Scars
Summary: Jessica offered Aaron to come at the beach with Jack and her. But there is something she doesn't know about her ex-brother-in-law that prevent him to say yes.
Characters: Aaron Hotchner, Jessica Brooks, Jack Hotchner and David Rossi
Contents: this text is all about living with deep and visible scars, and to overcome (or not) the trauma of an assault like the one Hotch endured with Foyet. So, it's not funny at all (even if the end is supposed to be cute).
This is a text written for the CM Summer-Sunshine challenge organized by @imagining-in-the-margins. The prompt chosen was: "it's getting hot outside and Character is self-conscious about their scars", mixed-up with "It's like Hotch at the beach". :D
PS : English is not my mother language so they are necessarily mistakes. Sorry about that.
PPS: Sorry for the dialogues, but the new posting system doesn't seem to know what a conversation is (well, Tumblr is clearly not the better place to post arts of any kind lately...).
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Night had fallen on the U.S. East Coast by the time Hotch walked up the corridor to his apartment. Absorbed in a report he had to reread before transmitting to the Committee, he hadn’t seen the hour go by and had looked up from his desk when his entire team had already deserted the premises. As he closed the door of his office, he saw a message left by Jessica on his phone. Logically, she was asking when he’d be back. He mentally slapped his forehead before replying that he was on his way, and his insides knotted together.
He hadn’t had to beg Haley’s younger sister for help to get her to agree to take Jack into her care, but he couldn’t help feeling guilty when he left his son in her hands. The boy was risking absolutely nothing – perhaps even less than with him – but in Aaron’s mind, it wasn’t his ex-sister-in-law’s role to ensure his offspring’s education. But he couldn’t give up his job to devote himself fully to his role as a single father. Lives were at stake and, even if he doubted it some days, his team needed him.
Unable to make a choice at this hour, he repressed his galloping anxiety and entered his home. Jessica immediately turned her head in his direction. Busy in the kitchen, she took the few steps that separated her from the living room, wiping her hands on a tea towel, a warm smile lighting up her round face. She greeted him without making the slightest remark, and he put on a brave face as best he could. From where he stood, he could hear Jack’s voice and lapping from the open bathroom door.
“How did it go?”
“Good, no worries. As ever,” she added teasingly.
Hotch had always had a special relationship with Jessica. He’d met her before he’d met Haley, even though they hadn’t been in the same classes, and he’d quickly leaned on her to approach this teenager he believed to be an angel fallen from the heavens. Unable to articulate a proper sentence when she was less than a meter away from him, he had benefited from the providential help of this curly-haired blonde to act as a go-between. At the time, he thought the two girls were friends. It was only several months later that he learned they were in fact related by blood. A discovery he had taken badly at first, before realizing that there had been no malice behind their stratagem: he had never really asked what was behind their relationship.
Besides, all he had to do was pay more attention. Regularly, people worried about him being so close to a woman who looked so much like the one he’d lost, and he always retorted that they weren’t that similar. He sincerely thought so, but he wasn’t blind either, and still noticed the common traits the two sisters shared. Except for the blondness of their hair, they had the same nose, the same smile, and the same stature – not to mention the similar expressions and mannerisms. But Jessica wasn’t Haley. He had never felt for the former what he had felt for the latter, though he couldn’t quite explain it. And his feelings remained identical beyond the disappearance of Jack’s mother.
“Thanks again,” he said, embarrassed but grateful.
“You know what I’m going to say.”
“Yes, he admitted, placing his suit jacket on the back of the sofa. Anything of note?”
“Yeah. There’s a parents’ meeting next Thursday.”
“Again?” he frowned, confused.
“It’s one every quarter, Jessica pointed out with a sneer at the corner of her lips. The headmistress would love you to be there this time.”
In his memory, the previous meeting had taken place just a few weeks earlier. But clearly, time had passed much more quickly than he’d thought. And yes, due to business that had propelled him to Nevada and Wisconsin respectively on the day in question, he’d missed the first two sessions and Jessica had once again dedicated herself to doing his job. As to whether he would be present at this one…
“Okay. I’ll send a message to all the sociopaths.”
Jack’s aunt smiled briefly, then instantly turned serious again. A reaction that didn’t escape his profiler’s instincts, although he made a point of not reading his relatives.
“Is there a problem?”
“Er… no. It’s just… she hesitated, dodging his gaze before jumping in. I would have liked to take Jack to the beach this weekend.”
