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I wanna write something so self indulgent you guys have no idea how hard I'm trying to cook it in the oven a little longer before actually doing it.
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plEASE PLEASE I would love to see some smutty hcs for simon omgg!! You write him so well I love it!!
Note: you have asked and so ye shall receive!! I'm so glad you like how I write for him, I frequently worry about whether he's ooc :') (Also, I haven't written smut in a VERY long time, so bear with me). Again, can and will elaborate on any of this if asked. I could probably do an entire nsfw alphabet meme for the man at this point lmao
Loves to mark you up. Constantly leaves hickies on you, and loves it when you leave them on him in return.
Possessive. Especially the longer things go on for. In fact, the longer you're in bed, the less control he has over his mouth.
In the same vein: huge on dirty talking. Talks you through it. Teases. Praises you (SO MUCH PRAISE).
There was one time just before things got heated that you asked him how much he trusts you. He didn't say anything, just dropped to his knees in front of you and put his hands behind his back.
"This answer your question, love?"
Yes. Yes it did.
He's big. The man is 6 foot 4 and broad. He's packin. I know he is.
Sometimes, during that first push into you, he'll press a kiss to where your eyebrows are knit together as you struggle to take him. He whispers a soft "Relax, sweetheart. Just like that. Let me in."
Likes to lay a hand around your neck during sex. He doesn't squeeze; he doesn't want to constrict your airflow. But he loves feeling your pulse race beneath his hand.
I'm gonna go against the Fandom grain here and say it: he's soft. Sometimes it's a different story if he's fresh from a mission and still hopped up on adrenaline, but even then it's more "hard and fast" than truly "rough".
He refuses to be violent towards you. He grew up in a violent home. Works in violent places. He refuses to hurt you, physically or emotionally. Even if you ask him to or tell him it's just a scene.
He likes to take things slow at first, then build up to a quicker pace. He craves intimacy, so starting off with slow touches, soft words, and long kisses is a good way to get him to relax.
Also gets off on hearing you. Any sound you want to give him - moans, words, he doesn't care. He wants all of it. He wants to sear your voice into his brain.
Listen. Listen to me. There is one VERY SPECIFIC scenario that I think of a lot and it makes me feral every single time:
You're riding him, in his lap as he sits with his back against the headboard. He's way far gone at this point and has already been spitting praise and telling you how good you feel, how good you are for him. Then, in between pleasured groans, you hear it:
"That's it, love. Fuck me like you own me."
And he means it. You know he means it. A lot of his dirty talk closer to his climax is possessive, calling you his and his alone. But that possessiveness goes both ways to Simon. He's yours just as much as you're his.
(FYI: say the same thing back to him when he's in the mood and you're guaranteed to be walking funny the next day).
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Post Season 8 fanfic recommendations
Hey! So, I’ve been working on this for a while. I’ve read so many good Hyde/Jackie stories, and I feel like it’s a waste not to share them.
I tried to separate everything in categories, but some fics fit in more than one category and honestly it was just a mess. So I've separated them the best way that I could. I’m going to post the categories separately, and after I’m done I’ll make a masterpost with links to each of the categorized posts, as suggested by @springsteenicious and @those70scomics (thank you both for the help!).
Even though this is only one category, it’s still a long post, as I’ve said before, I’ve read many fanfics. I don’t know if I should edit this and add more stories as they’re out (for instance, I have a post season 8 story that I’m planning on posting soon) or if I should just leave things this way. Please let me know if you think I left out a good story or if you have any suggestions.
I’ve read and enjoyed ALL of these stories, they’re all very good. All the stories mentioned here are post season 8 stories. I’ll post stories that take place during season 8 next. I hope everyone enjoys it!
20 Questions by ShanghaiLily
Just after New Year's day in 1980, Jackie Burkhart decides to disappear from the basement to save her sanity. When Christmas rolls around and the Formans beg Jackie to attend their party, she ends up involved in an elaborate game of 20 Questions with Hyde that could change both of their lives.
This story is almost entirely T rated, but there is smut in some chapters. The author placed a warning in the notes of the chapters that contain steamy scenes, so you can easily skip it if it makes you uncomfortable.
This story is complete.
71k words, 21 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna and Kelso/Brooke
After the End by araleebo
Who's to say what happens after the end? Jackie finally thought she could get her happily ever after with the guy of her dreams in the new decade. For a while, she was right. Then, the worst few days of her life happened.
This story is complete.
34k words, 6 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
All That I Got by AdriDee
After being an asshole to her during most part of 1979, Hyde decides it’s time for redemption. And to win Jackie back, he must work on himself first.
Their journey in this story is beautiful, and amazingly written. The story is complete.
122k words, 22 chapters.
Rated M for smut in some chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke, Fez/Laurie, Red/Kitty
Back to the 70’s by Wicked Chocolate
The 80s had barely begun before they start to crash around Jackie, maybe an Angel can grant her a trip back to the 70s and give her a second chance with Hyde. How will the events we know unfold now that Jackie has the knowledge and opportunity to change them?
Trigger warning: Major Character Death, kind of.
73k words, 10 chapters.
Rated M.
This story is not complete, but it’s worth the read.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna.
Also available on AO3
Back to Their Roots by Hart-of-Tree-Hill
Who doesn’t love a friends with benefits story?
Jackie and Hyde decide to have a no strings attached relationship after everything, but we all know those don't work.
This story is not complete and it makes me sad :( I still have hope that the author will update this someday. It kind of ends on a cliffhanger so it’s totally up to you if you want to read this or not.
13k words, 4 chapters.
Rated T, surprisingly
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Before The Summer Ends by 107derwent
Summer is stupid. It makes you act stupid. Makes you stupid ,
This story is complete.
4k words, 3 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Catch the Bouquet by heatherlea75
Fate has been unkind to Jackie Burkhart for too long. She has a plan to change that, and to obtain what is rightfully hers a glorious wedding. Though she doesn't know it, she needs a little help, and a surprising person is perfectly willing to offer it.
This story is complete, and it has an adorable sequel, called Pop The Question.
6k words, 2 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Charm Bracelets and Lighters by Aaliamad
Set three years after the series finale. Jackie’s been living a new, fabulous life in Chicago, what she didn’t know was that Hyde was also living in the same city as hers.
They eventually run into each other in a nightclub and have a special reunion. Can things be different between them this time?
Rated T.
This story is complete.
72k words, 36 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna
Chasing Windmills by c00kiefic
Four chapter short story about their journey back to each other after season 8. To be honest I love all the stories by this author, but this one is definitely one of my favs.
This story is complete.
11k words, 4 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Daddy’s Home by Hyde’s Bride
Jackie moved to Chicago after she had nothing left for her back in Point Place, but after two years, something awful happened to her. A certain burnout wants redemption but she finds herself in the middle of a pretty complicated dilemma.
Trigger warning: rape.
39k words, 14 chapters.
Rated M.
This story is complete.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke, Red/Kitty, Fez/Laurie
Date Night by SwanseaGurl
Hyde has been trying to get Jackie back for a while now, but after everything that happened between them, she's not willing to give him another chance. But he's also not willing to give up on her.
One day, a drunk and lonely Donna tries to make a move on Hyde and Jackie witnesses everything, will it change things between them?
Donna's not a really cool person in this fic, so be warned.
Rated T.
This story is complete.
11k words, 5 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Everybody Must Get Stoned by ShanghaiLily
After new year's 1980, huge fights break out between Eric & Donna and Jackie & Hyde. Both feeling the need to escape their problems, Jackie & Eric drive the VC to Mexico. Who gets shot? Who flees the country? Who comes out of the closet?
This story is amazingly written. I always appreciate a good story with amazing Jackie/Eric friendship moments. It’s complete.
129k words, 29 chapters.
Rated T, with some M chapters. The author placed a warning before the sexy scenes in case you’re uncomfortable with it.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna. And if you have a soft spot for Jackie/Eric, you might like the beginning of the story.
