#Spop rewrite
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Hey so i someone who really liked entrapta and i hated the other character treatment toward her but hordak who actually listen to her. Despite how i hated them but i think people are too focused on hating them not the actual issue with this writing. Did the executive somehow approved of this horrible writing, and one of the writer also actually writing this without considering the impact maybe?
So i been waiting for someone to atleast call out the character horrible treatment toward entrapta and please let them be hold accountable. I admit i wish the worst upon them but i also realized the suffering i wish is not gonna fix the issue and i want to make it clear this does not invalidated people feeling toward the character who are being ableist toward entrapta that's still valid.
SPOP if in charge of this show
The character who are in adora or shera side are not friend with entrapta. So despite entrapta want to make friend with them they not interested. So they just more of acquitance
Make stronger redemption for catra character
Catradora less abusive and incest. So while she did take the orphan adora and catra she only being mentor toward them not adopted parent. Her favoritism is obvious
Make cooler design for the character
Thank you for the ask, this is good. Is also true that is concerning how the writers wrote Entrapta and the other characters the way they did and didnt notice anything wrong with it.
"Oh, lets make the heroes put the character who has autism be put on a leash and make it a joke!!!" Im sorry, WHAT?
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Spop Rewrite
I mentioned in my first post that I was planning a Spop rewrite, and I want to go into more detail about what I'm planning and some major notes.
The Story
The story will include many elements from the 80s show, especially the world building, while following the reboot story structure.
Major plot points from the reboot will still be included, for example, the portal. However, it will be written differently and happen for different reasons.
I want to put emphasis on how war can affect people differently and the changes people undergo during it, as well as show multiple different demographics be affected rather than just the main cast.
Additionally, I want to focus Adora’s platonic relationships. Platonic relationships are going to take a forefront in this story rather than romantic ones.
Major Notes
Catra’s redemption arc will be longer and separate from Adora.
Catradora will be canon. However, their entire backstory and relationship will be rewritten. To clarify, I am not a C//A stan. However, I do like their characters in the 1985 comic and can entertain the idea of those versions of them dating. Also, the ship's writing makes me mad, so I want to prove that I, some rando with a lot of free time on her hands, can write a better friends, enemies to lovers relationship than the people who got paid to do it. So, I'm essentially making it canon just to prove a point.
The major changes in their relationship are that there will be no "siblings or dating?" mess involved in their relationship(yuck), Catra will actually be shown deeply caring for Adora, and their relationship will not be abusive in the slightest (still toxic because Catra is a villain but definitely not abusive, and becomes healthy later on.) Additionally, it will be a subplot to the story, not the main focus. It also will not only be made canon at the very last minute.
Seamista will also be canon. However, it is completely rewritten as Sea Hawk is 80s Sea Hawk, not reboot Sea Hawk.
I'm on the fence about Glimbow and Scorfuma, so there's a good chance they won't be canon.
(Clarification: My Double Trouble is closely resembling 80s Double Trouble and the She-ra Bible version, so if I use she/her pronouns for Double Trouble, I am not talking about the reboot version. )
Conclusion
Is there anything you would want to see in my rewrite? What should I consider when writing it? What should I avoid? Tell me what ya think.
(And before anyone complains, I'm tagging this in the main tag because this post is related to the show. I find the idea that you can't tag posts related to a show in the main tag because it's not " positive" and is criticizing it to be a bit ridiculous. There's nothing wrong with critism as long as it is respectful to the real people that post under the tag.)
#she ra#spop#shera critical#spop critical#spop salt#she ra and the princesses of power#80s shera#anti spop#anti catra#anti c//a#anti catradora#spop discourse#spop rewrite#shera rewrite
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HAI EVERYONE!
I'm Seaveera, but you can call me Seavee or Saken
Just a minor
Hyperfixation: The Italic ones are the main fandoms
Oshi No Ko
Chainsaw Man
My Singing Monster (Mostly the Celestials and Supernaturals)
Murder Drones
The Amazing Digital Circus
Art
Doodles
The Riverman trilogy
BNB (not affiliated with the creator)
DHMIS
PASWG
SPOP( the rewrite and critical community)
Raggedy Ann and Andy
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Scott Pilgrim Takes Off
Tags:
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Vent: Forsaken vents + Seaveera woes
Funnies: I can be silly at times so yea
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I often do recast as a joke like these:
/\ this is my recent one
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Up-and-coming Rewrites
Up-and-coming rewrites:
SPOP (She Ra & The Princesses Of Power)
Helluva Boss
Disney's Wish
The Twilight Saga
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Currently working on chapters for my She-Ra Season 5 rewrite. I'm sure there are few written by others, but I don't like the way Season 5 went and I don't consider that canon in my mind.
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This is a redraw of a piece I did on December 2022. Can't remember the context tho. Anyways, here's the og:
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An update on this post
This is what Josefina (glimmer) and Adora looks like
This is only sketch, I might color it??? I don't know but anyways enjoy :)
#artists on tumblr#my ocs#oc#my art#spop rewrite#spop critical#spop criticism#neetcore#neet#hikikomori#otaku#yuri#lesbian#wlw art#sapphic#sketch#glimadora
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Felt like redesigning intended SheRa characters from my memories of the 1st Season.
I had trouble sketching Catra’s right eye so that’s why it’s covered.
Glimmer has her dad’s hair color but still retains her signature sparkles.