“Sounds like a good idea, he reacted, reassured. He’ll love it. Have you talked to him about it?”
“Not yet. I wanted to check with you first.”
“I have no problem with that. It will do him good to see something other than the city.”
With the sun in the sky for several weeks already, his son was running around like a caged lion in this narrow, dark apartment. He demanded to go outside regularly and clung to the playground where his father and aunt took him until the last second. But he also talked to them a lot about what he saw in picture books or on TV, calling out to them to go and wander in more natural spaces than Arlington, Washington D.C.’s highly urbanized neighborhood.
“In fact, I was thinking of offering it to you too.”
Aaron flinched at the suggestion.
“What do you mean?” he asked, hoping he’d misheard.
“Come with us.”
A vise tightened around the BAU director’s torso, preventing him from breathing normally and panicking his heart rate.
“Uh… no,” he said, lowering his eyes.
“Why? You don’t have a case. What’s stopping you from coming?”
“I… I can’t,” Hotch stammered, leaning back on the couch to counter the vertigo that threatened to make him wobble.
“What? Can’t you swim?”
“Of course, I can. It’s just…”
Several spikes of pain shot through his chest simultaneously, forcing him to grit his teeth for a moment. It had never occurred to him that one day he’d have to tell what he’d been through to someone else than an FBI agent. Not this soon, at least. It was too recent. The memories were so vivid inside him, he could still hear his breath in his ear, he could still feel the metal puncturing his skin, tearing his clothes in the process. A metallic aftertaste even rose in his throat, as it had that night.
“Daddy!”
A pajama-clad rocket rushed toward him, his pale hair barely dry. Aaron’s smile automatically spread across his face, and he knelt down to take his son in his arms.
“Hey! Hi, buddy.”
He kissed him on the forehead and Jack pecked him on the cheek in return, his little arms firmly clasped around his neck. Even crouched, he was still immense to the five-year-old who was forced to stand on tiptoe.
“How did it go to school?”
“Great, asserted the boy, settling back to his heels. We learned the states.”
“So you know where you live now.”
“Virginia. But I already knew,” he added with a certain pride.
“Well done, son,” congratuled his father, kissing him again.
Hotch rose to his feet, lifting his descendant to the sofa. Standing on the cushion, the little boy questioned the two adults at once.
“What were you saying?”
“I was telling your father that I wanted to take you to the beach this weekend.”
“Oh, so good! He exclaimed promptly, his head swiveling in the direction of his progenitor. Are you coming with us?”
It was a logical question, but one that still embarrassed him. Even more so now that his audience had reached a single-digit age.
“Uh… I was just telling your aunt that it was going to be complicated for me to accompany you.”
“Why?”
Jack had entered that phase of childhood when every thought called for a question, the answer to which called for a new question.
“I… I can’t really go to the beach like you two.”
“Why is that? Is it because you’re an FBI agent?”
His son was very proud to have a father officiating for the Bureau, but the exact role he played there, as well as the ins and outs of the position, completely escaped him. Aaron had already tried to explain, without going into detail, but it was clear that his fertile imagination still greatly distorted the child’s image of him. Having seen so many cartoon series about superheroes forced to keep their identities secret, he must surely have thought that the man who raised him led the same double life.
“No, it has nothing to do with that.”
“So, why? I want you to come with us.”
Hotch turned his attention to Jessica, who simply returned his gaze. He realized she wasn’t going to help him out of this situation and wondered if she hadn’t deliberately brought it up in front of Jack to force him to talk. For if there was one thing he failed at more than anything else, it was communication. Many people had criticized him – and still did – for not expressing himself sufficiently and precisely. Haley had finally rejected him, tired of living next door to a safe that no longer told the story of his daily life. His employees scolded him for all the information he kept to himself, which often put his life in danger. His own mother never failed to point out that he didn’t give enough news. In short, he had to learn to talk.
“… Jack, can you go to your bedroom for a minute? We’ll… we’ll call you when you can come back.”
Jack pouted, disappointed to be dismissed.
“… Okay”, he relented, getting off the couch.
The profiler saw his son, head down, shuffle into his bedroom and heard the door slam shut. Jessica said nothing throughout, but her attention was immediately focused on her ex-brother-in-law as soon as the boy was out of earshot.
“What’s up?”
