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quiinniart · 2 months
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I am a coward but first I was a kid
(i'd hate me too- susannah joffe)
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theerurishipper · 7 months
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Marinette a cruel person tbh. Even a psychopath or hell maybe im raising the bar a little too high but a stranger would be able comfort ChatNoir seeing his situation. The New York special and him spiraling made me despise her because someone fucking died to make this partnership work.... this isn't even inconsistent characterization from past seasons this is very consistent she's always been like this. Girl ain't willing to even see what underneath the mask eh? or believe he has other things to do besides fucking risking his life as a teenager im surprised their dynamic lasted as long as they did because she comes off very cold when it comes to her partner compared to Alya. Why she like that hell if I know had it been me i'd cuss her out or at least tell her off. How the hell you don't comfort a human being when they show their insecurities I don't know especially someone you've worked along with that saves paris numerous times.
I gotta ask if Chat Noir was more vocal and angry and actually lost it on her would it finally stick it in her damn head that he isn't someone who pops into existence defeating akumas but a very real boy underneath? You know I have know fucking clue personally what is so hard for her about that being a respectful partner and understanding that Chat is human. I remembered in origins he took more of a leading approach I think sorry my memory is dogcrap these days and yet he encouraged her and gave her confidence what so hard returning the favor back?
I mean, comparing her to Chloe? That's like choosing between a rock and a hard place. Chloe's got that villainess aura, sure, but at least she's upfront about it what expectation is there to be had for a cannon fodder villain like Chloe with a creator who hater her to the point even in-universe she still the story punching bag . Now Marinette, oh please, she's got this pristine "heroine white lotus" thing going on. It's like she can do no wrong, and the world just eats it up.
And don't get me started on Ephemeral. Talk about a masterclass in betrayal! She pulls a stunt that would make Judas proud, corrupts herself with power, and what? No consequences, no rules, just a free pass to wreak havoc. Must be nice living in Marinette's world where the rules only apply to us mere mortals.
And let's not forget her emotional boy toys, Luka and Adrien, just waiting there like loyal lapdogs, ready to clean up the mess she leaves behind. It's the Marinette show, and everyone else is just playing supporting roles in her drama.
But hey, who needs nuance when you've got that heroine Marinette halo shining so bright? It's the perfect excuse for her to mess up royally, and everyone will still be there, cheering her on with no accountability taken . The world's her playground, and we're just living in it.
I'm sorry for ranting it's just im done with her sorry if I made it negative for you.
Calling her a psychopath is too harsh ngl. I disagree with you on that. I don't think we should be throwing around words like that lightly.
But I do agree with your overall point. Very harsh, but pretty close to the mark. I also personally wouldn't compare her to Chloe, but then again, that all went out of the window after the Season 5 finale. I wouldn't call her cruel or evil, but she does benefit from the protagonist centered morality the show adopted in Season 4. Chat Noir shouldn't expect anything from her, and he should apologize for her mistakes because she can do no wrong. It sucks.
Thank you for your ask!
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skeletood · 1 year
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OHHHHH SO MANY THOUGHTS TO SHARE
Holy shit. Probably the hardest I’ve laughed at any of the new seasons releases so far. Absolutely speechless
Hellhole:
- SOOOOO HAPPY to see them riff again it’s so corny and silly
- Beavis gets to hell and his first thought is where all the biker dudes are? interesting interesting *puts this in my notes
-oh my god already some amazing facial expressions
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no wonder this dude ends up with so many cracked teeth in the future
- the boys being inexplicably immune to death never gets old to me
- THE DARKNESS PART HAD MY HEAD IN MY HANDS SHUT UP. THANK **GOD** IT WASN’T ANOTHER ESCAPED SNAKE SITUATION DEAR GOD IVE NEVER BEEN HAPPIER FOR A BAIT AND SWITCH
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-hehe :] sillies
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Overall thoughts: Another great ep this season good job guys, gave me a lot of good little laughs
The video segment was whatever but Arianna’s eye candy so like. All good :]
Take A Bow:
My god. I had absolutely no idea what was going to happen on the way in to this episode and I was NOT prepared for what it gave me and put me through
- already starting the ep strong with some GREAT facial expressions
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so fucking real i used to do this to my guy friends when i was their age. not quite enough to put them in the hospital but like. yea lmao
- (monotone) “Take a bow” HAD ME DYINNNNGGGGG
- knowing about all the flavors of mountain dew what a goddamn nerd (knows everything about the different monster flavors)
- “Cherries don’t taste red at ALL. They taste all barfy” little kids complaining about foods they dont like is so silly, thank you for being your childish self its so refreshing
oh man. fuck. its butthead characterization time! finally some good fucking food. oh man here come the waterworks IMAGINE me getting stupid over an emotionally stunted idiot with a big head:
- “not until youre better beavis” first of all shut up. second of all shut up.
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- “It’s like, I didn’t mean to hurt him. Feeling bad sucks.” WE KNOW BABY. WE KNOW. SO PROUD OF YOU FOR ADMITTING IT HUN :((((( the fact that bro cant even acknowledge he HAS feelings unless he’s alone. the volumes that speaks to me. man
if you had told me a week ago these were real screenoshots i wouldnt have believed you. at all. cant wait to see the looks on the faces of all the “ohh stop looking so far into it its just a stupid lowbrow cartoon” people like shut the fuck up!!!!! youve clearly never experienced real friendship before and are so pissed off cause u dont know what it looks like
- not pictured here is where they had to forcefully remove butthead from the room bc he was freaking out after thinking he killed beavis. If you disagree youre just wrong sorry!
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- not only is this a funny as hell angle but man. we already know damn well he doesn’t want beavis to die but its nice to hear him say it. also he’s right, it was really funny. take a bow :]
- a lot of really good beavis screams this episode too
- BOY. HOW DO YOU KNOW WHAT “COVID” IS. MR JUDGE IM STRIKING THAT FROM THE RECORDS BUT YOURE ON THIN FUCKING ICE AKJSDSNA
- “-and his friend would have died of grief shortly there-after” I’m- I need a minute. LIKE WE ALREADY KNEW THIS BUT. THANKS FOR ADMITTING IT. 