Everyone Thinks I Dodged a Bullet by MonDieu666
When Hyde and Jackie are the only ones to see a murder, they're placed into witness protection. Living under the same roof is one thing but lines begin to blur when they're forced to pretend to be married and memories from the past begin to resurface.
This story is amazing and it makes me smile. And it’s complete.
69k words, 16 chapters.
Rated M.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Fatherhood by varietyofwords
The birth of Betsy and Kelso taking on the role of father has gotten Hyde thinking about fatherhood.
This story is absolutely beautiful. And it’s complete.
10k words, 6 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Fire in the Light by Noducksinpond
The eighties are almost ending and a certain couple is reunited.
This story is complete.
31k words, 14 chapters.
Rated M
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Kelso/Brooke, Eric/Donna
Heart Like Yours by PoetDameron
This is the first That 70s Show fanfiction I’ve ever read, and it’s absolutely beautiful. It’s based on the book “If I stay” and it’s amazing.
I’ve also read all of the other t70s stories by this author, and I highly recommend them.
Trigger warnings for drug use.
Rated T.
This story is complete.
139k words, 22 chapters total
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke
Also available on AO3.
Keep Me by 107derwent
Jackie and Hyde managed to be friends after all the crap that happened in season 8. She’s there for him when he needs her the most. Will that rekindle old feelings between them?
This story is complete.
20k words, 10 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Like a Rolling Stone by elphabacan
Ashleigh 'Ash' Burkhart is a typical teenage girl. She never knew her father, and never cared to. Until she stumbled upon a new record store in a Minneapolis Neighborhood....
Beautiful writing. This story is complete.
50k words, 16 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Mamma Mia! That 70s Show style by love.devil.movies
Inspired by the classic Mamma Mia movie. Jackie is in Hawaii for Eric and Donna’s wedding and she finds herself between three of her exes.
This story is complete (and it’s a super fun read).
26k words, 13 chapters.
Rated T
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna and Red/Kitty
Mired by Tandy
Five years after she moved to California, Jackie goes back to Point Place to attend an important event. She ran into someone special and it turns out that a trip down memory lane is not as simple as it sounds.
This story is complete.
22k words, 7 chapters.
Rated M.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Never Tear us Apart by MinaSeraphina
Unlike 90% of the stories I’ve recommended so far, this one focuses on the entire gang. Each chapter is focused on one of the characters and they all have their own storylines.
This story is complete.
14k words, 6 chapters.
Rated T
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke, Fez/Laurie
New Resolution by c00kiefic
Jackie is getting married and Hyde is not the groom. What happens when Hyde and the gang decide that they need to stop this wedding?
This story is complete.
16k words, 4 chapters.
Rated M.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Not a Thing to do but Talk to You by Willofthewisp
This story is not focused on Jackie and Hyde. It’s focused on the entire gang, and it’s beautiful.
It alternates between present time and flashbacks, but season 8 did happen in this story, that’s why I placed it in this category. It’s complete.
53k words, 30 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke
November Rain by luvcali
After a torrid encounter on Halloween night, 1984, ex-lovers Jackie and Hyde spend the next month reevaluating their past.
This story is complete.
373k words, 33 chapters.
Rated M for sexy scenes.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna, Brooke/Kelso and Fez/OC
Nowhere But Lost by Zenkindoflove
Hyde is cynical, depressed, alone, and would really like to keep it that way. But what happens when something inside of him resurfaces and is more than unhappy about his current living arrangements?
This story is complete.
52k words, 13 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna
One More Time by CarouselUnique
Jessie Forman thought she knew a lot of things; who she could trust, who her parents were, even what was possible in the world around her. One snowy night, all three of these things change. Now, stuck back around 1978 - she's left in the worst situation possible to figure out where to go from there.
This story is a WIP, it’s been a while since it was updated, but I’m pretty sure the author is coming back to this story one day!
14k words, 4 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna, past Jackie/Eric
Reelin’ In The Years by JoyfulHeartEO
I placed this story on the post-season 8 category, but there are some small differences that made me kind of lost in what category to place this. Season 8 happened, but Sam never left and Jackie and Fez never happened. It takes place on New Years.
Rated M.
This story is complete and it has a sequel, it’s called Crazy Love.
89k words, 20 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke, Red/Kitty
See Me, Feel Me by elphabacan
Hyde wants Jackie back, Jackie wants nothing to do with him after everything that happened. The boys find out about Jackie’s secret love for The Who, and while Fez and Eric fantasize about it, Hyde sees it as an opportunity.
This story is complete.
10k words, 4 chapters.
Rated M. Very much M. You’ve been warned.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Second Chances by Flowers_For_Flamingos
Hyde's life has snowballed since Jackie's death. He moved back in with the Formans, Donna and Eric live far away, Fez was who the hell knows where, and Kelso....Hyde didn't think about Kelso. But one cold rainy night, while Hyde is drunk he causes an accident that sends him spiraling back in time to almost ten years ago, when everyone still liked each other. When Jackie was still alive.
This story made me cry so hard. It’s beautifully written, please read it.
It’s a WIP (work in progress, which means it’s being updated).
32k words, 15 chapters for now.
Trigger warning: Major Character death
Rated T
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
She’s The Devil by starfalls
It’s Halloween 1980, and the gang takes an ill-fated trip to a party that leads to some major revelations between Jackie and Hyde.
I could literally picture everything happening in my head while I read this story and I laughed so hard during some parts. All the characters are on point.
This story is complete.
30k words, 2 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna.
Stages by c00kiefic
I love everything this person ever wrote. Seriously. EVERYTHING.
Hyde’s there for her when Jackie goes through hell.
This story is not complete and it pains me. It has SO MUCH potential. Every now and then I reread it because it’s so good. I think it’s worth the read.
7k words, 2 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna and Red/Kitty.
That’s My Baby by kezztip
Jackie focuses on her career after the disaster that was 1979, and moves to Chicago after getting an amazing new job. Before she left, Hyde convinced the whole gang to throw her a surprise party for her, so he could try and make amends. Jackie ends up leaving the party angry as hell, what she didn’t know was that she left the party with a special souvenir inside of her.
This story makes me laugh SO HARD. The author managed to write all the characters perfectly. Please read this.
This story is complete.
68k words, 23 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna, Red/Kitty, Brooke/OC.
The First and Only Mrs. Hyde by The Queen Of Wallflowers
As it turns out, Sam is Hyde's second wife. He married his first when he was six. Mrs. Forman has the pictures to prove it. Now he just has to make it legal.
Donna’s kind of a bitch in this story, so if you don’t like stories like that, this might not be for you. But I do think this is an excellent story.
This story is fluffy and just perfect in general. Please read it.
It’s almost complete, and I still have hope that someday the author will actually finish this.
32k words, 12 chapters so far.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Also available on AO3
The Morning After by ShanghaiLily
Sequel to the one-shot Resolutions. Jackie wakes up in Vegas laying in bed with her very sexy ex-boyfriend and a tacky wedding band on her finger.
This story is complete.
59k words, 10 chapters.
Rated M for smut.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Fez/Caroline, Eric/Donna
The One with the Tee Shirt by c00kiefic
In which Jackie tries to get closure, Hyde's in denial and Donna plays middlewoman.
This story is complete.
18k words, 5 chapters.
Rated M.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
The Secret of Katherine by heatherlea75
Jackie and Hyde are keeping a secret from their daughter, one they fear will hurt her. When someone decides to tell her that secret, will it destroy her relationship with her parents?
Rated T.
This story is not complete, but it’s worth the read.
23k words, 8 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
The Sweetest Gifts by zeppelinandunicorns (myself)
It’s a known fact that post season 8 stories tend to be angsty, but this one is not.
