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roxannepolice · 6 years

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Rocky path of a heroine in a galaxy far far away

Do you have those moments when you have some sort of sensation that you can’t really put your finger on and it keeps nagging at you with its unconceptuability until one day you discover a word that expresses exactly what you’ve been feeling? Like finally finding out the wonder of the word Weltschmerz which suddenly makes your world so much more understandable?

Well, today I had this experience regarding the sequel trilogy when I read this I won’t exactly say great but being definitely a good introduction to the heroine’s journey article and in it saw the word aridity. Oh, yes, isn’t that the word which suits best what it feels like to imagine epix consisting of Rey the maiden of light vanquishing evil Renperor with some straightforward bigger scale pewpewpew in the background. Arid. Infertile. Unproductive. Bringing nothing new into the overall saga. Actually sounding as if it was here only to let the creators shake off the Skywalkers once and for all. Waste of a good heroine.

And aridity is exactly the word used in the article to descibe what for so many is the only obvious way for epix to go. In it are presented following stages of a heroine’s journey, as based on Maureen Murdock’s Woman’s Quest for Wholeness (they are all better descibed in the article, here I give only the desciptions I find most important to the argument):

HEROINE SEPARATES FROM THE FEMININE

IDENTIFICATION WITH THE MASCULINE AND GATHERING OF ALLIES

ROAD OR TRIALS AND MEETING OGRES AND DRAGONS

EXPERIENCING THE BOON OF SUCCESS by overcoming the obstacles. This would typically be where the hero’s or “shero’s” (a female protagonist on a hero’s journey) tale ends

HEROINE AWAKENS TO FEELINGS OF SPIRITUAL ARIDITY / DEATH because the new way of life is too limited. Success in this new way of life is either temporary, illusory, shallow, or requires a betrayal of self over time

INITIATION AND DESCENT TO THE GODDESS. The heroine faces a crisis of some sort in which the new way is insufficient and falls into despair. All of her “masculine” strategies have failed her

HEROINE URGENTLY YEARNS TO RECONNECT WITH THE FEMININE

HEROINE HEALS THE MOTHER/ DAUGHTER SPLIT

HEROINE HEALS THE WOUNDED MASCULINE WITHIN

HEROINE INTEGRATES THE MASCULINE AND FEMININE to face the world or future with a new understanding of herself and the world/life. Heroine sees through binaries and can interact with a complex world that includes her but is larger than her personal lifetime or geographical/cultural milie

So, this peaked my interest, considering how only yesterday I was venting out about how I feel there’s something wrong about this trilogy’s doubtlessness, how it doesn’t fit in with the overall symphony. But the prequels were a tragedy, plain and simple, whereas the originals were a hero’s journey. I won’t put here all of Campbell’s hero’s journey stages but basically the hero has more doubts at the beginning (clue in Luke’s I’ll try and You ask the impossibe), then has an apex (facing Palpatine and leading to Anakin’s salvation), followed by overconfidence, “refusal to give up his divinity” (basically creeping up on your nephew at night, reading his mind and igniting a lightsaber because you’re Luke Skywalker) and only recovering peace and purpose when that has been defeated (with an outside help, no less). Tu juxtapose, a heroine has a moment of overconfidence coinciding with what would have been an apex in a hero’s journey, followed by realisation of aridity of her hitherto path and a crisis, leading to healing and reintegration.

What I think is the general belief of the audience - definitely ant*s, but I think also the vast majority who aren’t really against “anything” but just can’t see how “that” could be and a good deal of reylos who read Rey as patiently waiting for her prince to disenchant himself - but more importantly, of Rey herself, is that she has reached her apex, her inner journey is finished, she is now the goddess she was meant to be, saviour of the Resistance and the last Jedi.

And that would be true. If hers was a (s)hero’s journey.