- also, god is a whiteman i guess kasjndsajkd
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In conclusion: both fucking great episodes. I am always EXTRA excited for Butt-Head characterization moments, it just makes him so much more human. Not to mention how happy I am to see that they toned down his cruelty JUST a touch. I honestly didn’t notice how bad it had gotten last season until i compared it to how this one is going so far, it feels more like older seasons butthead again :] Like dont get me wrong i LOVE it when he’s mean its just who he is but it should come more out of a place of stupidity/no real self awareness than like. idk wherever it was coming from last season. These boys are goin soft on us and to that i say: thank god. It’s nice to see them act human. Take a bow has EASILY taken old man beavis’ place as my favorite ep so far and ngl its going to be tough to beat. Funny episode that had me chuckling throughout the whole thing AND nice Butt-Head moments? Oh Mike, you shouldnt have u///u
Anyways lemme know your thoughts :]
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web-novel-polls · 3 months
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Trans WN Character Tournament
Submissions End: TBD
Rules: 
The character must be from a web novel or an adaptation of a WN (common adaptations like manhwa/manhua may be accepted, just within reason)
They don't have to be canonically transgender. The reasoning can be anything from them explicitly wanting to be a different gender/sex or just vibes 
Just stay away from offensive gender stereotypes in propaganda, especially Western gender stereotypes on Asian characters (Ex: Nie Huaisang being more interested in art and fans than fighting might be a more "feminine trait" to Western readers, but Chinese fans have explained that it actually fits with the male scholars of the time period). 
You can still submit any character, but remember to be respectful & conscientious
Tournament Tag: #trans wn character tournament
[Last Updated: May 12th, 2024]
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Jang Hayoung from Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint
Gender Identity: Transfem / MTF
Canon Pronouns: she/her (she gets misgendered for a big part of the novel in the unofficial english translation, but when we're in her pov it's she/her)
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Ling Fengxiao from The #1 Pretty Boy of the Immortal Path
Gender Identity: transfem & nonbinary
Submission:
(tw: transphobia)  i am not claiming that this a good novel by any means & this is kind of nonsense but hear me out: main romance lead of this novel spends like 90% of the time happily presenting as a woman, and this is a vague spoiler but at one point mc and his wife are both "pretending" to be women (ngl i could also submit mc here. much gender to be had but it really has to be unintentional bc of later transphobic plot points) and come across a plant that only blooms valuable flowers when attended to by two beautiful women (ok. whatever) and they're both like "well IM pretending to be a woman but lin shu/ling fengxiao ISNT so she'll carry me across this finish line" and it does bloom! like, it does! the author is like "ohhhh its sickly and this is forcedddd" <- but it does bloom. and the flower spirit that comes of it is fairly explicitly a trans woman, even if she's an object of ridicule. my grasping at scraps theory here is that all of the "you're actually a boy. accept it" said to the spirit is a projection of internalized transphobia. there are three women here but only one of them is willing to say so. if the author was willing to write where the previous characterization led we would have a different story. 
Luo Binghe from The Scum Villain’s Self-Saving System
Gender Identity: Transfem / MTF
Canon Pronouns/Gender: He/Him, Male
Submission: Scum Villain is a satirical transmigration novel where the protagonist transmigrates into the in-universe novel Proud Immortal Demon Way, which is a male-fantasy novel. Some themes/topics include toxic masculinity, not putting people in boxes and the harm thereof, abandonment, motherhood, identity, and there are several instamces of body snatching/changing. During the plot, due to both the toxic masculinity themes and the author poking at gendering in danmei novels, both the protagonist and binghe are described very femininely. Instead of a usually anti-toxic masculinity plotline where instead it talks about healthy masculinity, scum villain basically just says that the mc and ml should instead stop repressing their natural feminity so they can be happy. Also the novel has transphobic parts but somehow they even wrap around to implying that these two are trans women. Binghe is indirectly described as a trans woman (in a transphobic way) dont get me wrong the transphobic parts are transphobic and shouldnt be in there but its still pertinent. After a certain point, binghe is constantly called maiden-hearted, described as a younger sister reaching out to her elder sister pleading for help (the elder sister here is the protagonist) and is described as being very much like his biological mother in appearance and personality, and as a pretty boy. (His mother su xiyan is described as having the aura of a tyrant, cold and ruthless, as well as masculine, especially in comparison to his biological father, who is described as the runaway young miss in comprison to su xiyans wealthy young master. Also binghe is described as physically similar to her, including her tall height, except for his fathers eyes which makes him not too feminine.) Binghes bio father is described as maidenhearted like binghe. Uses his special blood, which is compared to menstration, in text, for many purposes. When asked his gender he refuses to answer (intext the unreliable narrator says that its due to it being a simple and obvious question but unreliable narrator so who knows for sure) and he is also called bingmei, or younger sister binghe to distingiush him from the original timelines toxically masculine, unhappy bingge, or elder brother binghe.
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Ruan Nanzhu (阮南烛) from Kaleidoscope of Death
Gender Identity: transfem & nonbinary
Canon Pronouns: he/him outside of the doors, she/her in drag
Submission: 
This might be considered spoiler-y, but I can't think of another way to bring up important details here. It's part of the premise of the novel if that helps: there are other worlds that the protagonists have to survive for [REDACTED] reasons, and in these worlds there's a certain amount of identity obfuscation—basically, you'll look a little different from your real appearance no matter what you do, but the way that you dress will also affect the appearance that you end up with. Ruan Nanzhu takes every opportunity to dress in feminine ways when they go to these worlds. Yes, there is a secret identity reason behind it, but there's also this clear difference in how Ruan Nanzhu acts as a "man" and a "woman" that it just reads like a form of gender euphoria to me. The novel itself isn't always kind about it (could be that it just depends on the translation you're reading! I couldn't tell you what connotations the original Chinese wording has) but I think it's fairly undeniable that it's a freeing experience for her. So it's not exaaactly canon, but Lin Qiushi (林秋石) uses the right pronouns out loud and in his thoughts as it is signalled to him at the time, so that's nice.