This is a fluffly story that narrates Jackie and Hyde’s journey through parenthood. It will be part of a series, I got too attached to this universe, lol.
Rated T.
This story is complete.
26k words, 3 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
The Wall by Tayi
The new decade begins and Hyde finds himself alone in the basement listening to the latest Pink Floyd album, and the song "Hey you" suddenly has a new meaning. Now as the days turn into weeks, it feels like the whole album is haunting him until it helps him fix the mistakes of the past few months .
This story is complete and it has a sequel, that it’s updated constantly. Its called Over The Hills and Far Away.
14k words, 16 chapters.
Rated M.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Things Change by shy1214
Jackie's life wasn't going well, she was alone and her friends were no longer actual friends. She had lost the love of her life and everything else, especially her once incredible confidence. A new strange friend might help her find it, and give her hope again.
This story has plenty of OC’s that crawled their way into my heart.
Donna is not a nice person in this story.
112k words, 28 chapters.
Rated T
This story is complete AND it has a sequel, it’s called Lock, Step and Gone.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde. And that’s pretty much it other than the pairings between the original characters.
Voulez-vouz by zeppelinandunicorns (me)
To celebrate her birthday, Jackie convinces Hyde to take her on a romantic trip, but Las Vegas wasn't exactly where she wanted to go, and she definitely didn't want to take the rest of the basement gang with her. Frustrated, Jackie thought that the trip was ruined, but Hyde's willing to make it unforgettable. What happens in Vegas stays in Vegas, right?
This story is complete.
13k words, 5 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke
Also available on AO3
War Stories by Jenny7
It's 1980, and Hyde is more lost now than ever. When Hyde gives into the man and joins the Army, against all he's ever believed in, it will take friendship, family, and a love stronger than distance and time to get him through.
I was reluctant to read this at first, because c’mon, it’s Hyde, he would never willingly work for “the man”, but as I started to read it, everything made sense, and I fell in love with it.
This story is complete.
31k words, 24 chapters.
Rated T.
Pairings: Mainly just Jackie/Hyde
Welcome to Jackie’s by TeaTimeAllOverTown
Jackie moves to Chicago shortly after season 8 to live out her dream. But when a happy, confident Jackie returns to Point Place will her past upset her future?
This story is complete.
38k words, 8 chapters.
Rated M.
Pairings: Mostly Jackie/Hyde
What Lies Beneath by SophiesRoses
THIS STORY IS PERFECT AND YOU SHOULD READ IT RIGHT NOW.
Seriously.
This story deserves way more recognition, it’s one of my favorites of all time.
Trigger warnings for alcoholism, heavy drug use
Rated M because there are a few sex scenes, but don't let this discourage from reading the story.
This story is not complete, but I still recommend it. A lot.
119k words, 28 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/OC, Kelso/Brooke, Donna/OC, Fez/Laurie
Yet Another Season 9 by elphabacan
Picking up on New Years Day, the group has eight months before Donna and Eric leave for Madison. New faces, new stories, and many MANY changes are in store.
Rated T.
This story is complete.
94k words, 25 chapters.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Eric/Donna, Kelso/Brooke, Fez/OC, Red/Kitty
Post Season 8 one-shots:
Be Hers by c00kiefic
Hyde and Jackie talk while they’re on the road.
Rated M.
4k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
Burn War Snapped by SkittleLvr79
Can an ultimatum from their friends lead to the end of a long, bitter feud?
Rated M. Very M.
3k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Canada by angelwithawand
They agreed not to talk about marriage in The United States. Luckily Canada is close.
Rated T.
418 words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Could’ve Been, Should’ve Been by propelled
Sometimes coming back home means facing the reason why you left in the first place.
Rated T.
5k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Deja Vu by 80sUnLoveChild
Takes place right after the season finale. The countdown is on, but who is kissing who at midnight and why does it feel like this has happened before?
Rated T.
3k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Fragile, Handle with Care by JadedAngel
A simple confrontation between Jackie and Hyde lead to, maybe not the perfect solution, but at least get them a step in the right direction.
Rated T.
6k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
How I Spent my Decade: Steven Hyde by 177istaken
Are memories enough? How Hyde spent the 80's dealing with his favorite chick.
Rated T.
1k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Just a Small Glimpse by AdriDee
A small one-shot about Edna’s thoughts when she sees Hyde and his family. I wouldn’t call this a sequel, but it’s the same universe of All That I Got, a multichapter story written by the same author.
Rated T.
1k words.
Pairings: Background Jackie/Hyde
Karaoke by 80sUnLoveChild
It's New Years Eve 1979, and as usual the Forman's are having their New Years party. Why oh why did Bob bring his Karaoke and why is Eric so insistent that Hyde sing?
This story is funny as hell, I love Eric.
Rated T.
5k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Eric/Donna
New Years Day by legally_blonde
Takes place right after the series finale. Jackie and Hyde are cleaning bottles on New Year’s day.
Rated T.
2k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Reversed by SkittlezLvr79
Set in 1986. Hyde finds himself in a somewhat familiar situation but this time, he's on the opposite side of things from where he usually stands.
Rated T.
1k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
So far, this is all.
Stay by FreyReh
Everyone gets together again for Kitty’s 50th birthday and old feelings stir between Jackie and Hyde.
Rated T.
7k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, background Red/Kitty and Eric/Donna
Stoner’s Nightmare by Bunny1
What if season 8 was just a nightmare?
Rated T.
581 words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
The Force by 107derwent
Eric’s back and the whole gang is back together, but some things are still missing.
Rated T.
1k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
The One I Love by c00kiefic
“He’s been on Jackie’s bad side for so long that he’s forgotten what it’s like to be on her good one.”
Hyde sees the love of his life getting engaged to someone else and decides he’s not going to let that happen.
Rated M.
4k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
The Princess and the Rebel by ForTheLoveOfFanFiction
Much of the damage of 1979 has been repaired; all except Jackie and Hyde. A trip in 1980 to see 'The Empire Strikes Back' makes Eric and Donna wonder if there is still hope for everyone's favourite princess and rebel.
Rated T.
1k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde, Donna/Eric
Zozo: A Journey to Understanding by zpplnchick
"You don't deserve a real tattoo. But if I were to get one, I'd show it to Fez before I'd ever show it to you!" Ironically, that's pretty much how it happened.
Rated T.
3k words.
Pairings: Jackie/Hyde
Oh, just one thing, speaking as someone who writes, it would be really cool if you guys decide to leave a review (or a comment, if the story is on AO3) in the stories you read, especially the unfinished ones. It really motivates the authors, and receiving a compliment is always a mood lifter. I’ve seen some authors updating stories after years because of nice reviews, so... yeah, this is just an idea.
Next category: Stories that take place during season 8. I’ll post it soon.
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Fic Writer Review
I was tagged by @dp-marvel94 (I am just saying this is my very first occassion to by tagged in a thing like that, so filling this made my day really, thank you!)
1) How many works do you have on AO3?
22 – wow, that sounds many…
2. What’s your total AO3 word count?  
206.997, and more than the half belongs under one idea – that’s creepy…
3. How many fandoms have you written for and what are they?  
Oh, it’s many… once, I am into something, I have to write in that – surprisingly I am addicted to DP for nearly a year, and nothing else.
