Cringy Land
by Tavian Floyd
Based on, F is for Family
CHARACTERS
FRANK MURPHY – A WORKING-CLASS AMERICAN WITH AN EXPLOSIVE TEMPER. HE IS TRYING TO KEEP HIS FAMILY AFLOAT BUT HIS PRIDE SOMETIMES GETS IN HIS WAY.
SUE MURPHY – FRANK’S WIFE WHO ISN’T CONTENT WITH HER LIFE. SHE TRIES TO KEEP HER FAMILY TOGETHER AND IS CURRENTLY WORKING AN UNFULFILLING JOB.
KEVIN MURPHY – FRANK AND SUE’S OLDEST SON. HE IS A SLACKER WHO OFTEN CHALLENGES HIS FATHER’S AUTHORITY. HE BULLIES HIS SIBLINGS BUT HE ACTUALLY CARES ABOUT THEM A LOT.
MAUREEN MURPHY – FRANK AND SUE’S ONLY DAUGHTER AND YOUNGEST CHILD. SHE IS FRANK AND SUE’S FAVORITE AND SHE IS A PERFECT ANGEL AROUND THEM. SHE HATES DOING “GIRLY” THINGS AND LIKES TO BE IN CONTROL.
BILL MURPHY – FRANK AND SUE’S YOUNGEST SON. HE’S SHY, TIMID, AND UNLUCKY. HE DOESN’T GET ALONG WELL WITH HIS SISTER AND HER RECKLESS TENDENCIES.
VIC – HE IS FRANK’S NEIGHBOR WHO USED TO WORK AS THE MARKETING MANAGER FOR THE LOCAL RADIO STATION. HE HAS A LOT OF MONEY, A DRUG PROBLEM, AND THE ADMIRATION OF THE OTHERS IN THE NEIGHBORHOOD AND AROUND THE CITY. FRANK DOESN’T LIKE HIM BUT VIC IS UNAWARE OF THIS.
BEN AND KENNY - THE RED NECK, NEIGHBORHOOD BOYS. BEN IS THE OLDER BROTHER AND KENNY IS THE YOUNGER, DIAPER WEARING, BROTHER. KENNY IS CLEARLY TOO OLD FOR A DIAPER. BOTH BEN AND KENNY ENCOURAGE EACH OTHER AND OTHERS TO DO DANGEROUS, STUPID THINGS.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
FADE IN:
EXT. TV STORE – DAY
TEASER
The Murphy family is seen walking on the sidewalk in front of the TV store. Frank is carrying a few GROCERY BAGS in each hand. Frank stops because he sees COLT LUGER with a WOMAN on the TV display. The camera focuses in on the show.
WOMAN
What are you going to do to get
Gigantomundo?
FRANK (O.S.)
Whoa. Gigantomundo? This episodes
gonna be great.
COLT LUGER
Well broad, sometimes a man’s got
to do...
Colt Luger raises his gun and looks into the camera. The screen pans out to reveal Colt Luger is standing in front of a carnival game where you have to knock down the cups to win. The operator of the game is staring off into the distance.
COLT LUGER What a man does!
Colt Luger unloads his gun into three stacks of cups and the operator looks terrified and curls into a ball to avoid being hit by what appears to be real bullets.
The screen zooms out to reveal an angry Frank as Colt Luger receives his giant bear prize.
FRANK
Damnit, its just a commercial for
the amusement park.
Frank starts to walk away as Bill and Maureen press their faces to the glass to watch the commercial.
MAUREEN
Daddy, Daddy! Can we go to the
park?
(CONTINUED)
2.
CONTINUED:
KEVIN
You dweebs. Only little kids want
to go to that place.
Kevin’s eyes are glued to the screen as he talks. He is staring at Colt on a roller coaster as he fires his gun in the air. The riders behind him duck in fear.
SUE
(Whispering to Frank) The kids
have been doing better in school, I covered the groceries this week, and we could use something good right now.
Frank drops his bags, which reveals they are filled with BOXED TV DINNERS, and pulls out his wallet. His wallet is empty except for a folded paper that reads electric bill.
FRANK
Shit. You know, kids die on those
rides all the time. I’m not sure you want to go there.
As Frank starts talking, Bill and Maureen turn to face him and the TV changes to a breaking news story.
On the TV, we see helicopter footage of a TEACUP, with two passengers roll out of the park and into the freeway. A car tries to stop and manages to only tap the cup, but gets hit by the car behind it causing a chain reaction of car crashes. The cup and passengers are slowly rolling away unscathed.
MAUREEN
Actually Daddy, the odds of dying
on an amusement park ride is only point zero, zero, zero, zero, zero, eight percent.
The second maureen finishes, an eighteen-wheeler rams into the cup, shattering it and leaving a bloody tire trail in its wake. The Murphy family doesn’t see this and is staring at Maureen.
FRANK
Geez, what are they teaching kids
in school these days.
(CONTINUED)
3.
CONTINUED: (2)
The TV screen changes to an image of a man between two banners that read “CULPRIT,” and “STILL AT LARGE.” The man on screen is a dirty blond, with hair in his eyes, missing a tooth and holding a wrench. He looks eerily similar to BEN.
A MAN walks by with his wife and son and BUMPS INTO Frank, knocking his empty wallet out of his hand. Frank bends down to pick it up.
