okay yeah in that case putting the infant in the poll is funny, but yeah it should have been crowfeather. idk if the poll maker just forgor or knew that a crowfeather vs brambleclaw poll matchup for most hated wc character would cause what's left of twitter to crumble, but yeah should have been crowfeather.
for whatever reason a large part of twitter is still fond of crowfeather and i got pushback from people when i said hitting your kid is Bad. trying to explain he's an abusive father is like pulling teeth on there so the radiation it would have unleashed is awful but i think crow would have lost right away and i would have gotten a sea of bad takes. bullet dodged but damage still taken.
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#111/309/579 Breezepelt Redesign (again bc i wanted to clean his design up a bit)
"The only reason we aren't killing the impostor is because the real Bramblestar might need his body one day. But his ghost hasn't been seen in nearly half a moon. And that means that his spirit might be gone. In that case, what are we waiting for?"
Son of Crowfeather and Nightcloud, brother of 2 unnamed siblings, half brother to Lionblaze, Hollyleaf and Jayfeather, mate of Heathertail, father of Smokehaze, Brindlewing, Appleshine and Woodsong. Apprentice of Whitetail, mentor of Boulderfur, Dark Forest apprentice of Brokenstar, Hawkfrost, Tigerstar, Thistleclaw and Shredtail.
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stop trying to slip crowfeather in as being 'not that bad' or simply 'flawed' parent to breezepelt. he is abusive, full stop. we see multiple scenes of crowfeather berating, belittling, and beating breezepelt as both an apprentice and an adult. he is not just 'distant' he hits him and treats him so cruelly literally all three protagonists comment on it. just because crow says 'i never hated you' once does not negate the abuse.
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RARARA SQUIRRELCROW PAGE AHAHAH
anyways I'm renaming Breezepelt to Hop(???) (I don't like the name Hoppelt so I'm stiiiiil thinkin...) (Might also change Lions name but idk) Jayf Holly and Hop still have a very similar relationship to canon, though it is a bit more... complicated? Crow did an Oakheart and gave Hopkit to Nightcloud who was mourning her recent litter (rip two unnamed kits) he claimed to have just found it by the horseplace but everyone kinda knew it was his even though he didn't claim him. Later as an apprentice/warrior he grows resentful of Crowfeather refusing to acknowledge him as his son, causing him to train in the dark forest like in canon. Jayf and Hop develop a strong rivalry in the DF, both being trained by Brokenstar, who encourages a violent rivalry between the two.
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The Power of 5 AU -
Moth flight never had kits, instead, she recieved a different prophecy from Micah, one that would not come to fruition in her lifetime, but that she would oversee in Starclan:
“5 cats will be born with the powers of the blazing star in their paws.”
Those Cats are obviously Lionblaze, Jayfeather, Hollyleaf, Ivypool, and Dovewing.
The 5 are both Mothleaf kits and Leafcrow kits, upon being born, Leafpool recieved the prophecy and her thought process was basically the same as Moth Flight’s, 5 clans = 5 cats, and she sends 4 of them on their way to the other clans.
Jayfeather stays in Thunderclan and is raised by Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw, but he is renamed “Sagesight”
Lionblaze is sent to Windclan and raised alongside Breezepelt by Nightcloud, his name is “Tansybreeze”
Dovewing is raised in Shadowclan by Tawnypelt and is renamed “Wisteriawing”
Ivypool is raised in Riverclan by Dawnflower (Minnowtail and Pebblefoot’s mother), and she becomes a medicine cat apprentice under Mothwing. She keeps her original name.
And Hollyleaf is sent all the way to Skyclan, where she is raised by Leafstar. She also keeps her original name.
I have alot of cool stuff planned for this AU, and hopefully i’ll get references out soon because i want to draw them.
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list of characters who we should hit with the gnc beam (this is my manifesto)
-breezepelt and heathertail. he is a shitty emo boy who wears five pounds of makeup and she is a welders apprentice
-lionblaze can serve cunt if you're not a fucking coward
-briarlight. she's butch4butch with dovewing
-flipclaw is a woman (male) to me. i have never read the broken code
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I know you talked about Crowfeather's abuse to Breezepelt, but are you keeping Nightcloud's physical abuse against Crowfeather? In all their arguments, Nightcloud is the only one who ever gets physical with Crow. In the books, she rakes her claws against him a few times drawing blood. If I had been young Breeze and had seen that it'd be one of the things that would make me do my best to be and stay in my mother's good graces. Yeah, my dad may smack me but he never cuts me, never leaves me open for death by infection.
