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#i literally dont know how to get over that scene yo
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Wake up call from dead apple is the only song ever
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thelastharbinger · 9 months
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Tidbits of ATSV That I Enjoyed (Or Alternatively: Just Miles Being The Most Endearing Spidey Ever)
Miles patting The Spot's head after successfully webbing him (I don't see this as condescending, but rather him still engaging with the humanity of a villain like Spot) and ~very assertively~ telling/asking him not to escape.
"I'm like Robin Hood-if he gave to himself."
Miles' spidey senses going off when he arrives late to his dad's party because there's nothing more frightening than Brown parents when they're mad at you. Beware the chancla or correa!
O.k. So we all know there are different versions of the movie out there. You may already know that one of the slight differences is when Miles goes to save Inspector Singh. There's a version where you can hear Gwen's voice in the distant background yelling no! when she thinks Miles gets crushed under the rubble, and there's another where she's silent as she webs to him. Now, I have found ANOTHER version (online) where her shouting is even more at the forefront. She's practically screaming and sounds more desperate, (prolly because it's close to the same way her Peter Parker died so she's reliving trauma) and the fear in her voice is palpable. That one haunts me.
Jefferson trying to equate studying for his police exams to childbirth, which Rio quickly nips in the bud.
Ganke having a soccer poster of Son Heung Min, a famous Korean footballer who currently plays for the Premier League Tottenham Hotspur and is captain of the South Korean national team.
Miles having a Sashimi (his universe's version of Supreme, but I just like the idea that Miles loves eating sashimi. Like I know that kid has good taste in food) poster in his bedroom.
The fact that Miles kept in touch with Aunt May for long enough after the events of ITSV that he helps her move.
The Spot saying he was one of the more handsome scientists at Alchemax according to his colleagues.
Miles and Gwen having the same collectible toys, the only difference being that he keeps his in the box and she doesn't.
"Hey, don't try to wow me with big words, man," *in deep manly voice* "I do crosswords every day"- Miles after Spot points out Alchemax as "the crucible of our connection!"
Miles going, "This job is so dumb sometimes" after he tries to web Spot at the deli, but it goes through a hole and lands on his face.
"Nahhh, he seems more Dominican to me." Kinda want Miles to meet a native Dominican Spidey because that dynamic would highkey fuck hard *pun not intended*. They would repair relations between our two islands-PR&DR.
"Almost there Mami *smiley face* *cowboy* prayer hands*"
The college admissions coach at Visions Academy straight up saying, "That's your story! Now, just stick to the script..." Ma'am what???
"Calmate Mami, eso no es my fault."
"I've hit a lot of different villains with a lot of different food...I'm just trying to lighten the mood."
Miles in his angsty teen era and smart-mouthing everyone around him. Love that for him.
"He almost killed his mom as a baby, I mean, look at those shoulders." No but for real tho. Those shoulders are as wide as a truck. Kim Seokjin who??? (if you understood that reference, ily).
Miles writing a love letter to his dad in 2 cakes.
Gwen at the water tower chowing and saying how feelings make her hungry after her and Miles talked about how they can't be together cause it would end in tragedy. Like Gwen, come again?!
Also, Miles' and Gwen's talk at the Williamsburg Bank Building being lowkey the catalyst for the 2nd/3rd acts of the film. Without them both kind of silently admitting their feelings for each other, Miles probably wouldn't have chased after her the way he did. Pretty sure you know the rest.
"I bet she doesn't even speak Spanish," and Jeff going "Que barbaridad" in his very broken Spanish. Queue Rio's bombastic side eye.
Both Gwen and Miles referring to Spot as a Villain Of The Week, even though neither of them have spoken about Spot to each other.
"I was bitten by a-wouldnt you like to know? Know what I mean?" SIR. Chill. This movie is for children.
The Spot inverting himself, going from a white mass with black spots to a gaping black hole with smaller white spirals. It's giving Junji Ito.
The irony of Pavitr exclaiming, "Well that was another easy adventure for Spider-Man!" right before an incoming canon event. HIS. He was about to experience his first big loss, and his happy-go-lucky nature would've been challenged.
Miguel saying conyo! when all the Spideys start pointing at each other.
"!Cállate!" "Nosy!" Sidebar: we don't talk about Gwen's banter with bad guys enough. She's so funny!
A lot of the Peters saying hi to Gwen as she passes HQ because she is canonically the one lost love--the love interest they all would've ended up with had she not died, so they all have an affection for her.
Web-Slinger going "Giddy up!" Cause he's swinging up.
Miles offering his fresh new takes on how to deal with the Spot upon meeting Miguel, saying "He just wants to be taken seriously. Like we all do." MILES YOU BEAUTIFUL, COMPASSIONATE GOLDEN SUNFLOWER BOY I LOVE YOUUUUU.
Hobie referring to Peter B. as Humbling Reality Spider-Man, which considering how steeped in tragedy the Spidey lore is, is really saying something.
Miguel's nonono no puedo más no puedo más. His misery is very funny and delightful to me. Little bitch ass.
"You know you're the only Spider-Man who isn't funny." Yes! More Miguel slander in the next one, please! Little bitch ass.
"Snitch!"
Miles shouting out Peter's name for help whilst Miguel pins and lays into him the fact that he's an anomaly. This after he momentarily glitches back to his ITSV store-bought suit. Mimicking the way-in also the first movie-Miles shouting out Peter's name for his own rescue as Doc Ock attacks him at the research facility. Because even though he feels hurt by Peter at this point, that's still his dad mentor and he still instinctively looks to him for protection. Rip my heart out why don't you!
Gwen sneaking back into her and her dad's place just to get that printed polaroid of her and Miles, a pic she already has on her phone.
Earth-42 Miles wearing Nike while our Miles wears Jordans.
#hi. ive seen this movie 8x in theaters and twice on pirating sites. i am unwell#also sorry not sorry for the miguel slander. i am a miles loyalist thru and thru thst bitch is on thin ice#but also literally can't get over gwen “it really is so nice to get to talk to you. me & him its different. in every other universe...stacy#cause directly underneath that she's actually saying. “i missed you. and what i have with you i literally do not have with anyone else and.#you dont know this but ive met hundreds and thousands of spiderpeople. nd even in my friendship with hobie its not like what i have with yo#and im actually really smitten with you. the one person i shouldn't be smitten with bc there is no happy ending for us. and idk...#if i should hold off. and im letting you know all this so that you can decide for me. whether to take that lesp of faith or not with you. &#hope that say yes and make the first move so that i cant but help to just sink into you.“#AND IT MAKES SENSE! SHE MET HIM JUST AS HE WAS LIVING THROUGH AN EXPERIENCE SHE DID. OF BECOMING SPIDEY. AND RIGHT AFTER#SUFFERING THE GREATEST TRAGEDY OF HER LIFE WHICH SHE WAS ABOUT TO BEAR WITNESS THRU WITH HIM. SHE WAS THERE FOR HIS UNCLE DYING AND WATCHED#HIM BECOME SPIDERMAN. WE FORGET THAT THEY ACTUALLY WENT THRU SOME HEAVY THINGS TOGETHER. THEYRE TRAUMABONDED. I KNOW THATS NOT WHAT THAT WO#ACTUALLY MEANS. BUT IT MAKES SENSE THAT SHE CAN ONLY TALK TO MILES BC THEY PERFECTLY UNDERSTAND EO.#anyways idk why im shouting. im high rn. but crazy how all of that meaning was subtly thrown in there. like we got a confession scene folks#from gwen of all people! i love that for me.#also back to miguel: so i know he's hot. but if a hot person were to ever be rude to a waiter we agree theyre no longer hot right? right.#atsv#miles morales#itsv#miguel o'hara#the spot#ghostflower#gwiles#gwen stacy#ghost spider#gwen x miles#rio morales#across the spider verse#into the spider verse
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daisymylove · 1 year
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I sincerely don't know if Im alone on this one, so I want to know what yall think. Again, I may get some heat for this, but it’s my honest opinion.
Something I noticed in my reread is that I grew a slight dislike for lucie in chot, and as someone who had always previously rooted for her, I’m currently annoyed at myself.The thing is, Lucie IS a very privileged and sheltered girl.She was born into a wealthy, loving family and, because of her apparent “normalcy”, never suffered the brunt of the shadowhunter prejudice like Tessa and James.
None of this is a problem in itself, but my point here is that there were always other people protecting, thinking and worrying for her, so I think not only she never realized how precarious her family’s position actually was, but also has no true understanding of consequences and how the “real world” works.She knew in some level that what she was doing regarding jesse was dangerous, but was never truly afraid of repercussions, bc unconsciously she knows there will be someone to catch her . And while I do like to see a character become aware of its own privileges along the narrative, there’s no growing here.She finished the book without ever realizing it, because everything was just SO easy and convenient, and that bothers me greatly.
In all fairness, how could she? she does whatever she wants with no consequences.
I feel so conflicted bc while I actually cheered when she brought jesse back in choi, and always shipped them, I find the outcome of her actions to be low-key infuriating.Lucie wasn’t willing to give Jesse up, but also never seriously considered giving up her comfortable life to start over with him somewhere.That ludicrous and set to fail jeremy blackthorn plan wasn’t even her idea, it was the people around her finding a way to fix her “mistakes” to save all of their asses from jail.
Lucie could’ve had her marks stripped, her father could’ve lost the institute, it could’ve costed Tessa’s life.Those guys had been waiting 25 years for the slightest opportunity to pounce on her, does anyone seriously believe they wouldn’t all automatically think the warlock mother was involved? How come there was some major necromancy going on under her roof and she had no idea?  we know she didnt, but still   All of this was severely downplayed and there was little to no conflict regarding it, and anyone can correct me if im wrong, but none of that ever dawned on lucie.She never fully thought about how her family would be implicated, and nobody brought that up to her.Zero confict just chill, I guess this is our life now .Dont get me wrong, I dont want that shitstorm to actually happen,I just wanted her to become AWARE of it
 she literally brought home this complete stranger to them all (we know jesse, the characters dont) that was 8 years her senior (it doesnt matter his body was frozen for 7 years, mentally jesse is 24), Tatiana’s son, and had been dead up until last tuesday, but nobody save perhaps jessamine, and god it pains me to agree with jessamine had a problem with that.Instant acceptance, no resistance, no objections at all.All it would take for that lie to crumble would be ONE trial by the sword at any point of their lives and everybody was as chill as chicken joe from surfs up
Her fight with Cordelia pissed me off too. Lucie meddled on something she had no right and no knowledge of,and demanded things of Cordelia without even being willing to hear her out. ”oh the poor thing is suffering so much bc of you, why can’t you just take him back?” GIRL, FOR ALL SHE KNOWS, UNTIL A WEEK AGO, HOME BOY WAS SWEARING UNDYING LOVE AND BURNING DOWN MANORS FOR GRACE BLACKTHORN. 
WE know poor james was ensorcelled and fighting it, but what was cordelia supposed to think of it? How dare she assume that Cordelia “took advantage of James going to Cornwal to run away with matthew”? 
The demon of secrets in edom scene was plain ridiculous.”yo I had a childhood crush on your brother, sorry for never telling you, I was embarrassed” is not a big deal.The fact that they needed demonic intervention for THAT so late in the book baffles me
While I do think most characters were severely nerfed on this book and behaved ooc on several occasions (swear to god I have some mild ptsd from all the times cordelia ran and did unhinged things) , my conclusion about Lucie’s arc is that she took her good life for granted, endangered her entire family, didnt grow from the experience, but still got everything she wanted with no consequences or sacrifices.She lost a cousin along the way, but who cares about that guy? what was his name again? Its my understanding that Lucie never even faced a trial.Thats unrealistic and bad writing, if you ask me.When I think it over, the word that comes to me is...spoiled.
And dont get me started on the fact that she found out Malcom was planning on doing full blown necromancy and didnt do anything about it.How that had no repercussions AT ALL still blows my mind.
 The worst part for me is that I genuinely believe Lucie deserved better you know? 
If lucie and cordelia hadnt been allowed to become parabatai, and jesse had received some other minor yet life changing punishment, and we had seen a trial scene I would’ve been satisfied, because at least it wouldn’t have been nothing.
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kaicubus · 1 year
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Sour Like Lemons | Rizuna Ann
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warnings ✩° : fluff and smut, fingering!receiving, praise.
pairing ✩° : rizuna ann x fem!reader
premise ✩° : when your workaholic of a girlfriend starts ignoring you for a very important study, she offers for you to sit on her lap so you can get special attention.
word count ✩° : 2.8k
authors note ✩° : oh my god ann please kiss me idc idc idc I DONT CARE!!!! also i know in this scene a ton of people are being killed but lets just...look past that and say that here they arent and you guys arent on a timer...
