Sorry for negative spew but I’m too scared to speak my mind publicly. I really hope the game company uses all of that money for better writing and maybe a better MC because honestly I’m sorry but the MC feels so gross to me even for a H game. The events without the MC are great but the rest? Just write the MC out and I wouldn’t even blink. Like I wouldn’t trust this person to save hell because they only have horny in the brain and I’m not trying to say that’s not allowed. Time and place for everything, maybe not when you’re at deaths door.

Also stuff like the “crunch” deal could just be like “you can hear satan grinding his teeth”Because man that sounds weird and painful. Honestly my biggest criticism outside of the obvious paywalls is the writing. It’s like they tried too hard to make smut that it ends up being embarrassingly terrible.

Sorry if that’s too harsh

Ah, so this isn't the first time I've heard some criticisms about the writing anon, so no worries about speaking your mind here. As a writer, I tear myself down to the bone saying my stuff sucks ass and I should trash it and throw it out. But in terms of the writing for WHB, I think it probably sounds MUCH better in the native language than translated and that's most likely where the disconnect comes from. OR I could just be a horrible judge of writing and blinded by the hot drawings. I did have some hangs up EARLY on, mostly about Paimon's H-scene, and then for Beel's Unholy Board story and Levi's I was like????? So there are definitely some misses for me on the smut writing. In the beginning, lots of folks hated Satan's H-scene for different reasons and preferred Stiri's. When comparing the setup for the two, I feel Sitri was more even-paced, while Satan's pretty much like "Yeah whatever just take it" when in his attacker card it's the same energy but we've had some time to get to know him so it makes sense. AS FOR RA-ON....goodness. I've said it before myself but yeahhhhh the story could do without them. Idk, for whatever reason this MC is not hitting it for me. The horny on the brain makes sense because of what they were doing at the beginning (which btw poor Minhyeok had to change out his entire chair and remind MC to clean the new after watching porn) but??? sometimes the entire "I'm gonna let Levi run over me", "Oh no we can't do that", "Uh....I'm not gonna say I don't like it" Say you don't like something. Tell Levi to stfu. Bite Satan's head off sometimes, like damn 💀 I get that these are supernatural creatures that could easily end your life in a drop of a hat, but having Solomon's bloodline pretty much is semi-plot armor for them so utilize ittttt. BUT that's just me.

SPEED AND VIOLENCE

im subscribing to the shadowheart werewolf agenda

All I hear when dudes with no wife, life or kids when they talk about over throwing the government and "someone has to do something" is this

Always the voice, never the hand.

The way Juno Steel and overall The Penumbra Podcast wracks my brain is insane

The criminal x detective enemies to lovers to confusing enemies/heartbroken lovers to pining to lovers to another confused enemies with apparent one sided pining is so insane because will they or won't they

Please it's been 3-4 years since I've started this I need to know how this ends this slowburn is so SLOW

throw me to the zenin clan cause shit, ion wanna work anymore😭 send me back to the kitchen😭 idc anymore😭

oh baby YOURE SO MUCH BETTER THAN THE ZENIN CLAN !!!

“Don’t complain about the Gorn in SNW, the episode wasn’t even about them it was about Uhura. The Gorn were an environmental threat that could have been replaced by a snowstorm.” Okay? Then they should have been a snow storm?

Like, if you’re going to bring back an iconic species, at least having them be recognizable is a prerequisite. If they’re only there to be scary environmental background horror then they don’t need to be the gorn. They could be a whole new made up alien. Or, you know, a snow storm.

Realest scene in sonic x is when he rescued a robot and that robot immediately fell in love with him

its not who i am but who i couldve been

literally 4 posts that i've posted within the past 2 days are in my popular posts section,,,,, what

Oh my god Juliette do what Eleanor is asking you to.

Like ok you like cal and that’s why you don’t want to kill her. Bite this actor tho. You don’t know her you don’t care about her just kill her!!!

staff: our april fools joke this year is a silly feature that doesn't really do anything but give you a button to boop other users! they have to opt-in first though :)

me:

pro-AI in the sense of "they taught a bread scanning computer to recognize cancer cells" etc etc

against AI in the sense of "we stole artwork from hundreds to thousands of artists, didn't credit them and didn't financially compensate them"

in the hour or so it took me to draw this op turned reblogs off

EDIT: reblogs are STAYING OFF. op was right and correct and i have never regretted making a post as much as this one. if you want to reblog my art you can reblog something else from my blog. or commission me, lord knows i deserve financial compensation for the nightmare this post has put me through

a great change and a great way to execute the idea