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tonixe · 6 months

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im currently kicking, screaming, crying, and begging for a part two of your elf king Kyle fic 🦭

'I only have eyes for the King' + II

a/n: IM BACK!! The answer is yes, im sorry I kinda of baiting y'all all but I wrote it but I wanted to fix it because it wasn't giving, so this is me rewriting it I hope yall enjoy, and I hope you, lovies are having a wonderful day. P.S. This will also be posted on my ao3 as well!! I'm still in my royal era, and, I love kyle sm. ✩ KYLE IS AGED UP

warnings: nsfw, penetrating, yes there will be sex, p in the v, technically adultery, creampie, fluff, mature kyle. There getting physical and its detail.

pairing: Kyle Broflovski x Queen!reader ✩

word count: 2.7k

part one: I

tags: @peachykeen3502, @cafezingoxtoso..

"Yes, we shall" You made eye contact with the king.

You fixed your posture on the chairs, placing your gloved hands on your dress, looking forward at the redhead king. "So, what brought you to the Kupa Kingdom," you said, before taking ahold of the freshly poured tea in front of you and taking a sip of the hot liquid.

"The faction is breaking apart" He calmly spoke out, before drinking the poured liquid into the cup. "Faction?" You repeated the words of the man.

"Yes, seemed like some political parties have formed their unit and causing some problems" He began to sip his tea, your pupils were dilated, as you studied his features. His conquest did bring some good things, his face is a little longer than his normal style, still curly. It gave him a feminine appearance but you looked your gaze at his hands and forearm, it also got him stronger.

"Are they my dear husband's group that is causing that?" I cocked my eyebrows, "Probability is most likely, knowing Cartman.." He finishes, placing his cup down and waving the maid away from refilling it. "So, what did you come here for.." you opened your eyes, looking at him directly.

"To make peace with you" You swore you saw a little smug grin on his face, "For what?" I questioned, "Against your husband, so we can stop this nonsense, you're only lucky that we're on good terms.." his words dripped with venom after he finished, "Alright" You placed the cup down, "Then it's settled" You placed your hands on your lap,

"Do you need a room to have some rest from your long voyage?"

The king of the elves is already being directed to his room, by one of the delegates. "Butters," You said, before hearing his footsteps, as you turned to him, he was already bowing. "Please, call Sir Craig, and Tweek Tweek, to the crowning room.." You tuck your hands to your side, "in a fast fashion, please" You finished, turning your body to open the window, his elf scent still lingering. 'God their scent is strong' you groaned, feeling your cheeks getting hot.

"Yes Your Majesty," He said, before his footsteps backed away from you, maybe he was running, it made you laugh a bit. "Scott, I turned and flickered my eyes to the doorway

"Yes, your grace?" He bows at a 90-degree angle, "Tell the chefs to get dinner ready, and make sure for it to be extravagant, I want him to know how long I have been waiting for him.." You smiled to yourself, whispering the last part to yourself, "Yes my queen". As he left the room, you started walking to the crowning room, picking up your dress as you went to the room. Sitting down on the throne, smoothing out your dress.

As you heard footsteps in the throne room, "My grace" You heard in sync, I picked up my head and looked at the two men in front of me. "I have a position for you two men" You cleared my throat, "I need you to clear out a group of people causing trouble in one of the villages, I have heard that it was made by Eric" You finished. "Even if you have to kill them, just clear them off..and if they're not dead yet. Bring them to the dungeon and let the executor take care of them" You finished, fluffing up your hair.

"Is that all my queen?" Craig said, "Yes, you are welcome to go" You finished, before hearing the metal hunk of junk walking out of the crown room. Getting up from the throne, you walked to your chambers to get ready for dinner. Your handmaids accompanied you, as they walked with you to your room.

Feeling their hands zip down your dress, untying the string as it fell down. Your kirtle being revealed, as they took it off as well, to your Farmingdale then to your chemise and garter. "You guys can leave. I want to rest please" You said, turning to them as they bowed and left your room. The door closed slowly, and you walked to the bathing chamber, remembering the sounds of the water being run, crossing your eyes to see him. You wanted to visit him but were worried about being caught. Biting your lip, walking to your bed, laying down. Looking at your open window, the velvet curtains adorning the window.

[ A few hours ]

There was knocking at your door, as you woke up grogily. Your maids ran in, "My grace" a red-headed girl said, it was a girl named Red. As you propped yourself up, looking at her. "We have to get you dressed quickly, the dinner in an hour" She exclaimed, walking closer to you. Getting up from your bed, stretching your arms. Walking to her, as she dressed you back in the layer, Farmingdale, kirtle, layers and layers, with petticoats. "What color do you want to wear?" She asked, "Something that—" You cut myself short before I accidentally said something else. "Blue, a blue velvet dress, and some pearl accessories too" You finished. As she stepped out outside, she found the dress.

'Kyle.." You thought in my head, your eyes flickering to your hands. Before Red came back quickly, she held the blue velvet dress with pearls delicately.

"Do you want me to help you put it on?"

"Yes please" I smiled, as she helped you into the dress. Stepping into the blue dress, as she pulled the dress up. You fixed the corset of your chest. Your eyes looked into the mirror, the dress did look good on you, but your chest was being dramatically pushed up.

"You looked beautiful madam," Red said, "I'll do the rest, please go," You said, as you sat at your vanity, doing your hair and putting on a matching French hood. Light makeup and painting your lips a light crimson red. As you got up, walking with you out of your chamber, went to the banquet hall, and sat down at the front of the table.

