i'll wait until the actual chapter comes out to fully judge but i'm not sure if i'm completely satisfied with how the dark impulses have been explained...
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Negai no Astro Chapter 4 Thoughts
Super late but I still wanted to write something for this chapter like the other 3 to try to be active on here again š„² I have been enjoying this story so much so far, Ken Wakui has again managed to get me hooked. Even though I donāt have much to say about this chapter, it is my favorite so far. I loved to see a glimpse of the fighting, something I enjoy a lot in Wakuiās style, and also learned more about the siblings dynamics and some of the powers. It seems it will only get worse from here (better plot wise worse for the relationships between Hibaru and the siblingsš)
Kuran was my favorite part of the chapter. I honestly expected him to be way meaner so I am pleasantly surprised (still, it is only a first proper appearance so who knows how he really is). Hibaru respects him a lot and is determined to get him to his side, so this shows they donāt have a hostile relationship, and most likely Kuran does not mean him any harm. But I wonder what happened between him and Kou, they were always shown together as a pair so I expected them to be working together/have a close bond, not for Kou to overthrow himš but again everything happened behind the scenes so the details are foggy, and I will need to see more of each sibling to form a proper opinion, but I am definitely enjoying his personality and character + his design is amazing, I love the eyeliner
Something about him reminds me of Baji, especially in these panels where he turns around this way, a mix of his face and his vibes
Kou..intriguing character. I would love to know what led him here and made him want to fight his siblings. From how he speaks it seems everyone treated him poorly, like crap as he put it, and I am always here for āthe world turned its back on me so I will turn my back on the worldā kind of character who is mistreated/wronged and suddenly gains power. Always interesting to see how they use this power. Hibaru also called him the weakest, and Hibaru is such a sweet guy so maybe the other siblings are even more hostile towards himš but his cool doctor octopus kind of power makes him damn strong now apparently if he defeated kuran, i am loving this, each one of them wanting power for themselves, cant wait to see what the others want and desire
The pointing though lmao, he can do the āwho got six thumbs and ā¦ this guy!ā joke
But yeah i saw many people not liking him alrea but tbh i like him so far
This part was adorable š Terasu is like an angry cat, itās funny because so many people call him āpookieā ābeanā ābabyā and i call him my son, he would hate that, he is a little munchkinā¦
I really love their dynamicš reminds me a lot of Takemichi and Chifuyu, Terasu always looks like he does not wanna be there and is done with everything, but no matter how much he acts embarrassed by hinaru or playfully insults and judges him i know he would die for him without hesitation, and their brotherhood is so precious I know I will cry cause of them one day, nothing hurts me and heals my heart more than how Wakui writes sibling bonds: shinnie and mikey + the whole izana plotline + yuzuha and hakkai and mitsuya and the little girls, everything Wakui writes moves me
we are only four chapters in but i already feel myself getting more and more attached to Hibaru, he is so silly and precious, I love a good-hearted kind mc who is also brave and sassy. I love how he's always ready to pick a fight
but overall, he is a good person with a heart of gold, Wakui please don't traumatize him..
Still nameless...Miss Yotsurugi...please come back, i miss you...
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Hi again, rhi! Tāis I, the close-enough-mikey-ask-to-tailspin :-))) i have to admit that you got me at the edge of my seat when u suddenly posted sumn abt getting out of ur wips,,,like i really had a hunch that it was my ask and believe it or not, i really wanted to send u an ask to confirm it but i had to restrain myself bc i donāt want to look annoying or assuming or sumn haahhaha
But OMG i didnāt expect that this fic will feature not just one, but three tr characters!?!?!?? Itās really fascinating how you chose chifuyu as the one having a moral dilemma in dealing with restraining his feelings for the reader. Well imo, itās very genius of you to have chifuyu portray the role seeing how his canon character in tr has a kinda similar drive to save the ppl he cherishes just the way takemichi does to everyone + heās got that āgood boyā kinda vibe (even though heās a delinquent) like those really cute coffee/flower/petshop owners whoās all smiles once you enter their store (and youāll later on know that theyāre actually not who you think they are)???
Going back to the story, did chifuyu, in his time leap to āsaveā reader, instantly kidnap reader and explained his agenda to baji and kazutora, or was it a long process of gaining readerās trust while the other two oblivious of chifuyuās newfound ability, and their yandere tendencies towards reader just slowly manifesting the more they got to know them?