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“I thought I made it clear that I need this time to properly dissect the evidence, Y/n.” Ann says, lifting her delicate, latex covered fingers up, her dark eyes focusing intently on the scalpel in her hand. Even when she was covered in filth and bloody grime, she still managed to look so serene and beautiful. But you can’t help but pucker your lips in frustration, as she’d promised you her full, undivided attention for what seemed like an hour ago. In truth, Ann has been laser focused into a hunch that seemed to come to her in a dream, seeking answers to a mystery that hadn't sat right with her for a while.
On certain occasions, you wouldn't mind Ann delving herself into her studies. Yo actually enjoyed watching her usually full, beaming eyes turn into narrow slits as she squints intensely at her work, and the way her short, black bob would fall past her eye line, forcing her to hastily push the strands behind her ear. She was determined and highly focused when she’s in this sort of mind set, and she looks stunning.
Of course, not wanting to bother her in any way, for the time being, you’d been sitting patiently for Ann, asking if she needed anything or trying to make conversation. You knew that even if you’d interrupt her with silly questions like knowing the temperature in the room, Ann would answer as if she were some sort of computer, and it was fun. Until you found yourself getting just a little bored. Swinging your feet waiting for your girlfriend only keeps you occupied for so long.
“Ann, are you almost done? It’s been so long.” You ask, walking up behind her and wrapping your arms around her shoulders. Ann leans back and allows your hands to drape over and cascade down her chest and just past her waist.
“Not yet, Y/n, I told you it would be a while.” Ann says softly.
You lean forward and glance over her shoulder, pressing your lips against her cheek as you do so. “What even is all this? What’s it for?”
Ann chuckles deeply and looks up at you, grazing her cheek against the side of your neck, “I told you, there’s something off about Momoka’s death. Now, can you sit down and be quiet? This is serious.”
“I am serious!” You scoff, “I’m actually offended you’d suggest I wasn't. This is life and death we’re talking about, Ann. How dare you mention such a lie!?”
Ann sets down her scalpel and removes the bloody glove from her hand. She wastes no time in turning around on her chair and parting her hair back with an open hand, fixing herself so she can look at you with all her attention. You grin and sway your hips back a little, content with your affect on such a powerful woman.
“I can see that you're bored, Y/n, but I have a job to do and we’re quite literally on the clock. If I focus, I can find out who the witch is and put an end to this hellish nightmare faster and then everything can go back to somewhat normal.”
“I get it,” you look down sadly, “Can I at least just sit with you?”
Ann smiles, nodding her head, “Of course, here.” Her legs spread wider than before and you instantly smile back, eager to situate yourself between her thighs and press up against her chest. “Comfortable?” She asks, a single eyebrow raised.
“Almost~ Give me a second, jeez.” You huff and wiggle your way further into her body, feeling how she slowly curls into you, wrapping her arms around your stomach for just a moment before moving both her hands away. Letting out a tiny ‘mm!’ your eyes catch onto the box of gloves that Ann leans for to grab a fresh pair, sliding them over her bony, delicate and manicured hands.
“Just sit tight, I’ll try and finish as soon as...possible.” The sound of the rubber glove rubbing against her palm manages to soothe you enough to rest your head against Ann’s shoulder. Watching her work has always been your favorite past time. At least if you watched her, there wasn't room to feel bored and you could relax. Though there were other things on your mind, you continued to watch as Ann lifts her poised hand to the medical instrument into the light, revealing the bloody finger prints on the handle.
“There we are.” Ann says to herself, “Let’s see, what else is here...”
With nothing else to do, you wrap your leg around Ann’s and rub your ankle along the side of hers, letting out a sigh with no intended trace of annoyance. But Ann glances over at you regardless.
“Y/n, stop moving so much.” She says sharply and you straighten your posture on instinct. She had that effect on you.
As some time passes, you begin to lose track of what Ann is doing and take notice to the slightest movement of her hand twitching against the inner portion of your thigh. You’d originally forgotten it was there in the first place, if it weren’t for the second time. You would’ve thought nothing of it, placing the twitch under your radar and ignoring it, or passing it off as a tick—ones she sometimes gets. But after the third time, you realize there’s no incident and slowly start to look down at the delicate fingers that cage around the center of your mustard yellow shorts.
Not saying a word, you watch as Ann’s fingers glide up your stomach and start to toy with your white drawstrings and pull them down, tugging the waistband of your shorts tighter so that there’s a small tent of the fabric, pinching it so that the smallest portion of your underwear can be seen. You flutter your eyelashes for a few blinks, completely entranced in watching the way Ann curls the thick string around her slender fingers, letting the ends flick around them as well. But it doesn't take you long before you feel your face start to get noticeably hotter and feel your throat slowly close up.
“Ann?” Her name rolls off your tongue in a rough whisper, causing her to release an absentminded hum in response. “Are you...Never mind, it’s nothing.” Ann rests her chin on your shoulder and you let out a shaky breath.
The more you stared, the further Ann’s hand began traveling down into territory she’s claimed many times before. The only thing that confused you was the fact she was so willing to do anything of the sort in such a tense setting, when in actuality Ann wouldn’t be caught dead doing something like this when she was working.
You didn’t mind it, of course, but it still makes you think that maybe there’s something on her mind that you hadn’t thought of just yet. Nevertheless, Ann’s fidgeting catches your attention and by not saying a word, she continues to both use one hand to work professionally, and the other to work and focus on you entirely. You swallow and try to look back at the other hand to avoid any suspicion, but the presence of her palm just barely pressing against your underwear makes your head spin.
“So,” you clear your throat and blink a bit, trying to force your attention away from all the perverted thoughts in your head, “Who the witch you think—who do you think the witch is?” Nice save.
“Well, I can’t say for certain. But I believe it’s someone no one suspects. There’s not much I can go off of until I thoroughly go through this.”
“Like...like a fine tooth comb?”
Ann hums, “Yes, like a fine tooth comb.”
Everything after that seems to be a blur, now hyper focused on Ann’s hand, still resting between your legs. It hasn’t moved from before, but you can feel your thoughts eating you out from the inside, horribly encapsulated with ideas as to what your girlfriend could possibly be doing. You try and calm yourself. Maybe it wasn't that serious after all. Maybe, there were no ulterior motives and this was just Ann’s way of being close to you without having all her attention on you.
Suddenly, you feel Ann’s finger tap your inner thigh again. This time, it was deliberate, almost as if she was confirming every nerve wracking thought was true. You swallow hard and before you know it, Ann’s hand creeps down lower and the side of her finger lifts the fabric of your shorts, touching your inner thigh like it’s nothing.
You pause for a second to face her, eyes burning at the side of her head to telepathically get her to talk first. Expectantly, she doesn’t and remains just as quiet as she’s remained for the duration of her study, but you press on for answers—or at least longing stares that you’d hope would get her to talk. Nothing.
Letting out a harsh breath, you shift a little bit, letting her know you know her hand is there, to which Ann remotely uses her hand to dance around the plumpness of your leg. For a moment, you watch her hand trail up the front side of your body, stopping directly at your rib cage, then inching it’s way down to the thick band of your lemon colored shorts. She’s visibly distant, clearly lost in her work, yet her hands seem to be moving on their own with no recollection of what she’s even doing. You go between looking at her aloof expression to frantically looking down at her hand, too flustered to say anything and not even wanting to say anything in fear she’ll stop paying attention to you.
In truth, you can only feel your head spiral from the little touches she gives you, and you eat every last crumb up like an obedient puppy. Ann knows just as well as you do that no matter the time, place, or day, you crave her touch, so what if this was her fulfilling your needs as well as hers?
Slowly maneuvering her way past the waistband of your yellow shorts, Ann reaches the soft, cotton texture of your underwear and peels it away from your body. Her intrusion gives enough room to slip her middle and ring finger inside your still heat, gently greeting your bare and vividly warm skin and mindlessly resting them there for just a second. A second feels like hours before Ann decides to move again, as if she was thinking back to her work all that time, but right back to you she goes.
You can’t help but bite your lip in anticipation, already soaked from the silence and the seriousness on Ann’s face, a look you only see rarely. It only takes a few more seconds before you feel your heat turn into arousal and slick soon following, your excitement practically pooling at her pale fingertips. Ann takes her middle finger and rubs down the middle of your entrance, parting past your wet folds and taking her sweet time to spend special attention on each groove and warm part of you, knowingly driving you mad.
“Ahh,” you exhale shakily, “Ann, what are you...”
Your fingers dig sharply into Ann’s arm, leaving small indents on her smooth skin as her thumb presses against the hood of your clit and slowly rubs circles into it. She doesn’t show it, of course, but the way her tongue prods the inside of her cheek indicates the pleasure she finds in all of this. She knows very well that if she would pay you any more attention than now, she would lose herself and not get any work done. It pains her to see you in such a vulnerable state because of how much she loved it, head rolled back as if it were on a swivel, trying desperately to hold back stifled moans, and well reddened cheeks from all the blood rushing to your face. Ann craved your body just as much as you did hers, but she knows that other things must be done at the same time.
Ann sighs into your neck, black eyes hidden by the shadows her thick lashes as she takes her fingers and gently massages them over your pussy. “I didn’t expect you to be this turned on over me doing this. My experiment, that is. You truly do surprise me every day, Y/n.” Her fingertips find your clit like they’ve been there a thousand times, still managing to throw you off edge every single time. You throw your head back over her shoulder and sling an arm over as well, a needy hand grabbing at the back of Ann’s head in an attempt to find enough stability to control yourself.
“Ah, fuck—“ you clench your teeth as Ann starts to speed up, circling around your arousal and gliding her fingers over the wet slick gathered up more faster than you anticipated, “Ann—shit.”
“You like it here? Tell me, baby.” Your girlfriend says distantly, still focusing on her work in front of her. Her ability to focus on two things at once along with her ambidexterity had always fascinated you. Still, the bored tone in her voice drives you crazy as she handles you with such ease and precision, countering every thrash and struggle your body gives, unable to properly function when her fingers enter inside of you.
“Yes…A…Ann, can you—hngh! Can you go faster…please?” You slur, not minding your whiny tone since it’s just the two of you. With your chest rising and falling quickly, you start to lean back and spread your legs further apart, wanting her to touch you more and more—which she would end up gladly obliging to. Without saying anything, her fingers quicken their pace, curling her joints in short spurts against your wet walls. “Ngh! Ah, hah, Ann!” you roll your head back and breathe against the shell of her ear, tickling the side of her face with your satisfaction. She can’t help but smile.
“Uh huh~ you’re so pretty all for me. I can’t help myself, you know that.” Ann’s breath tickles your ear, catching you off guard when she presses her mauve stained lips against the thin skin of your neck.
Another slim finger enters your cunt upon your desperate request, easily pumping your wet slick into your folds again and again, methodically fucking you into a deep, pleasurable coma.
She leans over you slowly, head tilting to the side to listen to you better as your body convulses under her. “More! Please, Ann…more more more…” you babble incoherently, noticing her face only inches away from yours staring directly at your widened, properly swollen lips. A satisfied grin pulls a corner of her mouth up as she removes her fingers from your soaked cunt, rubbing quicker, small circles on your clit.
“Oh my God—Ann! Mmh!” You're fighting to stay still and in one piece, your back arched to its full extent and hands clinging dangerously onto Ann’s legs.
“Does it feel good, baby?” She asks, using her other hand to pry your knees further apart. She does it with such ease. “You’re such a mess for me right now, ah...” Every single one of your nerves in your body responds on instinct, jerking your body back and groaning in absolute pleasure.
Your mind in disarray, caught between the fine line of wanting to cum and not, you hold onto Ann helplessly and squeeze your eyes tight to the point of total bleakness.
“Let it out for me, yeah? C’mon…that’s it, pretty girl. Cum for me.” Ann urges, peppering your neck in agonizingly deep, wet kisses, “Such a pretty pussy.”
She knows exactly how you're feeling, not by the blatant fucked out expression on your face, but because her hands have explored your body more times than you can recall; Ann knows each trigger, body tensing and hands grasping onto anything they can because the pleasure is too much. She never holds back anyways.
With another breathless moan, you bite your lip back, watching Ann’s fingers swivel inside your walls, disappearing into your pussy and pulling out just to gain some traction, all through your watery sight.
With a choked, “Fuck...” Ann jerks you closer to her with a squeeze around your waist, rubbing harshly now over your clit and tackling your bud with all she can to give you the most attention you've ever received in such a short moment. As you cry out, Ann’s movements slow and she begins to chuckle deeply into your ear.
“Did you hear that?” Ann asks, leaning back and settling her arm back to original place, “Don’t you sound so pretty?”
