#the onryō of osaka
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The Synopsis!
Demo: 136k words, updated January 31st 2024.
"All aboard the train"
"The next station is Yomi"
"Death is aboard"
As a vigilante in Japan, you work with your Guy-In-The-Chair, Kage to take down the Yakuza family which you have sworn vengeance upon - The Busujima Family. You board the Shinkansen going from Tokyo to Osaka in an effort to assassinate Kaito Busujima, the son of the Family's Kumicho. All goes wrong, however, when you are sadly killed.
Disembarking the train of life, you board the train of death, and intent on reaching the end of the line, you become an Onryō, a spirit with a single purpose - Vengeance.
In Yomi, the land of the dead, Izanami-no-mikoto takes pity on you, and allows you the use of a special power - the power to rewind time upon your own death. Using this power, you form a group of enigmatic and ragtag vigilantes, in a race against the clock to take down the Busujima family once and for all, and save Osaka from a mounting threat.
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Other Characters:
Play the demo here:
Side Stories:
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Random idea for an IF that popped into my head
I don't know if I've ever talked about this but my mind tends to wander. While working on Onryō, my mind got distracted as usual. And I ended up coming up with this Idea for an IF that I quite love. Of course, Onryō is my main focus, and I would want to finish that first before seriously beginning work on this, but I just wanted to ensure the idea was out there and to see what people thought.
(Please note, this is all subject to change. I still haven't worked out all the details, but the core idea is set.)
18+ due to violence, sexual implications, and other themes that may be triggering.
This idea stemmed from me wanting to combine my two favourite genres: Superpowers and Sci-Fi, so here it is:
Working title: Child of Sin
Your father is the Galaxy's most infamous supervillain. He is responsible for many incidents on planets across the Galaxy. You are the youngest child of 4, and while your father does love you dearly, the thing is, he is a supervillain. So naturally, you are expected to be a pawn in his plans.
The first half of the game will involve you accompanying your siblings on expeditions to various planets to train your powers (your powers will be able to be selected from a list of three, of which your Father has them all), and to just generally sow chaos.
Saying that, here are the characters:
Earl Astatine: Patron of the GAFEE (Galactic Alliance For Evil Enthusiasts.)
Your Father, Earl Astatine (real name unknown.) Is the most infamous and powerful supervillain in the galaxy. He is famously hot-headed, yet can back up his words with his immense combat skill. Despite his short temper, he is highly intelligent, and the plans he cooks up have brought many a planet to it's knees. He has the powers of Telepathy, Pyrokinesis, and Telekinesis.
Rose: The gentle and loving oldest sister with thorns.
Your oldest sister, Rose. She inherited telepathy from your father. She is the one who took care of you as you grew up, and as a result is the closest to you. But she treats you like a baby in need of protecting. It's up to you whether you prove her right or wrong.
Despite her gentle nature, when matters do not concern her siblings, she is incredibly cold and calculating. She frequently speaks in metaphors, and sometimes acts as tactical advisor to the GAFEE. However, she is is still skilled with an energy blade. If anyone dares threaten her siblings, especially her beloved youngest sibling, their blood will run in the streets.
Gabriel: The second oldest. An angel of blood and love.
Your only brother, Gabriel. He inherited telekinesis from your father. Backdoor deals, political assassinations, one-night-stands. Gabriel is a diplomat at heart, and is perhaps more ruthless with his words than his powers. On any one occasion, a crowd of love-struck men and women can be seen following after him, proclaiming that he told them "You're the only one for me, sweetheart!". (He told that to all of them.)
But he is no stranger to getting his hands bloody when the situation calls for it. If a backdoor political deal goes wrong or out of his favour, the next day the police might just discover a body crushed by intense force. He is fond of his youngest sibling, but mostly lets Rose coddle you.
Carina: The third oldest. The flame warrior with a heart of fire.
Your second sister, Carina. If there was one of your siblings who inherited your Father's arrogance and hot-headedness, it is most definitely Carina. Combine this with the fact that she inherited his Pyrokinesis, and you have a recipe for destruction the likes of which most planets have never seen.
Along with her axe forged from a dying star, she is without a doubt the strongest fighter of your siblings. Unfortunately, her temper often gets her into arguments with your elder siblings, though she does try and hold back against you. But she is content to let your siblings and father make the plans, so long as she gets to burn something.
