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micechicken · 2 months
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I still think it's hilarious that according to my highschool creative writing class, the way to recognize something as my writing is to check how weird the names are lmao
And this was the excerpt I chose.
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⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ anything about ep 33 shadowsky it's so cool !!! and poetic!! I need to reread radio silence to get the referencss and ask specific qns so for now it's really general HAHA
and I also love how you write friendships and the dialogue in adventures in toronto, it's so !! organic!!
how do you come up with the specific topics aled and frances talk about/objects they pick up, because your descriptions are always so vivid!
HI HELLO TYSM!!!! :D
like i said in the end notes of ep 33: shadowsky, i wrote that one in the middle of the night. i was on a major writing kick that october, and my brain Would Not Stop churning out fanfic. why maintain a proper sleep schedule when you could write fic? 🤪
i’ve found that a lot of my favorite writing is done when i’m really tired for some reason?? who knows why lol
one of the reasons i wrote it was because i always wish we got more universe city excerpts in the book, especially the letters to february! i find sibling relationships in fiction to be super interesting (probably because i’m a sibling myself), so i wanted to explore aled and carys’s relationship in my fic. most of all i wanted to capture both aled’s longing for carys to come back and his resentment of her leaving
when it comes to the topics aled and frances talk about / the objects they pick up / the activities they do and all that, i often pull inspiration from my own life! a real-life game of mad libs (that i actually played by myself LMAO), a sleepover with my best friend, a school field trip that involved a train ride and a planetarium visit, a random memory of my cousin trying on a wonderfully ridiculous stocking cap as a joke in a thrift store a few years ago :)
some were inspired by things i saw on tumblr - a collection of wool sweaters with cows and sheep became the sheep jumper, and a pair of leather gloves that had interesting designs (and eyes i think? idk) became the radio gloves!
also thank you SO much for all your comments btw!!! they make me incredibly happy to see and i appreciate them a huge amount <3
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along-came-atsushi · 3 years
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55 Minutes Excerpt - Part 1
- Woman tries to seduce her boss. Then THAT happens!
Two tourists arrived at the port of the floating city Standard Island. One was a man robed in a black overcoat that covered his entire body, giving the impression he hated sunlight; he also had a black cloth wrapped around his mouth as if to hide his face. His eyes -- the only part of his body exposed to the air -- were unusually sharp. The other tourist was a young woman with shoulder-length honey-blond hair and glasses. She wore the kind of black suit befitting a distinguished white collar worker.
Please tell me I’m not the only one who needed like 300 years to realize that this was a description for Akutagawa and Higuchi. I really tried to imagine characters I don’t know, until it hit me.
And I really should’ve known, because just some lines before there was this interaction:
Dazai: Oh, btw Port Mafia is here, too.
Atsushi:
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Anyways, Higuchi and Akutagawa arrive at this island disguised as tourists, because the people they are looking for killed a Port Mafia ally.
A faint smile curled Akutagawa’s lips exposing the inside of his mouth, which was as red as blood.
I-is... is the inside of our mouths not supposed to be red? Is that abnormal? Akutagawa are you ok?? Am *I* okay???
I guess it’s supposed to be a hint that he actually HAS blood in his mouth, because lung disease.
“Ignorant fools.” Akutagawa’s smirk was colder than a snake’s,
Snakes can smile? No wait! They CAN:
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Which makes Akutagawa and Atsushi:
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his breath more repulsive than a demon’s.
Eeew, dude, use a toothbrush. But also -> lung disease.
Imagine Akutagawa always chewing bubble gum to cover up his blood breath.
“[...] The entrails squirting out of their bodies and their long, hopeless screams will set an example for all.”
NO MORE SPLATTER MOVIES FOR YOU, YOUNG MAN. Jesus.
“Nobody stands a chance before your skill, Akutagawa.” replied Higuchi fervently.
Never thought I’d ever say this word, but here we are: Simp! SIMP!!!
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“This island is considered to be one of the best resorts in the world. I believe it is important for us to make sure we are both physically and mentally sound, so how about a little sightseeing after the mission. Just the two of us.”
I am absolutely amazed at how bold Higuchi is. I never ever would’ve the courage to ask out my crush like this. Especially not if he was as unapproachable as Akutagawa is. Go, girl!
“No.” Akutagawa maintained his brisk pace.