Having the Beast on a leash

There are many great edits paralleling Ben at the end of TLJ with Beast after letting Belle leave the castle, which appears to be point 4 of heroine’s journey. While the separation is important here, the above notion that this stage parallels hero’s apex had me reconsider what is the must, the essence of what happens here. It may sound weird, but I think this is the point where the Beauty “defeats” the Beast, the moment where the power imbalance shifts, where he does what she asks - or is on his knees before her. I think this “defeating” element is the best visible in one of the simplest renditions of BatB, legend of st. Martha and dragon Tarasque that I have a personal sentiment for because I used to resent my first name until I saw a picture of my namesake with a freaking dragon on a leash. There it is heavily underlined that she manages to tame, place in her - or, at least, God’s through her, it is a christian legend - power the beast most valiant heroes couldn’t defeat.

Now, Rey has in fact been in position of power over Kylo Ben twice already in the story - first on Star Killer Base and the second time when she woke up first in the Throne Room - and on both occasions didn’t use that power to finish him. Which is exactly what heroes do in this story but I’ll elaborate on that below. But what is worth noting is that the resident Beast has - or at least hopefully has - a subjective power shift when on his knees on Crait. Whatever he splurted out minutes ago, he now realises he won’t be able to do. Even if he doesn’t understand, he remotely feels his disempowerment.

Journeys and trope subvertion or why serious reylo duel is actually possible

The fact that the crisis in the heroine’s journey comes after her heroic apex is conceptual expression of the shivers I get whenever I hear Kylo Ben say when the time comes, Rey’ll be the one to turn. Now, it’s tempting to assume he was overconfident and Rey overcame every obstacle but that’s turning a blind eye to the fact that heroine’s crisis is yet to come. As stated, Rey herself thinks she overcame every obstacle but how naive this assessment of facts was is probably best expressed in the smut hut, when she - beautiful as it was - tells Ben it’s not too late for him to turn. Just like Han, she underestimates years of manipulation he’s been through. She’s just been through what should be a sort of nadir for her so if she can go on, he’ll have no problem returning to the light, right? Note, this is something she just believes in, she says that before the force vision.

But again, did she have a nadir? Did she have a moment which challenged all of her previous beliefs the way Luke fidning out Vader is his father did? It’s extremely important Luke finds out in ESB something new whereas Rey is faced with a truth she has been denying. We don’t know how Luke dealt with his vision in the tree on Dagobah, but we know how he reacted to its realisation in action.

Of course, regardless of how hysterical this was, he still did the right thing and epically refused. But he’s shown to accept the fact that Vader is his father and it affects all of his future actions leading to his heroic climax I only later realised how this sounds but I won’t change it.

So, the cave scene. There are quite a few interpretations of what exactly this scene meant. Some intrerpret it as Rey finding out the dark side will give her no answers - which makes little sense as an element of her journey as juxtaposed with Luke on Dagobah. If, however, the cave did give her some answers, either telling her to stop giving f*cks about her parents, making a symbolical expression of their nobodiness or hinting at her future - again, she denies them. When Kylo Ben has her finally face the truth, she seems to take it pretty well - which is good but isn’t good in a heroine’s journey. A journey isn’t from point A to point A, there has to be a percepetion change, the new unerstanding of world/life/self. I bring back the heroine faces a crisis of some sort in which the new (post-apex) way is insufficient and falls into despair. All of her “masculine” strategies have failed her.

Now, I would prefer to detach Rey’s journey from masculine-feminine categories, mainly because it frustrates me that a woman’s journey should be considered in terms of relative gender ideas rather than more absolute ones. Call it a yin and yang and it definitely has a lot to do with light and dark side. Now, as far Rey’s separation from whatever is concerned, I’m a bit uncertain what to think. Can it be said that TFA and TLJ are about Rey separating herself from her scavenger personality and embracing the jedi knight/resistance saviour one? Which would mean that she’ll later have to reembrace while reinterpreting her tendency to “salvage broken renperors things”? Still, this interpretation is hardly expressed in the movies. Overall, it does make sense, as in TLJ her outward motivation is that of the newly taken title of resident force sensitive on a quest to get Luke Skywalker to save the galaxy the way Reistance knows it’s to be saved.