You both pant, barley able to catch your breath as Ann’s fingers eventually slow, coming to a stop as soon as you’re able to ride out your high, not bothering to pull her fingers out just yet. By the look on her face, you can tell she enjoyed it as much as you.
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quodekash · 1 year
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good morning, friends! im exhausted and only got like four hours of sleep, but at least im (kind of) mentally prepared to revisit the episode, so (you probably know the drill by now), here’s all my commentary and thoughts and stuff from the episode! 
i feel like its important for everyone to know that i made myself an ice tea at 11:30pm because i knew i wouldnt be able to survive the episode alone 
(and dont suggest that the ice tea is the cause of the lack of sleep, if anything it’s the only reason i got to sleep) 
i was very nervous in the beginning cos i was pretty sure photjanee wouldnt be homophobic but also what if she is 
props to her for not asking tinn cos he was visibly nervous/afraid 
and gun told gim and she didnt even say anything at first. she just looked so freaking proud, then hugged him and said “whoever you love, i love” and i love her so much she’s a freaking perfect mother 
PHOTJANEE’S NEURODIVERGENT AND AWESOME HUSBAND who is still nameless IS SITTING NEXT TO HER SO HE’S GONNA SAY SOME HELPFUL AND SUPPORTIVE WORDS 
“were you afraid to hear the answer” im sensing a recurring themeeee (if youve forgotten and somehow havent rewatched the show over and over again, in episode 6 gun kept saying he was afraid to hear the answer of who tinn liked) 
“i think if he’s ready, he’ll tell you himself. give it time. time for tinn and yourself.” I LOVE THIS MAN 
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also side note: she’s really pretty 
i smell a sponsorship 
a canon printer sponsorship 
theyre so subtle with their sponsorships 
“by the way, this printer is so convenient, it can be used with any operating system, right?” NICE ONE GEM, REAL SUBTLE, NO ONE WILL KNOW 
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TIWPOR TINNGUN DOUBLE DATE STUDY DATE ONCE AGAIN 
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AND SOUNDWIN BEHIND THEM (and also yo and pat i guess) 
tinngun are always reminiscent of patpran, but so much throughout this episode it literally felt like i was watching bad buddy 
GUN FINALLY KNOWS THAT TIW KNOWS AND GUN IS LIKE ‘wait did you tell him’ AND TIW JUST GOES 
“do you think this nerd would succeed in getting your love without my help”
AND HE’S SO ICONIC AND HE’S SO RIGHT AND I LOVE HIM SO MUCH OH MY GOSH 
also rip four and tinn’s homosecuality, they have to pretend to date for this music video 
also also WE GET TO SEE FOUR AND HER GIRLFRIEND AGAIN OMG I LOVE THEM 
THEY MAKE ME SO HAPPY 
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LOOK AT THEM AND THEIR IN-LOVE-NESS 
cant wait for the homophobia this episode /sarc
“we just have to wait until the dinosaurs are extinct and humans rule the world” TIW LITERALLY JUST SAID WE HAVE TO WAIT FOR ALL THE BOOMERS TO DIE OUT AND THEN GAYS CAN RULE THE WORLD THIS IS FREAKING HILARIOUS 
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I CANT EXPLAIN IT, THEIR FACES ARE SO REMINISCENT OF PATPRAN AND MORE SO THAN USUAL 
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does- does this count as a first kiss 
that was so sudden 
um
help??? 
theyre so cute tho i love them 
PROM DAY (looking back, how does so much happen in this one day) 
✨gotta love being outed✨
GUN JUST TOLD THE BROSKIS 
and por is, naturally, very excited 
but also somehow very oblivious 
i had a feeling yo knew already 
apparently sound told win ages ago (when? idk man) 
pat having a suspicion about it is actually very surprising 
“you and you, what’s going on? you’ve been weird” 
FINALLY THE SCENE OF THEM HOLDING HANDS AND SHOWING THE GUYS IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR WAY TOO FREAKING LONG 
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AND THEY BOTH LOOK SO FREAKING HAPPY 
IM DYING 
i need to ingrain every soundwin scene from this episode into my brain cos there’s so much of it and i want to see it all forever please 
tis raining and theyre under an umbrella and soundwin did it first 
okay so. it sucks that they were outed. and people shouldnt take photos of other people and then post it on social media because they can, cos thats an invasion of privacy and is not cool. 
on the other hand, everyone seems thrilled by it and tinngun aren’t hurt by it happening so i guess its okay 
in general tho people should not do this cos it could go very badly 
but this is a bl drama not real life so its fine 
I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EYE A NEUROSPICY GUY 
they did the happy arms 
and theyre sitting cross-legged on top of a table 
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i love you random side character 
PAT AND POR BEING ALL HAPPY AND EXCITED IS HILARIOUS I LOVE THEM 
“no one cares about people’s sexual orientation these days. its a new world. right, pumpkin??” GUI4HERIH4IIGU (note to past me: it gets worse. you’re gonna progressively die even more) 
EW PEOPLE ARE MESSAGING PHOTJANEE SAYING TINN’S GONNA RUIN THE SCHOOL’S REPUTATION AND STUFF 
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...what series was it 
did- did you watch bad buddy, photjanee 
did tinn’s parents watch bad buddy 
ive decided they watched bad buddy until proven otherwise 
‘its down to us whether we’re as kind to our son as those in the series’ THIS MAN HAS THE WISEST KINDEST WORDS AND I WANT TO GIVE HIM A BIG HUG 
tiw and tinn are actually really sad about kajorn leaving the student council which is slightly confusing (not cos i hate him, im finding it increasingly difficult to hate him, i just didn’t think tiw and tinn actually liked kajorn) 
‘people are arguing whether it’s guntinn or tinngun’ 
... 
im gonna say it 
i have to say it 
you cant stop me from saying it 
soundwin did it first 
(technically it was satangwinny vs winnysatang but thats not the point) 
there i said it 
hah 
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babes she’s known for months 
(but yes absolutely if you’re comfortable telling her and you think you should, go right ahead :] )
i hate this teacher 
i would like to punch him please 
luckily i know, thanks to the preview last episode, that he does, in fact, get punched, so it’s all good 
KAJORN IS IN THE ROOM WHILE GUN IS DISTRESSED 
I REPEAT, JORN IS THERE 
yay tinn is there with gun while he cries 
thank you tinn for existing 
NO 
GO AWAY TEACHER 
DON’T ENTER THE ROOM 
"im sorry, i was just joking around with my friend, i didnt mean to insult you" yeah, okay, well thats only part of the problem. other problems are: a. the fact that you had to say such a horrible thing in order to joke around with your friend. if that's the kind of humour your friend has, that person should not be your friend, unless it's also your humour, in whcih case, that isnt a sincere apology. b. it's not just that you insulted gun. you also insulted an entire community of people, of students, of human beings, who just want to exist and live as people doing what they want to do. you cant say something homophobic and then only apologise because it hurt one person close to you. you say something homophobic, and then you apologise - in a way that you GENUINELY MEAN - and say you had no intention of hurting so many people, including gun. or, alternatively, dont say the homophobic thing in the first place. c) you’re a freaking TEACHER. a TEACHER is there to SUPPORT and CARE for ALL of their students. a TEACHER should not be saying terrible things where ANYONE could overhear. if a TEACHER cannot be supportive for ALL STUDENTS, then they should not be a teacher. (im a huge defender of teachers cos theyre human beings with lives and families and hobbies and theyre more than just the adult human that tells you 2 plus 2 is 4. but i am also a huge defender of students cos theyre human beings and also children and theyre still developing. and i am especially a defender of students and an offender of teachers when the teacher clearly hates children or isnt a good teacher or should not at all be a teacher. so this isnt me hating all teachers, i love teachers, i could talk about how unappreciated they are for hours. but i cannot stand it when a teacher behaves the way this teacher did. i hate it so freaking much.) 
THE TEACHER WAS “SHOCKED” COS GUN IS A “ROCKSTAR” SO THE TEACHER “THOUGHT YOU WERE MANLY” 
THATS NOT AN EXPLANATION NOR IS THAT AN APOLOGY 
GENDER AND SEXUAL IDENTITY ARE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FREAKING THINGS 
AND EVEN THEN, GENDER AND GENDER EXPRESSION ARE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FREAKING THINGS 
LIKING MEN DOESNT MAKE SOMEONE ANY LESS ‘MANLY’ SO STFU AND GET FIRED ALREADY 
FREAKING YES 
GOOD
HELL YES 
KAJORN PUNCHED THE TEACHER BEFORE TINN COULD 
THIS IS EVERYTHING I COULDVE ASKED FOR OR NEEDED 
I LOVE IT SO MUCH 
I LOVE KAJORN SO MUCH 
IM FINALLY ALLOWED TO NOT HATE HIM AND IM VERY GLAD ABOUT IT 
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DAMN SOUND 
I MEAN I AGREE BUT WOW I WASNT EXPECTING THAT 
‘i HoPe YoU giVe A fAiR jUdGeMeNt oN tHiS cAsE’ bro its not court 
and absolutely she’ll give fair judgement 
shes freaking awesome and i love her 
also what does probation mean 
“don’t use violence to solve problems. do you understand?” okay, yes, im 100% on board with you, i completely agree, but, hear me out here: homophobia. 
I LOVE PHOTJANEE SO MUCH 
COLD AS ICE SHE GOES “if you’re not satisfied with my judgement, write a complaint. but dont forget to add every detail truthfully” 
SHE’S SO ICONIC 
TRULY A SLAY 
“LET GO OF MY SON. as principal, all i can do is submit a report regarding your behavior to those in authority. but as a mom, MY SON CAN LIKE WHOEVER HE LIKES. STAY OUT OF IT. if i hear anything filthy from you again, your penalty will go far beyond this” I FELT HER ANGER 
I LOVE HER WITH ALL MY SOUL 
SHES FREAKING AWESOME 
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and kajorn looks so happy and content 
i love him 
PROM TIME AND THE STIMS ARE STIMMING REAL HARD RN 
WHY AM I CRYING WHILE LISTENING TO YOU’VE GOT MA BACK? THIS ISN’T A SAD SONG 
C O M E   C L O S E R 
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH POR 
OOOOO NEW SONG 
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SOUNDWIN CHEEK KISS 
IM LITERALLY CRYING THEYRE SO CUTE 
(note to past me: it’s gonna get worse) 
aww gun’s in the audience singing directly to tinn this is so cute 
GRBRHKBGRIUBJROBUR
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I WOULDVE BEEN CONTENT WITH JUST SOUND KISSING WIN BUT IM NOT COMPLAINING 
I AM THE OPPOSITE OF COMPLAINING 
GIREBVIRUB
TINN AND GUN ARE GOING ON THE STAGE TOGETHER HAND IN HAND 
HOW IS THIS SO FREAKING PERFECT 
AND SOUND’S GOT A GUITAR SOLO COS HE’S AWESOME LIKE THAT 
HAPPINESS 
BIG HAPPIES 
MUCH OF THE VERY HAPPINESS 
their hugs always look so comfy 
someone in the audience asked if theyre real and gun said nothing but hashtag #MySchoolPresident and it’s still so funny to me 
its like theyre telling us the watchers 
like USE TEH HASHTAG, PLEASE 
and we’re like WEVE ALREADY BEEN DOING THAT, CALM DOWN 
ew old teachers 
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shut up with your judgy faces 
no one cares 
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YAY FOR YOUNG PROGRESSIVE TEACHERS WHO DONT CARE WHAT THE BOOMERS THINK 
cos, as tiw said, the boomers will die out soon and then gays can rule the world 
can the episode just end here 
i dont want to go through the emotional turmoil of whats coming 
cos i know its coming 
there’s gonna be a graduation scene 
and im very scared 
my mentally ill butt can never be okay for graduation scenes 
and yet my mentally ill butt keeps consuming media set in the senior year of high school 
DAMN THIS ENDING IS GONNA BE LONG 
31:48 MINUTES 
STRAP IN YOUR SEATBELTS COS WE’RE GONNA BE IN FOR ONE EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER 
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NO 
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WAIT NO LET THERE BE MORE 
JUST ONE MORE 
OR TWO 
OR AN ENDLESS AMOUNT 
DON’T LET IT BE OVER 
PLEASE 
“its the last day of our high school lives.” ACK SHOOT FREAK FRENCH GUSTAV AND SHOELACES AND TURTLES AND FREAKING SHOOT NOODLES WHAT THE FLIP 
AH SHOOT I FORGOT ABOUT KAJORN BEING A YEAR YOUNGER THAN THEM 
HE HAS TO CARRY ON THEIR LEGACY WITHOUT THEM 
HES FREAKING ALONE 
IDEK IF HE HAS ANY FRIENDS 
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
ooo we’re gonna get another pool scene soon 
NO STOP IT WITH THE SIGNED SHIRTS I CANT TAKE IT 
‘no one ever asks if i can sign their shirts :[’ ‘sign my shirt’ 
‘ILL WRITE DOWN WHAT I FEEL THAT IM TOO AFRAID TO SAY’ I FREAKING LOVE THEM 
WAIT 
SHOOT
I KNOW I ASKED FOR IT BUT I DIDNT EXPECT THEM TO ACTUALLY DO IT 
IM IN SHOCK 
LITERALLY CRYING 
WHAT THE FLIP 
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HOLY FREAK 
NO WAY 
THIS IS THE END 
THAT’S IT
IM DEAD
GONE
DECEASED
THEY FREAKING KISSED 
RIGHT THEN AND THERE 
PROPERLY KISSING 
BEFORE TINNGUN 
WHAT 
IS THIS ACTUALLY HAPPENING 
OW I PINCHED MYSELF 
I LITERALLY CANT BELIEVE IT 
“i wont let you kiss first you barstool” HOW ARE THEY SO- GJRBGIKRB
BUT ONCE ISNT ENOUGH 
OH NO, THEY HAVE TO KISS AGAIN 
JUST TO MAKE SURE IM DEAD 
THEY ALREADY STABBED ME A COUPLE TIMES 
THEN THEY KISSED AND THEY SLICED ME IN HALF WITH A REALLY COOL SWORD 
AND NOW THEYRE SLICING MY HEAD OFF JUST TO MAKE SURE IM DEAD 
‘STOP TRYING TO LOOK HANDSOME IDIOT BECAUSE ITS MAKING MY HEART SO WEAK’ I CANT WITH THESE TWO 
I LITERALLY CANT EVEN PROCESS THAT THAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED 
SURELY IM DREAMING RIGHT NOW
THERES NO WAY THEY ACTUALLY FREAKING KISSED 
AND TIWPOR RIGHT AFTER??? IT’S TOO MUCH POWER 
AWWWWWW NOOK AND YOOOO
BUT POOR PAT IS COMPLETELY LONELY 
PLS LET PAT NOT BE LONELY FOREVER 
THEY BETTER GIVE PAT SOME HAPPINESS 
NO?? THEYRE JUST GONNA CHANGE THE SCENE LIKE THAT??? OKAY THEN???????? 
