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#i want to shake the creators so bad what the fuck how did u manage to make me love every character
lil-vibes · 4 months
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just finished "In stars and time" :D !!
the final verdict is:
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thatdeadaquarius · 1 year
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sagau with the language barrier issue except... the creator is sick and tired of trying to ask for things so they do everything themself.
and it gives their followers mass anxiety bc they can't even ask what you're doing... bc they know they won't understand anything...
SUCH A GENIUS NARVI 10/10 GOOD WORK SORRY IM SUPER LATE BUT THIS IS *chefs kiss*
Like, that's literally how I feel like I first played Genshin LMAO
Also this has a cont. Part 2 at the bottom bc tumblr fucking hates me UPDATE I FIXED IT THANK FUCK
Paimon was like "and then we go to Mondstadt- ! NO, not Wolvendom, to Mondstadt! NOT THE THOUSAND WIND TEMPLE WITH ENEMIES OUT OF UR LEAGUE, ENTER MONDSTADT FOR THE FIRST TIME BEFORE U EXPLORE THE REST OF THE MAP!! >:("
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SO MANY IDEAS YET SO LITTLE WRITING SKILL GUYS HELP-
Also warning this is ROUGH in terms of spelling and editing and im so sorry abt that! I have my art show today so you're welcome to come back if you want to see it a little more readable tomorrow lmao
Edit Update 4/6/23:
Revised and fixed all the bad spelling and grammar (hopefully) so make sure to give another read if you havent read the cleaned up version lol
I dont have a beta reader so its just me trying my best ok-
Everything was like kinda chaos tbh at first
WOW- MY FIRST 1,000+ NOTES POST??!?! U GUYS, WHAT ARE R YOU DOIN??!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! IM GLAD U GUYS ENJOYED IT SM!! Also look out for more encoded stuff in the future since i mentioned wanting to continue stuff like this + ARG stuff :) <3
Edit 9/7/23: 2,000+ NOTES?? THANK YOU???
Like u wake up under the Irminsul, and u think ur hallucinating a goddamn gacha game for like a solid 5 minutes, or ur lucid dreaming, 
but once u actually took what felt like hours to process that u might actually be in fucking Genshin Impact-
Nahida came running from, somewhere?? Its kinda just very floaty dreamy in here so, unclear, she’s beaming with a giddy little smile (💘)
It’s… so much more than what her game model could manage.
I mean, you knew that, of course you did, but- to see the tiny goddess smiling in person, her cute chubby arms waving in the air, her cheeks all plump with baby fat from her excited smile, pretty green eyes that sparkle only in the way excited toddlers do-
It was just…wow. 🥺
You can’t help it, her sheer carefree excitement, exactly like a child but you know that she must be really overwhelmed with joy if shes letting herself act like that so blatantly, you feel ur muscles tug gently into a smile, you try to muffle it but ur happiness leaks out anyway
She's panting as she stumbles on short chubby legs to reach you.
After just staring at you with those big green clover eyes for a few seconds, she physically shakes her head to knock herself out of it,
Nahida places her hand over her heart, and bows elegantly, going back to looking at you with a small but bright smile, her voice is kind of quiet, muffled in a soft way, much like her game depiction,
“Hzozn! R'ev yvvm dzrgrmt gl nvvg blf! R wrwm'g gsrmp blf dlfow wvhxvmw fmgro R dzh zg ovzhg z uvd gslfhzmw bvzih low!” *
…Nahida begins to look a little concerned… her eyes get impossibly bigger.
…Oh no.
Nahida had apparently quickly spread the news that you can’t understand them, but luckily it seems like all the characters still know you!
Alhaitham is pretty much a constant by your side, you knew he was vaguely studying linguistics in the akademiya… but that knowledge still didn’t prepare you to be intensely stared at with his diamond pupils for hours. 💀
Then he’d tap your shoulder or something, and you quickly picked up that he wanted you to just try and say something.
Then he would scribble for hours.
