hhhhh i can’t wait for summer i’ll stay up all night writing w/o consequences like being tired

raise your hand if you’re feral over Odysseus shouting, “WHO!” when the prophet says he sees Penelope with a man who is haunting

a man with a trail of bodies

Wait for it

Jorge is an angry owl!

ODYSSEUS SCREAMING “WHO?” BUT IT'S HIM. THE HAUNTED MAN WITH A TRAIL OF BODIES STANDING BESIDES HIS WIFE IS HIM.

The bit after Anticlea when ALL I HEAR ARE SCREAMS goes so loud is just so asjdkdkd!!

Also POLITES MY BABY YES ITS AN AMAZING LIFE BUT ODY IS STILL GONNA BE A MONSTER :(

The whole of No Longer You is so swoopy do u know what I mean? Like the music is swoopy up and down kinda?? I LOVE it!!!

"Odysseus when you come home, I'll be waiting. Even if you're the last thing I see, I'll be waiting."

"I'm right here, Mom. Can't you see I'm waiting? ...I took too long."

Jay, come here a second. I would like to have a word about why I'm silently bawling my eyes out at 1am because of Anticlea saying she will always love her son whom she died waiting for.

started with “i keep thinking about the infant from that night”

ended with “and if i gotta drop another infant from a wall / in an instant so we don’t die / then i’ll become the monster”

“I took too long…”

Jay you will be sent my therapy bills I hope you know that

“our teeth and ambitions are bared” is a zeugma

and it’s a zeugma where one of the words is literal and one is metaphorical which is the BEST KIND

i hate it when i cant even write a poem about something because its too obvious. like in the airbnb i was at i guess it used to be a kids room cause you could see the imprint of one little glow in the dark star that had been missed and painted over in landlord white. like that's a poem already what's the point