draft: body snatchers AU
1k writing - Jeanie wakes up one sunny morning and realizes her husband isn’t the same person anymore. She runs.
It was the toast that gave him away.
Michael always liked his toast in the morning.
Being married to the same man for fifteen years, Jeanie learned to predict his moods before he even could. The type of symbiose that came from explicit communication and a lot of compromises.
She woke up with the singing of the birds, and took her time in the bathroom. Her blonde hair was now becoming greyish, but she could still see the sexyiness in it.
It made her giddy. Make-up applied, changed in her best dress, she went downstairs and fed Peanut.
Leo was still sleeping. Her husband had ten minutes before his own alarm went off, and he groveled towards the publishing company he had been working on since he graduated from college.
His voice would be gruff and he’d joke about the birds waking him up.
As Jeanie stepped into the kitchen, she immediately felt a tinge of fear. This sudden feeling came as absurd for her, because she had nothing to fear in her own home.
She entered the kitchen like it was an alien wasteland, the sudden strangeness deepning as her ears perked. A thumping happened outside in the garden.
Jeanie moved towards the backyard, opened the glass window and froze.
No one should be up at this hour. Her husband should not be standing on top of the grass, with her destroyed prized-begonies everywhere, mud staining all his clothes and a shovel in his hand.
“Michael.”
He turned to face her.
Jeanie took a step back.
For a haunting second, she wasn’t staring at her husband, but at a stranger whose eyes she didn’t recognize. Those eyes didn’t remember what she looked like in turquoise blue, or what their baby boy’s smile looked like.
They were the eyes of a beast.
Then the sensation disappeared, but the fear remained.
“Yes, dear?” He asked, poised.
Such casualty in the face of a bizarre situation made Jeanie shiver. She squeezed her arms around herself. Then, she smiled widly, shoving her dark thoughs into a box, and chuckled.
“You’re going to be late for work. Get changed and I’ll make you some toast.”
“I don’t want toast.”
Jeanie supressed her next commentary. Don’t want toast?
Her husband – the thing in the backyard – looked up. He stared pensively at the sky, then turned back at her, and Jeanie did her best to remain still and express calmness.
As he approached, Jeanie struggled with her own sense of delusion, as her own body wanted to remove herself from his presence. In the twenty years they know each other, she earned for his touch. Now, she could barely keep her breath around him and that caused her so much confusion.
They were fine last night. They were happy.
Michael smiled.
“I need to take care of something in the office, dear.” He tiptoed for a second, then kissed her cheek.
Even the gesture seemed foreign.
As his footsteps disappeared inside, she looked to her garden.
The clouds looked like rain. She could still hear the birds singing. Her eyes drifted to the obvious disturbance in the dirt, but looking behind her shoulder, she could still feel Michael’s presence – no, not her husband – inside the house.
For the first time in her entire marriage, Jeanie avoided her husband.
She stayed outside, admiring the sun and hoping he wouldn’t call her on her bluff. Peanuts came outside. His tail wagged low and he sat glued next to her, with his head facing the kitchen.
The entire time, Peanut didn’t growl or bark. He just stared at Michael, standing between Jeanie and the door. The usual love that her husband had for the dog seemed to have vanished, and Jeanie remarked that he haven’t even acknowledge Peanut at all.
Michael didn’t come back outside. He didn’t say goodbye.
Jeanie heard the door closing, then the car engine starting and leaving the street. She waited five minutes, just to be sure.
As she entered back inside, her footsteps sounded far too loud in her ears. Her mind raced with questions, but her instinct was stronger and that seemed far more important now.
She threw Leo’s door open.
“Mom!” He sat up. His phone was already on, but he was still in his pajamas and laying under the covers. “What the hell?”
“Language.” Jeanie opened his closet door and pulled the bag they bought at the State Fair last year. She suffocated a sob. That was one of the last trips they went on, they had to buy a bag just to fit all the prizes Leo had won.
“What’s going on?”
“We’re taking a vacation, go get dressed.” Jeanie didn’t wait for him to answer. She opened his closet and started to put clothes inside the bag.
She could hear her son huffing behind her. Jeanie had swore she would never become her mother, controlling her kid’s haircuts or bursting into their bedrooms without knocking first.
Leo was only twelve, but he had his own computer and much more freedom than most of his classmates. He earned it.
In the rush of panic, she forgo this.
“But it’s summer.” Leo raised his voice. “Where are we going? Where’s dad?”
Jeanie turned to look at him.
In her eyes, she saw his eyes cowering and the reluctance in his stance. He wasn’t going to be moved without an answer. She breathed, and vowed to protect him no matter what.
Protect him.
From what, is a question that could wait.
Jeanie survived a household in which moods shattered as quickly as the wind, and punches were traded as negotiational offers. She escaped that climate, but the survival mode inside of her never truly died.