When?
Have you read the books you're confidently citing right now? Or did you hear this from some amoeba and then didn't check it before coming into my house
POWER OF THREE:
The Sight: 13 mentions. Takes Breezepaw's side in a small verbal argument, then scolds him for xenophobia. Is scared her only child almost died and insists on carrying him alone. Upset when Leafpool makes a flirtatious comment to her husband, soothes two kids to sleep
Dark River: 4 mentions. Exists on a patrol and Leafpool is jealous of her.
Outcast: 1 mention. Nicely says goodbye to Crowfeather as he stares off into the distance thinking about Feathertail.
Eclipse: 1 mention. Takes part in the eclipse battle with the rest of WindClan.
Long Shadows: Unmentioned.
Sunrise: 4 mentions. Hears the reveal at the gathering and looks "bewildered and angry." Crowfeather tells her that he, "Has no kits other than Breezepelt" and she pins her ears against her head.
Was it here? In one of these 23 mentions across 6 books? PLEASE point out the "Cuts Me, Leaving Me Open For Death By Infection." I'm SO curious.
OMEN OF THE STARS:
The Fourth Apprentice: Unmentioned.
Fading Echoes: 1 mention. Thinks Dovepaw disguised her scent.
Night Whispers: 6 mentions. Argues with Crowfeather at Gatherings. Leafpool comes across a fight between Breezepelt and Lionblaze and pleads to Crowfeather, "How can you watch your sons fight?!"
Nightcloud jumps forward glaring, repeats that her husband has no kits other than Breezepelt. Leafpool jumps in front of a Breezepelt lunge. Crowfeather jumps in, grabs his son, and "throws him aside like prey" before bitterly mocking another love confession from Leafpool. Nightcloud drags Crowfeather off. Crowfeather turns on Nightcloud, hissing, and Breezepelt jumps between them and says, "leave my mother alone."
Warns them, "Next time, we'll shred you!" Later says something rude about RiverClan at a Gathering.
Sign of the Moon: Unmentioned.
The Forgotten Warrior: 2 mentions. Glares at Hollyleaf twice.
The Last Hope: 6 mentions. Is on a patrol that finds Jayfeather in a thornbush and glares at him. Then Crowfeather says it was all actually HER fault that Breezepelt turned out to be such a little brat.
Which one of these 9 MENTIONS ACROSS 6 BOOKS are we going for, today? Was it the part in Night Whispers? Is THAT where she Cuts His Life Into Pieces This Is Her Last Resort?
Let's play I-Spy 🔎! Highlight all the places Nightcloud "draws blood!"
Which of the following characters in this passage are bleeding? Is Crowfeather any of them 🤔? No?
Is it here? Is it this part? Which of these cats are bleeding? Is it Crowfeather🪶? Is it Lionblaze🦁? Is it beloved Character Actress Margot Martindale💃?
Oh? You mean to tell me that you were misrepresenting a cat dragging away another cat as "RAKING HER CLAWS AGAINST HIM DRAWING BLOOD AND LEAVING HIM OPEN FOR INFECTIONS TO DIE"?
In other words, a lie?
Pulling a big lever and sending you down into The Nightcloud Derangement Pit. I will be further woobifying her unencumbered. The Nightcloud Agenda will spread. Soon we will take the west coast.
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shadowsight and breezepelt meeting unexpectedly at a gathering. shadowsight and breezepelt bonding over surviving abuse as young apprentices. shadowsight and breezepelt realizing they were both the black sheep of their clans. shadowsight and breezepelt both being tricked into furthering the dark forest’s goals.
shadowsight and breezepelt becoming like brothers and always sitting next to each other at gatherings (til shadow has to go sit with the medics)
breezepelt as the big brother figure to this weird little healer guy
shadowsight as the little sibling to this formerly murderous windclan warrior
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