oh I *love* chapter 13 the boys..... they're having fun........ don't apologize for not cutting it shorter I would read another 10k words of time traveling shenanigans LOL bizarro amnesia hal jordan...... young meloni...... the chilean rock band.... this is brilliant and incredible (idk if this is what you'd imagine for after, but) I can even imagine slightly older post-frequency-plot bart and thad working together in a "normal" superhero sense and it being just as chaotic as this :D

YES i was really gunning for that sweet sweet comic book chaos. absurd time travel shenanigans and fun new locales featuring worm battles and character development.