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BUT IT'S NOT WHAT I MEANT
[1.7k | post poker date spec (?) | angst with a happy ending]
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title from afterglow by taylor swift, for @singlethread enjoy
Buck feels…happy as they exit the back room, their wallets filled to the brim. There’s a buzz under their skin from winning, from the alcohol, and the good company.
Eddie orders the Uber and it’s tensely quiet as they ride through the streets of LA back to the loft. The air is charged and Eddie keeps looking at him when he thinks he’s not looking.
They make it up the stairs and into the apartment before either of them say anything really.
“Beer?” Buck asks, gently placing his jacket on the counter. Eddie hums as he takes the already offered bottle. He leaves his jacket on.
“How did you know? The seventeen seconds? Everyone told me it was three minutes. But you-“
“Because I counted all of them.” Eddie replies, biting his lip, “And those seventeen seconds lasted a lifetime Buck. And it was seventeen seconds because of me.”
Buck cocks his head, his brow scrunched.
“I- I was the one who—no one?”
“What Eddie? I may be able to do math now but I think I need you to spell this one out for me.”
Eddie bites his lip again and studies the pattern of the granite countertop.
“I was the one who brought you back to life,” he replies softly and quietly. Like it’s fragile. Like it’s admitting something else entirely.
“Oh.” Buck breathes just as soft. “I guess I never said thank you. So, thank you. I—“
“I owed you one,” Eddie replies, taking a sip of beer.
“Still. Thank you.” he says it sincerely, trying to convey every part of it to Eddie. Because if he’s honest he’s still reeling from it. There’s still a tingle under his skin. He jokes about it with Maddie. And the night in the kitchen hadn’t changed much, just given a little perspective. But he still hadn’t found his level as Dr. Salazar put it. The most at peace he had felt was with Eddie in that parking lot waiting for an Uber.
“Did you have fun?” Eddie asks, breaking the spiral, he saw it coming no doubt and pulled Buck right back out.
“Yeah, thanks for that too. It’s been a long time since I went out, got dressed up and stuff you know? And I’ve only ever played poker with Maddie.”
“You never—“ Eddie cuts himself off and clears his throat, “I'm glad. Been awhile for me too I guess.”
A silence fills every corner of the loft. Buck swears he can hear the neighbors arguing in the apartment across the hall. And he’s frozen. And Eddie steps closer.
The silence grows impossibly bigger.
And Eddie kisses him.
It’s soft and chaste and everything that a first kiss should be.
But he can’t kiss back. He can’t get his hands to move to Eddie’s hips. Can't open his mouth to make room for Eddie’s tongue. He almost wants to cry. And a small whimper escapes. He wishes he could explain it. But he can’t even look at him.
“I'm sorry,” he whispers, his eyes squeezed shut.
“It's okay,” Eddie replies, placing his beer on the island, and letting his hands run over Buck's arms like receding tides as he slips away.
The door clicks shut and he presses the heels of his hands over his eyes. All he can do is strip off the suit that Eddie had shoved into his arms in a garment bag not hours ago, and crawl into bed and try to sleep.
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“Eddito, what’s wrong?” Pepa asks as soon as she opens the door. He has his hands shoved in his sweatpants pockets. His mouth twists and he shakes his head and leans down to hug her. She kisses his cheeks like always.
“How’s Christopher?” he asks instead.
“Perfect Angelito, as always,”
“Don’t let him hear you say that,” he smiles sadly.
“I remember another Angel that had that phase.” She pats his cheek as he sits at the kitchen table and hands him his mug of coffee with a teaspoon of sugar and a dash of cinnamon.
“He’s still sleeping,” she slips into her own chair, “I met this very nice girl at the hair salon this week. She’s new in town, looking for people her own age…maybe someone to date…?”
Eddie swallows past the memory of Buck’s still lips against his.
How perfect everything had been up until that point. He swallows again, “You can give her my number,” he concedes. The acid crawling up his throat.
“Are you sure?”
He grimaces but still nods, “I should get back out there. It's been a long time since I've been on a date. It would be good to try again.”