(But little bit of history, from the newest to the oldest: Danny Phantom, The Irregulars (that was really a short one), Guardians of Childhood/Rise of the Guardians (my very first finished multi-chaptered one was in that), Dark, Charmed (the old one, not the new series), Gravity Falls, Venom, Doctor Who, a crossover within Tangled: The Series and Milo Murphy’s Law, Death Note/Death Note: Another Note; and I had some ideas about a Rick and Morty and Gravity Falls crossover, and it seems I never uploaded here my concept about a not crossover Tangled: The Series idea, and either an independent one in Rick and Morty, hm… shame. Most of those are not finished. Okay, like 99% of it…)
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Core (Danny Phantom), stand-alone, ~3k
What The Past Holds (Danny Phantom), wip, ~91k
Pitch’s Secret (Guardians of Childhood/Rise of the Guardians), finished, ~14k
We are not alone (Venom), really short one, ~1k
Phantom (Danny Phantom), stand-alone, ~2k
5. Which of your fic do you want more attention for?  
Definitely it’s WTPH. It’s my current work. The idea about it came in December, and since that, I am working on that constantly. At first, I had ideas for eight chapters, and nothing else. Now, it grew into this monstrosity: a side-line (Bonds Over Time), and a collection that contains the deleted scenes or ideas that appeared in my mind and could fit into the story (Bits Of The Past), and also an entirely finished concept for Vlad’s past (Certain Moment Of Time), that could be connected to it too.
I also put many headcanons in that, and ticks of characters, and parallels, and layers that I just love: like Vlad having a sister and some details about his family background, Dan having Vlad’s memories too, how the explosion in the Nasty Burger happened and how Dan turned out like that… some precious things, really, but I won’t elaborate much, in case of anyone wants to give a read to it. Overall, I tried to make the TUE-mess into a somewhat more reasonable logical mess – if I managed to do that at all. I don’t know I’m just like a mother with a new-born with it: look, it’s my child! I made it! I developed it! here, hold it! and love it too, as much as I do! (Sorry, I don’t know how that metaphor came…)
6. Do you respond to comments, why or why not?
Even if it’s a kudo, or a keysmash as a comment, I write back. I mean, if someone writes – literally anything – and spends time with it, I write them back too. (And my very bad habit, that sometimes, if the comment hits an interesting thought, I tend to explain the background behind that more, and accidentally spilling some things I shouldn’t yet... In many cases, it’s like a brainstorming, and then I use that idea. I mean as, for example many of @dp-marvel94’s comments on ff, made me to realise some things, and how then I fixed those forgotten parts made my story along with it much better – once, I will list them, and you’ll be surprised how long is that list, and how obvious things I forgot about entirely…)
7. What’s the fic you’ve written with the angstiest ending?
Okay, I don’t have many finished story – shame on me. So, I’ll count the shorts. I think it’s then Phantom. It rolls around the idea what if in Forever Phantom, Danny can’t change back to Phantom, and his parents blame Phantom for the disappearance of Danny, and they start chasing madly the ghosts, making them leave the human realm once and for all – which means, Danny has to go with them. It’s really a short fic, but I very like this idea, and it was my very first in this fandom. (I was watching DP that time, I mean, getting familiar with it, but this idea got stuck in my head as I watched that episode, so that was my introduction here. Also, I watched my very first DP episode that time, which means, less then a year ago, so, I am that newbie here…) I am not spilling the end of the story, but it doesn’t have a very happy end I could say.
8. Do you write crossovers? What’s the craziest one you’ve written?
Uh, yes? I have a crossover within Tangled: The Series and Milo Murphy’s Law. It’s unfinished, but that time I thought Milo and Varian have the same vibe, including clumsiness. It was only a short idea that time, but it’s definitely worth once to continue or finish somehow. I have a crossover within Rick and Morty, and Gravity Falls. That is standing within my very big idea, but it’s halfway written on my original language and English and that’s like after how a certain trilogy end, but it has some mentioning of ideas I never finished, so yeah… it’s not even published anywhere. Maybe, once, I’ll decide what language I prefer for that, and translate the other part and then, hardly, but I’ll finish it some day... – or, never, it actually would be a very big bite if I try to imagine it.
9. Have you ever received hate on a fic?
I don’t remember to that. I mean, my main story (WTPH) kind of not everyone’s preference, ’cause of Dan, so that’s already divides the readers and I haven’t got all in all many comments yet on my stories (kudos are appreciated too, I am shy too to leave comments on fics, so don’t worry, I get it), so I think I haven’t got any. But I'd be curious to experience if someone reads one of my stories and leaves behind a comment that then criticizing it. I mean, I’d be open to learn what part is not fitting, or just too much. (I am surprised that no one ever mentioned my ’weird’ sentences. I mean for me those make sense, but those make sense for a native English person too? I’m always worried about that…)
10. Do you write smut? if so what kind?
Uh, yeah, I did. Not very proud of it, though I don’t have a heart to orphan that work. I mean, it belongs to me too. Sometimes I wonder to delete some of my works, but then I realise, no, that’s me, I won’t pretend where I came from, and shove into the dustbin my mad thoughts... All in all, my stories now, for a while, are much more family-friendly – if, anything within DP could be really counted as ‘family-friendly’…
11. Have you ever had a fic translated?
Yeah, I was very proud of my story back then, called Metamorphosis (Death Note), and I had a crazy idea and tried to translate it. So now, the first chapter is out there both in English and both in my native language, but I got stuck at the second chapter. I couldn’t translate wisely and logically the title of it to give out the many meaning it has in English. And I once tried to translate California (Gravity Falls) to English, but that would be a hard work, so I left it behind – maybe once…
Over that I sometimes has a crazy idea to translate back and forth my stories, no, beyond that, I haven’t had a fic translated from anyone else. And I think I am the only masochist that it ever crosses my mind, I guess…
12. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
No, not really. I’d be curious to once do that – maybe, but I’m not sure...
(To tell the truth, I’d be worried about that. I’d be glad to do that once, but I am anxious if I could understand my co-writer, or not. I mean, do you have any idea that I have to give five reads to any longer comments to understand it? I understand those (and I really love getting those!), but I have to give many reads to make sure I understand those well, and then, making sure, I answer back right, and my sentences make sense. My fics have ’fancy’ words, and I love working in English, but sometimes it’s a curse it’s not my native one. So then, I’m constantly worried about interactions, if I receive well something, and if my sentences are understandable for others or not. So, in short, you can see my struggle here… same reason I don’t do Invisobang, but I am considering it...)
13. What’s your all time favorite ship?
I’m not very much a ship-type. But I count Danny and Sam, as a fix point. (Danny and Val was nice and I’d have been very glad to see them in more episodes, but let’s face it, that wouldn’t work, because both of them are too stubborn to choose their other life and if once, they would face with each other, knowing everything about the other, they’d remain allies or at most very good friends.) If, the question is, what are the ships in my head (but not necessarily just ‘romantic’) that I prefer to read, well, it’s Dan and Valerie. I love their dynamics, especially in Deliverance. I don’t know why I just love reading it. 
For other reasons I ship Dani and Valerie. Though I can’t write romance and stuff like that, but in one of my planned ideas they are dating - sort-of...
14. What’s a WIP that you want to finish but don’t think you ever will?
Okay, there are many. Surely, it’s my Gravity Falls story, called California, but that’s a huge one, and the first one in a trilogy (plus some additional side-lines), and mainly in my head for years, so yeah… I think I won’t ever reasonably finish that as it should be finished. A Tale of Fords (Gravity Falls) could be count as one too. Oh, and Envision and ties (Doctor Who). Sad to say, but yeah, I am always saying, “maybe once”, but I am not sure when…
15. What are your writing strengths?
Okay, this is a funny thing, but I’ve realised I can’t deal with many characters at the same time. So, I think my strength are dialogues and interactions within two people. And I get into their thoughts, so I guess if I have to word it somehow: it’s character-studies then.
16. What are your writing weaknesses?
Can’t handle more than two people. No, seriously, somehow it always turns out, the third is unconscious, sleeping, leaves the room, and so on. I’ve just recognised it recently, and it was a hilarious recognition…
I am also bad at actions, like very very bad, I don’t even try that, because my brain just simple can’t come up with fight-scenes at all. I think I only can write character-studies, and nothing else.
