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DPXDC Prompt #58 Part 1
His parents studied ghosts. Danny didn’t understand as a kid why everyone made fun of his parents. Now that he was 12, the thought was ludicrous and yet his parents continued their work on the portal. Danny had his sister Jazz though and the siblings were rather close.
Jazz had spent a lot of time studying lately stating that she wanted to get into a good college. Danny understood he did, but being alone sucked and he couldn’t help it as he sighed kicking a pebble down the sidewalk.
It was a nice hot summer day, the kind of day you’d want to spend at the beach or a pool. Danny however had other ideas. He was on the way to the local library. If Jazz was going to spend her summer studying for the ACTs then Danny was going to study what he wanted, Space. He quickly found a few books and got settled into a chair as he read. Space really was fascinating, he hoped one day his dream of becoming an astronaut would come true.
An hour or so passed before Danny was interrupted, “what are you reading?” The voice started Danny out of his trance as he looked up at his interrupter. A boy about the same age as Danny with the same black hair and blue eyes that Danny had. His skin was more tan than Danny’s own pale white.
Danny fidgeted in his seat for a moment before answering, “Astronomy: guide to the stars” Sure, Danny knew the text was college level but he already read all the ones for high and middle school.
Damian seemed to hum thoughtfully with a hand on his chin before speaking again, “the book you're reading seems advanced, you seem smarter than your age would dictate. Father has requested that I visit the library and try to ‘make a friend or two’ in his words. I don’t see the need for companionship but if I must I’d rather it be with someone intelligent. My name is Damian.” It was a bit much but Danny guessed from what Damian said that he was complementing Danny.
“Uh, Danny… I guess most of the people in my family are pretty smart.” He replied after a moment.
Danny thought it was odd that someone wanted to be friends with him. Everyone at the public elementary school he went to knew who his parents were so they wanted nothing to do with him. It was lonely but Danny didn’t mind it too much, but Damian didn’t act like he knew Danny’s Parents. The thought of having a friend that didn’t judge him for who his parents were made Danny a little excited.
“What occupation do your parents have?” It was a simple question with a not so simple answer.
Oh, Danny’s heart stuttered a little bit at the thought of Damian knowing anything about. He didn’t want to lie, especially to his new friend but he didn’t want to tell him the truth.
“Uh, they’re scientists but I don’t really know what they do…” Danny said carefully and slowly. He was sure Damian bought it.
The two spent the next couple hours just talking in the library. It had started to get late and Damian needed to head back home.
“Do you own your own phone?” Damian asked, it wasn’t uncommon, for most kids in his class had a cheap hand me down phone for emergencies. Danny unfortunately didn’t as his parents probably didn’t care where he was.
Danny shrugged, “not really, I could borrow my sisters but it really only gets used for emergencies.”
Damian seemed to frown at this thinking for a moment before nodding as if he came to a conclusion, “my brother Todd has mentioned that it’s hard for low income houses to afford something I’d consider a necessity in this city. You do know how high the crime rate is, yes?” Danny nodded but he didn’t know what that had to do with having a phone Damian cleared his throat before continuing, “as you are now my friend I’d like to offer to purchase one for you.”
Danny hadn’t owned anything like a phone before, “a-are you sure? I don’t really need one, my parents don’t really… care?” He felt uncomfortable with his new friend spending money on him, Damian seemed like an important person especially with the clothes he wore and how he carried himself. Danny felt like he’d be taking advantage of his new friend if he bought Danny a phone. Danny closed the book he was holding and took a breath before speaking again, “I appreciate the offer but I wouldn’t have anything to offer you in return.” He let his gaze fall to the cover of the book, a swirling galaxy on a black background and bold yellow text.
“I would not have offered it if I wasn’t sure.” Damian stated firmly causing Danny’s head to snap back up, “I do not need anything in return, however if you really intend to pay me back, Father has insisted that I bring a friend home sometime. Since we have established that we are friends I insist that you come visit every so often to, as Richard puts it ‘get him off my back’.” It sounded like a simple request but Danny was unsure. If Damian was someone important then his family was bound to be even more important.
He took a moment to think about it, but Jazz would be happy Danny finally made a friend…
“Alright, I accept,” Danny said as they shook hands. It might have been a little childish but he could tell he made some sort of bond with Damian.