She sensed the danger brewing around her like a tornado-siren. You couldn’t see it, but it was there and the first signs were clear.
“Dad is meeting us after work.” The lie came efortless. She would suffer from these lies in the future, but right now she had no time for guilt. “Go get changed, Leo.”
Leo left the room without a complaint.
He must have noticed the awkward mood. Jeanie went back to packing and promised herself she’d come up with a better lie later.
The bags were put in the hall, Joe helped put a leash in Peanut and they started to pack everything into her car. Jeanie blessed herself for suggesting they buy a second vehicle – maybe things were going to be okay.
She was hardly religious, but she believed in faith like children who throw pennies down wishing wells. With low credibility and some sense of humor, she hoped it would work. If not, throw another penny.
As Jeanie walked inside the house again, she stopped.
Her mind raced towards the events of this morning, trying to find a rational explication.
A way out, even if it meant admitting to her own foolish dreams and making the whole thing a fun party talk during dinner.
Honey, you’ll never believe. This morning I was convinced you were acting unlike yourself, more like a stranger than the man I’ve been sleeping with for so many years. So in a hurry of fear and self-preservation I ran away. I took Joe and I ran, because
You’re not acting like my husband.
Jeanie repeated to herself.
Her gut says that something is off, not only tense or distant, but violent. Those eyes reminded her of her father and that was enough to confirm any doubt.
Her husband always greeted Peanut, going as far as being late several minutes because he couldn’t stop kissing the damn dog. He always joked around and kissed her in the mouth, a chaste kiss that still gave her butterflies all this years.
Her husband never refused breakfast.
Jeanie looked at the clock in the wall.
Verifying that her son was still in the car, she grabbed the keys and her purse. She cursed herself, as her legs raced towards the backyward and she went back to the strange bundle of earth stirred in the ground.
Jeanie got down in her knees and used her hands to dig out the mud. The dirt stained her clothes, but she remained at the task, feeling like there was an imaginary guillotine hanging over her head.
Her fingers brushed across something slimy and cold, and she withdrew her hand with a disgusted cough. Looking back at the clouded sky, Jeanie swallowed the bile.
The second passed and she carried on.
She dug her hand down and grabbed the thing. It almost slipped out of her fingers, but she managed to bring it to surface, dropping it with a hurl.
Jeanie got up, almost tripped and managed to steady her balance. She covered her mouth, now smelling the rotten flesh that must have been covered by the gardening products.
It was big, colorful red and it layed on the dirt like a dead animal.
The heart was still bleeding.
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“The universe sings,” Grian said.
He sounds vaguely distant- like he’s speaking from hundreds of blocks away rather than right next to Mumbo.
He turns on his bed, slow halting movements, to face him.
“Did you know?”
Mumbo can only stare.
“…Sings?” He asks. He shifts on his chair.
Grian seems to want to nod, but aborts the motion halfway, and hums instead.
“Yeah. The code. It sings, if you listen close enough,” Grian mumbles.
Mumbo opens his mouth, then closes it again.
Grian exhales a long breath, and his eyes drift close.
“Can you hear it?”
Mumbo watches the way Grian’s chest rises and falls, shallowly, slowly.
He closes his eyes, and strains to hear.
He hears- Tango out in another room of the house, pacing circles around the kitchen. Mumbo can tell it’s Tango by the shuffle in his walk.
He can hear birds outside, twittering. Wind rustling through branches. An animal- a pig, maybe, trotting along some grass.
It’s quite calming really- but he doesn’t hear singing. At least, he doesn’t think he does?
When he opens his eyes again, it’s to Grian staring right at him.
Mumbo exhales in one sharp breath- he didn’t realise he’d stopped breathing- and meets Grian’s gaze.
“Did you mean like, actual singing or- or was that metaphorical? Because I can’t hear anything other than trees, mate,” he says, only half-joking.
Grian huffs a small laugh, and shakes his head.
“Nah, it’s not really singing-singing. It’s music, though. You’ve definitely heard some of it- discs. That’s the easiest way to hear it. But that’s- so few of what’s out there. There’s more music, if you know how to listen for it,” he hums. His eyes close again, and he leans more into the mattress.
Mumbo pauses, and thinks on that for a moment. Music discs, huh? He supposes it seems plausible, that there’d be more music out there.
But then why has he never heard it? Mumbo doesn’t ever recall hearing ‘the code sing’. If it’s tied into music discs, then is it naturally generated? Is hearing it a ‘watcher thing’?
Mumbo glances down at his hands, traces lines of dirt under his fingernails.
He nods, though Grian can’t see it anyway. He makes some vague ‘see you later’ comment he can’t bother to think about, and carefully gets to his feet.
At the doorframe, he peers back.
Grian lies there, breathing steadily.
Mumbo turns and leaves, closing the door behind him.