I am not sure if I will add romance options at this point, as I want the IF to be a sort of slice-of-life focusing on relationships between siblings in a situation such as the one I have presented, but it is not off the table.
Along the way, you will be able to choose which sibling you are closest to, if you dislike them, etc. You will also be able to decide whether you want to betray your father, or work wholeheartedly with him. Depending on your relationships with your siblings, you might be able to convince them to join you if you choose the former option.
The final half of the game will involve your Father's quote on quote, biggest plan to date, and this is where you will have your right of passage as an official member of the GAFEE. Betray, or serve. What is more important, Family, or Obedience?
I hope you like this idea as much as I do!
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Opening Character Art Commission
(2-3 slot available/ 2 weeks - a Month done/ depending on the complexity
Hello Everyone… first of all nice to meet you guys. you could called me Sen, I'm known as the artist for Totem Force, Unearth Your Gays, and The Onryō of Osaka.
i've been taking hiatus on digital drawing for years, the last time i did some art was in 2021, the reason for it was something im not comfortable enough to disclose in a lot of detail (im sorry) short summary of some of them (beside the covid case) are these :
in 2019 ive been living alone, which makes me have more time to work on art
but i have to come back to my parents house at the start of 2020 to take care of them and my lil sister which taking more of my daily life time
since my parents quite old i have to fully take care of the house chores and such like taking care of my lil sister education, managing the administration file and such when she have to apply for her Junior High School
managing monthly bills like electricity, water, gas, etc (not to mention that i just become unemployed to take care of the house)
i also have to manage our daily food like doing grocery in the morning after taking my lil sister to her school, preparing food for my family (cooking for breakfast, lunch, dinner, and my lil sister packed lunch)
another house chores like cleaning the house, doing dishes and such
not to mention dealing with family drama for my mentally abusive parents (the reason why i leave the house in 2019 and living on another city away from them) which taking a lot for me to stay sane
around 2022 my mom took a turn and make a mess of our life, she ended up diagnosed with bipolar and mentally unstabled state, which cause a lot of problem with neighbours and relative. she cause harmed to herself and other which ended up making me the one to blame for "not taking good care of her"
forgot to mention i also have to deal with my parents debt on top of it (dad never pay the monthly bill for years and caught in indefility, mom taking a bunch of debt from bank and loan shark, lil sister got neglected since i left the house (and yes it was me who usually take care of her since birth she basically said im more of a parent figure for her than her own parents)
there are a lot more i couldnt mention which ended up taking me to a dark places and makes my life feels too much of a burden, i was considering to end myself in 2022 (unfortunately not my first attempt considering how tiring it was to live under my parents abusive tendency in my youth)…
it tooks me a while to get a grip on myself again, but i decide to keep on living my life in hope it get better, not to mention i hate the thought of burdening other people by taking the easy way out, i still owe a lot of people, and my lil sister still need me to keep on taking care of her, and i dont know what will happened with this house if theres no one to take care of it
im not talking to any professional yet but talking with some close friend online does help quite a lot in sorting out my thoughts.
im stable enough now to deal with my daily life in this house, and im planning to stick with it until my lil sister graduated from her high school in around 3-4 years in the future. in my vision she will be old enough to taking care of herself then so i could get my rein back to focusing on my own life
Long story short im slowly getting back on drawing digitaly since 28 march this years, and lets be honest… i couldnt fully work on my backlog without earning any income for my living cost while im at it, so hopefully by taking another comission alongside my overdue list i could get through all of it. and please dont worry and thinking i will neglect your commision, i will give my best to finish it within 2 weeks - a month (depending on the complexity of it). you could talk more detail with me if you decide to take my service offer
Im thanking all of you for even considering reading all this stuff, sorry for the long post and thank you..
TL:DR im opening character art commision for like 2-3 slots, you could find more of my samples here :
and i will post my commission sheet here :
once again sorry for the long post, and please contact me if you are interested… thank you <3
#art commisions#commission#character art#SenVersum Art Commission#Totem Force#Unearth Your Gays#fanart
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The Kit and Makoto side story is complete!
So, it took a bit longer than expected, due to some personal issues that I won’t elaborate on because I doubt anyone cares, but I have completed the side story starring Kit and Makoto.
It’s a total 10,000 words featuring our favourite pyromaniac fox and otaku hacker!