MAN
(Directed towards the TV) Thats a
shame.
Frank, whose bent over, raises his eyebrows in surprise before they furrow with anger. Frank shoots back up.
FRANK
Hey! What the fuck did you just
say to me! You think I can’t provide for my family or something? I fought in Korea--
SUE
--Frank please calm down.
FRANK
No! My Family is going to that
park!
The man and his family are scared and run off as soon as Frank finishes speaking.
MAUREEN Really Daddy!
Maureen runs in to hug Frank, who returns the hug. His wallet is still in his hand with the white paper sticking out of it. Frank sees the paper and his face has a look of worry on it.
FRANK
Oh o-of course sweet pea.
END OF TEASER
ACT ONE
4.
INT. BEDROOM – DAY
The camera is zoomed in on Sue sleeping in her bed. She begins to roll over. She does an unexpected two full rolls and hits her head on her dresser. Sue wakes up, rubbing her head, dazed.
SUE Ow. What the hell?
Sue turns to see Frank lifting up one side of the mattress.
FRANK
Oh sorry hun. I had to get some
cash I tucked away if things got... bad.
Sue perks up a bit and smiles.
SUE
I had no idea you were thinking
that far ahead.
FRANK
Of course. You think I’m going to
let my family starve.
Frank pulls out a box and throws it onto the bed. Sue looks at it and sees a FEW loose bills.
SUE
Frank. Theres less than fifty
dollars here. I’m not sure thats even going to get us through the door. If you’re reaching into your savings then maybe we should reconsider this trip.
There is a knock on the door and we hear Bills voice.
BILL (O.S.) Hey are you guys ready yet?
FRANK
Mommy and Daddy are talking. Go
watch TV or something!
Ugh. Fine. Bill walks away
BILL
(CONTINUED)
5.
CONTINUED:
FRANK
Sue, we can’t let these kids down again. I know its not much but we
need this. You said it yourself.
Sue looks back at the box and lets out a sigh. She picks up the cash, straightens it, and starts counting it.
SUE
If we’re going to do this then we
have to set a budget.
A budget?
FRANK
SUE
Yes Frank. We have to make sure we
can afford to pay our bills for next month.
FRANK Right. Next months bills.
Frank scratches the back of the head.
SUE
Here’s thirty dollars. If we don’t
spend more than this we should be fine for next month.
Sue stands up and starts getting dressed. Frank looks at Sue for a beat before he starts to return the box back under the mattress. Frank realizes Sue can’t see him. He takes the rest of the money and folds it into his wallet.
FRANK
I’ll see you in the car.
Sue nods in acknowledgment and Frank walks out the door.
INT. FRANKS CAR - DAY
Frank backs his car out of the Garage. From Frank’s seat we can see the fridge in the kitchen window and VIC’s house in his rearview mirror.
FRANK
What are y’all waiting for? Get in
the car! Y’all were supposed to be waiting for us, ungrateful little...
(CONTINUED)
6.
CONTINUED:
Bill and Maureen come running out and hop into the car. Kevin is walking slowly towards the car with his hands in his pockets and a pout on his face.
FRANK Damnit, where’s Sue?
Sue is shown in the kitchen window grabbing the CAT COOKIE JAR off of the fridge. Inside the jar is a Plat-A- Ware container with rolls of dollar bills. Sue grabs a roll and walks towards the garage.
While Frank waits, he sees VIC pull out of his garage in his pink convertible, painted with a nude picture of Cutie Pie, Vic’s girlfriend, on every visible side of the car. Along with Cutie Pie in the front, three girls in bikini’s are playfully pushing each other in the backseat. Vic stops in the center of Frank’s driveway, blocking his way out.
FRANK
Jesus. What does he want. Bill
close your eyes.
Why?
BILL
Frank reaches back and flicks Bill between the eyes. His eyes close as tears start to run down his face.
VIC
Frank, my man. Where you headed?
Frank grips his steering wheel tighter and looks straight ahead, ignoring the question.
MAUREEN
Aren’t you going to answer Mr.
Vic?
FRANK
Well sweet pea, I’m hoping Mr. Vic
gets the message and leaves. Remember, sometimes ignoring your problems is the only way they’ll go away.
Kevin walks past Frank’s window but instead of getting in the car he walks up to Vic’s car.
7.
EXT. STREET - CONTINUOUS
Kevin stands next Vic and gives him a fist bump.
KEVIN
We’re going to Four Flags. You
know the amusement park.
VIC
For real Kevino? What a co-winky-
dink. I’m hosting the memorial concert there for the accident.
KEVIN
Really? That’s awesome! Wait what
accident?
VIC
Ha. Exactly my man. Your already
thinking like the big wigs. No time to close. Another day, more cash, as they say.
Franks head is now poking out of his open car window.
FRANK
What is that man on this time.
(Yelling)
Kevin get your ass in this car and Vic, stop blocking my damn driveway!
KEVIN
Dad, Vic’s going to the park too.
Can I ride with him?
VIC
Yeah its no problem ma man. I’ll
even get the kid in free and save you a couple of bucks.
Vic playfully ruffles Kevin’s hair, in a loving father kind of way. Frank clenches the wheel again as Sue finally slides into the passenger seat.