Turns out they can understand you about as much as you understand Teyvat language (s? You can’t even tell if there are multiple languages, that’s how unrecognizable this language is, damn)
The more extroverted or friendly people, like Venti, Yoimiya, Kazuha, Jean, Noelle, Amber, Xingqiu, Hu Tao, Zhongli, Ganyu, Barbara, Beidou, Collei, Ayaka, Gorou, Nilou
At least attempt to talk to you, and try very hard to watch what you gesture with your hands or body language
They're pretty much ready to play charades at all times for you lol
Interestingly enough, they only ever understood you when you typed in the chat (with other ppl)
But even then not immediately, 
Sumeru scholars basically had to make a whole new department (regardless of how much you play with others) to decipher your ancient language (to them) like those old clay tablets with cuneiform we’re still translating?
Like that, your words appear in elemental magic heavy places (so like that abyss lang. It’ll appear on walls or structures, so like Andrius’ stone colosseum? in Wolvendom gained some of your chat replies inscribed and glowing a rainbow of colors on the top edges of the walls)
Much like the abyss language you see throughout genshin, most Teyvat scholars (across nations/internationally) agreed your language is the oldest form of language known!
It’s like modern languages having roots in older ones, like English with Latin, greek, or German roots, or Sanskrit and the Prakrit for Hindi language today
…so of course no one really speaks the root languages anymore, because they’re so old, so those ancestors who spoke those languages would have little to no understanding of their modern counterparts…
Occasionally if you turned your mic on for whatever reason there would be a gentle whisper on the winds in Mondstadt of your voice,
or your laugh in the waves washing ashore in Inazuma and Fontaine,
your startled noises or screams from battling bosses mixed with the landslides in the mountains of Liyue
So they know what you sound like, but that doesn’t mean they understood your language :/
Nahida had been hoping that you’re actual physical form being here would help improve the language barrier
But unfortunately, those things remained the same, but at least you were physically here to talk to now and give more content for the scholars to study rather than them having to make do with your snippets of language from chats
…so needless to say, it took you a long time to realize they viewed you as a god of sorts.
You kind of knew something was up when at least two allogenes were by your sides at all times, or eremites would replace them if they really couldn’t stick around
You figured they knew you weren’t nearly as combatant-ready as they were at all times, hell you obviously didn’t have a vision hanging off you somewhere, and you only really had a knife strapped to a belt, courtesy of the Thirty Corps
You are still kind of convinced that the people of Teyvat, or Sumeru at least, are just pretty polite (and in the allogenes case, very kind or friendly, even people like Alhaitham or Cyno, resting bitch faces they have, seem to soften a little when they’re walking around with you… maybe you’re just imagining it…)
And as much as you would love to wait until they understand you to do something more fun, as you can see the frustration on Tighnari’s face (and his ears try to flatten back hehe) as he looked like he was debating heatedly with some of the Sumeru sages who insist you stay in the city
…so why not go?
It’s not like they’re going to get it anytime soon, and it’s still too frustrating for yourself to charade things or draw things for them because you can’t even hear their guesses 💀
You can totally handle being like the traveler too, 
You still have access to your inventory afterall! Plus, lucky for you, you still find a pass for the Serenitea Pot in your little pocket dimension!
So now you have somewhere to sleep at night, and while most of your stuff went to the traveler’s pack, the things like Primogems
(which.. Okay now you really want primogems bc theyre so pretty and shiny irl)✨️
And other high-level things, or just objects of no use for the traveler (so basically all your hoarded level up stuff and infinite amount of weapons lol) came along with you
So you did have to wander the first week or so around the city and even commission the Adventurer’s Guild to grab you food supplies to cook with
Filling up, along with a few big waterskins, you’re off!
...and everyone collectively has a heart attack!
When you show up in Ghandaraville essentially all “✨️💖☺️✨️” on Tighnari’s doorstep-
He chokes on the tea he’d been sipping on before he opened the door lol
He looks a little frazzled so you try to just gesture with “calm yourself small animal” energy with your hands
“Tivzgvhg Oliw! R'n- R- sld wrw blf-?! Mvevinrmw, xlnv rm, xlnv rm, ivhg! ...R mvvw gl hvmw z nroorlm ovggvih mld gl ylgs gsv vmgriv xrgb lu Hfnvif, gsv Zxgrmt Tizmw Hztv, zmw gsv Nzgiz nlhg orpvob…” he began out looking at you and talking and gesturing to his small dining table (the game sucks, his house looks great and has lots of cool rooms filled with interesting plants… oooo…so pretty...) 