Thank you for gracing us with another lovely fic, rhi! Have a great day/night/noon <333
Lmao I made that post and then two hours later I was likeā¦ wait, did that come across too mean?? I was only joking ššš shdhdjdkdllflf but yes, thank you for both asks my love!
The thing I love about Chifuyu is when you put him against characters like Baji and Tora, Mikey even, he comes across as a much milder option ā the voice of reason, the friend you turn to. But thereās that scene where he talks about stripping people naked and beating the hell out of them because they were disrespecting Baji and likeā¦ that boy has issues <33
And thatās sort of reflected in the fic, I think? At first he paints himself as more of an enabler than anything else, letting horrible things happen to you because thatās what Baji and Tora want/need, and then it slowly comes out that heās just as fucked up as they are, and wants you equally as bad.
As for what happens when he jumps back, Chifuyuās terrified of losing her, so while he sets up on his little stalking mission, he also sets about making sure they have somewhere safe and comfortable to keep her, and figuring out how heās going to take her and when. Thereās no slow easing her into this, thereās really not much point.
Thatās for the readerās side of things. With kazutora and baji, itās moreā¦ he doesnāt just come out and announce it, but he also doesnāt make much of an effort to conceal what heās doing from them. Itās a waiting game ā how long will it take before they notice heās acting weird, and follow him one night to her place? How long before morbid curiosity wins out? By the time heās ready to bring you home, theyāre more than happy to help :))
Besides, he has the benefit of hindsight on his hands. He knows theyāre gonna love her, and they wonāt lift a finger to stop him from keeping her locked away and safe.
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HIIII! Saw that request are open so can I like ask for another part of "MY EYES ARE UP HERE" ?
BUTTTT....
with Mucho, Terano, Taiju, Inui and Takemitchi? I don't know if you have any character limit but you can just take out some characters if you wantšš
BTW! How are you? Hope you're having a good dayyyš
OML WAIT I LOVE YOUR BLOG SO MUCHš
My eyes are up here pt4
Characters:Yasuhiro āMuchoā Muto, South Terano, Taiju Shiba, seishu Inui, Takemichi hanagaki
Warning: you already know what is š
A/n: i think this would be the last one Bc my mind is drawing blanks and I canāt really come up with any scenarios for this anymore šš. But if yāall have any ideas plz share. Iām so sorry if it seemed short
Yasuhiro āMuchoā Muto
Your job is to look pretty when your with him. He didnāt tell you this personally but he loves the satisfaction he feels when his toman comrades look your way.
Weaning a nice dress that give people a good creo of your cleavage.
Has you sitting on his lap during a Toman meeting, sliding his hands up and down your waist and backšš
A very classy man indeed
When it starts to get boring for him his just placed his head on your cleavage and pulls you closer to his body.
He as no shame doing it in front of people. Especially his comrades.
You complain that people are watching and he just his eyes
āLet them watch I donāt mindā
He always tells you as he kisses the top of your breast as if it was nothing.
Other days are different if he doesnāt have you being all pretty on his lap.
You two could just be standing a room full of people. Yāknow just talking and all. His eyes arenāt even set on yours but rather your damn boobs.
Letās you talk your heart away while he gazes down at your boobs.
Heās a little to fascinated by them to say the least to the point where he just simply ignore you.
ā āHiro, baby~ā
Nothing
āYasuhiro?ā
Nada
Until someone cleared their throat. It indeed up being kisaki šš
āStop eye fucking your Wife. You got a a meeting you gotta attend. So I suggest you leave now and come with himā
Fucking kill joy šš
āI swear thereās always something up his ass ever time I see himā
āDonāt let him hear you say that. I wouldnāt hear the end of itā
āMhm. You should go wouldnāt want him waiting any longerā
He leaned down kisses your forehead, your lips and then just leans down to kiss the top of your chest
āMhm. Go home and wait for me there. Think you deserve a nice and pleasant award for following orders todayā
It was definitely a long nice pleasant night.
Terano south
Is a pervert ššš
Canāt even wear a damn tank top around him.
Purposely turnes the hear all the way up at his place. Just because he knows youāll eventually take your shirt of because your hot and sweaty. And you know he does it, you just never call him out on it
Or heās just groping them softly while you two are just laying around watching Tv or something.
He does it In front of his gang too. Man is not embarrassed but you are
Kakucho has your back though so itās alright š¤š¤ but south gets a little bit pissy about it
Just wants to show people who he belong too. As if there isnāt other ways to show people he belongs to you
Sometimes it get a little annoying honestly.