He sips his coffee and the minutes tick by until Christopher makes his way into the kitchen.
“Mornin’ Dad,” Chris grumbles but still leans in for a hug.
“Hey kid,” he replies with a soft smile and ruffles his hair. Chris frowns a little.
“Can we go to the diner for breakfast?”
Eddie had been promising they would go for a few weeks.
“Sure. Say thank you to Pepa.”
He grumbles something that sounds a little bit like Gracias and Eddie just smiles at Pepa and she nods with understanding.
He gets a text a few days later,
Hi this is Emma, your aunt gave me your number.
They coordinate to get coffee on Wednesday morning after his shift.
On Monday he asks Buck if he can get Chris to school on Wednesday morning.
“What are you going to be doing?” Chimney asks as they hope the bell doesn’t ring in the last few minutes of their shift.
Eddie glances at Buck a little nervously, “I um, I’m going on a date. My aunt set us up.”
Chimney’s mouth snaps shut over a retort after Hen lightly slaps his arm. But it’s Buck who takes off, the glass he was drying hitting the counter close to dangerously hard, saying something about getting a head start on his shower.
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Eddie had a date. A date. The very thought felt spiky, poking Buck in the chest. And most of all it hurt. Which made him feel guilty. Cause if anyone was hurt it was Eddie. He lets the water wash over him, it hadn’t even been that bad of a shift. No horrendous calls. But they had been out almost the entire time, never making it back to the station for more than an hour. And he couldn’t stop thinking about Eddie’s lips on his and how the closest he had felt close to at peace and level was when he was with Eddie. Even today, while they barely looked at each other but still were impossible to separate. He felt it alone too, just not quite as comfortable in it. Not as fully.
When he finally shakes himself free of the spiral and exits the shower, B shift is already in full swing of things and Eddie’s truck is not in the parking lot.
He has no idea what he wants to say, he just knows that he has to kiss him. For real.
It feels wrong to waltz in like he usually does, because Eddie doesn’t know he’s coming. So he knocks. And before Eddie can say a thing Buck blurts,
“Don’t go on that date tomorrow. If you really want to you can, but I just– I can’t let you do that.”
“So I can’t date anyone else but I also can’t kiss you? What am I–”
Buck kisses him, somewhat to shut him up cause he can’t live in a world Eddie doesn’t know that he wants to any more. Mostly because as he realizes now, it's what he had wanted to do so many times before.
Eddie lets out a breath beneath him and then kisses him back, dragging him in, wrapping his arms around his neck as Buck's hands land on his hips, his thumbs slipping between his waistband and shirt.
“I’m really sorry about the other night,” Buck is finally able to say between kisses as he closes the door behind him. “I am still dealing with a lot of things and I was just confused and you caught me off guard. But please don’t go. I–”
“I wasn’t gonna go the second I saw you pull up outside my door.”
“Eddie,” he practically whines in response. Eddie’s breath ghosting over his cheeks.
He finds himself trapped against the door, Eddie kissing along his jaw, his hand finding a home spreading across his waist, thumb resting on his last rib.
“I feel like we should talk more?” Buck asks. Eddie shakes his head,
“I have told you everything I need you to know, I think we have talked enough over the past five years. We have so much time.”
Buck smiles and they’re kissing again.
It’s all syrupy and sweet, with a desperation to make up for what could be lost time. Or just catching up.
Eddie pulls him to the couch by his belt loops, with such little interruption that Buck barely notices his thighs bracketing Buck’s.
And oh, he thought he knew what this might be like, he’s done this a thousand times it seems. But it’s always been in cramped bathrooms or fire trucks, always somewhat awkward and tangled, quick and dirty.
This, with Eddie on the couch, their limbs slotting together like puzzle pieces, mouths opening, tongues dipping, hands–all singing in perfect harmony.
“Are we just gonna make out like teenagers until it’s time to go get Chris?” Buck asks at some point and Eddie buries his face in his chest, he can feel the smile that spreads across Eddie’s face.