Burn me to the ground: A Kit and Makoto side story:
Read it here.
The link will also be in the pinned side story post.
Have a great day!
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Update time.
Hi everyone!
I am happy to announce the addition of Act Two: Part three. This involves the immediate aftermath of the concert infiltration, and also introduces Midori Yasukawa, bringing the RO roster to completion. (Except the secret RO, but again, they have already been met.)
Features:
A reworking of the lockpick section in Act One
Embarrass Kit in front of his/her father.
Watch from the sidelines or step in as Midori wraps Makoto around her little finger.
Attend a feast cooked by Watanabe!
The first real flirting options in the game.
If I might add, this is the first real flirting or otherwise romantic options with the RO’s that I have done. Any feedback on these parts especially would be greatly appreciated, as I am a lot less confidence in writing the romance than other parts. Thank you!
Have a great day!
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Oh my God. Have I asked you this before?? I don't think I have and it felt like my brain just broke when I realized that.
This is literally my fav question to ask authors. 😅
But I don't think I've asked you this which is such a sin.
Okay lemme get to my point. Okay so ROs reaction to MC being asked out in front of them..? (crushing stage vs. relationship stage)
I'm sorry for taking over a week to answer this, but life kinda got in the way. Plus, it took me a while to think how to answer this, cause it's not something I'd ever really thought about. But, I'll do my best to answer. I'm also assuming that crushing stage means the RO likes the MC, but the MC is not aware, and relationship stage means both of them have reciprocated feelings, but apologies if I got that wrong.
Makoto:
Crushing stage: Would be highly jealous, but only on the inside. Wouldn't outwardly show any indications of being affected. Might subconsciously start insulting the person who asked MC out in a similar way that Makoto does to Kit.
Relationship stage: Leaks their info on the dark web.
Kit:
Crushing stage: Kit likely doesn't realise what these feelings they are feeling for the MC are, so I wouldn't expect anything beyond normal Kit behaviour, if you can call it that.
Relationship stage: Kit heard you liked the Great Fire of London so much, that they made a sequel, the Great Fire of Osaka.
Ryoji/Ryuko:
Crushing stage: Is likely trying to deny their own feelings, but they would sit the person down in a shady bar, and have "a talk", under the guise of a concerned friend.
Relationship stage: Would physically separate MC from the person by standing between them, and would tell them to repeat themselves. If they did indeed repeat themselves, Sasaki would likely get violent.
Masa:
Crushing stage: Similar to Sasaki, but in a more polite way. Would try to have a talk with the person to gauge their intentions because he'd be second-guessing.
Relationship stage: Bluntly informs the person that the MC is taken. If they are persistent, then would try and get the MC to leave.
Midori:
Crushing stage: Midori would likely never have a "crushing" stage, she'd just say she liked the MC the minute she realised. So we'll skip straight to the relationship stage.
Relationship stage: Depending on her opinion of the other person, she would try and wiggle her way into a threesome.
Red string:
I won't say too much here, out of fear of spoiling, but let's just say, it involves murder...
Hope these answers are satisfying, and again, sorry for taking so long.
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3 and a half character portraits!
Here, I have 3 and a half character portraits to share that I commissioned and then completely forgot to put on my tumblr lol. The artist is the highly talented @senversum, please give him all the love for this, cause this is his work not mine. <3
Kaito Busujima:
Midori Yasukawa:
Makoto (Male and female versions)
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I hope you all love these as much as I do! Thank you again, @senversum, for being a pleasure to work with!
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On explicit scenes
So, someone just wrote a mini fanfiction in the asks anonymously about what they want to do with Kit's tail, so I thought I'd take a minute to set something out.
There will be no explicit scenes with ROs
I am not writing them purely because of this guy.
Okay, but for real, I do not feel comfortable writing them, and this isn't that kind of story.
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The Romance Options.
So, it is time I start listing the details. Let's start with the romance Options, because that is definitely more important than the synopsis...
Makoto - Kage:
Sex: M.F (Gender Selectable)
Age: 19
Appearance: Black, dishevelled shoulder-length hair. Blue eyes, freckled face. 4’‘2 in height, making them the shortest in the group. Always wears an oversized green hoodie with their favourite anime character proudly presented on the front. Almost never takes the hood down.