After that they had quickly become friends. Once Danny had become accustomed to being in the Wayne house he basically became family, and was often visiting, especially to eat Mr. Pennyworths cooking. Mr. Wayne also seemed fond of Danny, he even offered to pay for Danny to go to Gotham Academy along with Damian. Danny had been hesitant at first but Damian quickly wore him down. Tim eventually wormed his way into the group as he and Danny bonded over the latest video game releases. Soon Jazz got roped into the group too as she started to visit the manor to get away from how noisy the lab got.
A couple years had passed since the day that started the road to their friendship and the four of them had really bonded since then. Unfortunately their parents had finished the portal and its here where things go downhill for Danny.
In the next one Danny dies and all 4 of them are deeply traumatized.
Damian saw his dad doing research on the Fenton family, Bruce is just looking out for potential rouges and Damian took the opportunity to become friends with Danny. He figured that he could just bribe Danny into being his friend like all the kids at his school try but Danny is a lil cinnamon roll. Taken aback from how sweet Danny is Damian decided that Danny really was smart and worth being a friend. Tim has the same thoughts especially as Danny starts visiting the mansion more. Jazz loved that Danny had a spot to go where people seemed to actually care about him and she eventually gets dragged into the group. You can only drop off your brother at the Wayne’s so often before you get dragged into the group as well and I thought Tim and Jazz can be the same age and can bond over being older siblings.
#dp x dc prompt#danny fenton#danny phantom#dp x dc#dc x dp#writing prompt#poor danny#Danny and Damian became friends#Tim and Jazz eventually become friends and join#Danny is a cinnamon roll#bad parents jack and maddie#Whole lot of exposition#I this is what happens when I take my time to write#Jazz is an amazing older sister#my asks are open#all my prompts are free to use
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Anyways. Finished Yumi atNP. The Realmatic theory wheels are turning so I'm doing a singular post vomiting my thoughts. Major spoilers. Not a book review.
So assuming the Machine (or even cosmere at large) didn't just schlorp most of Yumi's investiture upon its destruction, which is a valid assumption since she nearly died, she technically still is Very Fucking Invested. According to Design, Elantrian level.
Which side note, interesting how we got confirmation that Elantrians have more magic than Returned. The bastards have to die, see the future, come back and eat souls to persist, meanwhile the silver people just automatically get the cool shit with no maintenance. Making up for the 10 years a zombie, I guess. Is Endowment stingier than we thought?
This, honestly explains how Nikaro was able to bring her back with his painting given there's a direct correlation between the amount of investiture a cognitive shadow has and how long they persist upon death.
That does bring me to the thought of if the Machine's repeated amnesia prevented... let's go with the term Sprenification of Yumi's cognitive shadow. As Vasher explained to Kaladin, as cognitive shadows persist in time, they more they're made to embody core aspects of their Identity in order to survive. Yumi has been dead for 1700 years.
You can rationalize this as the Machine pruning her Cognitive development. Then again, her mastery of stacking (which honestly very fun talent, love that for her). I haven't read TLM (despite having it digitally), but it's been discussed that Kelsier may already be undergoing that process, and he's been dead for only <400 years, so 1700 is a lot.
If not, I wonder if Yumi is now immortal because she is (was?) more invested than a Returned. That does mean she might eventually undergo Sprenification, if it hasn't occurred already.
Speaking of, I like how... a lot of the magic is just... not really elaborated on. Unlike other Cosmere books, where their fight scenes live and die on how meticulous use of the magic by our protagonists, and Sanderson likes to stress that there is a correlation of an audience's understanding and narrative problem solving regarding magic. It's... a big reason why there was that pre-Sanderlanche exposition dump. I'm wondering if there was a better way to relegate that information.
Anyways, the pre-existing magic system's primary basis is built on the pre-existing foundation of Realmatics and Perception. Expectation and perception shapes outcome. If you image the Nightmare as bamboo, it is bamboo. If you shove the soul of a 19 year old highly invested yokihijo into the body of an art school drop out, shit dude, that's her's now. With the dissipation of the Shroud I'm curious as to how art can influence the world from there. Can paintings more readily dictate the shape of spirits, due to their similarities to the Nightmares? This magic system I think is the softest of the lot, and I actually find that pretty cool.