Heroines tend to be more dissonant than heroes, though I’d argue it’s mainly due to the fact that their stories tend to be more introspective, character driven, allowing more nuance in their attitudes than the latter, more action oriented (and when I say tend to, I mean tend to, not that it’s a rule). It’s not an inherent trope in heroine’s journey or female literature, though it is bound to the fact that a hero will have his doubts expressed and refuted in the earlier parts of his story. A heroine can feel one way but to the outer world and more importanty, her own consciousness, she’ll frame her motivations in a way more acceptable in the 2-4 stages of her path. So, Christine Daae isn’t fascinated by the mysterious man with a disturbingly sexy voice, she’s taking music lessons. Belle is in Beast’s castle so that her father can be free. Rey only hopes that Ben can be turned because that’s how Luke saved Darth Vader and the galaxy (notice - she aspires to acting like the resident hero, and Luke in the novel and comic repeatedly expresses his fear of how much Rey - a heroine - wants to be him - a hero not that he’s thinking in those latter terms, they’re just deeper implications of structures). Needless to say, Christine wouldn’t be enthusiastic about music lessons with anyone else, Belle starts enjoying her “captivity” without noticing when and Rey has very personal interests in Ben’s brightly illuminated pecs future.

The crucial mistake that’s so easy to commit while analysing a heroine’s journey is to assume she has all figured out by the stage 4. Again, she would have - if she was a hero. A hero let go from his captor’s castle has triumphed, he has nothing to look back to. A heroine will realise - though doesn’t really realise in the moment she’s leaving, usually due to the fact that she has more urgent matters like a sick father or trapped resistance to attend to - that she’s left her heart there. Matters become even more complicated if she appears to have overcome her ultimate trial before leaving that castle. But again - was that an ultimate trial for her? Was it an actual dilemma in which both choices are equally bad or equally good? No, it was a choice between selfishness and altruism, which is a no brainer for a selfless person, regardless of innocent manipulation used. This can suffice as an auspicious switch for a hitherto morally inferior character, but not the morally superior journeying hero/ine. For the latter, real challenge is a choice between altruism and altruism, marry me and then I’ll save your friends, kill your father and become the hero fanbase half thinks Luke is, slay one person to save thousands. Again, Rey has already faced this last dilemma twice - but never time with immediate pressure of highest stakes. But in the end, it appears the only thing that was challenged in TLJ, prior to the apex of her hero’s path, was her hope for Kylo Ben. Her apparent nadir followed by a climb up is her facing the results of her naive hope in the Throne Room and learning to never do that again, overcoming the flaw of overgenerosity.

Yet if a heroine is to progress, she has to stop being a hero. And Rey's symbolic nadir was the cave, only the actual crisis and climb are yet to come. And Rey hasn't been overgenerous towards Ben, her going to him wasn't out of selfless generosity alone.

So, the three matters to adress while thinking about Rey’s journey in epix are

will her crisis come?

how stubborn will she be about her “new path”?

will heroine’s journey be subverted?

As far as point 1 is concerned - well, if they are doing a heroine’s journey then yes, she’ll have some crisis of her beliefs. Lack thereof is basically the “aridness” viewers feel thinking of lack of some tension within the resistance. The question is, how deep will it be. It could simply be a sort of Amidalaesque “what if the republic has become the very evil we promised to fight?”. The problem is, Rey is quite capable of denial. She’s patient, she can clench her teeth and continue doing what’s right, which is a great quality, most of the time. But when a crisis does come, it will be one of lifelong proportions. The point is, she had no time to properly face her axis mundi having been overthrown and I’m not really sure she wants to face it. And in the end, I don’t think the audience wants her to face it. And yet face it she must for real progress to come.

How does a reylo duel fit into this whole rambling? Well, basically it’s the result of wondering how strong a factor will it take for Rey’s crisis of beliefs to come. Would a person who waited for 15 years for people she knew to have sold her avidly oppose the galactic heroes apparent because of their basic aridity? Or would it take a deeper denial of self over time? Again, I’m considering an actual dilemma situation, right choice vs. right choice, high stakes and immediate action. So... yeah. If right circumstances appear at the right point in Rey’s journey a serious reylo duel, at least on Rey’s part, is a very serious possibility.