no but why wasnt tiwporpat an option 
they couldve gone down the polyamory route 
as much as i love poking fun at pat being lonely, i want him to be happy, and tiwporpat makes sense 
(i must also say that patjorn also makes sense and i wouldnt have been mad if they went down the tiwporpat route or the patjorn route. theyre both amazing. but no, they went with pat is lonely forever and its really freaking sad. thanks guys.) 
OH TINNGUN POOL SCENE 
POOL SCENE NUMBER... IDEK AT THIS POINT 
they should kiss btw 
GUN WROTE #MYSCHOOLPRESIDENT ON TINN’S SHIRT AND TINN WROTE ‘APPROVED BY THE SCHOOL PRESIDENT’ ON GUN’S SHIRT AND ITS SO FREAKING PERFECT 
IT COMES FULL CIRCLE SO BEAUTIFULLY 
THEY LITERALLY COULDNT HAVE WRITTEN ANYTHING GREATER 
I FREAKING LOVE THIS SHOW 
tinngun still have not kissed 
NO PLS I CANT TAKE IT WITH THE HEARTFELT SPEECHES 
HOW DO YOU CRY SILENTLY 
NO THEYRE PLAYING ONE LAST SONG TOGETHER 
STUFF YOU 
I LITERALLY DONT KNOW IF IVE EVER CRIED HARDER THAN I DID WHILE WATCHING THAT FREAKING FINAL SONG 
tinn’s father is so neurodivergent i love him 
OMG GUN IS ACTUALLY SITTING AT THEIR TABLE AND HAVING A MEAL WITH THEM 
IT’S NOT IMAGINARY GUN 
IT’S REAL GUN 
THIS IS CRAZY 
PFFFFFFT TINN’S DAD HELPED HIM WRITE THE SONG FOR GUN 
THAT’S FREAKING HILARIOUS 
OH MY GOSH THEYRE ABOUT TO KISS- 
darn you gun and your bloody hand in the way 
too many times 
this has happened far too many times 
just kiss 
please
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YES 
GOOD 
EXCELLENT 
but also soundwin did it first 
ANYWAY THAT WAS PERFECT 
OH MY GOSH 
IM NOT OKAY 
(the funniest thing about me constantly saying ‘im dying’ or ‘im dead’ is that my fitbit hasnt been able to pick up on my heartrate for literally hours. like, since i started watching the episode. it just stopped working. and if your heart isnt beating, you’re quite literally dead.) 
final thoughts / main takeaways from that episode (and therefore the whole show) 
tinngun are very cute 
tinngun are patpran variants (we already knew this but still) 
tiwpor havent been dating the whole time but there was definite crushing for a very long time 
pat is sad and lonely and pls let there be tiwporpat or patjorn at some point in the future 
we need a sequel please and thank you 
soundwin are freaking perfect 
this show is perfection 
im mentally ill 
that teacher sucks 
tinn’s dad is neurodivergent and i love him 
photjanee is amazing and awesome and i love her 
gim is the greatest mother and i love her 
i love all of these characters way too much  and, last but not least, 
soundwin did it first. 
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rinbowaman · 9 months
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hii and welcome to another episode of nik and rei’s talk shows….anyways
DUDE my boy heeseung is BOLD AFFF right from the start when he put his hand on her kneecap like …. last chapter it was heejeong and now my boy heeseung here is the one getting bold af and advancing with his moves hmmm mkay
“What do you want? Baby….sis?” that pause between baby and sis BRUV I KNEW IT bet he wanted to take off that sis in his sentence sooo bad I swear
“Night sweet thing.” HEE YOU BETTER STOP IT WITH THESE GODDAMN NICKNAMES-
also can I just say the way you described what we were wearing for the wedding oml 😌 got me feelin like a princess and shi 🤭 ANW
that inserted pic of heejeong with his handsome ass blonde hair and heeseung with mfing black hair TF REI DO YOU WANT ME TO HYPERVENTILATE?? GODDDD
“You would look so pretty in a wedding dress.” …..mhm okay respectfully back off 😊✋ propose first will ya? we’re five chapters in and heebros are already thinking abt marrying us REIII BIATCHH
also…KURT ahhh my mannn he seems like a sweet and cute boy good job reina
“are you two dating?” to which you nodded. WHOAA OKAY WE’RE MOVING FAAAASSSSTTTT
“Hi there, I’m Kurt.” oh shit bro 😭😭😭
I can feel the intense tension and heat in that scene oh my days sorry kurt
“Wow, twins huh? My cousin just gave birth to twins.” our innocent kurt…prayin for you 🙏🏻🙏🏻
also UHM FIRST KISS IN THE CAR SHIITT WE GETTIN SOME ACTION 😮‍💨😮‍💨
reina this end part…..
HOLYYY GODDAMNN SHIT THAT ENDING PART HEESEUNG YOU ARE FUCKINNN BOLDDDDD AFFFFFFFFF
five chapters in and heeseung has already had enough oh my, poor bae
BUT LITERALLY THO HELP WHAT THE HELL 🔥🔥🔥
THIS IS SO MFING HOT IM SORRY I CAN FEEL THE HEAT EMITTING FROM THE SCREEN WHOOOOO IM SWEATING
“Let me fix it." oh we’re fuuuuuucked.
and that cliffhanger rei the loml SERIOUSLY WHY YOU GOTTA DO THIS TO ME 😭😭🫵🫵
dude this might be my favorite chapter out of the five my gosh the writing in this 🤌🏻🤌🏻
this is a long reaction sorry bb 🥲
LOOOVVVVEEEEDDDD ITTTTTT
mwa mwa 💕
I LOVE THIS!!!!!! lol!!!
yeah heebros aren't happy with mah girl y/n, so...yeah....heeseung gets first dibs i guess lol. but man..you right, he's bold af....."let me fix it"
"let me beat and say sorry to it with my tongue." ?????? whooooooooooooooooa! man is hot for her..like he's down bad. golly!
i bet i can tell which part was your favorite ;) lol. and you know just how much i love cliffhangers, but dont worry....bc i'm going to more than make up for it next chapter....oh good lord girl...you thought this was fire.....guess again. yo...even chapter 7......oh good god....you gonna be in for it. dude i can't get over the last quote for heeseung, i actually read it somewhere before a long time ago...or it was something similar to it and i just remembered it last minute and was like "yeah...that's going to fit in nicely" .....i underestimated that damn saying bc that shit brought out Lulu....now we all delulu. (someone put lulu back in her cage...NOW) but you know mah girl y/n...she's caving in. she wants it just as bad, she just in denial, but heeseung right there about to "fix it" .....and trust me....he fixes her good.
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luckyqueenreign · 1 year
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BESTIEEEEEEE OMGGGGG HAHDBDJEISN RIDENGNRIDNENSJDE WHERE DO I EVEN BEGIN?!😂😂😂😂
FB gave us some SAVAGE scenes this week, like praise be!
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You know full well I did bits with Finn and my petty ass is over here smirking that we got away with it😈 BUT THEY GAVE US AN OPTION TO SPRAY HIM WITH COLD WATER?!?!?! Comedy gold.
I also told Dana I wanted him to do the romantic gesture to me and told Kat I hoped Finn raised my HR the most, like girlie pop if the shower bits get spilled maybe you won’t be so shocked now!?
HR challenge… not worth talking about. But whatever I danced my sexy heart out for Suresh and the gem dance for him too. Mama was gonna treat him right and remind him of that time I got paid for accidentally stripping❤️ come on baby let this little cowgirl whisper (moan) in yo ear😮‍💨
Fucking Alfie man. FB, why why why do we keep spending so much time on him?! Clearly Suresh wanted to talk then too so why did we not get the option? The man spilled his heart out and I said NO yet he still wanna take us on a “love tour”? NAUR. Rejected again! Wasted time.
GABIIIIIIIII, the one thing FB kinda got right this volume😂😂😂 I got to tell her I’m through with her stories, give her sass, make her look like a 🤡🤡🤡🤡 over a ring that was clearly meant for us from the minute she opened her mouth, and she’s finallyyyyyyy out of the villa BUT NOT BEFORE I COULD TELL HER SHES NEVER GOING TO FIND ANYONE AND BE SINGLE FOREVER💀💀💀💀💀💀💀 when I tell you I cackled at that, I mean I CACKLED! But also too much time spent on her leaving. Like GIRL BYE!
Biggest plot hole though was MC saying that the ring was like the one she always wanted but literally no one ever described the ring…🤔🤔🫢
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I’ve been playing Finn and Suresh routes at the same time for the last 2 volumes and especially this go around but idk if Daddy Resh wanted to marry us I might have to stick with my OG baby boy. Cause like what if we go that route and he proposes to us at the finale?!😮‍💨🫡
Also this volume set up @mrsbsmooth perfectly for more Jaded chapters🥹🥹
BESTIE I LOVE UR SYNOPSIS!!!! I am dying lolol I cannot believe u told Gabi she was going to be single forever 💀💀💀💀 I didnt have the heart LMAO
As for Alfie....FB LEAVE ME ALONE...I DONT WANT HIM. the love tour. LIKE omg ...im sure the alfie girls ate but how many times must I reject this man?!
As for the ring, I actually did get a description of it! They said mine was a gold band...did people not get a description?? I think this was based on what you said in excess baggage to alfie.
and YESSS @mrsbsmooth is going to kill it on jaded, as she has been, with all this new tea in this volume!
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epiclamer · 1 year
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Honestly dude? I respect you so much, like, writing is very hard for me, I have no idea how you do it and you're SO good at it.
I'm really good at telling stories through drawing comics but when it comes to writing and words and stuff my mind goes blank.
I tried to write several times before and I couldn't finish ONE piece because I couldn't even read them they were so bad and made me cringe so hard. I know that everything requires practice to become better at it and that I'll get better if I write more but I just CAN'T bring myself to do it my writing is so bad I can't even look at it URGH-😭😭
So yeah you're really cool, I love your writing so much, here have some extra respect points 999+ (also if you have a tip or two that'd be nice)
Yo, bro you cant go around saying this shit. Gonna make me cry— hesus christ
Eleven year okd me would be ecstatic right now. Like literally sobbing he worked so damn. Hard to write every dah for absolutelt no reason but to get better. That is like trhe nicest compliment wver dude. Oh my god.
But yes— oractice makes perfect blah balah blah but there are other ways to get better too. I mean, i play word games all day long and just by doing that i enrichen (yall i just got out of an exam of three hours my hands are shaky and my writing is dead gimme a break pls) my vocabulary. Like it sounds stupid but wordscapes like all the time actually helps with my words and stuff.