Where should he start? She, like Jack’s mother, knew what his real duties were withing the FBI. She knew that he tracked down serial killers and sociopaths of all stripes, and that his job wasn’t without its risks. She knew that her sister had been the victim of one of them, just as she knew that Aaron was not exempt of responsibility for this tragic end. But she was unaware of many of the details of the case, which were known only to his team members, his superiors and himself. Classified as confidential, it was logical that she should not be privy to them, but given the situation, he had no option but to lift the veil on some of them.
“Do you remember the day… - a knot formed in his throat – the day Haley and Jack went into protective custody?”
“Hard to forget.”
He guessed that she would have liked to add something, but the mere thought of those few words was surely too painful.
“That day, I was in hospital.”
“In hospital?”
“Yes. That’s why you didn’t hear it from me.”
The task had to be performed by a Witness Protection agent, more experienced in this kind of procedure than the BAU profilers.
“But… what were you doing there?” worried the young woman, confused.
“The guy who killed your sister, he began, giving up the idea of pronouncing his name; he broke into my flat the night before. And he stabbed me. In the chest. Nine times.”
Shocked, Jessica stumbled to the sofa, where she sat down heavily. Hotch remained motionless for a moment. He’d chosen not to go out of his way to make it clear what had happened, so that there could be no misinterpretation, but he was belatedly realizing that this kind of announcement – which was practically part of his daily routine – must be the equivalent of an uppercut for her. So, he took a seat beside her and continued, in a softer tone:
“I survived because he deliberately avoided vital organs, but the scars are there and… they’re clearly visible.”
When he had left the hospital, his mother had come to stay with him, to give him the care he needed to heal his wounds, and to make sure he was eating and hydrating properly. Despite his protests, he had no choice but to bow, exposing his mutilated torso to the woman who had given him life. But once she’d gone, it had been difficult for him to look at himself in the mirror again. Foyet had used a hunting knife with a serrated blade and hadn’t been too delicate. The cuts were deep, and muscle and skin had been torn indelibly. These marks, darker than his natural skin tone, had repulsed him violently. And later, when he had decided to face this disfigured body, tragedy had struck, and he was now unable to face his own reflection.
“I… I didn’t know,” Jessica murmured, suddenly terribly embarrassed by her insistence.
“I’ve never told you about it either,” he pointed out with a shy smile.
He hadn’t wanted to hurt her feelings or make her feel guilty about anything. The number of people who knew that side of the story could be counted on the fingers of one hand, and he didn’t blame her for wanting so much to know why her proposal put him off so much.
“O… okay, she finally said. I understand that you can’t go shirtless, but… there are solutions. You… you could wear one of those swim shirts they put on kids to protect them from the sun.”
He could see what she was talking about, but at this hour, it still seemed an insurmountable challenge.
“Jessica…”
“It must exist for adults, she cut him off before he could argue further. Or, if you don’t want to swim, there’s nothing to stop you coming with us and staying in your t-shirt. You can play beach games with Jack.”
“Jess, you don’t understand…”
“No, it’s you who doesn’t understand that I just want you to spend time with your son. Because that’s what he wants.”
The next morning, David Rossi entered his neighbor’s office and the latter, staring into space, didn’t react to his arrival. The former pensioner held back a remark and, with a smile on his lips, walked over to the chair facing Hotch, sat down quietly, folded his hands over his stomach and said:
“Hello, moon? Earth here.”
“What? Gasped the manager, coming back to the present moment. Dave?”
“Hello, Aaron.”
“Well… Hello, he stammered, lost. Have you been here long?”
“An hour and a half.”
“Really?”
Aaron felt dizzy as he glanced at his watch and discovered that two hours had disappeared from his memory. He remembered arriving at dawn, passing the night shift ready for a well-deserved rest and settling down behind his screen. He then logged on, skimmed through the e-mails he’d received since leaving the previous day, and turned his attention to the agency’s accounts. His mind must have drifted off before he realized it, and now he found his mentor sitting across from him.
“No, I just sat down,” he admitted, smiling.
“Oh. Okay, he punctuated, somewhat relieved. Sorry, but Jack tells me that sometimes he calls me for fifteen minutes and I don’t react.”
“Children always exaggerate.”
“I’m not that sure, I taught him to tell the time.”
The child couldn’t exactly do calculations based on hours, minutes, and seconds, but he was already able to visualize, on watch with hands, what fifteen, twenty, thirty or forty-five minutes represented. And fussy as he could be on certain subjects, his father doubted he could have lied about it. He could even imagine him checking the clock in the living room to see how much time had elapsed between his first call and the reaction of the man who was supposed to be taking care of him.