FRANK
I don’t need your charity Vic, or
my kid riding in a literal cum- vertible.
Frank!
SUE
(CONTINUED)
8.
CONTINUED:
VIC Cum-vertible? Oh. The lady
Ha! You crack me up Frank.
SUE
Frank maybe you should let
go with him. It’ll save us bucks.
dance.
Kevin three
FRANK
Shit. Tickets are three bucks a
piece? You should have said that sooner (Yelling) Kevin get your ass in Vic’s car right now!
Sweet.
KEVIN
Kevin does a pelvic thrust of victory and jumps into the back seat. The middle girl grabs him and lets him rest his head on her breasts. The other two girls press up against his sides and, squishing Kevin’s face. His face turns red with excitement.
VICS GIRLS
He’s so cute!
Vic takes a look at his watch.
VIC
Look at the time. I’ve got to get
going. Catch you later Frankerino!
FRANK
Something is wrong with that man.
EXT. NEIGHBOR’S BUSHES - DAY
Ben and Kenny watch as Vic drive away from inside BUSHES next to the Murphy’s driveway. Kenny has a SUCKER sticking out of his mouth.
BEN
What do you think? Wanna go see
Uncle Ronnie at the park?
Kenny takes the sucker out of his mouth and attached to it is one of Kenny’s teeth stuck on it.
KENNY
Yeah. I wanna try that cup ride on
the TV box.
(CONTINUED)
9.
CONTINUED:
Ben returns with a toothy smile. Kenny puts the lollipop, tooth and all, back into his mouth.
BEN
Me too. Hand me the screw driver
would ya?
Kenny reaches into his diaper and pulls out a screwdriver with a red handle and BROWN spots all over it. Ben frowns a bit but takes the screwdriver anyway.
BEN
Whens the last time you changed
your diaper?
KENNY
I just changed it three days ago.
Ben tilts his head back and starts unfolding his fingers one by one as if he’s counting.
BEN
Then you should be good for
another two days. Lets go.
The boys scramble out of the bush. Kenny’s diaper has an extra mass that is hanging from his diaper that is dangling as he walks.
Ben puts the dirty screwdriver in the truck lock and jiggles it a bit before it pops open. Ben climbs in and Kenny follows.
CUT TO:
INT. FRANKS CAR - CONTINUOUS
Frank sees the trunk popped up in his rearview mirror.
FRANK
The stupid trunk’s on the fritz
again.
SUE
Should I send Bill out to close
it?
FRANK Nah I got it honey.
Frank shifts gears and jams his foot on the gas.
10.
EXT. FRANKS TRUNK - CONTINUOUS
Kenny is almost inside the trunk when the car jolts backward. The car turns quickly and speeds off with enough force to send the trunk crashing back down. Ben pulls Kenny’s leg out of the way but part of the diaper is caught. This produces a loud squishing noise and causes a green scent trail to appear.
Ben and Kenny plug their noses and try to muffle each other’s giggling.
EXT. ROAD - DAY
We see the Franks car driving on the road leaving a green trail as it drives. Everyone that drives into the streak switches lanes.
FRANK Christ, what’s that smell?
SUE
My god, I smell it too.
FRANK
Jesus Bill, say something if
you’re going to rip one like that.
BILL But it’s not me.
FRANK
Well it sure as hell ain’t me a
because I’d own up to it. You’ve got to own up to that stuff Bill. Show’s you’re a man.
Umm okay.
BILL
FRANK
Just don’t embrace it in my
fucking car. END ACT ONE
ACT TWO
11.
EXT. TICKET BOOTH – DAY
Frank, Sue, Bill, and Maureen walk up to the front of the line and are surprised to see ROSIE behind the counter. Franks hunched demeanor and scowling face changes to an upright smile when he sees Rosie behind the counter.
Rosie is wearing a uniform and tie similar to his mohican uniform except its colored red and gold.
FRANK Rosie? What are you
ROSIE Well I’ll be. If it
Murphy family.
doing here? isn’t the
SUE How’s Georgia doing?
ROSIE
Not great. She just got laid off
from the hair salon. They found out her afro was just a bad weave.
Sue is surprised and is avoiding eye contact with Rosie.
SUE
I’m sorry to hear that...
ROSIE
Yeah, so I picked up this job on
the weekends until things smooth out. It actually almost pays as much as the airline if you can believe it, and they’ve got kids working this thing.
FRANK
I could have sworn I was getting
paid at least twice as much as what they make hear.
Rosie looks at Frank and shakes his head.
ROSIE
You poor naiive white people.
That’ll be twelve bucks.
(CONTINUED)
12.
CONTINUED:
FRANK
I was actually hoping we could get
the friends and family discount?
ROSIE Sure. Twelve bucks.
Seriously?
FRANK
ROSIE
Sorry, Frank. I’m actually trying
to keep my job. Maybe if you followed the rules you wouldn’t be hastling me for discounts.
FRANK Geez Rosie I get it.
Frank slips the twelve dollars under the divider while rubbing his shoulder as if it were hurt. Rosie hands them the tickets and the family walks off.
EXT. PARKING LOT – DAY
The trunk of Frank’s car pops open. Ben jumps out as Kenny tries to climb out. Kenny’s diaper is stretched out even more than before. The diaper hits the ground before Kenny does.
