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#which is also another part im not entirely fond of it the beginning of chap 2 because its again very slow
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I hate when I've already written and published a story to AO3 and then I get an amazing idea to add to it after the fact...
#virus rambling
#this is about the ingenuous because the beginning of the chapter isnt very good compared to the rest of the chap
#and beginnings of stories are very much my week point
#usually i leave them last so that i have a concept in my head for the begining but that one i just ran in with it
#but anyways i never liked the beginning of the chapter because it really drags and its just a lot of running around
#like there is nothing to really grab onto untill you get like 1/4 way into it THEN that is where the actiony part starts
#but that beginning really looses the tension of that and yeah...
#BUT
#i just thought of something and its a good reason im rewriting it but also im not sure if it could work
#it would work in the sense of that chapter alone but then ive already been writing chapter two
#and it doesnt for with chap 2 so i might have to change that idea or change the beginning of chap 2
#which is also another part im not entirely fond of it the beginning of chap 2 because its again very slow
#im not sure what to do but... im certainly putting the concept at least in because i really want the beginning to be better
#time to think some more 😩
#the ingenuous
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