17. What are your thoughts on writing dialogue in other languages in a fic?
Oh, man… does it count I am not a native English-user? So, technically I ‘always’ write dialogues in another language? But jokes aside, sometimes, I have ideas that the people use another language, and I am like “are you aware, you can’t even write English slang?”, so then, I gave up. Right now, though, I am planning to add ASL in one of my future ideas. I am wrecking my mind, how to do that nicely – but that’s only a forming plan, and dated for next year, currently, I am only collecting ideas for that.
18. What was the first fandom you wrote for?  
Does it count my very first fic was a fanfiction of one of my friend’s fanfiction in high school? She wrote a really good story – not shared anywhere, we were just giving each other the hand-written exercise book (oh, the old days…). If I remember well, it was a crossover within Supernatural and Queen of the Damned (the movie, not the book). I had no idea about Supernatural, but the story was good, but I was not satisfied with the end, and in secret I wrote another end for it, to myself. I’m not sure where is that anymore, but I clearly remember that was my very first written stuff, and that’s how my origin story began and how is I am here now.
(Oh, and once, I wrote a H2O fanfiction short story to my sister as a name-day present, in which she was a mermaid, discovering her powers during a holiday at a beach (we were at that time in Croatia in a family holiday, so the timing was fitting), and that was one of my very first fandoms to write in it too… God, I have no idea why I wrote it down, it just crossed my mind, and I remember I thought it was cute, I think she was eleven or twelve that time, so I am not sure she appreciated as much as I found it fun to write that…)
19. What’s your favorite fic you’ve written?  
This is mean… anyway, currently it’s WTPH, for obvious reasons. But I am very proud how the Angst Week turned out (my work for that is called Certain Moment of Time). First of all, I doubted I would be able to write for every day, since I planned to do the whole DannyMay, but things turned out differently and I am still sad, I haven’t done many. But I did not just managed to write for all days, but all could be counted under one idea, and also each of the chapters could be read independently at the same time. It includes a little bit of background story about Vlad, about a rewritten time, his struggles at the hospital, things around Danny’s birth, how Danny managed to survive the Portal incident, how Vlad was informed about the Ghost Boy, and that actually Danny’s separation was just a ‘plan B’ that Vlad tried to avoid… it’s complicated to describe the many things in that, but when I feel WTPH an unescapable mess, and I am frustrated by the lack of proper words to finish the coming chapters, CMOT is my absolute favourite. And I love the whole idea about it. No, I’ll be honest, that’s my beloved so far (just because it’s finished). But I like so much too my idea about Dan and Dani in Bonds Over Time, how they try to live together a normal life… okay, let’s admit it, this question is mean, I seriously can’t tell, and I am thinking right now only my current ones…
20. What fic are you most proud of?  
Okay, this is mean too. I am proud of my old works as much that I always go back to them when I am in a nostalgic mode. (I haven’t read any of my old ones in ages, because I try to avoid distractions, and knowing myself, I’d start thinking about the continuation and never finishing my current works at all...)
I am proud of Pitch’s Secret, because that was my very first multi-chaptered one idea that I actually managed to finish. That in fact, gave me the courage to start working on a multi-chaptered DP one. (My original plan was to be brave and aim doing eight chapters, to top the five, and I would have been very proud of myself, but instead now it’s way longer than that original idea, and I seriously don’t know when it will end – twenty chapters maybe?)
I think, if I don’t include the previous question. (It’s the same, isn’t it?) I am very proud of the first chapter in my Doctor Who fic. That doesn’t tell anything about the plot or about anything, that just gives a very good atmospheric background. Every time I read that, it gives me shivers.
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innaminitus · 5 years
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Temple
Pairing: Loki x reader x Thor
Request: Prompt 38 - with Loki and Thor ? (from anon)
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hiiii! i love your writing and i was wondering if you could write a loki x reader x thor one shot. the idea is that they somehow end up getting stuck on an abandoned planet. thor and the reader are already a couple but loki starts to seduce the reader. when thor finds out, both of them just end up dominating the reader. (but like no incest between loki and thor) thanks!! (from anon as well)
Prompt:  38. ‘You can watch’
Warnings: smut, language, possessive behaviour, jealousy
Word count: 3010
A/N: this is so sinful! so! sinful! 
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You sneaked through the palace, giggling uncontrollably. The brothers were following you, their humours no worse than yours, as you all had a rather long private party and alcohol was its main theme. Thor and Loki followed you, every now and then holding you back so no one catches you. You lost track on whose hands were on your body, they both seemed to be touching you for every possible reason and you were enjoying it too much to reprimand them.
You got out of the palace and reached the rocky mountains, where the passage to a certain planet was hidden. The planet was abandoned, or maybe the civilization that once lived on it has extinct.
You found the passage a few weeks ago and kept it for yourself, but the dizziness and good mood made you want to share it with the brothers. They were your best friends since childhood, but for a month or so you and Thor were dating, to his brother's displease. Loki and you always had a thing for each other, but never pushed it further than just a dash of dirty talk.
When you reached a split in a rocky wall you took their hands before sliding through it. A sudden wind caught you and you held onto the brothers more to not fall somewhere in between Asgard and the planet. Neon colours nearly blinded you and within seconds you fell on the grass of the mountainside. Someone helped you get up.
“Remarkable,” Loki gasped, his eyes locked on the place below the hill you were on.
Ancient ruins that preserved were resembling a temple and were the only building still standing on the planet. You weren’t sure if there were any animals, since you’ve never seen any during your walks there, but the amount of plants taking their place was enormous. A jungle was the closest you could compare it with, but the trees weren’t exactly as you knew them from other realms; some of them were purple, some of them had giant flowers and some made sounds.
“How could you keep this place for yourself?” Thor asked, helping you get down the hill.
“I just thought that if I show it to anyone, they would want to own it, ruin it, you know? Build here, live here. And it’s beautiful just the way it is.”
You guided them through the trees to the temple. It wasn’t big, but it had something… energetic to it. As it the walls were alive and filling you with addicting sense of power. The outside was elaborate, pillars were sculpted to resemble the plants and the sky, and vines growing there for gods know how long wrapped themselves around every possible edge, covering the engraved words in a long forgotten language.
The inside, on the other hand… It was raw. Walls were deep, crimson red. Man, woman and other creatures you didn’t know were painted on them in gold, and every one seemed to be moving in erotic scenes.
The temple was round, and inside of it were three circles, each a little lower on the ground, creating wide stairs, filled with red cushions. The lowest circle was lined with flowers, big leaves and incense, waiting to be lit, and its ground was one huge cushion.
“How is it possible that this place is so well preserved?” Thor asked, stepping inside and looking around.
“Magic.” Loki raised his brow and looked at you. “You’ve been busy.”
“I might’ve used little tricks to bring this place to its old glory. Don’t you like it?” You sat on one of the cushions laying on the outer steps. With a flick of your fingers all the candles lit obediently, surrounding the place with warm, orange light.
“You did a great job,” said Thor, caressing your cheek with his finger and sitting next to you. “How long can we stay?”
“Well, as long as you want. The passage opens every twelve hours.” You stretched on the cushions and shivered. “Although it gets a little cold by night.”
“Can we make a bonfire here?” Thor asked, playing with your hair. You nodded. “I’ll go get some wood, then.” He got up.
“Do you need help?” Loki turned to his brother, and despite the question he looked as if he really didn’t want to help his brother.
“No, I’ll be fine. You stay here with Y/N.” With these words he was gone, and you were left with Loki.
He walked to you and sat down on the cushions, guiding your head on his lap. You obeyed him and closed your eyes at the pleasant sensation of his fingers diving through your hair.
“Thank you for showing us this place,” he said silently, continuing to stroke your locks.
“I thought I should share it with my two favourite brothers,” you purred, your eyes still closed.
His fingertips slowly changed their path, followed your hair to your cheek, caressing it as gently as only he could, missed the outline of your lips and continued to your chin, then lower, through your neck, making you slightly move your head back to give him better access.