BEN
Lets go, while they’re busy.
Ben runs off. Kenny follows but can’t keep up.
KENNY
Wait up, my diapy is draggin.
EXT. PARK ENTRANCE
The teenage TICKET TAKER in a red and gold uniform is letting customers in the long line through.
Ben weaves through the line expertly and no one pays attention to him.
TICKET TAKER Your ticket kid?
(CONTINUED)
13.
CONTINUED:
Ben smiles and proceeds to pants the Ticket Taker whose wearing ripped blue jean booty shoots underneath his red pants.
TICKET TAKER
No! No one is supposed to know.
Ben puts his finger on his lip in confusion the Ticket Taker starts to panic and reach for his pants like Ben expected.
As Kenny comes up in the rear, the line splits for him as everyone reels over from the stench. Someone even vomits. Kenny has no clue this is happening because of him.
Ben grabs Kenny’s arm and they run into the park. They see their UNCLE waving at them while running from overweight park security.
The Ticket Taker has pulled his pants back up as Frank and the family walk up.
FRANK
You gonna take our tickets or
what? I didn’t pay three dollars to walk through here for free.
TICKET TAKER
I’m sorry sir, its just these kids
came by--
FRANK
--I didn’t ask for your life story
kid.
SUE Frank, be nice.
Sue takes the tickets and hands them to the boy as the family goes through the turnstile.
Vic and the girls, still clinging to Kevin, walk up to the Ticket Taker.
TICKET TAKER
Wow, you’re Vic! Right this way.
The ticket taker stretches out his arm to motion them inside the park. Vic snaps his fingers and makes two finger gun motions towards the ticket taker as they walk through the turnstile.
14.
EXT. AMUSEMENT PARK - DAY
The Murphy family stands in front of a carousel and Kevin walks with Vic. Kevin spots a chili dog stand and stops to stare at it. Kevin reaches into his pockets but they come back out empty.
KEVIN
Damnit. Hey Vic can I borrow--
When Kevin turns back he realizes Vic and his girls have already walked away. Kevin’s stomach starts to growl as he walks toward his parents.
Damnit.
KEVIN (CONT'D)
FRANK
What the hell you say to me?
KEVIN
Nothing. Whats a kid got to do to
get some food around here? And I need money for rides and junk. You don’t expect me hang around kiddie land.
Oh no to be going
FRANK
you don’t. This is supposed
a family trip. You’re not anywhere.
SUE
Give him the money Frank.
But Sue?
FRANK
SUE
This is a trip for the family, not
a family trip, and Kevin’s old enough to have fun on his own.
FRANK
Fine. I want my change back.
Frank pulls out TWO DOLLARS, crumples them up, and droops in Kevin’s outstretched hand. Kevin unfolds the bills.
KEVIN
What am I supposed to do with two
dollars?
(CONTINUED)
15.
CONTINUED: Frank!
SUE
FRANK What, we’re on a budget.
Sue scowls and Frank rolls his eyes as he drops two more crumpled bills in Kevin’s hands.
KEVIN
Seriously? Just four dollars? Mom?
SUE
We are on a budget sweetie.
KEVIN I hate this family!
Kevin stomps away towards the chili dog stand.
FRANK He’ll be fine.
(turns to kids)
Alright what do you little monsters want to do?
MAUREEN
I want to ride the bumper cups.
BILL Ooh ooh, me too.
FRANK
Bumper cups? I swear whoever comes
up with these names is just lazy. The Murphy family walks towards the ride.
INT. BEHIND BUMPER CUP RIDE - DAY
Ronnie lies under a cup in the open tent. Ben and Kenny watch from the back entrance.
BEN
You fix that cup yet uncle Ronnie?
Ronnie gives a wide toothy grin, showing his missing teeth.
RONNIE
Almost. Oh you kids are going to
have so much fun.
(CONTINUED)
16.
CONTINUED:
KENNY
Hey Ronnie, how come thems coppers
was chasin yous earlier? Ronnie slides out from under the cup.
RONNIE
Those guys were just buzz kills
because one person had an accident. It ain’t my fault the walls broke down. I just make the rides fun. I aint no fence repairman.
(Turns to the boys)
Make sure you use that yeller cup there.
Ronnie walks towards the controls at the rides entrance.
Ben and Kenny jump into the yellow cup. Kenny makes a loud squishy noise when he sits down.
EXT. BUMPER CUP RIDE - DAY
The Murphy family walks up to the front of the line.
FRANK
Must be our luck day Sue. Almost
no wait.
RONNIE
That’ll be one dollar per rider.
FRANK
You know you remind me of
someone...Wait did you say a dollar?
RONNIE
Well two since yous got two kids.
FRANK
What the hell? Rides aren’t
included?
SUE (Pulls Frank away)
Whats the problem Frank?
(CONTINUED)
17.
CONTINUED:
FRANK
Robbery. After the cotton candy
and funnel cakes I’ve only got four bucks left.
Progressively louder)
Why the hell do we even have to pay to get in if everything inside is going to cost me money?
Ronnie has started picking his nose and is slouching over the controls, ignoring Franks outburst.
SUE (Yelling)
Stop making a scene!