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Shen Qingqiu from The Scum Villain’s Self-Saving System
Gender Identity: transmasc / FTM
Canon Pronouns: he/him
Submission:
he invented xianxia panty liners also he was literally obsessed with a stallion novel that was supposed to be like. be a power fantasy about a cool strong man. I'm not saying he liked pidw I'm just saying he did make the choice to read a stallion novel and was obsessed with Luo Binghe. Sometimes gay thoughts can also be gender envy. SVSSS also looks a lot at like. masculinity and its performance and perception in a way that really slaps if you, like me, think Shen Qingqiu is the Worstest trans guy ever of all time. I'd like to be clear that he is not good representation. He is literally the most dogshit rep. He's homophobic and gay hes transphobic and trans hes the most insufferable trans person youve ever met. He's probably definitely a transmed. Instead of medical transition, sqq got that transmigration transition, and he is absolutely has a weird ass superiority complex about it. also he's a TRANSmigrator its literally right there in the name. Do u see my vision.
Shi Qingxuan from Heaven Official’s Blessing / TGCF
Gender Identity: Transfem / MTF, Nonbinary, Genderfluid
Canon Pronouns: She/Her and He/Him
Submission: Canonically switches between female and male forms due to personal preference. Also theres alot of gothic doubling on her plotline as well.
Rejected
Nimona from Nimona
Reason: Not from a web novel
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dottores · 1 year
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Heliotroupes is just a game of “which segment is dottore gonna have a WWE smack down with this time” and I’m here for it. Can’t wait for it to be Ms. Purple having the smack downs bro I can hardly contain myself 😭😭😭
ALSO I LIKE GENUINELY CRIED ABOUT HER DAD?? And her grandfather kinda ate that up ngl ugh the family bonds have me in a chokehold.
I’m super hyped bc from what it appears, Ms. Purple ain’t gonna defeat dottore with the power of friendship. IM TIRED OF VILLAINS GETTING FLIPPED BY GOOD MORALS BRO. Like it doesn’t work like that. Your perspective and characterization that hasn’t even happened yet has me blushing and giggling, you genius. I wanna see her verbally destroy him, just a little bit.
Big big congrats on law school and Baizhu girl!! Well deserved and earned, so proud of you.
HELLOOO MY LOVE N THANK YOU 🥹🥹 ily lots i’m kissing ur nose rn
HDJHDDJDJJDJSJS IM CRYINGGGGG YOURE SO RIGHT DOTTORE IS CONSTANTLY DEALING W ONE OF HIS SEGMENTS AT HIS THROAT HE CANT GET A BREAK 💀💀💀 if it’s not one of the kids, it’s delta or rho on their behalf, if it’s not delta or rho, theta is having a melt down, if it’s not theta, lambda is bashing dottore right to his face 💀💀
I LOVE WRITING MS PURPLE N HER FAMILY RELATIONSHIPS, i love writing family bonds in general they’re always so deep and complicated, they’re so fun to explore
YESSSS MS PURPLE & DOTTORE IS CERTAINLY GONNA BE AN UPHILL BATTLE. not only is she dealing with arguments with him, but he’s also fighting himself (metaphorically and literally with the segments), and she’s also dealing with the segments too—some take to her better than others.
and then there’s lambda, who’s gonna be an issue in itself hehe
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laximpulsion · 2 years
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Director's Cut Commentary: Ch. 1-3 swam all across the ocean blue
so, the bunker chapters. these ones were the easier ones and ngl im stressin' about the rest of it. i have bits and pieces written here and there but i actually desperately wish the writers would just leak the s3 plot so i dont have to try to think of anything. im second guessing nearly everything about this entire fic including but not limited to the characterization, the leatin dynamic, the timeline of fatin figuring out her feelings, the timeline of them getting together, a lot of things i did in the first fic, and how tf im going to get them OFF THAT ISLAND?!!! (nora ex machina? lol)
anyway :) other than that things are going great lol so i think its time to remind myself this is just for fun and theres actually like...no pressure on me to do anything groundbreaking. this fandom is very sweet and i feel like people are pretty willing to give you the benefit of the doubt and roll with what you give them.
also time to practice committing to my choices and standing by my creative vision! (it's hard tho! but probably a good life lesson)
now some things i was proud of...i kind of stumbled my way into the whole faber manipulating fatin arc, it started out as just a “hmm i wonder what he'd say” thing, and then i think i really hit gold when i rewatched the scene where leah asks if jeff asked for her and she alluded to her calling him on the first night. i hated putting fatin through that but i was pleased to have come up with something so diabolical that perfectly set the stage for some angst.
im excited for fatin's angst arc and im excited to see if i can sell it well enough that people will get on board with it. but that's probably a whole separate post once we actually get to it (the leatin angst is not supposed to be the main angst arc, believe it or not. definitely important, but fatin will def have other struggles too)
im also pleased that in between starting my first fic and starting this one, i've gotten more bold about making slight changes to canon events/conversations to make them fit my vision better. i started out thinking i HAD to religiously adhere to events/dialogue from the show, but now im much more loose with it which makes my life a lot easier.
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bisamwilson · 2 years
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O and P from the fanfic ask game! (Sidenote: excited to read your Sambucky Star Wars au!!)
hi cat!!! thanks for the ask <3 (from this list)
so excited that you're excited for my star wars au!!! i'm perhaps a little unreasonably proud of/happy with that one im ngl
O: How do you begin a story—with the plot, or the characters?
i mean i feel like i'm generally writing about the same two to three characters in most fics so by default i tend to start with the characters? every fic i've written has mostly been in pursuit of hammering out the exact characterization i have for sam and bucky that fits in with what we've seen in the mcu (and same with torres in the sbj fics i've written!)
there are some exceptions to this tho! the one last stop au is a major one; i was reading one last stop in august/september of 2021 and i was like oh my god this could SO easily have sambucky vibes and then i started writing based on having that general plot outline, and it was the fic that launched me into writing in general! the princess diaries au is another good example of plot first; i'd always wanted to write one for a fandom but had never had the inspo before sambucky + i really wasn't sure exactly what side characters were going into each role until i started writing. i'd planned to make sam's arranged marriage partner maria rambeau and have her pair up with bucky's fake date carol danvers at first, and had even written that up till like halfway through chapter 4 before i went back and changed this to ayo and sarahayo!