“Anyway, I’m really just settling in, Dave quipped. What’s on your mind?”
Hotch sat back in his chair and sighed. He hadn’t necessarily intended to talk about his private life with the members of his team, but the man facing him was surely the one who knew him best and who, moreover, was aware of the latest events.
“Jessica would like to take Jack to the beach this weekend.”
“She’s right. It’s sunny, it’s going to be warm, and it’ll do him good to see something else than the four walls of the apartment.”
“I think so too.”
“But?” he bounced back, raising an inquisitive eyebrow, a mocking gleam in his eye.
The co-founder of the BAU had always had a very detached view of the world around him and, while he knew how to be serious when it was really necessary, he often sprinkled situations with sarcastic and ironic comments. Not born yesterday, he’d been through enough adventures to be able to take a step back from the misfortunes that befell his loved ones or himself and defuse the surrounding stagnation with a touch of humor that wasn’t always appropriate. An attitude that might exasperate some, but to which Aaron was accustomed.
“She wants me to come with them.”
“That’s a good idea too, he said, smiling frankly. It’ll do you good to get some fresh air.”
“I can’t go to the beach, Dave.”
“Why not? You can swim.”
The agency manager felt the nape of his neck tingle with annoyance. His interlocutor wasn’t an idiot, he knew exactly what the real problem was, but he was playing the fool in order to force him to verbalize what was on his mind. A tried-and-tested tactic, which worked all the more since Hotch had no objection to talking openly with him. More so than with any other agent on the floor or even in the building.
“That’s not the point. I remind you that I was stabbed in the torso.”
“Ah, yes, that’s right,” he pretended to remember.
“I can see it’s made an impression on you…” grumbled his superior, glaring at him.
Rossi let the eye attack slide over him and continued, still serene:
“Did you tell Jessica?”
“Yes.”
“And?”
“She said that didn’t stop me from coming. All I had to do was put on a swim shirt, or anything else, and stay on the beach.”
“But?”
“That’s ridiculous! Erupted Aaron, irritated by the placidity of his interlocutor. I’m going to be the only guy dressed on the beach who won’t put a toe in the water.”
He could really see himself sitting on the sand, his top on his back, in front of a crowd of bathers merrily frolicking in the waves. He could even see the puzzled glances of his neighbors and hear the whispers of the low masses debating the strangeness of his behavior. Because, honestly, who bothered to make the trip to the coast to enjoy neither the sun nor the sea? Dave must have had a very different reasoning, for he rolled his eyes and, abandoning his snide expression, retorted in a more serious tone:
“First, no. I don’t think you’ll be the only one with something on your back. And secondly, she’s right. There are plenty of people who go to the sea without setting foot in it. Either because they can’t swim, or because they find the water too cold, or because they’re just there to sunbath. So nobody’s going to notice one more guy standing on the beach, staring at the horizon. Even less so if the guy in question is making sandcastles with his son or playing ball with him.”
Hotch didn’t reply, trying to conjure up memories of those rare trips to the ocean he’d made as a child. With his family scattered all over the country, he did indeed have cousins of his own generation with whom he’d spent a few summers breathing in the sea spray. But his childish mind had only retained the activities he’d shared with them, not the scenery that had hosted them. Were there really that many people dodging the tide? For him, the beach was the place of all complexes. The site by excellence where all humans had to face their fellow’s gaze on what seemed to them to be atrocious deformities. The place where all those who didn’t fit into the shackles of the beauty of the moment were not welcome. Like him.
“Aaron, you say yourself that you don’t spend enough time with Jack and that one day he’s going to hate you for that, Rossi pursued. Jessica is offering you an opportunity to do just that. Don’t turn it down because you’re afraid someone will inadvertently lift your shirt.”
Jack would be turning six in the next few months, and, at that moment, he still saw his father as an unbeatable hero who would capture villains and save lives. Reason enough for him to accept all his absences, but in four or five years, it wouldn’t be worth much.
“The time to spend with him is now. Not when he’ll be fifteen and won’t talk to you because you didn’t take care of him.”