Sue pushes Frank out of the way and pays Ronnie, who pockets the money instead of opening the register.
FRANK
Jesus Sue. Remind me not to cross
you.
Thanks Mom.
MAUREEN
BILL Yeah that was awesome
The kids run into the ride. Sue drags Frank away so the next people in line can pay. Sue turns to Frank with a scowl on her face.
INT. BUMPER CUP RIDE - DAY
A loud beep rings and a red light shifts to green signaling the start of the ride. Bill and Maureen are sitting in a red cup and across from them is Ben and Kenny in their yellow cup. Other kids occupy other assorted cups.
Bill and Maureen spin the cup together and get bumped once or twice before they spot Ben and Kenny.
BILL
What are they doing here?
MAUREEN (Waving)
Hey Ben, Hey Kenny.
The brothers waves back with a smile.
(CONTINUED)
18.
CONTINUED:
BEN
Hey Maureen. Wes going to hit you.
Ben and Kenny grab their wheel on a stick and tilt it hard towards Maureen and Bill’s cup. The cup shoots off with unexpected speed and rams into Bill and Maureen’s red cup.
Bill and Maureen’s cup spins rapidly as they approach a flimsy fence.
BILL Shit, shit, shit!
Bill raises his arms in defense as the red cup gets closer to the wall, there is a zoom in on the wheels as a brake system falls into place causing spikes to pop up under the cup. The ride miraculously stops short of the fence.
MAUREEN
Don’t be such a pussy Bill.
BILL
I am not! Wait, I don’t like the
look on your face right now.
Maureen stares at Ben and Kenny across the ride’s floor. She has a furrowed brow with a devilish smile on her face.
Please don’t
BILL (CONT'D)
Bill braces himself by clutching the rides restraints as Maureen grabs the ride’s wheel. She yanks it back and points it towards Ben and Kenny.
The red cups shoots off quickly, spinning rapidly while moving forward.
BEN Shit, shit, shit!
The red cup makes contact and the yellow cup is sent flying. As the yellow cup approaches the fence, the brakes fail to activate.
The yellow cup gains momentum instead of slowing down and the cup bursts through the fence and into the park.
19.
EXT. PARK - DAY
This is a birds-eye view of the park.
The yellow cup crashes into an ice cream cart, causing it to land on the man working there and sending ice cream flying everywhere.
The cup then hits a funnel cake stand, knocks over a roller coaster for toddlers, and riccochets into the memorial concert where the ride destroys the instruments and sound equipment by bouncing off of each item.
In a close up of the ride we can see Ben and Kenny with outstretched arms, happy as can be.
BEN This is awesome
I knows!
KENNY
The ride finally richochets into the gaming center and knocks down the water balloon filling game. The kids playing cleared out but the attendant working was stuck behind the counter.
When the ride crashes into the the tent caves in, causing the and the unconscious attendant.
The camera focuses on the back
two bulges form under the blue tent material and Ben and Kenny pop out, surprisingly unscathed. Kenny has grabbed himself a light blue bear from the wreckage.
KENNY
Yous was right, Uncle Ronnie does
know hows to make a good time.
BEN
Never doubt your family.
EXT. BUMPER CUP RIDE - DAY
Frank and Sue stand at the ride’s exit. They can see the hole into the park directly across from their position at the exit. They can see where the cup crashed into the game at this position.
game, the balloon pops and prizes to land on the ride
of the collapsed tent as
(CONTINUED)
20.
CONTINUED:
FRANK
Holy shit. I told them kids die on
these things.
SUE
Yeah maybe its time to do
something else.
Bill and Maureen come out of the ride’s exit. Maureen runs in to hug her parents. Bill trails behind with wide eyes and a slight frown.
BILL
That was kind of fucked up.
FRANK
You’re alive kid. Suck it up.
MAUREEN
Daddy, can we go play some games
now? I want to win a teddy.
SUE
I think that’s a good idea.
FRANK
Not sure how many games two
dollars is going to get us.
Sue pulls out her purse and gives Frank five dollars.
SUE
I’ll take Bill to play some games.
Lets make this a good day for the kids. Remember, don’t play a game more than twice. You have a tendency to get sucked into these things.
Frank quickly grabs the money.
FRANK
I don’t get sucked into anything.
(Turns to Maureen) Lets go sweet pea.
The Murphys walk towards the game area.
21.
EXT. PARK CROSSROADS - DAY
Kevin sees the family walk into the game area as he finishes his chili dog. He walks in that direction before stopping and seeing LEX and BOLO near the carousel.
Lex and Bolo are smoking joints and their eyes are a dark pink. Kevin walks up to them.
KEVIN
Yo guys, what are you doing here?
LEX (Remaining calm
throughout)
Just smoking a doobie man. Get off our backs.
Yeah.
BOLO
KEVIN
I mean at the parks you idiots,
and give me a hit of that.
Kevin grabs the joint from Bolo as Lex talks
LEX
We aren’t here for those baby
rides. We came for Fuck Gun’s the memorial concert but G-d struck down the bands instruments with an enchanted cup from the sky.
Kevin’s eyes get pinker from a single, long inhale of the joint.
KEVIN Shit this is good.
Yeah.
BOLO
LEX
Then Bolo scored this killer weed
from some dude in a trench coat. They call it Coin Flip because the high is either really good or really bad. And we’ve just been...smoking it.