But then he kinda just devolved into rambling, no need to understand, you can read the vibes and just know that's what he's doing lol
Collei eventually ducks in, and she looks a little panicked?
She’s quickly followed by Cyno, pushing past her to call out into the house,
His voice seems hard and stressed, looking at Tighnari, “Grtsmzir, szev blf hvvm gsv Tivzgvhg Oliw zmbdsviv, gsvb dviv hvvm xlnrmt gl Tszmwziezeroov ozhg-” 
Cyno stops and blinks.
Collei’s mouth is slightly dropped open, she also just, blinks.
You blink. 
Tighnari blinks tiredly, he looks like he’d rather be done for the day, you think.
The doctor sighs, and moves his head to nod towards the other dining seats.
Sumeru foods are so much better looking in real life, and they’re so good too, your practically bloated by the end of dinner, 
As a thank you, bc u cant say it obv, you just gesture for Tighnari to stay sitting, and he gives you a raised eyebrow and a suspicious ear twitch
But stays still, and you reach out to finally hit the eight-pointed star hovering over his, and all playable characters chests at all times.
Like you suspected, it brings up a holographic character menu, but rather than his full model, it kind of hovers in front of Tighnari’s face, replacing his old 3D model self with framing the real thing for a portrait just in front of his face
The poor Denro user nearly jumps a foot out of his chair as he looks in shock at your screen, you do the same “chillll boy” gesture with your hands and press his shoulders for a second to remind him to not run off or panic
Cyno and Collei had done the dishes and put up leftovers, and are now standing behind Tighnari, watching with equally wide eyes,
“...Dszg ziv gsvb wlrmt gl blf?
Cyno’s voice is even deeper and quieter than usual, you feel goosebumps run up your spine
“Ziv blf tvggrmt yovhhvw, Nzhgvi Grtsmzir?!” Collei’s sweet voice is also hushed like she’s witnessing something sacred, Tighnari gently shakes his head negatively in response, his shoulders shrugging,
“Nzbyv? R uvvo... z orggov hgilmtvi, zmw nb Erhrlm rh zxgrmt fk zh dvoo…”
Though he’s replying, Tighnari’s eyes haven’t once left your ancient magic? technology device? hovering in front of him,
and as he crosses his arms and squints to try and look closer at everything floating in front of him, you can see the childlike gleam of awe in his green eyes, (so cute) in fact, now that you glance up and look, both Collei and Cyno have the same quietly excited and fascinated sparkle in their eyes too
With a displeased sneer, you chuck his old level one bow into the material grinding spots, hope he wasn’t attached to that…
Oh well, he’ll like the new one better, afterall, with no characters, all your best weapons and artifacts are ready to use!
With a small smile of reassurance, you finally finish gearing Tighnari up, tap a miniature version of that 8-point star in the corner like an “X” button, and it retreats like a classic TV set📺 turning off into his chest, he startles but then carefully stands
You decide to just start making decisions bc its worked out so far ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
And grab his hand and haul him out into the forest, Collei letting out a surprised squeak, her and Cyno hurrying after
You reach the nearest clearing, and gesture at Tighnari like a bow and arrow firing, he gets it, and your glad he already trusts you, because he doesn’t take long to summon his bow
He takes aim at a smaller tree about two cars length away
You can feel them all holding their breathe, as Tighnari charges it with Dendro, the arrowhead glowing, (it looks so cool and badass irl god you feel envious even tho ur already here-)
The ranger lets it fly, it streaks neon green, whistling through the air, it hits the tree-
and it fucking explodes.
Vines and leaves and the trees roots all rapidly swell like theyre filled with water, like it literally got hit by a superhero with plant powers, which, not that far off actually.
