For the Director's commentary game...(pretty please!) from one of my favorite fics, Loid Forger is NOT a Cuddler:
Oh boy! Chapter 3 of Cuddler was probably one of the most difficult chapters for me to write, possibly tied with chapter 2 as I am neither a child nor a dog but had to basically go into what a child and dog would think/act like lol
It's been awhile since I wrote this one, but I do remember thinking as I was typing that Loid Forger would absolutely be the one to have a full conversation and/or argument with a dog (because it's canon as seen in Ch 58 of the manga). And because Cuddler is set after Loid and Yor are officially together and know each other's identities, I wanted to make Loid be open to admitting pretty much anything that wasn't the fact he was a cuddler - this time being that he spoiled everyone in the apartment way too much as well as how he enjoyed the hustle and bustle of family life.
This chapter was particularly difficult to write in terms of description, as the reader pretty much knows the apartment already. So, I had to rely on little details to make the flow not so choppy and to give a break from the quick and simple dialog, and what I decided to focus on instead was the sounds around the apartment simply because going from being by yourself to having a family involving a young child and a wife with a loud, annoying siscon of a brother would be a big change.
And the other way around is also correct - going from a full apartment to complete quiet with the exception of a pretty chill dog.
I remember writing it and wanting to capture how Loid, after so long of being a family man, would find the quiet now uncomfortable and unsettling, and so I added him reminiscing after Bond became distracted by the food in front of him as dogs do lol
I honestly think it's interesting how chapter 3 of Cuddler has been a favorite of at least a couple people I know while it's one I'm still uncertain of myself, but I did have fun writing this cute little scene! The Loid and Bond duo are always just so cute!
A little fun fact about Bond's meal - it used to be the one I fed my mom's dogs when I had to petsit. Now, they just straight up eat chicken from a can. That was actually a big inspiration for this scene, because those two are so spoiled.
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this little commentary! Thank you for the submission! 💕
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Did anyone else notice that they changed the outfit Loid tells Yor she would look good in?
Here's the original outfit, which they did put in the episode:
But the blue suit was the one Loid was referring to in the anime:
Which we will most likely see later, because it looks exactly like the suit she wears the cruise arc:
Meaning that Yor will canonically go back for the same outfit that Loid thought she would look good in.
*Note that in the weekly outfits page for Yor and Loid, Yor also picks out pants, because Loid said she would look good in them. However, they don't seem to be the exact same pants.
Anyway, that's the post.
Yor trusts and values Loid's opinion, and they're in love.
*Mic Drop*
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Alright, as promised I have the list of some of my fav / recent reads from AO3 below. I couldn't add a lot / some recent ones I had bookmared. I have read them all (or at least read them partially at least) to know these should interest many others as well!
I have a bunch of them bookmared here on my AO3, which you can feel free to follow!
Will make a break, so that I am not spamming people hehe, enjoy ~
P.S. let me know if you want to add anything to list, I would love to read more fics <3
Multiple Chapters
wasteland baby! (by yours truly, finished!)
Loid is injured after a mission. Yor is worried. Anya is at a sleepover.
once more with feelings (Forger post reveal, ongoing)
Twilight has two simple rules: No unnecessary touching and no unnecessary lying. They've gotten him through the cognitive dissonance that playing house creates, and finally, after four years, peace between Ostania and Westalis is within reach. He just has to kill one man—a man guarded by none other than the Thorn Princess.
But when identities are revealed and loyalties come to light, the rules no longer apply. The line between Twilight and Loid Forger begins to blur, begging the question: if your fake wife (that you may have feelings for) is the final boss, and your pretend daughter (that you might actually love) knows your every thought, is peace even an option?
Oh, and there's also the damn dog.
acts like you're perfect (everyone knows) (Twiyor Eden AU, finished)
Loid Forger: friendliest, kindest, most liked. Impending valedictorian by a large margin, voted most likely to succeed, voted best smile. Always surrounded by friends. Always surrounded by admirers. Undeniably the Golden Boy of Eden High.
Yor Briar: beautiful, kind, but a little odd, a little invisible. The quiet girl in the corner. Like everybody else at Eden High, she’s fully aware of Loid Forger’s status as Golden Boy, but it has very little to do with her.