You knew you shouldn’t let him touch you like that, but the magnetic attraction to him was almost unbearable. Yes, you dated Thor, but only because he actually did something to claim you his, and you loved it in every way possible, but there was something about Loki that made you desire him as well. You wanted them both. Selfishly.
That’s why you didn’t object when Loki’s fingers swiped along your collarbone, gently discovering every edge of it, then slid lower, to your exposed cleavage, and lower, to trace the curve of your breasts.
“Loki…” You sighed. “Stop it, it’s wrong.” Despite your words you didn’t do much more to stop his doings.
His finger slipped under your bra and caressed one of your nipples, making you sigh.
“How can I stop if I know you love it?” He whispered, his voice husky when he rolled your nipple in between his fingers.
“I’m with Thor–“ You opened your eyes.
“Only because I didn’t overtook him.” He leaned to your ear. “You’re a slut for us both, Y/N. You won’t lie to me.”
You shivered at his very true words at the exact moment that Thor came back with the wood. You shot up, moving away from Loki. The blonde just smiled at you and piled the wood, then lit it up with a sparkle from his fingers.
“It should get warmer anytime.”
You walked up to him clumsily, and pulled him for a kiss. His warm lips on yours quickly sobered you from Loki’s touch, even if you didn’t feel too guilty for letting him do it.
*
Your laughter filled the temple completely, tears were flowing down your cheeks at another silly story the brothers were telling you.
“And she came up to him, thinking he was Odin, and fucking kissed him.” Thor was shaking from laughter.
“That’s how we found out that our father had a lover.” Loki summarised, shaking his head but laughing as well.
“How come I never knew about this?” You bumped him with your knee and his hand fell on it. You were all sitting inside the inner circle, comfortably surrounded by cushions, sitting side by side with you in the middle and empty bottles of wine you brought.
“We were so embarrassed by the time we promised to each other to never talk about it.” Thor was smiling widely at his brother. “But I guess you’ve always been an exception.”
You were all silent for a moment, your eyes locked on Loki’s fingers travelling again. You wanted to shake his hand off, to say he’s acting reckless doing it in front of Thor, but you just couldn’t help and look as his fingers made their way up to your thigh, stroking the soft skin.
“Brother–“ Thor’s voice was warning, but his eyes were also locked on Loki’s hand exposing your body more and more.
You couldn’t take it anymore. Whether it was wine pushing you to action, or your sick brain – you didn’t know. All you knew was that your fingers were tangled in Loki’s black hair and your lips were on his, tasting the wine off his tongue.
“Y/N!” Thor shouted behind you, and you turned to him, your eyes blurred when you pressed your mouth onto his as well. “What are you doing?” He gasped.
You looked at Loki, whose eyebrows were high up to his hairline, then again at Thor, blushing slightly from anger.
“We all want this, don’t we?” You gesticulated at the three of you. They didn’t object, just looked at each other with confusion.
“Y/N, I’m not sure…” Thor sighed, but you noticed Loki was no longer hesitant. His fingers sneaked onto yours, he caressed your palm with his thumb.
You raised your other hand to Thor’s face and traced the outline of his lips.
“You can watch, then.”
With one move of your leg you straddled Loki and pressed your lips onto his. He didn’t waste any of what you were giving him, his hands were already on your body, thirstily holding onto your curves.
You couldn’t believe your actions. You couldn’t believe how good it felt to have his tongue in your mouth and his fingers rip the buttons of your dress, then slid it down your arms. You turned to Thor, Loki’s lips fell on your neck. Thor’s lips were parted, his eyes locked on your exposed body, touched by his brother.
“Are you not going to join?” You moaned when Loki sucked onto your neck.
Thor was torn apart, to say the least. Why was he so aroused, seeing you in other man’s arms? His brother’s… He wanted to leave. Or to pull you from Loki’s grip and claim you his. To punish you for making him feel and want things he would never imagine. Sharing you with his brother was a terrible idea, but if it was supposed to be the only way he could have you, he would do it.
Loki’s lips never left your body when his brother stupidly tried to make his mind, watching his fingers unhook your bra. Take her offer, you fool. Loki wasn’t the one to hesitate. You willingly gave yourself to him and he was dying to use your pretty little body to the fullest. He did not care how many men have you had before him, or how many times have you moaned his brother’s name in bed over past few weeks. If he could have you, he wasn’t going to complain.
You were sure Thor wasn’t going to join. He never could share anything with Loki, sweets or power, it always ended in an argument, but you wouldn’t have that now. It was the time for him to decide whether he still wanted to act like a child or to fuck you to oblivion with his brother on his side.
That’s why you almost jumped when you felt his warm lips on the back of your neck, tracing their way to your shoulder, biting slightly when his large hands found themselves sneaking along your ribs, to your breasts.
Loki’s fingers dug harder into your hips when his lips selfishly kissed yours. The remaining of your dress was ripped off your body within seconds, leaving you only in lacy panties. Loki’s hands slid onto your thighs and squeezed them hard before travelling up, to the heat between your legs. Two of his fingers sneaked to your panties and he groaned.
“Gods, you’re soaking.”
Thor’s hands kneaded your breasts harder, your nipples ended in between his fingers, he pinched them harshly, his lips never left your body.
“I have two man on my body, I could come just at that,” you moaned as Loki pushed the thin lace aside to gain access to your heat and dipped his fingers in between your folds.
Your hand shot to Thor’s neck, you leaned your head back to kiss him as Loki was rubbing small circles on your clit, bringing you to the edge of sanity. You moaned in Thor’s mouth when you felt fingers caressing your entrance and eventually inserting you, and it was too much to bare for him. He pulled away from you, grabbed your waist and almost threw you on the cushions. Your panties were gone with a blink of an eye, exposing your glistening pussy to them both. Loki groaned at the sight and slowly put two fingers covered in your slick into his mouth, closing his eyes for a second.
“Marvellous,” he sighed and Thor didn’t need to hear anything more.
He positioned himself in between your legs and before you could recall what was happening, pressed his tongue onto your sex, collecting the juices with one wide stripe.
“Holy fuck, Thor!” You couldn’t hold back when his tongue was working you so perfectly, his lips sucking on your clit, releasing yet another moan.
Loki crawled to your head, his clothes disappearing in green shimmer. You hungrily raised on your elbows and pulled him for a kiss, squirming when Thor’s tongue pushed itself into you. Loki’s fingers dived into your hair and you reached for his dripping cock, warm and twitching in your hand. He straightened to give you better access and, purring, you closed your mouth around his tip, tasting the saltiness with bliss. Slowly you took him almost whole, gagging at the sensation of him hitting the back of your throat and Thor’s mouth eating you thoroughly.
You trembled when orgasm started to build in your stomach as Thor’s fingers slid into you and pumped, the sounds of him working up your juices and you sucking Loki’s cock filled the temple, accompanied with the cracking of the fire. Flicks on your clit and thrusts of Thor’s curled fingers made you moan with pleasure as ecstasy held your body in its fist, making your legs shake. Loki pulled away to let you catch breath when you rode down your orgasm, moving your hips onto Thor’s face.
“Do you need rest? Want us to stop?” He asked, licking your juices off his lips.
You shook your head.
“No,” you said and a mischievous smile bloomed on his face.
“Good.” He ripped his clothes off.
He grabbed your leg under your knee and threw it over his shoulder, lining his hot cock with your entrance. Thanks to your slickness he slid inside easily, but nevertheless your muscles clenched onto him as your head shot back, another moan echoed in the temple.
“Fuck, as always wet and tight for me,” he hissed and it didn’t escape your attention that he was looking his brother dead in the eye with anger.
You reached for Loki’s member and wrapped your fingers around it, your whole body moving with vicious thrusts Thor was giving you.
“Will you suck my cock nice and deep, Y/N?” Loki held your chin and you nodded eagerly.
“Yes, fuck, please,” you moaned, but soon was silenced by Loki’s shaft reaching down your throat.
