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𝗉𝖾𝗋𝗌𝖾𝗉𝗁ℴ𝗇𝖾'𝓼 𝗀𝗅𝗂𝗆𝗉𝗌𝖾 𝖻𝖾𝗒𝗈𝗇𝖽 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝗇𝖾𝓉𝒽𝖾𝗋, 𝗂𝗇𝗍𝗈 𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝖺𝗀𝗈𝗇𝗒 𝗈𝖿 𝖻𝗅𝗂𝗌𝗌;
𝗍𝗁𝖾 𝒷𝖾𝖺𝗎𝓉𝗂𝖿𝗎𝗅 𝖺𝗇𝖽 𝖽𝖺𝗆𝗇𝖾𝖽, 𝒜𝗉𝗁𝗋𝗈𝖽𝗂𝗍𝖾'𝗌 𝗋𝗈𝗌𝖾𝗌—
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5 editor’s secrets to help you write like a pro
1. Sentences can only do one thing at a time.
Have you ever heard a four-year-old run out of breath before she can finish her thought? I edit a lot of sentences that work the same way. You need a noun, you need a verb, you might need an object. Give some serious thought to stopping right there.
Sentences are building blocks, not bungee cords; they’re not meant to be stretched to the limit. I’m not saying you necessarily want a Hemingway-esque series of clipped short sentences, but most writers benefit from dividing their longest sentences into shorter, more muscular ones.
2. Paragraphs can only do one thing at a time.
A paragraph supports a single idea. Construct complex arguments by combining simple ideas that follow logically. Every time you address a new idea, add a line break. Short paragraphs are the most readable; few should be more than three or four sentences long. This is more important if you’re writing for the Web.
3. Look closely at -ing
Nouns ending in -ing are fine. (Strong writing, IT consulting, great fishing.) But constructions like “I am running,” “a forum for building consensus,” or “The new team will be managing” are inherently weak. Rewrite them to “I run,” “a forum to build consensus,” and “the team will manage.” You’re on the right track when the rewrite has fewer words (see below).
(If for some insane reason you want to get all geeky about this, you can read the Wikipedia article on gerunds and present participles. But you don’t have to know the underlying grammatical rules to make this work. Rewrite -ing when you can, and your writing will grow muscles you didn’t know it had.)
4. Omit unnecessary words.
I know we all heard this in high school, but we weren’t listening. (Mostly because it’s hard.) It’s doubly hard when you’re editing your own writing—we put all that work into getting words onto the page, and by god we need a damned good reason to get rid of them.
Here’s your damned good reason: extra words drain life from your work. The fewer words used to express an idea, the more punch it has. Therefore:
Summer months
Regional level
The entire country
On a daily basis (usually best rewritten to “every day”)
She knew that it was good.
Very
(I just caught one above: four-year-old little girl)
You can nearly always improve sentences by rewriting them in fewer words.
5. Reframe 90% of the passive voice.
French speakers consider an elegantly managed passive voice to be the height of refinement. But here in the good old U.S. (or Australia, Great Britain, etc.), we value action. We do things is inherently more interesting than Things are done by us. Passive voicemuddies your writing; when the actor is hidden, the action makes less sense.
Bonus: Use spell-check
There’s no excuse for teh in anything more formal than a Twitter tweet.
Also, “a lot” and “all right” are always spelled as two words. You can trust me, I’m an editor.
Easy reading is damned hard writing.
~ Nathaniel Hawthorne
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hihiii i js wanted to say that i absolutely love ur work and i have since 2020!! i was also wondering if you'd like to be moots >_<
hiii kaia! nice to meet you, im so glad to know you have been loving my work >< for so long !! ofc i'd love to be moots with you but just a heads up im currently not that actively interacting so i hope you understand if i seem distant :(
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i just put together some random pics i liked but now it looks so pretty, i love it too much
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when are we going to talk about the beginning of so long london sounding like church bells ringing at a wedding and the end of so long london sounds much slower and drawn out like church bells at a funeral
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finally made it to ninie’s pinned ><
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⋆ 𝒏𝒊𝒏𝒊𝒆 : yes yes jiji has made it to the list >< !
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the header is u coded ><
⋆ 𝒏𝒊𝒏𝒊𝒆 : what do you mean? it is me!
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I JUST REALISED IM ON YOUR NAVI⁉️‼️
me when you Make me feel Special✨ (by twice)
yes you are .. my love how can you not :3 you indeed are my special girl you gotta be everywhere!
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“Trust yourself. You have survived a lot. And you will survive whatever is coming.”