Lastly before I wrap this up, while Sanderson has introduced cosmere soceities inspired by non-european cultures, (on multiple planets, no less), it feels especially palpable with this setting. While Roshar is decidedly not European but it's also familiar enough that whitewashing is an active problem within fan spaces. Meanwhile, here, it's so in your face about being not European that people have no excuse (as if they had any to begin with), but maybe I'm too much of a weeb that catching details was easier for me than others. It's cool, though,, we get to see snapshots of the culture as it develops through time, which is only really exemplified in the Mistborn novels so far. Not really relevant to magic but a musing nonetheless.
#cosmere#cfsbf#yumi and the nightmare painter spoilers#yumi and the nightmare painter#brandon sanderson#cosmere spoilers#ssp3#ssp3 spoilers#this post isnt a review as ive said but as a whole the book shot up to some of my favorites in the cosmere as a whole#character dynamics are very fun for me (which is why WoR is also up there) and the setting is quite refreshing#im already a champion of animated cosmere but this of all things *needs* an animated adaptation i will not accept alternatives#if i had it my way i'd hone in and develop a lot of the supporting cast in the adaptation.#really spice them up and bring out the slice of life parts of the narrative#and hopefully inject added foreshadowing to avoid that exposition dump pre sanderlanche#at the end of the day it's a slice of life fantasy romance. lean into the slice of life#developing it directly in japan would be cool unfortunately from what ive gathered cosmere isnt particularly a notable property there#which isnt really here nor there. not everything jumps cultures super well and thats fine
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Sakura gets a second point for being the first to complete the tree climbing at being better at chakra control, but at the same time it just feels like she was made good at it so no extra training segment time would have to be put into her getting good at it and it can be all about Sauce and Nart. Idk that feels too pessimistic but also could totally be true.
#she takes on a very 'obsever' role. like kashi is the teacher watching over them. but sock is the watching and commenting from the same#perspective of nart and sauce and also the viewer unlike kashi. cuz he provides a lot of exposition and whatnot in his inner monolgues#and its like. of course the girl is just the observer who watches alongside us as the two main boys grow and develop#AND I DONT WANNA FUCKIN BE PESSIMISTIC ABOUT THIS BUT GOD ITS IMPOSSIBLE!!!!#but her whole character so far is 'i hate the class clown. im book smart. i diet and im in love'#and the way i see it is. 12yo girl TRYING to fit into the femininity she sees in the world around her so she forces herself to be like this#but she has inner sock who speaks what she really feels showing that she puts on quite a front and isnt really much like that at all#and you expect her to grow into wanting her to truly define herself. and she does with getting stronger and training under tsunade and#learning medical ninjutsu so she really finds a spot for herself. she does!!! but then she KEEPS hanging onto the love nonsense#and admittedly there are moments that push a very obvious trope of thinking she likes sauce cuz hes cool but finding out that the real 'gem'#is nart so i definitely understand where n@rus@kus are coming from#but then she just STICKS with sauce until its the worst ship possible and its an utter mess of 'ill never give up on him'#EVEB DESPITE HIM TRYING TO KILL HER!!! THEN THAT FUCKING WORKS OUT!?!?!?#AND TOO THIS DAY SAUCE STILL NEVER COMES OFF LIKE HE ACTUALLY LOVES HER#IM SORRY BUT ITS TRUE. SARD WE ARE GETTING YOU BETTER PARENTS. ON GOD!!!!!#so she just hangs on to this one little thing that she SHOULD have gotten development for to move on from BUT IT NEVER FUCKING HAPPENS#so its like half her development never fucking happens and thats why it#s such a fuckinf mess!!!!!#i fucking hate this show. i need to go back to watching mike's dino game vod. what am i doing here?????#i did this to myself btw. i didnt need to start yelling about that but thats just how it is with nart#start thinking about something good and then it reminds you of something related thats bad and now its like. yeah this shit sucks#remember when kishi said he regretted not making hina the heroine???? we could have lived in a better timeline.#but if i say that i will get assassinated#anyway.#sock count#personal
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i miss the olden days when the greeks didn’t have labels for sexuality they just had affairs and orgies