You pumped with your hand what you couldn’t fit in your mouth and at that sight Thor began to ram into you furiously, almost making you out of breath. His abdomen was rubbing your clit with each move, making the pleasure almost unbearable, but you just couldn’t stop, wanted to beg for more and more, and more.
Your whimpers were sending vibrations through Loki’s cock, making him thrust his hips and dig his fingers into your hair, and you let him fuck your face with pleasure.
“Fuck, Y/N–“ Thor gasped, holding your waist and moving your body even closer to him, making it easier to thrust faster.
They were aggressive, possessive, needy. Jealous of one another, using you like a sex toy and you wondered why on Valhalla you haven’t thought about it earlier.
Thor groaned, holding onto you tightly, and then you felt it, the shot of his warm cum spilling deep inside of you, bringing you so, so close to the edge of another orgasm, but he already backed away, and you couldn’t blame him after how fast he was moving, but you were so fucking close.
Your hand dived in between your thighs, your fingers rubbing rough circles on your clit. You felt Loki’s cock twitching in your mouth, he was close as well.
You pulled off.
“Fuck, come in me as well,” you moaned dragging him down.
“But–“
“Don’t make me fucking beg, please, make me come with you inside.”
He didn’t need to be told again. He grabbed your thighs, your skin wet and sticky, and turned you around, so you were on fours before slamming into you. You cried with pleasure, both of you sloppy from chasing you orgasms, you closed your eyes shut. His fingers dug hard onto your skin, leaving bruises next to the ones his brother made, he was fast and rough, fucking your soul out of you.
Orgasm shattered you like bullets, went through your body with lightning bolts, destroying every piece of you that was still right-minded. Your cries mixed with his moan when he rammed hard, bursting his load inside of you. He moved a few more times and pulled out, the enormous amount of cum spilled down your thighs and onto the red cushions.
Panting, you collapsed next to Thor, Loki next to you.
“We’re not doing it again,” they said in unison, when they managed to catch breath.
“What?” You squirmed, disappointed. “Why?”
“It’s too weird.” Loki shook his head and his brother quickly agreed.
“Way too weird.”
“Well, I liked it.” You pouted and Loki leaned to kiss it.
“I’d say… We can keep this arrangement, but no threesomes.” Thor said, his fingers wandering along your belly.
“Agree,” Loki nodded.
You sighed and with a flick of your wrist summoned a large blanket that lazily fell on your naked bodies.
“Fine. But one more rule and I’m looking for new boyfriends.”
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lethesomething · 6 years
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2017 fic roundup
So I blatantly stole this meme from @themorninglark​. Feel free to make one for yourself, you writey people. I found it pretty helpful.
Because it's as good a time as any for some retrospective, and honestly, my writing can probably use some reflection.
my 2017 in fic writing
Total year-long word count: 287,599 Word count by fandom: Haikyuu!!: 241,726 Kuroko no Basket: 4,181 Boku no Hero Academia: 43,790 Original: 960
Fics completed: (I’m not going to do all of them, but these are notable)
The Lock, the Key and the Sacrifice (138,040 words): Haikyuu!!, a sprawling urban fantasy story and my first big fic (started in 2016, last third finished in 2017, but I’m counting the whole thing)
Monsters (45,038 words): Haikyuu!!, a rarepair TenSuga romance in a Vampire Yakuza Urban Goth Coffeeshop au. Because I can.
Chocolate Hearts (42,308 words): BNHA. A slow burn romance for Aizawa x Reader.
A Fairy-tale Haikyuu: Flash fic edition (497 words): The first time I tried my hand at flash fiction. Made for HQBrofest.
On villains and trust (888 words): BNHA. A serious attempt  to start a rarepair by writing fluff for Tokoyami x Shinsou
Thirst (596 words): BNHA. Poetic naked Aizawa.
Putting the rest under a cut for length
 Works-in-progress: My Girlfriend is a Goddess?!: Haikyuu!!, a gift for the Fantasy Exchange, which got out of hand completely. (we’re currently 52,280 words in)
 This year I wrote and posted: 10 fics
 Looking back, did you write more fic than you thought you would this year, less, or about what you’d predicted? Absolutely. Somewhere around August, I became Extremely Wordy, and now everything I write takes up way more space than anticipated. I'm still not sure what happened, but all those long ones up there, apart from The lock, the key and the sacrifice, were all written in the last half of the year.
What pairing/genre/fandom did you write that you would never have predicted in January? Tokoyami x Shinsou came out of nowhere and started out as a sort of joke with @leeva-z-kai​. I also never thought I'd be writing Aizawa reader inserts, but here we are. Considering my tastes in fictional characters, I should have probably seen that coming.
What’s your own favorite story of the year? Not the most popular, but the one that makes you happiest? I'm going to have to say The lock, the key and the sacrifice, for the sheer amount of time and effort I put into that, and for the immense sense of relief and satisfaction upon completing my first big project. I wrote a friggin book. That is a thing I did and I'm pretty proud of that.
Did you take any writing risks this year? What did you learn from them? I try to do new things to challenge myself with everything I write. I think the biggest risk I took, from a… fandom type side, is Monsters, because I knew from the very start that it definitely wouldn't be popular. It literally started as a way to prove to the world that you can dump several au's together, and then why not add a rarepair and lots of gore for good measure.
Your best story of this year: It's kinda hard to discern here between huge, enormous fics and the little ones, but, um, let's go with Thirst, because while that is very short, I like every single sentence in it.
Your most popular story of this year: Without a doubt Chocolate hearts. Still kinda reeling from the popularity of that one. I don't know if it was the timing, or the fact that the Aizawa is strong in the fandom, but it seems to have really hit a nerve.
Story of yours most under-appreciated by the universe, in your opinion: That which was not broken is one of the most personal stories I've ever written, which probably clouds my judgement. To a regular person I assume it's a cloying, angsty, almost teenager sentimental rarepair, and that's… fair. But it's currently sitting at 66 views and that's mildly disappointing.
Most fun story to write: Intersectional feminist mermaids. For the rather simple reason that I don't remember writing most of it. It's one of those 'chat lodged a story idea in my head' moments that I quickly typed out. I found the story months after initially writing it and then just finished it.
Story with the single sexiest moment: I've written surprisingly little smut this year. For some reason, my sexiest moments are mostly Aizawa, and he is just a lot better in soft, fluffy touches and understated movements and just… subtext than as straight up porn. So that whole scene with the hair in Thirst is Peak Sexy to me.
Most “Holy crap, that’s wrong, even for you" story: Yeah… Monsters. It has like… people-to-food factories and stuff. There’s a lot of weirdness in there.
Story that shifted your own perceptions of the characters: On Villains and Trust was a lot of fun, because I wrote it almost on a dare and I'd never considered those characters in that setting. The thing with writing rarepair is that if you do it well enough, those two characters suddenly look like they're made for each other. So that happened…
Hardest story to write: I struggled a lot with Monsters, but I think I'm currently struggling more with My Girlfriend is a Goddess!?, so I'll pick that because it's fresh in my mind. It has something to do with how hard I find it to focus on a specific set of characters, and to find the balance between telling too much of their mundane life, and telling too little.
Biggest surprise: Considering Chocolate Hearts was mostly written in a fever dream, a random flash of inspiration that pushed actual, planned fics out of the way, I wasn't really expecting it to go down as well as it did. The near daily feedback and the full blast of emotions from the people in the comments was incredible.
Biggest disappointment: This is gonna sound stupid. But after having one fic that was really warmly welcomed, the gap that came after Chocolate Hearts was… difficult. Like, I'm used to fics getting a hundred or a couple hundred views, and a few comments from friends and the occasional wanderer. But after seeing what Could Be, it was hard to go back to life as normal. So while I realize that because of the timing, or the fandom, or the subject matter, I shouldn't expect too much from some fics, the reception of Monsters, and especially My Girlfriend is a Goddess?! has been… disappointing.
