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phantomrose96 · 1 year
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I'm about to throw stones but when people my age say "I don't like these Gen Z teenage tone indicators. How am I supposed to MEMORIZE all these new abbreviations? '/nm'? '/lh'? I hate it." it sounds utterly indistinguishable from our parents being like "I don't get this text speak. 'omg'? 'lol'? SAY what you mean! Don't abbreviate!" Like I dunno how to tell you that evolving language involves... learning the evolved parts of language.
I understand like 4 tone indicators and I'm frequently confused but I support it. It's honestly a good solution to tone lost over text imo. I'm ancient and my bones are full of dust but I'll figure it out.
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lettrespromises · 4 years
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> LettresPromises informs you : You have one notification.
> Letter object : The tamer of the flamboyant flames of passion.
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> Todoroki Shouto sent you a letter, would you like to read it?
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@mangosnakesandpeaches​ sent a letter :  ❝heyo! its aydudenoway, just moved to my writing account! request number 1/3 : okay okay, so ya know how people always tend to write like, dom shouto and sub reader? what about dom reader and sub shouto. like, damn as much as i like dom shouto, kinda want to see some dom reader nglll. could this be a drabble/imagine and not too too graphic NSFW? i hope this is okay! ahhh okay okay so idk if you started writing my request (dom reader) or not, but could i add onto it real quick? breathless Shouto is all im saying. im so sorryyy for this being so sudden! if you can't add it, thats okay!❞
author’s letter :  ❝dear @mangosnakesandpeaches​, thank you once more for trusting me with your ideas and letting me express through words the love i have for this man and this man only!! hot take but i do kind of feel you.... like.... shouto is low-key a sub to me (aside from pegging ofc.) anywhoopsies!!! i hope you’ll like this and i tried not to make it nsfw which was a bit confusing but?? nonetheless, i hope you’ll enjoy this promised letter.❞
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Genre : Erotic but not explicit smut, fluff. (Please consider that the characters are aged up.) Warnings : Cursing, foreplay, innuendos, sexual deeds. Word count : 1.6K.
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After personally handing crushing losses to many villains throughout the entire week, admiring the hint of a shy smile adorning the face of civilians torn by fear as a gleam of hope while they’re being saved, secretly glancing at the newfound scars worn as medals on the abused flesh of your skin when no one is looking, any hero would be mentally and physically drained, as if your body was just the host of vacuity. And rightfully so.
Thus came the ever so needed tradition of self-care with Shouto, this renaissance of an evening was held every Friday night ever since you both graduated from U.A. No word was needed, the sole acknowledged information of today’s date was enough for the both of you to understand that today had your name as a synonymous of self-care written all over it.
This context explains why you found yourself enveloped in Shouto’s embrace, a physical testimony of just how much he loved and cherished your presence, if you will. These oh so special Friday nights also drew a contrast with your everyday life as heroes, it was also the perfect opportunity to say (or paradoxically declare in a silent manner) just how much your presence was needed to one another as the cons of being a pro-hero weighed on your mind like the sword of Damocles. To put it more harshly, the inevitable curse of never knowing if the day you were bound to spend together would be the last represented said cons.
His arms found shelter on the area above your hipbones, and every time he would let his genetically given large palms roam on this area, he would always wonder if said area had been carved to fit perfectly the form of his hands— Shouto liked to think that perhaps this was yet another sign that you were meant to be, he always tried to find poetic parallels everywhere.
His thumbs were brushing invisible shapes on the flesh of your hips left bare by the intervention of Shouto’s hands, these brushes were anything but calculated, yes, they did respect a certain common pattern—  but each time they felt similar, they always felt new at once. The semi-random nature of his gestures were the living proof that the documentary being played on the TV was semi-interesting as well.
You, on the other one hand, were sheltered in Shouto’s warm and welcoming embrace, your head fit right in the crook of his neck, and as per usual, Todoroki found yet again another poetic parallel drawn by your jointed souls. Nonetheless, if Shouto’s stare was focused on the succession of bright lights radiating off of the TV, yours was laying on the personification of your source of happiness— your boyfriend himself. After all, wasn’t staring at him way more interesting than some documentary being played? Nothing could compare to some well-deserved ‘staring at Shouto session’, but said sessions came with the slight danger of being caught, oh well…
« Love, I believe you’re doing it again. » Shouto blurted out which made you unconsciously flinch in response.