Like all you wanna do is watch your damn shows in peaceš
He comes up with the most weirdest ideas sometimes too like itās sometimes very concerning for you
āYou should get nipple piercings ā
āWhy?ā
āJust becauseā
āWhy donāt you get your nipples pierced?ā
āIāll do it if you do itā
āā¦.ā
āā¦.ā
āAre you gonna pay for mine if I do?ā
āIāll pay for both mine and yoursā
āAlright betā
I mean if heās gonna pay for them why not do them Yāknow. Technically itās a free piercing š¤·āāļø
Taiju shiba
Another person who canāt keep his hand to himself šš
Gropes them to show you off mostly and to show everyone your taken. Itās very obvious.
You donāt hate it but hate the fact that this man wears Rings 24/7 and the coldness against your breast is a no no for you.
Some people get a little uncomfortable with how much Taiju is just grabbing them like no oneās business.
Peopleās eyes tend to wonder where his hand is placed and he gets mad
āOĆ, buddy Iāll punch your fucking face of you donāt stop staring at my wifeās tits. You got that?ā
āYe-yes Mr.Shiba I understand!ā
āYou better understandā
You kinda feel bad honestly
When you two are alone you scold him like a mother would a child
Heās not even listening to you. Like at all. All he does is just hum at your words.
āTai are you even listening to meā
āNoā
At least he was honest š¤·āāļø
āThat was way out of pocket back thereā
āDoes it look like I care? No because your boobs are mine and mine only. Only I get to look at themā
āYou are to full of yourself Mr.Shiba seriouslyā
āDid I lie though?ā
āNo you didnātā
seishu Inui
He doesnāt want to be seen like a perv or anything
But itās like Kokonoi said, inui Can be blunt when he wants too soooooo like it all depends on his mood.
Your boobs are like his personal pillows. You love and hate it at the same time.
Love it because he just lays on top of you and keeps you warm and hate it because he falls asleep on top of you and youāll feel bad for waking him up you just gotta lay there and hope he wakes up soon because you might pee yourself.
He normally does that when heās tired of working with Draken all day. Which is also every damn day.
He just comes into your shared apartment more tired and gloomy then usual.
āYou okay there babe?ā
āNo Iām notā
You can feel his gaze set on your boobs as he got closer to you
You didnāt say anything else as he got on top of you gripping your his sweatshirt and lifted it up getting a nice view of your breast as he places his head comfortably on top of them.
He snuggled up to them while he pulls on the blanket that YOU folded not long ago. Men got real comfortable real quick.
Youāre literally holding your shirt up fearing he might suffocate. But you donāt know heāll die a very happy man if it does
You Kinda wished you went to the bathroom.
But you pushed him off once you felt his saliva drip between them.
Takemichi hanagaki
My little crybaby š„ŗ
He makes it very obvious because heās sweating, his face is all red and he never takes his eyes off them
Of course you tease him because it fun. Especially if heās with his friends.
Heās respectful about it to become heās literally on his knees begging for forgiveness
Youāre just minding your own business reading a book your head placed on your precious boyfriends thigh.
You can feel is horny gaze on them. He has a good view of them seeing as your wearing a tank top and all.
āMichiā
You felt his go tense under you
āY-yes?ā
āAre you having fun looking at them?ā
āLo-lookin at what?ā
āMy boobs silly!ā
He wanted to cry because he was caught red handed
āI wasnāt looking I swear!!ā
Thatās when you started to tease him a bit. You got up and hugs his arm tightly to the point where his arm was in between your boobs.
He was about pass out
āCan take a closer look if you take my shirt of for meā
Sometimes he canāt handle your teasing and just leave, making up an excuse to use the bathroom or something.
He watch him run to the bathroom. You laughed as you picked up your book to continue reading it
āWhat a handsome crybaby you are Mitchiā
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ok but we need to talk about hakkai and mitsuya !!
spoilers aheadā ļø
the way hakkai talks about him after everything that went down on christmas
it's funny because while yuzuha it's talking about takemichi, he can only think about mitsuya:
at this point it was pretty obvious hakkai admired mitsuya very much, in the backstory of how they met we learn the reason mitsuya protects yuzuha and hakkai, and therefore we learn the reason hakkai it's always following him.
but... lol can someone please explain why hakkai has a picture of mitsuya as his wallpaper? š who even does that?, this kid is whipped
mikey knows...
this is pretty self explanatory, on his letter, mikey says this, and I mean, it was obvious mitsuya's ideal job was on the fashion industry but tbh hakkai as a model was a surprise to me, but mikey said hakkai surely will do something similar to mitsuya just because he likes him so much and that just makes sense. also the part about hakkai being always on mitsuya's place?? he is right!!