"Apolgies I was late" You spoke out, your eyes looking around. There were some people around the large dinner room table, Princess Kenny at your right, King Kyle sitting on the opposite side of you, with some at his left, It was a man with a harsh stare and black messy hair. You believed it was Sir Stan, and the bard, Jimmy Valmer. There were more people as well, nobles, and lords including Lord Tolkien around the table. You bit your lip, only wanting to enjoy dinner with him. Looking at your front at Kyle, he stared at you as well. "So, how was it in the Kupa Keeps" You sipped some wine from my golden cup, looking at the several maids and butler serving food on the large table. Soon being filled with a bunch of food,

A butler serves your food, putting it on the delicate white china. "It was well" He looked at his plate soon being filled of his plate, "I'm glad", "You brought Sir Stan as well," You said, flickering my eyes at him. "How did you like it so far, stan?" You cocked my head slightly. He didn't say anything yet, "It was good," He said, taking a sip of the golden cup, "That's nice" You smiled, You took another sip, and You glanced at Kenny as she looked at you.

Before I cleared my throat, "Let's raise our glasses to..the king of the elven kingdom having a safe voyage" You raised my glass as they all did as well, "Cheers" You exclaimed, "cheers" You heard his deep chilling voice to my ears.

You pulled open the window, and your whole room felt hot, letting the cold air enter your room. But it was not enough at all, you were sweating from your frilly nightgown, your hair down as well. You wanted to blame it on Kyle, everything he did was annoying you, especially his appearance.

'How wouldn't drive somebody crazy, and his scent", gripping your nightgown, before changing into a fancy robe covering your body. You knew what room he was staying in, and he wasn't going to asleep at this time, opening the door of your room quietly.

Stepping your feet on the cold tile floor, walking as you cover yourself in the robe, feeling nervous about what to come with the elf king. Finding making it to his room, debating on knocking but you place your hands on the golden, cold knob before opening it.

He was lying down, not ready for bed but reading something with fancy carved glasses, his hair was messy but it was perfect, his skin still pale as snow and his freckles making a perfect contrast. You stepped fully into the room before closing the door behind you and locking making sure nobody came in.

You felt his eyes on you in the beginning, as his head turned to you. "–And what do I own the queen?" he said, with an interesting voice, and you felt your lower abdomen tingling. "Everything Kyle.." You said before you could process, walking to his bed. He watched every step you made, before you dropped the robe.

His eyes widen at your naked display, your curves that are hidden in the petticoats and layers of the dress being revealed and your breasts perked up. You didn't cover your body at all, you walked toward the side of the bed he was at, "you owe me everything" you whispered, looking at him in the eyes. "Is the queen seducing me?" he teasingly responded, before he got out of bed.

He pushed the strands of your hair from your face, before his eyes looking at every part, every piece of skin he could see. "How long did I seen you like this..?" he questioned, "3 years ago" I answers back

"You changed," he said quietly, feeling his face roaming against your body, his fingers grazing your nipples, "Haah~" you moaned, "Still the same, Y/N" he chuckled. To your surprise, he carried you, you quickly wrapped your around his neck and hips. Feeling blooming kisses on your neck, your moans flew in a rhythmic motion, before he kisses you.

Your and his lips touched, you both fighting for dominance, but you ultimately failed.

He explored your mouth, abusing your lower lip, before withdrawing. Your chest heaving, eyes are heavy and droopy. "K–Kyle" you moaned, as he laid you down on his bed. Your body shifted as you tried to cover your breast, "Don't look at me it's..... embarrassing" you whimpered.

"Too late" he ripped your hands away, your breast bouncing with the motion. Hunger was in his eyes, as he pried your legs apart. You were already wet, leaking out some clear liquids, feeling his head in-between your legs. Feeling his nose colliding with your clit and his tongue fucking your pussy. Moans ripped out of your throats, clenching your feet and throwing your head back.

Placing your hand on the back of his head, pushing him in, "More..more.." you whined. His tongue felt like heaven, pleasure all over your body. His hands propping your kegs up, his grip never leaving them.

It was embarrassing doing this again, you were addicted to him. He satisfied you in ways he couldn't, feeling your orgasm coming through as you a wave of hot, pleasure came down on you. Feeling his tongue taking care of the mess between your thighs, his sticky saliva on you.

Your eye hesitantly made eye contact with you, his face had wet marks. It made you feel hot, as he licked his lips. "I didn't get to enjoy it meal yet" he pouted, "well I guess dessert is next" he started taking off his loose pants, revealing his cock. It was bigger than before. You remember the first time you guys fooled around, but now everything felt so real.

He wasn't clean-shaven. The carpet matched the drapes, a deep orange as his happy trail. As he lined up with your wet cunt, "Kyle..wait–" he looked at you, his cock dripping precum and an angry red tip. Your breathing got heavier.

"Should we think about this?" I looked away, mumbling, "Why?" he groaned.

"You got bigger" I felt my cheek heating up, "Bigger?" he had a smile on his face, "this?" he pointed at it. He took my hand, putting it on his dick, as he guide me through stroking his cock, it was big like the cucumbers the kitchen ladies pick from the garden.

"Fuck~" he groaned, closing his eyes. "I should cum on your little face right now" he taunted, more dribbles of cum coming out. He was like a leaky faucet. "Alright, you ready" he lined with me, leaning to my ear and whispering. I felt his fingers spreading my pussy lips apart, "Yes, please..kyle make me yours" I moaned before putting my arms around his back and pushing him closer to me. Feeling his dick into you, as you moaned in impact.

His hips collided with yours, putting your back on the bed. Taking my hands off of him, before holding your legs close to your chest. Feeling him shifting closer to me, his hips with mine. "Fuck" A wonton of moans coming out of your lips. "Fuck, your tight" he groaned, "How can a king have such a dirty mouth" You teased, before pushing your back to the soft mattress. Your lips, and his crashing together. His hips stop stopping, feeling his dick touching your cervix. As his hands touched your clit, making you feel hot. His hands touched you in places he shouldn't as he touched your breast, rolling his hands on your nipples, making you moan out.