Two days later, on a beach on the East Coast of the United States, Aaron was watching his son from a distance, sitting on the sand. He had put on swim shorts, sandals, and a t-shirt and, sunglasses on, waited near Jessica and Jack’s belongings, his gaze fixed on the latter. The little boy was wading next to his aunt, his arms and legs lapping in the cold water. Very much at ease despite the waves, he smiled and laughed happily, splashing his mother’s sister every chance he got. A discreet smile stretched the lips of his father, who felt a gently warmth invaded him at the sight of his offspring’s happiness. If it had been hard for him to get back on his feet, it was clear that Jack had bounced back and adapted to his new, rather peculiar life. However, Hotch doubted he had anything to do with it, given the obvious closeness between the nephew and his aunt.
Concentrating on his son’s exploits, he tried as best he could to ignore the people gravitating around him, coming and going from the sea to their towels, chatting about anything and everything in skimpy clothing, their skin exposed to all eyes. He could count on the fingers of one hand the people who were as scantily clad as he was, and he’d already come across a few frowns from his closest neighbors. Most of them were parents, probably worried about their children. If some were a few aware of the danger, others were perhaps a little too aware. Nevertheless, as long as he didn’t pretend to go near children, he was pretty sure no one would call the police to have him arrested.
“Crowded today.”
Surprised, Aaron looked up to discover a man standing next to him, wearing shorts and a mid-sleeves top, a cap screwed on his head. He must have been about the same age as him, despite his already graying hair. Without warning, the stranger sat down next to him, not in the least embarrassed to approach him in this way.
“Which one’s yours? he asked, without giving him time to answer. Mine’s the two little ones over there. In yellow and orange bathing suits. With their mother.”
He presented a trio of girls having fun some fifty yards away. If the girls weren’t twins, they must be barely a year apart, maybe even less. Older than Jack, they looked very much alike: the same chestnut hair cascading over their shoulders, the same morphology, and the same energy. Their mother held them by the hand, tensing every time the swell slammed its icy foam against her belly.
“Name’s Kurt. What’s yours?”
“… Aaron,” he answered after too long a hesitation.
“To tell you the truth, the beach isn’t my thing, Kurt continued. I was a jerk when I was a teenager and had a car accident. I went through the windshield. Miraculously, my face escaped the massacre, but from there to here – he pointed to his collarbone and down to his pelvis – it’s scar fair – front, back and arms with it. My wife doesn’t mind, she’s used to it; but you can imagine that getting half-naked in front of everyone isn’t the first thing that comes to mind. But my kids love to splash around, so I’m in.”
The BAU director hadn’t dared interrupt him, but the man had told his story with surprising casualness.
“You’re probably wondering why I’m telling you all this, right?”
“Yes,” he confessed, confused.
“Because you’ve got the same face I had when I came back to sit on my ass on a beach afterwards, Kurt declared, more seriously. You’re scared. You’re scared everyone’s going to find out it’s Vietnam under there, and it’s going to scare the kids away.”
An ice cube fell into the pit of his stomach.
“I know, I thought the same thing. And then, one day, I was forced to take my top off. And you know what I discovered?”
“… No,” Hotch hesitated, nauseous.
“That my wife was right. Nobody cares. People are so focused on their navels that they don’t pay attention to their neighbors.”
Kurt stared at him for a moment, smirking, then went on:
“I know what you’re thinking: it’s all a bunch of hooey. The second you take your top off, all the girls are going to pass out – and not because of your charm. But I can assure you they won’t. Maybe two or three people will frown, then the teens will go back to taking their stupid selfies and the parents will remember that they forgot to put sunscreen on their kids.”
By reflex, Aaron observed the surroundings out of the corner of his eye and noted that those who had been distrusted by his behavior had indeed moved on. In appearance, at least.
“Mind you, I’m not saying it’s a simple process, admitted the man, it takes a little time. But one day, you’ll get there. You’ll forget what’s bothering you so much and go swimming with your son.”
“How…?”
“You can’t stop looking at the blonde with the curls and the kid.”
He showed with his chin at Jessica and Jack, who were carrying on unsuspecting with their ablutions. Without realizing it, he must have continued to watch his son at regular intervals, his paternal instinct more alert than ever.
“Daddy!”
“Ah, duty calls! Kurt joked as one of the little girls waved her hand in his direction. Have a good day, Aaron, and don’t forget to forget.”
Without further ado, the guy got to his feet and removed his top, which he kept in his hand. As he’d announced, his entire chest was lined with white scars, as were his arms from shoulders to elbows. With his skin already in the process of tanning, the net of scarred veins stood out even more. Several people wrinkled their noses at the sight of him, but Kurt ignored them completely, his attention focused on his daughters, whom he joined in a few strides. Hotch suddenly felt ridiculous with the small dark marks scattered here and there across his torso.