(ok this is about them, but the way mikey knew about everyone's future... made me suspicious of mikey, does he knows them that well? or he saw that future with his own eyes?)
hmm... this
what was the reason??š we have a panel of hakkai lowkey thirsting for mitsuya and for what?? hakkai doesn't seem to know how to be subtle
so happy to see him
I think this can be readed in two ways, hakkai it's simply very happy to see mitsuya, or... hakkai knew mitsuya was going to be there so he went to see him and it's just acting surprised, either way... this is so cute.
what was the reason!? again
hakkai just needs to make sure that everything is perfect for mitsuya at every given time... and I find it very endearing, not gonna lie
the biggest fan
no matter the ocassion or the situation, hakkai it's always going to be mitsuya biggest fan!!
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Hi Iām currently reading the manga and have yet to find a canonically redeemable quality about kisaki šššš can u pls tell me what you like about him I am very open to your opinion Iām just ššabsolutely reeling after 187 I canāt handle it alone ššššššš
U CAME TO THE RIGHT PERSON OKAY. okay. so. my love for him knows no bounds and listen iām just like you, even when i thought he was cool while i was first reading he would piss me off just for my love for other characters. i think one of the best things about him is that if you want to understand his whole character design and look at everything he does from a different perspective, you have to really look at him and look into him and analyze him. because you could say some dumb āoh it was all for loveā shit, but itās actually so much stronger than that. thereās a lot unsaid about kisaki especially in his childhood, but at least iām pretty sure he had a really traumatic home life. and then the bullying from everyone including the teachers, and just the simple lack of humanity that he was shown up until hinata gave it to him. ofc he formed an obsession with her, the same way he formed an obsession w mikey. kisaki is really thought out, and heās extremely diligent and focused and he also isnāt arrogant. he knows his flaws, heās actually really harsh on himself and every time he talks about his plan succeeding he admits he knows he canāt do it on his own. he canāt make someone love him by himself. if you think ab the depth behind that it creates this big?? idk spot for empathy. if you look at every action he has and everything heās said from a different limelight after figuring out the most you can about his character, thereās so much more depth to his words and his actions. i also really admire the respect he has for takemichi. i think their relationship is beautiful, in the way that their feelings for each other are like simultaneously mirrored and also ignored. i think one of the most important moments was during the tenjiku arc when kisaki shot takemichi in the foot and said āwhy are you pushing me this far?ā. the care he has for him, and again i say the respect he has for takemichi is insane and it ALSO shows so much ab him as a person. i also think heās just really cool? heās a fucking genius dude, heās so fucking smart and i love that trait in a person. heās clever, heās cunning, and heās determined and even in all of that when he sees that he can be the ābestā and he knows that he can do the shit heās intending on, heās still?? idfk humble i guess would be the word. heās very hurt and i admire the way he holds himself. heās also a big dickhead and idk i love that in characters & i also love it when theyāre fucking insane and he definitely fits into that. i think the first time i really liked him was when he was with hanma and he said āthey couldnāt do a goddamn thing, yknow?ā and his eyes got all sparkly and shit lol what a fucking loser i adore him. part of it is i really just like his character, i like antagonists especially after you can find that point of empathy with them. i also like how mentally ill and (corny but for lack of better word) āmisunderstoodā he is i guess? i also love similarly to him so i like characters i relate to
YEAHH plus heās fucking funny i think itās so hilarious when heās obviously being manipulative and heās always got the little !! by his speech LOL. heās fucking clever n heās smart and also ALSO HE LIKES MATH AND HE?? LIKES PLANTING? HE LIKES PLANTS? WHAT A CUTIE RIGHT????
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hello hello! š¦
Hope you're as well as can be and looking after yourself!
