In case you're still taking feedback on Riser: I thought it was a nice, classic story (and I don't mean that in a negative way; classics are good!), but the disjointed layout, stark blacks and whites, and cartoon anatomy made it very hard to follow what was happening. I had to read it several times and really squint to make sense of what I was seeing, and even then, some parts were still a confusing mess of shapes for me... Which is a shame, because the ending is really nice to look at! But yeah, I think stricter paneling and composition could really help, otherwise, I feel like it's just confusing. Again, no offense meant, and godspeed!
Heyyy! thanks a lot for taking the time to leave a critique!
Im sorry to hear it was confusing aaa, dont worry you're not the only one who told when I was asking for critique haha, lot of people commented it felt confusing and hard to understand, which sucks cause that's one of the most important things when doing comics aaa.
Taking notes on what you commented, will try my best so the next ones are not so messy! i feel like I tried to chew more that I could while I was doing lots of stuff I had no idea how to do lmaooo.
Really, no offense at all, critique is what helps getting better. Will do my best to learn from this! Thank you very much again for taking the time on leaving a review, means the world <3. Have a wonderful day che!
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