P: Are you what George R. R. Martin would call an "architect" or a "gardener"? (How much do you plan in advance, versus letting the storu unfold as you go?)
this is almost entirely dependent on how long the fic is! if it's a fic i think is probably going to end up >10k (princess diaries, one last stop, sam takes bucky home to delacroix before civil war au, potential upcoming ghost au), then i've usually got at least a general outline before i start, if not a very detailed list of exactly what major plot points happen in each chapter like i did with the princess diaries au (of course this got changed some in the early stages, seeing my answer above, but it was pretty much entirely finalized by the time i finished chapter 4)
if it's one of my shorter fics, sometimes things just get written down and then they work! the star wars au is actually a great example of this. i truly did think i was gonna be writing a fun little space romp and then it turned into feelings and angst and longing and a short indictment of some of the jedi rules for way of life. the first chapter of renaissance man, two chapters of some invisible string tying you to me, and all of we don't talk anymore got written on discord pretty spontaneously and in one go, so these are also some pretty great examples of "sometimes words just happen"
tldr; this is pretty fic dependent (and often fic length dependent!)
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saetoru · 2 years
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i just wrote my first hanma fic teeee and i think i remember telling you that i was scared to not get his characterization right :,) but hopefully i got it down. it’s fun writing for him ngl— ichigo anon
OMGGG IM PROUD OF U if ur ever comfortable u should let me read it !! im deprived of hanma crumbs </3333 but no pressure !!! coming off anon + sharing writing can be nerve wracking SO DONT FEEL PRESSURED !!
BUT HES SO GREAT TO WRITE FOR RIGHT ???? i used to like write for him every day back on my old tokrev blog like my tokrev masterlist is 75% hanma deadass KJSAJHGF HES SO PERFECT I LOVE HIM
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one-strugling-bean · 2 years
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Random Thoughts on HTTYD RttE S2(Ep8-13)
Ep8&9 - Astrid is being a little meany to the twins, but i get why
Barf&Belch throwing that last tree trunk and then butting heads, looking super proud of themselves was funny
Daamn, Ruffnut! It seems she's been holding that in for a long time now
Okay, like, i can see where Ruffnut is coming from; there have been moments where Astrid mocks or scolds elements of her team (mostly either the twins or Snotlout) for really small things, but since it's always played for laughs, we as a viewer have never taken it into consideration until now, when Ruff throws it at Astrid's face.
But you can't completely blame her! Sometimes, the twins really do stupid stuff and put the team in danger, and Astrid won't forget that, as she shouldn't.
But then, she's also too inflexible and that's where Hiccup's better. He's able to reach a compromise with the twins and make them follow and help the team in their own way. Astrid - it's not even that she can't do that - it's that she won't. And the twins aren't dumb, they understand that.
Fluffnut and Stuffnut are genius names and i shall not take any criticism
Yeahhh capturing one of the twins might not have been your best move here
Im really curious to see what Tuff's plan is
Poor old cousin Lars #2
"-and that these guys love us?" and Hookfang promptly turns his head away - Hookfang is a tsundere confirmed!!
I love how the hunters did not care that Ruffnut escaped, they just let her go
Yayy apologiesss
Ep10 - Fishlegs is so freaking sweet - he's like a giant gentleman, super intelligent brave and kind, and i love whenever he's on screen doing stuff
"I promise I'll tell Snotlout where i hid his favorite axe!" Omg, what did Snotlout do?
He probably thinks the twins hid it btw
OMGGGG I swear i hadn't seen that far yet!! Snotlout does think the twins hid the axe!!
Poor Hookfang :'<
"You should listen to me more often" "Naaah, I shouldn't" This little exchange between cousins was great
Sooo Fishlegs kinda toasted himself there on the Seashocker's back huh
Ha, karma finally came to visit Tuff and Ruff
Ep11 - I've never seen him before, but the Skrill looks so damn cool! Just from his name, my guess on his design was a silver, slick-looking dragon with a big mouth, and i couldn't have been more wrong - it was a surprise to see him as black and purple, he's so pretty!
"Isn't Snotlout's dad acting more violent and deranged than usual?" That you would already characterize him as both does not bode well with me
I really wanted Hookfang to throw Spitelout off of him ngl, that was a rude push
Why did Spitelout come along?!
Also, Astrid being done with Snotlout, part34 (someone should make a comp of that, it'd be so long)
"I hate smart dragons. Which is why I love you!" Aww, Tuffnut sure has a way with words. Also, rider-dragon love
"How come he gets revenge?" Well, it's one of the many perks of being main character, along with a raging martyr complex and everyone wanting a piece of you (for good and bad reasons)
I'm kinda confused, what is Hiccup's plan here?
Soooo, does Dagur actually like the Skrill, ooooor
My lord, why is Spitelout still here??
Yeahhhh team effort timeeeee
Omfg, Spitelout why (Snotlout's "Wait, what?" was a nice way to show how dumb that move was)
Toothless is so protective of Hiccup, and for good reason
I write this up here, and the guy immediately has himself standing in front of a freaking arrow shot - of course Toothless is protective, his rider is always getting himself in dangerous situations!
Good for the skrill, good for him
Yeah, I do not like Spitelout
Uhm, what was that ending, why did you all laugh, he was hurting his son on purpose, peeps why
Ep12&13 - Don't think I've mentioned it until now, but I really enjoy Dagur's voice, it doesn't fit with what I inicially expected of him because of his looks - i expected a much rougher, raspy voice - but the animators and his VA still make it work so well
Toothless silently judging Tuff and Snotlout in the background while Astrid and Hiccup talk was a really funny detail
Sooo I'm guessing this is the Tufflout bromance episode I've heard about
Hm, first impressions of Viggo: he looks a bit common, not a lot of distinguishable features to him, and the way he grabbed Ryker's chin felt so creepy to me - he's already an unsettling guy that's for sure
Ah, he put his arm around her shoulders, noo
His voice is super smooth, it is unsettling
"Hiccup knows we have it-" "Yeah, he let us borrow it-" "I stole it." pfff great
Ngl, i was waiting for the whole "Heather being revealed" thing to take q lot longer
Also, Flightmare pretty, but he does a number on the eyes
Dagur still has no idea Heatger betrayed him huh
Nouuuuu Heatheeeer
Viggo can teletransport apparently, good to know
And Ruffnut makes a good point
Okay, i gotta say Hiccup makes a good argument there, Viggo demands a well thought out plan
Do i sense a Dagur redemption arc..?