The green floating Dendro seeds make a ring around the tree its so full of elemental energy-
You give a wild grin, you still got it, hell yeah. >:)
Your grin widens as you look over at Tighnari, Collei, and Cyno
Cyno has a smirk lighting up his face, eyes eager, Collei’s jaw has dropped and she’s just frozen staring as the tree finally settles from the burst of the dendro powered arrow
…Tighnari has lowered his bow, and his mouth is only slightly open, his ears perked straight up into the air, shaking with excitement? Happiness? Interest? You don’t know how peopl-animal-hybrid ears work,
and you STILL cant talk to any of them to ask what they thought, so looks will have to do >:/
Tighnari is the first to move, his head snapping over to look at you, the brightest, kinda feral tbh, smile taking over his face-
“Blf pmld, dv xzm'g fmwvihgzmw blf, zmw blf fh, bvg R xzm'g dzrg gl hvv dszg rm gsv dliow blf'iv tlrmt gl wl mvcg. Blf'iv znzarmt."
… and you just 🙂? Cool!
And give a thumbs up👍LMAO
Bonus:
Alhaitham was literally running around Sumeru City trying to find you when you left, tho you did try and leave a translatable-in-3-to-5-business days-note, he didn’t have time to translate that because you were gone.
Or worse, lost in the city, and he would never forgive himself if he lost you, esp as Acting Grand Sage-
Kaveh got a letter a day and a half later from Tighnari letting them know you were having a sleepover in Ghandarvaville lol
Kaveh also had to hunt down Alhaitham to give him said news, then force his roommate to go sit or lay down for the rest of the day to recover lmao
(Haitham honestly kinda freaked Kaveh out bc he’s never seen him that... desperate, it was like seeing a statue emote lol)
ARE YOU KIDDING WE ALMOST HIT LIMIT AGAIN?!
Bro has anyone else had this problem???
I literally had to switch from PC to mobile and copy and paste it there to get all my shit in and tumblr not throw a hissy fit???!!!
FUCKING TUMBLR- SUCK MY BIG FAT- 👹👹 UGH
ANYWAYYYY SO I FINALLY CAVED 
And started doing ciphers for when you dont get teyvat’s language! I meant to do something fun like this for awhile but I wasn’t sure if that would be kind of annoying, but if you’re interested in learning what they actually say (which the whole point of this is that dw it doesnt rlly matter lol) here’s a hint:
*hint = Atbash
:> good luck!
Wish me luck on my art exhibition today!! Then I’ll be homefreeeee 😭
Safe Travels,
💀♒
♡ the beloveds ♡
@karmawonders / @0rah-s / @randomnatics / @glxssynarvi / @nexylaza / @genshin-impacts-me / @wholesomey-artist
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razieraz-blog1 · 7 years
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BBs Racer Au! Chapter One
Hewwo! Before this begins let me explain a couple of things. First off, I am not a good writer compared to most, so please don’t praise me for my efforts. Second, please excuse bad grammar and or any spelling mistakes as due to troubles in the past I mix up a lot of words and I was never taught Proper Grammar :/. Third, this may not be how you’d expected it to be as it may not be as great as I wanted it either, sadly I can’t work on it more ;-;.  Also another thing, Thanks for the support onto this Au. Now another Au that people were supporting was the For Honor Au, I sadly paused the creation of it unless a good writer is willing to be the writer for it but at least let people know I am the creator of it. Another thing is, I don’t know the names of the types of cars and or the brands soooo I���mma say cars instead :D. Anyways, I hope ye Enjoy :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD <3
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     Engines roared and people cheered, music played. Small party like lights brighten the large alley way, cars and party people filled the alley way. Six cars sat in the middle as if they were stars of the party. A Young girl, who looked to be in her earlier 20′s walked between the cars til she reach a point that is had read, “START” on the ground. She looked at the crowd with eyes full of excitement and waited for there to be barely of any talk, she held what looked to be a gun and a red flag.Once talk was low in the crowd she looked at the cars as she walked back and forth in a sexy type of way, the cars started to purr. She stopped and stared to the crowd along with the cars, she aims the gun high to the air then...”BANG”, the gun was shot of as she waved the flag down. The Cars dashed off and crowd began up once more. As the cars dashed among each other, a Black and white car with a nice Black and red inside ((as in seats and what it looks like)) had dashed ahead of the other cars, leading the race. 