Oooooof, right in the kokoro. Not even a “No, thanks”. Just a simple “No.”
“Akutagawa, sir, I also heard they were going to hold a masquerade ball tonight at the plaza. How about we go together?”
And she still tries. Higuchi must have nerves of steel. Also somehow the masquerade ball reminds me of that horrible movie. What was it called again. Ah, yes: Fifty Shades of Shit.
“No.” Akutagawa continued to swiftly walk ahead without even looking back.
Do you think Akutagawa KNOWS Higuchi has romantic interests in him, and he is so rough with her to keep her at arms length? Or is it that he just can’t grasp Higuchi’s emotions at all? I think it’s the latter.
“Sir, we need to have a base before we start our mission. As it happens, I already booked us a room at a top luxury hotel under a fake name.”
I just assume the fake names share the same family name, so that it appears as if they are married lol
“It’s only one room, though.”
And there was only one bed. And now go and write your smutty fanfic, AkuHigu fuckers!
Higuchi is so thirsty, man.
“How about taking a short rest there before heading out?”
Do you remember when Higuchi said to Atsushi: “Women like to be approached forcefully.” It’s funny, because she acts the same with her crush.
“Why would I do that?”
Akutagawa proceeded to walk straight down the stone path without even slowing down.
After all these attempts and plans, ultimately Higuchi got subordinate-zoned again.
Higuchi gazed at the vast blue sky with a look of revelation.
“...I figured...”
Poor girl. But don’t be upset. Akutagawa WILL get very close to you. Your neck more precisely. Just not in the way you had hoped he would.
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Will Higuchi get noticed by her senpai? Will Akutagawa ever slow down? Will they end up in the one room with one bed together? Stay tuned in for more stories from:
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alo-piss-trancy · 4 years
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11, 30, 32, 41 for the fanfic writer asks! - Nsfwitchy
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ASKING THESE AHHH 💛
THIS WAS REALLY FUN EVEN IF I HAD TO THINK FOR A WHILE ON SOME OF THEM
((I'm still open for these if anyone else wants to send some btw! I'm just slow af with answering haha but I'll get to them))
11: How do you come up with your fic titles?
Honestly? Part Song Titles/Lyrics and part 'This Line I Wrote Sounds Kinda Pretentious for a Piss Fic... I'm Definitely Gonna Use It'. Or just a general theme. Or a pun. Looking at my fic list... there's a lot of puns in titles.
Tbh I rarely title things until I'm actually on the ao3 posting page so I just scramble to pull one out of my ass XD There's no real method to my madness
30: Post a snippet from your current WIP without context.
"There. You've been graced with more attention from a Togami than a wretch like you ever deserved. I suggest you savour it while you- hrk!"
His words were abruptly cut off by a tightness around his throat, the grip clenching to restrict his airflow, little by little. While admittedly surprised, he didn't panic, merely studying what he could of the arm in his sightline. The metal tips of her scissors traced his Adam's apple, then slid up to dig into the flesh on the underside of his jaw. She didn't draw blood, but all it would take was a hint more pressure. Now that he was forced to lock eyes, she leaned in so that her breath flared in his face. 
"Kiss me like you mean it, pretty boy~" she commanded, leering down at him. She'd climbed onto the edge of the chair for better access, pressing their foreheads together. And, not-so coincidentally, pressed her left knee directly against his swollen abdomen. What breath she hadn't choked out of him was stolen in a pained wheeze, his vision spotting. Now, not only were his teeth swimming, his head was, and he loathed whatever noise of pleading had managed to escape his lips during his lack of focus. She removed both her hand and weapon from his neck, and he only took a moment to inhale before he shoved himself into as much of her as his binds would allow. Her chest, nearly flat enough to rival his own, pressed against him, and he blocked out her obnoxious sighs with a growl, tilting his head to smother her lips. 
32. Copy and paste your top three favorite lines/jokes/sentences you’ve ever written. What fics do they come from?
I swear any other time I'd have a whole list of my best stupid jokes and puns from my fics ready to fling at people but here I am, blanking as soon as I'm asked lmao. Isn't that always how it goes c': I had to dig through my ao3 and this is what I came up with, not sure if they're my ultimate faves bc I tend to pick favourites by the whole fic in general? But here we are!