Bow will get a character arc that will make him become a strong Rebellion commander, I gave him a short ponytail cause it makes him look cool, he also has a horse named Arrow who ends up befriending Swift Wind.
I made Sea Hawk poc ‘cause his VA is and gave him small dreadlocks and stache stubble.
(Maybe I should try redesigning Angella and Scorpia)
#my post#my art#my sketch#she ra and the princess of power icons#spop#spop redesign#she ra redesign#spop adora#spop catra#spop glimmer#spop bow#spop sea hawk#she ra rewrite#spop rewrite#spop angella#spop scorpia#spop swift wind
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btw i saw a post that talked about the criticism on spop’s portrayal of war and the person basically said that “war isn’t the main theme of the show, it’s the emotional conflict”. and like?? the creators didn’t have to bring war into it then. you can write stories about emotional and interpersonal conflict and the cycle of abuse, without having to make it about war. and a story can focus on multiple issues at once, if the writers are competent enough.
if spop wasn’t about war, the creators could have just made it a normal highschool drama or something. there was no need to make it a she-ra reboot, especially considering the fact that they insulted the original and changed everything except for the character names. if you don’t want to focus on a specific theme, you don’t write it into your story. simple as that. it’s like writing a dystopian novel with no critique on real-world social issues. that’s what dystopia is all about, you can’t just say “well my story focuses more on the characters than the dystopian world they’re in”. just don’t write dystopia then.
and this is WAR we’re talking about. it’s not a fantasy trope, it’s a very real issue. if you’re going to include something like that in your narrative, you have to be prepared to address it with the seriousness it deserves, and not make light of it. acting like war is just this petty little pillowfight is irresponsible at best and outright insensitive at worst.
#fans act like the writers were being held at gunpoint and forced to make a she-ra rewrite#when nate just wanted to release a fancy version of his she-ra fanfiction#and wanted to include catra trying to murder and brainwash adora without making her look like.. a criminal#because this is WAR ofc she’s trying to kill someone#spop critical#spop salt#spop#spop discourse#spop criticism#she ra#anti spop#tw war mention
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#sweary she-ra#shera#spop#spopedit#adora#catra#horde prime#5x05#cw suicide#i guess#mainly because of the parallel#which became less of a parallel with every rewrite
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[ DISORIENTING // BLOODY IMAGERY ]
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FIREWALL
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noun: firewall; plural noun: firewalls
a part of a computer system or network which is designed to block unauthorized access while permitting outward communication.
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PROTOCOL
if wielder is rendered dysfunctional, she-ra must intervene and take over the wielder's body to slowly restore them back to functional state.
side effects include:
wielder's hair, eyes, and blood becoming black
wielder emotionally and // or verbally unresponsive
wielder's abilities at utmost limits
wielder relying only on the instinct of the sword
protect them well, she-ra.
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#spop#she ra#spop rewrite#spop adora#she ra adora#adora#adoradeservedbetter#adora deserves better#spop salt#a little bit
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I'm bored
Drop me some drawing requests here or in the ask box
you can also ask me at my MSM-related Acc: @justaaskblogtogetnoticedlol
Reblog me with your OC when want me to draw your OC
No creepy stuff and NSFW
#saken rambles#murder drones#dhmis#my singing monsters#oshi no ko#the amazing digital circus#chainsaw man#bob and bosip#panty and stocking#spop rewrite#spop critical#buddies daddies#zom 100: bucket list of the dead
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NEW AND VERY IMPORTANT POLL:
Important context: entrapta's bots have a fizzy drink dispenser and Adora is gay agitated because she saw Catra fight in the last round (whether this is a bonus or not AU is up to you)
#she ra#technically#force captains#i wrote this fight but I'll obviously have to rewrite the fanfic depending on the results of this poll#adora#entrapta#spop
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I've decided that my She-Ra Season 5 rewrite story will have 12 chapters.
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I'm gonna be honest, I completely forgot about this blog lol. Here's two She-Ra pieces to make up for it :
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In my DeviantArt post , I said that I wanted to create my own version of glimadora (glimmer x adora) and since today I've thought of some ideas for this ship I've decided to brainstorm them here
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My verison of glimadora
-glimmer's name will be changed to "Josefina"
-adora and ""glimmer"" will just be normal human beans with no powers, also "glimmer" is no longer a princess (nor a queen if you know what I mean)
-adora is 22 years old while Josefina is 25 years old
-adora's last name will be "horde" while josefina's last name will be "fernandez"
-josefina and adora are both neets
-josefina thinks she's natsuki from doki doki literature club
-josefina is schizophrenic
-adora has an drinking problem
-adora used to date someone named "einar" (catra) but they broke up due to their relationship being so toxic that it lead to adora's drinking problem
-josefina is addicted to glitter glue (get it because glimmer??? Lol XD)
-josefina is addicted to glitter in general, the reason why is unknown
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That's all I have for my verison of glimadora
These two characters might appear in my series blood fairy magic???? I don't know I haven't really thought of it yet
Also I might make my own version of merfuma/permista (mermista x perfuma) someday.
I will use mjtanner's she ra criticism videos
As inspiration for my rewrite of adora and glimmer because why not????
#spop critical#spop criticism#she ra and the princesses of power#she ra#rewrite#spop rewrite#tw alcohol#tw alchohol mention#dark#toxic yuri???#glimadora#yuri#wlw#sapphic#lesbian
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