@spadez1 it gets a bit cluttered at the end compared to the original
(dunmeshi spoilers below)
original:
volume release:
IMO, having the bodies strewn around like that made the scene cluttered. i think itll be fixed by adding a shade or something to seperate the ground and the characters
the ending of the manga changed so much in the volume release, i wonder which version theyll use...
like, i tried saying the words out loud, it matches most of the lip flaps the characters make, and they flow so well that it doesnt sound awkward at all