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headcanon that the minecraft soundtrack can be heard in the code, but only if you're 'in harmony' with it. cue other headcanon of watchers being very aware of the code
HEY ANON. ANON. I ADORE THIS HOLY SHIT I FUCKING LOVE THIS HEADCANON???? The idea that the universe is constantly singing to itself, and you can hear that through the Greater Code if you really carefully listen, is something i lowkey want to canonize SO BADLY holy shit. And this is such a lovely snippet too, im always such a sucker for deeply layered conversations like this.... i adore how youve given so much depth to the sentence "the universe sings" and the implications of how and why Grian is hearing it so much right now. [THROWS UP BLOOD] IM OBSESSED.......
Also this Mumbo dialogue especially is on point youve done such a good job of capturing his little speech patterns :] STUNNING JOB ANON IM SO FLATTERED U WROTE THIS!!!!! I really think i might canonize this concept just for how absolutely amazing it is, im utterly obsessed with it
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just generally musing to myself what makes thematic and plot sense for the link clink ending after reading some other people's takes the past few days. no real conclusions here, just some thoughts tied together with a string.
I've seen arguments that what needs to happen is that Lu Guang needs to accept Cheng Xiaoshi's fate and move on without regrets. This idea that the past has to remain as-is and you have to move on is a thread that the show has played with quite a few times. It's written into the very rules underlying the dives. The most obvious instance being the earthquake arc, where Cheng Xiaoshi was unable to save Chen Xiao's mum, but he *was* able to deliver the messages and thereby help CX gain closure. It's laid out by Lu Guang that it *was* worth it to deliver the words, and Cheng Xiaoshi takes this conclusion with him when he confronts Emma. (Of course, the fact this lesson was given by *Lu Guang* casts a different shade over the whole affair. I don't think it can be entirely discarded, given LG even admits he's going against his own rules, but it reads more like something he's trying and failing to convince himself of.)
So, the past has to stay as it is. We see a few different approaches to this idea in s2 - of people refusing to move on and trying to change the past. Qian Jin wants to force his wife "not to cheat"; he wants to alter her behaviour because she didn't act as he wanted. Li Tianchen wanted to change how *he* acted back then, even if indirectly, because he sees himself as his mother's killer, and thinks this is the point at which his tragedy was locked into place. They both thought their 'tragedies' were down to a single event. It's not that simple.
Lu Guang wants to personally protect Cheng Xiaoshi by controlling all scenarios. Not exactly taking his will, but limiting his choices. There's probably a whole post to be made on how QJ/LTC/LG each approach the agency of the ones they want to protect, but that's not for now.
Anyway, Li Tianchen as the foil to Lu Guang. At the end of s2, he has in theory let go of Li Tianxi but in practice he's just burying himself deeper by following Liu Xiao. Trying to entirely shun the past so he can believe that he still has some element of control. Both LTC and LG are at the extreme ends of clinging on vs letting go and that means the correct answer has to lie somewhere in the middle. Not shunning the past, but accepting it, and using that resolve to move forward.
So, Liu Xiao. We don't have much on him but what we do have is his belief that uncertainties should become certainties. He's deterministic and set explicitly as the counter to Lu Guang, whose own aim is to change events rather than lock them into place. They both want to *control* all aspects, but for differing reasons. In fate vs free will, it makes sense that our protagonist is on the side of free will, but it's interesting that he's presented himself so much as the opposite previously. He and CXS haven't exactly switched places, but to the audience, they've definitely taken on traits of the other.
Liu Xiao's whole spiel about how all options will eventually lead to the same outcomes, with him set *against* Lu Guang, very much seems like it's a setup for a "defeat fate" type plotline though. It's hammered in that there is no escape, no other option. Are we expected to accept this? It doesn't seem so. It's something I'm struggling to reconcile somewhat with the earlier messages about accepting the past, but maybe that's not quite it. Maybe it's about control vs freedom?
Trust fall. Every dive with LG and CXS is an act of mutual trust where they need to act in tandem. Dives go astray when one party acts without the other. For CXS, this is about him acting against LG's instructions (texting Emma's parents, staying in the earthquake dive). For LG, this is about him withholding info because he doesn't trust how CXS will react.
Lu Guang needs to put his trust in CXS before his withholding of information creates an unresolvable rift. He needs to stop trying to control CXS in order to keep him safe. We saw how that spun out for Li Tianchen and Li Tianxi. LG needs to put the choice into Cheng Xiaoshi's hands and let him decide his own fate. It reminds me of how Cheng Xiaoshi laid everything out for Emma and let her decide whether to live. It was only outside interference that prevented her, but she did make the choice to survive. And she did it by remembering those small moments. By accepting that tragedy happens but there are still people that make it worth it.
For LG and CXS, they need to mutually trust each other and that's how they'll find their way through.
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