Yeah.
BOLO
(CONTINUED)
22.
CONTINUED:
KEVIN
Yeah well, I didn’t come for that
baby stuff either.
There is a long silence as the group passes around the joint. Kevin stares at the roller coaster with his mouth open and a blank look in his eyes.
KEVIN
But wouldn’t be cool, if like, we just rode the big roller coaster.
Just to see how babyish it is. There’s another pause.
LEX
That’d be funny. I’m down.
BOLO
The group walks towards the roller coaster.
EXT. ROLLER COASTER LINE - DAY
Lex and Bolo eyes are now BLOOD RED. They are looking around frantically. Kevin’s arms are to his side, his eyes are pink, and he has a small smile on his face.
In front of Kevin in line a blonde haired girl, JEN, who Kevin starts staring at. Kevin reaches out to tap her shoulder.
KEVIN You look soooo hot.
Yeah.
Umm okay.
JEN
The line moves forward and Jen turns around to get in her coaster car. As she turns, she turns into Sweetie Pie, Kevin’s crush and Vics girlfriend.
Kevin stands there without getting onto the ride.
JEN (Seductively, as
Sweetie Pie)
What are you waiting for? You scared or somethin?
(CONTINUED)
23.
CONTINUED:
KEVIN
I ain’t scared of nothing. I’m all
man.
Kevin gets on the ride and Lex and Bolo get in the car behind him, still rapidly shifting their heads as if looking out for something.
EXT. ROLLER COASTER - DAY
The coaster cars start to climb slowly up to the peak.
Kevin stares at the peak which starts to extend into the clouds as he looks at. Butterflies and rainbows appear to cover the peak of the coaster.
KEVIN
This is going to be awesome.
(turning back) Don’t you think guys.
Lex and Bolo’s blood red eyes look towards the top too. From their perspective they see an endless ride in a red sky with no peak in sight. In place of butterflies, imp demons fly around, spitting small fire balls.
LEX
Please daddy I promise I’ll be
good. Don’t make me go up there.
BOLO (Looking at the
ground)
No mommy, come back. Don’t leave me alone here.
When they get to the peak we see Kevin looking at Jen, as Cutie pie. The light shines on Cutie Pie and she smiles at Kevin who smiles back. Kevin thinks he had a moment with the girl when the ride drops.
Kevin raises his arms and laughs happily as the ride drops. Lex and Bolo are freaking out.
They look at the bottom and see the face of the devil. The coaster tracks morph into the devil’s tongue and the imps circle Lex and Bolo while laughing hysterically.
Lex reaches back and claws at the kid sitting behind him, managing to get his finger in the kid’s eye.
(CONTINUED)
24.
CONTINUED:
LEX
No, please, I don’t want to go to
hell. I promise Mommy, I won’t touch myself again.
BOLO
I promise, next time I won’t
watch!
The ride gets to the bottom and enters the first. At the peak of the loop, Bolo vomits. The vomit falls straight down. At the bottom of the loop, the vomit lands squarely on Jen’s hair.
JEN Ah! What the hell?
Kevin turns and looks at Jen, who morphs into a Cutie Pie in a bikini with wet hair.
KEVIN (loudly)
Wow you look even more amazing than before.
JEN You freak!
Jens hair is whipping back with the gust of the ride, causing chunks of Vomit to hit Bolo back in the face.
BOLO
I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to like
it.
LEX I want to go home.
EXT. ROLLER COASTER EXIT - DAY
Kevin walks out of the exit with Jen close behind. Kevin turns to the vomit soaked Jen.
KEVIN
So do you think I can have your
number?
JEN
Stay away from me you creep.
Jen walks away but Kevin is still smiling. Nothing can bring his day down. Lex and Bolo walk out after.
(CONTINUED)
25.
CONTINUED:
KEVIN
You know, that was pretty fun.
Maybe those kids know what they’re talking about.
LEX
Fuck that. I’m out of here.
Yeah.
BOLO
Lex and Bolo start walking away. As they walk, the park security runs after Ronnie.
KEVIN
Alright see you guys later.
(To himself)
Wonder who those security guys were after?
Kevin walks in the direction of the security guards, into the games area.
EXT. PIN GAME - DAY
Maureen and Bill walk up to the game. A sign with bold letters says 25 cents a game on it and another lists Levels for prizes. The game is set up with three sets of three pins stacked in a pyramid formation. A GAME CONDUCTOR is sitting in a chair reading a magazine featuring girls in bikinis.
How much?
FRANK
GAME CONDUCTOR Read the sign.
FRANK Seriously? This is how you’re
going to treat a paying customer?
The Game Conductor looks up from his chair. He has an annoyed look on his face.
GAME CONDUCTOR That’ll be twenty-five cents.
FRANK
That sir to you kid. I fought for
this country and I will be respected.
(CONTINUED)
26.
CONTINUED:
MAUREEN
Daddy can you just pay the man. I
want to play the game.
FRANK
Of course sweet heart.
(To Game Conductor) Here.
Frank pays the conductor and gets 75 cents back.
The Game Conductor hands Maureen a ball before sitting back down and picking up his magazine.
GAME CONDUCTOR
You get three throws. Have at it.