“That’s a lot of making out, until three o’clock.”
“Five, he has Robotics Club today.”
“God it shouldn’t be sexy that you know that, fuck,” Eddie kisses him again. “We should move to the bed, and take a nap, shift was relentless.”
“Mmmm, what if we just take a nap right here?” Buck asks, Eddie nuzzling into his neck, little kisses just beneath his ear.
“We’re in our thirties Buck, that is not going to go well for either of our bodies,” Eddie grumbles. He tries to disentangle himself but is only met with a soft tightening grip.
“I just turned thirty–you are the old man here,” he replies teasingly, “Don’t worry I’ll take care of you.”
Eddie props himself up, hovering over Buck’s face, thumb gently resting between his eyebrow and birthmark.
The look on his face is soft, his mouth open as if to start speaking, but he just dips down and kisses the corner of Buck’s mouth gently and settles back down. Sighing as sleep wraps around them.
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THE SEAGULL. HE IS SMOKING
rated T for teens
Kandreil
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Andrew is a line cook. he is also being bullied by a seagull
✨ read it here ✨
#all for the game#aftg fic#tfc fic#kandreil#andrew minyard#kevin day#neil josten#aj writes stuff#aftg
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#socialstuck#aj art#i might do more later but i like them interacting instead of writing this stuff out better yk#btw tiktok’s guardian is like a robot that originally had parental lock on it#and as she grew up she found that she didn’t know how to turn it off#oc#twitch socialstuck#reddit socialstuck#tiktok socialstuck
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I DID IT!!!!
I AM FUCKING EMOTIONAL
#anyways time to start dual destinies 👀#now we get into the games i know very very little about#cause honestly i knew the broadstrokes of aj from fanfiction#i absolutely adored it if that wasnt obvious#it was a delight#the character writing was great#the music is phenomenal as always in aa#the sprite design was also excellent as per normal#the story on this one was so fucking fascinating#okay im gonna start the next one#im so excited to learn stuff about athena!#basically all i know is what widget does#aj:aa live blog#ace attorney#apollo justice#phoenix wright#ema skye#trucy wright#klavier gavin#kristoph gavin#mr hat#im not tagging all the witnesses in the collage sorry
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The 6th chapter of Life Goes On is up now on AO3!!
Life Goes On Chapter 6: The Not-Quite Resolution
Rex takes on a skilled bounty hunter for the prize of the Skywalkers' safety. But things don't add up… and something feels very familiar.
below the cut is slight spoiler art for this chapter!
#star wars#anakin skywalker#life goes on#leia organa#luke skywalker#tcw#the clone wars#fanfiction#fanfic#my fanfic stuff#ao3 author#ao3#fanfic: life goes on#archive of our own#star wars fanfiction#aj draws#aj writes
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*me reading*
can you believe this shit
can you believe this shit’s just posted to enjoy for FReE???!!!!
#ppl really wrote stuff this satisfying#for free#aghhhfghffb#aj#entropy#happy place#whiskeyjuniper#handsliketruth#shine for these#god dammit if i could write like this i’d never leave my room i’d glue my hands to the keyboard#a happy place to dream about#how we’re stuck in entropy#shineforthee#damn u autocorrect
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When the Day Met the Night (Ace Attorney)
Jove never intended on falling for the Gramarye magic just like everyone else, but it was a pleasant surprise when that magic loved him in return.
This went with Jove Lives AU but I figured it was better broken off on its own because. Long.
Anyway Jove time!! Hell yeah.
#Momo writes stuff#Ace Attorney#Jove Justice#Thalassa Gramarye#soj spoilers#Technically#Spoilers for AJ too but shhh#Jove my dude my guy#I'm love him#(He is just Apollo and Snufkin mix lmao orz)#Thalsssa was fun though!!!#Huzzah!!
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Pre-edits my sister's Christmas present is 7300 words. Considering the shortest(first) one was 1500 and the longest was 12k, this is nice middle ground. Didn't quite reach a reveal I'm v excited about(it will make her yell at me again >:3), but it might happen in the next one.
