The Brightest Stars

this is the second post for my short story  The Brightest Stars, as always constructive criticism is welcome. Happy Reading : )

Kate had decided that she was not wasting any time or tears on Allison. If she was going to be a cheating bitch Kate was not about to stop her. Her only problem now, was that she didn’t have a partner for The Games. Now this might not be a big deal to most people, but to Kate The Games were everything. She had been watching them since before she could remember, and now, at 21 she was finally able to participate and she was not about to let Allison ruin this for her; she would find a partner. She would find someone and they were going to enjoy it whether they wanted to or not.

The Brightest Stars

this is the first post for my short story The Brightest Stars It is badly written and terribly cringy. I’m writing this because it makes me happy. if you don’t like it, don’t read it. All CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is welcome

As she was walking to work Elisabeth was thinking about how she couldn’t stand The Games. They were hosted every year and they lasted for two weeks, clogging up the city the whole time. The Games were a series of trials hosted every year in New York. Central Park was closed off all May in order for them to prepare. People from all over the country and even sometimes international contestants would come in to participate. As she was passing them she was jolted out of her thoughts by someone grabbing her arm and pulling her into the roaring crowd which was quite possibly the last place she wanted to be right then. As she turned to tell off whoever had the nerve to grab her, she was interrupted by her captor yelling over the crowd. “Listen up, I'm Kate and you’re my partner whether you like it or not.” she said something else but Elisabeth had stopped listening, she was too preoccupied with the girl. She was short, with flaming red hair falling out of a bun, and though she didn’t know why, Elisabeth didn’t think she could tell her no.

Anyone who’s found this accursed blog, blessed be your souls. this is probably some of the worst writing you will ever encounter. there will be fanfiction and a whole lot of gay shit. If you’re still here and are actually interested: first off, why and second, all constructive criticism is welcome