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#because her name is arashi narukami and if anything she wants to be called arashi-chan or naruko
mishkakagehishka · 2 months
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I just . Repeating "characters are tools" you end up erasing so much about arashi's character and motivations and interactions with other characters if you avoid using her pronouns aka avoid showing she's transgender. It's on the same level of frustration with the translators i had when i saw they had Mika speaking standard English, there's a LOT that gets lost if you don't show those little things.
#and sure maybe some things wouldn't matter bc - i don't read many knights stories so beyond what's mentioned ab arashi in stories i've read#like those featuring mika and such#so i can't say for her but i can say for mika - because a lot of it is touched upon in ! which isn't getting translated#mika talks about his accent and dialect and such the most in ! HOWEVER#you still have idol story 3 where he talks with Tsumugi about how people perceive him because of his accent and#about how he feels like he's letting people down by not conforming to the positive stereotypes associated with his speech#and if you make him speak the standard language you completely lose that layer#if you erase the fact that Arashi is transgender you completely lose that layer of her characterisation and motivations#she literally has a story in !! where she talks about how much it hurts her to always be cast as the male character#in princess-knight themed shoots when all she wants to be is the princess#but how are you gonna get the full context of that if the story refuses to give you the context you had in the original#ie. that Arashi uses the (hyper)feminine ''atashi'' pronoun and that her speech pattern is one associated with young women#in ! she has a line where she asks i believe koga to not use the slur used for effeminate/gay men for her#because her name is arashi narukami and if anything she wants to be called arashi-chan or naruko#which is also additional context lost if you don't translate it right - the -ko suffix in a name is traditionally feminine#i'm no expert either but i'm a writer and i plan on working as a translator#and these are things that - if lost in translation - will impact your understanding of the entire story and/or character#whether it will have you completely misunderstanding it or just being confused is irrelevant but it's like#in my opinion as a translator it's your duty to translate even the subtext#if you need to show that arashi is transgender you don't need to say it (even tho#she did once say ''i will never be the woman i want to be'' iirc and#i do have recollection of mika telling her ''i don't really get it but you're a girl right?'')#but you should give us the same chance to come to the same conclusions which is to say. translate naruko to the best of your abilities.#idfk Nary maybe ? i feel like the -y ending is usually diminutive rather than feminine but.#something to that tune. and give her a girly speech pattern. it exists in english too.#slang can be associated with gender too#like you guys get it right.
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mee-goweng · 2 years
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LATE pt. 2 - 🧸🥊
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Warning: blood, mention of murder, stabbing, mention of shooting Word count: 1,3k words
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Years passed, and Mika graduated. He managed to become a detective. And Nami was there, witnessing his process from zero. Helping him in the process.
"Nami-chan, can I bring my friend?"
"Sure."
Another mistake she made. Let Mika's friends come over.
She ran the flower shop for who knows how many years, and to be honest, it felt lonely. Having Mika visit her almost daily, she started to forget the feeling of loneliness. And when Mika brought over his friend, the emotion of loneliness was gone and replaced with such a warm feeling.
She started to get along with his friend. Especially the one who came with him for the first time, Narukami Arashi. Both of them got along very well. Aside from Arashi, Yuuki Makoto and Saegusa Ibara also got along with her.
And then HiMERU. A man who is a mystery to her. She often met with him but barely knew anything about him besides his name and occupation. His deduction skill was top-tier, and she felt intimidated. She wanted to tell Mika that she was unconfrontable with HiMERU but looking at how close they were, made Nami cancel the intention.
It was another mistake that she didn't do anything about HiMERU.
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"Nami-chan," He called softly. "Are ya busy for tomorrow?"
Nami shook her head. "No, why?"
Mika played with his finger, looking down because he was too shy to face her. "Nnn… yanno, tomorrow's m'birthday… I want t'spend it with ya. I want t'be with Nami-chan all day tomorrow, so…"
"Oh…" She scratched her not-itchy neck nervously. "I mean, yeah, sure. I don't have anything to do tomorrow, so why not?"
Mika hummed. "Oh, 'kay… Um…"
"Anything else?"
"Can I get a hug as an early gift…?" He asked so politely.
Nami struggled to hold back her smile. She immediately looked away, covering half of her face.
So cute…
Without saying anything, she hugged the younger one. She patted Mika's head before pulling away. "There you go. I'll give you more hugs tomorrow, yeah?"
Mika, with pinkish cheeks, nodded shyly. "Thanks, Nami-chan ♪ See ya tomorrow."
And with that said, Mika walked away from her porch. She waved at him until his figure was gone from her sight. She exhaled deeply before going inside, then closed the door behind her, looking at the living room where one guest was still there.