Evan cheered as he looked in his mirror to see the other cars back further from him. He was in the lead for the first lap around the streets till he spotted a black and blue car dash further than the rest behind them, quickly catching up to him. He stared at his controls and the street, focused to winning or at least making it second. The other car quickly managed to end up to the right Evan’s car, driving the same pace as Evan. The blue and black car rolled down it’s window, soon so did Evan roll down his, Evan looked over towards the other car. The Driver of the other car stared at him with his mask, the driver slowly took off his mask to reveal his clown painted face, he then pointed a middle finger to Evan before dashing a head of Evan, stealing first place. Evan growled under his breath, he decided to check on the cars behind, they were closer than before. Evan swore under his breath as yet another car slowly makes it’s way closer towards him, Evan put more to his power and pressed harder down on the pedal, quickly gaining more speed.  The other car managed to easily keep pace directly behind Evan, this made Evan too focused to realized what the other driver was trying to do. The other driver dash a bit ahead of Evan, in doing so the driver purposely made the end of their car hit the front of Evan’s, making Evan spin out of control. Evan started to panic, doing everything he could to try and stop the car, nothing was working for a while. Evan finally managed to slow the car, but the effort wasn’t worth as the car had hit a pole, making the car flip upside down with Evan inside. Everything seemed to shake, nothing seemed still. Glass from the windows broke into many pieces, all of the shattered glass spreading everywhere. Evan sat upside down in pain to what had happened, a glass shard was sticking out of his left shoulder along with other pieces of glass that had managed to reach either Evan’s arms or legs. He watched painfully in anger as the other cars zoomed past him, he started kicking and hitting anything he could reach, “FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!” Evan screamed. Evan sat there, holding his head before unbuckling his seat belt which had made him fall from his seat onto what was once the roof of his car. Evan pulled out his phone and went to contact before calling somebody with the name “H20″ as his name. Once the other person picked up first thing Evan heard was laughter followed by, “Yo! Evan! y-you sucking my dust right now? Haha!” Evan sighed in response, “Yeah, I am sucking everyone’s dust because MY CAR GOT FLIPPED UPSIDE DOWN!” Evan said loudly in anger.  Evan’s friend went silent before swearing under his breath, “Damn....was you flipping upside down an accident or did somebody...” the man said in a concerned but also focused voice. Evan sighed, “Somebody...did it on purpose...Now I am stuck with a piece of fucking glass in my damn shoulder” Evan growled, “Damn...that gotta fucking hurt” the other man said before a little scream come from his mouth due to almost failing a drift due to paying attention to another driver, “hey uh.. Delirious, be careful of the other drivers, I don’t know which car it was but please be careful...also get me some damn help, I don’t have Shepard’s number..still..” Evan said, rubbing the back of his neck.  “Hey, I will....by the way, when is your rent due?” Delirious questioned, Evan’s eyes widen with panic, “shit...shit..Shit..SHIT THEY ARE DUE NEXT WEEK...UUUuuughhh I don’t have the damn money, I don’t think I will at all...I can’t even get myself a damn hot dog anymore...” Evan said with a shaky voice, Delirious sighed in a worried tone, “Hey, if you don’t have the money, me and cartoonz will let you sleep at our place til you do” Evan sighed in response, “I can’t...Your struggling too, aren’t you? You and Luke need to share whatever money you have to yourselves same with your living space..” Delirious gave a giggle, “You worry to much and it’s fine..”. Delirious feel silent for a moment after words. “Hey, can we stop this call? I am still in the race...sorry by the way..” Delirious said in a kind yet focused voice, Evan sighed, “Yeah, I will respect the fact that you are still in the race, See ya til you get here, I might bleed out by then thou” Evan joked. Delirious laughed, “Okay then, see ya” Delirious and Evan hanged up as Evan laid there, hoping the race would end quickly.