Maureen throws the ball. It MISSES. She looks up at Frank.
FRANK
You got this. Try again sweet pea.
Maureen throws the second ball. It misses.
FRANK
I believe in you honey.
Maureen throws the last ball and knocks down a SINGLE PIN.
MAUREEN Yay. I actually hit it.
FRANK That you did. Good job.
(To Game Conductor) Wheres her prize?
GAME CONDUCTOR No prize for one pin.
FRANK
What the hell do you mean no prize
for one pin?
GAME CONDUCTOR Read the sign.
FRANK (Yelling)
I’m not reading a damn sign!
(CONTINUED)
27.
CONTINUED: (2)
GAME CONDUCTOR (Looks up)
You need at least three pins for a prize.
FRANK
(with gritted teeth)
Fine. Would you like me to try honey?
MAUREEN
Yes please.
Frank hands the man another quarter and takes his balls.
FRANK
I’ll show you how I survived in
Nam.
Frank throws the first ball and overshoots by a wide margin. The Game Conductor laughs.
MAUREEN
Um Daddy are you sure about this?
FRANK Just warming up Sweety.
Frank throws the second ball. It HITS THE EDGE OF THE TABLE and bounces off, hitting Maureen in the head.
Ow!
MAUREEN
FRANK
Just a little friendly fire. It
happens sometimes. Walk it off. I know Goomer did. Bless his heart. I got this.
Frank throws the last ball and hits the pyramid of pins in the center, knock down all three.
FRANK
Boom! Thats how you become an ace
sniper for the US of A.
MAUREEN By missing a lot?
Before Frank can respond:
(CONTINUED)
28.
CONTINUED: (3)
GAME CONDUCTOR Here’s your prize
The conductor pulls out a bear keychain and slides it across to Frank.
FRANK
What the hell is this? My daughter
wants the bear.
GAME CONDUCTOR No can do. The only level one
prizes are key chains.
FRANK
Key chains? That’s bullshit we
came for the damn bear.
Frank slams his hand on the counter and points DIAGONALLY UPWARD towards the bears. There are to sizes of bears in that direction and its ambiguous which bear Fank is pointing too. The Conductor assumes its the larger one.
GAME CONDUCTOR
Oh you want ‘the’ bear. You’ve got
to knock down all three sets of pins to get that one.
FRANK
Are you serious? Who comes up with
this shit?
GAME CONDUCTOR
I don’t make the rules man. I just
work here.
MAUREEN
Its ok Daddy, I don’t need the
bear and mommy said not to play more than twice.
FRANK
No, if my little girl wants the
bear, she’s getting a bear. Besides Mommy was talking to you, not me.
MAUREEN I don’t think she was.
Frank ignores her and hands the Game Conductor another dollar.
(CONTINUED)
29.
CONTINUED: (4)
He plays again, this time managing to knock down the first set and the second set, but misses his third shot greatly. The game conductor gets up to hand Frank a prize but Frank calls out to him.
FRANK
Don’t bother unless its the damn
bear. I’m not filling my house with this shit.
The conductor sits back down and Frank slides him another quarter. This time Frank knocks down the first two sets but only gets the top pin in the third set.
FRANK
Jiog-ei geim jeoju.! (damn this
game to hell in Korean)
GAME CONDUCTOR
You sure you don’t want you prize?
Frank ignores him and slides another dollar to the conductor.
A short montage of Frank failing takes place: One where he misses all three shots, one where he focuses all shots on the last pins to prove it can be knocked down, one where he almost wins but the final pin jumps back into place after leaning as if it were going to fall.
Maureen arms are folded throughout.
MAUREEN
Daddy I don’t even want the bear
now. Can we play something else?
Frank kneels down on one knee to speak to Maureen.
FRANK
Darling, this isn’t about you
anymore. Sometimes a man commits to something, and as a man, he has to see that commitment through to the end. Thats what man does and thats what I’m going to do. You understand?
MAUREEN
So are you committed to sitting
around the house? You get fired a lot.
(CONTINUED)
30.
CONTINUED: (5)
Frank grabs the top his noses and pinches himself between the eyes in frustration and stands back up. Frank opens his wallet and see’s the electric bill blocking his last quarter.
FRANK
Shit. I spent it all. Well there’s
no point in holding onto this quarter.
Frank slides his last quarter to the conductor and grabs his last three balls.
He knocks down the first two towers with ease, but on the third, he knocks out the LOWER LEFTT PIN. The top pin stays perfectly still even though it should be unbalanced.
FRANK
Holy shit... This game is fucking
rigged!
(Turns to Game
Conductor)
Did you know about this?
What?
GAME CONDUCTOR
Frank pics up a quarter and throws it at the pins. It sticks to the top one instead of bouncing off.
FRANK
Fucking magnets! Whats your
fucking game? You pocket hard working people’s money?
GAME CONDUCTOR
Naw man thats just how it works. I
thought everyone knew these games were rigged.
FRANK I’m going to kill you.
Frank pulls the from behind the counter and starts punching him.
Daddy stop!
MAUREEN
The security guards run past the game at this point. They stop and grab Frank.
(CONTINUED)
31.
CONTINUED: (6)
FRANK
What the hell! Get off me. That
man stole my money. I’m the victim here.