Now, it should be argued that dragon slaying is a hero’s job and Rey’s a heroine. But there are two “buts”: first of all, if the duel should happen before the crisis, trigger it actually, then Rey would still be in her “hero stage”. Secondly, and that’s probably the most interesting part, the path has to be subverted. Don’t forget, this IS what happened with Luke, the resident journeying hero of originals. As so many viewers refuse to understand but has been true since the 80s, Luke’s heroic climax lies in throwing away the lightsaber, in refusing to slay the dragon or even dragon’s evil wizard overlord, against common sense, mentors’ advice and contrary to what he’s been doing for two episodes, one might add. If the hero’s journey is made peaceful, it appears symmetrical for the heroine’s to become aggressive, or at least have an aggressive moment. Because obviously, Luke’s peaceful action still led to hero’s finale where the dragon killed the overlord and then himself burned to release the hero’s boon princess daddy. In the same manner, heroine’s eventual healing and integrating could come despite - or even because of - an aggressive action.

What can poor Beast do ‘xcept to sing for rock’n’roll band?

There’s yet another point to be considered while discussing a heroine’s journey in the form of BatB theme - the Beast’s seperate progress. Now, the question of what will renperor be like is one of the most frequent in the fandom and I dare say JJ will manage to surprise most of us anyway. Personally, I sorta stan a not so bad renperor but that’s more of Henry Fonda in 12 angry men attitude: everyone is sure he’s guilty but I’m not so I’ll say he’s not guilty and wait to be persuaded.

However, there is an argument to be made against a really evil renperor based on BatB theme and heroine’s journey - the fact that her post-hero’s apex progress has to involve rejection of her chosen path’s aridity. On a psychological level it takes more complex forms, but in a space opera it’s likelier to be outward. I’m not exactly saying that it’s even most remotely probable that Rey would defect to FO though if that happens I will open a fortune telling business but her eventual life with Ben cannot be as or even more arid than as... ugh... next republic’s (talk about infertility?) jedi hero, vide in prison or exile. Nope, there’s healing and reintegration for her in store, not keeping her two paths separated.

I guess we all agree that if there’s happily ever after but for reylo, it will be because renperor will screw up, not because resistance will be mean. The most basic story would have Ben be depressed and locked up in his tower, but the simultaneously good and bad news is, it’s not an unalterable must. The Beast can f*ck up the story - to his own and Beauty’s detriment and there’s little the latter can do about it. Vide: Phantom of the Opera, focusing on the book. I’m not bringing this up to conjure any what ifs or legitimize and delegitimize ships, but to analyse a BatB version written to end in tragedy. The point is, Erik does in no way alter his behaviour because of Christine after the first time he lets her go. He continues to strangle opera employees and dropping chandeliers when they’re apart - I’m absolutely sure evil renperor would be force dropping chandeliers - and in the end becomes a completely arid option for Christine, even if she does feel compassion for him and has her sexual awakening because of him. It makes an unsatisfying story and leaves Christine an unfulfilled heroine, yet that’s because her “hero” path was still less arid than the continuation of heroine’s, and only on a meta level because of fin de siecle morals.

Now, the good news is that the above negative example shows passivity isn’t Beast’s obligatory narrative choice, where there’s down, there’s up. I’m far from some sort of dream galaxy saviour visions, but tbh I haven’t been bi*ching for three paragraphs about narrative logic saying epix is to bring moral challenges to pronounce that no morals will be challenged.

Morality that isn't challenged isn't a living messy inner process, only an externalized frozen set of rules called ethics - which can be auxillary in solving uncertain difficult moral dilemmas, but cannot substitute morality. Some change in the Star Wars morals is due and considering the frozen ethics is good rebels-evil empires-one redeemable character, some element has to go, qualitatively change or be added, considering the frozen ethics prequels gave originals was only good republic-evil empire.

So, end of the day, what is to be pronounced that will happen in epix? As always, it’s all speculation that’s a fun way to employ creative powers. TBH, I really think that JJ will surprise almost everyone.