Once Delirious had gotten there,Delirious went towards the door closest to Evan and tried to open it but to all that he did, It wouldn’t budge the slightest, “Damnit, your really stuck in there by the way..” Delirious said rubbing his neck. Evan sighed, “Well...guess so.”. Delirious froze for a moment, “u-uh...Evan..?” Delirious said in a questioning and worried voice, “Hmm? What is it?” Evan responded back quickly, “W-what about the job..?” Delirious said still in the same tone, Evan froze. Two days before this, Evan had gotten a job from a gang he knows all too well, if he was to get either first,second, and or third place as an award he would get a good bit of money and that was today was the day he’d race to get the money. Evan sighed, “I’m gonna have to call him...” Evan’s voice shank quickly. Evan pulled up his contacts on his phone, he had gone to the contacted labeled, “Chilled” and began to call, Delirious fell to silence for the call. As the phone continued to ring, Evan had only gotten more nervous, but when the call had gone to voice mail, he was relieved. Evan began the voice mail, “Hey..Uh, It’s Evan...so, bout the race..  s-somebody flipped me and my car upside down...I am terribly sorry...If correct Delirious had gotten a good placement for the race..if that makes you happy.....I am sorry, maybe I can do two other Jobs around the place? I dunno....Sorry again...” Evan sighed in relief as he ended the voice mail, Delirious responding with a hopeful voice, “Hopefully he takes it easy on you..”
Back Alley Hideout
 Two Figures sat in a very dim lighted room, one seemed to sit at a desk while another, sat in a chair in front of it. The figure at the desk looked to be in a form of a male while the other was in the form of a female. “Hey, I did the Job and we made the deal, when do I get the reward?” the female figure questioned, the male sighed in response, “I would gladly give you your reward today but you see, I have a meeting in an hour with other leaders within the area, whether they are allied or not”, the female shock her head side to side as if thinking, “I can understand that, boss.”. The two then had said their goodbyes, the female standing up till the door to the room had a knocking sound come from it, “Come in!” the Male answered in response to the knocking. A man with a phone walked in, walking by the female straight to the male, “Boss, I was in the middle of another call so I missed this one and I think you’d want to hear it” the man handed the phone to the so called boss and stood back away from the female. The female came close to listen to it herself as well, “Hey..Uh, It’s Evan...so-” the two began to listen to it till the end, the female laughed, “Heh, another failed Job, eh?” , the male sighed, “At least he has an explanation this time...Do you mind going off and checking to see if this it true?” the male asked the female to that, the female nodded and headed out the door. 
Back to the Situation 
Evan sighed, kicking one of the car doors, “Damnit...what in the hell am I suppose to do?” Delirious shrugged in response. “I still say you should join me and Luke, we wouldn’t mind, plus I did two jobs successfully and got a load of bucks from it so we wouldn’t mind sharing a place with you.”. Evan sighed, “No, Nooo, I will find something other than staying with you, plus I don’t talk to Luke much. Speaking of which, how is Luke?” Delirious shook his head side to side, “He has been doing well besides pain in his right shoulder and right arm due to the last match he was in did a number to him, he did win though...He had to take a bit off, he is still off right now till...I am not sure actually..” Delirious gave a little giggle at the end. Evan gave a small giggle in the end as a response, “I think I understand shoulder pain all to well-” Evan stopped when he and Delirious had heard somebody wearing boots walking in the alley next to the car wreck. Giggling came from the shadows once the person stopped moving, “Well, the message was true. Damn Evan, how many times are you going to fuck up?” Evan growled in response, “Shut the hell up!” the figure started to laugh, “Aww! That’s adorable! Your like an upside down angry turtle, but this time it’s an Owl!” the figure started to laugh loudly, “SHUT THE FUCK UP!” Evan almost yelled, the figure started to laugh even more, “Minx, STOP.” Delirious said in a mad tone. The figure’s laughing slowed and then it coughed, stopping. The figure walked out of the shadows towards the flipped upside down car, revealing her long brown and purple hair and the bat that is held on her back along with her knifes that are held in her front, it was indeed Minx. Minx crouched near a window close to Evan, “Damn, a number was did to this thing” she said, poking the car before getting up to walk around it, “OOoh Really?” Evan growled. Minx stopped towards one of the doors to the back seats, she pulled her bat out from behind and starting to swing at the door, “MINX! what are you doing?!?”  