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19/11/2022
i just saw my grades for my english creative writing assessments and i'm quite happy with the feedback and results :D especially my poem, which got the highest grade of my two pieces, as it was really one that meant a lot to me. i might post it here soon but this was the feedback:
#ironically english isnt actually my number one subject lmao#but the fact that creative writing is the best grade i got from english#as a fanfic writer 💀#overall got a high-average grade (it was actually high merit overall)#but im still happy with the feedback#low excellence = b+ to a- equivalent#high merit = b- equivalent#im a nz student ok#noisyanyan
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Some more lore on Dotsight. Wanted to try doing comic sorta stuff. A bit of a test. But Dot and Kup stayed behind to make sure the others could escape
#i hope you guys like it#im kinda really happy with these#id like some feedback of its ok#but if you guys like more i can expand#kup transformers#transformers#maccadam#bayverse#bayformers#yes this is still bayverse#just mixing styles#lmao#transformers oc#kup#dotsight
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dip pen ink comm batch 4 complete! for Ezechiel, @ohwwhuv, and Leo :]
#bakuspecial#commission art#the grayscale for these were done on a train with my laptop track pad fksdjhf it was! manageable! but not desirable condition#that was before I got my new current tablet too... thank you my old huion. you served me well. Im so sorry I chipped ur paint to shit#ngl the texture on the new one's better off the bat. the grip's better and it has good kinetic feedback#too bad abt the touch buttons tho... I was confident I could make use of them but alas#things need actual feelable buttons again please I can Not tell where anything is when Im drawing and cant look at the tablet#my eyes are on the screen!! Im bad at gauging distance!!! please give me buttons I can find in the dark. please#even the old huion which has actual buttons I still couldnt use them. bc theyre not raised#theyre flat to the tablet's surface. you know what I shouldve tacked raised stickers on them I was stupid there#well! the more u learn. the more u learn#I'm happy with the current tablet tho!! buttons stuff aside it's nice to draw on. and thats what important. wrists dont hurt no more#almost said ''I miss the wacom eraser end" I don't. not really. every time I used that thang I was like wow you are so imprecise and blunt#litcherally why would you want basically a mappable stylus end but it's 50 times the size of a normal nib and you cant see where ur drawing#especially on a screen tablet. the dynamic there makes absolutely no sense#I can really do the same thing now by mapping one of the stylus buttons to swap foreground color to transparency#anyways. this has been my testimonies on tablets. in the tags of a dip pen ink post lmao#well! this is a late post I shouldve posted this before art fight. thank u again to that anon who reminded me#have a good day lads! we can answer emails together. hands in professional hands
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compilation of all my sunflower inktober art the past few days that i just. forgot to post.
prompts in order were, starting from day 3 bc i missed a day, violin, book (there are no books in this one…), picnic, flower crown, and for the last one i combined days 7 & 8, rainy day + vent
#omori game#omori#basil omori#sunny omori#omori omori#omori sunflower#sunnflower#basil x sunny#described#ok now that those are out of the way. the commentary n personal categorization tags you know the drill.#so far these are a fairly even split between angsty symbolism shit and jsut sunny and basil hanging out#i am NOT happy with the flower crown one ill have to redo it at some point.#and once again i worry that i have made the ids far too long. they were okay spaced out on twt but here all on one post#i feel like theyd be kind of a nightmare to listen to all in one. always open to feedback on those bc im still not very good at writing the#melonz arts#basil#omori tag#sunny#art tag#if you read this far. im still working on the pt 2 drawings of the furry post i swear#(thats a lie)#(im not. im not working on them)#(im still PLANNING on working on them though. eventually.)#wow this post is a nightmare#sunflowerinktober2023#omori spoilers
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sorry this is once again my monthly 'i'm in love with people and our capacity for compassion even in the face of deep deep cruelty, even though i've seen worse and worse things, come to terms with so much, it's my love of humanity that has let me avoid rotting, encouraged me to grow and chase my own place in helping everyone around me" post
