwicky#sparkplug witwicky#transformers fan continuity#transformers#tfs#transformers synergize#art post#update#chapter 1 dose have a lot of human focus but bots do play a role#chapter 2 is more bot focused#spike is a dumbass but he means well#maccadam#didnt make much progress last week because i had the flu but im making progress this week#15 pages are fully completed 5 pages are ongoing wips the rest are still either in sketch or thumbnail stage#i wanted to share one my most mundane pages so people dont get to exited lol
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Chapter 2 - Page 15
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#pokemon legends arceus#pokemon fancomic#warden ingo#gligar#magmar#oh man#one more page and chapter 2 is as long as chapter 1 was#haha whoops#also at the time of me scheduling this post (5/25/23)#we're only 25 followers away from 1000????#HOW????#thank you all for following my silly little fancomic that just blows me away#I'll have to do something once we hit it for sure#just not sure what
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Waves Always Crash /// Page 5
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Grouse's best features are his fangies. he's got no other good qualities
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My LOTR reread has brought me to the chapter where Éowyn and Faramir meet/become friends/fall in love. I love them; also JRRT goes so hard; how does he convince me to be super-invested in this relationship in the space of 5 pages? magic.
Anyway! my main point here was going to be: everyone rightly praises how this relationship development reveals Faramir's tenderness, his gentleness, his clear-sighted compassion. All of this is true and worthy of praise. But I believe that perhaps we are overlooking the extremely endearing fact that for all these good qualities, Faramir, Captain of Gondor also has exactly zero chill where Éowyn is concerned.
#lotr emotions#rotk#did i 1) tear up 2) swear violently around a mouthful of toast while reading this chapter this morning? yes. yes i did#also!!! the fact that éowyn only gains MORE confidence in herself over the course of these same 5 pages#as she gradually becomes able to envision the possibility of a future with faramir#so (she says) are you going to be okay if you get teased forever for marrying a 'wild shieldmaiden'? (the answer is yes)#i love her i love them
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"average Aurora chapter has 33.7 pages" factoid actualy just statistical error. average Aurora chapter has 0 pages. Daybreak Georg, who lives in cave with a psychic slime, is an outlier adn should not have been counted
#to be clear on the actual math‚ chapters 4‚ 5‚ 6‚ 8‚ and 18 all fall in the range of 22-27 pages#so chapter 22 kind of just balances those out; the average before chapter 22 was actually 32 1/3#aurora comic
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2023 reads
Ancillary Justice, Ancillary Sword, Ancillary Mercy
Imperial space opera trilogy
a soldier who was once a starship AI with thousands of bodies but was betrayed and is now a single human body, encounters one of her old lieutenants on an ice planet and helps her while on her mission of vengeance
in book 2&3 she becomes part of a new ship, protecting a remote system & becoming familiar with the different people & culture while discovering injustices, politics, and murder
interesting cultures, characters, and use of a singular pronoun (she)
#Ancillary Justice#imperial radch#aroaessidhe 2023 reads#this is a p terrible synopsis but like. who hasn’t heard of these books#anyway: i finally read them!!! 10 years after reading the first 5 chapters lmao#did take me a bit to get into it#but once i got into it; a lot less complex than i expected it to be? or like. smaller scale. which I enjoyed.#also. it’s funny? not like all the time but more so than i was expecting#(i mean I wasn’t expecting or not expecting anything in particular)#love a grumpy not-friendship (as it is in the first book especially)#audiobook cons: skips the first two pages of every other chapter. pros: singing! in a way that actually works#(i only listened to the audio of book 1 bc the libby wait times are SO LONG for the others)#translator zeiat a standout in book 3. obsessed with her#i feel like i don;t have many concrete thoughts other than yea its good#anyway i will read the other 2 books at some point also
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I know it's kind of the point, the passions of man versus the indifferent cruelty of nature, but it is amazing to me how much the Whale in Moby Dick just does not give a fuck.