both Evan and Delirious practically yelled in unison. “Okay, A. I found what could be an opening for Evan to leave and B. It is Fun!” Minx giggled before Delirious grabbed Minx’s bat before her sixth swing, “HEY! Delirious! Let g-” Delirious cut her off as he stared at what does seem to be a possible opening, “Yo, she is right, there is a possible opening”. This possible opening was a big gap between the car door and the car it’s self and if it was pushed further in, Evan would be able to crawl out and even if moved the slightest, Minx would of been able to get in. Delirious stuck his arm through the gap, “ Evan Over here!”, Evan looked around, it took him a moment to find where Delirious’s arm was, which it was in the back seats. Evan tried with as much effort as he could to drag his still bleeding and glass fulled body till he had reach a thing of shattered glass which was an obstacle to him, he tried move the glass carefully til he had realized the sides of his vision was slowly turning black. “uh..D-delir-rious?” Evan’s voice came out shaky, “What? What is is?!” Delirious said in a panic to the realization to Evan’s shaky voice, “I-I..I’m losing consciousness...I see ..black..slowly..taking over” Evan’s voice became less shakier and more faint by each word. “EVAN! DON’T YOU DARE PASS OUT!!” Delirious shouted in a panic, Minx started to worry as well as she put more effort onto the door. Evan’s vision slowly came to nothingness, everything seemed black, he heard muffled noises and sounds, some of the sounds seemed to be muffled and broken apart words to him. Evan heard almost everything in a muffled and broken apart form before he had heard nothing, absolutely nothing at all but his own mind. 
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Sorry, I tried my best at a cliffhanger, Hopefully I did good? Anyways this took me 4-5 whole days to write as I made many mistakes and had to remove huge chucks and replace it with even bigger ones.   Anyways, thank you for reading my shit of a story for the Au!
~Your writer and Creator, Raz.
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dreamiejournal · 7 years
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dream #18
i fell asleep somewhere around 3 and it's 4:30 am so it was only an hr and a half (woa actually a perfect, full sleep cycle) but that felt like fucking ages. i'm still feeling paralyzed with fear but i really need to get up and pee because i think that's actually what contributed to this (anxiety? tension?) 
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 in this dream i kind of ended up in this room that looked kind of like an unfinished basement. in the room, there was one of those faceless mannequin things that was all white. it was functional and basically sentient. it was called a Psychopath and it was violent and acted very human with a robotic voice. the Psychopath started chasing me and threatened to kill me but then i ended up running right into the laboratory of its creator, who i referred to as the "Architect.” I was injured and scared and thought he would help me, but because the Architect discovered that I had somehow gotten into his lab, he got angry and forced me into one of those long, glass chambers and I just sat there and curled up into a ball, scared out of my wits
i fell asleep in the chamber and in my dream i woke up in my own bed at home. literally this is one of those nightmares where you think you’ve woken up but it’s you waking up to another layer of dreaming and it’s just awful. i was shaking and i got up and grabbed my laptop, which was next to me on my bed (it’s actually there too irl rn, which is exactly what i just did to write this down and it’s kinda scaring me). i started researching the Psychopath robot, trying to see if i could find more information about it, and if it was real, and it turned out that this kind of robot belonged to the broader Sociopath species of mannequins (wtf???). i just remember scrolling through ages of those terrifying mannequin robot things... i found this website that asked me to do some kind of thing but idr what. all i remember is that at one point i looked away from the screen and towards my closet and it was like my very fuckING paranoia manifested in dream hallucinations. i started hallucinating all these grim reaper type apparitions and tall chain mail ppl and there was this horrible keening sound in my head and all the images were blurring into one another with red waves andi couldn’t escape it and holy fuck i’m like shaking as i write this because that kind of paranoia is my worst fear and it’s exactly how i believe my fears and paranoia would come into perceptual existence. 