#im really excited for the job im starting. still about a month or so out but heading towards a career change sort of that im really excited#for. im just... i actually used to be very cynical and i struggled to see the point through all the terrible things in the world#but for many reasons#even as i discovered worse and worse things#ive developed... resiliency i never thought id have#born out of this appreciation for those and the world around me#and i wish i could share it. i see so many people in my old shoes#im still growing. so much to do#but im at a level of contentment.. idk. i couldntve dreamed of#and it took effort#it is not /easy/ to face things and believe in good regardless#but. its rewarding. i wish it for all of you#on a similar but different note ive been reaching a point of being more myself in social situations rather than just a chameleon#and ive been lucky enough to have the people around me the past two years or so be very supportive in a way that has truly let me grow and#become a better version of myself#and its sort of been this positive feedback loop. because the more confident and passionate you are the more people are delighted by your#eccentricies#i used to be so beat down#i still struggle so much#but. im at a place i never thought id be#no doubt there will be struggles in the future#hell its not like things are perfect now#still so much. major things to improve on#but idk. i am happy#and its a very full sense of happiness.#full and aware and strong#thats what i wish for all of you :)
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Here's the walk cycle of Hopkins I did for my animation class btw :] I'm really happy with it
#just had out fist critique and everyone was so nice and had great feedback for me#biggest thing people pointed out was the ears which is entirely valid#im still really happy with it#glassart#glass art#dnd#hopkins
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just wanna say i love ur isaac art !!! the way you characterize the characters and put them in different scenarios is super fun and adds some depth to them that we dont rlly see in the game , and your style makes me feel like im watching a cartoon about them :]
*choking up* Literally made me tear up. Thank you so much for your kind words.
I am having massive amounts of fun (despite the raging). The game's a roguelike, so that means infinite possibilities and infinite amount of material to work off of. The game and its themes are not everyone's cup of tea, but I do like to share the fun through making comics of the characters. Even though, canonically, the characters are all just a freaking child in a wig, I'm taking the creative reigns and driving this into the wall, BABY.
Just trying to make the game/jokes comprehensible to folks who don't play the game by adding my own flare and characters they can get accustomed to and like you said "adding some depth."
Thank you so so much. Mwah~
#i really am grateful for your message. seeing something in my inbox is always heart pounding#getting feedback on the things makes me feel like we are all having fun together#i'm still gushing. im so happy to get a message in my inbox. seeing tags is one thing. but this is like IMMENSE. SPECTACULAR.#to everyone else that are still following me through this phase. i hope youre having fun and thank you for letting me have my fun as well#i cant describe my feelings on 'feels like watching a cartoon' except heck yeah. ive always wanted to make cartoons/comics#so im so happy that it feels that way. thats why i USED TO have an upload schedule#like a kid waiting every saturday for the new pokemon episode...man...the good ol days...
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Ohhhh baby I am invested in your horror au already! My favourite genre mixed with my favourite show (seriously the brainrot is real send help) holy moly these look good! I can't wait to see more! I need to know more! Uh please ^^~
(this is my first ever ask I apologise! My little ghost boi needs to know too!)
Hello friend!! So fun fact, I literally had EXACTLY the same thought process when coming up with this au. Hey, what if I combined my special interest in horror stories with my current obsession? And here we are :)
I don't really have much to say about the actual story yet other than random concepts so I'm just gonna drop them here-
My initial idea for the way they cross over is by making them all part of alternate dimensions. The idea there would be that each of them are being tormented in their own universes, only able to escape after... doing something, I'm not sure yet
Maybe facing their worst fears? Or overcoming a certain challenge? Surviving a certain amount of time? Literally just finding an exit? Honestly, there are endless possibilities.
Either way, when they escape they find their way into the lair. I would imagine it being a sort of hub, away from all the absolute nightmares they have to go through in their own worlds.
They would meet each other, other family members, and possibly other characters from rottmnt there. I like to think that everybody else has been there for a long time, but the turtles only managed to escape when they were teens
So everybody else is sort of adjusted and learning how to cope but the brothers are very much still traumatised from their own dimensions
And (because honestly I just crave suffering) they need to go back into their dimensions every now and then because spiritual connections or something like that.