I tend to write in run-ons and broken sentences so one of these is more like an excerpt? Because otherwise it wouldn't make sense lol
1. "Get down on your knees, my pet." the President purred, and that sound reminded her that she was going to be devoured today, body and soul, by this magnificent predator. The rarest of tigers, regal in its brutality in the way scarlet blood stained snowy fur. "Kneel for me." Her captor insisted, fangs sealed behind serene lips, and she kneeled, her bare knees caressed by a plush rug as she tilted her head back and bared her throat.
Yes. Like the blood of its prey, a messy, distilled part of her would taint Kirari Momobami, would stick with her long after this exchange ended and they parted ways. The President could bite into her, tear her apart in any way she saw fit and gorge upon her, but this would never be a one time affair. She was going to leave her mark before she succumbed...
( 'Freezerburn', a Kakegurui praise kink fic I wrote for a kinkmeme on dreamwidth. I'm a slut for animal imagery lmao )
2. "You can pretend you're some pillow princess, but you're a filthy fuckin' horndog..."
( 'Deny Me, Degrade Me, Desecrate Me', my trashy Good Girls smutfic which also has some choice gunplay excerpts I almost put here instead lol. I need to catch up on that show so I can write them again bc that ship is God Tier)
3. “What the hell do you think you’re doing?!?”
“Dragging you to the bathroom before you piss yourself like a big baby.” Alois deadpanned, blinking down at him. “Even though you’d probably deserve it.”
“You could have accomplished that without caressing me like a harlot. Get your hand off of my arse.”
('Desperate Danse', my beautiful piece of Cielois shenanigans c': I had so much fun with the dialogue exchanges in that fic lol. Annoying poor Ciel is a riot )
41. What’s your most popular fic (with the most notes on tumblr, most hits/kudos on ao3)?
This is actually an interesting question to me because the answer really does vary depending on what your definition of 'popular' is. Do you measure it by hits? Audience interaction? Platform? I had too much fun clicking around the stats page to analyze that so have answers for different criteria:
Hits: 'Getting Your Feet Wet'
Kudos: 'Tear You Apart'
Comment threads: 'Conundrums Lead to Collapse'
Tumblr Notes: 'Cops and Robbers' (and also those Akira drabbles like him in class or in Sojiro's car. Y'all are just absolute sluts for the p5 protag over here lol)
So what I'm getting from this is ao3 prefers my various femslash bs and tumblr wants the Nasty Crime Boi. Which is fine with me bc I love writing both 😎
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laracastrowrites · 6 years
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An Excerpt From An Interview
A lot of readers had a meltdown over The Darkling’s fate.
"That really doesn’t bother me. Occasionally I would get a tweet from somebody who’s like, ‘How come Alina and The Darkling didn’t end up together?’ I’m all for people who want to write fanfic, but there’s absolutely no way I would ever make a relationship that was, quite frankly abusive. People like to forget the fact that he tried to enslave her, tried to steal her power, and even if you put all those things aside, the idea that Alina would forge that kind of alliance with somebody who mutilated one of her friends…Alina has this team of people who had sacrificed so much to defeat this man, the idea that all of a sudden she was going to be, 'Never mind, he’s hot, let’s have fun.’ It was just unacceptable to me."
And.....
"If I wanted people to hate The Darkling there would’ve been many ways to do that, I could have him kill a kitten or something. It almost became this challenge where I was going to keep him as compelling, charismatic and attractive as possible because I don’t believe the people that are most dangerous to us are devoid of those qualities; they’re the people who enter our lives who are broken and beautiful, but are still bad news.”
She said all this with a straight face.
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I've read this specific one (and maybe that's why I dont search for them anymore neither read them lol).
So let's break this statement piece by piece, shall we?
First of all: look, Idk how things went at the time but like... when the interviwer says "the Darkling's fate" I think she means his death, right? So why the hell she made that about ships and shipping??? There was no reason for that! Anyways, this just shows how HER mind is so focused on that and whomst exactly would do anything for their(HER) ship to "work", right?...