Sue and Bill walk in from the right. Kevin walks in from the left.
SUE
Oh my G-d! Frank? What happened?
FRANK
This asshole stole my money. The
game is rigged Sue, its rigged.
SUE
Damnit Frank. I told you not to play more than twice. Why can’t
you just listen for once?
KEVIN
Holy shit. My dad’s going to jail?
SUE
Don’t worry. They’re not real cops
we just won’t be back at this park for a while.
The security officers cuff Frank and start walking him away.
SUE (CONT'D) We’ll see you outside honey.
FRANK
As Frank approaches the exit another group of security brings up RONNIE next to Frank.
FRANK What they get you for?
RONNIE
I was just trying to make the
rides fun again and they go and cuff me.
Yeah. Yeah.
EXT. PARK EXIT - SUNSET
(CONTINUED)
32.
CONTINUED:
FRANK
Right? I got my money stolen and
they cuffed me. The legal system is backwards. I feel for you.
They make it to the park exit and a police car pulls up.
FRANK
Holy shit, I’m actually going to
jail?
PARK OFFICER
Naw, they’re here for the other
guy. He’s responsible for two murders, 5 injuries, and seven thousand in property damage.
RONNIE (Laughing)
It was a good ride though. Ronnie gets into the cop car.
FRANK Damn. Thats fucked up.
PARK OFFICER
Yep. As for you, I don’t want to
see your face around here again or we will get the cops involved.
The officer unshackles Frank and pushes him through the exit before closing the gate.
END ACT TWO
ACT THREE
Frank sits in his car and sees the rest of his family approach through his side mirror. Kevin is chowing on chili dogs and Maureen is holding a teddy bear. Bill has cotton candy. They get into the car.
FRANK (Quietly to Sue)
I’m sorry Sue. I messed up.
INT. FRANKS CAR - SUNSET
I know.
SUE
(CONTINUED)
33.
CONTINUED:
FRANK
No I mean. I spent all the money I
had.
SUE
Don’t worry Frank I didn’t give
you more than we could afford.
FRANK
I spent a little more than that.
What?
SUE
EXT. PARKING LOT – SUNSET
Ben and Kenny stroll up to the car with dirty mouths. Kenny’s diaper is still dragging on the ground leaving a brown streak in his path.
KENNY
That poop dog sure was good. Maybe
I should make mines owns.
BEN
That wasn’t poop you dimwit. It
was chili. They just look the same. Get in the trunk.
Ben jiggles the lock again and both boys hop in the trunk.
INT. FRANKS CAR - SUNSET
SUE (loudly)
You spent the rest of your savings?
FRANK
I just said that. You can lower
your voice.
SUE
Lower my--You’re lucky I have been
saving. It seems like I’m the only one capable of providing for this family.
Frank is silent while he starts the car.
(CONTINUED)
34.
CONTINUED:
BILL
Umm are we going to be okay.
FRANK
Don’t worry. Everything’s going to
be fine. Its just that I’m not sure what we’re going to eat tonight.
BILL
Thats ok. I’m not hungry.
MAUREEN Yeah me neither.
Kevin’s eyes are still pink.
KEVIN
Seriously? I’m starving. But I’d
rather starve than eat another of those TV dinners, so I guess I’m good.
FRANK
Wow, really? Maybe this won’t be
so bad.
Daddy, thanks bear. I had a
MAUREEN
for winning me the great time.
BILL Yeah me too.
Me a three.
KEVIN
FRANK Really guys?
(to Sue) When did she?
SUE
The man gave it to her after you
were taken away.
There is a pause and a tear rolls down Frank’s eye.
SUE (CONT'D)
I’m sorry I yelled at you. It’s ok. We’ll find a way. We always
do.
(CONTINUED)
35.
CONTINUED: (2)
FRANK I know honey.
Frank leans for a kiss but is stopped.
SUE
Good lord, what is that smell?
FRANK Damnit Bill, again?
BILL It’s not me. I swear.
FRANK
Ugh, then Kevin? Seriously?
KEVIN
What the hell? I didn’t do it.
FRANK
Don’t give me that shit. I saw you
with those chili dogs.
Frank rolls down the windows and kevin sits back with his arms folded and lips poked out in anger.
INT. MURPHY’S GARAGE - NIGHT
The family exits the car. Frank opens the door and lets everyone through except Kevin.
FRANK
You’re not bringing that shit into
the house.
KEVIN
But I didn’t do anything!
FRANK I’ve heard that before.
Frank slams the door in Kevin’s face. Kevin hears his parents behind the door
SUE (O.S.)
Frank. How come the lights aren’t
working?
FRANK (O.S.)
Ha, ha. Who needs lightS in the
middle of the night anyway?
(CONTINUED)
36.
CONTINUED:
Frank Murphy!
SUE (O.S.)
EXT. MURPHY'S GARAGE - NIGHT
Kevin angrily mumbles something incomprehensible to himself as he makes his way to the basement.
Ben and Kenny let themselves out of the car trunk and Kevin spots them scurrying away.
KEVIN What the fuck?
Ben turns and laughs before running down the street. Kenny follows but his diaper gets caught on a bush, ripping it off and exposing his brown stained butt.
KEVIN
I really need to stop smoking.
END ACT THREE
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