« Doing what exactly, mhm? » Oh, the fake tone of innocence could have been heard from miles away, and it sure as hell didn’t go unknown under Shouto’s radar.
« You know what I’m hinting at— staring. » But this time, it was his turn to stare at you, it was a mutual game now.
« You’re saying that as if staring at you was illegal, I mean, looking this hot should totally be considered illegal. » Shouto’s blood rushed under your newly left comment, causing his cheeks to adopt a rosy tone.
« Y/N, I’m a pro-hero, I’m not quite sure I can be considered as a villain… Is looking a certain way truly illegal? Should I change something about my appearance? » His heterochromatic eyes found yours, and a certain desire for reassurance chimed in the way.
« Shouto, baby— of course not! You’re perfect the way you are, I was only messing around, you know? » His desire for reassurance fades away and instead, you are met with a gleam of content as you continue :
« What I meant to say was… You’re so handsome, so out of this world… » Each word leaving your lips and connecting to his eardrums was accompanied with the fitting gestures to emphasize just a bit more the comforting undertone of your speech. It all began with a swift shift of position— you were now sitting on Shouto’s lap, a crucial position which guaranteed you the upper hand of physical exchanges.
« You’re divine, Shouto… » The longer your eyes met his, the more you were secretly convinced that he was indeed out of this world, thus, you underlined this statement by tracing an invisible line from the corner of his lips to his jawline under his intrigued facial expression. An intrigued expression, perhaps, but he was begging to hear more.
« You’re have all the qualities one could dream of, don’t you? » This rhetorical question was signed with the manifestation of the presence of your lips upon the flesh of his neck, Shouto let out a gasp he ignored he was holding and tilted his head to give you more room to play with as an answer, longing for the next lines of your tirade. Instead, the soft pressures left by the pecks were replaced with biting motions, and interchanged with sucking motions at times. This newfound balance of pleasure on Shouto’s newly bruised skin was the cause of a chain reaction— first, his lips parted as if he was gasping for oxygen, he didn’t need it, it was more like a precautious deed than a clear remedy to something he needed; then, his lids closed shut, in anticipation of the bliss which was bound to course every inch of his body; eventually, a deadly sin named gluttony got the best of him and encouraged him to let his palms wander on your derrière. A bold action quickly reprimanded by a quick slapping motions on the back of his hands.
« No touching, got it? Keep your hands to yourself and maybe, just maybe I’ll reward you. » A sentence so embedded with delicious sin which became amplified under the spell of your whispers, right against the shell of his ears. There was no vocal response on his end, only a line of chills from the back of his neck to the bottom of his spine, sure, it wasn’t vocal, but it was such a sweet way to respond to the temptation.
This comment would be stating the obvious but you had the monopoly of the game, you controlled the fate of the protagonists and bent the rules your way— some would call it cheating, you’d call it having the world at your feet. An adventurous hand traveled underneath the fabric of Shouto’s shirt and, on its journey, felt the various kinds of reliefs sculpted on his body. The rock hard sensation of his abdomen against the soft flesh of your palm was one of the sweetest contrasts. Your hand followed a vertical path— first, a journey near his pectoral muscles, and a tragic fall to his growing bulge right beneath you, you couldn’t help but bow your lips into a grin which echoed to a thousand of hidden desires and beyond while Todoroki looked at you with pleading eyes.
« Aren’t you such a good boy to me? You did as I said, baby, keep going for me, yeah? » Shouto knew that the way you would pronounce each individual word was a hint to what was bound to happen, and the precise manner you moaned « good boy » near his eardrum was just a mere indicator amongst a myriad of them that you would not give up on your iron hold any time soon. Your lips eventually met his once more in a heated exchange, the advantage of the height played in your favor to assert dominance and set the done of the secret ballet between your tongues. Meanwhile, your palm was dangerously stroking the oh so growing bulge in Shouto’s underwear— and when your tongue would twist in a clockwise direction, your hand would do the opposite and vice-versa.