#qqueen rambles#writer stuff#wrote that in two weeks#with a couple days off to relax writing the aj/adam au thingie#bc i needed a break/muse switch to keep my brain from melting xD#NOW FOR OWAP
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a long post on some of my tf2 oc (inspector) facts/lore/stuff etc if anyone wants to read because its late and im bored lol
the main premise i had thought about the inspectors job is that she is tasked with scoping the hard to search parts that the administrator cannot see. its true that the administrator sees all, including ways that arent observed by a camera obviously, lol
id always envisioned if the inspector was in the game that she would be involved in a sort of 1v1 mode where the player would have to stealthily (or just charging in there) get the intel without her finding (and. killing) the player. i know tf2 isnt a game exactly based on stealth, but it would be fun to figure out a way to capture the flag with someone who is absolutely trained to just get people
although in sort of the real lore of the game, the inspector will defend what work the administrator is doing behind the scenes of the gravel war more than hunting down mercenaries who are capturing the other team’s intel
the inspector used to work for a uk branch of red/blu as a spy, so being an inspector REALLY works out well when checking for spies
the inspector doesnt really like the spy all that much. ill leave it up to you why that is (just kidding will probably draw it out when i figure out more of inspector’s storyline)
the inspector doesnt really get to hang around the other mercenaries (being much like miss pauling and always having to tend to something), but when it does happen, often gets along with the demoman, heavy and engie
the inspector gets along with miss pauling really well! its hard for her to consider whether or not they are really friends or just getting along in the circumstances that they are in, but they will share a few short conversations with each other when they have the time about various topics
the inspector will be tasked with guarding sentries when engie is not working and/or when it’s night with engie, which leads her to fall asleep on his shoulder or on the sentry more times than she would like to admit. lol
despite seeming cold and almost robotic, the inspector does have hobbies! including listening to music, reading fashion magazines/gun catalogs and drawing
in the inspectors previous work, she loved dressing up when she was off work
the inspector has a habit of being almost too quiet, so freaks the mercenaries out when she just appears and starts talking to them about their work lmao
the inspector gets homesick at times and enjoys making a cuppa tea (☕️🧐🇬🇧) or having a full english breakfast
#OK yay thats it#will probably write more once i think of more stuff about inspector#tf2#tf2 oc#team fortress 2#aj yapping#my ocs: the inspector tf2
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For the sentence starter thing...
Buck really wants to grab Tommy's hand
(In a universe where they made it to the movies)
Buck really wants to grab Tommy's hand. It's like there's an ache in his bones, he wants to feel the weight of it, trace the lines with his thumb.
Instead he asks, "hey do you know the etymology of helicopter?"
Tommy looks over at him, his nose scrunching up with his smile.
"Can't say that I do, Evan."
They are standing side by side, he could just reach out and hold on.
"Well, you would expect it to be split up into heli and copter right?" Tommy nods, "The thing is it isn't. It's P-T-E-R, like in pterodactyl, which means wing. And helico which means helix," he starts moving his hands around each other in a dance.
And suddenly Tommy's hand is wrapped around his, and the ache melts away.
"Have I told you that you are adorable yet?"
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Patreon Announcement!
So yea. I started a paetron for my orignal writing!
Completely upfront: EVERYTHING I post, as of right now at least, is completely free and requires no membership or money to read. Secondly there will be NO Fanfiction posted here, at all. All free and all orignal right now.
The goal of this is to have a place for anyone who is interested in my writing beyond fanfics to get a place to read it that is fairly easy to use. Patreon fit that bill, so this I created one and have even posted both part One and Two of Under The Arbor there! In the future I will not rule out perhapes making some tiers but for now. It's just a seperated place for my orignal writing exsisting for those who want to see more of what I write.
Currently I have two things posted:
Under The Arbor Part One
Under The Arbor: Part Two
It looks very bland and basic right now, but making it look pretty will come in time. For now, enjoy!
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Welcome to the blog.
