Personally, when it comes to brokenstar, I hate the whole “born evil punishment!!!” Enough that we just. Deleted him. His name is Pinetail now.
Instead we decided to bring somebody who didn’t get the villainy they deserved out of the woodwork- good Ol’ Foxheart.
Do you plan on doing anything with her?
I am actually very fond of the idea that Brokenstar was a curse made manifest; but we abide by the shape of our form. If a curse is manifesting as a person, then a person it must be. No one is born evil, ergo not even the concept of pain and rage can be unsoothable if it's made of soft flesh.
So my Brokenstar isn't born evil; he's born angry. Short tempered and sensitive, molded by clan culture and its philosophy of might-makes-right. It was only radical change in the form of Bluestar helping to dethrone another Clan's tyrant that could stop him.
And most importantly, it's righting the ancient wrong of SkyClan's destruction that finally brings him peace.
But anyway! Foxheart!
She's remaining as a supporting character in the redux of Yellowfang’s Secret; Brokenstar's Cataclysm. Raggedstar's first deputy and generally a nasty individual. Her role is kinda reduced because the main character isn't Yellowfang anymore, but she is there.
Her son is Wolfstep! He is no longer her brother because the timeline is being stretched out. He's from a single kit litter and she was not heavily involved in his life. Deadbeat mom <3
They actually have a name tradition. Houndstar is their ancestor, he is the father of Mousewing, she gave birth to Foxheart, who had Wolfstep, and then the tradition ended with Badgerfang.
Him and Fernshade had another kitten at the lake but couldn't bring themselves to continue the tradition; Ivytail. Blackstar's niece.
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12am and i'm starting to hate people again. time 2 sleep i think
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Omg with chapter 15 you had me SOBBING. I'm so inspired to do stuff but I always make half projects and Partially finished stuff. Either ways I raise a Glass of mead to your works. You have me constantly checking me Email for updates. Love it keep up the good work!
Thank you, and sorry for taking THE LONGEST TIME TO REPLY. I've had a rather hectic week and now I have the worst cold/flu ever so YAY ME.
THANK YOU! I raise a glass back as thanks and gratitude for you finding enjoyment in my silly way-more-dramatic-than-I-was-anticipating-but-I'm-having-fun-haha-I-totally-haven't-cried-writing-this-you-have-no-proof-why-am-I-like-this fic.
I was actually really worried that the last chapter wasn't emotional enough?
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your tags onthe death student post got me laughing so hard i had to fix at least half a dozen typos before sending this help 😭😭😭 also i hope u feel better soon and recover with ease, im sorry ur not feeling well... :( [if the post i saw after this one is still accurate; i admittedly forgot to check the date bc im on mobile rn and it slips my mind alot fjsgdjhdjdg]
HAHA ITS OK IM GLAD I MADE U LAUGHHHHHHH i try my best ♥️ and thank u!! i am recovering- i woke up just a lil bit ago and i’m for sure feeling a whole lot better than i did a few days ago 👍👍 we r on the road 2 recovery….
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halloween social on wed, putting together my costume ^-^
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