#(one scene needs to be added for thematic relevance and i gotta keep it short then i gotta redraft one scene to have better dialogue-
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#ramblings of a lunatic#why!!!is!!!writing!!!so!!!difficult!!!rn!!!!!!!!!#im being VERY brave about it but still#its fine its fine im almost done with the intro to ep 3 (gonna finish the base of the scene today b4 tweaking and planning the part tomorr)#*tomorrow#well maybe not tomorrow. i have to be up early tomorrow. but u get the idea#and THEN when i have the opening all donezo i get to go redraft episode 1 to my liking (theres like. 3-ish? changes by scene count?-#-and probably just dialogue/characterization tweaks across the board. as much as i wanna im leaving the actual plot points in tact-#-bc if i dont i'll be here until i turn to stone!)#and THEN i get to do an actual redraft/iron-over of episode 2#(one scene needs to be added for thematic relevance and i gotta keep it short then i gotta redraft one scene to have better dialogue-#-then i gotta fix up some ending bits and add a better thesis statement to the penultimate scene-#-and THEN i gotta redraft the very last scene so it seques better into episode 3!)#and when all thats done then im gonna try and knuckle down for the next few months to get ep 3 done#aiming for late december deadline...we'll see what happens#u guys hold me to that. if it's jan 1st and theres no 3rd enterprise script feel free to send me anon hate /hj
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