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(PSA)Racism & Ableism. Typical. | Trident Business Review
First off I want to talk about the creators of the series.
I've had nothing but poor interactions with these guys. the second I was active, trying to fit in and be funny, I could clearly tell they didn't like me
the creator, Mark, wanted me to show my face to him, saying I type like a kid. Then he banned me
After a bit where I was admittedly being kind of an asshole to them, I was allowed back in. Before this I joked about people not liking me always end up as bad people one way or another, like they're pedophiles or they're racist(keep that in mind)
Mark seemed to freak out, going into one of our servers and starts defending himself... even though I told no one, and I was just joking. Then I'm allowed back in the server.
I read his defense, and I jokingly call them ableist for the things his friends said about me, and he backtracked, saying they weren't using autistic as an insult(keep this in mind for later as well)
And just today, I was doing my usual shtick, sending unfunny gifs and saying random shit, and the cast are being particularly antagonistic towards me, and then...
they call me a vegetable, even though I've told Mark that I'm autistic. So he and his friends should already be aware by now.
I bring this up to Mark, and he just says it's the type of insults they use. It's just their type of humor. Then....
...Yeah, they're racist too.
to sum it all up: The creators of Trident Business are racist, ableist assholes :D. Why can't Slenderverse creators just be normal?
Okay, now onto the actual review.
TRIDENT BUSINESS! It's... not good! It's very basic, full of the typical cliches most modern Slenderverse series have. I tried watching this myself multiple times, and I genuinely struggled to get past the first handful of videos.
1: The Pacing
The pacing is really, really bad. Every single episode is just a slog of silence, bad distortion, bad acting, mediocre editing...
You could probably remove MOST of the episodes from season 1, leaving 10, or even less, and the series would most likely improve.
Let's take the first three videos for example: Intro, 1. Hector's DVDs, and 2. Lost Media. Why were these three separate videos? Each video is drawn out for no reason, and you barely learn anything plot relevant in them, so they should really all be one video.
2: The Characters
The characters are flat. All of them are. No real personality traits, or anything to make them interesting. So there isn't anyone to actually care for. I can't even remember their names.
3: The Story
What story? Just watch Marble Hornets, it most likely does everything this series does but better, and I'm not even a big fan of MH!
4: Personal Nitpicks
The editing. It's is really poor, especially during the earlier videos. The distortion is loud and obnoxious. The Collective ripoff videos are also pointless. They have NO reason to be there, and barely anything is ever learned from most of them. They're just there for the sake of it. And they don't even have decent visuals like TribeTwelve.
The Red World/The Minds Eye. What a shitty addition tbh. It's only there because TribeTwelve did it. Mark making the Red World an open source concept is just laughable.
tHe cOnTRoLlEr. What a silly name for the Slender Man. The series give no reason for why he's called that, so I can only assume it's because TribeTwelve/Marble Hornets did it!! The Slender Man doesn't even do anything in the series. He just stands there.
Final Thoughts:
1/10. Series as basic as this don't deserve a higher rating, honestly. It does nothing new, nothing interesting, and is overly long, bloated with filler and pointless videos. It only has like, one decent looking Slender Man appearance. Like c'mon, even the most mediocre series can be saved by good Slender Man appearances. (TribeTwelve)
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ignore my profile being jeff I just think it's funny. this was originally a joke blog but I think I might make it serious :)
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(PSA)Racism & Ableism. Typical. | Trident Business Review
First off I want to talk about the creators of the series.
I've had nothing but poor interactions with these guys. the second I was active, trying to fit in and be funny, I could clearly tell they didn't like me
the creator, Mark, wanted me to show my face to him, saying I type like a kid. Then he banned me
After a bit where I was admittedly being kind of an asshole to them, I was allowed back in. Before this I joked about people not liking me always end up as bad people one way or another, like they're pedophiles or they're racist(keep that in mind)
Mark seemed to freak out, going into one of our servers and starts defending himself... even though I told no one, and I was just joking. Then I'm allowed back in the server.
I read his defense, and I jokingly call them ableist for the things his friends said about me, and he backtracked, saying they weren't using autistic as an insult(keep this in mind for later as well)
And just today, I was doing my usual shtick, sending unfunny gifs and saying random shit, and the cast are being particularly antagonistic towards me, and then...
they call me a vegetable, even though I've told Mark that I'm autistic. So he and his friends should already be aware by now.
I bring this up to Mark, and he just says it's the type of insults they use. It's just their type of humor. Then....
...Yeah, they're racist too.
to sum it all up: The creators of Trident Business are racist, ableist assholes :D. Why can't Slenderverse creators just be normal?
Okay, now onto the actual review.
TRIDENT BUSINESS! It's... not good! It's very basic, full of the typical cliches most modern Slenderverse series have. I tried watching this myself multiple times, and I genuinely struggled to get past the first handful of videos.
1: The Pacing
The pacing is really, really bad. Every single episode is just a slog of silence, bad distortion, bad acting, mediocre editing...
You could probably remove MOST of the episodes from season 1, leaving 10, or even less, and the series would most likely improve.
Let's take the first three videos for example: Intro, 1. Hector's DVDs, and 2. Lost Media. Why were these three separate videos? Each video is drawn out for no reason, and you barely learn anything plot relevant in them, so they should really all be one video.
2: The Characters
The characters are flat. All of them are. No real personality traits, or anything to make them interesting. So there isn't anyone to actually care for. I can't even remember their names.
3: The Story
What story? Just watch Marble Hornets, it most likely does everything this series does but better, and I'm not even a big fan of MH!