Make yourself at home
(Fic masterlist below the cut)
🔹She/her, arospec ace
🔹I go by AJ, or Void, if that feels more natural to you
🔹Psychology student and former gifted kid waiting for the burnout to hit 👍🏻
🔹Member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints
🔹Usually screaming about Star Wars (mostly the prequels, or, let’s be honest, anything with Obi-Wan Kenobi in it for more than .05 seconds)
🔹Also a fan of lots of other media, including but not limited to: Tolkien's Legendarium, The Queen's Thief series, Howl's Moving Castle, Pride and Prejudice, Parks and Recreation, Pirates of the Caribbean, The Princess Bride, Wooden Overcoats, Avatar: The Last Airbender, The Lunar Chronicles, and some of my beloved childhood fandoms
🔹Occasional artist (read: doodler), slightly more frequent writer
🔹I have one sideblog, @arafinweanappreciation, for Tolkien content
🔹I really REALLY like answering asks so don't be afraid to inbox me random questions etc. if you ever want to
🔹I try to be diligent about organizational tagging for characters and fandoms so things will be easy to find, as well as spoilers for blocking purposes
🔹 #void doodles - my art tag
🔹#about aj - stuff about me!
🔹#talking into the void - mostly me rambling about irl stuff
🔹 #aj writes - just about anything to do with my adventures in fanfic writing
Currently reading: Rebel Rising by Beth Revis
Fic Masterlist
Obi-Wan and Ahsoka:
against the dying of the light: Sometimes your master's master has more influence on your training than you think. And sometimes they send you a physical reminder.
i saw waves lifting the sea: queer grandmaster-grandpadawan bonding. that's it. that's the fic.
softly in the gloom they heard the birds: you know that meme where the two characters are both trying take a bullet for the other??? yeah.
it's cold on the floor: very short one-shot that i wrote entirely for the joke at the end. potentially the only thing i've written that doesn't contain any angst
Obi-Wan and Anakin:
i owe it to my brothers: an anthology of obi-wan and anakin snippets, currently very short
Disaster Lineage:
fallen sentries: A post-Lawless Arc story focusing on Obi-Wan's particular method of grieving, and how Ahsoka and Anakin have to figure out how to deal with it.
resemblances: Ahsoka looks back on her masters and her training during her time in the Rebellion
come by it honestly: a snippet of Obi-Wan and Ahsoka dealing with Anakin's nonsense, even (especially) when he's not around.
you cried when you cut your hair: exploring lineage dynamics through padawan braids
Other:
rumors: Korkie knows about the idle gossip of his aunt's court, but it can be difficult to separate truth from baseless speculation.
ori'vode: Cody is (unintentionally) emotionally assaulted by a preteen [i had to make this summary humorous because i DID cry while writing it. multiple times]
ahsoka tano gets her man: the fluff filler episode of clone wars i always wanted but never got, feat. obitine, korkie and ahsoka friendship, and obi-wan and ahsoka bonding.
to catch a tooka: it is a truth universally acknowledged that all stray cats must be in want of a teenage girl to adopt them
the final standing domino: Omega gets curious about some old holos Echo is looking at. Angst ensues.
scars: Obi-Wan and Cody snippet from the early Clone Wars, feat. Cody acting his (physical) age for approx. 2 min.
sabacc face: trapped in an escape pod? nothing to do? consider card games and accidentally digging up old family drama/trauma
it's every breath that comes before: short qui-gon death fic. his pov for the theed generator fight in tpm. i made myself sad
the sincerest form of flattery: omega is growing up a little too fast for hunter's taste, and not fast enough for hers (fluffier than it sounds)
AWOL: an angsty one-shot written in honor of cody's first awol-iversary
Modern AU:
and we don't notice any time pass: the main body of the modern au. constructed almost entirely of song lyrics, nostalgia, and and found family tropes. the clone wars but make it napoleon dynamite. sort of
#pinned post#renovating and updating the blog#don't mind me#changing all the stuff i did when i first joined and thought my tolkien sideblog was going to be my most active#before the star wars brainrot#tbh i think switching my icon from the bonfire to Judgmental Cody (TM) has really altered the mood#aj writes
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I’m replaying pmd:sky and playing the special episodes as I unlock them since it seems like they want you to pause the main story to play them. In my first run or two I never played the special episodes, so yeahhhh I’m doin it properly now.