Shouto could feel you through all his senses— and although his lids were shut closed, this couldn’t prevent him from picturing your frame towering over him, he would always remember everything about you, even the most trivial details anyway. The gluttony in him cursed at him and screamed to touch you, but he knew better than to fall under the spell of his temptations. If he couldn’t manifest his pleasure physically, he could still do it orally— and thus a silent melody resonated in your mouth at the contact of your tongue with his. Said melody ended in the crescendo of the volume of his uneven breaths after breaking your kiss due to the lack of oxygen.
His cheeks were crimson red, his mouth was set agape to let fresh air fill his lungs again, his eyes echoed nothing but an irresistible paradox of pleading and will to continue further, his head felt dizzy under your sweet toxins which had just penetrated his mind… He was so addicted to you.
You let a smirk grow on your face in response to the aftermath of your antics, knowing very well that this was just a way to foreshadow what was bound to happen : « You’ve been so good to me, pretty boy, so, so good. Guess who’s going to have his reward now, baby? »
He knew he was going to get his reward, but at what cost?
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gayerluke · 6 years
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this is the same aunt that’s always sharing stupid pro-israel/zionist shit on my facebook (SHE’S NOT JEWISH) & constantly putting me in this difficult situation of “how do i tell her why i don’t like this & to stop doing it without sounding like a bitch?” so i usually just delete it, she also shares like those cutesy animal videos that are actually really unsafe but i’ve given up on that battle entirely & just like them all without looking at them.
her sister is the one who doesn’t speak to me because she goaded me into a political argument that i refused to have where she accused me of not only aligning with but supporting literal homophobes, until finally i told her that this wasn’t fair to me as someone who is actually in the line of fire & affected by these things, whereas despite her belief that she is oppressed for being a democrat who chooses to live in texas, actually she is not, & even though that is a true statement i apologized sincerely & humbly for it & never got an apology or even a response back from her for saying i was voting for trump & pence, the guy who wants me to be electrocuted to death, & this was ALL because i said hillary clinton wasn’t perfect, like those were pretty much my exact words (i believe my post was “if you really think the email thing is the only bad thing hillary clinton has ever done you’re living in a fantasy world”) & then i had to PROVE that hillary wasn’t perfect bc if you’re saying hillary’s not perfect clearly that means you’re a republican, bc There Is No Other Side, so i brought up the antiblack “super criminal” shit as one example but that was FALSE bc when hillary talked about bringing black boys to heel it in fact WASN’T racist, & also BERNIE agreed even though at this point he was out of the race & irrelevant & i had not even said anything about him or indicated that i supported him, & the whole time i kept trying to agree to disagree until someone had to end it so i just told her that she needs to trust that i know what’s right for myself since out of the two of us i am the one who will actually be materially affected by the outcome of these things, but apparently pointing out that she wasn’t going to be stripped of any rights was the greatest insult of all & not only does she not speak to me but she also blocked me on facebook, because instead of working out conflict with a presumably-beloved family member like a human being, she has decided, as an adult human woman in her 50s, that the appropriate way to deal with a disagreement (which we didn’t even have!!! we voted for the same person!!!!!) is to cut off all communication with the other party like you’re a high schooler, because that’s just how little she cares about me or values me, & when another horrible nightmare comes true, & gays or jews are in the news being attacked & murdered, i doubt she ever feels bad about doing that shit to me but she’s probably secretly glad to know im hurting, bc i deserve it for whatever wrong opinion i apparently had.