And let's go to the part where she talks about Alarkling then: I love how she puts it in a way like she had nothing to do with how their relationship went down and like, she couldnt have done nothing about it lolol look, I know sometimes writers feel like their characters conduct the narrative and make decicions that you werent "expecting" and dont go with what you have planned at first, but with a piece like tgt where we clearly see that the author didnt respect the organic course of things, making all she could to stick with her planned couple that just worked inside of her own mind, I think we have a right to say that, if she wanted to, she could have changed the Darkling and Alina's dynamic and relationship (and I'm not even saying on a couple/romantic basis, she could have made them turn down friends or allies or whatever!, eventually) and she knows this damn well! So perhaps she should stop playing innocent on this, like it wasnt HER choice and it's all on the bad Darkling, a FICTIONAL being created by HER that is following HER script and what SHE'd planned !!!!! And no, people DONT forget all the crapy things he'd done, but since the first book readers had the hope he would turn around and redeem himself (at least on where he wronged Alina) cause the author put that hope in there, she did play with the idea of redemption within his character, then ofc some people would be sad and/or pissed and disappointed because she didn't delivered; you dont get to play and tease people with something without ever delivering it and expect people to be quiet about it and dont complain later, but well, she said that doesnt bother her anyway (which I dont believe it's true lol), right? So... And btw, Genya's torture was bullshit and ooc and gratutious (this interview just made me see that she REALLY did that just to make him irredeemable already) and it's ALL on her and it was her shittiest move in the whole trilogy (even more than Alina's fate), maybe she should think a little about why she needed to disfugure a female character that had already been raped and manipulated and used in order to further a villain's arc and put him into a hole he couldnt get out by doing an act based on...something(???) that didnt even fit in that character's motives and reasons and modus operandi, just saying... (self critique never killed anyone, you know, and in this case, she REALLY needed to think about it cause that was very problematic and harmful). And I have to lol everytime I see her talking about how the Darkling wanted to "steal" Alina's powers, omfg the irony ,,,,,,, should I remind her who exactly "stole" Alina's powers away by the end of the day ???? SHOULD I ?????? Spoiler alert, it wasnt the Darkling........... WHO'S THE VILLAIN NOW UH? WHO??? WHOMST ?????
And well, let's get back to Genya's case and the part where she says "Alina has this team of people who had sacrificed so much to defeat this man," I mean, if Alina isnt supposed to unit forces with shitty people who hurt her friends then why the fuck she would be on the King's side ????? Ok that in s&s Genya was on the Darkling's side, but it isn't like she didn't and couldnt see the King was shit too and Nikolai wasnt the first one in the throne's line of succession, so ???? Why exactly she would have to be on THEIR side??? And I'm not saying she should be on the Darkling's side either, ofc not, but the thing is (and it's other point that bothers me): she shouldnt be EXACTLY on the monarchy's side either! But if LB thought she must, then at least she could have seen its problems and be critical about them and could try to make a better Ravka by improving the govermnent system and making opposition to the Darkling at the same time. It bothers me that Alina never grew to have a political view and agenda when her own existence was very political! Something that the Darkling got it since the first time people tried to kill him, and he was way younger than Alina when that happened (but maybe she spent too much time living as an otkazatsya to get right away what meant to be a grisha in that world, luxury the Darkling didnt have, but still... after everything she went through, after she accepted herself as a powerful grisha, where people were still trying to use her and her powers from all sides, she should have gotten something out of there, she should have seen more clearly through, the only thing she had to do was using her fucking brains). Alina was just pushed through the narrative by people with their own purposes and agendas and she never grew to have one for herself (her purpose was based on urgencies created by people with agendas, for example: she wanted peace for Ravka, why? Because the Darkling and the Monarchy entered in a civil war; why was she staying by the Monarchy's side? Because the Darkling wanted to enslave her, so at least these people here arent trying to do the same (as long as she knew.......... except for the Apparat), so she was always reacting to the situations rather than acting and creating new ones based on her own purposes). Or maybe LB did this on purpose so she could justify Alina's resilience in losing her powers by the end of the trilogy (which doesnt, ofc). But then she lost the opportunity to create so many nice nuanced conversations about politics, oppression, privileges, power, religion, the ways of war, etc.; if Alina had been the opposite of the Darkling but still getting his point and being attracted by him and his ideas but still sticking on what she believed in and showing better ways than him to do things (I mean, how about Alina throwing on the Darkling's face that he said he was trying to end the war and create a better world for grishas beggining by enslaving and controling her, a fellow grisha, which was exactly what their oppressors did, so it was very contradictory and not by far the best shot, and it wouldnt be long lasting, I mean, I would've loved to see that! But maybe it was too dangerous... what if he'd listened to her, uh ??!?!?!?!!!!! what if he was convinced by her, uh ???!?!?!?!!! then they would have to be kind of on the same side, right? and omg! god forbid this from ever happening !!!!! 😒😒😒 ), anyways, it'd be much more nuanced and interesting, in my humble opinion...