So every week or so they need to go back to their dimensions and find their way back out again. :)
Just for clarification, the other characters have specific genres to deal with too, not just the turtles. I'm thinking body-horror!Splinter, monster-horror!Draxum and splatter!Cassandra. Since they'd ideally have been able to leave their universes much earlier than the others, they learnt how to embrace their specific genre and been able to use it to help them, instead of just scaring them. Ex, Draxum learning how to create monsters and make them do his bidding instead of hiding from them.
Also, just for the lolz, they have magic based on their genres too. Their ninpo basically developed in order to help them stay alive (or sane) in their dimensions! Don't know if their powers are the same or different yet though. They're probably going to be similar, but have some little changes made.
#ty for the ask!#rottmnt#tmnt#rottmnt horror au#im so happy you're intrigued by my little idiots. I've only had them for short time but im already very attached to them skdjkajd#i still actually havent got all the characters set in stone. i mentioned splints draxum and cassie because they were sort of easy lol#idk where to even START with april. that girl fears NOTHING#i also dont know. how many characters i should add into this au?#like if i should include the mutants or not? maybe just have them hang out?#idk. would love some feedback aksjdkadsl#shadow rambles
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yipee season of strike controversy solved ty devs >:)
#i didnt unlock the season yet im still veryyyy behind (need like maybe another week)#but i heard abt the nerfs and changes and Goddamn theyre BAD#its basically no rewards on everywhere and makes progression nonexistent unless ur a GigaWhale#like it doesnt matter if u spent money if ur just a dolphin ur still gna get left behind#which is crazy . was kinda bummed out on it but#didnt want to dwell on the hate that ppl r giving cuz its giving me gnshin anniversary flashbacks LMAO#except the difference here is the devs r actually Listening to the complaints & adjusting wwww#havent watched the full of volkins update vid but the adjustments the devs made r actually so good#from my understanding i think we even get more rewards than we do in base game (heavy on i think)#marilee & korin nerf kinda sucks but i understand why they decided to do that cuz .#cuz those 2 at m+ literally outdamage any dps in dream realm LMAO#but yeah!!! very happy abt their response to the complaints and feedbacks ^-^#@players and im serious abt this : Dont make it a habit to rate a game 1/5 stars with every bad thing that happens#the nerfs was literally foudn out by most players just 2 or 3 days ago!!@(*@ bro didnt even give devs time to respond#and still the response of the devs was still saur fast AND also came with great reverts on thos enerfs TT
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ANOTHER ONE
#my art#dnd oc#friend oc#kairos#getting lots of practice drawing fucked up FREAKS (affectionate) recently#also yes this lovely lady is from the same campaign as bell (zombie boy posted yesterday) and osiris lol#can you tell there's a sort of. death and undeath theme in that campaign#also i did thankfully have some feedback on this one since it's evie's character!! so hopefully somewhat more accurate lol#not entirely pleased with her face for some reason but i still like it#i am reminded of that one graph that shows talent and perception? yknow the one?#where as you grow more skilled there's a point where your perception of your art matches how good it really is#but then your skill doesn't necessarily grow with your perception of it so you start thinking your art is bad again#or that you're getting worse but it's still better than your previous art you're still getting better#idk i think that may be what's going on here lmao#i know this is decent and its much better than anything i was making even just a few months ago#but its still weird in my brain lol#or maybe im not too happy with it because i didnt spend a ton of time on it like i usually do on things like this?#this one took me like. 1 day total from sketch to finished product?#gathered reference images and started the sketch late monday night#did almost the whole thing yesterday and just added finishing touches today#so maybe i just didnt put enough effort into it idk#also also this is my 11th finished piece of the year#which is significant because in the ENTIRETY of last year i only made 11 finished digital art pieces LMAOOO#so in a month and a half i have done what i did in all of 2023 B)#a bit worried that im gonna burn out soon and not make art for a long time again but im feeling fine so far#other than the aforementioned slight displeasure with what im making now#hoping i can continue making good art all year!! or at least having fun making it even if it isn't good lmao
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sometimes i think abt how some ppl in my life have called me childish and made fun of the things that make me happy but honestly fuck that shit. i post what makes me happy. i talk abt the things that make me happy. who gives a shit what it is as long as it's not hurting anyone
#i still think. literally all of the time. about how a long time ago someone i knew pretty much called how much i love christmas annoying#and didn't want me to talk abt it anymore just bc of that#like man. who does that. if something makes someone happy why the fuck do you care#at least i have friends now who think i'm fun and adorable#every time someone compliments me for my passion i just get so flustered bc im rlly not used to positive feedback lol
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I HATE when someone tells me something like "your writing/art is so good I could never create like that" because
Wrong. Creating is a skill. Some pick it up faster, yeah, and that'd be called talent, but literally anyone can learn it. You just gotta, like. Spend time on learning it. Like with any skill ever.