The whole book sets it up as this malicious, intelligent demon that has it out for humans and wants to kill them all, and then when the Pequod finally catches up to it it's just... puttering along, enjoying the weather, having a grand old time. Even after they attack it and it destroys one of the boats it just kind of sits in the water nearby swatting at debris with its tail and ignoring them. Even at the end, the final destruction of the ship and deaths of all the crew, it kind of just has this attitude of like. Hey. You. I thought I told you to fuck off. Like -
Ahab: From Hell's heart I stab at thee!
The Whale: Oh, not you again. 🙄
#yes yes themes and symbolism but. its also really funny.#moby dick#moby dick spoilers#original post#i kid but that was a really gripping ending#one of those books where you read it and go‚ oh yeah i can see why this is a classic#...but also‚ oh wow writing styles have changed since then#556 pages to Hunt The Whale. 5 pages to Realize We Fucked Up. 1 paragraph epilogue.#barely any mention of our narrator or his [boy]friend at all during the final chapters#multiple long ass speeches bringing the action to a screeching halt#and a ~dramatic metaphor~ to finish it all off#anyway. glad i read it‚ would recommend to others‚ but certainly not what i expected going in
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need to turn a 20-page text into 12 pages
it took a long time to write these words, I don't wanna delete theeeemmmm
#the size of the chapter was fine when I first wrote it#with the general times new roman 12 pt with 1/5 spacing#liked it didn't seem too long it was about 15 pages which is a normal size for a book chapter#but now the editor sent the template and the margins are immense and the spacing between paragraphs is also unnecessarily big#and she said it has to be 12 pages max#so I'm fucked.#need to summarize soooooo much#this hurtsssssssssssss#kirk.goes.to.gallifrey
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and you caused it (a fic scrapbook)
a collection of written scenes, outlining, notes and art as a sequel to my fic cause most of us are bitter over someone.
In which Niki has a terrible secret, Puffy just wants to move on, Tommy sneaks into casino parties and Wilbur learns to deal with anger being justified.
Or - the one thing they don’t warn you of, when dropping nuclear warheads on old friends, is fallout.
31.2k words of angst, hurt/comfort, niki struggling through a self-imposed redemption arc, wilbur and niki fighting through the worst argument they've had possibly ever, techno and niki having their worst argument ever, tommy acting as the server's cassandra, and pandora's box being opened. niki-centric, with a heavy dash of rainduo - although techno, tommy and puffy also have their moments in the spotlight.
oh, and a happy ending. eventually.
chapter 1 - is bitter there?
wilbur does his very best to be a good friend. niki continues to have issues with making apologies. a casino opening party is attended, and a few well-kept secrets find their way into the light.
chapter 2 - at least i have nothing
arguments are had. roommates are invited to crash on an attempted murderer’s metaphorical couch. more emotionally intense conversations are had over l'manberg’s skeleton corpse, and niki is once again alone.
chapter 3 - sugar, milk and molasses
a prisoner goes free, niki and tommy try (and miserably fail) to get along, and some breaking and entering is committed. just out of curiosity, y'know.
chapter 4 - everyone there is, all together now
three important conversations are had, and niki comes home.
chapter 5 - but i'm forever missing him
resolutions are made on phil’s verandah, wilbur finally understands how horrible it would be to die in a ravine underground, and once-old friends are made new again. niki, again, finds herself baking a cake.
#dsmp#dsmp fanfic#nihachu#niki nihachu#wilbur soot#rainduo#idk whether to tag other characters in a tumblr post v in ao3...but know techno and tommy feature big here too#anyway!! wanted to put together a landing page for this fic. thank you for the love on chapter 5 it means a lot to me <3#my fics#OH and the chapter titles. kind of a last min addition :]#1. someone is crazy (jonathon coulton) 2. at least i have nothing (saint motel) 3. molasses (the hush sound)#4. all together now (ok go) 5. youth (daughter :])#and you caused it tag
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been thinking a lot about the structure of the comic lately and i wanted your guys' opinions on this:
#i think maybe i've been trying to keep everything categorized like this when realistically it doesn't totally make sense#with how i have been drawing the comic it means more eventful chapters (like 4) get up to 30+ pages alone!#where smaller parts like 5 and 1 only take a handful of pages#so i wonder if the numbering was ever even necessary at all#idk i wanna hear ur thoughts on this :) ur the audience so u should get a say!#feels weird to call y'all the audience but it's true 😅#also if ur wondering i didn't go with a moons-based system bc 1) i thought rveryone did it so not doing it would make me stand out#and 2) the kits were young enough that i figured they had yet to be taught how to calculate when a moon passes#so not using the moons system was like. an indicator that the fire not only took their family and friends but also their culture#anyways YES please let me know ur thoughts!#max moment
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And we're back! Chapter 2 is out! Please enjoy-
What a pretty view...