so now every time her sister pulls some innocently-stupid-but-harmful shit i have to have this whole war within myself over how i can disagree without coming off as a bitch, how i can be eloquent & gracious in telling her to knock it off, how i can find language that WON’T make me sound like an angry k--- d--- but oops that’s impossible bc no matter what i say, if it’s coming out of my mouth it’s angry k--- d--- talk because that’s what i am, but we’re liberals so we will never examine our own innate homophobia & antisemitism because of course we don’t have that, so then i get stuck with constantly tone-policing myself & constantly having to stomach all these regular soul-crushing microaggressions like “i’d like to learn yiddish for fun,” “she recently became jewish,” “if you’re going to be jewish you need to know the bible,” “she wants us to use she/her pronouns but she still likes women so it’s so confusing!” (about a trans coworker, so if i like women does that make me a man?), “i am ok with homosexuals i just don’t want to see it” (oh wow pulling out an oldie-but-goodie from when i was a child that you probably have no memory of! But I Do 🙂 ps it was literally about watching a regular movie, only with gays in it which apparently makes it pornography). not to mention things about my weight that i no longer let pass, not insulting things but i pointed out that the first thing out of her mouth upon seeing me being “wow, you’ve lost weight!” is inappropriate in any situation, but particularly weird given that it was because i’d had an 8lb cyst removed. 
ANYWAY IM JUST FUCKING STRESSED bc all my Chill family members are literally dead & i have no one left & i don’t want to alienate another aunt from my life bc that’ll knock out a whole half of my remaining family which is her & her husband, but like that doesnt mean im going to allow her to just put unapproved photos of me up on the internet alongside all of my private information!!! im not!!!! & that’s not unreasonable or crazy!!!!
& somehow my mom just stays out of all of this, like she doesn’t stick up for me, she doesn’t defend me, & it’s like you’re not watching two of your sisters argue, I AM LITERALLY YOUR DAUGHTER, please dont act like you’re not with me!!!! that hurts!!!! whether you’re ashamed of raising an ugly hairy loud-mouthed (((assertive))) k--- d--- or not, you did & you have a responsibility to it, im YOUR monster & i deserve some fucking support!!!!!
& if you don’t like long posts about my stupid fucking meaningless life just unfollow me bc i am literally alone!!!! i have no one else to talk to except for this stupid fucking site full of children at 2am on a sunday
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aeirithgainsborough · 6 years
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why would you go into the anti captive prince tag if you want a fair and unbiased account on the books? most of the people in the anti tag haven't read it and are talking out of their asses about what they perceive to be the problematic elements of the book which are 90% of the time inaccurate as hell. damen (the narrator) is sold into slavery by his own brother. laurent (his love interest) hates slavery and does free him. they don't even get together until they're both free men.
ok first off im chill to talk about it further and even asked for that in the tags but honestly this just comes across as super accusatory and im not here for it. secondly, im not here to get into c/aptive prince discourse like i just dont care i havent even read the book and dont intend to. i read around about a book and came to a personal decision i didnt want to read (its only gone into the tag bc of the wording of the ask). thirdly, i go into both tags actually to get a general view. ppl who love the book and post stuff in the c/aptive prince tag are also going to be biased. really its up to me how i go about choosing a book??? i looked in both tags and decided based on what i read that it wasnt for me and i wasnt going to spend £21+ on it. someone asked me about why /i/ didnt want to read it and i stated that i wasnt an expert but these were the warnings i found for it and my reasons. also from the synopsis and both tags it reads like d/amen is sold by his brother ya but the person who buys him is l/aurent? like the description on amazon literally says l/aurent is his new master? so if i read that and make an assumption and choose not to read a book based on that bc i cant behind a ship that involves a slave and his master that’s not really my fault bc where is there any indication l/aurent hates slavery? 
under cut again bc triggers 
i also saw in the tag (not the anti one) a fan of the book trying to persuade ppl it was ok, and they mentioned in their pro post that l/aurent tries to get d/amen raped?? and also orders him to be lashed, and im sorry thats not for me!!!! whatever the reasons behind it im never going to get behind a romantic pairing that has that basis! and as i said, i found that in the normal c/aptive prince tag from a fan. im allowed to not want to read that. and if thats the info im getting from a fan of the book im going to take it at face value! - if you have anything different to say on this matter im happy to hear it and talk to you but only if the ask has a nice tone!
anyways @anon here is some more info on the books i guess. 