"So, HiMERU, what do you want?" She asked, approaching the blue-haired male who was busy drinking his tea.
"Ah, before that, can HiMERU get a refill?"
Nami just hummed in response. She went to the kitchen and got the boiling pot from the stove. She then went back to the living room then refilled HiMERU's cup.
"What were you wanted to say earlier before Mika came?"
HiMERU picked up his cup. "Nami-san, what's your thought about Kagehira-san?"
Nami side-glanced at the blue-haired male. "He's a nice and sweet one. He's a hard worker too. Sometimes, he pushed himself too hard. That kid needs a decent rest, to be honest."
HiMERU hummed, agreeing with her statements. "Then, do you love him?"
His second question made Nami perplexed. "Love is a strong word. I can't say I love him, but I care about him. If possible, I try to avoid hurting him in any way possible. Why do you ask?"
There was a long silence before HiMERU replied. "Nami-san, your words somehow contradict your actions. Don't you feel guilty?"
Nami, who stood slightly behind him, stopped her movement. She was caught off guard by HiMERU's words.
"As someone who murdered his family by herself. Nami-san, do you know how hard he's trying to find his parents' murderer?"
Nami scoffed. "What? Where the fuck does this come from? That's a heavy accusation, HiMERU."
Without looking back at her, HiMERU replied calmly. "It's pretty easy, Nami-san. You blew your own cover." Nami didn't answer. "To think Kagehira-san's very fond of you… Don't you think that's-"
A loud thud interrupted his speech. Nami hit his head with the hot pot in her hand, causing him to be unconscious in one hit. Her breathing was ragged as she tried her best to not kill the man in front of her with one strike.
Fuck… This is bad…
She took a few steps away from the unconscious body and then realized a sharp pain on her side. She checked it and saw a pocket knife stabbed right into her side. The cut was shallow, but it still hurt. "This bastard… predicted everything, huh? How scary."
She pulled out the knife immediately and then threw it away.
I have to leave this place.
Nami went to grab her jacket and left her house, not caring about her bleeding abdomen and the people who gave her weird stares. She managed to get to the train station even in limping state. When she was about to get on the last train, she saw the clock.
It's almost midnight…
And right at that moment, she remembered Mika's birthday. She thought about it for a while before deciding. So what did she do? Making another mistake. She went to Mika's place.
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Mika woke up in the middle of the night after hearing his front door loudly banging. He got up from his bed and went to the front door. Mika didn't bother to peek from the peephole. He went to open the door right away, and when he was about to cast out the unwanted guest, he was surprised to see a familiar face on his front door.
"Nami-chan? What yer doin' 'ere?"
Nami fell on him after he asked. Her breathing was ragged, and Mika had no idea what to do. Mika pulled away to see her face clearly. It was a total mess.
"Nami-chan, what happened!?"
Nami tried to catch her breath before answering. "What time is it?"
Mika was confused. "W-what?"
"What time is it? Just answer it!"
Mika flinched after Nami snapped at him. He looked back inside and saw the nearest clock. "P-past midnight."
Mika turned back to her, and Nami started calming down.
"Glad I made it." She said, making the younger one confused. Nami grabbed him by his face, holding it gently with her shaky hands. "Mika, sorry. I have plans for today, so I'll say it here."
Mika didn't say anything. He was more worried and terrified about why her hands were wet and smelled rusty, like blood.
"Mika, happy birthday." She exhaled deeply before continuing. "Sorry, I-."
Before she finished her sentence, her body fell to him like a lifeless body.
"Huh? What 'r ya tryin' t'say, Nami-chan?"
Mika tried to shake her body, but nothing happened. He tried it a few times before realizing a red puddle had formed around him. He was horrified the moment he saw her head bleeding.
She got shot…! B-but, when!?
"N-no… Nami-chan…? C'mon, wake up." Mika's hands were beyond shaking.
Mika tried to shake her body again, hoping the older one was just pranking him.
"Nami-chan, yer just prankin' me, right?" He asked with such a broken voice. "Nami-chan, we have plans for today, right? We're goin' to spend today together, right? I even made plans for today, an' yer death not in it…"
Mika tightly hugged the older one, crying on her shoulder. He chanted words about how he wanted to spend his birthday with her all day and be around her every time. He ignored the red liquid that spattered around.
"Kagehira!"
When HiMERU arrived, he was late. Nami's dead body was in Mika's embrace. He immediately noticed that she got shot. HiMERU clicked his tongue and then looked around, trying to locate the sniper. His plan to make Nami repent of her sin was ruined. There was a chance to save her and improve her life, but she made too many mistakes.
And the last one got her killed right in front of Mika.
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