At the end of Bidoof’s wish, Bidoof makes the decision to not make a wish for himself, but instead wishes for a new member of the guild he can help out:
Which is a cute ending and all, tying back into the main characters in the present.
The game then comes back to the present (the day after you first join the guild) where Bidoof comments on how his wish came true. I noticed here that you and your partner point out each other’s puffy eyes:
They just laugh it off as a lack of sleep since they had just arrived at the guild. But I think that they probably cried or teared up in their sleep, being relayed the information about Bidoof’s Wish subconsciously through Jirachi or the player’s experience.
The partner is the one who points out the player’s appearance first, which made me think it might be a meta comment to the actual player, maybe assuming the story made you tear up. But then the player character points the same thing out to the partner, so it’s not that… exactly…
From the player’s perspective, we just went through Bidoof’s Wish and then come to the present where the main characters make this comment. Now it could be explained away as tears of happiness from joining or lack of sleep like they said, but it doesn’t make sense for the player to cry for joy when they don’t have the same vested interest as the partner in the narrative. It’s clearly supposed to relate to the special story, considering the order of events.
Jirachi is the wish pokemon, but is also known to sleep a lot. I wouldn’t be surprised if they were able to convey this information to the player and partner that night, as it was the night the wish came true. In the meta context, you are literally the character in the game (sort of), so it’s set up in a way where the information you’re given outside the game ties back into the in game characters. And so they teared up in their sleep, but without knowing why.
#pmd#aj writing#ack idk ive never posted my thoughts on stuff like this before#i tried to explain this to my brother n he didnt get it
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when i think about the size of earth,
the vastness of space,
the multitude of the universe
and beyond…
i realise how minuscule i truly am,
barely a grain of sand, minute and insignificant.
but when you gaze at me, as if
i was the moon, the stars and the sun;
the entire galaxy sparkles in your eyes
and a deep pit of fire churns in my stomach
as the earth opens up to swallow me whole,
and crush me with unconditional love.
#aj writes#been watching some stuff and life is kinda insane#how we are how we live#and the vast size of everything is terrifying
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You said I could ramble so here I am are to ramble about your fics. Specifically Unraveling because that was a fun surprise in my inbox when I got out of a thing this morning.
So I already commented but now you get the ramble.
I love that it was Wild, Hyrule and Wind helping Sky remember his courage. Wind where he literally made himself into the hero. And Wild for the amazing BOTW quote “Courage need not be remembered for it is never forgotten” and Roolie, the humble traveler who just picked up a sword and fought evil before he really knew what a hero was.
And then Wisdom. My favorite part is that you could almost believe that the first trio are near-death-experience-projections of his brothers created by him or Weaver or some combination of the two, there’s that moment where they break character and you see hints that somehow, it is actually Time and Legend and Four helping him pass the test of Wisdom. And Time getting to talk to Sky. I always love soft interactions between those two.
Power, omfg, Power. I love that you brought back in the Flames of Din fighting with him and Wars. It’s so freaking cool. And those two make so much sense to be allied to power. Twilight being the physically strongest Link and his whole quest being a journey of discovering his own power. Wars… I love him. His game is a display of power. He may hold courage but he fights with power.
And the other person who really needed needed to talk to Sky taking a moment to apologize. I’m glad Twilight was able to say the words (finally) and if there was any doubt that these visions were projections or actually his brothers, another dose of ‘breaking character’ from Twilight to show It’s actually him.
And the implication that Twilight has met Weaver. Did I catch that right? Maybe it’s Demise but it feels like Weaver?
I love that the last chapter was Sky reclaiming himself.
“I am Link, hero of the Skies, the first holder of the hero’s spirit.” It’s great when any of the heroes use their titles. I love it. Chills down my spine.