— Unknown
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i was wondering where u were cuz normally i would always see u on my feed D:
take ur time yeonieee ☹️ p.s ilysmmm 🎀💌
thank you so much for the concern love, it makes me happy to know i pop up on your dash regularly. i'll be back to it before you know! lots of love to you too <33
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001. jungkook, bts
002. jungwon, enhypen
003. yeonjun, txt
004. soobin, txt
005. juyeon, the boyz
tagging, @pockettwinzz @alvojake @jjunae @luvhyun3 @jungqkook @ctrlemis @enhalpy @koishua @boyfhee @heelvsted @heesbaby @cornenhapovs @okwonyo @leaderwon @tyunni @stariekis @lheebra @lilyuwon @theyluvvaubery @fakeuwus @jaylaxies @moon7jay @sserasin @sparklovespink @hooniehon @pprodsuga @lilmashae @riftanswhore @gardenwons @nyukyujs @atrirose @sainns @stwrjvke @kareyuns @sjyuns (no pressure!)+ anyone who wants to do this just reblog from me > 3 < !
tag game • your top 5 ult biases
heeseung — enhypen
wonyoung — ive
yunjin — lesserafim
yeonjun — txt
giselle — aespa & yves — ex loona
tagging 💭 @boyfhee @okwons @soov @urszn @atrirose @weoris @tyunni @okwonyo @hoonvrs @sainns @naespas @jjunae @haknom @flwoie @lilacnini @wvnkoi @wonryllis @bywons @hanniluvi @yeokii @byhees @blisym @bambisite @copyhanni
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15 QUESTIONS, 15 FRIENDS
01. are you named after anyone? no i don't think so.
02. when was the last time you cried? roughly an hour ago.
03. what sports do you play/have you played? badminton and that's all i remember.
04. what’s the first thing you notice about other people? their vibe and their smile. i rely strongly on my vibe check spidey tingles. and someone's smile is the one thing i really love to admire. cute smile, pretty smile, crooked smile, gummy smile, awkward smile, wide smile, toothy smile, sad smile, happy smile, all smiles i love!
05. what’s your eye color? dark brown.
06. scary movies or happy endings? happy solely because i get nightmares after watching scary ones.
07. do you have kids? no, im just twenty.
08. do you have any pets? no, but i'd love to have one.
09. what are your hobbies? reading, writing, sleeping and listening to music.
10. where were you born? india.
11. how tall are you? 158 cm, only 5'2 unfortunately.
12. favorite subject in school? english lit, even though the plays, prose and poetries kicked my ass.
13. do you use sarcasm? yes i do, quite often.
14. any talents? i don't think i have any proper talent, but like i remember things quick and word to word even if i don't intend to for some reason.
15. dream job? tax auditor or internal auditor.
tagged by, haze @pockettwinzz & kayla @alvojake tagging moots, @jjunae @luvhyun3 @jungqkook @ctrlemis @enhalpy @koishua @boyfhee @heelvsted @heesbaby @cornenhapovs @okwonyo @leaderwon @tyunni @stariekis @lheebra @isoobie @lilyuwon @theyluvvaubery @fakeuwus @jaylaxies @moon7jay @sserasin @sparklovespink @hooniehon @pprodsuga @lilmashae @riftanswhore @gardenwons @nyukyujs @atrirose @sainns @stwrjvke @kareyuns @sjyuns (no pressure!)+ anyone who wants to do this just reblog from me > 3 < !
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i would really appreciate it if people do not mention me on posts only to remove it later. if you mention, stick to it. i might not reply straight away but i see everything. such behavior only ruins the image of you in my regards and upsets me. if you do not find my blog or me worth the mention do not do it from the very beginning, i'll appreciate that more than being mentioned only to be edited and removed later on.
and once again i'd like to state the age dni on my blog, i post suggestive and nsfw besides sfw and a lot of my works are not suitable for early teens (13-14) and pre-teens (<13) might i add if it's not obvious already. i am utterly not comfortable with people below 15 interacting with me or my works. please kindly understand my stance on this, i will in no way be able to stop one from consuming what they want to but i will block you if i find you interacting with my stuff despite being below my dni.
i also believe tumblr is not a space for anyone below 14, this is not a protected platform, one can be exposed to a lot of things not appropriate for their age no matter how much they filter. if you are below such age, i would strongly recommend you to reconsider your decision to be here and get off the site. this is not the age for such things.
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“Being raised in an unstable household makes you understand that the world doesn’t exist to accommodate you, which… is something a lot of people struggle to understand well into their adulthood. It makes you realize how quickly a situation can shift, how danger really is everywhere. But crises when they occur, do not catch you off guard; you have never believed you lived under a shelter of some essential benevolence. And an unstable childhood makes you appreciate calmness and not crave excitement.”