"I thought you liked it toasty?" "I like toast-y, not toast-ed!" Snotlout, Astrid, i appreciate you two
Yeahhh Dagur will help Heather somehow by the end of this ep
Im gonna guess that the Dragon Eye Viggo got is merely a duplicate of the real thing
Thank you Dagur!!
Oh, okay, no, it was the actual Dragon Eye, damn
So, just to check, Heather is now gone, Dagur is kinda on his own side, and Ryker and Viggo have their own evil plans with the Dragon Eye - okay that's fine
Welp, and that's Season 2 for you! Can't wait to keep watching it now!!
Its 2am tho, so now i gotta sleep, byee
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bellsyafterdark · 3 years
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ngl I love the focus on boba and fennec and paz taking din apart and taking care of him etc etc but im r e a l l y curious to see more of like. how paz fits into the dynamic? he undoubtedly does, I just want to see how and where and elaboration on "puppy" since it's been used several times and it sounds like some truly d e l i c i o u s content 👀 also the way he seems to switch between dominant with din and submissive to the others? and not to mention how boba and fennec interact.... I just--id love to know all about this au is what im saying I guess lol. you write so damn well and your characterization and ideas all just got me like
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😂💛 thank you, thank you
I wrote a whole side story for it on Twitter that I'll paste below. I tend to blurb there and only write here when it's in reply to asks.
You can imagine this is set after the published story on AO3 "something borrowed...."
I've thought about how Paz and Din's old tribe could react to learning about their new lives. How they might ask Paz, so infamously proud, how he feels about being second choice for Din's attentions.
"You are generous to think I rank so highly for his affections," Paz would say.
Because he only found Din again after the man had been taken in by Boba and Fennec, their claim clearly stated, and they were gracious to find space in their lives for Paz because Din asked. Slowly, the three alphas have grown closer in understanding and appreciation. But Paz made the decision to stay for Din; any method to keep the man in his life. He's learning to be less jealous (yearning and needy), temper his greed, crush the ache that echoes in his chest watching Din bloom, sigh and his body cry out for other people.
Paz can share.
He thinks he's convinced others and himself until the morning he wakes, senses tingling on alert, and rolls on his back to find his hands have been cuffed to the above bed rail in his sleep.
Boba and Fennec kneel at his sides, startlingly naked, gazes predatory.
"Those muscles," Fennec praises, slanting an appreciative look at Boba by Paz's other thigh.
"You're not getting out that way, pup," Boba says, voice warm.
Paz scowls at the endearment. "I am NOT your pup."
Boba's stare pins him still. "Yes, you are."
Paz's abdomen tenses under Fennec's roving hand, breathing out harshly with her possessive grope at muscle beneath the softer padding of flesh.
"And it's time you learned that if you're going to stay," Boba says. "
There's so MUCH of you," Fennec purrs to herself, a small smile.
A soft, familiar sigh catches Paz's attention and he finally notices Din reclined in one of the large seats across the room. He's watching them, skin flushed pink. His feet are planted on the chair's edge, thighs spread and his fingers swirling over the dark bud of his clit.
He's enjoying this?
Desire curls low in Paz's gut at the familiar sight. A low groan gutters out of him with the hand that closes over the slack girth of his cock, squeezing firmly.
Boba's hand pumps him, slow and strong. "Everything in this palace is mine. You understand?"
Paz swallows, glutes tensing as his cock fills quickly. Teeth close over his nipple and he gasps at the unfamiliar texture of wet, slick heat as Fennec takes an open mouthful of his pec, groaning in delight. The vibrations earn his moan, his skin lighting up under their touches.
The full muscle of his other pec is crushed under Fennec's exploring hands. She twists back to look at Boba. "I want his face."
Paz's stomach leaps in alarm until Boba orders, "The helmet stays on."
And then Fennec is prowling up Paz's body, eyes dark and smiling. "That IS his face," she purrs, narrowing Paz's world to the strong, bare thighs that straddle his buy'ce, and then darkness. A moan of pleasure shivers from her above him. "Mmm-- nice and cold," the sound is muffled by her thighs. "Did you have him ride you like this, baby?"
The words surprise him, groin tensing with the memory that yes, Paz did, and then the admission is pulled from him in an audible cry with Boba's firm upstroke, Paz's hips rising to follow it. The sound is wrenched from him, distorted by the rough modulator of his voxcoder.
"More of that noise for us, pup," Boba growls, fingers tightening to a ring beneath the head of Paz's cock, grip sliding faster. Paz's knees bend with his groaning cry, thighs openIng, and his heels drag along the mattress. "I want to hear you understand who's doing this to you."
It's confusing: the parts of Paz that want to wrench free battling with the unfamiliar swoop in his gut telling him this feels nice, pleasure sluicing over him like warm syrup at the greed in their touch and the rumble of their words. He's not used to being the recipient of that.
"... Followed that pretty pussy across the stars, didn't you?" Fennec is grinding a hypnotic rhythm back and forth across his visor, Paz's audials bringing the slick sounds of her arousal. "Would have followed him into the heart of a dying star-- just to know he's yours--"
Slickened hardness startles Paz in its slide down between his cheeks, a heart-stopping press at his rim of muscle, his heavy thigh is pushed up and back, and then he's staring into the dark of Fennec's cunt, unseeing as he's parted on searing thickness.
"Nnnngh--" The steel of the bed rail creaks under the strain of Paz's strength as he pulls, arching away from the intrusion of Boba's cock-- so full-- but the other alphas laughs, easily keeping him pinned.
"You're not the first who tried," Fennec soothes him. "They all want him."
