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hotfrost · 3 years

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quick tpb and firestars quest rewrite bc i tried once and tumblr didn’t save (i haven’t read this series continuously in a while forgive me)

cinderpelt would be a warrior

brightpaw would never be named lostface and bluestar wouldn’t take her anger out on brightpaw

cloudpaw doesn’t become cloudtail until after brightpaw’s injury

swiftpaw still dies, but becomes swiftheart or swiftlight before dying

dustpelt is renamed dusttail after redtail (its ok if this doesn’t happen)

dustpelt is not the son of robinwing and fuzzypelt, he was an abandoned kit they found in the woods

sandstorm’s parents are redtail and runningwind (maybe adopted/surrogate)

brackenfur would be mentored by graystripe

stonefur wouldn’t be “executed” he would die saving stormpaw and featherpaw

runningwind wouldn’t die bc what was the point.

goldenflower beats fireheart’s ass at some point bc good for her

murderface jr and tawnykit get mentioned in forest of secrets by name and maybe their birth is mentioned/a big deal because they’re important characters????

ashpaw and fernpaw are apprenticed way earlier- fernpaw becomes the medicine cat, ashpaw gets runningwind as his mentor

tawnypaw gets sandstorm, bramblepaw gets fireheart still

rosetail gives fireheart a life instead of runningwind and they would actually talk abt her 💀

longtail becomes deputy after whitestorm dies (rip dad)

dustpelt and brackenfur are mates because they are no longer related (goodbye inc*st!!!!!!)

leafpool and squirrelflight are born at the end of the darkest hour and are apprentices by the time firestar’s quest comes around

mousefur gets spiderpaw, runningwind gets shrewpaw, brackenfur gets snowpaw (snowkit/snowface), thornclaw gets sorrelpaw, cinderpelt gets sootpaw, brightheart gets rainpaw, dustpelt gets squirrelpaw, and ferncloud gets leafpaw

willowpelt dies but she and graystripe have a much better dynamic (also i think graystripe’s father would be like... a riverclan warrior maybe?)

longtail remains deputy even after getting attacked by peter rabbit and doesn’t retire until he’s actually old (arc three)

bramblepaw becomes brambleflower ofc or maybe even brambleheart literally anything but brambleclaw

shrewpaw doesn’t die and gets a cool name like shrewclaw or something

dustpelt and brackenfur just adopt kits like a lot of kits because in my head they just adopt every parentless kit they can. hollykit and larchkit don’t exist but shrewclaw, spiderleg, and birchfall are all their children.

uhhh atm I can’t think of much else from the first arc that would change but here are some things i would definitely keep-

bones death it was the best scene of the whole series imagine getting k worded by a bunch of like ten year olds

sandfire that was good but i would make it graysandfire(maybe dust?) polyam and raven as well

#warrior cats #warriors #the prophecies begin #tpb #firestar #graystripe #sandstorm #brambleclaw #brambleflower #brackenfur #dustpelt #ferncloud #ashfur #runningwind #warriors rewrite #rewrite

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