Most unintentionally telling story: I suppose That which was not broken was an intentionally telling story. So let's go with A man walks into a bar, because I never realized how big my personal need is to write a ridiculous space opera.
Favorite opening line(s): He drinks his coffee black.  (from Monsters)
Favorite closing line(s): It had been two years, but Akaashi still painted any new men he met with the same brush, only to find that the picture wasn’t as beautiful as Kuroo’s. (from That which was not broken)
It holds promises of friendly conversation and creativity and maybe, just a little bit, of adventure.(from The lock, the key and the sacrifice)
Favorite 5 line(s) from anywhere:
Cheese crackers, also, because everyone likes those, even mermaids. (from A fairytale)
Tortugan native beer was only 'beer’ because they changed the definition of the word for marketing purposes. The tortugans didn’t so much brew, as drink rocks. Literally. They dissolved minerals into water to get high. Unsurprisingly, it tasted like dirt. (from A man walks into a bar)
« He nodded and said 'I understand', » he went on. « And then we agreed that he doesn't ask questions and I don't tell him things that could cause an existential crisis for an experimental physicist. »(from My Girlfriend is a Goddess?!)
His skin is flushed, heat turning it a shade darker than normal, and the low light raises up his scars, turning them into islands of gold in a pool of vermilion.(from Thirst)
Semi Eita, 1,8 metres of undiluted sex appeal, folds his arms and looks around the coffee shop with a small pout.(from Monsters)
Top 5 scenes from anywhere you would choose to have illustrated:
Kageyama Tobio on the world's creepiest beach, being a badass (in The lock, the key and the sacrifice)
The elaborate, alt Venetian feast, full of gaudily costumed people twirling around to music, like cogs in an overstuffed clock, would make a pretty picture, I think. (from The Golden God)
The flashback scene to Aizawa's graduation party, partly because of the sheer cringiness, and partly because hey, it’s a party under fairy lights. (in Chocolate Hearts)
Tendou fighting Iwaizumi in an abandoned homeless camp is one scene I wrote almost exclusively for the visual (in Monsters)
Bokuto and Akaashi at work in a mirrored attic feels like it would look really cool (in My Girlfriend is a Goddess?!)
 Fic-writing goals for next year:
I’m trying very hard to understand my own fic writing. I've written a lot this year, like a LOT, (probably too much, if I’m honest, not even counting the meta and the analyses and stuff) and I can feel myself evolving, but I have no idea where I’m going and why certain things work, and other things don't. So that’s something to figure out.
My main goal, I think, is to start writing slower again. I feel like I’m just more pleased with works that have been given the time to ripen, to stew a bit. Pacing, if you will.
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A dangerous Game we play
(I didn't know what else to title this ad, I apologize)
Hello! The name is Ally and I’m a passionate role-player, student, and (unprofessional) hobby writer. Just to give you a quick little description of myself. 

Age: I am 27
Gender: female
Timezone: CET

 And I have had my fair share of experiences in roleplaying. I am more or less a veteran - but far from the perfect writing machine since English isn’t my first language. Usually, I post novella style ads, but I decided to compress the info and make it more short and sweet! :)   I’ve posted here a few times before and always met some intriguing individuals I’ve had the pleasure to start a partnership with. But since Covid-19 remains strong, I have a lot of free time at my disposal, as I assume most of us do. And my muse has been inspired quite a bit lately, due to having more free time to concoct some ideas. 
 What I am looking for is something original, a story that we can truly call our own. Of course, I drew some inspiration here and there, but the concept is something I haven’t done before. I am not a history buff, nor an expert on mythology, but I’ve done some research on symbolism, legends and ancient tales of gods and monsters. I am always happy to meet a fellow geek who finds similar interests in such matters. :)   I am a huge nerd, aka. a fan of both science fiction and urban fantasy, specifically horror and the supernatural. However what I am not looking for are, slice of life plots, nor do I particularly fancy heavily smut-centric narratives. A good balance of multiple elements is paramount, however, I’d like to strongly emphasize that this will be an adult RP. And it will be heavily focused on complex characters, character development, horror, psychology, carnal desires, violence, conspiracies, and intrigue The plot:
Absolute power doesn’t always corrupt. Power can cleanse. But it does not change a person, rather, power reveals… In the end, Gods and Monsters are one and the same.
Since the beginning of human history, the idea of godly beings, spirits, and monsters have both fascinated and terrified mankind for millennia. But what if some of these legends were actually true? Would that mean humankind had already encountered otherworldly beings? And if so, what kind of effect did it have on our species? This question has plagued many scholars, leading to specific groups to create cults, organizations, and brotherhoods that became infatuated with the idea of becoming gods themselves. An underground organization, derived from a fanatic esoteric cult, dedicated their cause to research on ancient artifacts, tombs, and ruins, with their goal to ultimately create a new superhuman species that will rule the world. They are publicly known under the guise CYPHER, a corporation that focuses on the scientific exploration of medicine and the improvement of human health. However, this only serves as an act to smokescreen their true nefarious purposes. As they finally come across a tangible discovery, they found it was still… somehow alive. And with it, their experiments began, tampering with forces beyond their control, resulting in a terrible catastrophe. Failed experiments were quickly swept under the rug… but couldn’t be kept for too long when hell broke loose. To counteract their ‘mistakes’, CYPHER founded a militant intelligence initiative to make sure all of these monstrosities were either neutralized or brought back to CYPHER’s headquarters. The program was immediately shut down… officially. However, a few split from CYPHER to continue their unethical, monstrous research on an unknown, privately owned island. As the years passed, they continued their ‘conquest’ by creating new experiments. Unwittingly, they awakened an ancient and mighty entity they could not hope to control. It quickly outwitted them, initially traveling across the sea to ‘affect’ innocent lifeforms, infecting and cultivating its influence to gain more ground, but it was not a virus, but a supernatural life-form that exceeded human comprehension and resource. And with it, a successful experiment subject managed to break free as well. 
 This is everything I got so far. I am open to discuss and willing to go into a lot more detail, explaining everything from A-Z, what the initial characters are, what this supernatural entity is, and so on and so forth. Themes that are definitely included are
Violence
Gore
Romance
Drama
Horror
Action
Adult topics (18+)
So if this is not up to your alley, feel free to skim past this ad. Concerning off-limit topics, I am pretty lenient when it comes to certain matters (It is a horror-action-gore based roleplay after all). The things I am not really a fan of are pedophilia, necrophilia, incest, bestiality graphic rape scenes, and toilet play. Other than that, we’re good to go. I roleplay both male and female characters and strongly prefer doubling when it comes to pairing. However, I can make exceptions and role-play in the regular format if I am compelled by good character chemistry. :)   As far as other things go, my partner should be literate and have a basic grasp on grammar. And we share 50-50 of the burden, meaning, we both do the brainstorming and allow both our characters an equal amount of attention. That includes length in word count. Typically I write in elaborate paragraph style format, but I tend to stay away from extremely long replies as they can get a bit too time-consuming Big pet peeves are text-talk replies one-liners! If you message me, we can discuss things in far greater detail, including the plot and how I write. I am really dying to try this out since I have ideas for multiple characters! The idea I’ve pitched goes far deeper than this excerpt, so don’t let it fool you just yet >:) If you seek to message me, please be sure to introduce yourself, how you write, what your preferences are, and so on (absolutely not necessary, but greatly appreciated would be a writing sample). I am a chatterbox, so I love chatting outside of the RP, getting to know my partner a bit more and exchange a few ideas while brainstorming.   We can take our chat to Discord, but I’d rather prefer to have the first message on email before we continue on.  If I managed to spark your curiosity, I’d be more than happy to hear from you :) If not, I hope you have a great day regardless!

My email: [email protected]
I am looking forward to your message! And stay safe! Best regards -Aaliyah
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