I also find reading really helps a lot like the more i read the better i become because the better you can analyze and pick apart a story the better you can create on efromnthe ground up.
But some of us jusr dont have time to read, so heres a suggestion. Watch a movie that is an adaptatios of a book. Pick a scene that is in both. Watch the movie scene and write it as best a possibke in as much detail as possoble. Like write the bookn scene from rhe movie. And then check what the book had to say.
Infind this a good exercuse yknow? Because it trains you to write a scene just like an author and really visualise what youre writing. Instead of judt writing fromnyour head.
Hopefully that is helpful— thank you so much for this message and if you ever need an opinion on a piece or are looking for feedback you can always. Send something over here! Rhank you so much that is such a sweet message.
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eddiescumfilledsock · 2 years
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more (mostly romantic) eddie hc because this man never leaves my mind now
CW for having a kid and marrige if that bothers you, I think i made sure it stayed all gn though
-he would love to give you pretty flowers he saw on a tree or bush, even just nornal leafs and dandelions, as well as any cool rock or button skjdjdj
-if you do the same he will get so giddy and press them before glueing it to some paper and keep it in a shoe box with the other little things you gave him and theyre his most prized possessions hed say its a tie or right after his guitar but he's lying
-hes like that its a crystal nothing more meme but instead of a crystal its any neat little thing he found on the side of the road lmao
-him putting fruit stickers on you <3
-hed put it right in the middle of your forehead and say some shit like you cost 1.98 but are priceless to me like the sweet dork he is if you do the same to him he will stick them to the inside part of the lide in the show box too
-hhhhhnnnn him not being able to really buy you a big pretty bouquet of flowers so he picks a bunch of random ones he thinks look nice from peoples yards and those planters outside shops and gives them to you in a gas station cup
-he is kinda embarrassed once he gives them to you because he couldnt get you something fancy and is scared youll hate them but that all melts away when he sees how happy you are
-taking a couple polaroid pics of them so even when they eventually wilt and die you will both always have a physical memory :)
-he would also do that thing if you dont like the pickles on your burger or a specific flavour of skittle he will eat them even if he doesn't like them either instead of just like,,, neither of you eating them
-he doesn't do it becuase hes worried about wasting money or food or anything like that hes kinda stupid sometimes but its okay hes cute and means well <3
-hed do that shit where hed blow his nose and hand you the tissue or burp and blow it at you and say for you babe <3
-a menace
-if you draw or make him something he will cherish that shit until the day he dies, even if its just a random little doodle on a sticky note
-expanding on that, if you're an artist and draw his dnd character he would literally never recover im not even kidding it could look like shit and hed still show everyone, rub it into the guys faces that his s/o drew his character and only his
-if you did the hellfire symbol thing hed put it in the front pocket of the binder he uses to keep the papers and stuff in
-GOD HIM MAKING A LITTLE RING OUT OF THE TWIST TIE TO A LOAF OF BREAD AND GIVING IT TO YOU AND PROMISING HES GONNA GET YOU A REAL DIAMOND ONE SOME DAY
-matching jewlery with him <3 whether it be a necklace or bracelet or even ring, if he picks it out itd be one of those silly little kid ones but if it's t o o childish hed probs just have it on his key ring or hanging in his van though :/ gotta keep up that bad boy rocker look
-if you guys have a special song together he would wanna get some lyrics tattooed on him, that or as cheesy as it is your name/initials in your hand writing
-hed wanna get one with your name and the day you met/started dating/got married at first but it looked too much like a remembrance one for someone thats died so he scrapped that idea
-hed be over the moon ecstatic if you did the same or something for him but would understand if you didnt want to get a tattoo, they arent for everyone :)
-fucking you know that scene from the movie up where they put their hand prints on the mail box? he would do that shit on his van and any other vehicle he gets
-when you guys get a house or apt hed wanna do the same on the wall
-if you have a kid(s) someday hed like them to add their hand print too <3
-carving your names into trees and picnic tables all the time
-hed want you to kiss his guitar pick before any shows he plays for good luck, if he ever gets famous in any capacity hed say your kisses helped
-if you have hiccups he would scare you by yelling as loud as he can no matter where you are then say you're welcome :)
-why do i get the vibes he would be the kid at lunch that just d r i n k s ranch
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AN: i don't think giving gifts is his main love language so this might just be me projecting but i think hed also do these ksjdjd if anyone actually reads this and wants to share a hc pls feel free!! i love seeing content for this dude <3
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stillbreathing-aer · 2 years
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im just gonna spam rq:
tasm and me freaking out about peter parker
yk normally notes would get this but since im here, tumblr will be subjected to my movie rants :)
this is literally just me commenting on the movie, like the whole movie, unless i stop randomly, unlikely, but could happen
the eyes. just LOOK AT HIS EYES YOU GUYS. SO PRECIOUS GKKDKCKKD
bye fangirling over another golden boy. golden retriever boy. kfkkdkdk
gone
this is a problem, how am i meant to function in society
BIEOKFK HES SO CUTE AND AWKWARD AND I JUST WANNA HUG HIM SO BAD
ckekd
save me
HE IS SUCH A SWEETHEART AND I AM DYING
ckdfkfdkkdkckdkskdk CUTIES
WHY DIDNT I WATCH THIS BEFORE
AWWWWWWWWWWW CKDKFKDKDK HES SKIPPING AWAY HOWICKEKKSKS
nah dude this is it for me, she says after saying that about the last three fictional golden boys
gone
THE HOLOS REMIND ME OF TONY man i miss that guy
goddammit pete- may :[
cksskdkk
oh shit- oh poor baby- no-
aw shit dude-
istfg ben better NOT fucking die trying to find peter
oop bad guy incoming
oh nvm
NO
ben
no
STOP
MF KILL THAT MAN
STFU
THAT BASTARD KILLED BEN
IM DONE FUCK THIS
YO WTF
NAH THATS NOT COOL NOT COOL AT ALL DUDE
WHAT THE BALLS MAN
i hope that man dies
AND THE LADT THING PETE SAID TO HIM, WAS WHEN THEY FOUGHT???? GONE DONE DEAD
YOU BETTER GET HIS ASS PETE
NO STOP THE VOICEMAIL-
i am so done w these GOOD FATHER FIGURES dying.
THIS I
oh my
pete lets uh
calm ourselves yeah?-
w no poor Akfkeifieekkwwkwkkwkwkwkekdkekekwkwk the h
THE HUG
GONE
IM GONNA CRY
TEARING UP CURRENTLY
that is so upsetting
EW GET YOUR GRUBBY ASS HANDS OFF OF Her
oh
uh
hm 🤭
oh shit
hes tonna drop him
oh
he got dropped nvm
HEHEHEHE THE MASK
thats so funny
hehehehehehe slay peter slay
SLAY GHE WEBS
oh shit he gonna jump
oh nvm hes just showing off his awesome handstand
like literally just one hand
🧍
what
PETER??
MASK???????
PETER??????????
look at him, little crime fighter
go white boy go
god
damn
how
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehhehe SLAY PETER SLAY.
LOOK AT HIM GO
so proud
hehe
DAYUM PETE SLAY LOOK AT YOU LITTLE FASHION DESIGNER
YOU GO KING
LOL
a cop? in
yeah what he said
hes so funny
HA HES SO FUNNY
ive seen this behind the scenes its so funny w/o the webs there
LOL ITS PRETTY FUNNY BRO
aw how kind of him to give him breathing holes
oh no hes getting cocky 🧍
thats never good 🧍
wow nice going pete-
what a little weirdo /pos
may has to know
oh jeez pete your memory its failing you buddy
aw pete-
aw may- ;-;
peter- :/
lizard incoming 🫢🫢
yo are you stalking him?
rude
i love having trouble processing audio w/o captions
aw gwen :']
shes so sweet
i love her
AWWWWWW SHES ASKING HIM OUT BJDKKFFKDK
gone i love them
ayo lizard time?
PETER PARKER YOU FUCKING HEARTTHROB
GWEN STACY YOU ADORABLE SWEETHEART
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW THEYRE SO CUT EMCKDKVKKRKDKDK
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH HER DAD IS THE CHIEF HAHSHAHSAHHSHAHSHAH
hi mr i dont know your name scientist man
why is your arm so slimy
🧍
oop
he do be transforming though
hehehehehehehehe cuties
wow what a large family you guys have
very cooool and probably insufferable
pete 🧍
oh lord pete
pete read the room??
peter??
peter????
peter??????
DONT YOU LIKE GWEN BUD???
MAYBE DONT MAKE BEEF WITH HER DAD???????
OR MAKE YOUR BIAS ON PETERMA- SPIDERPARKE- I MEAN UNNAMED SUPER DUDE
AW THEYRE CUTE
fkdkdkkddkdkdkdkdkk
KISS??????????????
kfdkkdkskkkdkfkk
they are so cute
im so gone
fkdkkfkdkvkvofkdksofkekkdkfkssksm
LMAO DONT JUMP THAT WOULD BE TRAUMATIC
AGO EMJFKDKFDKKFKDKCKDKDKSWKDKKFKDKEKEKFKDKKDKDKDKDK AYOOOOO PETER PRKER YOU SMOOTH MAN
cldkfkdkkvdkkf
gone
gone done
goen
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
UTIES
cuties
gone
pete dont jump 💀
oh jesus
ahh lizard man is on the loose 💃
wait did he even try the oher door????
MY MANS WAS JUST WEARING IT UNDER ALL THAT????
oh wow
he is gonna be forever traumatized by bridges from now in
NO THE POOR KID GIDKFK
AW PETE-
GONE GONNA CRY
AW PETER MAN I LOVE YOU
AW PETER
aw shit dude
FKDKFKEKDKEKEKEKEKWKE
AW SHIT
OKAY FUCKING GOOD BRO
IF THAT KID FELL I WOULDVE FUCKING BOUNCED BRO NO MORE FOR ME
thank god
HES SPIDERMAN.
HE IS SPIDERMAN.
poor lizard man (?)
this city stans spiderman
SHE KNOWS
MAY KNOWS
they are adorable
look at his goofy little smile
THEIR EYES. THEIR EYES VKSKGFSK
what a dumbass
sorry, dumbasses, plural
sorry, cutest dumbasses
damn scientist man you look like a mess
scientist man and peter man you both arent being very subtle about this
otto in the ps4 spiderman game gives lizard scientist man energy
dr curt connors?
now i know your name funky scientist man
lil lizard boys
oh funky lil lizard boys i see
damn connors youve become a crazy basement man
🧍
all that video for nothing
hehe the web is so cool
oh man thats so sick
the vibrations from the webs
thats awesome
oop youre being surrounded peter man
oh
how
WEIRD ASS TAIL OKAY
EW THE CLAWS EXTENDED FURTHER???? THAT WAS GROSS
man well i hated that
i
pete
you
really just left your name on the camera like that
damn pete-
aw gwen fkdk-
hehehehe so cute
i love you gwen stacy
wow those are really bad pete
TH EYES
the eyes
gone
ckdkfkdkdk
ckdkdkdkcdk
gkdkfkdkgkskkckdkd
they are
so fucking cute
im
gnna
spontaneously combust
as msuch as i think that you should sleep over bud may is gonna be pissed
oh but they are so cute :[
jfdjdjdjj
they are adorable
aw pete-
i love you gwen stacy and peter parker
god they are SO CUTE
im gonna stop living /j
youre losing it connors
welp
good luck peter man
THE BATHROOM?????
jesus connors
welp
i
did he really just mKe a bomb
WOOOOOOOOO I LOVE THAT SUIT
i feel like the peter in the ps4 game is a lot like andrews peter
and i am here for it
ew that regen on the tail was gross as
GWEN??????
GIRLY????
oh shit slay pete
god they are so cute it is almost insufferable
STAN LEEEESEEEEE I MISS YOU KING
pete buddy wheres your mask
oh
its in your hamd thats my bad
aw shit yeah those poor kids- theyre all traumatized
oh i hope this doesnt become one of those scenarios where the sweetheart becomes a cocky bastard :/
it better not ill be so sad
i doubt it will cause peter is the super boy so narratively that cannot be allowed to be permanent :D
so if he does, he'll redeem himself hopefully
i
connors is that a lab coat?
damn well theyre all dead now
unfortunate
oh
not dead
just
welp
thats unfortunate
.....
welp
lmao those people in the bg just staring at him on the call
gwen you cant die yet
i know you dont die yet
thats
yeah
that sucks
cmon peter get up
come on peter wake up???????
