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Gift for @sunnys-sonnets
Featuring Teen Heimdall
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robsmooth · 3 months
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And on that, young man, you can trust me.
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robsmooth · 3 months
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robsmooth · 3 months
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robsmooth · 3 months
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Queen of Valkyries, goddess of strength, conquest, family and most importantly, forever burdened with the title of baby sister
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robsmooth · 3 months
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He said I love you in actions.
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How'd you know I had questions? It is my job. Next question. What is your job? I protect the realm I love. From trouble.
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robsmooth · 3 months
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Plot twist: Modi is her favorite.
Happy late birthday @comeguessmethisriddle and thanks for the prompt!
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He panicked...
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robsmooth · 3 months
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Words to Limit in your Final Draft
(None of this advice really applies to dialogue. If it’s in your character’s voice, they can use whatever words they like!)
Suddenly
                This one usually makes people’s list for things to cut. “Suddenly, the door opened.” Turns into, “The door slammed open.”
                As always, we want to make the readers think wow that was sudden! Instead of just telling them so.
Saw/Heard + Felt
                I already explained this in my post here!
Seemed
                There’s a use for seemed in writing when your character is surprised, assuming, or guessing at something. “It seemed impossible.” “The noise seemed to travel for miles.” Etc.
                However, when guessing at someone’s emotions—or a group of people—it’s better to just describe what those people look like. So “He seemed happy” turns into, “he grinned, bouncing on his feet.”
Really/Very
                Instead of “The really big house” try, “the huge house.” Or “His hair was very dark.” Turns into “His hair was inky black.”
That
                If you can take ‘that’ out of a sentence, it usually is stronger than if you don’t. “It was the best cake that she’d ever had!” turns into “It was the best cake she’d ever had!” It reads a bit less clunky.
Then
                Then can be used sometimes, but it’s one of those words that’s easy to overuse. To cut out a lot of your ‘thens’ you can replace them with “and” such as, “He left the house, then got into the car.” Turns into, “He left the house and got into the car.”
Down/Up
                “He sat down” is redundant. “He sat” means the same thing. Same with “She stood up.”
I chose the ones I find the most important, but there’s tons of other words that can be unnecessary or bog down your prose. Let me know which ones I missed! Good luck!
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robsmooth · 3 months
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wow that is a big ass reblog lol, but I am doing it for fun thanks Avo for the tag, you look smooth hehe
i don't know what color am I ethier, i just know I am warm warm-tone
tagging actual sunny lol @sunnys-sonnets ,,,,,@charlieworkz @herodiart @lemonspampepper @bw-after-dark if they want to
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found this adorable picrew and wanted to try it :DDD
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tagging : @slytherinshua @haecien @blue-jisungs @wheeboo @candewlsy @rubywonu @hannieheartuu @fairyhaos @wheeboo @weird-bookworm + anyone else that would like to join !!
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robsmooth · 4 months
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I do flag unfunny jokes. I think its the least I could do in this website
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robsmooth · 5 months
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Loki, right? I gotta say, the irony of this isn't lost on me. This was his room you know. His?
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robsmooth · 5 months
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robsmooth · 5 months
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OooOoooOo MAN good fanfictions are like. Really good. Like... I wana... I wana.... Yes
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robsmooth · 5 months
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The asier viewing the prophecy were like:
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robsmooth · 5 months
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Heimdall when he see atreus be like:
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