Cant stand to see you so lonely fanfic needs some angst i think ,maybe she breaks his heart and he finds new girlfriend .Just for a new twist ,I dont know why but from 1st chapter it feels like harry tries too much for her and she never seems sure ,she never had a problem while coming into relationship with mark .

i don’t think i’ll be putting much angst into cstsyl (which there may or may not only be 1 official part left of) BUT my next fic that i’m sort of planning does have angst - like a lot.

as for how you’ve interpreted the feelings, all i have to really say it that harry’s just naturally a very nice and well mannered person, and as stated many times in previous parts he also has a case of fast infatuation with people too. maybe making it seem like he’s “trying too much for her”, but that’s just how some people act for the people they have feelings for.

now as for y/n, im a little confused cause i personally dont think i’ve written it that she’s not expressing how she feels towards harry. she constantly, even when dating mark, said how she felt very deep feelings for h. and i never really wrote much about her relationship with mark either, so im confused on how you’ve thought that she didn’t have a problem with her feelings with mark. i feel like i explained how she was very unsure about mark actually. so the complete opposite lol...

regardless, you’ll see in part 5 that they both show and tell each other how they feel ☺️