A grinding drag against his inner walls, blinding push back in. Paz cries out at the burning frissons of pleasure.
"He's ours, you understand, pup?"
Light floods in, startling him as Fennec slides back to straddle his chest, gentle smile curving her mouth. Paz's body rocks beneath her from Boba's driving thrusts, the generous swell of Paz's chest tickling her wet folds! the local King finds his rhythm, slow and heavy, sinking deeper on every thrust.
"You want to belong to us too, baby?" Fennec croons.
Paz trembles, chest heaving. His head is spinning. He can't get enough air, his breaths loud and ragged in his helmet. With every thrust, it feels like Boba is feeding him more and more. How big is he? Is this what Din feels when Paz folds him open? Boba's next thrust makes him buck and moan. What was that?
His feet plant in the mattress thighs falling wider against Boba's hips and the other alpha rewards him with a hard snap inside, growling.
"You take orders well," Boba praises him, hands braced like iron on his hips. "I need someone to look after him when we go away."
Din did not need a guardian or protector; this is what Paz might have reminded them if Boba didn't choose that moment to fasten his grip under Paz's thick thighs and start pounding into him.
"Fuck!" Paz shouts, writhing.
Fennec's weight keeps him planted.
Boba's pace is fast, plunging into his tight channel with claiming thrusts, made slicker with the pre-cum being drawn from his cock.
Sweat beads on Boba's brow and he was snarling, "A good s-stud to keep nnnh bred an-and happy. Pound his little hole for us-- open-- keep him--"
A thin, fluting whimper of need reaches his ears: Din.
Shuddering, Paz's eyes roll, head falling back and his neck arches as Boba shifts, striking that molten spot of low burning bliss over and over.
"Fill him up 'til-- until we get back-- you can-- I know you can--" Boba panted.
God. Paz could. He could be so good for them-- for Din--
Strong, slim fingers close low on his throat. Fennec. "You close? You wanna come, baby?"
A storm of turmoil churns in Paz's chest-- submit-- don't-- the moan breaks from his chest before he can stop it, throaty, begging. His cock throbs, neglected. He wants to come so badly.
Boba growls as though in rut, low and feral. "You're gonna wait."
/fuck/
The order punches a sharp moan of lust from Paz's chest and he almost comes, surprising himself. No one had ever used him like this before. None had dared. Paz tilts his hips up when Boba pauses, breathing harshly, toes curling in the sheets.
"Come here, sweetheart," Boba says.
Paz's heart leaps with understanding before his conscious mind catches on.
The bed dips with new weight and then Din tumbles against Boba's side, clumsy with need. Boba laughs gently under his breath, brushing kisses over his forehelm.
"You're gonna climb on this. We're gonna see how far it spreads you," Boba said.
Din trembles, looking down at the intimidating girth of Paz's cock standing straight from his body.
"You're gonna let me eat you open." Fennec's fingers trail down Din's scarred chest.
Din accepts her stabilising hand and lifts a knee, straddling Paz as instructed.
"And I'm gonna show your stud how to fuck you," Boba promises, but Din may not have heard him, falling back against his chest with a high moan as Paz's cock cleaves him open on a spine-melting sink to the root, so hot, so perfect, God this was home.
Paz's eyes squeeze shut, overwhelmed, desperate-- desperate not to come yet, but throbbing heat bears him open and slick, clenching muscles massage him tight-- what is he supposed to do?
His heels dig in deep and the rail above him creaks as his body pulls taut. Din cries out as Paz's hips snaps into him, pumping helplessly with the hot groan spilled from deep in his chest, shuddering at the force of his full body orgasm.
God... G od....
His pulse roars in his ears, time suspends, and when Paz comes back down to his body, Din's hand clutches his belly where Paz spilled.
His breath catches at the alphas' twin looks of disappointment.
"Oh, puppy," Fennec sighs, pushing Din's thighs wide for the view where he stretches thin around Paz's cock. "Now this is gonna hurt."
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TL;DR Paz is Boba and Fennec's stud to breed Din for their amusement, their bull to keep him full, and they enjoy domming tf out of him to remind him of the pecking order (and sometimes just because, as a treat)
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eirian · 2 years
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a few thoughts on Doppelgänger (the danny phantom fancomic) from a creator’s perspective
hey its 5 am and i cannot sleep and this has been plaguing me for the past like three hours so i figure if i want to sleep i should get it ouf of my brainspace so here i go
(for context if you arent familiar, a few years ago i made a comic about a danny phantom au i was invested in where dan escaped the thermos, came back for revenge, and instead kind of got thrown into a reluctant redemption arc thanks to jazz. the comic took place after d-stabilized and replaced phantom planet completely. you can read the full comic at @doppelgangercomic !)
so its probably weird to do a review of my own comic but idk. i do have some thoughts after looking back on it years after its completion and i feel like sharing them!
i’ll try to keep this relatively short i guess so here we go
first i’ll address the story. i wont even front guys im still really proud of how i wrote it. i think the pacing was pretty good and the flow was decent and the characterization/dialogue was good too imo. but having said all that i think it would be a bit confusing to first-time readers who arent familiar with the au which is literally only set up on my old dan ask blog--actually im very certain it confused a lot of people judging from the comments i got over time lol. so i do apologize for not explaining the au better in the comic’s context. i think that would have helped a lot more than the single spread page vaguely explaining how dan got to where he was at that point in time
what i really wanted to talk about though was the art. honestly? the first chapter and a half still hold up imo. sometimes i look back at the early dpg art and think wow..why did i stop drawing like that LOL. because after a certain point (and i can tell you it was 100% after a year-long hiatus i took from the comic) the art kind of..took a nosedive, i’ll be honest. the explanation i’ll give is that during that year i took off from the comic i ended up getting into dragon ball which completely threw out my interest for danny phantom ngl. but i was still determined to finish what i started, and at some point i decided that getting the story out there was more important than putting all my effort into making the art look good. so, i ended up rushing the last few chapters of the comic, and its kinda obvious.  on top of that, i was going through a major style shift and i hadnt quite gotten the hang of it at that point so it looked really janky. basically the combination of loss of interest as well as changing art styles made for a really rushed and sloppily-drawn ending to the comic
however im still proud of what i put out overall. i think people enjoyed the story for what it was and i was able to get across my vision more or less and im happy about that!  ive tossed around the idea of a sequel to doppelganger and ive been on and off about it tbh. im not sure i’ll ever be as hype about dp as i was when i started the original comic, and i have a ton of other stories i want to make.  but...idk. it might just be a passing thought like it has been many times before, but the idea of revisiting it just to make a sequel to dpg and get the rest of my ideas out is really appealing to me rn. so idk. i’ll say its still a possibility :)
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magniloquent-raven · 3 years
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Fic Writer Questions
i was tagged by @cherry-toxic and @gideongrace ty both 💕🥰💕
How many works do you have on AO3?