“Dad!” exclaimed a familiar voice nearby.
A kid was rushing towards him, throwing water and sand at the people in his path. He landed right on top of him, almost collapsing due to the unstable terrain.
“Take it easy, Jack,” advised his father, reaching out to catch him.
“What did the man want?”
“Information,” Aaron lied, spotting Kurt in the distance, playing with his daughters.
“Oh, commented his son, before abruptly changing the subject. Hey! Look what I found. It’s moving inside.”
He opened his clenched fist to reveal a shell whose operculum had been replaced by a cluster of pearly legs, tightly packed together.
“Yes, that’s normal. It’s a hermit crab.”
“Oh! What’s this?” shouted Jack, ecstatic, staring at the animal with a look more eager than ever.
“It’s a kind of crab without a carapace. That’s why he hides in a shell, explained his father, amused by his curious expression. You should put him back in the water. He’s probably scared, so he might leaved his shard, and then he’ll be in danger.”
“No! I don’t want him to die!” the boy suddenly panicked, closing his hand.
“Come on, let’s put it back in the water then.”
Hotch, who was more concerned about his son getting pinched like he had been years earlier, stood up and took Jack by the hand. They walked to the foreshore and, with their feet in the water, he instructed his offspring to place the crustacean on the sand. The boy obeyed, and the hermit crab quickly stood up on its claws and bolted out to sea.
“Funny!”
“Yes, nodded his sire with a smile. Do you want to go swimming with Aunt Jessica again?”
“No. I want to play with you.”
“You want to build a castle?”
“Yeah.”
“Okay. So go tell your aunt you’re staying with me. I’ll take the shovel and bucket.”
“Cool!”
Jack ran towards Jessica at once, who had been watching them the whole time. Aaron climbed back into the bag he’d left behind and retrieved all the beach mason’s essentials. He then went back down to an area not far from the water, but still dry, which would be a more solid base for the construction to come. His son reappeared beside him, breathless, his hair a mess.
“Put your armbands in the bag.”
“Okay.”
Obediently, he galloped over to the towels, threw away his loose buoys and returned to him with an ear-to-ear grin. His father was tempted to send him back to actually put his things in the tote before a gust of wind blew them away, but his son’s spirit dissuaded him.
“Jessica stays in the water?”
“Yes. She said she was going for a swim.”
“Okay. Ready to make the biggest castle on the beach?”
“Yeah!”
He presented his left fist and Jack rapidly slammed his right fist into it. The duo then set to work, digging, shoveling, piling, and consolidating buckets and buckets of sand to build the most remarkable edifice in the area. All without a care in the world.
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LWA: I'm procrastinating again from professional writing, so I'll take the opportunity of you being uncomfortable with "God Ships It" to do my rant. When I started attempting to read GO fanfic, I was startled by how...panicked?...it is about the source material. The panic is most obvious when it comes to dealing with any of Crowley's character flaws--this is a fandom that gets very sentimental about how cruel Crowley might be to his plants, but then does a Bentley-sized swerve when it comes to how cruel Crowley is to /Aziraphale/ when he /successfully/ manipulates him into trying to kill the Antichrist for him--but it also comes out in its treatment of religion.
The irony of post-S2 fanfic is that pre-S2 fanfic overwhelmingly endorses Aziraphale's attitude to Heaven (without realizing it). That is, it implicitly or explicitly assumes that Heaven has become warped in the absence of God, and that the presence of God Herself (or Himself, in the novel) would provide the "good" alternative. Heaven, that is, can be reformed if the real authority would just stand up. Moreover, there are multiple fics that really do assume that being an angel is better than being a demon because angelic grace means they are still in touch with the divine, and there are even fics that posit how great it would be if Crowley were reinstated to angelic status. "God ships it" rests on the assumption that the GO God is "good," that His/Her "shipping" is beneficent and rooted in care specifically for the protagonists (particularly if it proves to be part of the ineffable plan), and that His/Her imprimatur is desirable and necessary.