(Insert key smash here)
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This gave me happy clap vibes. Im so glad you are enjoying it! It's great to read how people are reading the story, I've got my little notebook of loose ends and stuff that I'm ticking off as I go and it's nice to see people pick up on them!
The projections have more too them, but we have to go back to what the chain is doing to find out about that. So not yet.
As for Twilight, He is a special case for a reason, which I do plan on elaborating on later, but yes. He has met Weave. And It's for a different reason to say why Wild hasn't met Weave. But we have to go more into The Weaver's story for that and that is not coming up yet.
(Weaver is a character I'll be using again cause dear lord i love him so much)
sky reclaiming who he is, remembering who he is, through the trials that he's been put through. As a whole it's a story of growth and change.
I'm very excited for the next chapter, it's probably going to be my fave to write because it's everything I love in writing. And I'm very excited about it. (but it'll probably be a while cause I need this one to be perfecttttt, there's a feeling I'm trying to get across and I've gotta keep reworking it till i get it right)
:D
#linked universe#ramble corner with major#corner answers with major#unravelling#Aj beloved#thanks so much for your kind words#its stuff like this that make me continue writing it even if some of the chapters hit a little close to home#I love unravelling its my fave thing and I'm so proud of it#linkeduniverse
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can just complain about 6-2 for a hot minute?
I hate hate HATE that they took a throwaway gag line in 4-4 where Phoenix is like "wait, were there actually MORE APPRENTICES??" and Valant is like "lol no that's dumb" AND THEN DID IT ANYWAY???
excuse me that is just. that makes me mad
also! I don't mind Apollo being afraid of heights, honestly, but like. Phoenix is already afraid of heights and they gave Apollo the new phobia of large bodies of water *why* must we endure Apollo also being *this* terrified of heights??
like the line in AJ has him scared but like. Not THAT scared. He still climbed his ass up there and all!! I do not believe SoJ Apollo would have done that ever. it feels like yet another point where they skimmed more than actually checked AJ's script
and THEN like, why didn't we get Mr. Hat as an evidence??? it would've proven without a shadow of a doubt that there was a goddamn sword up in the balconey!!
for that matter, WHERE'S ALL THE BLOOD?? if that man got stabbed by being zipped up to the roof, then WHERE'S ALL THE BLOOD??? Ema you're our forensics, pLEASE tell me where all this goddamn blood disappeared to!!!
great opportunity of having Trucy in the defendant's seat, totally wasted because all of Apollo's cases have a ridiculous amount of moon logic to them
also I know Reus is an asshole and that's the point, but how the hell did he manage to get everything in the Wright Agency slapped with a "repossessed" label in like less than a day??? I feel like that's the law thing I can't suspend my disbelief about there have to be more checks in place for that sort of thing
I'm also still mad about the whole "see that shadow in the bg that's *obviously* going upwards that we caught on tape?? yeah that's totally Trucy thrusting a sword downwards into the victim as if it could be anything else" like bitch!!!!
I feel so bad for Apollo my bud, my dude, just constantly handed cases that are like "you don't get all the evidence that makes sense, buckle up kiddo" and how much internal screaming he probably does because of it
I feel like it was only this case because, again, Apollo is *always* handed the cases with the most moon logic. dunno why, but it is consistent. he is cursed.
the weirdest thing that happens in later cases (at least, it set me off-balance) was not getting the murder weapons as evidence in your notes, but that's a gameplay thing because, like, not used for any of the puzzles, so why would they give you extraneous pieces of evidence hahaha
#Momo writes stuff#Momo talks about games#Conversations with Verse#Ace Attorney#Spirit of Justice#Apollo Justice#Spoilers#Spoilers for 6-2#I did not have a good time with the first half of soj#Found my rant and went 'yeah hey actually!! I'm still mad!!'#Apollo has ALWAYS gotten moon logic cases#ALL of AJ is like this#5-2 is no better and neither is 6-5 (even if I liked 6-5)#My poor boy is cursed he needs help
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