Sent by anonymous

‘Imagine if PB reused Cassian (Witness) faces and hair for an MC, and then at some point in their story they say that they once had a two year relationship with a horrible woman who they tried proposing to and then says ‘man, what was I thinking?’’

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HUH???

i just remembered why i hated wabr

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

No.

Hell no.

That was painful enough to read the first time, when I was getting diamonds for every chapter.

Diamond-mining with Witness is so fucking funny cause it’s really like

18💎 Tell LI you love them

12💎 Tell LI you’re kinda interested

0💎 Tell LI to fuck off

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I can't believe I'm writing a whole essay about CHOICES on a Monday morning, but I've realized that one big reason why I usually don’t like single LI books is that they always have frustratingly small and shallow supporting casts. Crimes of Passion, With Every Heartbeat, Getaway Girls, and The Princess Swap all have larger casts that I enjoyed and found myself invested/interested in, but those are only 4 out of 18 single LI stories. Every other single LI story either has a medium-sized cast that no one really cares about because the non-LI characters are pretty shallow (see: AVSP, Surrender, TNA, etc.) or extremely small casts with similarly one-dimensional background characters (see: Shipwrecked, TCH, WABR, KOD, TDA, etc.).

Yes, there are some exceptions, and of course, your mileage may vary re: liking specific characters. I know I personally liked Sir Montgomery and Longclaw from TCH, and Faith and Roy from KOD. I also liked the twins, Robin, and Sofia from TNA, although the latter two were often screwed over by the writers. But did anyone care about Jenny, Aditya, Will, Marisol, etc.? Does anyone actually like how Inez, Dutch, and the other stock characters from RWB are written? What about Austin and Mandy from Untameable? Reese, Sloane, and Mallorie from Surrender? Did anyone find the O'Connells to be compelling villains? What about Dr. Hale and Tak from Shipwrecked? I’m sure there are players out there who liked these characters or found them interesting (presumably the same people who fund unneeded sequels for many of these stories), but for me, they’re all so one-dimensional that I just can't be interested in them. And if I'm not interested in the characters, then I'm not going to be interested in the story.

On the flip side, multi-LI books tend to have larger casts, which makes sense, as these stories by nature cannot force the storyline to revolve around one singular character (except for when they clearly prioritize one LI over the others, but that's a rant for another time). When this is the case, I almost always find myself getting attached to a specific love interest or side character. Take It Lives, OH, ES, Blades, TCATF, TF, TE, and everything else in between: in these books, the MC has friend groups that don’t specifically revolve around their LI (although these friend groups almost always *include* their LIs!) and these side characters tend to have conflicts and storylines of their own. That’s very rarely the case with single LI books, which, imo, is just poor writing — if a large part of your cast exists just to revolve around one character, or to poorly fill friendship roles, rather than existing as characters on their own, that’s not good.

The problem with the smut books lately is that they have all the horny but none of the seduction!

Where’s the descent? Where’s the temptation? The siren song of hedonism and lure of carnal pleasure?!

Straight up, these single love interest books are wack. Let me explain. One of the things that made choices interesting was the different love interests you can choose from. Each had their own personality and a different dynamic with the MC. It made the story interesting, seeing their different reactions to situations and everything. With only one love interest, your choices are limited. It gets boring and stale after a while, to be honest.

This forbidden romance sounds better than the whole plot of witness

The fandom: "Lmao PB's 30 diamond scenes are so tame and vanilla"

PB writing TNA, Witness, QB:

Sent by anonymous

'Man... If the LI has an option for redheads like Yvette from Slow Burn, Quinn, or Cassian from wetness

Its game over for me'

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I had to say it🤷🏻‍♀️

Al I the only one slightly unsettled by the makeup on the MC? —no? Just me ? Looks like this 🤡

Witness so far:

15 💎 to have plot!

0 💎 to be a bitch, a dumbass, or even both!

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