I have more rants about the grishaverse concerning the political aspects and LB's bias choices but I wont get to it rn, that's it for today.
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nea-writes · 6 years
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do you have a goodreads page? is there a particular book(s) that inspired you in some way? like in your writing? (that book looks interesting btw, thanks much)
The book mentioned in the last post? Call me by your name by Andre Aciman! I did actually take some inspiration from the writing in that book because of how in love Elio is. Of everything in there, what stayed with me the longest was how infatuation, love, obsession, desire, twisted everything Elio saw. I guess any romance is like that, but the particular way Aciman wrote it was… both base and worldly. Not like “the stars in his eyes” but how little things that were otherwise normal or maybe even annoying, were, tainted by love, now beautiful and compelling. 
I don’t have a goodreads page, sorry!! I never thought I would need one lol. But other books that inspire me?
At least, writing-wise, it helps to narrow down. Less books and more authors, but Camus, Haruki Murakami, and Margaret Atwood for novels in general. Specific books would be A lover’s discourse by Roland Barthes (I thumb through it for inspiration when I get stuck), Clockwork Orange, No longer human by Osamu Dazai, and oh! Franz Kafka for sure. 
It’s a little hard to figure out what inspires my writing and what inspires me to write. There’s a difference between ‘oh, I’d love to write someone dealing with X situation’ and ‘I’d love to covey emotions/thoughts through actions like X author did’, you know? 
The writing that impresses me the most is one that’s subtle. Intuitive. It’s what I aspire to, so if I can catch it when I’m reading then I’ll definitely note it down and try to figure out how they did it. Did the pacing of the writing change the impact? The word choice, length, the way it sounds? 
My memory’s pretty poor though, so trying to remember specific excerpts or novels that do this escapes me. Of course, all I mentioned were published authors. There are tons of fanfic authors who write truly amazing pieces that I pour over, wondering how they did it. 
Now that I think about it, I can’t really say what’s inspired my writing style. I can say that I’m very easily influenced lol I sometimes re-read and break down writing so much that I emulate it and lose my own style, which can be pretty frustrating. 
But!!! Thank you for the ask ♥ It certainly got me thinking lol
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buildarocketboys · 7 years
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WIP Meme
Rules: Post the last sentence you wrote (fanfic/original/anything!) and tag as many people as there are words in the sentence.
I’ve been tagged in this by about three people ( @bathshebaeverdenes @flintsredhair and @bisexualpirateheart I think  - lmk if someone else tagged me lol i’ve not written much in a while so I’ve been late answering this meme) so I’m gonna post three excerpts.
First from my big bang fic for black sails:
“This is very good, Grace,” James said through a mouthful of potatoes. Thomas sniggered next to him.
“Thank you, sweetheart,” said Grace genially. James grinned at her.
(Grace is Thomas’s old nanny who they meet again in America)
From my mitmas texting fic that I decided to write more of yesterday:
He paused in what he was typing, and then made a decision, pressed send.
Love you xx
 Love you too! <3 <3 <3
 Honestly, what’s wrong with good old fashioned kisses?
 Caveman :P
Xxxxxxxxxxxx
(This is between Kitty and Tom btw. Also first part is here)
And finally, from the James’s birthday fic that I meant to post on my birthday but woopsss:
“Of course, sir.” He turns to James. “And who is this, may I ask?”
(Thomas takes James out for a midnight dinner for his birthday at a risqué restaurant in London...where there are a lot of...interestingly non-traditional-looking couples...)