None of these assumptions are supported by the novel or series. (I keep wanting to write "Source for this claim?" in the margins.) Gaiman inadvertently sets the stage for "God ships it" by making God the narrator in S1, but "God reports it" is not the same as "God ships it." More to the point, both the novel and the series reject the terms of Pascal's Wager: if we cannot be assured of the existence of God or the nature of God's will, GO responds, then the correct course of action is to locate moral authority "on the ground," as it were, in human communities, and to proceed as if /God does not exist./ (Anathema burning the second book of prophecies is a case in point.) Moreover, in the series we are shown repeatedly that God's actions violate human (and angelic and demonic) moral norms, particularly in repeated sacrifices of children, and viewers are not invited to side with God! There is no evidence that the GO God is good, or loving, or even fundamentally decent in a way that can be articulated in terms of earthly morality. God's ways are incomprehensible, which is why, as I said before, attempts to do theology in GO-verse don't arrive at anything coherent. There is certainly no sign that God thinking you're a great person is going to do wonders for you (see: Job). And after seeing what God either causes to happen directly or allows to happen by withdrawing, there are no circumstances under which centering the protagonists' love lives makes God look any better. ("Isn't it amazing that all the horrors of the past several millennia had to happen just so Aziraphale and Crowley could be in love?") Finally, the "shipping" suggests that it is /desirable/ that the characters' love be divinely authorized or that they should be outright directed into a relationship by providential means, even though GO is all about the centrality of free will and the necessity of learning how to choose. So...no.
hey, look LWA; far be it for me to tell you how to spend your breaks in between work but i do have to question your decision that any part of that break is spent delivering Hot Tea to my inbox - but im never going to complain about it, rant away!!!✨ (also - hope the writing is going well, procrastination or no!!!)
it does make me uncomfortable for this one simple reason:
"god does not play dice with the universe. i play an ineffable game of my own devising."
so look - i know it's literally god speaking. she can do as she pleases, whatever. but to think that she tampers with her best and yet most ironic invention truly unnerves me - that she takes free will, and manipulates it to her design - and even more alarming is that that design is completely unknown and unknowable to anyone other than her. honestly, it's this kind of thought that makes me steer well clear of any religious leanings personally; people will make decisions and will mess them up and will succeed with them, but the thought that those occurrences were "god's will", or down to a higher power... well, it's not a good feeling, in my opinion. extrapolate that thought to any real life scenario as you will.
but in any case, to apply this to GO gives me the same sense of unease. i have still the thought that there is going to be a clear, definitive line between the great plan and the ineffable plan in the narrative. that seems to have been set up very firmly in s1, and arguably becomes way more understated yet elaborated on in s2 (job and resurrectionist minisodes) until the end when metatron mentions the second coming. id absolutely love for it to be a huge narrative point in s3 again; the ultimate long-con chekhovs gun metaphorically jamming, backfiring, and spraying shrapnel all over the place.
but which is worse? a great plan that at the very least almost everyone of influence in heaven, including aziraphale if you hypothesise based on his knowing of the plans for the humans/earth in the pre-fall scene, has seen or at least seen bits of, and now presumably will work to ensure will come to pass because they know better than to question something metaphorically written in stone? an awful concept at face value, fulfilling prophecy, but at least you'd know what you're getting - you're buying what's advertised. i got rather ensconced in looking up some biblical stuff the other night, thinking about something similar to this, and:
And ye shall hear of wars and rumours of wars: see that ye be not troubled: for all these things must come to pass, but the end is not yet. (Matthew 24:6 - KJV)
that is terrifying, even if you take into account "the end is not yet", because that is ominous as all hell. but is it more terrifying that the ineffable plan, that is controlled and shaped and enacted by only one entity, cannot be questioned or challenged until it has already come to pass? that it is not of even questionable morality, but unknowable morality? god does not play dice, because that would be fairer - that would leave things up to chance... free will. instead she is playing by something only she knows, only she can control. so in that first quote, i interpret that she is either directly or indirectly telling the audience not to trust her and her actions. maybe god is self-aware, maybe not. she's ineffable.
so, even if the great plan is awful and inevitable, is it better to anticipate exactly what's coming? better the devil you know? either way, between the two, you're actually caught between the devil and the deep blue sea. that's the whole dilemma, the whole point, i know. but this is where i come to the "god ships it" trope: i originally thought that aziraphale and crowley being a part (and possibly inadvertently cocking up) the ineffable plan by way of their love story would be a great plot device - until i realised that, to be honest, that would a) feel like lazy writing with very little nuance to be had, and b) directly contradict my whole thought process on free will.