Don't depreciate yourself to copliment me. It just makes things awkward. The compliment on its own is a lot nicer, to be honest.
Don't tell me it's all just talent; because it's not. I know it's unintentionally, but you're telling me all the time I dedicated to this skill doesn't matter. You're telling me I didn't have to work to get here when I really, really had to.
Let's take writing, for example, since that's my main boat.
I've been telling stories for literally as long as I've been able to. My mum and I used to give each other 5 words, and the other had to tell a story with those. I've always had a thing for being creative, sure, but it's been honed for a literal lifetime.
As soon as I knew my letters I started devouring books, and writing my own. I wrote down my first story with 7 yo and decided to become a writer at age 9. I've more or less stuck to that, and I praciced for it. I spent so much of my time writing. It's been a decade. And those last three years especially - I've improved immensely, and you know why? I wrote - and still write - every day. Every. Single. Fucking. Day. And if it's just a sentence - it shows.
So, no, I'm not "just talented" at writing - I've dedicated a lifetime and so much sweat and tears and passion to it.
"I never could have written a line like that" thanks, I was stuck on it for three fucking days.
"You're so good at drawing clone armour" I was obsessed for over two years and sketched it all the time, every day, so guess why?
"I could never-" No. Shut up. If you spent as much time as I did on this, you very much could.
And don't you fucking dare tell me it's just talent.
Years of work aren't just talent. I worked so, so hard on all of this. Especially writing isn't just a hobby anymore - it's what I want to do with my life, it's what I have done with my life since forever. Every sentence I write holds years and years of experience and things I learned and incorporate subconsciously by now.
So, again.
1. If you spend your time learning this skill, you can and will learn it.
2. Let a compliment be a compliment instead of a comparison. Competition has already poisoned us all anyways.
3. This is the result of my lifework, treat it as such.
Thanks for coming to my ted talk. (And I know my life hasn't been long yet, but still.)