15
which is a relatively small number but sometimes im still like, holy shit i finished 15 whole fics lmao
What's your total AO3 word count?
68,299 (time to post a 701 word fic and then never post again i guess)
How many fandoms have you written for and what are they?
well this is about to get mildly embarrassing lmfao. ive only got harry potter & stranger things fics on my ao3 and tumblr but if you want a full list, as a teenager i posted a shitty borderlands self-insert fic on quizilla, and hiccup/jack frost fic on ff.net.
and if u count fics that never got finished or published anywhere i dabbled in teen wolf, supernatural, dragon age, star wars, left 4 dead 2, skyrim, good omens, the mcu, buffy, wynonna earp, plus like, general disney/dreamworks crossover fic. and i started writing shameless fics recently, we'll see if i actually finish any. aaaand...i think that's it?
so...15?
What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
1. Wait for you, Burn for You
2. Find Our Way
3. Something to Hold
4. Room for One More Troubled Soul
5. Don't Know What I'm Gonna Do (About This Feeling Inside)
all harringrove fics except #4, which is probably only on the list because it's been on ao3 the longest lol
Do you respond to comments, why or why not?
oh god, i used to. i did when i was starting out, but then i just. i get self-conscious about what to actually say & leave shit to sit for too long. and suddenly ive got like 100 comments i havent replied to and i want to respond to them so bad but ive left them so long i feel weird about it now and it's a problem 😥
i want to start responding to them again, and every time i get a new one i tell myself im gonna but i never do cuz im fuckin awkward lmao
What's the fic you've written with the angstiest ending?
i......don't really do angsty endings. like, most of my fics end with smooches and/or love confessions lmao, i don't like leaving things off sad, even if it starts depressing as hell.
maybe this one? it still ends soft but without resolving the thing billy was angsting about, so.
Do you write crossovers? If so what's the craziest one you've ever written?
hahahhha.............i don't really do them anymore, but i already said i was into the whole animation movie crossover thing, so. yeah, i did lol. it was when i was in high school so of course i did one that was like, every disney character ever and they're going to school together. which really isn't that crazy a concept, but it was a lot of movies to write in so maybe that counts
Have you ever received hate on a fic?
nahh, not rly. i don't get around enough to attract anti attention lol, tho i did get one of those "👎" comments when someone was going around doing that, which lbr, is so low effort it barely counts 😂
Do you write smut? If so what kind?
yea sometimes. i do get the occasional horny idea lmao. mostly "what if touch-starved character + tenderness" or someone having lots of feelings while they're fucking. someone is usually billy lbr. i've also got a couple "what if someone got tied up and treated right" ideas but i don't think i've actually published any of those lmao
Have you ever had a fic stolen?
don't think so?
Have you ever had a fic translated?
i have not
Have you ever co-written a fic before?
yea, kinda! a collab with a friend of mine for fun
What's your all time favourite ship?
i...don't know? i get emotionally invested in characters more than the relationships themselves lol. i don't even know what ship i've been invested in for a long time, most of the shit i shipped as a kid i don't give a fuck about anymore lol.
except fuffy, actually. i've always shipped buffy/faith
and if we wanna go with fandom i've actively stuck with the longest it'd be harringrove. cuz ive been here and writing shit for yall for over a year now when i usually would've cycled thru a couple fixations by now lol
What's a WIP that you want to finish but don't think you ever will?
that's a mean question lmao how dare you. i honestly don't know, i have a lot of wips and i want to finish all of them. i know i won't but there isn't one specifically that seems less likely than the others so idk
What are your writing strengths?
uhhhhh.....i mean i've been told that my characterization is good? like, ppl being able to picture the actual characters when they're reading n stuff, so that's nice. and i could write introspection forever, u don't even know man, i get in the zone. i love getting in a character's head and picking apart their emotional state
What are your writing weaknesses?
writing dialogue really trips me up because i get picky about word choice lmao. i can be writing uninterrupted for twenty minutes cuz it's all a character's inner monologue but the second they gotta speak out loud im sittin there like ok what words sound natural and how much would they be willing to say etc. etc. suddenly it's an hour later and i've written three lines of dialogue. plus i tend to edit as i go so i'm always stopping and going back and rewriting stuff instead of just finishing the damn story
What are your thoughts on writing dialogue in other languages in a fic?
no thoughts head empty
lmao for real tho idk? i mean there's that one trope, when someone says nice stuff in a language the other person doesn't speak because they're pining and not sure if they're allowed to say it outright, that shit's cute. im sure all the google translated dialogue has been annoyin as shit for native speakers lmfao but yeah
What was the first fandom you ever wrote for?
probably harry potter but i literally have no idea. i started writing fic in my early teens and that time of my life is a big fuckin blur lmao
What's your favourite fic you've written?
ngl i think my fav fic is one of the multi-chapter wips i haven't published lmao
BUT. if i gotta pick something yall have read, this one. just a lil guy. plant dad billy and domesticity. it's cute and i like it. maybe also this fic that i wrote for valentine's day. i wrote basically the whole thing in one day and i was really proud of myself lmao, and i just really like headcanoning backstory for billy & that fic is rly just about him growing up, so
tagging @rvspberryjvm @wingedbears @paperbodiesamongthestars @platypan
if yall wanna! 💕
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tarantulas4davey · 3 years
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hi hun !! i would just like to say that im SO proud of your youtuber au !!!! and im so glad it's getting the attention that it deserves !!! you're so talented and your characterization is PERFECT and i am so so happy for you!!!! mwah !!!