i do think they're involved in the ineffable plan, have a stake and place in it. i don't think, in some way, that there's any way they can't be. but it would have to be for god's benefit (ie whatever conclusion for the world she's currently got running on standby mode), and i don't think god, being what/who she is, would be able to understand love like that. she might foresee it, being omniscient and all, but what would she know about it? love is something to be felt, and that kind of love (unless GO is going to take a very weird turn) is not something she could ever experience. she sees it, sure, in her creations, but that's not knowing it.
so no, i don't think god has any place in the relationship between aziraphale and crowley. if anything, her mere existence is the ultimate barrier to it, through crowley's resentment, hurt, and anger, and in aziraphale's naivety, blind faith, and own brand of god complex. to give her seal of approval to any of it would be redundant anyway; it wouldn't change anything, it doesn't prove anything, and it immediately questions whether the characters choosing to have a relationship of any kind is of their own free will or was predetermined and inevitable. so, no, thank you.
i would like to think god is good - because if there is a higher power, you just have to hope that they don't have it out for you, right? - but logically she just... is. arguably, she is beyond morality, and arguably she is both good and bad. she makes bets with satan to test the faith in her most loyal faithful - which again, it might have been the great plan to make job suffer, but equally it might have been the ineffable plan for aziraphale and crowley to thwart it at great risk, sacrifice, and pain to their psyches... frankly, it's fucked either way you slice it.
(and it does make me wonder about why this appears to be the last that we actually see of god's 'physical' presence in heaven so far...)
furthermore, the issue in the resurrectionists; not even just aziraphale's alarming speech completely disregarding inequality as a means of arriving at a ridiculous point about morality, but - did god have a hand in having aziraphale and crowley come across elspeth and morag, leading to aziraphale starting to question what right and wrong is (rather unsuccessfully, he swings between redefining the two like a sodding metronome)? and equally have a hand in morag's death, that made aziraphale potentially retreat back to his usual standby of exalting in god's power and mercy? but leads to elspeth being able to live a better life? unknown, but this possibility does indicate that no, she isn't good, and she isn't bad, she's just playing a game that has an equal chance for the rest of us as being a good or bad move (insomuch that only she knows what game and rules she's playing - schrödingers chess move, really).
that's why aziraphale's decision at the end of s2 is so important to me. he spent the previous episode playing at being god, moving pieces around the board in a series of patterns as he pleased in order to reach the check, but having little regard for them in doing so - removing their free will and ability to think or feel or act independently, but equally whilst never at any intention of causing harm. does that make it okay? of course not - it's playing a game only he knows how to play.
so to then look at heaven as being something that he could change, should change - because he's being handed the opportunity - is meritable; he's not leaving it up to someone else, not following blind faith that "the almighty will fix it", he's choosing to be the change himself. and there's no confirmation at all that he's doing it to return it to what he considers to be god's original intention; as it stands, we have to assume that he's just going to fix/change/improve it for the wider benefit of everyone. but then again - is this fair? that at the top of heaven there will essentially only be aziraphale (not counting the metatron), and his vision, his decisions? perhaps that's why it was also so important to see that conference meeting in ep6 - it's not just the supreme archangel in charge; there is a precedent, however questionable the board of directors, of democracy in heaven.
lastly, just to touch on it: i think it would have been an interesting conundrum if crowley had accepted the restoration; whether it would have changed him, erased parts of him involuntarily, or if he would have remained as just crowley and used the opportunity to bring down the second coming and heaven's corruption from the inside. as it stands, we'll never know - but there never was any true characterisation reward to be had from making him an angel again, and it would have been a weird choice for him to make. the way it went down was exactly as their characters are and believe.
(putting this into a separate section because my mind just got a factory-reset by this point and my having a philosophy-realignment moment didn't really fit in any of the above very well):
it's really interesting to bring in pascal here, because i wouldn't have seen GO as rejecting it altogether on first glance (ie not contradicting you, just realigning my thought process). so... my initial thought is that GO eradicates at least half of the wager by confirmation that god exists, full stop (aaaand immediately going off on a long tangential thought of how different the story could be if we didn't have god as the narrator/no confirmation of god in the book other than in abstract, and therefore the pascal wager could theoretically apply - big yikes). removal of the dead-end outcomes leaves you with receiving either damnation, or eternal peace. but add in the element of ineffability, as you say, and the entire argument is rejected altogether... it makes sense to have GO reject such a binary argument, and the whole representation of agnes as being a stand-in personification (?) for god, in that respect, and anathema essentially rejecting her, carries so much more weight for me now... thats so cool to think about, thank you!!!✨
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