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Clone Wars        Brothers
I know of one of the weakest episodes the                                    weakest relation,
     I’m enthused          (No I’m not)
     Whoa,
      It’s red 
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     WHY IS IT RED??
      You had one episode      about Ven         -tress
      Is it now her       show?
        Seriously,     what happened in that       episode?
   Hold up
  [Let        me        ch-          -eck]
    Nope still is season four
    Now with an      apparent drop in           quality
   Great
    [ *Cracks open*]
 Ai-     ght
   O-h
   B-ea         ten
   Ah      no,      he was shocked which yeah     should’ve     resulted in him being unconscious
   But     ,“beaten”?
     Not the word I would’ve use     there,  
    To be         hon-est,
    Cr-ea             -tor
     Oh he exist-      ed before her          *Spell           *             So,       He’s not        exactly Franken        stein here      (Frankenstein‘s          monster        if you’re being      damn specific]        Un-less..
    Any-how-
      Sense           Him,
       Bull            shit,
        But          Okay,
      (Seriously            Dooku is just having all the vengeance today,    
         Sav-age Op            -press
        I mean everyone’s pretty       equal on energy        so       I guess an experience                    And confidence                  (He can-                    )
             *Seriously what is up with the coughing thing I know that was a something from the Og,        But it has     to mean something,
 And have forseeable        consequences
  (Aka add to the story)
   “A threat..”
   Dude you consider-ed Ven         -tress a threat last episode,
      ?
   (Like Maul was apprenticed to Si-d-ious who by all means should be higher on the chain of command than     V-en-           -tress-                -)
          (The power chain is all               screwy,)
             Though I do kind of give them points for addressing the criticism I had last episode, of grievous being assigned assignment way                         below his belt,
              Also excluding a few circumstances this is just constantly kicking with Grievous while      he’s down,
   And I’m honestly expecting a       Face- turn         any day             now
      (Like he got a glow up one episode before                it          promptly got            thrown away,            ,)             )            “ All       of us,”
       All of us         en-ablers,
    “Con-trol,”
    You can’t control       an adult human being           groomer             (Se-              ntient)                  .                A din-n                   -er
   Also why is the waitress bot                fle-e-ing
   Like wouldn’t it’s protocol dictate,         Either conferring with a customer or                Order-ing them to                       leave?
   Like why by any name       would you program your waitress bot            to panic               .                 And frigh        ten-      patrons?            .       Why           -         A-ight-           -         W-h
   Well,     that went on to long to be funny     (Having it just cut to him ordering a cheeseburger      now that would’ve been                funny,)
                Also       - the hell?
                  ?
Look nothing about anything that just happened indicated     that this guy was on a mission or         had any sort of plan other than       malician  
   You can’t show him openly participating in the      malici-an one second and then turning around and acting         intelligent     and on a      mission            .            Not without a transition     a whole lot more          Of emotion          And expla-
    Ex;
   “Where is it? You sa-”
    “Put her down now or I’ll call the           author-ities,”
      [Catch             -es               eye-             Backs              Away                -               Slow-ly                Runs into the alley/             cargo                way]                                       [Touches box-        has some kind of indicator
       [because of now-        there’s nothing there,            I have    no idea what to do with it-         Because there was       no indicator of what he’s referring to,
   Dude just touch the box and was like      ‘This must be a clue!’
    ??   [like you need to throw some sand-      or something on there-]
   I generally have not feck       what they were going for though
 [Objectivity      needs to reflect with what your chara       -cater    is saying otherwise I’m just going to assume they’re crazy]
        (Aka            you don’t need to put all the details out there           out-front                But you do need some indication.                (Again some kind of residue or                 substance on his fingers)
               Again I would have no idea what that would mean but I would have some indication that it meant something in the greater plan and I wasn’t just watching this character go  un-accountable
               .
     [Sorry but details are    im-portant]          -      ?     [So    she straight up track         ed him       right?]