Personality: Hacker, Gamer, Otaku, and pretty much anything in-between. Makoto can be trusted with anything regarding technology, but anything regarding reality can often be a challenge. Makoto seemingly has no filter, saying what they are thinking at that exact moment in time; be it inappropriate jokes, insults, or anything in-between.
Messenger #27361 - Kaen:
(Because the player sets the name of this character, all references to them will be “Kit”.)
Sex: M/F (Gender Selectable)
Age: Somewhere between 100 and 200 years old
Appearance: Red, wild hair, with length depending on gender selected. Red eyes, with a barely detectable feint glow. 5’'3 in height. Wears a traditional Japanese Kimono shamelessly stolen from a convenient shrine. When in fox form, has red fur, and two tails.
Personality: Kit is a Kitsune, and a messenger of Inari Omikami. You met them one day at a Shinto Shrine, and they decided they liked you enough to follow you. In Japanese Folklore, Kitsunes can take human form, and Kit does just that. The MC eventually gets tired of referring to them by a number, (definitely not because they cannot remember it), and gives them a name.
Kit is a seemingly endless bubble of energy. They like teasing anyone and everyone, and a good harmless prank is always appreciated! Do not ask about the harmful pranks, however. The Osaka Police department is already overwhelmed with arson incidents, as it is. Having joined a society they know nothing about, Kit spends much of their time being confused. They have a tendency to act like a child running around an amusement park, (which attracts unwanted attention in downtown Osaka), and Makoto constantly teases them.
Ryoji/Ryuko Sasaki - Temae
Sex: M/F (Gender Selectable)
Age: 34
Appearance: Wears a plain, grey suit. Has a tattoo on their left arm of a Cheetah. Black, slick, neat hair, which comes down to the shoulders if female, clean shaven if male. Grey eyes. 5’‘6 in height. If male, has stubble. Is missing their entire index finger on their left hand.
Personality: From the outside, one would think them to be every part the stereotypical Hardened and coldblooded Yakuza member. They pretend to not care about others, but actions often speak louder than words. Is very loyal to those they perceive as friends, and is easily angered when a friend is threatened. On the flipside, seemingly has no sense of self-preservation.
Masa Matsuzaki - Jiji:
Sex: M
Age: 42
Appearance: Black, messy hair. Blue eyes. 5’‘5 in height. Black, baseball cap with his favourite, (fictional) baseball team, the Osaka Orangutans. Wears a white, button up shirt with short sleeves, and a tie. Also wears jeans. Is rather muscular. ;)
Personality: Masa is a detective working for the Osaka police department who assists you with your not so legal methods. He believes in justice above all else, even if it means bending the law. He has no concept of ‘jokes’, and often takes the stupid things Makoto says seriously. (Do not ask him about the Takoyaki incident.) It seems as though he lives only to work, and he often has to be physically dragged into the break room to rest.
Midori Yasukawa - Hoshi:
Sex: F
Age: 21
Appearance: Green eyes. Long, black hair with green highlights. Almost never without a smile on her face. 4’'9 in height. Wears a long, black dress with green four-leaf clovers all over it.
Personality: Midori is a J-pop idol who runs away from her producers, and latches herself onto your group, saying she’s “bored”, after you interrupt a Yakuza meeting that just so happened to be taking place under a stage which she was performing a live concert on. Makoto is a big fan of hers. With a bright and bubbly personality, Midori surprises everyone when she turns out to also be extremely sadistic. Enjoying the various missions you take her on with concerning levels of Joy.
Secret RO: Red String.
Sex: ?
Age: ?
“You’re the war that I wage,”
“You’re the love that I hate.”
“Can you change me”
“From the monster you’ve made me?”
Starset - “Monster”
The red string has to connect to someone. Not a soulmate, per say. More like a soul sibling. Your “twin soul”. They are in important figure in the story of your life, as you are in theirs. The two of you may not reach the end of the line without each other. But if life was already written into stone, that would be rather cruel. While you must encounter this person, your relationship with them is still up to you.
Red String is a potential Yandere for the Onryō. They start out hating the MC, but with certain choices, this can become a sort of twisted hate-love situation. That is all the info I will give out for now. It’s a secret RO, so obviously I can’t reveal their identity. I will say, however that they are a character that has already been met in the demo.
#if wip#choicescript#The Onryō Of Osaka#interactive fiction#wip#dashingdon#romance options#how do tags work idk?