His touch made you flustered, feeling a warm sensation in your stomach. A wave hit you again, liquid coming out of you. His dick abused your pussy as you gripped the sheets underneath you, turning your head to the side. The curtains weren't closed, making your heart beat more. You couldn't focus on Kyle's moans being heard. Feeling his hands on your waist, flipping you over, "Ass up" He growled.

You obeyed, putting your head down and your ass up in the air, as you felt his hand on it. Before going back thrusting his dick into you.

Your legs getting tired, as you dipped your body down. His hands gripping your hips keeping them up, "HAah~" You moaned. "Kyle.." You whined, "Be a good girl for me" he whispered into my ear, feeling his balls on my ass. He took your arm, as you held his. As he thrusts up into you, you moaned out. More waves of pleasure coming through you.

"I'm going to cum" He groans, "Hold on, Kyle..wait" He stopped, as took his dick out of you, "Lemme satisfy you, please" Pushing him onto the mattress, lifting yourself onto his dick, you bit your lips, before rolling your hips. You looked down at him, his face red. He was stimulated a lot. Moving your hips quickly, his hands on your hips. Helping speed up his orgasm, "Fuck" He groaned.

Before you felt hot loads coming into you. Your body shaking as he filled you up. His hands gripping harsher to you, you knew it was going to leave marks. Feeling tired, as shook before him, "God" he groaned, you almost fell to the side, before he held you still. Falling down on his chest, his hands still on your hips.

"Kyle.." You breathed out, "I—I love you" You traced his chest, his body was like some Greek statue, muscular and lean but just right. His hands rubbed your back, "I love you too, Y/N" He said, "Wait, you cummed in me" A panic set in you, as you looked at him, "Maybe you can bare me a son" He chuckled, "Kyle!" You exclaimed, laying back down on his chest.

"Marriage first, my king" You flickered my eyes down, feeling shy around despite doing the birds and bees. He picked up my hand and put it with his, as he measured hand sizes, rubbing my fingers.

"A perfect ring for a beautiful queen," he said, You giggled, smiling at his words.

Your heart really did belong to him, your body, soul, and heart to him, and you didn't think of any other candidate to allow to pregnant you, just him.

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erinhime83 · 3 years

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This is – mostly – just a muse indulgence. After reading @callistochan87’s first chapter of her new Celestial Souls version, my muse was mad. Mad because it was so much better, more interesting, and more realistic than my opening chapter. ‘Hey,’ it said, ‘you know what would be great? If we stole her ideas and tweeked them a little so no one realizes we stole them!’ But, ya know, it’s fairly obvious that I did?

But then again, Celestial Souls and Earthia are completely different stories, so it’s like that ‘I’ll let you copy my homework but make it different’ meme going around. ;P

But the biggest problem is that I like the differences I came up with while thinking about a new version, so…. Not to mention, I like the designs. *sigh* I guess 2021 is going to be another Earthia rewrite year. ;P

In any case, the idea of redoing the designs smacked me hard enough to actually do them, although, for the most part, I didn’t change much other than outfits and maybe tweeked colors.

Obviously, Kai gets the actual change. I like her with short hair, don’t get me wrong – I just wanted to go back to the long hair, and given the fact that she’s a hybrid, naturally her hair behaves and she never struggles with it. ;P That’s how you can tell when my characters Aren’t Human – their hair behaves. I also wanted to give her more brown-ish hair, so she won’t stand out too much. I like how she turned out. And the long wavy hair has nothing to do with Chris having longer wavy hair. ;P

Gabby gets a pretty dress, because I liked the design, and somehow it really works on her. Really works. I like it a lot. The thing that changes about Gabby, though, is that her aunt doesn’t really change her name, so she’s still Issadora Acadia on Earth, but she does by her middle name because she thinks Issadora is a weird name.

Mickel…yeah. Just an outfit change. *shrug*

Dylan looks slightly darker, but that’s because I matched his hair to his skin tone better, and I like it a lot more. Her and Kai are the main reasons I wanted to do this, because I got the idea of Dylan wearing something more ‘Helian’ in nature, like the fashions sort of mix between cultures sort of thing. He looks pretty damn good in it, actually, and I like a lot. He doesn’t have his poofy pants anymore, but I think these look better and make more sense.

Aerona…well, Aerona, I actually changed her hair, because I was like ‘why would she have blond hair’? Sure, her species have such a wide variety of colors that it would make sense one of them would have blond, but I wanted to give her something different. I had her having violet hair at one point, and it looks good, but thankfully it looks odd enough that I decided to go with a light yellow instead. Close enough to blond to make it work, but just off enough to make her look more alien. (Like she needs something to make her look more alien.) I also like her outfit. ^^;

Dev is just, you know, Dev. Gave him freckles like his sister, and that’s really about it.

Talia’s outfit is sort of the same concept as Dylan’s, where there is some Helian influence. But it’s still got that Greek/Roman influence to it. But the change she gets is that I’m thinking about taking wings away from the Aeolians, and make them just, like, not really special? Like, they’re special on Aethos because they’re just normal people. Sure, that doesn’t make Kai and Dev all that special, except for the fact that they are hybrids. Oh, and I made her slightly darker as well.

The next set of designs is random, I know. The first design is a dress I had designed for Kai for the 3rd book, before I had decided to take them all in a different direction. But I liked it, and I decided to go ahead and ink it and give it to the new Kai for the time being. Just a random, pretty, Aeolian dress.

The other design is more important. One of the reasons I do want to do the rewrite again is because Aerona has a more predominant role in the beginning. Instead of them just meeting her, she’s been coming to Earth the entire time Dr. Llewellyn’s been there, spending two months each summer hanging out with the group. So this is her current human appearance, which, of course, is odd because she’s white, but has the slanted Asian eyes, which are entirely too large. But the group is used to it, so they think nothing of it.