I DONT LIKE THIS PETER WAKE UP
oh
nah its fine
aw shit pete
so many people know his face by now and i love it
that one post where its like an unspoken rule that even if youve seen spidermans face you cant reveal it is amazing
oh 🧍
i thought he was gonna
ingeresting
peter how mang days has it been since youve seen may
AWWWWWWWWW PEOPLE HELPING HIM IS THE SWEETEST THING IVE EVER SEEN
STOP THATS SO NICE
AW NO POOR PETE GISKFKDKDK
BYE IM GONNA CRY THATS SO NICE
GKSGJDJVKSKKVKDKF STOP WHAT
SHUT UP IM GONNA CRY
anyways
FISKGKDJFJN SLAY
GONE IM SO HAPPY
NO IF HE DIES I WILL CRY.
yes slay pete saved the day BUT IF GWENS DAD DIES I WILL FIGHT SOMEONE
sorry lizard man connors
IM GONNA FIGHT SOMEONE
NAH BRO
GONE
what in the hell
damn welp
bring him back this isnt funny
i hate this place
thats fucked man
anyways i got distracted
ben i miss you
ayo spidercave??
STOP DID HE JUST SYA THAT PETERS HIS HERO
stop that was cute w flash
anyways, thanks for coming to my ted talk that is being posted on tumblr cause i cant copy/paste the whole thing :)
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Carefull now. (Podrick Payne x reader)
Yo wsp im new to this writing but since I overthink and make up scenes in my head and madly inlove with Podrick here we are. please dont mind my writing and spelling its literally 12 at night so dont judge lmao. Im first making a part 1 just to make sure im not putting all effort into this when it doesn't get any reads so lemme know if you want a part 2 maybe even 3 ;) .
I do not own any of these character!
Violette Y/L/N. The most feared assasin in Westeros. Also knows as The Black Raven. Men say she can kill you with a glance of her sword. No one knows her name's Violette though. She's a no one. No dude, she like literally, IS a No one. That's one of the reasons, she is a faceless woman. She doesn't quite use it though. She hates killing people with another face, its her face they have to see in their last moments.
Tyrion Lannister POV:
Bronn followed me to my chambers as always, he is taking his duty to protect me quite serious when i gave him a raise of 2 silverlings. I open the big wooden door, which could also just be big because, well.. anyways I opened the door to a masked woman clothed in black studying a shining knife in her hand. Bronn immediatly stept infront of me. "Who shall this beatifull intruder be?" Bronn asked being the most horrible flirt of the 7 kingdoms. "Bronn, I hired her." "What." "Now, step aside!"
You are hired by Tyrion Lannister to protect him since Bronn isn't just enough lately. You follow him around most of the time, when he doesn't give you a task you go out sneaking around the castle and steal some golden cups etcetra. *
Violette's POV
"What do I call you m'lady?" The brunette squire asked who Tyrion just introduced you to. "Not m'lady thats certain." You answered, still wearing the black scarf just over the bridge of your nose. "What's your name?" You asked the boy. "Podrick, Podrick Payne, m'la- uh I- " "Call me V." Making the adorable stuttering of the poor boy end. You usually tell people to call you V. "I got your water Black Raven!!" Sounds stupid. Plus you didn't even choose the name! People just randomly started calling you that, and for what? Atleast people know its the Black Raven when you enter a tavern looking like a killed off crayon from a 4 year old. "Well you 2 are getting allong well I see." Tyrion snapping you out of your thoughts. Wait, Payne... Where do I know that from? "V find out where Sansa's new chambers are, you will be making sure of her safety, who hurts her you will tell me, I dont care who it is even if it's the mad king who arrised from his grave. You will be secretly guarding her, my nephew is in his puberty and it's 1 hell of a puberty." Finally a real deal.
From wandering all around the castle so much because you didn't quite get an actual big deal before you knew the castle like it was your knife collection. You passed the library and walked pas- You stopped immediatly in your movements. "Is that Ilyn Payne?" PAYNE! but before you could remember how you connected the adorable squire to this horrible man in the kingsguard you saw what he was doing in the library. Girl, red shiny long hair, quite tall for a girl, looking at him. Sansa. The guard man was getting to touchy all over her. You sneaked just befor the door frame and shot 2 small knifes right over his head leaving his head a little bit hairless and the knifes against the wall with a pin of brown hair. While the duo was looking at where the knife's landed and shoot your shot. took your favourite trench knife out and jumped the man. While in the air you threw another small knife you pulled out which landed in his chest. He gave you an uppercut but missed put the blade against his neck where alot of veins were screaming to be cut slowly, and painfully.
So that was it for part 1 lemme know if you want another!
<3
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tinylittlecubby · 4 months
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I just had the WEIRDEST fucking dream about jj like?????????????????
Okay it was tied into another dream cause thats how dreams work but that part isn't important (I will say that someone was wearing 2 bags of frozen vegetables like they were dresses and yes there were still vegetables in the bags and yes they did get in trouble) but anyway!!! It changes to some brawl in the parking lot of someone's business and everyone needs to get the fuck out (but it was like a bunch of children and some adults I do not know why I was there or any other of the adults. I think the kids were trying to do some legit property damage so the adults were trying to stop them?) So jj (in a tesla for some reason I feel like THAT was unrealistic) drives me and him away from the scene but bro this nigga was SPEEDING!!!! Like got the attention of the police speeding. Like two other cars did aggressive u turns to avoid him speeding!! I literally started hyperventilating cause I HATE when people speed (specifically men, women scare me less when they speed in a car so my reaction is realistic) I tell jj to pull into a busy mall parking lot so we blend in with the rest of the cars and that somehow works. We are now just sitting in the car and I start talking about our relationship (didnt know we were involved but we roll) and I said "I'm scared you're going to hurt me" (yo I FELT SO for real vulnerable saying that in the dream it felt so real im never dating irl I woke up pissed off) and HE GOT POUTY AND UPSET 😡 he said "oh because we are getting more serious you are getting worried about these things" (first of all bitch! I have clinical paranoia issues and anxiety okay I've done been worried about this and 2 I can feel however I want to feel at any point in time and 3 you LITCHERALLY just out ran the police okay I do NOT find that hot its only hot when I do it,its irresponsible when other people do it. Unfortunately I did not say any of this in the dream.) What I said in response was essentially that "im not worried about you hurting me with your hands or words -even though fucking high key his reaction fucking pissed me off which is a type of hurt but I digress- which only leaves one type of you hurting me left and that is physically losing you. Like you dying" and then we started talking about it and he tried to break the tension by making a comment that I wont write here because I feel like its a comment that I shouldn't even be dreaming about (its enough im dreaming about the nigga but im not trying to read his life like that either) and during this i saw my older sister in the parking lot with her friends????? And then she saw me????? And then she came over and was like "haha ******* is with a guy romantically!" And honestly to that I say based,she was valid in that reaction cause outside of this dream thats never going to happen intentionally!! I will make sure of that!! But yeah thats pretty much where the dream ends but it was weird as fuck and whats sticking out to me is how pouty he got when I was vulnerable I felt like saying "fuck you!! I'm out" I was absolutely anticipating him being like "omg honey what have I done for you to think that oh no nono" but instead I had to pivot. I know in real life I would've gotten out the car and been like "yknow what bye boi im walking home have fun speeding in your iPad car" but I felt feelings for him???? Fucking gross. Not gross cause of who he is,he is an extremely attractive man in real life and I would most likely,like 98% break most of my rules for him in real life BUT it was just so antithetical to his public persona his reaction (but then again I dont know the man so it could've been actually spot on) honestly the first red flag that it was evil jj was the speeding away from the police,don't think he would do that irl. Anyway anyway anyway this is what you get when you stay up all night listening to the podcast amongstotherthingsthatilegallycannotdisclose
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thinknicht · 3 years
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Okay, okay, bear with me but… I think Kishimoto might’ve actually shipped Kakashi/Sakura. *hides*
Sounds crazy, right? I mean it’s definitely not something that could ever get published without editors all over the world having aneurisms but… Kakashi literally has more lovey dovey moments with Sakura – KAKASHI! (you know emotionally-stunted, used to be her teacher? That guy?) – than Sasuke ever did. What the hell, Kishi? And if you don’t believe me… well. The evidence is just–
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I think these pictures are kind of self explanatory. However, someone COULD say that it’s just in the anime right? Wrong.
There’s plenty of examples of this in the manga, you know the actual source material, as well. Like…
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that pose with her hand on his chest… ummm hello? i dont think thats routine behaviour between students/teachers ? Especially someone as non-physically affectionate as Kakashi? or am i the only one here who thinks this is… something?
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them just kinda ALWAYS somehow finding themselves standing next to each other. all the time. Every second panel. (I could add more pictures but tumblr only lets me up to 10 per post)
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again there’s the exact same pose but in a different panel. kishi drew it TWICE! he mustve really liked it huh
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him holding onto her despite her added weight whilst literally dangling off a piece of paper over a volcano
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ummm... in the actual anime he was literally stroking her face with his thumb. i mean if that aint a love soap opera move i dont know what is
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More lovey dovey manga scenes. Seriously, am I the only one noticing how relaxed – dare I say, almost at home – they seem with each other? Like they draw energy just out of being next to each other, like they share in their exhaustion, taking comfort in the other, etc? Given, it could just be a very close friendship but it feels like more after seeing those other panels, y’know?
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Kakashi literally standing straight to attention at the sight of sakura having a moment w Naruto. Or am I just imagining how tense he seems in this one? I mean normally he’s drawn slouching? And that bead of sweat running down his cheek? That downturn to his brow? Why add it, kishi?
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Finally I present to you: Sasuke being a cold ass– er, cool avenger… and (surprise!) rejecting Sakura to… wander aimlessly around – surely this must be the pinnacle of unconditional love – but who’s the one standing next to her like: “yo? Still here? As in, actually here”?? Literally what did you mean by this kishi??? Was it a sign??? A message??
I’m beginning to think he made the lack of love between Sasuke and Sakura obvious on purpose. I mean nobody can be this oblivious, right? It’s almost like Kishi didn’t want Sakura to end up with Sasuke but someone was forcing his hand so he went with it, but kicking and screaming…
Seriously. You could even say that Sakura had moments with Sai. Sai. Like literally her helping him get over his Root conditioning (which is a big deal) and putting up with his attitude to see what lay beneath. Sai literally quit Root because of her and Naruto (though Naruto was a lot more antagonistic, if I’m remembering right, so sakura definitely played a big role there) and clearly cares a lot about Sakura (and there’s a panel where he asks Naruto whether he’s in love with her, so he obviously cares about that too). Their bond could be seen as sister-brother I suppose, I think kishi settled on that as sai faded into the background after being introduced, but still. Initially, sai calling her “ugly” is I think canon for him meaning the opposite. So yeah. Kishi definitely at least considered having sai be a love rival to Sasuke of some sort. I feel like kishi’s the type who likes to keep a lot of possibilities open to him (ie. for example flirting with Itachi being good or evil since the very beginning, probably unsure of which one he was going to pick, etc) but anyway. I’m getting sidetracked!
The point is sakura was supposed to end up with Naruto initially, I think. They had so many moments together and honestly, from a literary standpoint it’s what makes sense. The hero winning the affections of the princess who initially didn’t spare him a second glance, the heroine moving on from the toxic love she was embroiled in, etc. Like literally kishi based Sakura off on his wife and naruto on himself. But alright. The fans wanted Hinata to be with Naruto, so Kishi might’ve caved under the pressure… but he definitely couldn’t have wanted sakura to end up with Sasuke. I mean just look at what he did to them:
Every Sasuke/Sakura moment basically boil down to:
“Hn.”
*tries to kill her*
*tries to kill her again*
*abandons her with a baby*
Ummm… HELLO?! I’m seriously starting to believe Kishimoto (or at the very least a lot of someones at the animation studio) would rather ahip Sakura with Kakashi than Sasuke. And Kishimoto too, damn it! And then his evil editor decided that Sasusaku had to be the final pairing because popularity polls made Hinata into the better candidate for Naruto and because “otherwise she’d seem disloyal if she changed her mind after so long”. It’s called character development, doofus!
Seriously, to anyone who has watched Bakuman (meta manga by the creators of death note about writing manga), you know what the mangaka industry is like. I’m 100% certain that Naruto’s crappy ending had a lot more to do with shitty editors and popularity polls with a demographic of 14 yr. old teenage boys as the only participants rather than Kishimoto actually deciding a damn thing. In fact, it’s known that he wanted to end the manga at the pain arc and yet he was forced to continue it, so that proves that he wasn’t given a lot of choices in regard to what to do with his work.