Tagging: @cute-chamomile, @copper-toned, @bisexualpirateheart (again lol), @thefvckingwarship, @complaininginthedark, @lyledebeast
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t4194 · 7 years
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GIFT
Kuroko No Basuke — Tadatoshi Fujimaki Gift — t41g4 Please understand, if : Character in this fanfic could be very OOC, my grammar is very bad, errors of writing everywhere, plot is not clear and confusing, and various other mistakes. .. He had never seen that blue-haired man so busy for the rest of him life, even though they had decided to stay together for a rather long time—from the end of high school. But still, for Taiga to have Daiki is everything he needs in this world, because he is his world. Even so, in fact Taiga did not refuse when Daiki give his gift. It is not expensive. But Taiga is sure, he will remember the gift from Daiki for the rest of him life. .. Taiga was’n sure how much time the lazy man spent studying this, he really looked stunning in a tight old cowboy suit and hugged him so tightly, and Taiga would not lie if Daiki looked so hot right now. Him navy's hair was hidden inside a broad brown hat, while the man smelled of wood. Totally burn Taiga from inside. It was like Taiga wanted to wrap his arms around him all night long, and be in the strong arm's sleeves and comfortable thick muscles. Maybe he'll do it while they sleep. Because now Daiki looks very excited, and it seems like it will last for a few hours later. Seeing what is happening now, incomplete if it does not discuss everything from scratch. What else if you see how this morning Daiki is still asleep so soundly on their bed when Taiga went to work. And when Taiga came home he was startled by the outages of all the lights in their small apartment. Taiga thinks it has something to do with the damage and thinks of calling the electrician immediately, if Daiki did not light a candle in the middle of the room. The light shone on his strong face. Afterwards, Daiki lit another candle and made the room filled with candle light. The tantalizing scent came from the center of the table. A rather lavish banquet and many neatly arranged above it—which Taiga believes results Daiki delivery. At that Taiga could only frowned confused with the situation around them. Until Daiki starts turning on his music player. Excerpts of the guitar sounded later. And it feels like Taiga knows the song. Daiki leaned in with a hot, dangerous glance, making Taiga feel the hair on his neck stand up. He approached to close the door of their apartement, before hugging Taiga's waist from behind. They lightly follow the rhythm until Daiki sings the lyrics. — Si sabes que ya llevo un rato mirándote, Tengo que bailar contigo hoy His voice was hoarse and a little awkward, making Taiga unable to laugh at him. That means, Hey ~ it's completely different, Daiki never spoke Spanish before, and Taiga sure, he must be trying hard to do it. Perhaps he took Spanish lessons without Taiga knowing or maybe he studied independently, remembering if Daiki was really smart, his only fault was that he was very lazy. Taiga just know what Daiki wants to say through the lyrics. They rarely spend time together, even just to hug and kiss. Considering how they work. — Vi que tu mirada ya estaba llamándome... Muéstrame el camino que yo voy, oh... And the lyrics are not much better. It made him feel more embarrassed. How can a firefighter who returns with a sweaty body can be included in a calling category? And Taiga thinks it's sweet enough to say to someone who just got home from work. Then the music began to change a little more fun, and their body shake changed. Daiki twisted it until they faced each other, and whispered something to Taiga's ear while blowing his breath while his hand was still on Taiga's hip. — Tú, tú eres el imán y yo soy el metal Me voy acercando y voy armando el plan Sólo con pensarlo se acelera el pulso Oh, yeah... Daiki tapped his shoe on the floor and now his arms wrapped around Taiga's body. The eyes of the deep color of the ocean stared Taiga deep into his soul. And Taiga thinks they are really the right moment. — Ya, ya me está gustando más de lo normal... Todos mis sentidos van pidiendo más... Esto hay que tomarlo sin ningún apuro... Fix it back, until Taiga thinks he will fall. But Daiki caught it appropriately, until their position seemed to do a dance, maybe a tango or maybe a flamenco that Taiga thought. Although in the end not both. — Des-pa-cito Quiero respirar tu cuello despacito Deja que te diga cosas al oído Para que te acuerdes si no estás conmigo — Des-pa-cito Quiero desnudarte a besos despacito.. Firmo en las paredes de tu laberinto Y hacer de tu cuerpo todo un manuscrito Daiki threw a gentle smile at Taiga before