#rey #rey of jakku #reylo #heroine's journey #star wars #episode ix speculation #i'm an angsty drama queeeeeen and that's the bottom line of all my elaborate speculation #ben solo #kylo ren #bendemtpion

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nmddcleo-blog · 4 years

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Final Project - RamRegistration

Prototype: RamRegistration - a site for Fordham students to look for classes and then register every semester

https://www.figma.com/file/jJe45tswJxL8vA9XUB5CX7/Untitled?node-id=0%3A1

Problem:

State of the Problem

Right now, Fordham has two different systems that students must use when planning and registering for classes. The first program is DegreeWorks, which shows students which classes they have taken, the classes they are in the process of taking, and the classes they still have to take. This program also allows them to see how many seats are left in the class sections they may want to take the following semester. The second program is Banner, which is split up in the following sections: “Plan Ahead,” “Browse Classes,” and “Register for Classes.” The “Plan Ahead” feature allows students to browse classes by department, course number, attribute, etc. and then add the class they want to their planned schedule. The “Browse Classes” feature allows students to look for classes in the same way that the “Plan Ahead” feature, except students can also narrow down by campus. Despite the fact that searching by campus can be very helpful in narrowing down options (so that students are not looking at 20 pages worth of classes), this feature’s downfall is that students cannot add a class to their plan once they have found one that they like; to do that, they would have to go back to the “Plan Ahead” section of Banner. Finally, the “Register for Classes” feature allows students to submit their pre-created plans on registration day so that they don’t have to face the struggle of looking for classes on that day. The wide array of places that students have to look when they are planning and registering for classes can make the whole process very dizzying and irritating.

How does this design target the problem?

Through this prototype, I have tried to solve the problems listed above. I asked myself, “how can I create program that incorporates the best and leaves out the worst of Banner and DegreeWorks in a way that makes the program easier for students to use?” As a result, I created a program that is called “RamRegistration,” in which I work to make an easy-to-use combination of the best of what Banner and DegreeWorks have to offer, eliminating the excess steps that students have to take when planning and registering for classes.

Data Collection:

How I got the data

Most of my knowledge and experience came from having to use both Banner and DegreeWorks over several semesters as a Fordham student. Having to have different tabs open in different programs has led to my computer shutting down, all the tabs closing, me losing my place on the programs and having to start all over again, etc. I found myself constantly wishing that all the information I need and all the steps I had to take were in one place so that I wouldn’t get confused or annoyed with how many tabs were open at any given time.

However, I did not inly want my experiences and opinions incorporated in the prototype design. So, I collected more data through a survey on SurveyMonkey that was sent out to the rest of the class. All in all, an average of 10-15 people answered the survey.

The following are the results of the “Yes or No” questions:

The following are the responses to the question, “What do you wish was different about Banner?”:

- “That it wasn’t so slow during registration”

- “Telling you how many seats are left in each class. Not freezing/glitching when registering.”

- “Run time when it comes to registration”

- “I wish it had the seats left on there”

- “I wish they removed unavailable courses”

The following are response the responses to the question, “What do you wish was different about DegreeWorks?”:

- “I wish I can still check how many seats are in the class even if the core/major is already fulfilled”

- “That I can still check the classes for the requirements I have already met. Also, I wish it only show me the classes that are offered in the following semester, not all the classes under the requirement even if it is not offered (eyes too hurtful to scroll down all those useless info)”

- “I wish someone had taught me how to use it literally even one time like I only just figured out how to use the what if option to see other classes outside of my major”

- “I wish it was easier to read with information about the future course possibilities”

How I used the data

According to the data, all the students who responded use both DegreeWorks and Banner when planning for registration, and over 50% of them had trouble learning how to use DegreeWorks. My data collection also led me to conclude that DegreeWorks is good for finding out which classes you have to take, what the course numbers are for those classes, and how many seats re left in the class. So, I decided that these are elements of DegreeWorks that I wanted to keep in my prototype.

The data also led me to the conclusion that Banner is good for searching for classes, learning which professors teach those classes, and then creating a pre-planned schedule to submit on registration day. Therefore, as students seemed to like these aspects of Banner, I decided I wanted to keep them in my prototype.

Lastly, my data collection showed that almost roughly 94% of the students who responded to my survey find it irritating/confusing when classes are listed on DegreeWorks and Banner when they are not available to take the following semester. Hence, I found it integral to remove the parts of Banner and DegreeWorks that show classes that are not offered by the University the following semester.

RamRegistration

I tried to create a program, RamRegistration, that kept all the good parts and removed all the bad parts of Banner and DegreeWorks. My program allows students to narrow down their search by campus, time and day that class is offered, and semester. RamRegistration only shows the classes that students have yet to complete under their requirements (and only the classes actually being offered the following semester are displayed when the student clicks on a certain course).