I know the biggest things I’m taking from @callistochan87 right now is having the story take place right after they graduated high school but right before they leave for college, because it annoyed me having them miss so much school and then never graduate high school. This works, because not going to college isn’t as important. So they’re basically aged up, although Kai and Dev, being the oldest of the humans, aren’t quite eighteen at the very beginning.

Kinda nervous about posting these, because I have a feeling @callistochan87 will plot to murder me after I do. ;P

#my characters #my art #designs #earthia #kailyn #gabby #mickel #dylan #aerona #dev #talia

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noctanotherone · 4 years

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A FFXVxover fanfic Idea I need help brainstorming on....

I’ve had this idea in my head for a while, and me @operagoose, @tevlyn-tauly, and a few others on our discord chats have been helping me flesh this out, unfortunately I work full time now and haven’t been able to brain storm with my friends much anymore because we are in different parts of the world and I can’t always talk with them because of the time difference, so I’m ganna post the ideas on here, and maybe see if I can get some help writing this because I can’t write stories for crap but I can bounce ideas massively!

And I wanted to ask @ertrunkenerwassergeist and @secret-engima or anyone else really, if they wouldn’t mind helping? I don’t mind sharing the ideas! I haven’t thought of how that would help yet because of universe lore but I figured it would be fun and even ideas can trigger other ideas! Specially when Eos lore is involved in this!

Basically the fanfic idea is for a FFXV&HP cover where the boys go to hogwarts, but it makes sense. And it’s all because of a special little curtain/portal in the department of mysteries and the archeological digs going on in Lucis that’s barely mentioned in the series.... and the lore gets very deep and even explains where magic came from in the HP world and why it’s only concentrated in some areas and why it’s not longer as prevalent in Eos and how it evolved with each world! Along with many other things which I will need to tweek still....

I’ll make another post here soon, I need to gather what we already talked about and post it up here, but having advice on how to write it would be great too!

But here is what I’ve written so far, it’s very bare bones and I didn’t even get to some of the double checking sources wise or even naming some characters yet, let alone spell checking it... and a lot of it is just notes of what happened with no conversations....sooooooo..... enjoy!

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It seemed like any other normal day so far. Dusty rooms here, dusty rooms there, dust dust everywhere! (Change to describe the department of mysteries and the poor sap who does not get paid enough for this, and walking into the veil room).

And then it happened.

A body came stumbling out of the Veil.

The veil of death. The veil of no return. The veil where any man went into came out of (fix to something better).

(Insert wizard name here) just stood there, flabbergasted.

The man that fell out of the viel was odd to say the least.

Black and strange looking clothes, even stranger tattoos, and let’s not forget the ‘interesting’ braided haircut/style... ...though he will say the muggles has had some interesting styles recently (80’s style ftw lol) but this didn’t seem to be a muggle....could it? This is the department of mysteries, so deep full of magic a muggle could never be able to get in! But muggles have done some strange things before...gotten into places they where never meant to be...

He didn’t know what to do l, he just stood there and stared as the man stood up from the floor and patted himself off before he finally noticed that he was not where he thought he was. “How the heck....?” Mumbles the strange man before he turned and noticed him. “Hey! Buddy! Mind telling me where I am at?”

He didn’t know what to do. This wasn’t in the manual, this veil has been here for hundreds if not thousands of years and something like this never happened before.

So he panicked, and sent a stunning spell to the poor sap before running and sounding the alarms, never noticing the other head sticking out of the veil confused as he ran away.

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Nyx (with head sticking out of the portal) watched as the strangely dressed man ran away, his friend, Libertus on the floor, looking like he was frozen in place, he walked into the room the rest of the way and waved his hand in his friends face as he poked and prodded him, he was still breathing, so that was good, but what was that red flash of light? Why did his friend look as stiff as a board? And this place, it’s obvious that they weren’t in Eos anymore, let alone the citadel undergrounds.

When they were first assigned to this job to guard the archeologists as a punishment, nothing could possibly of happened besides extreme bouts of boredom....but trouble does love to follow his little group, so he’s not as surprised as he would be that some thing this weird would happen.

Speaking of, this only happened because they were goofing around looking and prodding at the weird arch with curtains, light, and floating smoke. Sure, they were getting yelled at by the archeologists in the process, be he couldn’t resist just sticking his foot out as Libertus was walking towards it.

It was meant to be a small prank! How was he supposed to know Libertus would fall thru it and ‘not’ come out the other side!

So, he did the only sensible thing. And stuck his head thru the veil to look for his friend, and when he did, he saw a bright flash of red light, his friend fall to the floor, and an oddly dressed man running away.

What did their perchant (?????? Is this the right word I want????wtf???) for trouble get them into this time...he muttered this time as he leaned over to poke Libertus...he had no idea....but he really should figure out what happened to his friend....he should probably also let the others know that they are okay...

As he stood up and stretched his body he turned back to the door and stuck his head in to let them know they were okay and that there’s a strange place on the other side, when he heard a loud noise before blacking out.

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When word reached the King, Regis was shocked, what seemed to be a whole ‘nother world was on the other side of that strange arch that was found in a sealed room in the underground of the Citadel.

When he found out what happened to his more, excitable Kingsglaive members he shouldn’t of been surprised that something like this would happen to these particular men.

But It didn’t change the fact that after word reached him of what happened, he rushed to them as fast as he could.

When he got there and crossed the veil, he saw one of his men on the floor, stiff as could be. When he inquired about what happened, he was informed by Nyx that Libertus fell thru the arch like he was pushed and all he saw was a red flash of light before poking his head in.

Hearing that, He was cautious when he crossed that doorway to another world, and good thing he was, after he stepped thru with his magical barrier up, a red beam of light was shot at him. It harmlessly hit his barrier, it was so weak he didn’t even feel it.