— Curtis Sittenfeld
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𓈒ㅤ𑁯 YOU KNOW I WANT YOU, ! ˚ യ
is here in your perfect eyes, they're all i can see, just know that these things will never change for us at all. would you lie with me and just forget the world?
lee heeseung with fem!reader in the city of love. ⋆ ARCHIVE? g. fluff, s2l, wordcnt. 550 chasing cars; snow patrol
ROCK BAND FRONTMAN heeseung who also happens to be your NEXT DOOR NEIGHBOUR, stumbling into you the first time when you're moving your amazon packages you accidentally ordered to his apartment number. caught right in the middle of picking up the last box, your pretty eyes looking up at him all wide and surprised.
like a little bunny caught stealing berries— he's hooked right from the beginning.
"hey, i'm heeseung," ordering his packages to your door so he can start a little something, to know your name, to know what your voice sounds like. to let you know you he is open to talk to you given any chance.
always trying to find opportunities to bump into you, looking through the peephole whenever he's home to see if you'd head out, ready with either 'taking out the trash' or 'going out for groceries' he's so desperate to get close to you, always offering to help you out with anything and everything. sometimes calling you over to listen to a new draft or to have a taste of the new recipe he tried. it shows on his face, just how he feels. and he doesn't mind it, he wants you to know; it's not a secret he tries to hide.
"it's easy, i can teach you," offering to teach you how to play the guitar when you awe over his skills. the thought of having his hands over yours, guiding them to hit the strings right, his face right next to yours, cheeks touching; it was a step closer.
slow and steady was his plan.
but once he knew of how you'd been here only for a one year work program, he realizes there isn't enough time to take it slow. and from then on he's actively pursuing you. asking you out on dates, even though he doesn't specifically tell you it's a date, the things he takes you out for are obvious enough. expensive restaurants and famous bakeries, pretty parks and romantic plays, boating picnics and city tours to show you all the places he'd bring you to every weekend.
waiting right outside the building with breakfast, in the morning when you leave for work to walk with you and drop you off. sometimes he'd wait outside your door but after you told him he doesn't need to do so much for you, he stubbornly opted to wait downstairs, telling you he's heading to work too. his studio on the other side and his 'work' starting whenever he wants it to.
sometimes he would ask you to come over for help because he can't write anything and having you close gives him inspiration. sitting with you out in the balcony, coffee mugs in hand while he makes you laugh, your pretty little smile flooding his mind with hearts and fuzzy feelings.
sending flowers to your workplace at lunch along with little desserts and sweet little notes telling you he'll keep trying until the end.
slowly as you accept him and his love, he'd invite you to his shows, giving you vip passes for backstage so you can be with before and after he's on stage. dedicating songs to a special someone and talking about everything he loves about you, he's smitten; wondering what he'd do when the year is over.
taglist ( open. ) @kangseulgithegreat @s00buwu @lilyuwon @pockyyasii @nctislifue @ashtxrie @miniature-tragedy @jayujus @brachives @thoughtsmeander2tumblingblindly @eeunoia @nxzz-skz @shawnyle @potato0579 @enhastolemyheart @belowbun @ro-diaries @ms-no1kpopstan @aaa-sia @okwonyo
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You can love someone and still choose to say goodbye to them. You can miss someone every day and still be glad they are no longer in your life.
#comfort. (づ￣ ³￣)づ#in a state of constantly missing the good times with my toxic ex childhood bsf#10years tgt and now we're strangers ..#gonna be almost 5yrs since we last talked
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𓈒ㅤ𑁯 YOU KNOW I WANT YOU, ! ˚ യ
is here in your perfect eyes, they're all i can see, just know that these things will never change for us at all. would you lie with me and just forget the world?
lee heeseung with fem!reader in the city of love. ⋆ ARCHIVE? g. fluff, s2l, wordcnt. 550 chasing cars; snow patrol
ROCK BAND FRONTMAN heeseung who also happens to be your NEXT DOOR NEIGHBOUR, stumbling into you the first time when you're moving your amazon packages you accidentally ordered to his apartment number. caught right in the middle of picking up the last box, your pretty eyes looking up at him all wide and surprised.
like a little bunny caught stealing berries— he's hooked right from the beginning.
"hey, i'm heeseung," ordering his packages to your door so he can start a little something, to know your name, to know what your voice sounds like. to let you know you he is open to talk to you given any chance.
always trying to find opportunities to bump into you, looking through the peephole whenever he's home to see if you'd head out, ready with either 'taking out the trash' or 'going out for groceries' he's so desperate to get close to you, always offering to help you out with anything and everything. sometimes calling you over to listen to a new draft or to have a taste of the new recipe he tried. it shows on his face, just how he feels. and he doesn't mind it, he wants you to know; it's not a secret he tries to hide.