#waxing poetry in their thirst#yeah this is about riordan#personal opinion time#he just. doesn't do casual representation#its gotta be outright#a whole sentence#dedicated to exposition#for the audience#like the labels are needed to justify something#i think thats it#the labels feel less personally empowering and more like... placating?#and i feel like its so personal for a lot of people#personally i would not tell a stranger the labels i use to identify myself#that's so ... intimate... and to throw it around so lightly makes it seem comedic#and how he has his characters criticize other characters for being sexist or stuck in the gender binary#i. i wish that the setting was one where there was no such terms for inequality#that it existed but the characters and thus the audience were convinced that equality was the status quo and the goal#or that riordan went more intricate with it#putting echoes of social issues in moments of indirect characterization#cause it feels like the more those terms are used the less theyre taken seriously#i feel like moments of inequality could have had responses of 'that's a dick move dude. don't do that' and not providing fodder#for inequality by using it for comedic effect#i just. have distaste for that
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I'm enjoying the fontaine storyline so far I feel like it's progressing the plot forward a good amount and we're getting some rlly cool and important lore info but I Am sort of like. can we solve an insane crisis now. can we have a boss fight please. I enjoy that we're learning a bunch of stuff but it feels like we're Only learning a bunch of stuff and not actually Doing anything of monumental plot importance we're just sort of watching all of the other characters do it
#like I enjoyed the newest archon quest a lot it was great it kept me engaged!!! but also we didn't do anything#like we weren't even there to help fix the water thing because we were sitting silently watching arlechino interrogate furina???#everything we've done so far in fontaine feels very idle#the trial last patch was so low stakes in like. the grand scheme of things and just served as world building/an elaborate lore drop#most of the archon quest this patch was investigating childe#and then when the big high stakes thing Did happen we weren't even really there for the important part#we did nothing at the tea party w arlechino and furina except watch it happen#and again I'm enjoying it!! we're learning a lot and thats rlly cool!! important world and character information is being gained!!!#but we aren't Doing anything or Solving any problems like we did in other nations#and I guess its sort of a nice break? but doing random tasks while watching Other characters fix the crisis is sort of getting old#like I think fontaine has had some of the best written storyline thus far#I just want to actually participate in something of real significance to the world or nation as a whole#hopefully they are just doing like. a fuck ton of exposition for The Big Crisis and its gonna feel extra important#but like. chop chop#never thought I'd actually be Asking for a boss fight 😭#ghost posts#text#genshin
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Ghiaccio's White Album is probably a really convenient Stand to have around with Grateful Dead. I imagine he could keep the rest of the group from aging so it can specifically kill the target while keeping the members of La Squadra safe from harm's way. (I kinda wonder what the Grateful Dead fight would've looked like with Ghiaccio there or what missions would look like with him and Prosciutto paired up instead. There would be no need for the freakout over losing ice cubes and Bruno's group would probably try to use the freezing ability as refuge only for Ghiaccio to go "Ha! No, sucker!" and reverse the effect or just start freezing them to death or something)
#rambles#short posts#i complain about VA's writing a lot but i will say i genuinely enjoy the stand abilities and fights (besides the final fight but yknow)#stand abilities evolve a lot throughout the series. in part 3 they were very simplistic and kind of dull/forgettable#you can tell the series was still working out stand logic and what it wanted to do with them#parts 6 and 7 are kind of mixed bags for me- some abilities are cool and others just got weird#(complicated abilities can make for cool fights but IMO if you need several pages of exposition to make the power sensical...#it's probably not a very good power)#and i'd say part 8 missed more than it hit when it came to stands. some of them were cool but others were overly complex to the point-#-of looping back around to being boring and just making me want to skim the fight to the end#but parts 4 & 5 hit a sweet spot of just unique enough to be very jojo and make for some cool fights but also understandable and fun#i remember when i first watched part 5 and thought ''cool!!'' to myself when i saw the abilities and how they were used#you did have the whole problem with king crimson being confusing and all but that's not really a problem with the ability itself#more the fact that it was hard to communicate its ability via manga format which i could do a whole ramble about tbh sdjfksld#though some descriptions of KC get contradictory to how it behaves in-universe which is annoying#and also it was too powerful for the characters to defeat which is why the requiem stuff had to happen which is really annoying#but umm i digress
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Onyx Prime = Shockwave time travel plot is such shitty writing I could and WILL (eventually) write multiple essays about it it's so fucking bad.