Until she finds him in a compromising position.
Wine Red Eyes (Twiyor, Soft & Vulnerable Twilight, finished)
Twilight is not a man who hesitates. The one time he did, he is forced to ask himself one question: Why?
Eternity is one hell of a long time (Twilight Demon AU/Yor Assissan, amazing premise and it's written so fucking well, on-going)
In which, Yor needs a date to a party and somehow manages to summon the strongest demon in hell...and also bind him to her for eternity.
How does one accidentally bind themselves to a demon for eternity?
When Stars Align (Eden AU, Loid x Yor, on-going)
His mission was straightforward. He had to go to Eden Academy, become an Imperial Scholar and earn a clean record, and perhaps make a few connections that would be useful in the long run as a bonus.
Forming emotional attachments certainly wasn’t anywhere useful or required in his mission, but why did he feel otherwise?
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Or, an Eden AU wherein Loid Forger falls in love with Yor Briar. When stars align, it’s just pretty hard to tear away from your fate.
Flawless (Twiyor Stripper AU, Idiots in love istg, on-going, it's quite sexy haha, on-going)
A chance encounter at a strip club: it is not love at first sight, but it is a close thing, laced with curiosity and appreciation. ...The lap dance doesn't hurt, either.
As it turns out, they catch on like a house on fire.
Join this gentle couple on their robust journey of getting to know one another on their meandering path of courting into romance and devotion through vignettes of time spent together and apart.
Spy x Family reacts to Spy x Family anime (this is so dumb and hilarious, light read, on-going)
A big screen lit up in front of the room, and it said SPY X FAMILY
Or: Spy x family reaction fic because i can't find any so i decided to do it myself
A lost solider in Ostania (Loid/Twilight loses his memory, on-going)
He was a soilder fighting in the war. Taking down enemies and doing everything he could to survive. So then, how did he wake up in an hospital bed in the very country he was fighting against, surrounded by his wife and daughter?
Wait, wife and daughter?!
Something isn't right. But for some reason, he didn't mind it as much as he should.
dalliance (Identity reveal, on-going)
Yor Forger falls in love with someone that isn't her husband. She panics.
Meanwhile, Thorn Princess and Twilight are forced to work together. They hate each other, until they really, really don't.
One-Shots
Spy x Family One-Shot Collections (A collection of Spy x Family one-shots by yours truly)
I would love any feedback on this or suggestions to write a one-shot. From now on I will be posting one-shots as one-shot rather than in a collection haha. But do give this a read!
Damm you, Loid Forger! (jealous Loid Forger)
Loid Forger wasn’t all that great, so why did everyone respect and like him so much?
At least, Chief Medical Director Gerald Gorey could try his luck with this new beautiful nurse who was a goddess incarnate, right?
Operation: Tin Foil (comedic one shot, Anya being Anya)
Anya has a problem: her parents can't stop thinking about kissing each other. Her solution? A whole roll of tin foil.
miracles of the ugliest hour (Yor centric cute one shot!)
The first step out the changeroom door is one of hesitation, the second is courage, and every step after that is gravity returning her to her natural spot next to Loid’s side. She twirls once and glances up at him shyly. “What do you think?”
Or: Yor stresses about what to wear to her next work party.
What do you do to me? (smut but it's super well written, also I tend not to read smut but even I was into it!!)
Part 1 of Accidental Confessions
This was bad.
This was fucking bad.
Then, why the hell did it feel so fucking good?
Twilight couldn’t stop. Why couldn’t he stop? He had done things most would call impossible, accomplished missions that had had less than a thousandth of a percent chance of succeeding. So out of all the things he could do in this damned world, why couldn’t he stop this?
You Truly Are My Vice (Yor's confession, continuation of the pervious one-shot)
Part 2 of Accidental Confessions
What was she thinking?
What the fuck was she thinking?!
She was sleeping with the enemy, right? That’s what she was doing?
Shopkeeper was going to kill her.
If Twilight wasn't going to kill her first.
No Greater Gift Than This (Funny Twiyor anniversary one-shot)
Also I think this has to be a Hozier reference?
Loid plans several surprises for his anniversary with Yor, but a four-day-old sandwich and some tummy troubles force him to spend the special day on the living room couch (in the most non-sexy way possible).
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