   Because if I don’t see a        track-ing       chip on him. .        .        I’m        going          to be a bit        mad. .            .       ?             -          Yeah those dots are practically on top of each other so they must be in the same feck               in  din                -ner                -                  O-p.                   -      Oh back to this boring         plot          point,           .          Maybe it’s     gotten better from the      documentary, it was    . . .         ?           .        They are un-accountable that started a war and people that could and very possibly would’ve murder-    ed you at any point,
  (I’m not sure jumpiness         but generally              aggression       would be pretty well reason,              ( Actually jumpiness at the                  unaccountable’s              would be reasonable) 
           Also yeah I know her tone is still as dry as                sand paper                        -               Zero e-motion                          -               Hey still no               e-motion                 [A lower head and  
           Quick movement
           Aren’t emotions]
           Any puppet can lower                it’s head           and move quickly,
          There’s no regrets in her line there’s          no conflict. .         .           No inquisitive-ness there             what-soever-                    -             No rais.            -ing of the eyebrows or lightning of the        eyes,
      Nor lightning of the tone or          any energy,
   Do you know to tell her pupils didn’t widen or move in anyway nor did her body language changed at all
        ... or          her tone?
 [that’s how you tell it’s fe’cki’n        boring)]
     There’s no emotional consequence to this at all
    [Entertainment as a field that relies completely on empathy, on emotion, emotional stimuli
    If you don’t have that
   It’s not entertainment
  It’s an animation and logistical voice acting       how-to-course
    [not that that’s not of        value, just that             it’s not             as             advertis-ed,           Not as        promoted,          a problem]
    Again what does         any of this           mean?
                       [This is BOR-ING-                             ]                           -
    [Pretty sure      they’ve never met this        guy,]
      ?
     Why.              ?         [I know because my             amulet is pur                -ring,]               ]                    [ All said with    no emotion,                    -                    ]          -               [Hot cold hot cold      how the thing works      nobody fecking           knows-                 -               ]      [why does he look like a damn Muppet.]
      [standing out in the field.]
                [Why,]
[it just turned off five minutes ago what makes this time            so important?              ?
 Wow that had no emotion or     commitment whatsoever,]
    It’s a snake
    A sen-tient            snake,
  [ignoring any boom-er           symbolism]
  The heck kind of logistics        does that make?
   Like to make       sentient?
   It has to have the estimated amount of      accountable          energy,
       Of everyone else
   [Otherwise you’re just a cruel God]
   Like with Zila
   She had to be very         delicate
   *Em
So,how...  ?
[”I have no time for you,” * proceeds to attempt to fight them*         Constant characterization and consistency,  what?
 ?
[This is very     Stupid]
   -?
[Si-lence]
Oh, Ha Ha ha, it’s supposed to be funny because he’s a cheapskate despite that not being establishing no emotion being behind it , ha ha ha ha, so funny
            [Damn this movie]
[Revenge against selfish and entitled boomers can be funny]
  [Not in this case with no emotion]
  [Or establishment]
 [Making this unclear if it’s      kicking down at your own level]
               Feck you
            No Emotion!
   [No motivation         whatsoever!]
   Oh yeah sure they say that his thing is fine his brother       whatever, whatever
   [That’s a whole lot of telling and        a fecking an inconsistent amount of showing
        * as well as [lower] quality
  If you want to put words      and explanations over things happening     go to documentary school
   [i’m sorry I’m just a little pissed about this being called anything but observation]
     If you want to do a thing      at least make sure to do it properly!