#squiggposting#for a brief preview of what i would be writing#1. time travel was done better in the same continuity by JRO#2. the plot by barber completely contradicted and undid most of the themes he was trying to build up#3. the plot introduced a lot of shit out of nowhere with no foreshadowing and had to be done via excessive exposition#4. it's just a really fucking bad logic loop that relies on a character doing things 4 THE EVULZ and not because he's like a person#can't believe ppl are actually defending it because 'oh it's silly lol'#it's not just silly it's stupid and it destroys most of the agency and drama of the rest of the story#including parts of the story that the same people who like S = onyx also praise as good writing#have higher standards for writers ffs don't accept shitty writing just because he made some points you agree with#genuinely don't understand it at all lmao#like barber made a whole story about the legacy of colonialism and how history is propagandistic and corrupt or whatever#and then introduced the big plot twist that actually it was all machinated by just one guy#hmmmm and here i thought this story was about responsibility and the way bigotry seeps into society's instutitions or something#NOPE actually the reason society is racist and imperialistic is because one guy went back in time and decided to make all of it happen#and the reason that guy wants a cybertronian empire is because he was raised during the golden age... which was brought about by the primes#...who were created by that very same guy. so like it's just an infinitely repeating circular logic error#in which this guy's motivations exist bc of the times he lived in but he literally invented the times he lived in
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I return! In the New Year! With comics once more.
Things got a bit Hectic last month, so this month I'm posting twice as many pages! That's a whole 12 pages! Wow!
Some more exposition on "What exactly have I, the protagonist, stumbled into," which you can read here.
#My Art#Illustration#OC#Comic#Webcomic#Comicfury#Ipseity#I wonder if I should start posting here as well? My batches of 6 little cakes?#Starting to get more Adventurous with my pages. Which is exciting :-)!!#Being transparent a lot of these early comics are just for expositions sake. But it's all very important !#Laying the foundation for both Characters and the visual styles I want to be carrying along the whole story#But yeah! I continue making Tha Comic!
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once you know originally oda was meaning to have kidd fill the role law ended up covering you can kind of see it reading sabaody, actually
#kidd's the one with the spotlight between the two#definitely#law is there but i think more bc he was the third with the highest bounty than bc oda meant to do anything with him#he barely speaks#kidd has a whole lot of exposition moments#killer is named obviously since he's a supernova too#and when luffy gets there he's the one he crashes into#I wonder at which point oda fell in love with law?#can't figure it out by my own experience since for me it was love at first sight ✌️
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WEEEE COULD HAVE HADD IITTTTT ALLLLLLLLL!!!!
DISNEY GIVE ME A FULL SEASON 3 THIS IS PREPOSTEROUS I MEAN I LOVED THE EPISODE BUT WE DESERVE AT LEAST 20 OR SO EPISODES WHHHHHYYYYYYY
#for what it was worth it was great and i liked it#no major criticisms because i'm just a casual watcher#but this entire season had me bawling#it was too good#do i wish there were more characters to flesh out???#that we got to see more of caleb and philip?#that we got to see the collector and the archivists interacting and how that worked out???#instead of it exposited by the collector?#and a proper meeting between eda and camila???#and a whole lot more???#yes yes yes yes!!!#but again thank you to the team behind toh and of course to the fans for making this fun#it's a great show and while not my favorite i definitely recommend for anyone who has ever felt like a weirdo#also that scene where the collector cuddles with belos justttttt#you're doing great! but there are some people who can't be redeemed!#anywhoozles ignore all this#in a better universe we would have had three proper seasons without as much censorship#i cried did you?
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watched the new spiderverse! animation BANGER, one thing i really loved is that gwens verse looked a lot like her comic, i really didn't enjoy the story that much though. or like, not the story but that it isn't a self contained story like i think we left turning a film into a two parter back in 2012
#the whole meaning of the story etc was a bit hamfisted and annoying#idk im mad at myself for having really high expectations#like it felt a lot like a 2h exposition dump#visually super beautiful#but it was just very on the nose sometimes#some fun characters!#but all in all it felt like a 5/10#it just wasn't captivating#and even this film can't run on visuals and cameos alone#maybe i am feeling cinemasins cynical about this. whatever. cinemacynical.
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Children of the Comet (2022) dir. Maja Vrvilo
Would you adjust the height of the wave, or the position of the stars? M'hanit's course is preordained.