And to see a group of shocked men seemingly armed with sticks pointing right at him on the other side, well, he knew to leave up his shield at all times as he addressed them.

(Insert Trolldad Regis talking to them Snarkily about his men being attacked and what ever shall he do and why did they attack them yadda yadda yadda)

(Also insert part about having a game of questions and answers, he asked one and they answer and they ask one and he answers)

(Don’t know when but also put in a part of them doing a type of exchange to learn about each others magic)

(Portion below for later, might have to rewrite to fit it with story.)

What was more interesting is it seems the people on the other side seemed to be teeming with magic! Something so rare for individuals but abundant in their own world. It seems to be more accessible and variable for those on the other side, but more restricted on how much, how powerful, and how they can access it, and last but not least, the amount of the types of spells they have! but it also seems that they have another weakness that doesn’t exist in Eos.... they couldn’t use technology around magic! It was so fascinating to hear about!

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(This part will be about a few months later about Harry and on his side and how Diagonal ally is going all nuts about the discovery of a whole nother world and how a select few are coming over to their world to learn about their magic and a few on their side are going over their to learn about theirs, and about how somehow muggle tech works just fine with magic in their world and is actually somehow powered by it)

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And that’s all I have so far, I already know what houses the chocobros are ganna be in, and this happens when Noct is young, just before his back injury, so some things will change history wise, other people will live and get to join the chocobros at a later date (Aranea for example), this portal actually jump starts peace talks around the world (the nifs only do it cause, oh look! Another world full of resources to conqur! The war with Lucis can wait until we learn more!) and like Noct not getting healed by the oracle but in the HP world when he gets attacked so Tenebrae never gets attacked.... still fleshing that part out a bit.

Another thing is Noctis will be underage when he joins hogwarts with Ignis and Gladio, so ages wise Noct will be 8, Ignis will be 10 and Gladio will be the only one of ‘proper age’ but Ignis will be 11 in feb so he gets a pass but Noct they can’t deny cause he’s a prince of a nation and yadda yadda yadda....I’m just stuck still trying to plot on how Prompto gets dragged into this....

Oh! And Cor will be a guard/teacher at this school....I’m sooooooo looking forward to writing 5th year! Cor vs Umbridge... It will be glorious!!!

But yeah! Hope you all enjoyed that plot bunny and maybe will even help me a bit!

#FFXVxHP AU #FFXV Hogwarts AU

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ninawritesastory · 6 years

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You seem to have your heart set on creek and as a fellow fan I totally understand but let's not forget that matt and trey have no problems with putting characters or ships on the bus or worse if they're not interested in them anymore. I don't know if my heart could take a break up which is stupid because they're ten but so much was invested in this relationship it'd be hard not to feel a little disappointed.

Look, my dude, I shipped Creek way back when their primary interaction was them beating the fucking shit out of each other and I’ll still ship them even if Matt and Trey decide to break them up. Will I be sad? Of course I will be. Sure, things are slowly starting to change, but it will still be fairly painful to lose one of the healthiest gay couples in media, and one of the few in general. (But if Stan and Wendy can still be a popular couple despite their increasingly bad chemistry on-again-off-again relationship, then goddamnit I can still have my Creek over here in my little corner.)

HOWEVER. Considering Matt and Trey’s history? They’re either going to let Creek continue on, but a bit more in the background since their function as a foil to Heiman has pretty much run it’s course (kind of like Big Gay Al and Mr. Slave: still very much together, but they aren’t in the spotlight); or, they’re gonna find a Good Way to end the relationship. How, I don’t know. They might do an episode or a B plot of one where the break up is addressed. But it’s going to be done well. Matt and Trey don’t fuck with that shit, if their track record is anything to go by.

And yeah, they’re ten. A lot of relationships from that don’t last to begin with. Hell, even a good share of friendships from that age don’t make it through middle school. But sometimes? Sometimes they do. They may go through a few bumps along the way, but sometimes they end up working out and being healthy and happy relationships even decades later. Heck, even if Matt and Trey decide to break Creek up, it’s possible Tweek and Craig could run into each other later on in their lives, maybe during or after college, and end reconnecting and getting back together. Who knows? That’s why we’ve got fanfics and our imaginations.

And don’t doubt my power, my friend. I’ve spent my entire life living with queerbaiting and the occasional scrap tossed vaguely in my direction. I lived through the years where Joss Whedon was a god and now he’s aged as well as Bill Cosby. I suffered through the majority of Ryan Reynolds’ acting career and now we’ve been blessed with a gorgeously accurate Deadpool. I’ve lived to see Amazon warriors fighting in accurate, functional armor and I’ve lived to see the glory that is the Dora Milaje. I’ve gotten to see more and more characters written as bi, lesbian, transgender, asexual, gay, and so on as the years go on. And when canon fails me? I can very easily ignore it and rewrite it if I please. And if I can’t, I know there’s someone out there who can and who will. Because this is something fans have been doing since stories first began.

Even if Matt and Trey decide to break up Creek, that’s not gonna change a single goddamned thing for me. Canon can make all the stupid-ass decisions it wants, it’s still our choice to elect to ignore it and go about our fanficing business. Until they pry Ao3 and Microsoft Word from my cold, dead hands, I’m gonna do whatever the hell I want with canon.

My best advice? Don’t worry so much about canon. (Kind of weird coming from me, since I like using canon to build up my headcanons, but still!) If Craig and Tweek break up, who really gives a shit? You can still go on the tag and read those 50+K fics with intricate plots, or the shorter fics where they’re just screwing each other’s brains out, or both. You can still write your stories, draw your art, and all of the stuff we’re doing now, and have always been doing. The Creek fandom was irrationally strong prior to Tweek x Craig, and we’ll still be strong if they break up.