4: Personal Nitpicks
The editing. It's is really poor, especially during the earlier videos. The distortion is loud and obnoxious. The Collective ripoff videos are also pointless. They have NO reason to be there, and barely anything is ever learned from most of them. They're just there for the sake of it. And they don't even have decent visuals like TribeTwelve.
The Red World/The Minds Eye. What a shitty addition tbh. It's only there because TribeTwelve did it. Mark making the Red World an open source concept is just laughable.
tHe cOnTRoLlEr. What a silly name for the Slender Man. The series give no reason for why he's called that, so I can only assume it's because TribeTwelve/Marble Hornets did it!! The Slender Man doesn't even do anything in the series. He just stands there.
Final Thoughts:
1/10. Trident Business is REALLY basic, so it doesn't deserve a higher rating. It does nothing new, nothing interesting, and is overly long, bloated with filler and pointless videos. It only has one decent looking Slender Man appearance. Like c'mon, even the most mediocre series can be saved by good Slender Man appearances. (TribeTwelve)
#Slenderverse#Slenderseries#Creepypasta#ARG#Unfiction#Slenderverse Review#PSA#call out post#serious post#New Gen Slenderverse
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!!! THE CREATOR OF HOLLOWHEMLOCKS ALLOWS PREDATORY BEHAVIOR WITHIN THEIR SPACES !!!
Hello. This will be a brief summary of the recent situation regarding HollowHemlocks. Proof and original posts are linked.
An artist going by serenity was recently outed for allegedly attempting to groom a 16 year old. Serenity is 22. It's also important to note that Serenity made ship art of a character freshly 18 & an adult much older then them. As well as just, literal rape porn. Robbie, the main writer, upon this being brought to them and their mod teams attention, they claimed that "Rev never said they were uncomfortable." Robbie also stated "you cannot tell if it is grooming", despite the fact that the screenshots clearly show Serenity being inappropriate with a child. Whether or not the victim stated they were uncomfortable, Serenity venting, calling them "kitten", etc. are up to the adult to know not to act like that around a child.
Unfortunately, this is not the first instance of predatory behavior being allowed in HH communities. The co-writer of HollowHemlocks, Nick, has admitted to being in erotic torture roleplays with a 12 year old at the age of 15. When this was brought up with Robbie, Robbie lied and said those things never had happened. Despite of the fact Nick admitted to this in a tweet. This is not predatory behavior, but Nick also has a serious history of racism (n word usage, defending colonialism). Robbie associates with him regardless of this.
Some may call this post "cancellation", but that is not the goal of this post or the victims post. I'm making this post to make sure the minors in this community stay safe. Robbie is PROVABLY willing to cover the ass of predators for the sake of their own self image, and their co-writer is one.
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hey hey, pls boost this. i also posted this on my twitter @fridaydevilss
by intimate behavior for the course of 1-2 months, i basically mean the entire time i was in the hh server, she’d give me attention constantly and shit. she’s also once referred to me as “naughty” because i was up at 2am and didn’t wanna go to bed.
she’s 22.
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"Nothing special. Why the hype?" | HollowHemlocks
Haven't watched this series until now, since it never looked like anything special, and... it wasn't!
The series is... okay... I guess... it's certainly one of the better modern Slenderverse series, but that really isn't saying much, seeing what its competition is. [My Movie 14].
The editing is fine, the characters are fine, the series is... fine. It's really just kind of basic. A little generic, even. Which is fine! But you should really try to push your series to be as good as it can be, y'know?
I guess I can see why people like it. Hell, I like generic things as well. But I just don't understand the hype this series had. [My Movi
also the horrible work environment this series had, apparently? Poor Ian, man.
5/10. Nothing horrible, but nothing interesting either.
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i had a dream where the creator was in my room wanting to fight me but I just sat there doing my usual thing as they kept yelling mean things
last I remember was her lying on the floor sobbing as I stood over her like ":/". then I woke up
pretty rad
"Basic, Boring, Bland" | Lockdown in the Dark Review
This was certainly a series!
It's honestly not horrible, and I commend the effort that was probably put into it, but I was just never invested tbh. The amount of Slender Man appearances was too much for me. Sure the look kind of cool, but it gets kind of lame after a while.
The story isn't anything special. Imagine Dark Days, but with The Collective from TribeTwelve.
The plans the creator had for Season 2 were... eh, they were ideas! Oh boy I can't wait for the 20 crossovers which have no purpose!
The ARG elements are kind of... goofy... barely readable, make no sense, and not even the creator knows what some of them are(during a vc with her she says she has no clue what one of the codes mean)
Something that I don't understand was the recast of Tord and the lack of personality for Legolas. Sure he was okay, but the original version of the character was loads more interesting tbh
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"Basic, Boring, Bland" | Lockdown in the Dark Review
This was certainly a series!
It's honestly not horrible, and I commend the effort that was probably put into it, but I was just never invested tbh. The amount of Slender Man appearances was too much for me. Sure the look kind of cool, but it gets kind of lame after a while.
The story isn't anything special. Imagine Dark Days, but with The Collective from TribeTwelve.
The plans the creator had for Season 2 were... eh, they were ideas! Oh boy I can't wait for the 20 crossovers which have no purpose!
The ARG elements are kind of... goofy... barely readable, make no sense, and not even the creator knows what some of them are(during a vc with her she says she has no clue what one of the codes mean)
Something that I don't understand was the recast of Tord and the lack of personality for Legolas. Sure he was okay, but the original version of the character was loads more interesting tbh
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