Ohh dear I am very excited and nervous for acacia thorns and my heart has already sunk far in advance. One, because it's your take on Kakucho and your writing effectively pulls on my heartstrings, and two, because it's Kaku and angst which I haven't really seen until this point š
On Kaku and Ran, they definitely have some kind of brotherly stuff between them! When Ran closed the eyes of Kaku and Izana at the end of the tenjiku arc that confirmed to me that maybe Ran does have somewhat of a heart for those he deems worthy of respect. I definitely imagine later into Bonten Ran and Rindou are the ones giving Kakucho a headache with their antics! From their usual going off the rails to the whole 'ran slept with his brother's ex' saga Kaku needs a holiday away from them
I never thought of that point of Inupi's hair in the various timelines! And that stark difference in the version of events where he stays within Toman with Koko and dons a military style cut to the immaculate locks he has when has his friends like Draken and Takemichi! Now all those lines in wisteria and sweetpea about his hair being this sunshine that covers reader is even more poignant š even for all the rowdy stuff he does in Brahman's fighting rings he has people like Draken who look out for him and want him to be happy
I always wondered if he has any idea how beautiful he is both outside and from within? (Once you win his heart of course) How underneath his cold and guarded exterior there lies someone with so much love and devotion to those closest to him, and someone who goes above and beyond to make his loved ones happy š„ŗ
Now Christmas presents! The bane of my existence! They're truly the one thing I struggle with, so that makes two of us š it's so hard choosing what to give someone when in reality they deserve the world and more, so I try to compensate sometimes by writing really sappy things in Christmas cards! Almost like a personal letter as I'm a very wordy sort of person lol.
Who in tokrev do you think writes really sappy letters for Christmas cards?
Sending lots of love and cuddles!
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hello hello <3
Yeah, I've basically gone back on my own promise to keep things fluffy and light for the last bit of the event >_< i do apologise - I have to get the big sad out somehow - i guess it turns into fics <3
Yeah, the Kaku fic has been swirling around this last week, and shall probably happen this week - actually, most of the fics should happen this week. i go to my parents' soon and i don't want to be making excuses about what I'm writing LOL
I really love the Kaku/Haitani dynamic. Ran so desperately wants to big brother Kaku, because Kaku is so young - and of course Izana was in the Haitanis' age group. So they're almost surrogate brothers.. but, theyre not Izana, and not nearly as responsible. I feel like the other members of Bonten sometimes look at the three of them and wonder who really plays the big brother role (spoiler: his surname isn't Haitani). I'm very curious about the Mikey/Kaku dynamic, or he Mikey/anyone dynamic (except Sanzu, we know that), because Mikey has either directly or indirectly beaten all of them at one stage. and some out of pure malice (or dark impulse, or whatever - just go to therapy, my dude)
Inupi! - honestly his hair was the first thing i noticed, then his eyes, then the heels. I imagine that Draken noticed Inupi's hair getting long, and instead of shooing him off to get a haircut, he just gave Inupi a hairtie instead. He always has spare hairties around his wrist (a byproduct of the Mikey and Emma days *time to cry*) and when he realised that the other Toman boys were growing their hair out, he just kept the habit. It's especially useful once he joins Brahman, because Inupi and Seishu are constantly breaking or losing theirs (cue shared disappointment from Waka and Draken - Takeomi offers them gel and they politely decline)
Inupi has no idea of his worth I think. Just remember how Koko dismissed him. if the only person who Inupi thought cared for him treated him like that, why would he have value? (Koko I'm coming for you) Are we creating an Inupi Appreciation Club? I feel like it's happening.
Somehow I managed a productive Christmas shopping expedition, even if I came home with less than I had imagined. I at least managed to figure out what not to get people, and what I should probably buy online. I also came home with a nice candle, which is currently burning near me. My Christmas cards are atrocious. The holiday isn't very meaningful for me, but I go all out on birthdays. Some of my friends and I don't even do christmas, just one big meaningful gift in a year - to say thank you for tolerating me for so long >_<
As for TR characters who write long cards/long Xmas cards, I'd categorise them like this:
LONG letters/almost novels: Shinichiro, Emma, Hina, Naoto, Hakkai, Mitsuya, Takemitchy,
Longer than you'd expect: Mucho, Kaku, Ran, Benkei, Mikey (is it legible? no. Is it understandable? no. Is it heartfelt and gut-wrenching? YES), Kisaki, Angry, Chifuyu, Izana
Average: Draken, Waka, Smiley, Taiju (he writes Bible verses for you), Kazutora,
Short 'n sweet: Rindou, Mochi, Inupi, Pah-chin, Senju, Yuzuha
The back of a receipt for your gift <3: Takeomi, Koko, Peh-yan
What card?: Sanzu, Baji (he would, but he can't spell, and he forgot) Hanma, South
Lots of love to you and I hope you've had a restful weekend! <3
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