"it's easy, i can teach you," offering to teach you how to play the guitar when you awe over his skills. the thought of having his hands over yours, guiding them to hit the strings right, his face right next to yours, cheeks touching; it was a step closer.
slow and steady was his plan.
but once he knew of how you'd been here only for a one year work program, he realizes there isn't enough time to take it slow. and from then on he's actively pursuing you. asking you out on dates, even though he doesn't specifically tell you it's a date, the things he takes you out for are obvious enough. expensive restaurants and famous bakeries, pretty parks and romantic plays, boating picnics and city tours to show you all the places he'd bring you to every weekend.
waiting right outside the building with breakfast, in the morning when you leave for work to walk with you and drop you off. sometimes he'd wait outside your door but after you told him he doesn't need to do so much for you, he stubbornly opted to wait downstairs, telling you he's heading to work too. his studio on the other side and his 'work' starting whenever he wants it to.
sometimes he would ask you to come over for help because he can't write anything and having you close gives him inspiration. sitting with you out in the balcony, coffee mugs in hand while he makes you laugh, your pretty little smile flooding his mind with hearts and fuzzy feelings.
sending flowers to your workplace at lunch along with little desserts and sweet little notes telling you he'll keep trying until the end.
slowly as you accept him and his love, he'd invite you to his shows, giving you vip passes for backstage so you can be with before and after he's on stage. dedicating songs to a special someone and talking about everything he loves about you, he's smitten; wondering what he'd do when the year is over.
taglist ( open. ) @kangseulgithegreat @s00buwu @lilyuwon @pockyyasii @nctislifue @ashtxrie @miniature-tragedy @jayujus @brachives @thoughtsmeander2tumblingblindly @eeunoia @nxzz-skz @shawnyle @potato0579 @enhastolemyheart @belowbun @ro-diaries @ms-no1kpopstan @aaa-sia @okwonyo
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𓈒ㅤ𑁯 YOU KNOW I WANT YOU, ! ˚ യ
is here in your perfect eyes, they're all i can see, just know that these things will never change for us at all. would you lie with me and just forget the world?
lee heeseung with fem!reader in the city of love. ⋆ ARCHIVE? g. fluff, s2l, wordcnt. 550 chasing cars; snow patrol
ROCK BAND FRONTMAN heeseung who also happens to be your NEXT DOOR NEIGHBOUR, stumbling into you the first time when you're moving your amazon packages you accidentally ordered to his apartment number. caught right in the middle of picking up the last box, your pretty eyes looking up at him all wide and surprised.
like a little bunny caught stealing berries— he's hooked right from the beginning.
"hey, i'm heeseung," ordering his packages to your door so he can start a little something, to know your name, to know what your voice sounds like. to let you know you he is open to talk to you given any chance.
always trying to find opportunities to bump into you, looking through the peephole whenever he's home to see if you'd head out, ready with either 'taking out the trash' or 'going out for groceries' he's so desperate to get close to you, always offering to help you out with anything and everything. sometimes calling you over to listen to a new draft or to have a taste of the new recipe he tried. it shows on his face, just how he feels. and he doesn't mind it, he wants you to know; it's not a secret he tries to hide.
"it's easy, i can teach you," offering to teach you how to play the guitar when you awe over his skills. the thought of having his hands over yours, guiding them to hit the strings right, his face right next to yours, cheeks touching; it was a step closer.
slow and steady was his plan.
but once he knew of how you'd been here only for a one year work program, he realizes there isn't enough time to take it slow. and from then on he's actively pursuing you. asking you out on dates, even though he doesn't specifically tell you it's a date, the things he takes you out for are obvious enough. expensive restaurants and famous bakeries, pretty parks and romantic plays, boating picnics and city tours to show you all the places he'd bring you to every weekend.
waiting right outside the building with breakfast, in the morning when you leave for work to walk with you and drop you off. sometimes he'd wait outside your door but after you told him he doesn't need to do so much for you, he stubbornly opted to wait downstairs, telling you he's heading to work too. his studio on the other side and his 'work' starting whenever he wants it to.
sometimes he would ask you to come over for help because he can't write anything and having you close gives him inspiration. sitting with you out in the balcony, coffee mugs in hand while he makes you laugh, your pretty little smile flooding his mind with hearts and fuzzy feelings.
sending flowers to your workplace at lunch along with little desserts and sweet little notes telling you he'll keep trying until the end.
slowly as you accept him and his love, he'd invite you to his shows, giving you vip passes for backstage so you can be with before and after he's on stage. dedicating songs to a special someone and talking about everything he loves about you, he's smitten; wondering what he'd do when the year is over.
taglist ( open. ) @kangseulgithegreat @s00buwu @lilyuwon @pockyyasii @nctislifue @ashtxrie @miniature-tragedy @jayujus @brachives @thoughtsmeander2tumblingblindly @eeunoia @nxzz-skz @shawnyle @potato0579 @enhastolemyheart @belowbun @ro-diaries @ms-no1kpopstan @aaa-sia @okwonyo
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