I mean, Kyman is still fucking huge and those two have literally tried to murder each other at multiple points in the show. Kenny’s still a much beloved character even though we’re lucky to even see him once a season anymore. Most of the fandom seems to hate Randy with some degree of passion, yet we keep getting more and more of him. If canon makes a decision you don’t like, feel free to ignore it. It’s a story. They’re meant to be messed with.

#nina answers asks #anon #sp creek #if it ends #accept it with all the dignity of jack sparrow in this gif #you step off on the dock and you continue on your merrying shipping way

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hollow-park · 6 years

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Hello new people!

I feel like now is a good time to recap a few of the major plot points of this blog.

I shall do this in a very silly manner.

How Hollow Park started:

Like most thing, its starts in Hell. 20 some years after current canon

Satan's just broken up with some random boyfriend, he's pissy and crying, orders Damien up to start End Days.

This happens a lot.

but he 'really means it' this time.

Damien: 'Whatever, lets go Pip' their already married.

Wait no, can't take Pip with, need to do ritual spell to get him back on the mortal plane long term, fuck.

Oh wait its fine, Goth kids got a spell that will do the trick, just need a human sacrifice.

"I don't want to anyone to have to die for me Damien"

"Fuck.."

Wait. Kenny. Yes perfect. It'll be like an old soda machine you could trick with a quarter on a string. Perfect.

Talk to Kenny... He'll do it but he wants to be paid. A lot. And he wants to get out of South Park with Butters.

But don't like, tell Butters about it he'll freak out.

We gotta be sneaky with how we do the money thing... Ok well Tweek and Craig just moved to this random town.. Hollow.. something.. Lets all go there. Kill you, Pip gets to be alive again, you come back, you and Butters get to live in Craig's basement till we rig it so it looks like you won the lottery or something.

Tweek and Butters are adopted brother btw, but that's not important other then no ones suspicious of him and Kenny living in his basement.

Brilliant.

Goth kids are on board. Wait this spell might take more then the four of them.

'Hows your current outlook on life Stan?'

'Everything's darkness and shit.' He had a bad week.

Perfect, come with us.

Insert bloody awful ritual killing of Kenny.

Pips back

Damien: "Nice"

Kenny after coming back the next day and checking his bank balance "Nice, Hey Leo lets get married!"

At some point Stan tries to hit on Pip, Damien rewrites the fabric of existence to make Stan and Pip brothers. Stan can no longer hit on Pip.

Damien hates Stan.

But its like a nice little hate friendship.

He just wants him to suffer slightly for that one mistake forever.

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After awhile people are kinda worried about Stan, Wendy goes to try and break him free of Goth Land but... Well She just realized how beautiful Henrietta is. Ok forget Stan, Wendy's found her soulmate.

Kyle doesn't even really get a chance to try, Bebe just kinda swoops in a claims him.

That’s ok because Stan's gothness is now permanent, Also he wants to Marry Michael. Michael agrees but refuses to stop cursing him with this old voodoo doll of Stan he made when he first left the goths.

The get a puppy

Its a cute puppy

Lots more people start moving to town.

Damien may or may not be very slightly mind controlling them into moving out here, they all have this lovely dark energy that comes from living in South Park he feeds off of. But its fine. Its not gonna kill them or anything.

...Damien wants a kid now. Time to break out the magic.

Lilith is born!

Yea!

...Everyone else starts having kids..

'Oh...That was only suppose to happen to Pip... Didn't know that it would effect everyone... Sorry.'

Kerry and Leroy McCormick are born.

Kenny: 'Fantastic I want like twenty of these.'

Kerry: 'visible evil energy'

Kenny: '...19.' somehow seals Kerry up behind a wall.

Kerry will remember this.

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And that’s part one. I don't know if I'll do another I just wanted to be silly and dump a few head canons out there.

#Yeah I'm slightly out of it right now Xp #here take some poorly written head canons for my little town <3

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erinhime83 · 4 years

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Since it’s been a day and my muse has shifted back into being interested in this story again (seriously, yesterday it did not want anything to do with WfS, which was annoying, because all I could think about Friday was potential details about the third, fourth, and fifth books. Nothing concrete – I have a plot for the third, and possibly for the fourth, but the fifth is just minor stuff right now), I figure it’s about time I do some sort of reflection on this damn thing. It’s not going to be very long (I think), because I’ve forgotten most of what I wanted to say about this because of course I have.

I had realized that I needed to do with story back when I was redoing ISoF, since this is the only story I’ve ever not won a NaNo with. Even though I didn’t finish the first version of ISoF, I still managed to get my 50,000 words in. Here, I got something like 17,000 or 26,000, not sure. I had attempted to work on it right after I found out I was pregnant, and I got all depressed because I thought I couldn’t be creative anymore. But in all honesty, this was actually a good thing, because the story I had was all shades of not going to work very well. Which is sort of why I struggled with it to begin with.

I’m not sure why I didn’t think to try it sooner, other than my muse was on different stories before this. So when it somehow shifted to WfS to the point where I decided to tweek the first book a little, I instantly knew I had to attempt July camp with it. And seriously, attempt. Like, I got it in my head earlier that I should try to go back to how I used to be with writing, popping out book after book, and I wanted to see if I could do it in a NaNo month, since the schedule I had used for November with the girls was still in place. And it worked! It really worked!

RIiighht up until Covid decided to shut everything down and I absolutely panicked to the point where I couldn’t write anymore. It didn’t help that I was plantsing the book, using the basic outline I had but also making it up as I went along. I, like, lost steam right at the end there, so yeah. I might have been able to continue with it if I had an idea of what I was doing.

And the same could be said about my April Camp attempt. Sure, I had my tooth issue that made it impossible to write and then, since I had lost a couple of days, I just couldn’t continue. Because I had no idea where I wanted to go with it (I have since figured it out potentially, and considering I do really want to get into the new Cosmic Dreamers, I may finish that one soonish). So even though I could have finished it later, I haven’t yet.