And that’s why, as he drowned in his feelings of powerlessness, he pulled one last act of rebellion against his editors and snuck Kakashi/Sakura Easter eggs into the manga and conspired with the animators to help him. Maybe he even secretly writes fanfics and nobody knows. (I watch too many dramas I know)
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xserpentlife · 3 years
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Spaces
Jadestark-parker Maybe one where the gang is hanging out at the worm and y\n slips into one of her Spaces and is literally beg pea for sex in Secret and he’s getting really upset because they cannot see her like this but he doesn’t wanna leave. If it's not too much can you please use the phrase “is this what you wanted”. Just one more thing a lot of degradation, maybe also a spit kink? A little girl space. She really needs that dom attention from pea
A/N: Hope y’all love this sorry requests are a little slow, I also do not like to do two smuts in a row because I know I have some people on my page who do not read smut so if you have non smut ideas send them in as well because as of right now most of my inbox is smut. Thank you to my amazing beta @wayward-river​ as always go send her stuff and follow her
Word Count: 1901
Warnings: Filthy Smut, Degrading 
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The Wyrm was your safe space but not more safe than Sweet Pea was. You felt like yourself there, safe to be who you were and hang out with your friends. You loved the Wyrm like it was your second home.
You were sitting at the bar waiting for Pea to bring you your drink when you heard the familiar sound of your favorite song, a few drinks in and you were already ready to dance. After the week you had had you wanted to let loose and have a good time with your friends. You got up going to the dance floor moving your hips back and forth as you felt Pea come up behind you and whisper into your ear.
“Hey baby”
“Hi daddy” Pea gasped looking at you wide eyed.
“C’mon your water is on the table”
“But I thought you were getting me vodka”
“I was but now its water”
“Fine” you pouted as he grabbed your arm bringing you to the table, he sat down as you wrapped your arms around his neck and leaned against his back and the chair.
“Baby sit down, c’mon” You swayed your hips to the music, eyes closed in another world.
“Don't wanna” You watched Fangs, Toni and Jug walk up taking a seat at the table around you. “Hey” They all waved ordering drinks from the bartender that was taking rounds.
Soon a loud sound came from the back corner of the bar, two new recruits fighting over a game of pool. You were never one to like when people fought. Call it anxiety, call it ptsd from your childhood didn’t matter. Your one arm tightened around Peas neck as the other snaked around his arm. He felt you tense around him. His hand reached up to your cheek as his eyes met yours. “Hey look at me, I'll take care of it”
“It’s okay”
“No its not baby, they are acting like jackoffs, yo Jug, you wanna deal with these losers”
“Yeah, might as well before they break the cues” You watched as Pea walked over grabbing the larger kid by his collar and yanking him up, before slamming him against a wall, knuckling white as his hair flung in his face. The words he was saying jumbled together in the bar scene around you. You didn’t care what was being said. You saw the kid try to punch him with his free hand, as Pea dodged it and grabbed the kid by his shirt. You watched the snicker form on his face, before throwing him out of the Wyrm. He knew you were never one for violence. He was trying to protect you, not trying to cause more of it.
You were calm again, the anxiety leaving your chest as Pea had taken care of the violent situation that had been unfolding, but the wetness forming between your legs was another. In that moment you knew you needed Pea, you didn’t want to wait until you got home, or wait until any other monet then, right then and there. You moved forward standing in front of him as he sat in his chair and took a seat on his lap. Turning your face up ever so slightly to place a careful peck on his chin. You watched as Toni and Fangs began their own conversation, looking towards the dance floor Fangs pointing towards one of the members of the Serpents he had been crushing on for months. Toni, probably trying to convince him to make a move. The song that came on in the background of the bar making your hips move against Sweet Peas lap, a moan slowly escaping him as he recovered himself with a cough.
“Yo, you good Pea?” Fangs looked over “Yeah, yeah just needed a drink” you giggled to yourself before putting your head into Peas shoulder to stifle your laugh.
Pea reached up grabbing a handful of hair before pulling your ear down to his mouth, “think you’re funny baby girl?” You nodded. Bouncing up and down slighting watching Pea smirk to himself. ”want it daddy”. Peas eyes went wide as he looked at you. “Hehe what daddy?” He didn’t want to scare you or freak you out, or make anything out of the state you were in, all he wanted now was to take care of you, take care of what you needed. The fight must've put you in a spiral after the week you had had. Maybe letting you do what you had been doing on his thigh would get it out of your system, enough for you to enjoy the rest of your night with your friends. Pea doesn’t like for people to see you like this, because you don't like it. It's a secret between the two of you, something intimate and special. “Daddy…” he looked at you before grabbing your hips “yeah princess, wanna ride my thigh hmm?” you nodded before looking forward. He grabbed your hair once again yanking your head back towards him “Listen princess be a good girl for daddy okay, ride my thigh like the good girl you are and cum for me okay, but you gotta be quiet and secret okay, make sure no one knows, got it” You nodded excitedly as he let go of your hair.
You lifted your skirt slightly draping it over Sweet Peas knee as you spread your thighs further apart. You began to ride Sweet Pea, your body leaning into his for stability, hand grabbing his other leg. Pea leaned up “I can feel how wet you are and I’ve barely touched you”. You bit your lip, his words echoing through your body. He moved a few strands of loose hair, biting his lip and putting his hands on your hips to help you move faster. Pea couldn’t help the growing beneath his jeans as your moans echoed into his ear. “Gonna…” Pea leaned down placing a peck to your lips. “Gonna what princess? Cum for me? Do it baby girl, but remember to be quiet okay?” Your body gave out and you leaned into his, your breathing heavy as his lips meant yours to stifle your moans. You were never known to be quiet. But it wasn’t enough, as you leaned your hand to catch yourself you felt the bulge that had been growing and craved more.
You got up seeing the wet spot that had formed on Sweet Pea’s thigh. You leaned towards him, hands placed on both his thighs to whisper into his ear. “I know you know I’m wet daddy, you can feel it, and see it, and I know your hard” you moved your hand towards his hard cock as you slowly unzipped his jeans “Lets go have some fun”. His face red; anger, joy, embarrassment all in one as he grabbed your hand dragging you to the upstairs lounge where no one would bother either of you.
Your back hit the wall with a thud as you heard the lock of the door, lips instantly on your neck. “We shouldn’t be doing this, we are in public”
“S’okay daddy”
“Fine, but only this once, and only because FP is out of town and we can be in here alone” You smirked at him before his lips met yours again. “You’re being a bad girl princess” His hand came down to your clit, your underwear ripped off your body, and thrown across the room. “Is this what you wanted baby girl? You nodded biting your lip while your thighs came together craving more of his touch.
“Kneel for me baby girl” you nodded “what was that?”
“Yes daddy”
“Open” you opened your mouth as you felt his hand squeeze your cheeks as spit came into your mouth, you swallowed it down. “Who's my dirty little slut”
“Me daddy”
“Such a dirty girl yeah, only for me and no one else” he grabbed you up before leading you to the couch and pushing you on it before slapping your ass. Quickly he flipped you over to be under him. Starting to pull down his jeans before you stopped him. “Do you want to stop princesses?”
“No daddy” you got up pushing him on the couch before undoing his belt and pulling off his jeans and boxers, placing a quick kiss to the head of his cock before grabbing his hand and making him stand up and getting back into the position he once had you in. He grabbed your legs and put them over his shoulders. You cursed into his neck as you felt the head of his cock hitting the walls of your pussy. His thrusts hitting deep every time.
“That’s it. Fuck you take my cock so well angel. You love it when daddy fucks you like this huh” You were a whining mess.
You were drawing in the scent of his cologne and his breath up next to you, your eyes ready to lull back into your head, and he saw it in your eyes. “Not yet baby, dont cum yet princess, not until daddy tells you, remember the rules”
“Please daddy” you begged and pleaded for him to cum for you and to let you cum, you needed it and you needed it now. “Oh fuck.” you cried out as he picked up speed, thrusting into you faster, “Feels…so good.  your voice broke as you cried out. “P-please daddy” He gripped onto your hips, thrusting as deep as he could getting ready to ride out his high. Your eyes rolled back, a loud moan escaping you. “Oh what princess does that feel good”
“Please!” you begged, “I’m close! Let me cum” you cried out a tear slipping down your ear, by the stimulation you were feeling, and that's when Pea knew it had been enough.
“Go ahead and cum for me, princess.” Your breath hitched inside your chest as you reached your hands into his hair. The walls of your pussy clenching around his cock. Your back arched as your eyes rolled back. Pea is still thrusting to help you ride at your high as he was so, so close to his. You breathed heavily looking up at him above you, now wanting his cum more than ever.
“Open wide princess, The little slut can’t wait for me to cum, hmm? Just a little cumdump for me to use” he degraded, before moaning lowly he pulled his cock out of your wet pussy, his precum dripping out mixed with your wetness.
“Open” You opened, tongue out as his cock was placed into your mouth. His head fell back, eyes shut as a guttural moan escaped his lips. White cum making its way into your mouth as your mouth remained open. His hand reaching up and grabbing your face.
“Such a good little slut for me.He spit in your mouth and you held it open until he gave you the command to swallow. His thumb dragging across your lip and into your mouth.
“Only for you daddy” You giggled smiling up at him
“DId you have fun baby girl”
“Yes daddy” you nodded and continued riding out your high as your mouth met his. He soon let you down as he picked up your dress and slipped it over your head. His flannel also made its way around your arms. “Wanna go home daddy”
“Of course princess”
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quodekash · 1 year
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its 7 in the morning, i have a little time, lets roll (the commentary for just this one episode is gonna be a mess lmao)
FLASHBACK TIMEEE
little baby gun wearing glasses- hes so tinyyyy
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I LOVE HERRRR
THE SONGGGGG
oh my gosh its not city its a silly song about a bullfrog i love this
aw mannnn he was jokinggggg
i love how theyre speeding up some bits, but other parts theyre adding more detail because it works better for the characters
CITYYYYYY
"im sorry, bro" I LOVE HIS ENGLISH WORDS
I NEED TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THIS UNIVERSE POR, WHY IS HE NOT FLUENT IN THAI
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CAPTAIN PORRRR
and so the captaincy begins
good luck por
IMAGINARY TINN IMAGINARY TINN IMAGINARY TINN
IMAGINARY GUN SCENES ARE MY FAVOURITES
IMAGINARY GUNNNNNNN
i love forth so much hes such a good actor i love him i love him
tinn's little chants and then the ear blows like its some kind of magic spell RHJBGH
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WAIT A SEC IT JUST OCCURRED TO ME
SOUNDWIN HAVE SWITCHED
DOES THAT MEAN SOUND IS THE ONE TO CONSTANTLY FALL ASLEEP IN CLASS??
pls let that be the case
i could have so many thoughts and headcanons if that's the case
GIJREKDBG I LOVE THAT BOTH SOUND AND WIN ARE HERE FOR THE EXAM PASSING STUFF
YO WITH THE DISBANDING NONSENSE
also win's expressions and mannerisms and stuff are gonna be excellent for an in depth analysis of sound later
i know ive done a million in depth analyses of sound
but you can never have too many
"i feel at ease now" "i somehow feel like we're getting a full score" i love this so much, i love them so much
CHINZHILLAAAAA
"will he have time for us?" "OF COURSE" this is so funny and amazing and perfect and all the good words
cos theyre literally in the same room. why wouldnt he hear them? and they needed to progress the plot. and gun would do that, whereas tinn wouldnt actually say anything.
I JUST LOVE IT SO MUCH
"dont doubt nosy guys like us" lmao theyre not even trying to think about a cover story, just 'hey, you know we're nosy.'
I LOVE THAT SOUND IS SPEAKING UP MORE OFTEN BC HE'S THE WIN IN THIS SCENARIO HFBGHRB
I LOVE HIM SO MUCH
COMFORT CHARACTER GO BRRRR
okay ive finished 2/4 and now i need to go again
IM BACK! to you guys that was no time at all, for me that was 12 painful hours
my friend went further ahead than me and sent me a few clips and hOLY HELL i have felt like im missing out ALL DAY
BUT WE'RE HERE NOW
EWVOUSDLV
THE HEART GRAPH SCENE BUT REVERSED GRBGHDB THEY MAKE ME SO HAPPY
ITS LIKE EXACTLY THE SAME
BUT ITS DIFFERENT BECAUSE THEYRE DIFFERENT PEOPLE
GIUEJSBD I LOVE IT
"i didnt mean to kiss you" PFFFFT GBRSDHXGB I LOVE THIS
GHREBDFG ALL OF THE FRIENDS SITTING AT THE TABLE
1. I LOVE ALL THEIR GROUP DYNAMICS SO MUCH
2. THE WAY THEYRE ALL WHINING AND COMPLAINING AND TALKING OVER EACH OTHER LIKE LITTLE KIDS GBFDGHBH
"I DONT HAVE ANY!" you dont have any.
like. what.
you have. no food?
h- how-
"if youre hungry, go eat somewhere else" damn bro
i do like that gun has kept his temper tho
theyre the same people as the originals, just in different situations and with different contributing factors and i could think about this for so long i love this so much holy hell
"why did you invite them" "my friends are stupid" i mean, is he wrong?