also, feel free to use this as an excuse to talk about how al and race figured out they liked each other !! i can't remember if you've talked about that, but id love to hear ur thoughts on it !!! -jac
hi dear !! thank you so much 😭 everything you do is pure gold so this means the world honestly. all the hugs for you <3
you best believe i will take any and all excuses to talk about my favorite idiots and this is a really fun story cause they are, in fact, a walking relationship trope so ✨here we go✨
it needs to be stated that race has been out as gay since like,,, 6th grade? and albert came out as bi over the summer between 9th and 10th grade
that being said, albert has known he liked race since 7th grade
race has been in love with albert his ENTIRE LIFE even if he didn’t realize it until middle school
now race tried not to do this,,, but his heart got all fluttery and his brain went “holy shit you actually have a chance with him” when albert came out to him
they were already in separatable and very clearly pining to anyone that wasn’t them but they were in full crush denial mode
so sophomore year is basically just them ✨pretending they’re not in love✨
also it’s them acting like they’re dating without any of the benefits of being an actual couple
the summer brings along a few,,,, moments? idk there’s just this moment when they’re walking around at like 4am and talking about crushes and they’re both very clearly describing the other but neither of them acknowledge it
not to mention the fact albert almost kissed race that one time but then the rest of the group walked in and they just pretend it didn’t happen
albert is tired of pretending by the time junior year starts (so is race but albert doesn’t know that yet)
so albert enlists the help of jack (for artistry) and sarah (to make sure jack actually does what he’s supposed to and doesn’t just ignore the plan and do whatever he wants) to help him make one of those cheesy homecoming posters to ask race
they do it and it’s SO CUTE
it’s covered in little inside jokes and stuff only race’s friends know about him and it clearly says d a t e so albert hopes race gets the actual message and doesn’t think he’s asking as a friend
but it’s race and he’s kinda oblivious and doesn’t want to assume and be wrong but also doesn’t want to ask and be rejected so of course he doesn’t get the message
so homecoming arrives and they eat and dance and blah blah dance things
and then a slow song comes on and albert asks race to dance :,)
and while they’re dancing albert just says as casually as he can (he’s internally freaking out but he looks pretty calm on the outside) “i really like you, y’know. like,, in the ‘more than a friend’ way.”
race’s brain short circuited for a second but he managed to breathe out a “yeah, i like you too. have since like,,,, forever.”
and then they make eye contact and start laughing
“god we’re dumb”
and then the laughter dies a bit when they catch eachothers eyes again
and then
as you’ve probably guessed
they kith !!!
and then jack ruins it by whistling at them
but it’s still very cute
✨and the rest is history✨
i love them sm !! this au lives completely rent free in my brain ngl
thank you for all the kind words (and the opportunity to do what i do best) jac !!! ilysm and i’m so happy to see you back !! i hope you keep feeling better <3
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▼ :  Are there popular head canons for your character that you disagree with? Why?
THAT FLARE IS DUMB AND THE WEAPON WOULDN'T WORK. THE WEAPON LITERALLY WORKS. IF THE PROTAGS HADNT CAUGHT X/Y FLARE WOULDVE BEEN SUCCESSFUL AAAAAA PLSSSS
that lysandre is a one-dimensional, purely evil (campy evil at that), and stupid.
"holo caster is holocaust" is incredibly insensitive and tasteless, it isn't 2014 anymore and it wasn't even funny then.
that kalos lore is barren and is a bad region :") I wrote up a brief plot summary of the games here, and wrote out some of the less obvious lore here. #Kalos Is Good Actually
there are a ton of others but id be here all day
❤ :  What are some role-plays that you have done/are doing that you particularly enjoy and wish to share with your followers?
goddddd ngl I write a lot of things that I think "WOW im so proud of this" and want to cherish forever..... i love lysandre.....
First thing that comes to mind is my major plot with @fuladaris. lysandre kidnapping sycamore and forcing him to be immortal...... fucking incredible
Honestly the rest of my rps with fuladaris too. Everything we create just blows me away and has fundamentally shaped my perception of lysandre and how i write him.
Anything where Lysandre shows how evil and twisted and narcissistic he actually is. I wish I could remember all the ones that ive written that make me happy but I'm not sure... what come sto mind: Lysandre's warped retelling of the legend while convincing @cacturnefortheworse to join flare. The contention between lysandre and @geobadge. A bunch of individual meme replies and dash commentaries I've done where lysandre just Fucking Loses It -- like this and this.
(note: these aren't necessarily my favorite threads that ive done, i have plenty of other threads and dynamics that are very important and bring me so much joy, these are just the ones that come to mind for how they highlight lysandre's twistedness and characterization, and that is what is most important for me to share with my followers.)
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ahundredtimesover · 3 years
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this is how we break is so good!!! ngl i cried at that flashback scene where they broke up ): hit me real hard bcs the same thing kinda happened to me lol but anyways !! your writing is always so impeccable. i just love how you write angst, it really makes me feel like im there. jungkook and oc's characterization are all so good too. im so proud of jungkook for finding it in himself to stop lawyering and just go to the path where he really wants. and they were so brave for the decision of breaking up too, I think it was a healthy one albeit hard.
also i just want to add that the part that says "and the mixtapes you made for him because they were “more organic than Spotify playlists.”" literally made me laugh out loud. i see what you did there 🤣
thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us!! i hope you have a great day!!
Thank you thank you for your kind words, anon! And that was a tough one so I’m sending you hugs 🤗 I’ve always wanted to write this kind of breakup and the feeling of pain with the inevitability of things. Glad you like their characterizations and decisions, too! This was an unplanned story so I’m happy it’s resonating with you huhu.
Also srsly, I had an ex make me mixtapes so it was a callback but that bit about Spotify came out so naturally (I swear it wrote itself; it knows it’s shit). 😭🤣 but I appreciate you reading and sending this message! There’s a typhoon where I am but I’m fine; I hope you’re well and safe! 🥰
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