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Hey is the side story done yet?
Also are you okay? Just making you're not dead lol
I'm sorry I'm still working on it!
But yes, unfortunately I'm not dead. Can't get rid of me that easily, heh. Does it not strike you as the least bit absurd to think that death could be killed? Hehe
To be perfectly honest, though, I've just been in a bit of a depressive daze for the past two weeks. Workload at uni increased tenfold and I've just had no time to work on anything related to the IF. I will hasten in trying to get the side story done, as this is still one of my favourite things ever.
Sorry if I worried anyone X
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Two Polls
Hiya fellow death enthusiasts!
Leila no that sounds weird do it again
Hiya guys!
Dropping in for a random update with two questions.
First, I had been considering adding the side stories into the main game, in a way that they can be read at any time once you unlock them at a certain point. Likely from the stats menu. I do this because there is a specific line of dialog in the Makoto and Kit side story that I am really proud of and want to show off.
Secondly, I’m about halfway through writing the first part of Act 3, so I wanted to ask; would you prefer me to stick to the schedule I have maintained up til now, that is release 3 big updates per Act. Or would you prefer me to wait until the entire Act is complete, as in, the first part, the rewind section, and the part afterwards. I honestly don’t mind either approach so I wanted to know what you all thought.
polls below.
Dangit i can't have more than one poll
Uhhhh if anyone has any objections to the side stories in the stats screen then please leave a comment, but I doubt anyone has any qualms about that.
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Just finished the current demo and loved it!
Akari is awesome, can't wait for her to crush me with her thighs, uhhh i mean let's take her down, yeah...
On a completely unrelated and not ulteriorly motivated side note, is there any chance to make Akari an RO? I know we are supposed to be killing her in act 3, but let a guy dream.
📸🤨
Anyway, glad you enjoyed!
I actually had this discussion a few months back on the COG forum, and I had to reiterate that no, Akari will not be an RO. She is a villain, one you are supposed to be taking down. Her happening to have huge thighs will not change that dude...
The MC has whatever trauma they have from the backstory they chose, they aren't gonna consider romancing Akari at this point. Akari is going to die to progress the story. Full Stop.
However, I did come up with a compromise, that I sometimes regret making but...
Uhh...
During the Act 3 rewind section there'll be an option to uhh...
Death by snu snu...
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Felt like dropping a quick teaser for Act 3 while I work on it.
Might still be a while until it's ready, but I just wanted to share the general vibe.
Also here's the blueprint for the Casino that I threw together. Just wanted to make sure that everything is clear. To make sense of Makoto's notes, areas marked with a green X are free areas, while orange and red doors will require a bit of thought or combat to get through.
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Decided on the next side story.
So, the poll is up in two days, and I think it's obvious at this point that Kit is going to win. But since Makoto is in a close second, and the dynamic between those two is one of my favourite things to write, I decided on a buddy-cop esque adventure starring Kit and Makoto.
And OMG I CAN'T [REDACTED FOR EXCESSIVE CURSING] WAIT TO WRITE THIS OMG I LOVE THEM SO MUCH.
Ahem. I mean, I hope you are all as hyped to read this as I am to write it <3
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Ok, so someone messaged me with a minor complaint about the side story. They didn't like the whole numbering system for the Kitsunes, and disliked that none of them had names. I thought I'd put out an explanation.
So, the lore for the Kitsunes in the story is basically identical to actual Japanese mythology. The only thing that I have added is the numbers. (They do have names in actual mythology. One famous example is Tamamo-no-Mae. Fate players will be well familiar with her.)
The reason I did this, is because I liked the idea of players naming Kit themselves, and this was the only real explanation that I could come up with for it. I will admit, that as I began introducing more Kitsunes, and especially while writing the side story, that the system began irking me a bit. Trust me, try writing a story without any names, and it gets dull fast.
But again, I am too deep in at this point, as I want to keep the player being able to name Kit. But, I also wanted to ask what you all thought. So here's a poll:
Side note, if you pick option three, any ideas would be appreciated. Thank you.
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Briefly thought about making a poll that was structured something like this:
Opinion on the secret RO from the available information?
And then
Opinion on [Character who is the secret RO]
And somehow I thought that wouldn't reveal their identity.
Glad I stopped myself from posting that lol
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