at one point it let up enough for me to grab my bearings and i was recovering from the shock of it exACTLY LIKE I WAS RECOVERING WHEN I WOKE UP FROM THIS DREAM but this is real life now. i know it is real life now. it’s okay. i’m okay. i was lying flat on my back in my bed which i hate doing because i always get sleep paralysis and dream me was thinking that maybe the reason the “bad dream” i had (which was a dream inside a dream) was because i slept on my back. SCARILY ENOUGH I ACTUALLY SLEPT ON MY BACK TONIGHT BC I VISITED HOME AND I DON’T LIKE SLEEPING FACING AWAY FROM THE CLOSET. I’M A PARANOID BABY. anyway. in the dream i managed to shakily get out from under the covers and run to my parents’ room. i could still hear the sound in my head slightly and it was like i physically ran through a wall of the paranoia that hit me. when i got to their room i ran to my mom and started shaking her and told her i was scared and had a bad dream and that bad things were happening (when i was little i actually did do those things and sometimes my mom would sleep in my bed with me or i would just curl up on the ground next to her bed..... oh god i was pitiful..) and like always she gave me a big hug and let me get into bed with her and held me in her lap like a little kid while i was terrified out of my mind. i went on my phone and continued doing my research and i stumbled upon an amazon review page for the website i was on???? it literally said that a bunch of other people had experienced the same kind of hallucinations i did so they gave the website like 1 star.
suddenly the dream changed again and i woke up back in the chamber. my heart was pounding and i pressed up against the glass trying to figure out where the Architect was. somehow i managed to get out of the chamber thing and i kind of peeked around the corner through an empty doorway and saw the Architect carrying a torso piece over to this mounted mannequin head on a stand. there was neon purple electricity flowing through its head and then the architect attached its body n i got even more scared knowing that it was closer to completion. the Architect realized i was just standing there around the corner and explained to me that he was designing another sociopath and apologized for the other one going awry.
i was angry and scared still but there wasn’t much i could do. the Architect said he’d let me go and I agreed, but I was still afraid to go back into the open basement bc I thought I’d see the Psychopath again. the Architect reassured me that he reprogrammed it and shut it off so it shouldn’t be able to do anything again. i reluctantly agreed and all of a sudden Angeline appeared in the dream and walked back with me to the door. i opened the door and was about to leave, but angeline was like “are u not going to take anything” and inside i was like oh shit i should maybe i can turn off that other robot he’s making??? so i went back and the architect heard me trying to get back into the lab and said “i know you’re still there. don’t take anything” and i turned back to leave again. but once i got to the door i opened it so it made a convincing sound that i was leaving and then i crept back into the lab and tried to pull off the torso of the Sociopath. it didn’t work tho and I was caught but for some reason I wasn’t locked up again. the Architect just told me, slightly more exasperated this time, to leave and i agreed this time. 
it was so weird bc right after i left the building, i ended up going right back in again and i saw that the interior had drastically changed and it was no longer the gray, sterile-looking environment of before. now it was like the same room shape, but the ground was covered in grass and flowers, there were no Sociopaths, and the sky outside through the windows was blue instead of just gray slates of nothing. i sat down in the grass and it was so sunny and beautiful and i was in a bathing suit for some reason. it was blue with little polka dots even though i own nothing of the kind. all of a sudden, the door opened again and a woman with dark hair that kind of looked like alex (v*ausem*n, i don’t want this to fill the tag lol) and she looked at me with this kinda sultry smile and sat down across from me in the grass. it turned out that the room was designed to react to the energies of the people in it and basically the room generated an ocean atmosphere. i’ll call the girl alex for now lol even though she didn’t have a name. anyway alex started smiling and i said something like “oh, ocean. makes sense, since i look like this” and then she looked over and looked me up and down basically and then all of a sudden i’m like making out with this girl in the grass of this weird basement type room
ofc THIS is when my body chooses to wake up so 
yeah um this was so long but i really needed to flesh it out bc i was feeling really scared earlier and i feel better now that i took time to write it down. jeez its 5 am now i should sleep
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