kissing his forehead. Daiki thought he needed to praise himself for singing his lyrics appropriately while teasing Taiga. Then Daiki let Taiga out in the middle of the room and circled it while patting his hand on the air. Make Taiga laugh amused. — Quiero ver bailar tu pelo Quiero ser tu ritmo... Que le enseñes a mi boca Tus lugares favoritos Taiga smiled sheepishly before trying to get closer to Daiki, he thought he wanted to hide his face on a man neck. But Daiki just touched their noses, before retreating backward to finish the song. — Déjame sobrepasar tus zonas de peligro Hasta provocar tus gritos Y que olvides tu apellido Taiga saw a small fang sticking out of Daiki's thin lips and it made him furious to pinch his muscular arms. Daiki took a breath before he started singing the hard lyrics—which he practiced until he felt his tongue split open. — Si te pido un beso ven dámelo Yo sé que estás pensándolo Llevo tiempo intentándolo Mami, estoy dando y dándolo Sabes que tu corazón conmigo te hace bom bom Sabes que esa beba está buscando de mi bom bom Daiki signaled Taiga for him to come closer, before pulling the red-haired man to sway with him. — Ven prueba de mi boca para ver como te sabe Quiero, quiero, quiero ver cuánto amor a ti te cabe Yo no tengo prisa, yo me quiero dar el viaje Empecemos lento, después salvaje Taiga laughed a few times while Daiki screeched his forehead as he sang the lyrics. — Pasito a pasito, suave suavecito Nos vamos pegando, poquito a poquito Cuando tú me besas con esa destreza Veo que eres malicia con delicadeza Daiki makes funny movements by shaking his shoulders—or just Kagami who thinks so. Seeing how her effort to look romantic Taiga could not possibly not give him a short kip in him dark cheek. — Pasito a pasito, suave suavecito Nos vamos pegando, poquito a poquito Y es que esa belleza es un rompecabezas Pero pa' montarlo aquí tengo la pieza Now Daiki walked forward-backward as he shuffled his shoulders and flicked his hand. While Taiga does what he can. He never really danced before. But Taiga thinks Daiki is just as awkward as him too. — Des-pa-cito Quiero respirar tu cuello despacito Deja que te diga cosas al oído… Para que te acuerdes si no estás conmigo — Des-pa-cito, Quiero desnudarte a besos despacito Firmo en las paredes de tu laberinto Y hacer de tu cuerpo todo un manuscrito   Taiga laughed as Daiki hugged him and whispered the song's lyrics for Taiga to hear it. His warm breath tickled him. And they rocked while hugging tightly. Missed some lyrics that should be sung. Taiga thinks it's because Daiki is tired. That means talking in a language that is not a daily language would be difficult. — Des-pa-cito Vamos a hacerlo en una playa en Puerto Rico Hasta que las olas griten "¡Ay, Bendito!" Para que mi sello se quede contigo And it becomes the last lyrics that Daiki sung before he closes his show by force by stealing a deep and forceful kiss from Taiga. Make Taiga laugh in their kisses. "Why?" He asked with a pout while their music player still rang, buzzing the song quietly. "I just do not think you're going to sing in Spanish," Taiga replied as he kissed him in his dark blue hair. "My friend in the office says giving surprise to your partner who shows your feelings and a candlelight dinner will make your partner feel he is the luckiest person in the world." Taiga smiled "Of course I'm lucky, who else will see Aomine Daiki wearing Maji Burger's mascot in the middle of a basketball court to say its feelings, if not me." His dark cheeks flushed "Did I tell you not to talk about it anymore," he said angrily, while Taiga just laughed amused before kissing him again. "Feliz cumpleaños, querido. Sorry I have more time for work, I hope you will not take me off for that. " Taiga laughed "Even if I'm going to throw you away, I think it's because of your often annoying attitude." Daiki laughs before lifting his waist and turning Taiga in the air. Makes Taiga screaming afraid—just imagine, their weight and height are not much different. "I love you," Daiki said before kissing Taiga slowly. .. Fin .. Song: Luis Fonsi & Daddy Yankee - Despacito Well ~~ I do not really know this problem or how about the advice of Aomine friends #lol This is probably because I'm not experienced about it #cry I made this fanfic because I saw a video gymnastics on youtube using this song #dontlaugh and I think this song is more pleasant to hear my ears for a long time, it's a matter of taste ok! I hope you took the time to hear it, especially when reading this fanfic. Sorry for a lot of errors that may occur. I can not speak good and true Spanish and for English it's the same too #lol Thanks btw already read Feliz cumpleaños Taiga ~~~ Btw its to damn late~~~ sorry #slap
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