THE PARALLEL OF TINN/GUN YELLING AT GUN/TINN AND POR/TIW TAKING THEM AWAY FROM THE GROUP AND SAYING "thats your baby" GEHRSBGD
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HIS EYES GOT SO SUDDENLY WIDE WHAT THE HELL
I NEARLY FELL OFF MY BED
TIW IS SO SILLY IN THIS UNIVERSE
I LOVE IT SO MUCH
I LOVE SILLY TIW
omg all of them chanting 'hot pot'- its like little children begging for mcdonalds
poor gun and por have to deal with these children
i love them
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GUYS WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING SO EVILLY
YOU FORGET, THE PEOPLE BEHIND YOU ARE IDIOTS
THEYRE GONNA THINK YOURE PLOTTING THEIR MURDER OR SOMETHING
either that or they just. wont notice the very loud evil laughter coming from the corner.
both options are equally plausible.
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oh they got louder
i think they noticed
OHHHH, THIS IS WHERE THE MOTORBIKE SCENE IS FROMMMMM
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SOUNDS MOTORBIKE- COS SOUND WOULD HAVE THE MOTORBIKE IN THIS VERSION, NOT WIN
GRJBDGJEBRD
my brain is playing the freaking soundwin motorbike scene but with the roles reversed and im-
HEARTLIMING NOW IM THINKING OF HEARTLIMING
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SOUNDWINDIDITFIRST
theyre really just copying from soundwin even in different universes, damn
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why does sound have little boots on his keychain
gotta love the (not at all) subtle advertisement
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SOUNDWINDIDITFIRSTSOUNDWINDIDITFIRSTSOUNDWINDIDITFIRST
ITS LIKE SHOT-FOR-SHOT THE EXACT SAME SCENE
THEYRE NOT EVEN TRYING TO BE ORIGINAL ANYMORE, THEY KNOW SOUNDWIN IS BETTER
no hate to tinngun, i love them
but also. soundwin.
SOUNDWIN STUDY SCENE YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES MY FRIEND TOLD ME ABOUT THIS
this is gonna be entirely keysmashes
holy hell
the question is: am i gonna survive this
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THE WAY WIN IS LOOKING AT SOUND
BOY YOURE WHIPPED AS FU-
"sounds studying mode. how cute!" HEEEEELLLPPP
and yes, i am aware, this scene is tinngun did it first. and yes. its also basically frame for frame. but soundwin did it first in most cases so i stand by this
GU4OEBSDJL
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DUDE THATS A LONG FREAKING TIME
HOW DO YOU SIT FOR THAT LONG
holy hell i cant wait for my sound adhd hcs to finally be justified
sorry i have to keep pausing it so that i can just. take a sec. and process what's just happened.
and also to get out the million streams of thoughts that pop into my head
so yeah
THESE EPISODES ARE GONNA BE GREAT FOR AGGRESSIVELY ANALYSING ALL OF MY BOYS GERDJHGBF I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
FREAKING.👏 MOOD.👏
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THEHANDSTHEHANDSTHEHANDSTHEHANDSTHEHANDSTHEHANDS
I NEED HELP
WIN'S LITTLE SMILE- IM DYING MY HEART IS EXPLODING MY SOUL IS IN THE ROOF HELP
SATANGS VOICE IS SO CUTE WHEN HE GOES NA NA NA NA NAAA
I LOVE HIM
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guess who just squeak-squealed
me
they freaking played the freaking no one else like me track
and i know they play it over every important soundwin moment
but its like
directed at sound
rather than from sound
like. as if the song is coming from win's brain and not sounds.
like. as if. as if win sings the song in this universe.
SERIOUSLY I NEED IT SO MCUH
I KNOW IT HAPPENED IN MY SCHOOL PRESIDENT LIVE ON STAGE
BUT IT NEVER HAPPENED IN THE ACTUAL SERIES
AND IF IT HAPPENS HERE THEN THERE'S A CHANCE THAT ITLL BE ON SPOTIFY
PLEASE I NEED IT
DESPERATELY
GIMME
i think ive ascended into another plane of existence
i cannot- how do you- how does function
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TIWPOR
GJERBSG
desperately hoping for more than crumbs, that they actually commit to the tiwpor in this version
(which i know they do because of the clips my friend sent me and im so excited to experience this firsthand)
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omg
this part
my friend sent me this part
i think im going to explode
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GOUERJHDGOIJBERNO;FDGLJKNV4OERIJDFBGNOI4ELRJDNGIO34HEIRDGOIH34ERDIOGHK34ERPOIDLKGN34EIORDGNV3EIO4RDJNGO3IE4RHNDGOI4EHRINDNG9OIH3N4ERO8DIGH340IEORHG0IO34BERDOB
PLEASE
IT DOESNT FEEL REAL
HELP
HE SAID IT
HE SAID THE THING
AND TIW'S SWEET LITTLE INNOCENT FACE- WHAT THE HELLLLLL
I AM DYINGGGGG
tiwpor exist
they actually exist
"i like it" "you like me?" EGIRBJKS
COS TIW, BEING TIW AND NOT POR, IS NOT SUPER OBLIVIOUS AND INNOCENT
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
"ill teach you later." "promise me, okay?" BRO THEYRE PLANNING A DATE. THATS WHAT THIS IS. THIS IS A DATE. WHAT THE HELL.
THE PINKIES
AND COME CLOSER PLAYING IN THE BACKGROUND
JUST STAB ME IN THE HEART ALREADY
I LOVE THEM SO MUCH
AND THEY JUST. STAND THERE LIKE THAT.
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even the camera angle is exactly the same as the original. i swear they just filmed this on the same day. surely. its so similar.
also random thought: WHERE THE HELL IS MY BOY JORN
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PUT YOUR HEAD ON HIS HANDS
PLEASE PUT YOUR HEAD ON HIS HANDS
por speaking english >>>>>>
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lets. lets not get into that territory.
we dont need daddy kinks, thank you very much.
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i cant explain it but i love the way theyre standing
win with his arms crossed
sound with hands on hips
its very Dads of them
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mood
HUGS ALL ROUND
TINNGUN HUG
TIWPOR HUG
SOUNDWIN HUG
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THE FREAKING ARM OVER THE SHOULDER
THE FREAKING GRIN
THE WAY WIN IS LOOKING AT SOUND
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THE FREAKING LINGERING HAND AT HIS HIP???? HEEEEEELLLPPPP
"pat, should we hug too" lmao yopat felt left out
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POR SPEAKING ENGLISH >>>>>>>>>
ITS ALWAYS SO JARRING BUT I LOVE IS SO MUCH
TINNGUN SLEEPOVERRRRRRRRRR
OH COS SOUND IS SNORING
THEYRE ALL SLEEPING OVER AT GUN'S PLACE
WAIT YOU NEED TO GIVE ME MORE DETAIL
WHO IS SLEEPING IN A ROOM TOGETHER
HOW MANY ROOMS ARE THERE
all we know is gun and por shared a room, and tinn and sound shared a room. where are the rest of them? was win perhaps also in the same room as sound and tinn? now that tinn is gone, what does this mean for soundwin? PLEASE
"tinn, have you fallen asleep?" dude. you lied down like. ten seconds ago. hes not gonna be asleep yet.
the dancinggggg i love themmmmm
gay panic gun is my favourite
i love him
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BRO GUN IS BOLD
WHY MUST TINN FALL ASLEEP
gun burying his face in his pillow and squealing and kicking his feet- that has been me this whole episode. I LOVE PORGUN'S FRIENDSHIP MORE THAN ANYTHING
BROOOOOOOOOO
WIN ASKING TO CHANGE PARTNERS, BROOO
HE'S JUST GOING THROUGH THE EXACT SAME THING THAT GUN'S GOING THROUGH
HES GAY AND HIS HEART CANT TAKE IT
AND NEITHER CAN MINE
DANCE WITH YOUR BOYFRIEND, WIN
guys.
guys.
why are you switching partners.
dont do that.
you havent practiced with each other.
I NEED SOUDNWIN
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also: TIWPORTIWPORTIWPORTIWPOR
COME CLOSERRRRR I LOVE THIS SONG
its slightly different somehow
i like it
its so awkward with the partners tho
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YES I AM IMMEDIATELY TEARING UP
GUYS THEYRE DOING THE MSP LIVE ON STAGE CHOREO
TIWPOR ARE GONNA DANCE TOGETHER
SOUNDWIN ARE GONNA DANCE TOGETHER
IM GONNA DIE
HELP
THE CHOREOGRAPHY IS SO PRETTYYYYYYYYY
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literally just had to shut my laptop for a sec there
holy hell
they mean too much to me
how do i process this
theyre dancing together
soundwin are dancing together
THIS
FREAKING
CHOREOGRAPHY
the yopat is confusing me but im digging it
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THE WAY THEYRE GAZING INTO EACH OTHERS EYES, LIKE THERES NOTHING BUT THEM TWO, JUST THEM, FOR ETERNITY, DANCING TOGETHER, THEIR WHOLE WORLD IS NOTHING BUT HIS EYES AND HIS HANDS AND THEIR FEET AS THEY DANCE AROUND THE ROOM, ENTRANCED BY EACH OTHER
guys this freaking choreography. guys. look at the choreography. whoever the choreographer is. i lvoe them so much. this is amazing.
i need to play this clip on repeat for the rest of eternity
TIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIWTIW
DANG IT I RAN OUT OF IMAGES HANG ON
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rinbowaman · 11 months
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MY LOVE OH MY GOD CHAPTER 12 WAS A FREAKING MASTERPIECE I LOVE EVERYTHING ABT IT LIKE HELLO????? THE ETHAN X EDEN DUO SHIIII ITS ABT TO GET MESSY AND REAL MY GODDD AND CAN WE TALK ABT ETHAN LIKE HOW MUCH MORE MANIAC CAN HE GET (not that I dont love it like periodt babyboy🤭) ALSO THE GRANDMA RINGS PFFFT IM CACKLING AHAHAHAHAH I AM SO HYPED FOR CHAPTER 13 RN YOU DONT EVEN KNOWWW ‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
its just so beautifully written and the way you got us (esp me) COMPLETELY HOOKED with EVERY chapter I love how ur brain works you deserve everything 😭 ur my only reason for living rn 🥹💗
Omg thank you my love!!! This means so much to me you don’t even know, especially bc I think you all can relate, chapter 11 had me in my feels. Literally, I got teary eyed when I wrote it and the part of Heeseung’s perspective towards the end of part 4 had me BAWLING! Originally, I was going start back up on MT after posting chapter 11 but after drinking one cup of coffee and rubbing my eyes out….I was like nope! Let’s go Heeseung, we doing this now! Nearly an hour and a half later Boom, chapter 12. And I loved how it turned out bc omg….
Ethan is a maniac, I mean, the reader is his reason for living. And these idiots (I hate Scott and tiff and yes, they are based off of real ppl) I hate them so much, especially bc, yo….I went back and re-read the chapters from MGR and MRE….the development and dynamic that progressed throughout the series….reader and Heeseung have been through so much, yet conquered, and have LOVED! For them to take her like that in front of him when “it’s just beginning” my boy…his broken heart broke mine. Omg. And the fact that he comforted Emily bc he was so worried about reader that he couldn’t bear to hear crying…..heart shattering
But believe me love, this isn’t the last we’re seeing Inc just how crazy ethan can get. The man(s) really tried (hee-than) they really tried. They’ve never had been placed on edge like this bc they never had someone they cared about so much. But the whole thing with Gabe in MGR, that was like “Okay…yeah no.” Then enter Samuel in MRE, he was like “fuck no, come here. I’m gonna fuck her in front of you.” Then with Scott and tiff….”watch me break your face to pieces” …………I melted. Shocking thing is…when I wrote some of Ethan’s dialogue, it’s like my hands just went autopilot and I shocked myself when I went over it.
and of course……my girl Eden has come and we all know how Eden is…the girl loves her man and expresses it but is also one to not take shit from no one. She has a dominant kink which normally she’ll eradicate when it comes to Ethan bc she knows that he is the king…..but sometimes the king needs a reminder that without his queen, he’s not twice as wise without his wise woman. Remember the argument/fight scene between ethanxeden? Teehee
oh but now though….seeing what Scott and tiff wanted to do to reader…and seeing what they are doing to her Ethan? Y’all…chapter 13 and even 14 is going to BLOW your mind.
also…Jake. He has my whole heart right now. Hidden badasss.
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