I did go into this one nervous as hell that something would happen and I wouldn’t be able to finish again. Except this time, I did have a full outline, I wasn’t plantsing it, so I might have been able to finish it regardless. But no. This time it went to @callistochan87. So…I guess we gotta keep an eye on @anijeltaventry in November. Or if I want to write again. (I feel bad being grateful that it was her and not me this time, and I feel like I might be able to since it was a crazy easy fix, she wasn’t in immense pain, and it sounds like her vision might not be completely damaged? I hope).

In any case, its sort of funny how tweeking just a couple of thing from my original idea completely changed what I had planned, but also changed my view on this one. Like I said, the original idea I had was garbage, and I never fully finished the outline because I couldn’t make it work very well. I was bound and determined to bring the other Volturnians from the crossover story into this one, and once I determined it was simply not possible, everything fell into place. I mean, just like the whole thing with Techna. I want Techna to be a thing, but she doesn’t do much. She’s really not useful in the story. So when I did away from her, again, everything just fell into place. More so than taking out the Volturnians.

And taking out the Volturnians was made possibly simply by creating Alan. See, one of the reasons why my muse was on WfS in the first place was because I wanted to watch a couple DC films. Death of Superman and Reign of the Supermen are my favorite, since they focus on the Lois/Superman relationship, and obviously I am all about that. And one of my favorite aspects of the new animate universes is that they always have Hal Jordan and Barry Allen be, like, BFFs IRL before the Justice League is formed. So I was like, I should do that. I should create a speedster character, and then have him be BFFs with Specter.

Except originally, Specter was an alien. That’s actually why he looks so opposite of Greg, with the pale skin, pale hair, and pale eyes. His species was supposed to be the anti-Volturnians. Also, the idea behind Spectrum was that they were all blind, and were able to ‘see’ thanks to the bracelets, but they could only ‘see’ basic colors. So if something was kinda red, they’d see it as straight red, that’s sort of thing. Oh, and Specter was supposed to be the villain.

Yep, what was supposed to happen was that he himself was going to arrest Greg for being a Volturnian on Earth. And then Lane would convince Roselyn to take her to Volturnas to get him back. And Miles was supposed to end up with Roselyn’s half-brother. Yep.

But giving Jordan a human BFF made me decide to make him human as well, and I think it works out so much better! I mean, I didn’t know anything about Spectrum until I was literally writing about it, but now I had this world-building thing that I can expand on for the next book, so yay! I was actually going to make it so he was blinded by the accident, but I sort of liked the idea of him being born blind, so the suddenly seeing thing would be more of a shock. Plus, if he had been blinded, then really, he could just always use his powers and never tell anyone he was blind. So...yeah.

(Also, I still love their names. Like, literally, I named Jordan what I did because Green Lantern’s last name could be a first name. Which is why it’s Jordan Halstrom. So I had to do the same with Alan. Alan Barnett instead of Barry Allen. Also, the name Speedy comes from Green Arrow’s sidekick, which I always thought was a better name for Kid Flash then, you know, Kid Flash.)

Looking at what I had originally planned and how much I ended up like Livianus, I realize that I could have had Miles end up with him instead of Jordan. I mean, I’m sort of mad at myself for deciding to make the rainbow superhero gay, but I randomly picked him instead of Alan. Which I think makes more sense. Alan is fricking nineteen. Miles might be only twenty-three, but I think the press would have an absolute field day with that. At least with Jordan, there’s only a three year age gap there. >.<

Let’s see, I’m not sure if there’s really anything else to mention. I mean, I sort of had fun at the beginning of the book, because it really looks like it’s going in a completely different direction than it took. But the thing is, when I was first planning WfS, I had two storylines I could have one with. The first one is the one I wrote, where Greg is a superhero and blah blah blah. The second storyline involved Greg being taken back to Volturnas when he was a teenager, and returning when they invade, and reuniting with Lane then. And then he and Lane attempting to stop the invasion and stuff.

And I guess after doing WfS, I realized I could still use some of the ideas of the second storyline. Like where Greg is taken back to Volturnas and Lane sneaks on the ship to go back with him, and her becoming one of his concubines. Sort of. So that’s where the whole plot of WCBH came into play. But as a result of the first act, I know what I want to do with the third yet-to-be-named book.

And also a Specter and Speedy prequel, and I’m like, damn, am I going to have time for all these books? Yeesh. Like, the prequel will be weird because Lane and Greg wouldn’t be in it, Miles will be mentioned, and, oh yeah, it’ll be told from a guy perspective. >.< But I still want to do it someday! *cries*

I did like how there was only one day where I had to play catch up, which is actually unusual for me. I always look at my days off when I’m not feeling writing a chapter and go ‘well, it’s easy to write a twofer or a chapter and a half those days!’, like I give myself an easy out. BUT thanks to convincing @callistochan87 to review the chapter after she read it, it motivated me to not only put a chapter out, but having it done before she got on so she could have a chance to read it. Which I severely miss. I was seriously sad on Friday night knowing that was the last time she was going to do it. Unless she, like, decides not to write in November. Then I could look forward to that then. But I doubt it. ;_;

I think the worst thing that came out of all this was, despite not thinking about it ALL DAY YESTERDAY, my muse decided last night to give me breakthrough with my idea of rewriting WfS where Greg didn’t ghost everyone when he decided to become Ultro. Like, I love the idea, and I was struggling to make certain parts make sense, but now I really want to do it. And the even worst bit is the back that my breakthrough makes it really stupidly easy just to go back, rewrite the first couple of chapters, and then just edit the rest of it. So, like, now I really, really want to do it! And I might! Because it means I don’t have to rewrite the series and be really annoyed that I can’t have Miles and Jordan together already. :D

So yeah, that’s where I’m at at the moment. Fun times with the muse. Bleh.