#a biscuit's rambles#writer problems#im so so sick of all that self-deprecitation hid in compliments#and also all that talent talk#like NO its a SKILL its a SKILL I HAVE LEARNED and while i do have a talent for it it didnt just fall in my lap!!#look at a story from 3 yrs ago and it fucking sucks!! im growing im learning and i have been for so so long!#and i will continue to get so much better! ive written a few things im quite happy yet#but i wouldnt call myself a good writer bc of it! i probably never will bc im always striving for more but like! im still only a baby write#and just. idk. its annoying. i get this a lot whenever i do decide to share smth i wrote and ive finally been able to put into words#why i hate that kind of feedback/compliment
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YOUR LYNEY FIC WAS SO GOOD PLSPLSPLS IF YOU WRITE MORE OF HIM OR EVEN A PART 2 I WILL EXPLODE WITH HAPPINESS....YOURE SUCH A GOOD WRITER 😭💓💓💓
OMG THANK YOUUUU and dont worry i definitely am writing more for him 🤧🤧 in fact i have a little something from last night i might post in a bit
#im trying to write him as much as i can so he feels inclined to come home#yes i am still lyneyless its horrible 😭#THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLIMENT THATS SO SWEEETTT#im so happy a lot of u are giving feedback on the longfic it makes it all the more worth it#606:inbox
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retreat day 4 done. it’s been a really good day i think
#purrs#we did feedback and i was the only person who cried and i cried twice LOL. once while giving feedback and once while receiving it. the#feedback that made me cry was that…. omg… someone in my pod CAME TO THE RETREAT BECAUSE OF ME. i was the reason for someone. omg i teared up#immediately. and so many other ppl remembered interacting w me during the lockdown when iwas suffering so bad and it made me so emotional in#a good way. we didn’t give up. we kept pushing on. and it MATTERED. there’s a whole group of ppl in the community room now (i just got back)#and they’re eating and talking and laughing and hugging and leaning on each others shoulders and writing each other letters. and i helped to#make that happen. and we all poured our whole hearts in. and im so grateful and so proud. im not prepared to facilitate AT ALL lmao and we h#have to be out of here in 13 hours and i haven’t finished writing my notes yet. but im content and happy. and i feel like ive made (perhaps#only temporary but still) peace w the wounds that got ripped open last night. so i feel good. i can’t believe it’s almost over#retreat tag#also apparently i am a meerkat btw.#<- according to someone in my pod who gave everyone feedback in the form of animal metaphors 🥹
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if i ever seem brave for some of the stuff i admit on here, just know its cause idk how to keep shit to myself. i cower at the thought of judgement and then proceed to expose my whole ass to tumblr anyway, because i dont have a working filter
#tags are filled with worried rambling again#i hear a laugh track play whenever my anxiety flares up#im scared of what other people think of me which in itself is funny#ik others opinions of me arent an indicator of me being a bad person#other people arent gonna kno my whole personality from the stuff i draw#i fear judgement despite experiencing nothing but positive feedback on this site because i keep reading into the small things as negative#i know all this and still wither away in my shell knowing all this im saying is what id tell others if they were suffering with it#i walk in this circle and do it thousand times til i pass out from the exhaustion and later wonder y i was worried in the first place#i want to be able to say “who cares they dont know you” but ive been raised by people who spent almost every conversation-#with me basically saying they know me very well and know whats wrong with me and ive been raised believing everyone knows more than me#i worry of being so serious and actually genuine like this but this is how i like to be sometimes#stupidly thinking too much into things and laughing at myself for it and wondering why i would put myself down on something id encourage-#others to do#i worry about losing people because they wont like all of me but they wont know that unless they see the whole picture#i find myself disgusting w/ my thoughts and the things i wanna create but i dont think that of others and its strange#weird ass moment here.....#i had a really good day today got a job and finished my first tattoo#im happy right now despite the shit i just spewed#im figuring myself out for the first time in maybe years#i just wish all the hateful shit i absorbed over those years fades away soon#and i hope i stop caring so bad lol#anywayyyyy have a wonderful rest of your weekkk <3 if u read this
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does the age of calamity au not exist anymore im so sad
for you anon? it can
#fr ill post the new pages yall just cant be mad that the quality is worse because comics is difficult#and im not at the part i wanna be at yet so i got stuck on these pages#anyway ill post the ones ive done hold up#oh and for future ref i would recomment asking artist about their projects in maybe a slightly different phrasing way#maybe? not that u did anything wrong its mostly just thinking about feedback and comments in general esp on social media like tumblr#bc a lot of folks get discouraged on long projects bc they dont get a lot of support or comments or nice tags#and one nice comment can be the difference between an abandoned project and one they revisit bc they now know people are still interested!#and anyway im glad to have this message bc i am excited that people still care about that comic#if that makes sense??#but anyway i love tag talk on any of my art but esp long projects bc it fuels the fire! i do it just for fun and i love when i see that it#makes others happy too !#anyway thank u for the kick in the butt to post the new pages lol#answered ask#text#calamity unwritten
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