I also decided that I would exclude some of the information that students find on DegreeWorks: FIDN, Major, Minor, Concentration, Credits. Instead, I would put these under a separate page in myfordham - something like a student profile that shows all this information. These pages would be linked through myfordham so that the student’s information is transferable for RamRegistration’s algorithm, but will not show up on RamRegistration (the information is not particularly pressing when it comes to actually registering).

Furthermore, Ram Registration shows recommended classes based on your requirements and current plan. This way, when registration day comes along and a student doesn’t get into a class they wanted, they have options from this “Recommended Classes” section; they don’t have to actually search department and course number to find a class they might be able to take.

As for the “Plan” portion of RamRegistration, I decide to reduce the number of plans to one instead of three. I normally tend to use the three plans just to have classes as backup. However, I did not believe that the backup options are no longer necessary since the “Recommended Classes” option exists (I would be willing to revisit this concept in a new iteration, though).

I have also added a section to search for classes that are not a part of the student’s requirements. The student can search based on department, course number, and/or attribute, and only the classes that are actually offered the following semester will show up as options to add to their plan.

Lastly, I am assuming that the smaller volume of data on RamRegistration will reduce the lag that students face while registering. The extra classes that are not really being offered and the ones that do not pertain to the students’ needs are either eliminated by my prototype or by their filters at the homepage of RamRegistration. It is my intention that the site no longer crashes as a result of registration day.

Universal Principles:

I tried to use as many of the C.R.A.P. Principles as possible when creating this prototype. Below are my explanations of each

Contrast

I tried to stick to the colors that Fordham typically uses in an effort to stay true to the spirit of the University. The banner across the top of each page is maroon and the text is white. The background of the page is white with black text and any other accents are grey. The text headers are maroon. Additionally, all the text is consistent in size, with the headers being a little larger than the rest of the text/information on the page.

Repetition

As aforementioned, the entire prototype is based around four main colors - maroon, white, black, and grey - to pay tribute to the school colors. There is also a consistent font used called “Gupter.” I decided to use the same font the entire time to emphasize a sense of order in the design. Also, at the top of each page is a maroon banner with the word “RamRegistration”; this is done in an effort to create a consistency within the program so the students know the application.

Alignment

Throughout this prototype, I did my best to use edge alignment to create more visually appealing web page for the students to look at when using RamRegistration. Incorporating alignment throughout the prototype was important because if the program isn’t organized then the registration process isn’t either. Right now, the students suffer through the registration process because Banner and DegreeWorks are poorly designed. It was my intention to make RamRegistration as clean and concise as I could.

Proximity

I worked to effectively space every piece of text in the prototype so that it has both visual appeal and good translation of information. I grouped all the information that was relevant to each other together. For instance, all the incomplete requirements are together at the top left of the page and the recommended classes are together right underneath. Then, I placed all the information on each page that goes more in-depth into the class offerings together.

First Iteration and Prototype:

Below is the first draft of my prototype:

Originally, I was going to include all the classes that students have taken, are in the process of taking, or have yet to take. However, during my feedback session, a classmate of mine suggested that I only include the classes that the students still have to take; otherwise, there is too much unnecessary information clogging up the page.

After the feedback session, I also added a “Recommended Classes” section and a place to search for classes that are not part of the students’ requirements. I believe that these are two of the most important sections of my prototype because they give students more options without having to leave the webpage they are looking at.

I also decided to add a specific section where students can narrow down by campus, time, day, and semester: that way, they will only get the results for the classes they actually want. A big problem with Banner and DegreeWorks now is that there is an excessive amount of unnecessary information that confuses the entire registration process: classes that are not actually being offered the following semester, classes at a campus that the student does not want to be at, etc.

Lastly, a classmate of mine suggested that I include a button where students can submit their plans right on the same webpage. I decide to include this piece of feedback because it makes sense that students can submit their plan on the same page that they create their plan. The whole point of creating RamRegistration was to make a program where students have everything they need to create a plan and register all in one place. Hopefully, RamRegistration is what the students at Fordham have been waiting for.

#final project #prototype #ramregistration

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