#'it is... achingly beautiful there' sir???#trek#snw#yeah i can see what people were saying about there not being a whole lot of exposition and the characters being like#'yeah this horrible thing happened to me' in front of like. the entire crew#speedrun get to know each other#lmfao#'so you ran away to starfleet?' 'yes.' 'that is an impressive and heartbreaking story cadet' 'thats me' ok#'you did not intend on your being here. but you are here. your intentions are irrelevant' i love this spock.#great to see 'im not touching you. im not touching you!!!' as a command strategy
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Milo’ Bday part 3
Milo aged up and got the eggshell trait. And that’s how the party ended: gifts, outdoor movie, hot chocolate and s’mores,
Some extra things that happened during the party: Cleo that runs away, Rayara that escapes in the bathroom snd freaks out because there’re too many people (actually they were a lot, something like 11 guests), people obsessively thinking about pizza.
#new simblr#ts4#simblr#robertson legacy#robgen1#ts4 gameplay#rayara robertson#the sims 4#zeno robertson#milo robertson#finally.. i tought this would just take me 1 post#so naïve#the funny part is that thr whole bday took all the sim-night and ended in the morning.. very appropriate for#for 3-10 years old kids lol#i started to invite people as soon as yara and kids got home after school/work and it took me ages to have all the kids in the lot#that's why pics have all a different lighting#that's me editing exposition to make it look like it's afternoon and not 1 am#funny not funny#i hate that you can't rewind time in this game#with mcc you can go frontwards but not backwards#or there's a way?
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god smt iv is rattling around so loudly in my brain
#if i play it rn tho i wont get any sleep so i will refrain. oouuuuggghhh#im thinkin abt it. i love how it does exposition. in that it doesnt. and any information you discover is found through natural dialogue#its the sort of thing where you’re really only going to get part of the full picture but it feels like the whole thing is truly put togethe#if that makes sense. i honestly havent really played a lot of other games like it so its been really cool#salty talks
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I'm feeling like a dangerous woman today: Wes Anderson movies are pretentious and annoying as fuck, right?
#personal#meant to incite serious yet mature discussion#I might be labelled as severely uncultured and borderline illiterate but this is i#not those things but just not liking his movies#i WANT to#because their cool n differentedness is quirky and I feel like liking stuff like that makes someone pretty interesting#but i feel perthonally that they characters just blow a lot of hot air out of their mouths without sayin much#i know there are layers and themes and devices but guess what even marvel uses those#it doesn't make a piece of media better if it uses like#allegory#what if the rest of it is insufferable susan?#what if the whole time i'm watching a wed anderson movie i'm thinking what the fuck is she going on about in this moment?#call me uncouth but sometimes it's ok if a movie uses a modicum of exposition and like#plot linearity#to make sure their film isn't completely intelligible#unintelligible i mean#it's a little lazy if the we the viewer have to infer subjective meaning from every second of the movie???#i just got off work i thought you wanted to tell ME something about how you see the world through stories?#i am not being paid for this#they look pretty though his movies#should i tag this wes anderson#nooooo i won't i feel like some people on here might actually lop my head off#marvel is pretty insufferable for the opposite reason#but where are the movies in the middle who balance engaging our brains a bit as an audience but not spoon feeding it to us?
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i enjoyed night country and most of my criticisms with the show can be summed up more development for its female (especially supporting) characters
#STEPDAUGHTER DYKE I NEED LIKE . A WHOLE NOTHER PLOT W U#esp considering the finale like. idk. i didnt mind the ending i guess but GOD some more stuff about the women#the show was at its best. by far. when it was foster and reis going at each other#fosters character esp. like. i just...i wasnt compelled by her otherwise#i love u miss foster i think u did the best u could#idk idk it felt like they never reallllly finished the protesting arc and just kinda slammed it in#when like. i would have maybe refocused that to be the crux of the show#also i dont think that reis' sister should have died im sorry it just felt cruel#like i guessss it provided an interesting beat for reis but . like i struggle to see how it says anything that isnt kinda...bad.#or beyond like yeah the system fails ppl ! like bummer!#idk idk i never fully clicked with this show and i think it sagged a LOT in the middle#also qavvik . i love him hes such a sweetie but you could cut him out and have almost no impact on the plot#okay i think reis should have been fuckin foster BUT if u really wanna keep him#like idk he felt SO sidelined to me like he was truly there for the one shack scene to get some emotional exposition#im done im done#justice for him justice for the sister justice for the stepdaughter !!!!!#i like the tongue being ambigious btw like. a bit of mystery....as a treat#me 'i liked this show' as i list my many issues with its pacing and dialogue and plot and characters#honestly i think im riding this show's ass so hard bc i realllyyyyyy think it could have been like. life changing
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