    [I’m a fan of en-        tertainment]
    [As well as observation]
    [Seeing either           mis-labeled is a damn        shame-            ]
     [Could’ve been pretty useful,]
     [Thanks to mislabeling         it’s damn wasted time]
        [And effort                -]
         [which again           damn shame                      ,           ]
              *apologies for the excessive use of                    [the word] “damn”
               Unf-ortunately I don’t have anything else to say          because there’s nothing much engaging,               happening on screen,
          [You know this could’ve been an honestly heartwarming message about        someone who’s been treated to tox behavior by their peers and        cre-ators, [.      em-bittered to the world ]     struggling to find value in themselves,            On a mission by said           pro-genitors,               And a sandstorm-             Cutting com-        munication,               To said          tox influences,
      Except for               one        (Semi)
  Unfortunately due to the lack of commitment      that didn’t happen,
 The scenes with his communication gets cut is     dry and tasteless, as well as         (emotionless)              ,         The    set up is non-existence       to poor taste.              -       And-
   [Well I have no interest in his goals so this action scene is       pretty pointless] -
           [Nor does this have any tension because these guys are Junk     -ers, We’ve seen Savage throw round heavier foes,  and we have no idea anything ~ about - this guy ~ to give this any tension -  no psy-chological weak      -ness or       dis        -like~           -                  [You’ve turned a concept that could be a less emotionally implausible       Franken      -stein,           Into           dry-wall]
    With no emotional         in-vestment
  [You know what would’ve been      fun-         [Done in        writer’s tense;
    If the snake and him had started to form a       bond; and if the snake had given him some kind of order like, don’t attack those people;
    Something           that goes against everything that he’s been taught;
     As well as the concept of people responding in           re-tribution;
     If he does;   maybe the snakes showing some          com-      passion,
      Since he knows what it’s like to be re-latively       helpless-
      Or just any sort of      em-otion-
       Because there is just nothing there~            ~No humanity there-
             No humanity-
              In this scene~
               Not even inhumanity
                [The evils in inhumanity
                  - Toxic                            humanity-
                       Or any                              - Self                          awareness-
                     What-so-ever
                     Any way
                     The story-
                     Continues to                    grate-
                    On my nerves-
                        Til the end-
                 [Oh look it’s fan-favorite; Maul
He’s     [Un-accountable-]
If only you had hadn’t establish- ed everyone else is     un- emotional      puppets
    And any outliers       as anomalies-
    There     might’ve been someone to bounce off of
     And give us a scale for how       “off         this is,
    As it stands ‘gruff’         is now a per-          sonality-                  -             And people randomly attacking and yelling things at each other is a pretty much norm,
       Great job taking all the emot-ion out      of your supposed to be      emot-ionally impactful moment
     .       *Re-veal
    [Good time to contrast any sort of feelings towards         -family-
        - it’s                 - wasted-                        -                       You know in the most emotionally charged                            reveal you wouldn’t think they’d want to hide the                    eyes-                         the most emotional part of the body-
                       [then again you wouldn’t be these writers-]
               NOTHING!
              [Was gained]
Well.
 What an awfully    cho-reographed         (Put to-gether)    (Coordinate)          Emotionless           dull                 And                un-entertaining               Mis- labeled            Observational                  Mess,    (With no harsh                      regards)                 (I pity the animation team                      that had their efforts so                         poorly directed.                         (Stitch-ed together).                          (Used)
                      (Po-orly.                          Exposé                      (Ex-ecute)
      Turning
         What could’ve been an emotionally tense and          F-ascinating story;
            About a person who’s been subjected to talk with behavior since childhood and even in a supposed partnership (in one’s supposed Gen) being sent on a quest, by one of said person (s)
             To find their older brother Gen(eration);
              Who has since given into enabling
               Getting cut off by a sand storm
              F(inding a less tox influence
                 -That seems to show some interest for his well-being,
                  The communications refusing to work after the sandstorm leading to the implication             that the toxic individual abandon him
             The emotional res-                 ponse-
            Getting re-abandoned by the less                tox individual-
            Encountering the older           tox enabling gen            -eration;
           Who not only physically assa              -ults him upon meeting
            But refuses to            ac-cept            That                   (Seeing as how                  Savage is 22                    (And an adult)                    It means he’s       fail-ed and become the very thing he’s                grown to                  dis-like,
                 And insist on staying focused on his      ven-   geance
        (Against one        group of enablers).               )
 (Expressing similar disposition to his abusers)
  (And attempting       to return to them;
    Having        gone       through         a world      of nothing        but        cruelty)
             Into;
      Cardboard cut outs enacting an           emotion         -ally           dead            story,-
         (With no proper         set up)
      [Not a yank - at the animation team.-  -Just the dead soul        -less nature of everything,
       Involved.]
 With      no self-awareness,
 About what a               dry-
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