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Chapter 1 - Here
Reblogs appreciated 💕✨
#my art#canon triplettale#canon comic#triplettale au#triplettale#digital aritst#digital art#young artist#undertale au#undertale#chapter 2 pages 1-5
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do you post this on ao3 too? or just tumblr?
it's just on tumblr right now, but i have been thinking of putting it on ao3. i just haven't decided the part to chapter ratio yet
#residual asks#i was maybe thinking 10:1 or 5:1#if i want an even page count per chapter though i'd have to do 3 6 or 9#hm
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Sorta continuation of this, here's some observations on how the bsd anime adaptation rate (average of number of chapters adapted per episode) changed every season:
Season 1: 10 plot episodes + 2 ln adaptation. Adapts up to chapter 16. Average of chapters adapted per episode: 1.60
Season 2: 8 plot episodes + 4 ln adaptation. Adapts chapters 17-37 (21 chapters). Average of chapters adapted per episode: 2.63 (+1.03)
Season 3: 9 plot episodes + 3 ln adaptation. Adapts chapters 38-39 & 41-53 (15 chapters). Average of chapters adapted per episode: 1.67 (-0.96)
Season 4: 10 plot episodes + 3 ln adaptation. Adapts chapters 54-77 (24 chapters). Average of chapters adapted per episode: 2.40 (+0.73)
※ I opted out of counting the Hitori Ayumi OVA this time around, reasoning that the factors that play into conditioning the season episodes adaptation rate wouldn't have influenced the OVA given its nature of stand-alone episode.
Seasons 1-3 adaptation rate: 27 plot episodes, 52 adapted chapters. Average of chapters adapted per episode: 1.93
Season 4 adaptation rate compared to the average of all the previous seasons: 2.40 (+0.47)
Seasons 1-4 overall adaptation rate: 37 plot episodes, 76 adapted chapters. Total average of chapters adapted per episode: 2.05
That being said, let's try to guess how season 5 might play out taking in the previous four seasons adaptation rate of 2.05 as standard. Here's the fun thing: if season 5 is just 12 / 13 episodes of plot adaptation, that would mean adapting up to chapter 102 / 104. Coincidentally, chapter 104 (fukufuku flashback) is also the furthest in the manga plot that was shown in the last season 5 trailer. Feel free to draw your own conclusions, but as of now a new light novel adaptation seems positively unlikely and a Stormbringer adpatation basically impossible to make fit.
#bsd#bungou stray dogs#bsd s5#bsd season 5#mine#Just sorta pissed because it doesn't seem likely they'll dedicate the sskk fight the space they deserve...#The sskk vs. Fitzgerald fight and the sskk vs. Fukuchi fight have the exact amount of pages - I counted#(123‚ cutting chapter 36 when Fitzgerald falls down from the Moby Dick)#So it is ONLY fair chapters 84-88 also get *checks* one episode 4 minutes 36 seconds of adaptation!!!#But when you think about it it's likely they'll make a cut of the kind: *episode x ends with Akutagawa's glorious comeback*#*episode x+1 starts with Akutagawa joining Atsushi and Fukuchi on the ship and ends with Akutagawa's throat being slashed*#*episode x+2 starts with “you damn fool / hurry up and go” etc etc*#Sigh. I need more time. /They/ need more time. They need at least a lil kiss additional scene. Or a kabedon#Akuatagawa really is going to come in after a whole season say “I'm not here to reveal your identity.–#I'll chop you up and scatter you across the sea” And then die in the same episode. You go king give us nothing 😭😭😭
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