Still, I know I’ll look back on this book and be happy with it (except for the fact that I’d have to go back and tweek some things thanks to the rewrite of WfS). There were some things I struggled with, some ideas that I thought were stupid but had to use to move the plot forward. But that’s the best thing about first drafts! I can rework it all later to make more sense. I’m so happy that I’ve gotten this one under wraps! It only took over three years to do. XD

Thank you so much, @callistochan87, not for taking one for the team, but rather motivating me to write this and keep going with it. I know you think you didn’t do much, but just the fact that you were reading it helped so, so much, and that’s pretty true for all my stories! So I’ll always thank you for that. :D

I probably missed some things I wanted to say. I always do, it seems. ^^;

#wfs #book talk post

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erinhime83 · 2 years

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I just want to preface this by saying that my muse isn’t necessarily on this story, although the realization that I created this story 20 years ago last November, meaning I was working on this story around 20 years ago now, kinda sorta makes me want to consider doing the rewrite in November. But that is neither here nor there. Basically, my muse got on this story after reading Marissa Meyer’s Guilded, which is a retelling of Rumpelstiltskin, and the setting is, I guess, supposed to be medieval Germany? Whatever, sort of reminded me of Angela Dea, and how it should be, and…yeah.

Add in the fact that @callistochan87 recently put up a reblog of some Viking dresses, which is what sort of fashion I decided to go for the Altaire, and I wanted to doodle up a new design for Buttercup before I lost the post/forgot. And I figured, at the time, why, why not mess a little with the other designs while I’m at it, and here we are now.

To be fair, I only really changed Buttercup and Odessa. I did Odessa just to mess with her hairstyle and ended up falling in love with it, lol. The other sheets were just me wanted to ride the muse a little longer, so…yeah.

Buttercup: I had absolutely fallen in love with one of the dresses from the Tumblr post, so I had to give it to Buttercup, and let me tell you – I’m glad I did, because it looks so good! I really like the idea of them stull dressing medieval and stuff, but since they are an Other, it’s not quite the same as the rest of the kingdoms. And she looks awesome! I did decide that Altaire is cold like the rest of the kingdoms, but since Buttercup is a Fire Mage, she tends to run hot and wears shorter sleeves because of it.

Raito: While I did do a minor lineart tweek on his outfit, his biggest change is the fact that I had him darker. He still somehow looked rather white, even standing next to Buttercup, but I like this better.

Clover: Again, just made her darker. Because I had a trend of making my dark characters darker, lol. But she, again, looks good, so I can’t complain.

Odessa: I’ve never really been too happy with Odessa’s design, so I was mostly just messing with giving her the undercut haircut for the hell of it, and instantly fell in love. This is the Odesa I see when I’m writing about her! And I managed to give her an outfit that I like for a change! She looks tomboyish without being too masculine, and it really works for her! Everything really matches her personality. And I went back to the tan with blond hair, because it suits her.

Dante: …moving on…

Selene: Made her black again, just because I liked her better that way. I think the blue looks great on her this way. I figure the Middle Eastern kingdom is Collins now; its just that I don’t really have any characters from there, unfortunately.

Ignatius: I changed his horns, and I think he looks a little more dragon-like? Also tweeked his outfit a bit, and I like it, of course.

Aria: I changed her colors, mostly. I liked the idea that she looks like a stormy sky in his possessed form, hence the greys and blacks.

Ruby: I tweeked her outfit a little, making it look a little more medieval, and gave her new wings. I was going to give her more red in her outfit, but it was too much red. :P Sure, her name is Ruby, but she gets that from the way she looks, not what she wears. ;p The purple and green look pretty damn good on her.

The next sheet is the Gods, because why the hell not?

Ignatius: He…well, this is the same as the other one, I just stuck him in this sheet as well because this is his family. ^^;

Aquarius: Since I figured out beards, I decided to give him one, since I see him as having one in her merman form. I really like it – gives him a gruff, old man of the sea look!

Aria: This is her healed look. The idea is that she looks like a pleasant sky like this, whites and blues and light greys to symbolize clouds. I decided to have her have an outfit change, since, once she’s healed, she interacts with humans more, and thus, picks up on their fashion. And I did really like this one outfit for her/Buttercup, so decided to utilize it again. I like it. :D

Tara: Decided to make her dress sort of a combination of Original Psyche and Ariadne, and I like the outcome! She somehow looks more matronly to me, but at the same time not, which works well with the character. I made her a little darker as well, which I like.

The last sheet is of Buttercup’s friends from her village, just because I was riding the Viking look high, and I had designs of them already. So I figured what the hell, might as well do them as well!

The one on the left originally had a jacket thing, but it made her look too mature, so I decided those were reserved for the middle aged/married members of the society. ;P Looks cool, but…yeah.

So left to right, we have Lilac, Rosemary, and Lavender. Lilac is a fist-fighter, Rosemary a swordswoman, and Lavender is a spear-thrower. Buttercup is closest to Rosemary, considering her her best friend, and at the very beginning, Rosemary gets engaged to Buttercup’s older brother, Seth. Which is a huge thing, because Rosemary is, like, a month younger than Buttercup, and she has absolutely no one interested in her because she is ‘weird’ (mostly because she prefers to spend her freetime reading, she helps with her father’s forge, and, oh yeah, she’s a Fire Mage not living within a Temple.)

I obviously spent most time and attention on Rosemary, since she is a little more important to the story, but I do like how they all turned out! Lilac originally was purple as well, but I figured if I was going that way, Buttercup would be in yellow, and…yeah. I really like how all three of them turned out, actually! They look very Viking-y.

Probably not going to do anything immediate with these, but I am in that weird muse-doesn’t-know-what-it-wants-to-do period at the beginning of the year, so I guess we’ll see. ;P

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